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"dithering" poems
Breeze bellows, leaves echo in quivering psithurism, dithering like unbroken smoke, this approaching omen goads. Dozing crows slumbering in rows, droves of locusts' silenced drone, almost comatose in repose; nighttime overtones choir of toads' raspy croaks answered by alto of crickets' orchestral strokes. Gust encroaches; robed boughs cloven open, bring into scope and focus me juxtaposed, suspended apropos. Although motionless and petrified in stone, provoked by zephyr coaxing to and fro; swaying pendulous and no longer frozen, locus gently thrown. Death rattle moan evoked from throat, reflex can't say no to rigor rigidly posed, final sigh in silence, awoken vocal, expelled and disposed. Smote by morose emotion, gun loaded then exploded by neurosis, now bloated necrosis decomposes into gross ochre. This trophy and this ode both an opus to my inability to cope; romanced i proposed, eloped and betrothed to my own inappropriate composure. Pocket full of posies plucked when luck bestowed and tears in a cup, a toast; crying copiously, tempest runneth overflowed, eyes swollen and soaked. Dipped my toes in the coast of this ocean's amorphous folds, gripped by undertow holding control of my soul; swiftly shipwrecked in shallow shoal, an old atoll. On sandy floor, water burrows roads; digging, carving, roams through unmarrowed silica and sandstone eroding into a cove. A host for opal geode trove, enclosing a technicolor rose, from the depths a glowing mosaic shone Unopened lotus floats on foam of lapping waves, a boat; prone to no grandiose notion or motive, adrift as wind stokes. I suppose this only shows the total corrosion into which I dove, the only foes to oppose are those of burdens, so only weightless can I atone- I must let go.
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Mar 11, 2024
Mar 11, 2024 at 11:02 AM UTC
Note to Self (Part 2)
Breeze bellows, leaves echo in quivering psithurism, dithering like unbroken smoke, this approaching omen goads. Dozing crows slumbering in rows, droves of locusts' silenced drone, almost comatose in repose; nighttime overtones choir of toads' raspy croaks answered by alto of crickets' orchestral strokes. Gust encroaches; robed boughs cloven open, bring into scope and focus me juxtaposed, suspended apropos. Although motionless and petrified in stone, provoked by zephyr coaxing to and fro; swaying pendulous and no longer frozen, locus gently thrown. Death rattle moan evoked from throat, reflex can't say no to rigor rigidly posed, final sigh in silence, awoken vocal, expelled and disposed. Smote by morose emotion, gun loaded then exploded by neurosis, now bloated necrosis decomposes into gross ochre. This trophy and this ode both an opus to my inability to cope; romanced i proposed, eloped and betrothed to my own inappropriate composure. Pocket full of posies plucked when luck bestowed and tears in a cup, a toast; crying copiously, tempest runneth overflowed, eyes swollen and soaked. Dipped my toes in the coast of this ocean's amorphous folds, gripped by undertow holding control of my soul; swiftly shipwrecked in shallow shoal, an old atoll. On sandy floor, water burrows roads; digging, carving, roams through unmarrowed silica and sandstone eroding into a cove. A host for opal geode trove, enclosing a technicolor rose, from the depths a glowing mosaic shone Unopened lotus floats on foam of lapping waves, a boat; prone to no grandiose notion or motive, adrift as wind stokes. I suppose this only shows the total corrosion into which I dove, the only foes to oppose are those of burdens, so only weightless can I atone- I must let go.
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Not against the peaks of protest, these aurulent banners and jasperated jaspe so so jargoon! It's like I was suddenly alive, beat-stretched out of winter neige and into the pancosmic blisses of bright and ebullient spring, plugged with an agromania to abide this new formidable friend in the aeviternal beauty of she and I togetherness. Never to spill a morsel of a minute away from us again, upon the newly conjured spirits unto us both. To be amidst a cynosure of such affiation, to be in the temperate or tropical gardens whispering about our mutual love for flowers nad lists. This that precedes us, bright colliding auras in this newfound numinous kindling of us two. Watching it, making it happen- it unfolding before me made me naseaus with excitement, dithering what our next move out to be. I just wanted to kiss her face, her cheeks, put our hands together so quickly, just to let our amorous fug fill the room with silver albuminious smoke from our breaths. Miles below this, round the Earth to other places, there are the fixtures of bright and corybantic life commoved by other nations and other poised people of the light, that I should not be idle in my desires to usher myself into this grand and briguing introduction. So she said, we will play the question game, the inquiry game, we will state the mark, draw upon deep and fantastical recall, bring from our minds the most immense truths and share them, no matter now feral, or caustic, or melancholy- they will be shared until we explode with each other, our intrigues wrapped in our perfervid and amatory excitedness for one another. Too vast with wonder to be afraid of- am I such a fiend for such resplendence. That we could be vitrified in eternity in a veil of fulgurite. So at this nightfall, this acronychal of bloviating bliss, to write and wonder, incessantly in the finest of provincial matters to settle this garden where Thetis lives to be of her, two philocalists in verdant pasture, heaped with matters of the pen and the palm, in the droves of this beautiful advesperating eve- where first I wrote to you, and then I wrote you back.
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Apr 26, 2014
Apr 26, 2014 at 5:15 AM UTC
The Garden
Not against the peaks of protest, these aurulent banners and jasperated jaspe so so jargoon! It's like I was suddenly alive, beat-stretched out of winter neige and into the pancosmic blisses of bright and ebullient spring, plugged with an agromania to abide this new formidable friend in the aeviternal beauty of she and I togetherness. Never to spill a morsel of a minute away from us again, upon the newly conjured spirits unto us both. To be amidst a cynosure of such affiation, to be in the temperate or tropical gardens whispering about our mutual love for flowers nad lists. This that precedes us, bright colliding auras in this newfound numinous kindling of us two. Watching it, making it happen- it unfolding before me made me naseaus with excitement, dithering what our next move out to be. I just wanted to kiss her face, her cheeks, put our hands together so quickly, just to let our amorous fug fill the room with silver albuminious smoke from our breaths. Miles below this, round the Earth to other places, there are the fixtures of bright and corybantic life commoved by other nations and other poised people of the light, that I should not be idle in my desires to usher myself into this grand and briguing introduction. So she said, we will play the question game, the inquiry game, we will state the mark, draw upon deep and fantastical recall, bring from our minds the most immense truths and share them, no matter now feral, or caustic, or melancholy- they will be shared until we explode with each other, our intrigues wrapped in our perfervid and amatory excitedness for one another. Too vast with wonder to be afraid of- am I such a fiend for such resplendence. That we could be vitrified in eternity in a veil of fulgurite. So at this nightfall, this acronychal of bloviating bliss, to write and wonder, incessantly in the finest of provincial matters to settle this garden where Thetis lives to be of her, two philocalists in verdant pasture, heaped with matters of the pen and the palm, in the droves of this beautiful advesperating eve- where first I wrote to you, and then I wrote you back.
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recurrent moonlit distractions captured by words tied down into morsels; separated and concealed, contiguous yet sheer greetings of each other’s skin had left wanton burns and gushing streams of a brooding lover’s propensity for unsusceptible matters of the heart. there, he stood, on the precipice of tomorrows; ruminating and scrupulous, forlorn yet never dithering over mundane and quintessential quandaries of the tepid gloss of incertitude dangling off syllables dictated by sordid agony. there, he stood, in the midst of everything; from the otiose adoration poured out of empty caskets to the lenitive shades of his eyes. with the ripples of moonlight, the gestalt of doleful flower-like hearts, there, she stood, and waited.
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Jul 26, 2018
Jul 26, 2018 at 10:15 AM UTC
toffee
We have fallen in the dreams the ever-living Breathe on the tarnished mirror of the world, And then smooth out with ivory hands and sigh. W.B. YEATS * * * * * * My soul looked down from a vague height, with Death, As unremembering how I rose or why, And saw a sad land, weak with sweats of dearth, Gray, cratered like the moon with hollow woe, And pitted with great pocks and scabs of plagues. Across its beard, that horror of harsh wire, There moved thin caterpillars, slowly uncoiled. It seemed they pushed themselves to be as plugs Of ditches, where they writhed and shrivelled, killed. By them had slimy paths been trailed and scraped Round myriad warts that might be little hills. From gloom's last dregs these long-strung creatures crept, And vanished out of dawn down hidden holes. (And smell came up from those foul openings As out of mouths, or deep wounds deepening.) On dithering feet upgathered, more and more, Brown strings, towards strings of gray, with bristling spines, All migrants from green fields, intent on mire. Those that were gray, of more abundant spawns, Ramped on the rest and ate them and were eaten. I saw their bitten backs curve, loop and straighten. I watched those agonies curl, lift, and flatten. Whereat, in terror what that sight might mean, I reeled and shivered earthward like a feather. And Death fell with me, like a deepening moan. And He, picking a manner of worm, which half had hid Its bruises in the earth, bur crawled no further, Showed me its feet, the feet of many men, And the fresh-severed head of it, my head
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The Show
We have fallen in the dreams the ever-living Breathe on the tarnished mirror of the world, And then smooth out with ivory hands and sigh. W.B. YEATS * * * * * * My soul looked down from a vague height, with Death, As unremembering how I rose or why, And saw a sad land, weak with sweats of dearth, Gray, cratered like the moon with hollow woe, And pitted with great pocks and scabs of plagues. Across its beard, that horror of harsh wire, There moved thin caterpillars, slowly uncoiled. It seemed they pushed themselves to be as plugs Of ditches, where they writhed and shrivelled, killed. By them had slimy paths been trailed and scraped Round myriad warts that might be little hills. From gloom's last dregs these long-strung creatures crept, And vanished out of dawn down hidden holes. (And smell came up from those foul openings As out of mouths, or deep wounds deepening.) On dithering feet upgathered, more and more, Brown strings, towards strings of gray, with bristling spines, All migrants from green fields, intent on mire. Those that were gray, of more abundant spawns, Ramped on the rest and ate them and were eaten. I saw their bitten backs curve, loop and straighten. I watched those agonies curl, lift, and flatten. Whereat, in terror what that sight might mean, I reeled and shivered earthward like a feather. And Death fell with me, like a deepening moan. And He, picking a manner of worm, which half had hid Its bruises in the earth, bur crawled no further, Showed me its feet, the feet of many men, And the fresh-severed head of it, my head
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behind my eye twitches) not a whisker stirring from immense sleep leaps arcuately determined of slim air to meander in precise dithering cuteness (a fat and orange ellipsis
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Nov 30, 2012
Nov 30, 2012 at 3:08 AM UTC
Untitled
Everyone is odium to empty space Because, It doesn't have anything to convoy! Everyone is disgust about empty space Because, It doesn't have anything to perturb! Everyone have repulsion to empty space Because, Everyone is dithering to talk with self! But I am searching for that, But Incapable to mark out The empty space To talk with self! Searching for empty space For Departing from everything Searching for empty space To Verify my sin and accomplishment! If you have any information Please intimate me With its boundary information and Milestone of air, water, soil and life!
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Mar 25, 2015
Mar 25, 2015 at 5:25 PM UTC
Empty space
This pond is where I will die, Squandering in owl hours to **** Still, the Ducks swim by. The blue moon is a Julia Dragonfly Haunted by a lethal, green dream thrill. This pond is where I will die. Threadbare Marauder Rooks squawk a cry, The stickleback flakes its dithering gill. Still, the Ducks swim by. Importunate possums chase ducks to comply, How could my moon mother be so ill? This pond is where I will die. Bluebirds deflate their keels with a sigh, I gravitate towards their beauty, I am still. Still, the Ducks swim by. Aureole Sirius tip toes the sky, Nimbus withers, Kamikaze men shrill. This pond is where I will die. Still, the Ducks swim by.
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Feb 3, 2014
Feb 3, 2014 at 8:51 PM UTC
Villanelle of a Duck Pond
She’s mad, my bad She’s shouting, I’m silent She’s sweating, I’m dithering She’s all over the place        I’m all over her body        It’s cold. She’s hot Life is hard. I’m hard. She’s thick   Stop talking. I can’t concentrate Face back. I don’t wanna fight Bend over. I don’t wanna argue Stretch Back. I wanna sip Push Back. I wanna pump Ride on. I wanna come Get off. I wanna go “I love you”….. I hear you “I said I love you”…. I hear you
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Sep 4, 2025
Sep 4, 2025 at 2:49 AM UTC
Mood
Whenever people criticise me They usually don’t know that I am my Biggest Critic, Beating myself up Like Tyson Fury. It’s how I spur myself on, Hopefully to better things. But what things? I still don’t know. Oh to have blind faith And sense of Vocation As many others do. A solid set of Values. A script to follow Opinions to declare. Instead I dither Undecided Lost in an ocean of ifs and buts. Too bright and open-minded For my own good. Worse still, I’m oh so eager to please. I think myself incorruptibly honest, Yet the truth is, I only tell people what I think They want to know. It’s how I was brought up. But then again Am I willing to fight For what I stand for? Should I really be Devil’s Advocate Just to “stick up” for my views? Better methinks to hold my counsel Or be diplomatic Which may be okay So long as I actually decide What I think and feel Within myself. And there’s the rub. What do I stand for? Do I really think for myself? Like so many others, Am I dragged along: Brainwashed by Media hoo ha And hype? Superficial sound bytes And rallying calls. I need to search my soul And find my true feelings And beliefs. I know that I Love Life In most of its forms. I’m all for Wellbeing And The Common Good. I need to focus On these things: On making the most of This Paradise World We seem bent on ruining. In short I must stoke those fires of Love And enlighten others To do the same. Paul Butters © PB 13\12\2021.
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Dec 13, 2021
Dec 13, 2021 at 6:21 AM UTC
Dithering
It was intensity in the eyes of the beast With his romanticisms and optimism ceased Gashes, cut bottomless within his soul Who, would possibly aid him as a whole? The king who had executed blasphemous quantities of sins And pride fully worn, his foe's skins. Could not be comprehended and eased after all He lived to stalk, persecute and brawl For behind all the masquerades and shells he wore It was against himself, that he always swore At the break of dawn, he held a face In the midst of darkness, he could not sense, embrace A battle came forging against him, he felt grim Though it was not his form which was to be dithering, limb by limb It was his trepidation, his need to stop his despair Oh, how he craved to vanish into thin air For he realized that the only thing meaningful to him now Was for his annihilating words, to be a vow A vow to soon meet, the eternal light alas For his heart had become, into brittle glass The light was his way out To permit him, of his emotive drought And so, as the stars blazed up in the sky’s high So did the tears, imploring, to be let out in both his eye How far more, would he suffer? How much longer, did he have to be a bluffer? The possibility of freedom, is all that made him wait Little did he distinguish he was just another prisoner in the chambers, of fate.
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Mar 12, 2019
Mar 12, 2019 at 8:07 AM UTC
Absolutism
He’s a squirrel, dashing and dithering here, there, ******* everywhere At near six feet, he towers, but at 120 he’s not much more than a cat-tail. (yet, so very much more) At the end of the day he rattles; bits of this and that in his pockets, I’m waiting for the day when he palms a Marlboro and one of my lighters. Having a thing for fire, I know it’ll be soon; we already hide the matches. But, it’ll happen. Will I make him smoke a whole pack? Nah. Where’s the lesson there? He’s nicotine ****** or puking, while I’m out a pack of smokes. It’ll watch him cough, hack, spit; realizing the error made. Same one I made, ‘cept I kept at it. *** -JBClaywell ©P&ZPublications; 2016
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Apr 2, 2016
Apr 2, 2016 at 12:04 PM UTC
Everything’s an Eventuality or: (She calls hers Captain Autism. I have one of those too.)
whisking yesterday’s chipped and shattered dreams into you is not a problem the broom is there my hands yet comply with requests from the command center I see you, flat on the floor waiting, patiently your tin blue stillness no threat to me, or the dust I watch you, I rummage through the day's dull duties and other dithering distractions that wash over me, more each menacing minute, but can not think of your name, “it…” rests on my tongue tip weightless and wicked my eyes and hands grip you, with ease, but what art thou??? what simple sound will summon you? I am alone, though if another were here with me, you, and your "itness" the question would remain, unspoken with other nameless sorrows for who would not be terrified to admit that more and more tomorrows will be without the august appellation, “dustpan” and whatever other words time blithely chooses to permanently purloin
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Dec 14, 2012
Dec 14, 2012 at 4:10 PM UTC
dustpan
7:00am Shelter Island, Sat Sep10 on the south west edge of the isle, the slowrise sunrise just behind the trees, so early day yet, no full frontal of a sun bathing to wake up woman, babes asleeping, but the animals know exactly this hours early perfection. indeed, the crazy squirrels are random hither and dithering in spurts of energy, only stopping to observe a viewing of the humans nest~resting through the glass doors with their inquisitive, self-possessed, bedside reckless manner, perfected. the suns pealing gleaming gleanings picks out any shiny reflective surface that enhances its low-rise greeting, with a chorale of living objects singing “Hallelujah orb, what’s in store for us today,” river~bay, wake-less, its becalming, marbling surface, again, perfected. me? I’m mugged by the perfection intersection of my eyes-scape, first coffee, the holy quietude, only the regular soft breaths beside, lend a counterpoint to these thoughts and the litany of chores the iCal happily, annoyingly,  prematurely but with certainty lists, resistance (Walk!) perfectly ok. ok not to move an inch, watching this daily movie rerun, that energizes hope, a contemporary localized contented without the humdrum of blaring headlines, talking heads, and the infiltration of the guilty unfulfilled responsibilities demanding a due, then heavens signal me, Donovan, earbud singing Colors, confirmed perfectly ok! “*Yellow is the color of my true love's hair In the mornin', when we rise In the mornin', when we rise That's the time, that's the time I love the best*”
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Sep 10, 2022
Sep 10, 2022 at 8:21 AM UTC
My Saturday Vantage Point
7:00am Shelter Island, Sat Sep10 on the south west edge of the isle, the slowrise sunrise just behind the trees, so early day yet, no full frontal of a sun bathing to wake up woman, babes asleeping, but the animals know exactly this hours early perfection. indeed, the crazy squirrels are random hither and dithering in spurts of energy, only stopping to observe a viewing of the humans nest~resting through the glass doors with their inquisitive, self-possessed, bedside reckless manner, perfected. the suns pealing gleaming gleanings picks out any shiny reflective surface that enhances its low-rise greeting, with a chorale of living objects singing “Hallelujah orb, what’s in store for us today,” river~bay, wake-less, its becalming, marbling surface, again, perfected. me? I’m mugged by the perfection intersection of my eyes-scape, first coffee, the holy quietude, only the regular soft breaths beside, lend a counterpoint to these thoughts and the litany of chores the iCal happily, annoyingly,  prematurely but with certainty lists, resistance (Walk!) perfectly ok. ok not to move an inch, watching this daily movie rerun, that energizes hope, a contemporary localized contented without the humdrum of blaring headlines, talking heads, and the infiltration of the guilty unfulfilled responsibilities demanding a due, then heavens signal me, Donovan, earbud singing Colors, confirmed perfectly ok! “*Yellow is the color of my true love's hair In the mornin', when we rise In the mornin', when we rise That's the time, that's the time I love the best*”
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a good thing is a Unicorn. but one that bleeds. in the Harlem of our garden, a Cyclops plots against our flock of sheep. we are teetering on the brink of an awkward laughter reverberating off of false Gods. we are dithering the quince and the steam from our dull kitchens, casting pots, against the harangue  of bleached dreams - and the nethers of our sworn clot virtuous notions and dim thought.
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Jul 31, 2015
Jul 31, 2015 at 4:07 PM UTC
Dithering The Quince
How was it for you? Uncle asked, lying Slumped across Auntie, Some small-beached Whale, his voice escaping His lungs as would air From a punctured tyre. Fine, it was fine, Auntie Sighed, her soprano Voice easing beneath His sweaty soft bulk, Unaware their young Niece was standing silent By the half open door, Capturing them in the Semi light, waiting small And innocent to ask for Water, dithering, unsure Whether to ask and stay Or simply to close the Door and walk away.
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Mar 16, 2012
Mar 16, 2012 at 3:26 AM UTC
SPIED.
The all faith popes were flaming atheists, all two thousand leagues of stacked sea, sending out their **** hole flotillas on carillon arks stacked ten tiers deep with homing doves, tithe teething continents of dithering dullards, the poor mouthed succulent souls that have so, so over crowded a once peaceful heaven to render this one blue ball a hell on earth.
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Jan 10, 2011
Jan 10, 2011 at 10:23 PM UTC
The all faith popes
I've seen changing people for money, I've seen dithering people for money, Its not god but, I've seen dying people for it, I've seen burning people in sunlight for money, I've seen trembling people in cold for money, It's not homer but, I've seen destroying home for it, I've seen changing relation for money, I've seen surrendering people for money, Its not diet but, I have seen sleeping people without meal due to no money, I've seen ashamed people for money, I've seen running people on fire for money, Its not food but , I've seen dying people form hunger due to no money, I've seen ********** woman for money, I've seen burning daughter-in-law for money(dowry), Its not cloth but, I've seen walking people without cloth due to no money, I've seen quarreling brethren each other for money, I've seen dancing girl on the road for money, Its not luck. But, I've seen changing luck from money..
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Jun 4, 2017
Jun 4, 2017 at 4:56 AM UTC
MONEY
lachrymose: suggestive of or tending to cause tears; mournful....given to shedding tears readily; tearful. make no dithering, wily excusing or explaining, among this band, I count myself a brother and a man eons ago shed the reptilian skin masculine, my six-shooter now a manly cheap Bic ballpoint blue-eyed pen, used to fell forests of egos, mine, first foremost and ever last every write that sore tries my heart, lives hard by a stream replenished, by freshly born, yet stale, recirculated salt-mine tears, salt, mine, tears, that include those storing and storied, some preceding and some succeeding, and some spilling even as this story told, here and now, is in the hearth, forming and fulfilling if man enough that you can cry openly, then man enough to write good poetry, this then, this be the simple and finest line I ever wrote, line I ever cried 5:20pm April 20th, The Year of the Tear
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Apr 20, 2014
Apr 20, 2014 at 7:15 PM UTC
lachrymose men
Trying to fill the days and forcing them to go. Finding there are too many in a never ending flow. What to do with time that never seems to end. Seemingly more hours than with which I can contend. Playing games and dithering just to pass the time away. Sleeping endless moments and still finding its today. Why do all the days seem so very long? What choice did I make to make time ebb so wrong? I know it hasn't always passed or seemed to happen in this way. But oh so long ago since they were all a twenty four hour day. No rhythm or regularity in times pattern anymore. Why so many hours and what are the days all for? I used to measure days by the passing of the sun. But many times I sleep and of daylight I see none. You may think I have control of all rhythms in these things. But why control the repetition tomorrow always brings? If I sleep eight times and I eat just only three. Is that not a measure of how long my week should be? Must I sleep just seven and eat per some schedule too? Will I then contend with time as I am meant to do? Will days take new meaning and my hours hold more reward? Or will the extra hours awake just make me much more bored? If I sleep twelve times and I eat when I have need to. Aren't the days still the same length both for me and you? Do we really share the same cycle if I view it on my own? Or does time really move much slower for those who are alone?
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Mar 11, 2019
Mar 11, 2019 at 9:59 AM UTC
Killing Time
Amber conduit seeps through the glaring abysm in haste, smothered by tar-pulp of the midnight wound, disheveled corona; bled into contrast, dithering; thrusting scoria into the eve, intoxicated by gasoline vapour; obsidian-wretch, night crime pining of cheap indulgence; bottle-cap snare, miasma fleet whining - lament, pavement tessellation; cosmopolitan unrest
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Aug 3, 2014
Aug 3, 2014 at 4:18 AM UTC
Lapis Brink
Crouching beggar upturned cup Singing children hunger sup Mongrel bounds on a short chain We are all caught in the rain Policeman standing proud Busking waifs are singing loud ******* lies where it was lain We are all caught in the rain Pigeons bobbing strut right by Seagulls scream with glinting eye Old man mutters 'not insane' We are all caught in the rain Babies hold up their palms Mothers push them in their prams Babies google their necks crane We are all caught in the rain.
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Apr 8, 2015
Apr 8, 2015 at 3:45 PM UTC
Dithering
In the beginning there was procrastination, and I can't wait to start putting that off. To begin or not to begin that divides us all. Deferring action never increases entropy, and lengthens the life of the universe. Completion happens once, but delay has no limit. I'm not dithering, just exploring all the options. This "beginning" poem has just been hijacked by hesitation, and dragged down the rat hole of reluctance. Oh well, there is always tomorrow. One can always say, my muse took a snooze.
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Feb 20, 2021
Feb 20, 2021 at 10:22 AM UTC
Why Begin
A crushed Shah Jahan said: When you behold the memorial, a sight so masterly, yet sorrowful; you will inevitably admit an aching little bisecting wish that adorns your yearning lips.... parched, barren, effete...... And from the world's lid, the luminaries too would sob and drip. # He could well have been talking about my beloved's words ; ......so utterly breathtaking that a sigh poignantly quivers in my dithering being. Her words meander. It is no wonder: for all of us saunter in thought and speech one time or the other. At times her words are poised and easy....., wonderfully jolly, sensationally starry: They shimmer like the four minarets (1) on the full moon night; ....brilliant......resplendent. Then they taper from the dome and stop halfway between the tomb and the solemn reflecting pool: They are calmer, sober, and you know, a little factual; ...what they call discriminating intellectual, rational...... Soon the words leave charbagh (2) and hit the red sandstone walls (3) crenellated with flawless wisdom; spotlessly beautiful like the lifeless marble that proudly commemorates Mr. Shah Jahan's love in grim, cold blooded grace. We talk about riders and scruples, kith and kin, restraints and constraints, fidelity and modesty....... ....and I can not help but to sadly agree to the placid logic in our impeccable scripts. # Logic is a wonderful remedy for the radical and foolhardy but for every cure, there is a spin-off. Deep somewhere, a delicate, two-cent sentiment collapses into atrophy and.......silently another part of me becomes a meek monument of disposable history. ---------- (1) The four minarets of the Taj Mahal (2) The garden that starts from the end of the main gateway and ends near the squared base of the mausoleum is an integral part of the Taj Mahal structure. (3) The building material used is brick-in-lime mortar veneered with red sandstone and marble and inlay work of precious/semi precious stones. The mosque and the guest house in the Taj Mahal complex are built of red sandstone in contrast to the marble tomb in the center.
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Nov 11, 2019
Nov 11, 2019 at 10:27 PM UTC
The 'N'th Monument
A crushed Shah Jahan said: When you behold the memorial, a sight so masterly, yet sorrowful; you will inevitably admit an aching little bisecting wish that adorns your yearning lips.... parched, barren, effete...... And from the world's lid, the luminaries too would sob and drip. # He could well have been talking about my beloved's words ; ......so utterly breathtaking that a sigh poignantly quivers in my dithering being. Her words meander. It is no wonder: for all of us saunter in thought and speech one time or the other. At times her words are poised and easy....., wonderfully jolly, sensationally starry: They shimmer like the four minarets (1) on the full moon night; ....brilliant......resplendent. Then they taper from the dome and stop halfway between the tomb and the solemn reflecting pool: They are calmer, sober, and you know, a little factual; ...what they call discriminating intellectual, rational...... Soon the words leave charbagh (2) and hit the red sandstone walls (3) crenellated with flawless wisdom; spotlessly beautiful like the lifeless marble that proudly commemorates Mr. Shah Jahan's love in grim, cold blooded grace. We talk about riders and scruples, kith and kin, restraints and constraints, fidelity and modesty....... ....and I can not help but to sadly agree to the placid logic in our impeccable scripts. # Logic is a wonderful remedy for the radical and foolhardy but for every cure, there is a spin-off. Deep somewhere, a delicate, two-cent sentiment collapses into atrophy and.......silently another part of me becomes a meek monument of disposable history. ---------- (1) The four minarets of the Taj Mahal (2) The garden that starts from the end of the main gateway and ends near the squared base of the mausoleum is an integral part of the Taj Mahal structure. (3) The building material used is brick-in-lime mortar veneered with red sandstone and marble and inlay work of precious/semi precious stones. The mosque and the guest house in the Taj Mahal complex are built of red sandstone in contrast to the marble tomb in the center.
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find less than arresting: stilted musings gem-set in ardent verbiage. recherché semantics, florid phrases facing a withering sun or policing of metaphor – until handcuffed: Italic jewel thief caught on surveillance Sudden bewildering                                         spaces with odd punctuation;  ?  & inward dithering semi-confessions in serpentine verse.  Badder (or worse)  annoying line            breaks / cloying internal half – rhymes, overwrought.     Over-edited; over-thought until  you want to see what’s on TV instead.        As if the poet’s every random musing was so essential.  Reverential semi-precious mythos (Siren’s distant waves echo, shipwrecked rocks: Ossifer,  ossifer – it’s only boring poetry…                         I’m so sorry. I’ll never do it) again.
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Sep 20, 2015
Sep 20, 2015 at 8:53 PM UTC
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meandering paths, blind turns unfathomable milestones, sand built inns rarely comes across the shiny black tar imparting hope, embracing dithering steps yet, set aflame by desires we tread on, hurting ourselves onto the path vanishing into the oblivion
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Jan 5, 2014
Jan 5, 2014 at 12:21 PM UTC
Journey