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"overtaking" poems
I'd like to tell you a story It begins in 1492 When dear old Christopher Columbus Sailed the ocean blue He landed on what he thought To be the country of India He stumbled upon a group of people Who appeared to be indigenous Because these native people Happened to be where he thought he was He called them all "Indians" && somehow that name stuck They welcomed his group with open arms Even offered them their feast Unaware that deep inside They were but wolves, dressed as sheep Columbus && his crew Soon ravaged the land They took what they saw Then they took full command Of the people they found On the land where they landed They felt they should rule So they stepped in, heavy handed They murdered the people Who had taken them in Set fire to their villages While the victims watched with their kin Flash forward to the future It's now 2016 It's been over 500 years Since the overtaking by the regime Future settlers decided To let the survivors live on They designated them small areas Of what had not yet been robbed These Native Americans, Generally keep to themselves They get by living off their land But now they need your help The Sioux of Standing Rock Are being horribly mistreated The state of North Dakota Is poisoning them without reason A pipeline has been built That runs through this Native territory When Bismarck residents didn't want it It was rerouted, how discriminatory People from all over the country Are seeming to agree They are making the commute To protest peacefully In defense of an oppressed people Who only want to live But the government is stepping in Even blowing off some limbs "Let them die, they're not like us" the message the administration is sending It seems that after all this time The battle is never-ending What exactly does it take For people to see eye-to-eye? In the end we're all just human   We kiss, we laugh, we cry So if you have a heart at all If you know that this is wrong Please join the Sioux in their mission By coming together, we can be strong
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Dec 2, 2016
Dec 2, 2016 at 11:30 PM UTC
History's Repeating
I'd like to tell you a story It begins in 1492 When dear old Christopher Columbus Sailed the ocean blue He landed on what he thought To be the country of India He stumbled upon a group of people Who appeared to be indigenous Because these native people Happened to be where he thought he was He called them all "Indians" && somehow that name stuck They welcomed his group with open arms Even offered them their feast Unaware that deep inside They were but wolves, dressed as sheep Columbus && his crew Soon ravaged the land They took what they saw Then they took full command Of the people they found On the land where they landed They felt they should rule So they stepped in, heavy handed They murdered the people Who had taken them in Set fire to their villages While the victims watched with their kin Flash forward to the future It's now 2016 It's been over 500 years Since the overtaking by the regime Future settlers decided To let the survivors live on They designated them small areas Of what had not yet been robbed These Native Americans, Generally keep to themselves They get by living off their land But now they need your help The Sioux of Standing Rock Are being horribly mistreated The state of North Dakota Is poisoning them without reason A pipeline has been built That runs through this Native territory When Bismarck residents didn't want it It was rerouted, how discriminatory People from all over the country Are seeming to agree They are making the commute To protest peacefully In defense of an oppressed people Who only want to live But the government is stepping in Even blowing off some limbs "Let them die, they're not like us" the message the administration is sending It seems that after all this time The battle is never-ending What exactly does it take For people to see eye-to-eye? In the end we're all just human   We kiss, we laugh, we cry So if you have a heart at all If you know that this is wrong Please join the Sioux in their mission By coming together, we can be strong
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Cleanliness and ****** The ship was old once it had been a big ship now it was small it had been overtaking by time, its shower system had sea water which was nice enough to cool off when it was hot. After having a shower, you needed a bucket of fresh water to rinse the salt away if not you would scratch all night have irritated skin For month we did not have a proper wash when our ship docked in Bremerhaven for repairs and we got fresh water found I had an extra pair of socks I didn’t know about it was wonderful having a hot shower I stayed under it til someone complained I was using all the warm water, even today the sense of cleanliness makes me shudder with delight. Whatever I had done in my youth the night before it helped to have a shower and wash the sin away the smell of “life buoy.” the only soap we knew about, made the difference the ****** loved it they knew you were clean ******
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Jan 27, 2017
Jan 27, 2017 at 4:57 AM UTC
cleanliness and ******
Here rests a future Untouched and eager for light Wanting to exude its aromas of which I neither looked nor cared. She handed me the match fresh, burning bright, a new sense in my familiar room. Baffling confusion overtook as I blew her match so stubborn to extinguish in a faint stream of smoke still thinning. Was I the stubborn? Subsequent darkness overtaking Once a sweet home Now a paralyzing loneliness. Match burnt, candle gone future still… Will another offer to light my dark corners --myself willing, with a newfound scent? A day may come to end my night, but I only care to see the one I once hid from.
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May 11, 2015
May 11, 2015 at 10:41 AM UTC
Candle
i begin to arise looking over into your gaze so that i can feel you breathless and shaken with joy in your eyes thirst overtaking the impulse to feel how strong this love is rubbing your skin exposes the warm static throughout im left without air asphyxiating for pleasure head rushing groaning your name please keep going you keep our skin vibrating and purging the toxicity of the world from us taking in only me you can feel my pulse radiate from your sacral place with you gushing out like the words it takes to tell you that i love you and want to fill the empty spaces within for a moment i feel like we’ve become one our bodies sing heavenly tones echo within the confines of this home with archangels watching over as we fulfill our celestial fate
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Sep 28, 2020
Sep 28, 2020 at 11:30 AM UTC
sacral bonding
I saw the familiar rose-flush dust shoot from my fingertips, the day I finally decided to snap out of it. I had forgotten what lived inside me. I snapped again at the worrywart hut I'd created for myself to live in. And again, once more for all time gone to my mind's incessant banter and going-on's with the flirty, too flirty, doubting Adonnis. The fog was heavy, in its resilience against my needs to get it right, overtaking me in confusion, making me forget the reality that lay beyond it. Its grip was choking, sending me reeling through a soul-tainting realm I hated I knew so well, grasping for anything to hold on to, anything that looked like Life. So, with the moon tonight, I weep for the many suns sacrificed to Unbelief and the parts of me permitted to be plagued by poison and malpurpose. Though, with the same tears, I will thank my God that I can at least see what lies within me and again, once more while the moon is still bright for the gift to feel remorse.
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Sep 21, 2014
Sep 21, 2014 at 6:44 PM UTC
Midterm
The pain is still present, steady as my heartbeat but is no longer overtaking me My heart aches literally aches just by the thought of you I want you to know that everything I said was true and never have I doubted my love for you So goodbye for now hope to see you in my de ja vu
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Aug 11, 2014
Aug 11, 2014 at 3:22 PM UTC
Heartache
i. Today, O' today I got her letter in the mail; Filled with pictures of mine Queen, she sent me Poems done by me, in her Calligraphy. ii. Today O' today I got lipstick kisses on Her notes, the red stood Out of all she wrote; As her amour was So fine. iii. Today O' today Anon mine spirit's soared, That fashionable vellum O' I adored. O' Jane Sardua, O' Jane of Earl. O' rose of Asia; The Luzon's pearl. iv. Today O' today I smiled again, because mine lover, And mine best friend. Her ardent sonnet Displayed her touch, grabbing mine soul, In heaven's blush, silently tear's came to a rush; from joy's overtaking. v. Today O' today O'er the blue, I made mine stay. Consatero, ah veray, Queen Jane, Queen Jane, Of Asia's praise; Today O' today How I fell in Love again. ©,Brandon Nagley ©Lonesome poets poetry ©Earl Jane Nagley dedicated ( àgapi mou)
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Mar 21, 2016
Mar 21, 2016 at 10:53 PM UTC
Heddiw O ' heddiw, Sut i syrthio mewn cariad eto ( Today O' today, How i fell in love again) old welsh tongue
Mediocrity isn't my favorite flavor But I make do Tasting other sensations and qualities as well. Like candied revenge, And carmeled success. But mediocrity is slightly different It's bitter... But not enough that it would ever cause me to settle For something else That was further from my seated reach. It's also stale, at times, As if it were left out on a bar all night, To be eaten by others looking for, well Anything. As I bit down on mediocrity once more I couldn't help but salivate At the thought of achievement and drive Memories of their savory aftertastes overtaking the putty being mulled about my teeth. And I swallowed the paste. Mostly to get the taste out of my mouth. But as my taste buds clear, And my thoughts drift elsewhere. The idea that one more hand full of mediocrity Might not be that bad. Creeps into the back of my mind. After all, It is within reach.
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Jun 3, 2015
Jun 3, 2015 at 12:13 AM UTC
The Taste of Mediocrity
Dreary of a dark empty space, The loneliness crowded, Which somewhat I called— "A Place Unwanted." To them may it be madness: A pretense of his suffering, His mindful selfishness. But not how I would label me. To be covered in lunacy: Lies coming from about, Changing colors and theme, Wading of goodness. Their ways of hypocrisy. I was a sea of countless woe, To be brave but unsure. Am I ever safe, if I never show? The gaiety beyond avenue, Through under glass I look. The joy fits for most, But not a dream to be oath. Overtaking my inmost true,— These things behind the sun. What I should walk away from, But it could never be done.
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May 19, 2018
May 19, 2018 at 3:03 AM UTC
◦ Things Behind The Sun
My room has become a little less me And a little more you You've rubbed off on things by the shelf Memories coated in a thin veil of you. Dust prints on forgotten things. Goodnight, goodnight, memories Hung on the door. Corners found branded with your name, Initials carved into dry wall. Things rearranged the way you like them, The imprint of an old room grows tall, Overtaking what's left. Goodnight, goodnight memories Stored in my drawer. The girl in my bed reminds me less of her And more of you, you see. Or more strictly, how she could never kiss Me, not like how your kisses could be. Goodnight, goodnight, girl unbelonging Next to me.
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Aug 8, 2015
Aug 8, 2015 at 4:30 AM UTC
girl in my bed, goodnight
I hold you in my heart For my arms just shan’t From the very early start This sickly sweet torment A quench-less thirst A hunger I cannot Fill Loving anguish, turned curse Is for you what I feel As I daze in your eyes so green I am consumed with you The most beautiful I have seen And ache the very touch of you The heart alone has its reasons To succumb to such forbidden devotion Unbearable loving emotions Secret I dare not to mention You are the treasure I hide to keep Buried in my chest’s own heartbeats The one & only so many do seek The one who would make me complete A barely audible whisper Surround my thoughts of lust & sin A dream state I relish to linger Shivers overtaking my skin Desire of lips tenderly touching Hands passionately holding A sweet embrace quietly waiting Patience Painfully persisting… So close, yet away from my reach I will be waiting for all seasons passing Shall life be kind to grant me my wish I vow to give you my heart forever loving What is meant to be Will always find its way So I hope, beg & pray Fate to bring you to me one day ...I hold you in my heart...
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Jul 31, 2012
Jul 31, 2012 at 9:10 AM UTC
I Hold you in my heart...
I don't know what to do Can't run Can't hide Can't get my life to balance The darkness overtaking me I don't know what to do when there's No one there to help No one there to wipe my tears No one there to allay my fears When the demons inside overcome me The darkness is almost to my soul I need help I need love I need someone there But nothing is working The demons are here to stay
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Jan 27, 2015
Jan 27, 2015 at 9:03 AM UTC
Demons
I find myself in a daydream about those lips Slowly caressing every inch of my body down to my hips Leaving me in such a state that I cannot control mouth Deep moans of yes and no and baby please don’t stop I find myself surrounded in your arms, lost in your voice I’m not fighting the mood but it takes m y body by force Blessing my ears with such a tone of memorization Sending me into a ****** state of confusion That only you control and I dare not fight the hold Cause everything you are doing is like food to my soul As if I need it to continue for my own survival The thought of you stopping and leaving gives me a taste of dehydration Hogging this glass of water to the death of me, you hydrate me Close my eyes as I continue to steady my breath So much water I’m drowning in my water flow Trying desperately to keep my head above the current only to be dragged down to the bottom The water overtaking my body granting me the pleasure of feeling every desire you have Reaching out for your face to pull you close, gazing into those eyes Seeing the passion you have for me only takes us to new depths of waters Suddenly the effort to breath becomes easier as we are exchanging an never ending oxygen support Legs wrapped around you waist, squeezing to keep you near As my body is shaking with overwhelming pleasure from this sea we have created Wanting to bring you to the edge of the waterfall and watch you overflow your self Both of us deep underwater submerged in love Suddenly floating to the surface again It seems we overdosed on love, in our own sea we drowned.
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Jul 15, 2015
Jul 15, 2015 at 10:23 AM UTC
Drowning in Love
I find myself in a daydream about those lips Slowly caressing every inch of my body down to my hips Leaving me in such a state that I cannot control mouth Deep moans of yes and no and baby please don’t stop I find myself surrounded in your arms, lost in your voice I’m not fighting the mood but it takes m y body by force Blessing my ears with such a tone of memorization Sending me into a ****** state of confusion That only you control and I dare not fight the hold Cause everything you are doing is like food to my soul As if I need it to continue for my own survival The thought of you stopping and leaving gives me a taste of dehydration Hogging this glass of water to the death of me, you hydrate me Close my eyes as I continue to steady my breath So much water I’m drowning in my water flow Trying desperately to keep my head above the current only to be dragged down to the bottom The water overtaking my body granting me the pleasure of feeling every desire you have Reaching out for your face to pull you close, gazing into those eyes Seeing the passion you have for me only takes us to new depths of waters Suddenly the effort to breath becomes easier as we are exchanging an never ending oxygen support Legs wrapped around you waist, squeezing to keep you near As my body is shaking with overwhelming pleasure from this sea we have created Wanting to bring you to the edge of the waterfall and watch you overflow your self Both of us deep underwater submerged in love Suddenly floating to the surface again It seems we overdosed on love, in our own sea we drowned.
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She feels so lost, so alone Emptiness consumes her soul Her world has just become unknown Surrendered to the knife of strife Cuts so deep, cuts that bleed Smothered she is by the knife of life Her heart is ripped to shreds Her young mind is surrounded by fear False promises ring in her head Demons are overtaking her soul Sacrificed she becomes to the blade Her release from the never ending cold. Staring off into the wide open sky She sees all the stars that shine so bright Hope starts to glisten back in her eyes Escaping from all that consumed her mind the smile once lost, is finding its way back Slowly but surely…in time The knife wins again, this time deep Extreme emotion floods her body The blood runs down to meet her feet Her eyes drift off and start to fade Her world has just come to close Her soul surrendered to the blade She screams out for help in her own little way But no one is there… She is left in the shadows, left behind in the darkness
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Oct 12, 2014
Oct 12, 2014 at 3:16 PM UTC
Surrounded
She was walking alone in the rain. All of life was just so full of pain. She smiles throughout the day. No one asks, so there is nothing to say. That's the funny thing, about walking in the rain.. No one can see the tears falling endlessly down your cheeks, no one can see the pain. She wakes up and she starves herself, trying to be perfect in someones eyes. No one notices all the pain, or how often she cries. Depression overtaking her mind. All she feels is pain, never love; nothing kind. There is a secret she buries deep within.. And if anyone knew, they would say suicide is a sin.. She is going to let the smile fall, she is going to succumb to the pain. Nothing more to say as she walks through the rain. She walks to the place she will say goodbye.. Somewhere beautiful so no one will cry. She smiles as the blade slides across her wrist. Darkness has tainted her soul, demons kissed. She lays down, looking up at the skies. The most beautiful thing in her eyes. She starts to close her eyes, the blood flowing free. She whispers, im coming home, to fly with the angels, can't you see? Soon her vision fades to black. She knows, it's to late no going back.. In the rain, she lay there dying. Everyone thinking she was happy, never seeing her crying.. She hid it well, but you should have seen. How could you not hear, the nightmare, it made her scream.. You ignored the signs, they were all clearly there.. So, she knew, no one would care. She took her life, and you sit and wonder why..? You have no right, because she was begging you every time she would cry. You ignored her pain, because you were scared.. You showed her, no one cared.. She was a broken heart in a shattered world, she would spend hours in the rain, crying.. When inside, she was already dying.. Famous last words, Im fine, and out came that smile. When in reality she was begging, look, please save me, go the extra mile.. But you took her word, and that sealed her fate. She was living in a dying state.. Her eyes could not lie. So why did you listen, when the tears were always there, about to cry.. You will never know the reasons why. So don't torture yourself with the questions, because no matter what she was gonna die.. You could have looked and seen, always going for a walk in the rain. The only time she could clearly express her pain. She will live in our hearts, a memory.. But what she needed was you to see...
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Aug 26, 2014
Aug 26, 2014 at 4:20 PM UTC
Walking in the Rain
She was walking alone in the rain. All of life was just so full of pain. She smiles throughout the day. No one asks, so there is nothing to say. That's the funny thing, about walking in the rain.. No one can see the tears falling endlessly down your cheeks, no one can see the pain. She wakes up and she starves herself, trying to be perfect in someones eyes. No one notices all the pain, or how often she cries. Depression overtaking her mind. All she feels is pain, never love; nothing kind. There is a secret she buries deep within.. And if anyone knew, they would say suicide is a sin.. She is going to let the smile fall, she is going to succumb to the pain. Nothing more to say as she walks through the rain. She walks to the place she will say goodbye.. Somewhere beautiful so no one will cry. She smiles as the blade slides across her wrist. Darkness has tainted her soul, demons kissed. She lays down, looking up at the skies. The most beautiful thing in her eyes. She starts to close her eyes, the blood flowing free. She whispers, im coming home, to fly with the angels, can't you see? Soon her vision fades to black. She knows, it's to late no going back.. In the rain, she lay there dying. Everyone thinking she was happy, never seeing her crying.. She hid it well, but you should have seen. How could you not hear, the nightmare, it made her scream.. You ignored the signs, they were all clearly there.. So, she knew, no one would care. She took her life, and you sit and wonder why..? You have no right, because she was begging you every time she would cry. You ignored her pain, because you were scared.. You showed her, no one cared.. She was a broken heart in a shattered world, she would spend hours in the rain, crying.. When inside, she was already dying.. Famous last words, Im fine, and out came that smile. When in reality she was begging, look, please save me, go the extra mile.. But you took her word, and that sealed her fate. She was living in a dying state.. Her eyes could not lie. So why did you listen, when the tears were always there, about to cry.. You will never know the reasons why. So don't torture yourself with the questions, because no matter what she was gonna die.. You could have looked and seen, always going for a walk in the rain. The only time she could clearly express her pain. She will live in our hearts, a memory.. But what she needed was you to see...
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I am sun and you are moon. Caressing countlessly Cranes and Starlings swoon With love effortlessly. I paint the daybreak flawless with color sinking in Moon is gathering the waves while Mantas sink and swim. You wrap yourself in darkness with holes and craters deep, Orbiting a world that has you shackled at your feet. I can see it spinning, with everything it holds. And I'm afraid that one dark day, it might just steal your soul. I can't control your presence parading atmosphere, And must not always worry That the waves will disappear. Nor reminisce on memories so many "moons" ago, That orbit other planets, of which we'll never know. And maybe all this warmth inside my soul so bright, is overtaking judgment and misjudging moon at night. The heat within me rising might be unwarranted. So I will just shine brighter and make flowers bloom instead.
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Apr 24, 2016
Apr 24, 2016 at 12:50 PM UTC
Moon and Sun.
Clashing lights from the shadows; Thundering in constant motion Red swarms overtaking the blue nights, A grand disturbance - Raging through the cosmos Shifting the course of this endless strife (Wake up now, We have misconstrued our fate) Spiraling forth, into nebulous unknown The force flows from within; Embrace the cause - To restore a balance lost aeons ago Gears turning towards a lie Deceived by peace Crucial moments for the light; Two tides collide Detrimental, Sacrifices, Interstellar transmutation Exiled till, the return of the progeny Remnants of the order Confined to, the corners of the galaxy Strengthened, by the chosen one Fallen hero; Exalts into gradeur Shining greater than the stars Universal luminescence Macrocosmic ~ As Above So Below Frequencies resonating, Constructing wretched Elysium Eternal cataclysm, Decimation A massive surge of power; Lost, following the stars of scripture Kingdoms falling one by one ~ NOVUS ORDO Symmetry unfolds Visions pass Fallacies expose Divine excursion Escape the stasis Elevate, frame of mind Amidst resistance; Ignite lucidity Harmony engulfs, This fractured existence
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Dec 19, 2018
Dec 19, 2018 at 12:20 AM UTC
Nebulous Unknown
*since I wept poems freely, from rise to set, every breeze, every minute, each bladed grass, a creation-emotion overtaking the residue is every pen dry, every pencil nubbed, every free and white piece of paper, even all the napkins, Picasso scribbled but this one compelled to rise and set, before you placed with a gratitude that needs no explaining, a poem, first and knighted as* Camaraderie a tired, benighted idea, oft expressed, that cannot be contained, swelling up, chest burn bursting and it's not yet 600am but the sun demands payment for admission to this morning's performance, which will never be rebroadcast so in humility, I offer up this scrap, in hopes it earns me one more show tomorrow pleasing him, by pleasing you we write with many motives, but this ticket is for my friends here, genuine camaraderie that is holy, sourced from holy water, "straight from the water" within our physical selfs your arm unasked slung over my shoulder, your words my inspiration, your demands, none, other than give a listen which is no demand, but sweet sugar daily, crazy stupid flooded teary-eyed through words care crafted, I have found so many gentle kind that without hesitation, I find myself blessing us all by repeatedly uttering Hallelujah!
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Jun 28, 2014
Jun 28, 2014 at 6:13 AM UTC
Camaraderie (it has been a very long time)
i recall with a fondness blurred by years the town of my formative years in the mountains the heart of the table lands dissected by a highway it crouched, along the sides of a shallow valley i remember a greeness that came from the trees eucalypt and pine most prominent in my mind and the grass that grew lush and tall only to be mown each Saturday morn i remember churches and schools the wide expasnses of playing fields and parks with hurdygurdys and swings i remember the pool, that too turquoise rectangle, that glistened with wet invitation and on the highest peak the stolid grey water  tower lording it over all i remember rough tarmac under my feet, running from light pool to light pool at dusk and frost on picket fences in early mornings, like delicate sugar candy solidier braving the early sun our house, small on a large block with hydrangea at the front wisteria overtaking the fenceline an at the back door a concrete slab painted fire engine red, but faded to overipe watermlon pink poplar trees garding the back and the smell of onions burning on the grill hill's hoist with tennis ball and pantyhose standing  to silent attention and in the forground my brothers and clans playing football, league with passion and burgeoning skill all this comes to mind on a cold winter's day i may of come a long way but my heart still ties me to there and the memories make the knots
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Aug 14, 2018
Aug 14, 2018 at 9:05 AM UTC
ties that bind
with all this sleepless night wide eye like butterflies fields of yesterday's pain take a step to look feel the whispers at the back memories again haunted me with all your pretty lies words of shredded disguise a promising of dreams only to have realize a state of foolish paradise storming forever haunted me with every blinded glass musing images of our past infatuations overtaking wondering why it never last weeping every tear to fall sleep a finished love that haunted me with every sickening heed a figure keeps to overdue fragments, a drowning sea twisted disenchantment on the floor, now gently fading ending, but still haunted me
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Sep 8, 2017
Sep 8, 2017 at 11:14 AM UTC
◦ Haunted Me
the flowers bloomed under my chest cavity; overtaking my ribs, suffocating my lungs, growing a garden right from the bottom of my heart. the roots dug inside my organs; piercing my flesh, crawling up my throat, squeezing out my air and gripping the words down under. theres a garden of heartbreak that bloomed just for you. stealing my pulses, stopping my heartbeats, waiting for something you cant give; your love.
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Sep 19, 2019
Sep 19, 2019 at 10:48 PM UTC
hanahaki
is carpeted with snowdrops. did you see them at 60mph, overtaking. did you slow later to see the next drift. did you reach your destination safely. did you stop for coffee there, have a chat, look at the meat and biscuits. did you see the rainbow that spanned the empty house. did you ever wonder, what happened next? it is a small life, treat it gently. sbm,
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Feb 6, 2014
Feb 6, 2014 at 2:01 AM UTC
62. rhug.
The maroons scored the first try hooray hooray It was converted oh yeah hooray You see it went upstairs and it was decided the try is theirs So the might of Queensland Are the first scorers But then after 5 minutes or so The mighty blues scored their first and it was fun so fun Will the blues win Well that will only happen if They can keep it up oh yeah The score is 6-6 Then there was some silly moves but it was cool when the blues broke loose then the maroons broke loose Until the blues broke loose to score an unconverted try To make the score 10-6 Making Queensland lick their wounds And just as the blues scored that try they took the ball and ran it down to score another try To make it 16-6 poor buggery Maroons what is happening At present the blues are too good And that was the lead at half time oh yeah and the maroons had a very close chance But the blues are in front Dude it is great Can they keep it up oh yeah Buckaluck After a few of misses and mistakes the mighty Maroons Are hoping to have started a small heart attack by racing in With a converted a try to make the score 16-12 the crowd roar and cheer so loud And let's hope this game doesn't disappoint the crowd The blues make this slip up which could be bad for their chances of the second match The score is still the blues up by 4 But more misses like that Could be their destiny It is touch and go for the blues cause the maroons are looking like overtaking the lead but the blues stopped them As well as an injury to the maroons and this will Make them conquer all The hopeless blues knocks the ball on and the maroons get the ball back yeah What is happening to those hopeless blues The maroons scored a try to tie it up And Thurston is the player to Bring the maroons leading again Yeah mate yeah he got the goal 18-16 to the maroons What will the last 2 minutes hold yeah buddy boy the maroons are too strong and bold As we draw the final curtain The maroons came back to beat the blues 18-16 They were down by about 10 Mate but the pressure from the maroons was too strong Cheer cheer the Queensland team the blues played like **** But as that final Curtain drew Yeah we sink down our vb
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Jun 21, 2017
Jun 21, 2017 at 8:10 AM UTC
state of origin commentary poem
The maroons scored the first try hooray hooray It was converted oh yeah hooray You see it went upstairs and it was decided the try is theirs So the might of Queensland Are the first scorers But then after 5 minutes or so The mighty blues scored their first and it was fun so fun Will the blues win Well that will only happen if They can keep it up oh yeah The score is 6-6 Then there was some silly moves but it was cool when the blues broke loose then the maroons broke loose Until the blues broke loose to score an unconverted try To make the score 10-6 Making Queensland lick their wounds And just as the blues scored that try they took the ball and ran it down to score another try To make it 16-6 poor buggery Maroons what is happening At present the blues are too good And that was the lead at half time oh yeah and the maroons had a very close chance But the blues are in front Dude it is great Can they keep it up oh yeah Buckaluck After a few of misses and mistakes the mighty Maroons Are hoping to have started a small heart attack by racing in With a converted a try to make the score 16-12 the crowd roar and cheer so loud And let's hope this game doesn't disappoint the crowd The blues make this slip up which could be bad for their chances of the second match The score is still the blues up by 4 But more misses like that Could be their destiny It is touch and go for the blues cause the maroons are looking like overtaking the lead but the blues stopped them As well as an injury to the maroons and this will Make them conquer all The hopeless blues knocks the ball on and the maroons get the ball back yeah What is happening to those hopeless blues The maroons scored a try to tie it up And Thurston is the player to Bring the maroons leading again Yeah mate yeah he got the goal 18-16 to the maroons What will the last 2 minutes hold yeah buddy boy the maroons are too strong and bold As we draw the final curtain The maroons came back to beat the blues 18-16 They were down by about 10 Mate but the pressure from the maroons was too strong Cheer cheer the Queensland team the blues played like **** But as that final Curtain drew Yeah we sink down our vb
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