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"untangling" poems
the smell before it rains and the taste of that first sip of tea in -20 degrees the slow untangling of your thoughts with every beat of the drum, the way the wind blows right through you just enough to move you forward and never enough to blow you down the sound of typing fingers when you know you're onto something good, the feeling of your own, and finally not his, skin the seasons are changing and baby so are you / six senses are helping you develop into someone new
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Apr 12, 2018
Apr 12, 2018 at 1:02 PM UTC
six senses, or why life is better without him
I can't remember the last time I touched your face But I can feel your cheekbones digging into my mind like the feeling of taking a shovel hollowing out my own grave to lie in When was the last time I was able to run my fingers through your hair? Untangling hair is easy, but I haven't yet found anything to get out the knots in my stomach If someone asked me what color your eyes were, I couldn't tell them But I could explain just how it felt when they looked into mine Like when you look into the sun and are blinded by its immense beauty, so blinded you can't see the inevitable damage it inflicts upon every pore Except I haven't yet found anything to protect myself from your stare What if my skin burns before you can feel it again And how will you feel if you're too bright that I can't look anymore? You might begin to miss the fact that nobody can look at you the way I do before you even realize I can And I could tell them how you felt when mine looked into yours despite the fact that you can't Because you don't know what it's like to feel something other than your own fear But I'm not afraid of you anymore, I have no fear I have some hope you can have, it's been growing for quite some time And I may have some more strength left, although dealing with you feels like running to a destination that doesn't exist I'm tired of being selfish and hogging all the feelings And I think I'll share with you
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Jan 1, 2014
Jan 1, 2014 at 9:44 PM UTC
Feel
There´s a man in my life who with one glance becomes commander of my will and master of my thoughts. My heart yearns his care, my curves crave his hands. However an endless void rips trough my dream: He doesn’t love me. I go to him whenever he calls; no matter the time, even when night falls. After untangling sheets, we embrace into each other staring into each other's eyes until we drift into our own minds. But he doesn't want me. We wake up next to each other. His smile is my warm morning sun Yet when I manage to break his spell and make my mind my own again he can't wait to try to lure me back in. Yet he says wants to be alone. He calls and worries, making sure I'm shielded from harm. He couldn't stand if fatality struck, and can't wait for me to be back in the safety of his blessed arms; But he wants to not care. His eyes are yelling with his stare that his soul is in line with mine, that his thoughts belong to me. When he holds me, he doesn’t let go. With every kiss, we are nowhere and everywhere. I am his and he is mine. However, an endless void rips trough my dream: He doesn’t know he loves me.
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May 9, 2017
May 9, 2017 at 2:03 PM UTC
"He Doesn't love me"
I want to be there when it's 4 AM and your chest can no longer withstand the weight of the demons that no one else can see and you can no longer push them back long enough to breathe and the exhales smell of ***** and misery when your very own fingernails betray your palms with blood that looks like it's not even your own I will bandage your hands and hold them gently until the demons leave and when you are afraid of your own reflection I will hide all the mirrors and sit by your side with the lights off and run my fingers through your hair as if untangling your hair could untangle the knots you have inside I will wait for you I will not groan when it's three in the morning and you stumble out of bed to go sit under the streetlight in the rain and I will wait inside with tea in your favorite mug when you say you must go alone when your eyes are vacant; a winter house with no footprints in the snow and newspapers piling up in the driveway the lights left on to scare away intruders I will be there when you come back I just need to know you'll come back
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Jan 12, 2014
Jan 12, 2014 at 4:59 PM UTC
newspapers in the driveway
Pale legs sprawl out; untangling and stretching, as I absorb the Montana air. Isolated, we sit, under the big sky. Silent. White clouds float through a sea of orange. The same shade of orange as those sugary push-up's my father would shove down my throat. Gas station sweets to make me me forgive him. I shake the feeling of comparisons— they never did me any good. Instead, I lie down and allow you to touch my tense body. Softly, you reach over, muffling words of beauty and astonishment. I do not flinch. I flash a smile and focus on Montana. The mountains in West Virginia rolled; they flowed, so graciously together. There was never a road that was not winding. I've never seen a rugged mountain. Snow-capped and radiant. Not until Montana. Until this moment, I, too, have tried to flow. Living the same ways, in which I experienced, Mother Nature. Going through the motions— with no purpose. No passion. The fear of becoming an abrasive, overbearing woman urged me to flow. To slide through life, barely noticed. Never climbing for more, to discover the true beauty in becoming a bit rocky.
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Aug 20, 2018
Aug 20, 2018 at 11:06 PM UTC
Teachings From Mother.
In the wayward’s of a Wiccan do no harm (those who’ve paid heed) Ye old religion doth fright some believing charms hold ***** deeds Familiar’s rest contently by Ye pentagram untangling lives within ye coven “their” demise will make all “those who’ve paid” view twice “Peace is free, peace is free Invoke thee, invoke thee Evil doers now flee, now flee far, far away from thee” Sodium sears without ye knowledge invade homesteads if you dare but if evil hath been among you tis your soul that will be bared” Ye old religion doth fright some believing charms hold ***** deeds In the wayward’s of a Wiccan do no harm (those who’ve paid heed)
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Jun 13, 2010
Jun 13, 2010 at 6:49 PM UTC
Wayward's of A Wiccan
There is something so grounding about the rumbling of a train going by, And then the soothing, settling of the surroundings as it runs off into a whisper, escaping the reaches of your eye. I sigh. Another train, in opposite direction sliding by. I see in it the line drawing my potential demise and simultaneously untangling my turmoil inside. I am fried. I am fine. I am so drawn to these tracks where the machine-cars glide, A deep-seated need to witness Their Force, their Direction, to Feel Alive.
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May 31, 2014
May 31, 2014 at 8:10 PM UTC
Walnut Park
(and I cannot live from with-out) <> a poem in appreciation to Rossella Di Paolo <> I, too:           - am an embryonic work in progress, well into my seventh decade, with no ending in sight                                 I too,     live in the house of poetry, the address likely differs, but suspect the innards of the houses differs little, the decor,  quite similar          - my house shrewdly requests a rethinking,                                     noting, it lives my artifice, with in & with out Then, we are a We:                                              - my cavities house her, She, Poetry is of Ruth (1) born,           - Poetry, She, reminds me, ”whither thou goest, I will go” This duality:           - where the haunting of words providential,              emanate, both inhabiting & inhibits my breathing               She, a fearsome creature, a fearful-something, for it tears me and shreds tears its demands be wrung from with in to with out She, Poetry:           - leaves me gaping, hollow, fills me with             depressurizing boreholes exposed to the elements  of             externalities of an admixed atmospheres, that nature demands             be refilled, fresh in, stale out, for which the artifice trick is knowing which is which when Poetry’s  birthing:           - chest pounds, heart-rate beats heavy metal,             abdomen contracts, there then, no languid in my language,             no help untangling the alpha-bet jumbling,             product of the screams of pushing, squeezing it forth* *you’re hoping to quick-catch newly formed combinations, for if you fail, a poem noisily crashes to and through the floorboard cracks, where poetry’s chaotic glinting etes maliciously glimmer~winks at me with a sarcastic thank you* *“ah, too bad, another creation stillborn, gone to rest, biting the nether dust, without hope of resuscitation…”* just another unfinished work in progress periodically a survivor clean caught, transcribed, edited to be finished, amniotic fluids cleared, poem resurrected blessed with eternal life, readied to be shared and delivered, affirmed and you say to no one and to everyone: this poem will be our poem, wither it goes, ascending, descending, all live in the house of poets, one house, many apartments, each poem a god, and my God will be our God, your God, my God, in the House of Poetry
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Jun 21, 2023
Jun 21, 2023 at 5:55 PM UTC
I, too: Live with-in the House of Poetry
(and I cannot live from with-out) <> a poem in appreciation to Rossella Di Paolo <> I, too:           - am an embryonic work in progress, well into my seventh decade, with no ending in sight                                 I too,     live in the house of poetry, the address likely differs, but suspect the innards of the houses differs little, the decor,  quite similar          - my house shrewdly requests a rethinking,                                     noting, it lives my artifice, with in & with out Then, we are a We:                                              - my cavities house her, She, Poetry is of Ruth (1) born,           - Poetry, She, reminds me, ”whither thou goest, I will go” This duality:           - where the haunting of words providential,              emanate, both inhabiting & inhibits my breathing               She, a fearsome creature, a fearful-something, for it tears me and shreds tears its demands be wrung from with in to with out She, Poetry:           - leaves me gaping, hollow, fills me with             depressurizing boreholes exposed to the elements  of             externalities of an admixed atmospheres, that nature demands             be refilled, fresh in, stale out, for which the artifice trick is knowing which is which when Poetry’s  birthing:           - chest pounds, heart-rate beats heavy metal,             abdomen contracts, there then, no languid in my language,             no help untangling the alpha-bet jumbling,             product of the screams of pushing, squeezing it forth* *you’re hoping to quick-catch newly formed combinations, for if you fail, a poem noisily crashes to and through the floorboard cracks, where poetry’s chaotic glinting etes maliciously glimmer~winks at me with a sarcastic thank you* *“ah, too bad, another creation stillborn, gone to rest, biting the nether dust, without hope of resuscitation…”* just another unfinished work in progress periodically a survivor clean caught, transcribed, edited to be finished, amniotic fluids cleared, poem resurrected blessed with eternal life, readied to be shared and delivered, affirmed and you say to no one and to everyone: this poem will be our poem, wither it goes, ascending, descending, all live in the house of poets, one house, many apartments, each poem a god, and my God will be our God, your God, my God, in the House of Poetry
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Once I was a sad clown I smiled sometimes but you couldn’t see it behind the painted frown I could pluck small colorful ***** from my pocket and spin them in the air Blue, red, yellow, green *Lies Mistrust Envy Deceit* They would twirl faster Faster… until they merged into an ugly brownish red stain Then stop! To fall, into a puddle at my feet Another time I was a ballerina A little girls delight Another time, a tin soldier A little boys dream But I can only be those things While I sit, with my eyes closed and my conscious dozes and I can no longer hear the screams When my eyes are open I am once again just a Puppet all arms and legs and bobbing head that dip and sway and dance to anothers tune Even that I could live with if my demise had not come so soon In one moment of lucidity borne of dreams I could not escape I ignored the Puppeteers growl as I twisted and twirled with my own moves but then I slipped Alas my fatal mistake You see, I was not strong enough To move my own arms and legs with my worthless puppet brain To even think I could move without anothers command should have shown how much my dreams had made me Insane I tripped up so badly there was no hope of untangling my Puppet strings I was bound so tight unable to move I lamented what my actions had cost me and I knew the pain it would bring There was no other choice but to cut me loose and my master did not even shed a single tear I’m still a puppet just an unmoving one sitting in the corner no longer with strings And no use to another Puppeteer Nov 30, 2010
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Oct 31, 2013
Oct 31, 2013 at 5:30 AM UTC
Puppet
Once I was a sad clown I smiled sometimes but you couldn’t see it behind the painted frown I could pluck small colorful ***** from my pocket and spin them in the air Blue, red, yellow, green *Lies Mistrust Envy Deceit* They would twirl faster Faster… until they merged into an ugly brownish red stain Then stop! To fall, into a puddle at my feet Another time I was a ballerina A little girls delight Another time, a tin soldier A little boys dream But I can only be those things While I sit, with my eyes closed and my conscious dozes and I can no longer hear the screams When my eyes are open I am once again just a Puppet all arms and legs and bobbing head that dip and sway and dance to anothers tune Even that I could live with if my demise had not come so soon In one moment of lucidity borne of dreams I could not escape I ignored the Puppeteers growl as I twisted and twirled with my own moves but then I slipped Alas my fatal mistake You see, I was not strong enough To move my own arms and legs with my worthless puppet brain To even think I could move without anothers command should have shown how much my dreams had made me Insane I tripped up so badly there was no hope of untangling my Puppet strings I was bound so tight unable to move I lamented what my actions had cost me and I knew the pain it would bring There was no other choice but to cut me loose and my master did not even shed a single tear I’m still a puppet just an unmoving one sitting in the corner no longer with strings And no use to another Puppeteer Nov 30, 2010
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The witching hour Dripping like silken velvet through Hushed silence Broken only by summer winds ...... Inside the recess of my restless mind Thoughts bubble Churning gentle ideas Into frenzied cognition My demons rising Feasting on anxiety ...... Behind the lidded curtains of my eyes I see your face Soothing the fear I can feel your hands upon me Untangling the tension In your eyes I see Love The blower of dreams Leaping into the unknown
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Aug 14, 2016
Aug 14, 2016 at 8:04 AM UTC
Fear of the Unknown
you like it when daddy washes your hair the shampoo the water my hands massaging your head i know you do you lean your head back pressing into my fingers moaning softly i kiss your neck shoulders you turn around kiss daddy on the lips i stand you up in the tub rinse you off wrap you up in a towel lift you up in my arms put you down on the bed comb your hair gently untangling the knots brushing straightening your hair you are my angel but most of all you’re daddy’s little girl
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Feb 27, 2021
Feb 27, 2021 at 9:43 PM UTC
brush your hair 👧 (ddlg)
I'm just an old rope slowly untangling with each stressful pull wanting to be strong as I once was wanting to be together again waiting for the moment when I fall apart
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Jun 3, 2014
Jun 3, 2014 at 11:33 PM UTC
rope metaphor
*T'was a month before Christmas and lights needed hanging. The tree needed trimming, (my headache was banging). "The stocking were hung on the chimney with care..." While electrical chords, were strewn everywhere. I unloaded boxes of tree decorations And listened to carols from old AM stations. "When out on the lawn, there arose such a clatter...." I hurried outside to see what was the matter. Over-reaching the hedges, the ladder gave way. And then I saw, in the bushes he lay. After shocking himself with a faulty light socket, His tootsie roll'd melted, inside of his pocket. He stumbled and bumbled, untangling the strands Replacing the burnouts and cutting his hands. The ordeal was finished. At last! What a feat! (Then one strand burned out, as we watched from the street.)*
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Nov 25, 2017
Nov 25, 2017 at 10:36 AM UTC
And the Lights were all Strung
**Baggage within       trappings of illusions, love packed away   in neat little compartments gathering cobwebs at      makeshift improvisations, dusting intermittently       if by chance a light            should shine, never wholly untangling     the snare mid a labyrinth of       transparent entrapment,   as violin strings continue       to unlatch the same old key**
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Aug 4, 2015
Aug 4, 2015 at 8:22 AM UTC
Labyrinths of Baggage
The shadows dividing yesterdays fell down upon today, from happiness to sadness, against each they do betray. Borrowed free will, low on spirit isn’t enough to take me through, careless past was dancing in freedom if only today was too. Ever reaching for a childhood I hold on so **** tight to the hopes that wrapped up those fears and got me through the night. But there’s nothing left to reach for just a stilted grown up reaction, where multiple masks hide the facts so I lose myself in that distraction. Too many rhymes to purge the pain and maybe set disenchantment free, to arrive today, sight still blurred but not buried by debris. Remembering simple illusions bonded with post traumatic stress, provoked contradictory reactions when untangling the mess. To rewind the clock and polish the dust wont take me to contentment, just cut me open and deepen the wounds then bring me more resentment! Decaying memories, twisted by time prey on any random second, that sometimes even looking back doesn’t need to be beckoned. Still, I look behind in the hope that I can breathe in just the thought, at the wreckage of my time so far and all the battles that I fought. Take some answers from the past and tie them with tomorrow, to create a new chapter of equilibrium where I never need to borrow. But I know myself and how I play, I need the black to colour the white, the sorrow always grounds my smiles and I can revel in the fight. I write it all regardless of pain or which one is the lethal dose, timeless in my quest to destiny, I’ll spend it chasing ghosts.
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Aug 11, 2010
Aug 11, 2010 at 9:26 AM UTC
Chasing Ghosts
The shadows dividing yesterdays fell down upon today, from happiness to sadness, against each they do betray. Borrowed free will, low on spirit isn’t enough to take me through, careless past was dancing in freedom if only today was too. Ever reaching for a childhood I hold on so **** tight to the hopes that wrapped up those fears and got me through the night. But there’s nothing left to reach for just a stilted grown up reaction, where multiple masks hide the facts so I lose myself in that distraction. Too many rhymes to purge the pain and maybe set disenchantment free, to arrive today, sight still blurred but not buried by debris. Remembering simple illusions bonded with post traumatic stress, provoked contradictory reactions when untangling the mess. To rewind the clock and polish the dust wont take me to contentment, just cut me open and deepen the wounds then bring me more resentment! Decaying memories, twisted by time prey on any random second, that sometimes even looking back doesn’t need to be beckoned. Still, I look behind in the hope that I can breathe in just the thought, at the wreckage of my time so far and all the battles that I fought. Take some answers from the past and tie them with tomorrow, to create a new chapter of equilibrium where I never need to borrow. But I know myself and how I play, I need the black to colour the white, the sorrow always grounds my smiles and I can revel in the fight. I write it all regardless of pain or which one is the lethal dose, timeless in my quest to destiny, I’ll spend it chasing ghosts.
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I saw you As you stared at me Two deers caught in each other headlights As brief as a flash, blinked, and you’d miss it I am only reminded of my heaviness when you are there Standing – Floating – Watching As ghostly as any ghost, then Gone – Vanished – Nothing I am alone, again, cursed to remain here I tried to follow in your footsteps Untangling, unknotting, unravelling Myself from a generation of debt and duty These twisted roots of familiar obligations How did you escape such a similar situation? I wasn’t born light, like you. I was born heavy, brother. I will have to earn my lightness. Sometimes on rainy days when the weighty pain becomes unmanageable I find myself slipping into the tangible delusion Of ascribing meaning to everything That maybe you think of me as much as I think of you That you see my pain and want to help But it’s just too much for you right now When you’re ready, you’ll come back to me You’ll come back. Sometimes the little lies we tell ourselves Can be enough to get us through this life But not tonight.
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Dec 2, 2021
Dec 2, 2021 at 8:47 PM UTC
Vanishing Twin
i collect patches of poetry and pluck them out of day-to-day musings of a woman born before her time, as she leisurely runs her hands across and over too ripe fruits. i do not complain nor place them in tattered and worn baskets. instead, the fruits of this history fall to the ground. unabashed, they line up with blades of grass. the wind is strong, there is a clash. my words tangle like the branches of unkept bushes - poetry is enough, i know. i see. a silhouette of bible verses and revelations coming from inside me. reverie and rhythm, festival sighs. it takes 20 years worth of courage to stay still, upright. the berries would taste wonderful, i know. but the soil is hungrily swallowing my ankles - serving justice for my leaving, for my formulating, and then abrupt untangling. my adoration turning into a mirage of nothing. the retribution is famished yet true. and so in my head, it grows, and grows, and grows. but i can taste the fruits now. no rhythm, no rhyme, no muse. i walk away barefoot, onwards, where i am deserved where i am worth fighting for, where i am buried but not so i could die, but so i could be planted.
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Jan 5, 2022
Jan 5, 2022 at 6:30 AM UTC
in this garden of rotting poetry lines
when they tell you "go look for love," look for it first inside you. it will be (most certainly) knocking at the door of your heart. (your heartbeat.) let it in. it will run through every room inside moving things around untangling the messes you've made making room. it will change you. you might not recognize yourself. it will bring light to your eyes, brighten your smile, redden your cheeks. it will teach you to make art. to sing and write poetry and dabble in painting. it will teach you to like you, to love you, the wonder that you are. you'll know what love looks like now that it's inside you.
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Aug 25, 2017
Aug 25, 2017 at 10:45 PM UTC
love looks like you
I pull fingers through my beard untangling the night while my mind gropes around for anything sublime I realise there is nothing deeper than the love that cradles its child all the way to dreams tumbling out an untangled beard.
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Oct 19, 2015
Oct 19, 2015 at 8:58 AM UTC
Tumbling out an untangled beard
Two sides to where I stand at the edge of a cubic earth left, ocean and right, dark, furled nowhere to go but the two worlds two choices seem too many to live with what I decide unless I'm prepared to sleep I can't discover the taste of cyanide I refuse to breathe not being enlightened so I choose the unknown  prime by untangling labyrinth I abide and to my right, I eventually dive.
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Aug 23, 2012
Aug 23, 2012 at 4:04 AM UTC
At the horizon of a cubic earth
We are so busy untangling wires For little speakers in our ears We forget to listen to the beauty of the earth. We see it but ignore it every day. So accustom to it's ever changing views. But Music is every where From the wind whistling through the trees To the birds belting their beats. There's no denying nothing is more beautiful then the sounds of earth.
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Jan 20, 2015
Jan 20, 2015 at 5:19 AM UTC
Sounds of earth
To whom do I belong? To the cold morning and the unrelenting pound of my feet, to meet the waistband of my favorite pants. To whom do I belong? To the cries of the babe left momentarily alone while I halt time in the motion of rushing water and clarifying peace in being simply clean. To whom do I belong? To the man who comes home from a career I gave up to care for others, To the man who pours into me every need, secret, thought and dream without cease? While I silently and forever support. To whom do I belong? To the child so afraid of the world after years of hurt Best friend, Gilmore girl, dreamer with an uncertain expiry date. To whom do I belong? To the food raised, The clothes mended, The laundry flapping in the wind, The music that surges through my thoughts and never ends And is reluctantly reminded "later, later, later my friend". To whom do I belong? To the old man now dying, tended by many Yet wanting wanting wanting the role of my beloved or child While his wife and all push me to take what she has abandoned To give of me the parts of her she won't share Untangling from a blackberry bush full of webs. To whom do I belong?
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May 3, 2020
May 3, 2020 at 4:21 PM UTC
To whom do I belong?