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If I were a teacher, I'd teach plagiarism Like a patent office. I'd teach publication Like plagiarism, And I'll proofread Any paper that properly Cites their sources. I'd teach every Kid from age X to Y That if I can't Lift them as High as they Want to go Than somebody Else Can. I would be the man, That teaches subjects Like I'm their King, And I'd spread Knowledge to every Acre of my empire I'd teach anything. See, I'd teach chemistry By making the reaction of Why and How Always synthesize Wow. I'd be a catalyst For positive change By keeping every School-yard bully and kid that's always picked last Around after class To teach them physics, Like if you have mass And you take up space Then you ******* matter. I'd put the cool in Coulombs. I'd be so electrostatic About magnetic fields You could feel my fluxin' Energy in the hallway. I'd say His story, And Her story, And everyone in-between's story, Is about the day their parents met. I'd teach sex-ed Like it's about the Day their parents met. And it wouldn't be weird It'd be beautiful. Because anybody falling In love is beautiful. And speaking of beautiful: Mathemagics, Would no longer Be a bottomless hat But a bird. With feathers and wings And things that always Find their way home. I'd transform The Fourier of Our foundations With equations Of equality Like you, And I are Always equal to Us. It'll be cake To be genius. ....Or pie Or whatever else is rational In this situation. And I Would measure intelligence With the answer to the question Of why we are alive. I'd standardize Every test By removing Any box that Takes us Further apart I would make art Combining every Color from East to West In a masterpiece That every child can draw We'll call it "human" I would solve World hunger And war, And every other problem That stems from greed With answers to the Questions that I still Don't know But I would show Everyone whose ever Made you hurt That a broken heart Has still got the Courage to beat Because it's their words Where the heart breathes Where the heart bleeds Where the heart sleeps And it's our dreams That keep us awake In the wake of our past So I'd put every love letter And box of their **** On a bonfire, light a match, And we would watch it burn. Hell, If I were a teacher I'd say there's So much left That I've still got To learn.
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Apr 11, 2016
Apr 11, 2016 at 1:31 AM UTC
If I Were a Teacher
If I were a teacher, I'd teach plagiarism Like a patent office. I'd teach publication Like plagiarism, And I'll proofread Any paper that properly Cites their sources. I'd teach every Kid from age X to Y That if I can't Lift them as High as they Want to go Than somebody Else Can. I would be the man, That teaches subjects Like I'm their King, And I'd spread Knowledge to every Acre of my empire I'd teach anything. See, I'd teach chemistry By making the reaction of Why and How Always synthesize Wow. I'd be a catalyst For positive change By keeping every School-yard bully and kid that's always picked last Around after class To teach them physics, Like if you have mass And you take up space Then you ******* matter. I'd put the cool in Coulombs. I'd be so electrostatic About magnetic fields You could feel my fluxin' Energy in the hallway. I'd say His story, And Her story, And everyone in-between's story, Is about the day their parents met. I'd teach sex-ed Like it's about the Day their parents met. And it wouldn't be weird It'd be beautiful. Because anybody falling In love is beautiful. And speaking of beautiful: Mathemagics, Would no longer Be a bottomless hat But a bird. With feathers and wings And things that always Find their way home. I'd transform The Fourier of Our foundations With equations Of equality Like you, And I are Always equal to Us. It'll be cake To be genius. ....Or pie Or whatever else is rational In this situation. And I Would measure intelligence With the answer to the question Of why we are alive. I'd standardize Every test By removing Any box that Takes us Further apart I would make art Combining every Color from East to West In a masterpiece That every child can draw We'll call it "human" I would solve World hunger And war, And every other problem That stems from greed With answers to the Questions that I still Don't know But I would show Everyone whose ever Made you hurt That a broken heart Has still got the Courage to beat Because it's their words Where the heart breathes Where the heart bleeds Where the heart sleeps And it's our dreams That keep us awake In the wake of our past So I'd put every love letter And box of their **** On a bonfire, light a match, And we would watch it burn. Hell, If I were a teacher I'd say there's So much left That I've still got To learn.
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If this were a haiku, I'd have seventeen syllables to explain why I'm running out of syllables to tell you why the doorknob, and not between my fingers, is where your hand shouldn't be. Message Delivered If that sounds confusing, it's because it isn't, and you're only confused because I proofread the text messages and you forget words, but it's like you forgot "you" after "I" and "love," and you just never thought to put it back. Message Delivered I checked the date and you missed Monday morning in Lowry and the morning before that in Farmer Boy, and we've got a whole calendar of affections that you're missing because you opened up to a month too far back and now you're in love with moments that forgot you Message Delivered I’m holding out for cycles of goodbye kisses and I only got them when you woke up, and i’m not sure you ever did again because you’re living in sweet dreams that are quietly bitter and your ideas don’t love you like you’ve convinced yourself you do. Message Delivered If I could go back i'd give you space, i’d break my own heart not listening to the sound of your breath as you fall asleep next to me but you're finding shelter in broken affection afraid to be alone forgetting who you are in familiarity, in Her Message Delivered I’ll fall asleep tonight, and wake up tomorrow, the same way I did yesterday, thinking of something that wasn’t, or maybe really was and praying I could fall back into that dream but sleep isn’t quite that easy, and blissful ignorance is granted only to the few Message Delivered
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Oct 27, 2017
Oct 27, 2017 at 8:25 AM UTC
Message Delivered
If this were a haiku, I'd have seventeen syllables to explain why I'm running out of syllables to tell you why the doorknob, and not between my fingers, is where your hand shouldn't be. Message Delivered If that sounds confusing, it's because it isn't, and you're only confused because I proofread the text messages and you forget words, but it's like you forgot "you" after "I" and "love," and you just never thought to put it back. Message Delivered I checked the date and you missed Monday morning in Lowry and the morning before that in Farmer Boy, and we've got a whole calendar of affections that you're missing because you opened up to a month too far back and now you're in love with moments that forgot you Message Delivered I’m holding out for cycles of goodbye kisses and I only got them when you woke up, and i’m not sure you ever did again because you’re living in sweet dreams that are quietly bitter and your ideas don’t love you like you’ve convinced yourself you do. Message Delivered If I could go back i'd give you space, i’d break my own heart not listening to the sound of your breath as you fall asleep next to me but you're finding shelter in broken affection afraid to be alone forgetting who you are in familiarity, in Her Message Delivered I’ll fall asleep tonight, and wake up tomorrow, the same way I did yesterday, thinking of something that wasn’t, or maybe really was and praying I could fall back into that dream but sleep isn’t quite that easy, and blissful ignorance is granted only to the few Message Delivered
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I live in a room where time stands still I have been sick of late I have need to take yet another pill They don't really do any thing to help But I keep hoping that they will. Sometimes I think that I am as dead as I am ever going to be That is if I still wake up tomorrow I am bright enough to see To whom it is I bless And just where it is I bring sorrow I keep wishing for good health For that I would beg steal or borrow. I dream the craziest of dreams Last night I caught my mentor mixing metaphor Watch me go 'round in circles I've got one foot nailed to the floor I stand in a room made of mirror I see myself clearly Yet I start out looking for the door. I woke up and started drinking today That is the only relief I get When I go around town smelling like alcohol I'm not exactly teacher's pet But I will live to uncork another bottle Oh on that one you can bet. I'll always give you the truth you see On that you can depend Even if I tell you a lie over coffee While sipping my special blend Later I will type 'what is what' you see But I won't proofread before I send.
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Jun 16, 2012
Jun 16, 2012 at 2:31 PM UTC
Mentor Mixing Metaphor
the nights you call lonely are the nights i spend reading and writing and drawing and loving my own company i enjoy dreaming of possibilities and laying in complete silence you see, my mind is so loud louder than the party you're at tonight and for me that is enough i balance it out by being quiet, by producing shambles of poetry and endless jumbles of words to try and understand that it is okay to love the silence and the mystery of who i am you find yourself in bright lights and loud music i find myself in the dark we have been afraid of our whole lives it is the darkness and the silence that make you so scared of us but we are simply introverts trying to fit into a world made for you while you are dancing your heart out ours are pounding in pride as we proofread our writing for the 100th time your open arms and our open minds embrace in harmony you see, i started writing us instead of me because i know i am not alone on these nights you call lonely i call lovely
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Aug 19, 2016
Aug 19, 2016 at 9:05 AM UTC
About Introverts
I don’t tell them I’m going to a protest, as I know they will not say no, it really is far safer. The police have been pretty fair, only a couple of bull **** arrests and cause white privilege I probably won’t get arrested. In a black and white democracy color is prohibited. I never have been close in a protest yet, the police always tolerant maybe the commissioner doesn’t **** I don’t boast to them about starting a chapter in my school. I don’t them that the chapter I started with them was finished hundreds of pages ago. I don’t tell them I cut class to protest the B.S minimum wage how I ****** the very thing I’m trying to start cause 
I was in a pissy mood. I don’t them about how my friend and I were okay with paying a guy trying to sell us **** to buy us alcohol, later losing 20$ and not okay with going into a tattoo shop for the same purpose. I don’t tell them about wandering around Chinatown feeling like we should be drunk. About the girl who in eighth grade asked me to touch her ***** and I don’t tell them how two years later we start hanging out— over facebook. She moved to London. About how she will be in the city the day my family goes away, about trading facebooks for fifteen minutes and having weird *** crap on my Facebook and talk of how Jesus is an improper child on hers. Nor do I my parents about meeting up with a girl who I meet a month ago at a pillow fight, and how right they were when they said ****** tables manners will catch up to you, about how leaving a protest cause "my parents are ****** and later seeing those people at the burger place. I tell my parents I’m chilling with my buddies. I tell them that I got pizza instead of burgers. Because friends are safer to parents than a nineteen year old girl you met at a pillow fight and how the entire time you could not tell if it was friends meeting up or people who wanted more. I don’t tell them the reason why I’m so ******* fragile is that I can’t tell if I’m manipulating myself or being real, or how I’m the only one who is hurting me, for fear of saying what I just told you. Now all of this ******* **** lives in me and I have nobody to proofread this. Lovely.
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May 5, 2015
May 5, 2015 at 11:16 PM UTC
What I don’t tell my parents
I don’t tell them I’m going to a protest, as I know they will not say no, it really is far safer. The police have been pretty fair, only a couple of bull **** arrests and cause white privilege I probably won’t get arrested. In a black and white democracy color is prohibited. I never have been close in a protest yet, the police always tolerant maybe the commissioner doesn’t **** I don’t boast to them about starting a chapter in my school. I don’t them that the chapter I started with them was finished hundreds of pages ago. I don’t tell them I cut class to protest the B.S minimum wage how I ****** the very thing I’m trying to start cause 
I was in a pissy mood. I don’t them about how my friend and I were okay with paying a guy trying to sell us **** to buy us alcohol, later losing 20$ and not okay with going into a tattoo shop for the same purpose. I don’t tell them about wandering around Chinatown feeling like we should be drunk. About the girl who in eighth grade asked me to touch her ***** and I don’t tell them how two years later we start hanging out— over facebook. She moved to London. About how she will be in the city the day my family goes away, about trading facebooks for fifteen minutes and having weird *** crap on my Facebook and talk of how Jesus is an improper child on hers. Nor do I my parents about meeting up with a girl who I meet a month ago at a pillow fight, and how right they were when they said ****** tables manners will catch up to you, about how leaving a protest cause "my parents are ****** and later seeing those people at the burger place. I tell my parents I’m chilling with my buddies. I tell them that I got pizza instead of burgers. Because friends are safer to parents than a nineteen year old girl you met at a pillow fight and how the entire time you could not tell if it was friends meeting up or people who wanted more. I don’t tell them the reason why I’m so ******* fragile is that I can’t tell if I’m manipulating myself or being real, or how I’m the only one who is hurting me, for fear of saying what I just told you. Now all of this ******* **** lives in me and I have nobody to proofread this. Lovely.
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I’m a written and published open book, you just have to read past the first chapter. You skimmed the pages and took a look at the last line to see if there was a happily ever after. But like most things it’s up to interpretation, left open ended in way for a hopeful sequel, ‘cause like all things true it’s plagued with complication, but our story has no end and it has no equal. And you, you were my favourite memoir, your depth lined the thesis of a never ending essay. I became inspired so I held an impromptu seminar, a whole panel to if your picture was sepia or artistically grey. I memorized every single thing you said, every cryptic metaphor, every perfect rhyme. I’ve lost count of how often that I’ve fully read, and I still don’t understand after all of this time. You’re a novel and I’m a novelty, but you need a title; what should it be? I’ve been writing you so that the whole world can see, the way you shine bright effortlessly. You were my own personal thesaurus and dictionary, providing different words to dress up each thought. You’re a first and only edition; what a rarity, laced with metaphors and satire that’s barely caught. You’re what Shakespeare aspired to always write, and you accomplished it simply by being born. I’d translate you to brail so those without sight, could hear about you and the beauty they now mourn. You’re a novel and I’m a novelty, no need to proofread, no cause for editing. I’ve been writing you so that the whole world can see, the way you shine bright, always illuminating. I’m a prologue, and we’re the conclusion. My authors note; the words of a demagogue, but the details still lack any illusion. You’re a novel and I’m a novelty, I’ve memorized every word and dissected them cautiously. I’ve been writing you so the whole world can see, and once they skim the synopsis; they’ll never stop reading.
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Jan 20, 2019
Jan 20, 2019 at 8:13 AM UTC
To The Bookshelf
I’m a written and published open book, you just have to read past the first chapter. You skimmed the pages and took a look at the last line to see if there was a happily ever after. But like most things it’s up to interpretation, left open ended in way for a hopeful sequel, ‘cause like all things true it’s plagued with complication, but our story has no end and it has no equal. And you, you were my favourite memoir, your depth lined the thesis of a never ending essay. I became inspired so I held an impromptu seminar, a whole panel to if your picture was sepia or artistically grey. I memorized every single thing you said, every cryptic metaphor, every perfect rhyme. I’ve lost count of how often that I’ve fully read, and I still don’t understand after all of this time. You’re a novel and I’m a novelty, but you need a title; what should it be? I’ve been writing you so that the whole world can see, the way you shine bright effortlessly. You were my own personal thesaurus and dictionary, providing different words to dress up each thought. You’re a first and only edition; what a rarity, laced with metaphors and satire that’s barely caught. You’re what Shakespeare aspired to always write, and you accomplished it simply by being born. I’d translate you to brail so those without sight, could hear about you and the beauty they now mourn. You’re a novel and I’m a novelty, no need to proofread, no cause for editing. I’ve been writing you so that the whole world can see, the way you shine bright, always illuminating. I’m a prologue, and we’re the conclusion. My authors note; the words of a demagogue, but the details still lack any illusion. You’re a novel and I’m a novelty, I’ve memorized every word and dissected them cautiously. I’ve been writing you so the whole world can see, and once they skim the synopsis; they’ll never stop reading.
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It's not all that hard, it's so easy to learn, Each and every one of these simple rules. You see, I'm not even American, But not even us Mexicans are such fools. I know this language like I know myself, I never laid hand on the shelf, Where everyone placed their literature books, Just to drop it for looks. It's easy to remember, Why can't you see, English is so easy, Or is it just me? No. That wouldn't make sense. Spanish was my first language. Yet I've come to know English better than my native tongue. You're not North American, British, or Australian? Alright whatever, I'll let it slide. But really, born and raised here? Come on, it's a free ride. Deosnt it btoher you taht erevy wrod is speled rong? Notice can't that you is order your wrong? Proud to be an American, it isn't really saying much. Cuz it lik jus syin I cn bearle evn speek such. Yes, I think you're stupid, every time you spell wrong, Because it's so easy to fix even a word that is long. It makes me wonder wether your autocorrect's off? Because that simple thing, knows each time that you're off. Is it really so hard to put in that one vowel, Or put in the consonant so your spelling's not foul. Or correct the double-negative, you know it's not true, It's easy to do, just proofread right through. We all have the ability needed learn, Yet it seems your ability's been placed in an urn. You've got a big brain, so why don't you use it? Trust me, I know, you shouldn't abuse it. If you have pride in nothing else, That's fine, But it's good to have pride in the fact that you know, YOUR LANGUAGE. Be proud that you can communicate well, Be proud that even the nerdiest of nerds can't use words you won't understand, Be proud that you know how to use correct punctuation, Be proud to know where "ph", "gh", "ou", "eau" and the silent "t" are used, Be proud to know which words comes first, and which one comes last, Be proud to know English, you can learn it all fast, Be proud to know the art of words, The art so many ancient cultures knew, The ancient Japanese, and Romans, and even the French, Yet America has forgotten how to use words. Be proud to be a leader of the generation in the USA, The generation that brings back knowing our own tongue, So that foreigners who come don't know us better than us. Be proud to know the beauty of language.
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May 7, 2014
May 7, 2014 at 10:08 AM UTC
Spelling and Grammar
It's not all that hard, it's so easy to learn, Each and every one of these simple rules. You see, I'm not even American, But not even us Mexicans are such fools. I know this language like I know myself, I never laid hand on the shelf, Where everyone placed their literature books, Just to drop it for looks. It's easy to remember, Why can't you see, English is so easy, Or is it just me? No. That wouldn't make sense. Spanish was my first language. Yet I've come to know English better than my native tongue. You're not North American, British, or Australian? Alright whatever, I'll let it slide. But really, born and raised here? Come on, it's a free ride. Deosnt it btoher you taht erevy wrod is speled rong? Notice can't that you is order your wrong? Proud to be an American, it isn't really saying much. Cuz it lik jus syin I cn bearle evn speek such. Yes, I think you're stupid, every time you spell wrong, Because it's so easy to fix even a word that is long. It makes me wonder wether your autocorrect's off? Because that simple thing, knows each time that you're off. Is it really so hard to put in that one vowel, Or put in the consonant so your spelling's not foul. Or correct the double-negative, you know it's not true, It's easy to do, just proofread right through. We all have the ability needed learn, Yet it seems your ability's been placed in an urn. You've got a big brain, so why don't you use it? Trust me, I know, you shouldn't abuse it. If you have pride in nothing else, That's fine, But it's good to have pride in the fact that you know, YOUR LANGUAGE. Be proud that you can communicate well, Be proud that even the nerdiest of nerds can't use words you won't understand, Be proud that you know how to use correct punctuation, Be proud to know where "ph", "gh", "ou", "eau" and the silent "t" are used, Be proud to know which words comes first, and which one comes last, Be proud to know English, you can learn it all fast, Be proud to know the art of words, The art so many ancient cultures knew, The ancient Japanese, and Romans, and even the French, Yet America has forgotten how to use words. Be proud to be a leader of the generation in the USA, The generation that brings back knowing our own tongue, So that foreigners who come don't know us better than us. Be proud to know the beauty of language.
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I saw inscrutable senses, I saw how he pushed, pushed them away, I never saw it heaving back, I saw him stealing, stealing a particular piece of enrage, I saw his mansion where he built, built a powerful vengeance, he covered himself with, with dusk and dawn, he proofread himself occasionally so, he imbibed forest, forest of shadows and masks, I saw he smashed, smashed the only vase I thought was worth saving, I saw him being a human, human his world wasn't for him.
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Mar 8, 2014
Mar 8, 2014 at 12:47 PM UTC
Vengeance.
Step one, choose your topic. Likely yourself. Because what greater subject could there be? None surely. Step two, choose an image. Find something that can serve as a metaphor for you. Find the rain forest for instance. Or perhaps a pond frozen over in winter. Yes, these should serve nicely. Step three, place yourself somewhere in the midst of these things. Let you be the trunks of the trees supporting the lush, green canopy. You, poor, tired, supporting the thick boughs that are the real life meters and meters and meters above you. Or is your face the ice of the pond. All that people ever notice is how much you can take before you break. But there is so much more just beneath the surface. So much teeming with life. No one knows how deep you go. No one will know until the ice thaws      (which is unlikely to happen anytime soon.           but the metaphor was never meant to extend that far.) Step four, write yourself in to the piece in such a way that no one else will be able to identify you.      (Unless they're **** cunning.) Perhaps disguise your identity within the purpose of the piece or the flowing imagery seeping through the spacious cracks in your technique. Riddle the work with subtle ins and outs and minute complexities that vex the reader away from your intentions. Nicely done. Step five, ruminate. contemplate your reflection as it appears in your monitor. Not the image of your face bouncing off the glass but the snapshot of your thoughts so opaquely back-lit. Remind yourself that this is for you and no one else. Proofread. This is just for you and no one else. Revise. This is just for you and no one else. Justify this is just for you. Step six, post to a public forum. Check back in an hour.
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Aug 22, 2012
Aug 22, 2012 at 4:14 PM UTC
How to Write a Poem for Yourself (And No One Else)
Step one, choose your topic. Likely yourself. Because what greater subject could there be? None surely. Step two, choose an image. Find something that can serve as a metaphor for you. Find the rain forest for instance. Or perhaps a pond frozen over in winter. Yes, these should serve nicely. Step three, place yourself somewhere in the midst of these things. Let you be the trunks of the trees supporting the lush, green canopy. You, poor, tired, supporting the thick boughs that are the real life meters and meters and meters above you. Or is your face the ice of the pond. All that people ever notice is how much you can take before you break. But there is so much more just beneath the surface. So much teeming with life. No one knows how deep you go. No one will know until the ice thaws      (which is unlikely to happen anytime soon.           but the metaphor was never meant to extend that far.) Step four, write yourself in to the piece in such a way that no one else will be able to identify you.      (Unless they're **** cunning.) Perhaps disguise your identity within the purpose of the piece or the flowing imagery seeping through the spacious cracks in your technique. Riddle the work with subtle ins and outs and minute complexities that vex the reader away from your intentions. Nicely done. Step five, ruminate. contemplate your reflection as it appears in your monitor. Not the image of your face bouncing off the glass but the snapshot of your thoughts so opaquely back-lit. Remind yourself that this is for you and no one else. Proofread. This is just for you and no one else. Revise. This is just for you and no one else. Justify this is just for you. Step six, post to a public forum. Check back in an hour.
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I misread a lot of you's I proofread most of your mistakes you ****** at grammar I silently made my red pen dance on your blue inscriptions that you thought were unique I scratched the wrong words I indented your run on's I even added a bit of sincerity to all your reality I stepped back and looked at you you were blotches of red on scribbles of blue you were a mistake that I thought I could fix at the end of the day, I took that paper crumpled it and aimed at the trash and scored My red pen yearned for correcting many more but my red pen gave up scratching and wanted to create its own story of its very own mistakes of its own doing, so it can create a masterpiece of "me"
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Nov 2, 2015
Nov 2, 2015 at 6:41 AM UTC
Grammar ****
Letters are old school, but I guess so am I. In a way, I guess that is true, I sometimes feel like I am an old fool, Stuck in the Motown groove, The 21st Century is not for me, Waiting a minute before I can hear the next song, And when it eventually comes on it's one filled with hate, And let’s not even talk about trying to date, They said to leave a message after a beep, For my old soul that means a beat, That brought with it dance and heat, Words and rhymes and a drumbeat, See back in my day, a letter meant waiting on the mail man, And not looking for blue ticks from an app I got from an online store, It meant post stamps and asking friends to proofread, It meant punctuating every line so that you knew without you I could not breathe, Being in love was not just words and play, It meant dancing in the street; we called it grooving, Not sweet talking and lying, The old fool in me is tired of trying, Am not saying that you are lying, But you are in no way trying, To meet me in the street, Or groove to a Motown beat, I wish you were sending me flowers, While you were out there spending time, With worlds that were not even meant to be real, My old soul needs more than one-off dines or drinking box wine! See back in Motown, when a man loved a woman, He could not keep his mind on anything else, He did not put a little loving on her, or shelve her It meant the whole street knew her, and even knew her favorite beat! I have known only one other of your kind, the sweet-talking guy, You have me down on my knees wondering when you are going to leave, That is not love, I don’t know what it is, Feels like it, but this is something else!
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Jun 17, 2019
Jun 17, 2019 at 10:49 AM UTC
Sweet-talking Guy
Letters are old school, but I guess so am I. In a way, I guess that is true, I sometimes feel like I am an old fool, Stuck in the Motown groove, The 21st Century is not for me, Waiting a minute before I can hear the next song, And when it eventually comes on it's one filled with hate, And let’s not even talk about trying to date, They said to leave a message after a beep, For my old soul that means a beat, That brought with it dance and heat, Words and rhymes and a drumbeat, See back in my day, a letter meant waiting on the mail man, And not looking for blue ticks from an app I got from an online store, It meant post stamps and asking friends to proofread, It meant punctuating every line so that you knew without you I could not breathe, Being in love was not just words and play, It meant dancing in the street; we called it grooving, Not sweet talking and lying, The old fool in me is tired of trying, Am not saying that you are lying, But you are in no way trying, To meet me in the street, Or groove to a Motown beat, I wish you were sending me flowers, While you were out there spending time, With worlds that were not even meant to be real, My old soul needs more than one-off dines or drinking box wine! See back in Motown, when a man loved a woman, He could not keep his mind on anything else, He did not put a little loving on her, or shelve her It meant the whole street knew her, and even knew her favorite beat! I have known only one other of your kind, the sweet-talking guy, You have me down on my knees wondering when you are going to leave, That is not love, I don’t know what it is, Feels like it, but this is something else!
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One. Two. Close your eyes. Renew. Three. Four. Release your thoughts. Explore. Five. Six. Express. Fix. Seven. Eight. Nine. Repeat. Refine. Ten. Breathe in. Let's begin. "What's the matter, Logan?" Jessica asked. I paused to reflect upon the moment when my hand reached over my heart. I was helplessly pointing towards my chest to express the chaotic feeling inside. "What are these feelings?" I pondered. "What? What is it? Chest pain?" she asked. I shook my head with my hand tapping against my heart. "How do I tell her that I feel irregular heartbeats? How do I tell her that I am feeling something completely indescribable?" I thought. I rubbed my stomach in rotating motions. "Logan, is it your stomach? Do you have a stomach ache?" she asked. The deep look of concern in her eyes heightened the feelings inside. I reached over to my phone and texted her a brief summary of how I felt. "Logan, seriously?" she asked after reading the message. She leaned over moving closer to my lips. "A mosh pit of butterflies," she whispered. I could feel the warmth of her breath against my cold lips. "Well, I am ready to rave if you're willing to ...," she said before she was interrupted. I closed my eyes and leaned in closer. "One size fits all," I thought to myself. When two souls fill the large vacancy between each other's arms, there is nothing to do other than embracing that invaluable time together. The butterflies subsided. Ten. Breathe in. Reflect. Nine. Eight. Seven. Euphoric heaven. Six. Five. Rejuvenate. Revive. Four. Three. Proofread. Agree. Two. One. Close your eyes. Have fun.
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Mar 7, 2015
Mar 7, 2015 at 9:57 PM UTC
Writer's Warm Up
One. Two. Close your eyes. Renew. Three. Four. Release your thoughts. Explore. Five. Six. Express. Fix. Seven. Eight. Nine. Repeat. Refine. Ten. Breathe in. Let's begin. "What's the matter, Logan?" Jessica asked. I paused to reflect upon the moment when my hand reached over my heart. I was helplessly pointing towards my chest to express the chaotic feeling inside. "What are these feelings?" I pondered. "What? What is it? Chest pain?" she asked. I shook my head with my hand tapping against my heart. "How do I tell her that I feel irregular heartbeats? How do I tell her that I am feeling something completely indescribable?" I thought. I rubbed my stomach in rotating motions. "Logan, is it your stomach? Do you have a stomach ache?" she asked. The deep look of concern in her eyes heightened the feelings inside. I reached over to my phone and texted her a brief summary of how I felt. "Logan, seriously?" she asked after reading the message. She leaned over moving closer to my lips. "A mosh pit of butterflies," she whispered. I could feel the warmth of her breath against my cold lips. "Well, I am ready to rave if you're willing to ...," she said before she was interrupted. I closed my eyes and leaned in closer. "One size fits all," I thought to myself. When two souls fill the large vacancy between each other's arms, there is nothing to do other than embracing that invaluable time together. The butterflies subsided. Ten. Breathe in. Reflect. Nine. Eight. Seven. Euphoric heaven. Six. Five. Rejuvenate. Revive. Four. Three. Proofread. Agree. Two. One. Close your eyes. Have fun.
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People proofread because they want to find their errors. People find errors so that they can correct them. People correct them because they want perfection. People want perfection so that society will love them. But there is beauty in errors. There is beauty in the flaws, not only on paper, But in the flaws of your person. There is beauty in the rawness that comes with lack of Proofreading. Perfection is overrated. Perfection is unreachable. Perfection is what stands between you and your dreams. Perfection is masked fear. Maybe it's just me, But I would rather see someone's raw imperfections, The things that scare them, The things that they's rather hide, Than the picture perfect image that they create, With Proofreading.
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Nov 30, 2014
Nov 30, 2014 at 11:16 PM UTC
Why I Refuse To Proofread
i'm gonna get me a new set of eyeballs too much readin' n writin n stuff can't proofread worth a dam gotta go live my life not set here n write now i got me's a little nut and she writes not so slow i ain't much fer words likin the sound of silence myself but this little new nut she's kinda a cute little darlin so with my eyes whirling in despair i slog forth until they can be repaired. i gotta get me a new set of eyeballs, one new set of eyeballs i'm gonna get me.
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Sep 23, 2015
Sep 23, 2015 at 5:39 AM UTC
gonna *** me new a set of eyeballs
Poems don't always have to rhyme Not all are salable, you won't have a dime It'll be forgotten as it passes time You can only be proud to call it 'mine' It won't be judged by a critic Nor passed to a panel like a thesis No one would proofread it Nor someone scolding you to remember the basic But without rhyme, how can you call it a poem? Shouldn't poems have that beautiful tone? Play with words to rhyme - a job of a poet But not all poems that rhymed are the best
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Jun 29, 2014
Jun 29, 2014 at 11:00 PM UTC
Poems(') Rhyme
My Dearest; Darkest Devotion, Ah, but what a long time it's been! And now, it is with a slender paled sliver of hope this letter finds you before I arrive at your chamber, for I must solicit your heart with the contents of mine. This night I ponder upward to the twinklings amid the void and my thoughts do turn to that time we first met, before I knew you, and how you let me know you, and eventually I let you know...me. Having learned the truth of my true vampyric nature, your reaction was not as open a reception as I would have it. I concede I have not been the same sense you drove that plank through my chest and deep into my very still heart. There stayed I until, alas... A hapless young wanderer, a splendid morsel of a group of people on a retreat from the town, rummaging through nature to find kindling for a bonfire, took grasp of the parcel of wood that protruded from the shallow earth where I was left forsaken, and in his misfortune did un-stake me. I assure you, at this very moment, I feel quite quenched of my thirst. My hunger for the sweetmeats of revenge have yet to be satiated, however, I will see you very soon, My Pitch Blackness. And you. too, shall see me. Eternally yours, Vladimir Tepes. P.S. Happy Halloween.
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Oct 31, 2016
Oct 31, 2016 at 11:59 PM UTC
Please, Proofread My Letter to a Former Love.
She typed her poems in size 6 font afraid of someone reading over her shoulder. She was a writer afraid to share what she had written. She knew that she had revealed too much of herself too much of the part of herself that she keeps hidden, suppressed. To have someone read what she wrote and know about her, terrified her. Yet she kept writing knowing that it was what she wanted to do, what she had to do. If she didn't write, no one would ever know anything about her. So she wrote and proofread deciding how much of herself to reveal. She would delete and modify until it seemed as if she was an anonymous poet. Yet someone always could tell that it was her doing the writing. So she shared her poem anyways.
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May 7, 2013
May 7, 2013 at 11:58 AM UTC
Size 6 font
Someone told me our bodies contain enough carbon to make 900 pencils ending it with "you can write with your body" First, let my body meet yours let our fingertips touch and let our bodies yearn to start some good writing tease our carbons to create, to begin to fall to blend to melt Now darling the only way I'd begin a poem is with you starting with a kiss a capital kiss for the first letter of the first word should be bold and beautiful silent but loud The sentences my body start yours finish no matter how long "run on's", fragmented they are you start I finish, I start you finish Interrupted by breaths gasping for life, inhaling the souls of muses and exhaling such beautiful poetry, such deep writing that only our bodies know how to create, how to read, how to vocalize how to share Stanzas interrupted by moans that sing and hum the hymns of poetry that cannot be embodied in words moans that orchestrate symphonies leading our bodies to dance to love to enjoy such intensity that my pencils fail at capturing Let my body write with yours and re-write the ways of love edit, proofread, scratch, claw mark and re-create new ways of falling of loving, of sighing let my body write with yours and bask under such powerful chemistry where carbon burns And flames ignite Let's write
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Oct 14, 2016
Oct 14, 2016 at 5:44 AM UTC
Carbon Creation
hot screams pictures flashing remember remember don't forget to have proof proofread a persona a shifting ego rising and falling with the waves a rhythm older than stone and sadness older than hard cider arms folded begging not to be touched begging for an old familiar couch that swallows thoughts whole swollen with years of desires and drool and cottonmouth hot hot screams rip through ears holding a pain of identical magnitude a hideous sameness twitching dancing across nervous systems as people disappear and rain sprinkles the front porch in road blocks and tired conversation tired awareness never drink again never dream again never eat or sleep or scream again resign while politics eats away at abandoned barns upstate and rapists walk free under the guise of fraternal bonding shoot first ask questions later or just don't ask any ever as if the answers have been found provided by the flashes seen with eyes closed the flashes seen in eyes clothes the flashes blinding and true blinding and real blinding binding and the chains are made of severed hands the captor a trillion eyes piled up and growing putting debt and babel and the fuming gods to shame fuming gods of shame and image reflection and refraction twisting twilight twice around twenty somethings like twine twenty somethings need more somethings anythings everythings need want need want kneed want wasn't enough tough pill to swallow wallow wallow just follow the leader beaming glorious light like liquid soap hot hot hot screams screams hot hot screams hot screams
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Oct 15, 2014
Oct 15, 2014 at 6:28 PM UTC
and an ambulance out front
hot screams pictures flashing remember remember don't forget to have proof proofread a persona a shifting ego rising and falling with the waves a rhythm older than stone and sadness older than hard cider arms folded begging not to be touched begging for an old familiar couch that swallows thoughts whole swollen with years of desires and drool and cottonmouth hot hot screams rip through ears holding a pain of identical magnitude a hideous sameness twitching dancing across nervous systems as people disappear and rain sprinkles the front porch in road blocks and tired conversation tired awareness never drink again never dream again never eat or sleep or scream again resign while politics eats away at abandoned barns upstate and rapists walk free under the guise of fraternal bonding shoot first ask questions later or just don't ask any ever as if the answers have been found provided by the flashes seen with eyes closed the flashes seen in eyes clothes the flashes blinding and true blinding and real blinding binding and the chains are made of severed hands the captor a trillion eyes piled up and growing putting debt and babel and the fuming gods to shame fuming gods of shame and image reflection and refraction twisting twilight twice around twenty somethings like twine twenty somethings need more somethings anythings everythings need want need want kneed want wasn't enough tough pill to swallow wallow wallow just follow the leader beaming glorious light like liquid soap hot hot hot screams screams hot hot screams hot screams
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She rested her thin hands beside her keyboard and proofread the email to her landlord. She was adamant about getting the most from her lease and, though wealthy, insisted on knowing the price of everything. Milk is almost five dollars and gas is almost milk. Littered around her bedroom were shoeboxes of handmade jewelry, pearls, and war correspondence, each as fragile as a land mine. Loose soil footsteps, shrapnel, and a Sofield soldier torn in two.
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May 24, 2014
May 24, 2014 at 3:13 PM UTC
War Correspondence
Nothing you said makes me happier Not “I love you” Not “I miss you” Not the sweet words, The secret language You used with only The girls filled with hate Now I think, to this day That nothing you say Could ever make me happier Nothing you said makes me happier Not “Come over” Not “Come closer” Not the proofread lines, Carefully exacted For the time you just left Me to wander, distracted Alone in a crowd We no longer interacted That didn't make me happier Nothing you said makes me happier Not “We need a break” Not “I'm moving away” The looks that you gave Or the way you berate, Not even a whisper Of lie and debate Will make me happier Than when you told me “I'll be dead by forty.”
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May 19, 2016
May 19, 2016 at 5:24 PM UTC
Nothing You Said Makes Me Happier
to encourage the unionization of stereotypes in YA fiction, join my father. for money, add punctuation to a vandal’s prose. women are not soft, but I think anyway it’s true. on paper, proofread god.
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Jun 23, 2014
Jun 23, 2014 at 1:06 PM UTC
the less I know about my children
Three in the morning, halfway through my shift at a printing plant. I'm tired as always, my mind frazzled, my eyes bleary. I'm creeping through the night as I proofread technical manuals and pharmaceutical ads and brochures aimed at type two diabetics. I'm on life support here, stuck in a depressing gray environment, a vampire on the graveyard shift, the burial ground of too many aging English majors struggling to make a buck while the rest of the world is home asleep, dreaming in color, people whose minds and bodies will forever have a normal relationship with sunlight. As I proofread, I listen to talk radio with its opinionated personalities, irate callers, and nocturnal candor, all of it making those Sinatra-like wee small hours of the morning fly by like a moth rushing toward a bright burning bulb.
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Jul 7, 2015
Jul 7, 2015 at 11:45 AM UTC
Third Shift
every time I write vividly can’t end days yearn for epiphany malice their succession I don’t learn more of p o l i t i c s m e n in shoes w a r f a m i l y m a n n e r s r o t t e n y o u t h afraid of being water water that decomposes every day printed with i-service entropy if craic makes my soul modern I’ll wait for apocalypse wild devours my ashes each of my tea motes fight heave my tongue like embers humpty already fallen all the king’s economists still drafting recovery plans— asks to go to Nyos for silent rain on a government grant. all the king’s economists can’t put him together again. enlightening activist futility writing in a singed library at my diluted right edge I fear those who tower over me what if my decade has passed making a schedule each day to be better or to matter I suffer from anemia my tea is too sour gambling them to pay for meaning— who taught me to write and forgot to proofread when they ask my destiny I say: transcendence of arcana would restless lurching take me to God or Satan I need to ask someone modern
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Sep 28, 2025
Sep 28, 2025 at 6:21 AM UTC
I'M IN LOVE WITH MY ECONOMY