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There it is again. That sound you've known for so long but can never grow comfortable with. It's resonance is beyond anything describable in this world; by these means. You know it so well yet cannot fathom it. Years pass without your awareness of what this thing, this intrusively disturbing abomination truly is. You effortfully and excruciatingly ponder, analyze and rework your thoughts to no avail. You are virtually incapable—and utterly useless. As you stand, sit, or lie, pondering your lack of discernment, you stop in your tracks. You realize something you never have before. What is it?
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Jun 28, 2014
Jun 28, 2014 at 12:04 PM UTC
(When I Tried to be Deep)
People are ... Funny ... !?! They Now ... make me laugh ... You talk ... They DON'T ... listen ... !?! MP's ... keep restricting ... IGNORANCE ... in people ... has now become ... SICKENING ... !!!!! Kinda gets me to ... " Thinking " ..................... What a ... CRAZY WORLD ... !!!!!! Girls ... Loving girls ... Men ... Killing men ... !!! Abuse of our children ... by some who ... Teach them ... ??? But ...... What about those ... ? with ... Abusive children ... ?!? Those who ... Don't Care ... about those ... who ... Made Them ... !!! Adults are now ... being chased by ... Children ... ?!? Teenagers ........ RAGE ... !!!!!!! Their acts of ... Aggression ... are now ... OFF THE GAUGE ... !!!!! Words on ... This Page ... are my feelings ... Today ... What more can I say ... ? I write things ... This Way ... to avoid seeing life behind bars ... in a cage ... Seems like ... ... " End of Days " ... is Not ... far away ... !!! But Many ... DON'T LIKE ... The things that I say ... because ..... Things that I say ... Reflect on ........................................ What's TRUE ... !!!!! But Many think wrongness ... is just .... TV News .... But .... " Some of it's " ..... True ....... and can happen to ... YOU ... !!! So .... What would you do ... ? if ... Sadness and Misery ... Tainted ... your view ... !?! Probably ........ LOSE YOUR COOL ... !!!!!!! Be an *** ... or it's ... Mule ... Give in ... to clues ... that you ... HAVEN'T BEEN ... true ... !!! True about ... " Things " ... that ... Luxury brings ... Like ... " Flash Golden Rings " ... !!! or ... Diamonds that ... BLING ... !!!!! Well ... Here's the ... " Dilemma " ... ??? Life is for ... LIVING ... but now we see ... KILLING ... for ... Mobiles that ... " Ring " ... ?!? or Jewellery that ... BLINGS ... !!!?!!! So .... What will you choose ... ? to think you're a ... KING ... ? cos' of ... Your .... Diamond Ring .... ? and .... wait for the ... KILLER ... to come with ... " The Sting " ... !?! Oh now ... Just for you ladies ... Let's ... " Rework " ... the scene ... You've got to ... Realise .... Luxury's ... for a ... " Queen " ... But ..... to those who ... Don't have them ... Your Bling ... is ... OBSCENE ... !!!!!!!! Then YOU ... like the ... Fellas' ... Might find that ... " Your Dream " ... is SHATTERED ... One Night ... by a ... RUTHLESS ... " Street Team " ... !!! I'm CHANGING ... like seasons ... because of ... " These Reasons " ... cos' actions ... some make ... are Equal to ... TREASON ... !!!!!!!! I REALLY ... am Dark ... like that man ... Liam Neeson ... This life has ... MORE MEANING ... !!! than ... " Custom Made " ... Jewellery ... !!! Like Bruce ... when i'm writing .... My fists ... bring the ... " FURY " ... !!!!! cos people act ... CRAZY ... !!!!! Their outlook seems ... " Hazy " ... to make themselves money .... Their Slim's ... REALLY SHADY ... !!!!! Do you ... Trust your lady ... ??? to bring up ... " Your Baby " ... When Coc' ... is ... " The Drug " ... she likes to take .... DAILY .... !!! ? !!! Well .......... Maybe just ... " Maybe " ... ??? If you see ... what I see ... when you ... look around you ... You may just agree ... with ... A Brother ... like me ... The world we now live in  ... is TRULY .... ..... " CRAZY " .....
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Nov 23, 2016
Nov 23, 2016 at 6:32 PM UTC
" Crazy World " ... A Poem written by Big Virge 25/4/2005
People are ... Funny ... !?! They Now ... make me laugh ... You talk ... They DON'T ... listen ... !?! MP's ... keep restricting ... IGNORANCE ... in people ... has now become ... SICKENING ... !!!!! Kinda gets me to ... " Thinking " ..................... What a ... CRAZY WORLD ... !!!!!! Girls ... Loving girls ... Men ... Killing men ... !!! Abuse of our children ... by some who ... Teach them ... ??? But ...... What about those ... ? with ... Abusive children ... ?!? Those who ... Don't Care ... about those ... who ... Made Them ... !!! Adults are now ... being chased by ... Children ... ?!? Teenagers ........ RAGE ... !!!!!!! Their acts of ... Aggression ... are now ... OFF THE GAUGE ... !!!!! Words on ... This Page ... are my feelings ... Today ... What more can I say ... ? I write things ... This Way ... to avoid seeing life behind bars ... in a cage ... Seems like ... ... " End of Days " ... is Not ... far away ... !!! But Many ... DON'T LIKE ... The things that I say ... because ..... Things that I say ... Reflect on ........................................ What's TRUE ... !!!!! But Many think wrongness ... is just .... TV News .... But .... " Some of it's " ..... True ....... and can happen to ... YOU ... !!! So .... What would you do ... ? if ... Sadness and Misery ... Tainted ... your view ... !?! Probably ........ LOSE YOUR COOL ... !!!!!!! Be an *** ... or it's ... Mule ... Give in ... to clues ... that you ... HAVEN'T BEEN ... true ... !!! True about ... " Things " ... that ... Luxury brings ... Like ... " Flash Golden Rings " ... !!! or ... Diamonds that ... BLING ... !!!!! Well ... Here's the ... " Dilemma " ... ??? Life is for ... LIVING ... but now we see ... KILLING ... for ... Mobiles that ... " Ring " ... ?!? or Jewellery that ... BLINGS ... !!!?!!! So .... What will you choose ... ? to think you're a ... KING ... ? cos' of ... Your .... Diamond Ring .... ? and .... wait for the ... KILLER ... to come with ... " The Sting " ... !?! Oh now ... Just for you ladies ... Let's ... " Rework " ... the scene ... You've got to ... Realise .... Luxury's ... for a ... " Queen " ... But ..... to those who ... Don't have them ... Your Bling ... is ... OBSCENE ... !!!!!!!! Then YOU ... like the ... Fellas' ... Might find that ... " Your Dream " ... is SHATTERED ... One Night ... by a ... RUTHLESS ... " Street Team " ... !!! I'm CHANGING ... like seasons ... because of ... " These Reasons " ... cos' actions ... some make ... are Equal to ... TREASON ... !!!!!!!! I REALLY ... am Dark ... like that man ... Liam Neeson ... This life has ... MORE MEANING ... !!! than ... " Custom Made " ... Jewellery ... !!! Like Bruce ... when i'm writing .... My fists ... bring the ... " FURY " ... !!!!! cos people act ... CRAZY ... !!!!! Their outlook seems ... " Hazy " ... to make themselves money .... Their Slim's ... REALLY SHADY ... !!!!! Do you ... Trust your lady ... ??? to bring up ... " Your Baby " ... When Coc' ... is ... " The Drug " ... she likes to take .... DAILY .... !!! ? !!! Well .......... Maybe just ... " Maybe " ... ??? If you see ... what I see ... when you ... look around you ... You may just agree ... with ... A Brother ... like me ... The world we now live in  ... is TRULY .... ..... " CRAZY " .....
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O Savior, deliverer of my wasting life here. Create in me strength to overcome my trials. Teach me how to lay down my sins here. For I want to be going to heaven after I pass away. So do a mighty transforming inside of my life. Rework my attitude, among my behavior too. Transform me into your likeness Lord God. Heal me, restore me, create in me a righteous heart. Create in me a steadfast spirit, finish your work in me.
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Mar 1, 2014
Mar 1, 2014 at 11:35 PM UTC
Overcome
**Rework The possible, rethink the rest don't be blind, don't ignore mankind finance and commerce, profit obsessed imagine, the whole world re-designed with both you and I in mind.** ...   ...   ...
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Jul 9, 2011
Jul 9, 2011 at 2:48 AM UTC
... Profit Obsessed ...
The sky kept speaking in a dialect of grey, did stay overcast all through the day, like a new bride upset about her nuptials, right after it. "Could have been with some zest, I feel drowsy and totally lost" she repeatedly whispers, it  seemed . A vast net of haze fell, first on the skyscrapers standing in a row, pushing, jostling,fighting, it then descended slyly on to the tree tops adorned with garlands of flowers red, cream, or violet on their coiffures. They looked lost, at this turn of the story, unexpected. A helicopter, with tourists Criss -crossed the sky as if clueless, perhaps seeing sights in that light curious, who knows what they look for in a bad hair day like this? we could hardly guess! A stray bird appeared, as if from nowhere hastily retreated, sensing the prevailing mood. "We'll just stay put" she said "til the night would  rework the story board. perhaps with starlight " She bit hard on my upper arm, as if to exhibit her aggressive mood just once I loved it , she deftly made it erogenous. She is a tigress, forcefully kept in her den with a purpose, she slyly smiles imagining. When the wave of oily dark night advances inundating us, she is a promise, exquisite
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Oct 5, 2017
Oct 5, 2017 at 2:54 PM UTC
Caged Tigress
Through voracious eyes devotees, peruse writings, clever literature all styled to thoughtful poetic ways eloquently, exposing wounds of body and soul, discovered distrust, anger much regret, sadly even fear, thereto shortcomings in life, of people, their actions, loves and lies promulgated in illuminating phrase. Technology endows contributors with outlets for venting suchlike occasions using artistry is here. Passionate poignant experiences most well written, some not are duly shared to attracted communal eyes. declarations of 'I have cared so much I'm wounded mortally', some bask in lost or unrequited loves last kiss, several employ inner strength 'whatever happened, I don't care, I'm resilient, I survive', shared with poetic pride concise verses rework obvious reminders, may motivate suggestion that opportunity shouldn't be missed. Modest words abundantly profound begin remarks that reassures, with the - I'm here for yous'- symbolic embrace, in support it is written, 'I know what you mean' and from a great distance - empathise, but I have little to say. Health issues aren't fixed by artistic pennings, only face to face professional advice forms the strongest base, Writings from the poetic inner self  may become positive steps, for futures not, staring in depressions face. Much is written with sensitivity oft-times is judged by content, overlooked is why and how it is composed. For instance suicide  educes fear however. dubiety invites, is it fiction or truly despair? Writing as an art observes, describes, creates imagery, of sadness and joy, escapism, fictional or no. Poetic creators who web-wide commune through stories, thoughts, secrets, ideas, dreams, let the poetry be shared . Poetry www    Michael C Crowder 12th  January 2019 @scorsby
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Mar 3, 2019
Mar 3, 2019 at 9:16 AM UTC
Poetry www
Through voracious eyes devotees, peruse writings, clever literature all styled to thoughtful poetic ways eloquently, exposing wounds of body and soul, discovered distrust, anger much regret, sadly even fear, thereto shortcomings in life, of people, their actions, loves and lies promulgated in illuminating phrase. Technology endows contributors with outlets for venting suchlike occasions using artistry is here. Passionate poignant experiences most well written, some not are duly shared to attracted communal eyes. declarations of 'I have cared so much I'm wounded mortally', some bask in lost or unrequited loves last kiss, several employ inner strength 'whatever happened, I don't care, I'm resilient, I survive', shared with poetic pride concise verses rework obvious reminders, may motivate suggestion that opportunity shouldn't be missed. Modest words abundantly profound begin remarks that reassures, with the - I'm here for yous'- symbolic embrace, in support it is written, 'I know what you mean' and from a great distance - empathise, but I have little to say. Health issues aren't fixed by artistic pennings, only face to face professional advice forms the strongest base, Writings from the poetic inner self  may become positive steps, for futures not, staring in depressions face. Much is written with sensitivity oft-times is judged by content, overlooked is why and how it is composed. For instance suicide  educes fear however. dubiety invites, is it fiction or truly despair? Writing as an art observes, describes, creates imagery, of sadness and joy, escapism, fictional or no. Poetic creators who web-wide commune through stories, thoughts, secrets, ideas, dreams, let the poetry be shared . Poetry www    Michael C Crowder 12th  January 2019 @scorsby
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Today my friend looked me in the eyes and told me that If I give any more of myself away, I’m not going to have any parts left for myself But I don’t need any more of me. I have too much of me. I want to give it all away. Even when I know that it’ll end up at the bottom of your backpack or forgotten in a laundry basket or on the ground outside of your favorite coffee shop I want to give and give until you can’t empty out your pockets without finding pieces of me. I want you to go to a baseball game, sing the national anthem, and put your hand over your heart Only to realize that there’s a perfect indention in the shape of my hand in the middle of your chest, pushing Beating for you I want to fill your lungs with my breath Even though I know I’ll never get it back Just so I know every sigh is of me I want to be your oxygen mask To suffocate knowing that you can breathe a little bit easier I’ll give my hands to your ribcage, So maybe I can feel how you hold yourself together. I’ll give my lips to your body Leaving secrets down your neck, and your shoulder blades, your hip bones Stitch together the scars you’ve left open with the most private parts of me Until you can hold another person in your arms without splitting yourself apart I want to give it all away. Until I run out of me to give you, or things to leave behind And once you’ve collected all of me. Every hidden inch of my being When you find me under your fingernails, in the melody of your favorite song Hidden in your bedsheets And all I can do is rework the scraps I have left Into a frame that might resemble a person who remains Unapologetically full I will still wish I could give you more.
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Feb 6, 2015
Feb 6, 2015 at 4:19 PM UTC
For Giving
Today my friend looked me in the eyes and told me that If I give any more of myself away, I’m not going to have any parts left for myself But I don’t need any more of me. I have too much of me. I want to give it all away. Even when I know that it’ll end up at the bottom of your backpack or forgotten in a laundry basket or on the ground outside of your favorite coffee shop I want to give and give until you can’t empty out your pockets without finding pieces of me. I want you to go to a baseball game, sing the national anthem, and put your hand over your heart Only to realize that there’s a perfect indention in the shape of my hand in the middle of your chest, pushing Beating for you I want to fill your lungs with my breath Even though I know I’ll never get it back Just so I know every sigh is of me I want to be your oxygen mask To suffocate knowing that you can breathe a little bit easier I’ll give my hands to your ribcage, So maybe I can feel how you hold yourself together. I’ll give my lips to your body Leaving secrets down your neck, and your shoulder blades, your hip bones Stitch together the scars you’ve left open with the most private parts of me Until you can hold another person in your arms without splitting yourself apart I want to give it all away. Until I run out of me to give you, or things to leave behind And once you’ve collected all of me. Every hidden inch of my being When you find me under your fingernails, in the melody of your favorite song Hidden in your bedsheets And all I can do is rework the scraps I have left Into a frame that might resemble a person who remains Unapologetically full I will still wish I could give you more.
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When I pretend everything is what I want it to be I look exactly like what you always wanted to see When I pretend, I can't forget about the criminal I am Stealing second after second just cause I know I can but I can't pretend this is the way it'll stay I'm just Trying to bend the truth I can't pretend I'm who you want me to be, so I'm Lying my way from If you feelin like a **** ***** go and brush your shoulders off Ladies is pimps too, go and brush your shoulders off ****** is crazy baby, don't forget that boy told you Get, that, dirt off your shoulder I probably owe it to God, props to His Son of course Tryin to hustle some things, that tranquilize a horse Feelin no remorse, feelin like my hand was forced Middle finger to the law, better read up the psalms All the ladies they love me, but the Preachers they screamin All His Body is bouncin they like the way I be Beamin, All the trappers be hatin, off the sack that I'm makin But all the shamans they love it just to see one of us make it Came from the bottom the bottom, to the top with pots Yeshua Son of Man, of His plan I talk Like a running back, get it man, I'm straight off the block I can run it back ***** cause I'm straight with His rock.
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Nov 23, 2015
Nov 23, 2015 at 11:15 AM UTC
Brush Your Shoulders Off (Rework)
If honesty was a skill it'd be something you lack, It's so hard to keep going  as I still look back, Maybe I'm a fool, a fool for unforgiving love... When your heart rips open is that finally enough? Simplicity was all I've seen, Wish you would still hold my hand as I walk along the streets. A bed fit for two but it's only me, Use to lay, use to rest but now i can hardly sleep, As nightmares have come and taken over dreams. If someone told me lonieness is where my life would lead, I would close my eyes, block em out and never hear them speak. Think it's time to rework these mental images, as I press Delete. Passion, where have those lips gone? Why must it take losing love to write the perfect song. Why must it take, losing love...to write the perfect song (guitar playing) uhmmm, she's gone away, Yeah, But I would erase this song just for you to stay. Uhmm But still... Why must it take losing love, to write the perfect song. Uhmm..why'd she go away. (Last guitar strum)
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Aug 25, 2014
Aug 25, 2014 at 11:04 PM UTC
The "Perfect" Song
The algorithm we live in has become the dumb nightmare we’ve been given, a constant flow of concessions, sad contrivances to survive this cog in the machine existence. The fight seems pointless with only minor bouts of resistance. If history teaches us anything it is only labor movements, those unions that win men woman and children any real economic equality. There won’t be any eulogy for this lie we call democracy, while men of prestige and property have been constantly fighting against those who bring the lightning of enlightening insights about this fight. Shrinking borders while expanding profits, supporting fascists regimes, whilst demolishing and reorganizing governments that try socializing their own country’s resources. Our local war mongers want to rehabilitate the image that people hate twist and change the slang, rework and spin everything over and over again as the kings of what is truly Orwellian. They are so close to destroying the environment and every human edifice, every ounce of progress in the name of capitalistic measurements of success.
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Jul 10, 2021
Jul 10, 2021 at 2:00 PM UTC
Untitled 704
“It’s all ******** She mouthed cocking a drunken head and lighting a broken cigarette.                                 up,                           up,   I looked her up,         and down again.       "Between just us us friends it'll be fine just fine in the-" "I know." As she looked away she showed me soft grace a wrinkled nose and tired eyes posture of those patron saints. I poured out two gins taking both she smiled. Both gone She saved not a single, sip. "You're beautiful" I mumbled and she smirked. Made upward movement taking a lucky she brought fire up to the tip. Lips pursed together tongue pushing spit out toward and around the dirt at my fumbling feet. When we were done, the smoke clinging to those auburn curls. She lay back arching. Those fluttered eyes, drove my aching muscles, reaching for her open smile, as, with slippery digits I played our sighs together. Petting heavy heavy as the world sitting on my worried head. Watch it crack under pressure The gory puddle of my expressions in her lap.
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Oct 20, 2013
Oct 20, 2013 at 2:24 PM UTC
******** Rework A.K.A. It Would Make Things Too Complicated
I cannot hate you though only God knows how hard i try It's not our songs that make me cry it was the dance we shared I rework the steps in head trace the thread from end to start yet the filaments fray under touch observation, physics, shift and the memories are never clear the only thing I know is i fell in a trap deceived by my better half my better half no longer whole bitter fermentation of the fruits of love drown again in the bottle of aged oak drink hop and barley they said I was ****** but can't recall yet there's a picture of me unconscious ***** sprayed upon painted brick walls
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Jul 1, 2016
Jul 1, 2016 at 12:26 AM UTC
Hate
Love is both a vice and a curse, A blessing in which you find yourself immersed; A progressive, regressive, digressive pursuit, In which you lose yourself many times in search of a route, To lasting happiness, which still blinks from afar; Like the distant light of a parked car, As if someone forgot to switch off the high beams, Or is there a reason that this pitch blackness now gleams? Love causes you to return broken patterns, In which insecurity orbits like the 62 moons of Saturn. Escape it, escape it! Find solace in pain! Find solace in the left or right side of your brain! Like the frontal assault during Op Barbarossa, You seem to confuse old Taiwan with Formosa. In doubles, you see, when your love stares you down, You want nothing more but to be her great crown, So you let down your walls and pull-back your defenses; Your protective soldiers fall back to the fences. You talk with 'I,' And realize that you're oft wrong, Yet prior to this, you sung yourself an old swan song, To convince yourself that your views were God-given; Despite the true fact that you define Atheism. Prior to this, no one countered your 'great' words; Or, if they did, often you considered them of herds, Which had no capacity to understand life; They would much quicker fall towards the shaft of the knife. You rework the office inside of your head, And forget all the things about love you once said, When ex-girlfriends had dumped you like a sack of potatoes; And would verbally stain you with far-flung tomatoes. Yet tossed in the mix are the words of the stars, Telling you whose compatible, is it Venus or Mars? Forget the external, this love is but yours and but hers. Never let the rest determine, As you're the connoisseur.
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Jan 29, 2011
Jan 29, 2011 at 12:04 PM UTC
Romantic Intelligence, or, the Clouds Around the Sun
Love is both a vice and a curse, A blessing in which you find yourself immersed; A progressive, regressive, digressive pursuit, In which you lose yourself many times in search of a route, To lasting happiness, which still blinks from afar; Like the distant light of a parked car, As if someone forgot to switch off the high beams, Or is there a reason that this pitch blackness now gleams? Love causes you to return broken patterns, In which insecurity orbits like the 62 moons of Saturn. Escape it, escape it! Find solace in pain! Find solace in the left or right side of your brain! Like the frontal assault during Op Barbarossa, You seem to confuse old Taiwan with Formosa. In doubles, you see, when your love stares you down, You want nothing more but to be her great crown, So you let down your walls and pull-back your defenses; Your protective soldiers fall back to the fences. You talk with 'I,' And realize that you're oft wrong, Yet prior to this, you sung yourself an old swan song, To convince yourself that your views were God-given; Despite the true fact that you define Atheism. Prior to this, no one countered your 'great' words; Or, if they did, often you considered them of herds, Which had no capacity to understand life; They would much quicker fall towards the shaft of the knife. You rework the office inside of your head, And forget all the things about love you once said, When ex-girlfriends had dumped you like a sack of potatoes; And would verbally stain you with far-flung tomatoes. Yet tossed in the mix are the words of the stars, Telling you whose compatible, is it Venus or Mars? Forget the external, this love is but yours and but hers. Never let the rest determine, As you're the connoisseur.
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That Soggy Winter Night, when the rain beat heavy on the old wood of the cabin and the air smelled like dust, and candles, and fresh moss, and wilted leaves, and anticipation. It all started with us listening to the rain through an open window. Those hours of morning when the sun still hides, smoking cigarettes , and smoking homegrown, and drinking water , and whiskey, and sharing unmistakable looks, that both of us where too eager and scared to put words to. So we pretended to both be tired. So we could lie down together, and huddle close, and save warmth, like burning coals rapped together in a blanket of ash. This was the hesitant placation of our urges. But it had to be more subtle, more drawn out, than both of us wanted it to be. So I waited until I couldn't stand it anymore reaching out a single hand from the opposite side of the bed to see if it was ok. You grabbed it, and pulled yourself closer, as if you were pulling yourself away from the brink of a deadly mountain’s cliff. We stayed wrapped together all night, the mess of your hair sticking to my face because I stayed wrapped around you. It wasn't until the sun came up that both our heartbeats settled and my muscles and mind relaxed and our breathing slowed and we could slip into a dream with bodies weak from wanting.
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Oct 4, 2013
Oct 4, 2013 at 2:21 AM UTC
That Night (Rework)
This is another set of poems i wrote that I have been trying to turn into a song. It's composed loosely, for that's the way I write - kind of from the center out, and I don't like to rework my words too much because I find that it alters the original intended feeling, so please forgive the grammarical errors and call it creative liscense. I've been a fool, I've been a fool, it's true Now I live without you Without you by my side I can't go on I don't want to go on without you If at night you hear the wind is moaning Your lonely soul is groaning Think back, you'll find I'm on your mind There was a time when you were mine Everytime the phone rings and there's a hang-up on the line If you search for what is lost it's me you'll find At the end of the mystery... Though I'm a poor man, And I'm tired I'll never tire of loving you. If you're alone and you can't stop crying, cry, cry for me, too. I'll weep for you. There was a time when you were mine. Footnote: This was writen about obssession a long time ago, but now I think it's more about the subject just THINKING he was obssessed. And no, it's not about me but, in my writing I have always been able to empathize with various points of view.
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Feb 14, 2016
Feb 14, 2016 at 10:52 PM UTC
A Time When You Were Mine(early 2012 - including original notes))
I don't mean to be an inconvenience but it'd be irrepressible to be alone and, given time to find out my own flaws, I can rework myself, digest myself a bit, and have a better way to present it, even though I know you'll resent it.
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Aug 25, 2014
Aug 25, 2014 at 9:37 PM UTC
portraiture
we sit moon in transition dancing off glassed ripples filled with breath; bread he pulls me to him live in vulnerable nakedness; cherry orchards spraying fire into his sky hold me tight; tighter silence screams.  melodies. unspoken words hang heavy while demons dance within can’t you see i’m looking for you? close; closer the mangos have fallen; (consumed by the spring) to rework our truth we should just sleep together night falls; darker in questions. silence laps an metaphorical shores where together our bodies should lay you should go before it’s too late tears glisten, manifest.  the loss of not knowing your skeletons hanging from my trees and i silently scream wait for me; it is not here that you will find me. but not here i whisper is better than nowhere.
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Aug 7, 2018
Aug 7, 2018 at 12:33 PM UTC
the wait of transition suspended in time (metaphorically speaking of course)
Time, oh time is a silly thing, it proves things right and it proves them wrong. Its’ seemingly long years change you and all that can be touched. Time- this illusion we base our lives around, this illusion we obsess over (don’t deny it, we all do). It confines us to a routine, to a norm. The time spent at desks makes us into zombies. The time spent after chokes us with copious amounts of papers and projects. But occasionally it grants us a wondrous thing called wisdom. It bestows upon us insight and growth. My always shrewd teenage self has grown to believe that time… can go **** itself. I want to fall into a slumber that is a day or two long, catch up on rest and miss the trials of everyday life. Of course, once several days pass or several thousand ticks of a clock, I’ll crave another respite. Life. Life is hard. It’s tiring. And somehow there is never enough time to work, work on the work, rework the work, eat, sleep, take a couple deep breathes to keep from jamming a stapler into any eyeballs, be a healthy person, and do all the things that society tells you to do. Maybe a designated sleep day would be nice. If we only need 8 hours of peaceful slumber for every 16 hours of traumatizing wakefulness, then sleeping for 24 hours would give us 48 hours of working. Right? No. But it’s a proportion, so theoretically it should make sense. Which leads me to conclude that 8 hours is not merely enough time to rest. Unless you’re under the age of 6. Or you’re retired. Or in a coma. Or… But no. No, no, no, no, no. We must keep going. Like good little soldiers on and on for 60 years, 70 years, 80 years? I’m sorry but that just does not appeal to me. Why oh why would I want to work my body to unhealthy levels. Why oh why would I want to exhaust my mind to points of breakdowns nearly every day. It’s silly to want to have enough time to eat healthily. And hit the gym 3 or 4 times a week. And sleep until recharged. Yes that’s preposterous. Ridiculous. Time is an illusion that is ruining lives. If we have an illusion destroying us from the inside out, does that make us crazy?
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Nov 11, 2013
Nov 11, 2013 at 5:58 PM UTC
This Illision
Time, oh time is a silly thing, it proves things right and it proves them wrong. Its’ seemingly long years change you and all that can be touched. Time- this illusion we base our lives around, this illusion we obsess over (don’t deny it, we all do). It confines us to a routine, to a norm. The time spent at desks makes us into zombies. The time spent after chokes us with copious amounts of papers and projects. But occasionally it grants us a wondrous thing called wisdom. It bestows upon us insight and growth. My always shrewd teenage self has grown to believe that time… can go **** itself. I want to fall into a slumber that is a day or two long, catch up on rest and miss the trials of everyday life. Of course, once several days pass or several thousand ticks of a clock, I’ll crave another respite. Life. Life is hard. It’s tiring. And somehow there is never enough time to work, work on the work, rework the work, eat, sleep, take a couple deep breathes to keep from jamming a stapler into any eyeballs, be a healthy person, and do all the things that society tells you to do. Maybe a designated sleep day would be nice. If we only need 8 hours of peaceful slumber for every 16 hours of traumatizing wakefulness, then sleeping for 24 hours would give us 48 hours of working. Right? No. But it’s a proportion, so theoretically it should make sense. Which leads me to conclude that 8 hours is not merely enough time to rest. Unless you’re under the age of 6. Or you’re retired. Or in a coma. Or… But no. No, no, no, no, no. We must keep going. Like good little soldiers on and on for 60 years, 70 years, 80 years? I’m sorry but that just does not appeal to me. Why oh why would I want to work my body to unhealthy levels. Why oh why would I want to exhaust my mind to points of breakdowns nearly every day. It’s silly to want to have enough time to eat healthily. And hit the gym 3 or 4 times a week. And sleep until recharged. Yes that’s preposterous. Ridiculous. Time is an illusion that is ruining lives. If we have an illusion destroying us from the inside out, does that make us crazy?
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Emanation and conceptualisation Imaginations of constellations Can I try to reach the stars? A place within Inside and within reach I can’t suspend a resolution of truth Lay to rest and die alone Inside a hole of my own creation Why must you torment me with your lies? And your life Relent again ~ Reflect upon the self ~ >> Then write <<
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May 19, 2015
May 19, 2015 at 6:13 AM UTC
Rework the work of the workers work
Saw it happen. Witnessed it. Did not experience. Yet, left with a more interesting outlook. An objectivity can rise above. Settle down. Rework, reword, reward, rewarm. WHY DID I SEE THIS. WHY WAS I CHOSEN FOR THIS RESPONSIBILITY. Screaming in the large end of the megaphone. Screaming for the world to let you down. Clutching at the door handle, hoping to emerge into a forest of rifles, a city-hive of pollen pushers, an oasis of blood. Suddenly it makes sense...communication without contact. Words on a page, worms on a plate. Wards an’ a cage, words in a place. This is our medium, through which I can love you, for better or worse, the medium that is. The medium carries a meaning without judgement. The judgement, if and when the word is received, is irrelevant. The last dead deer rises, taking back his rightful place as the last living deer in a dying world. The green world empties its poison, sheds its thorns, ***** out its parasite. The glass is half empty. Now its half full. The glass is empty of meaning. Now its full of **** My skin is raw and bleeding. My love is as real as rifles. They both hurt. In different ways.
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Nov 14, 2014
Nov 14, 2014 at 12:30 AM UTC
Sergio Cyclical
Your heart brings the warmth I seek, Doing the little things that matter to me. You listen so well with your cute little ears, And can hear me when I’m not even near. Your eyes speak of fall’s endless leaves, And leave me with repeating sweet dreams, Where you could be you and I could be me. Still wondering why these dreams aren’t realities. You play my heart like a crimson-stained guitar, Drawing me to you, no matter how far. You know the strings, you know how they work. I’m used to fixing, but with you there’s nothing to rework. Your jeans are the sky’s only limit, I can’t help but staring for endless minutes. Your sweater makes sparks fly with every niche, And I helpless fall for it with every stitch. You are a present just waiting to be opened, You have so much in you yet you don't show it. Love has to be hidden, love has to be found, Now I give in and embrace your every sound.
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Dec 5, 2017
Dec 5, 2017 at 9:43 PM UTC
Qualities
dear home, i’m sorry. for everything. wholeheartedly. i’m sorry for leaving you with empty space i felt uneasy filling. for doubting you were my scripted setting. for losing faith that you could fully foster me. for getting too comfortable, falling victim to fickle feelings. for getting caught in the hypnosis of distance. for taking your endless roads for granted when they cradled me along. i’m sorry i didn’t listen when they said light is crucial to grow. and not the artificial kind i’ve come to know. i don’t love what i left you for like i thought i would. now i’m slowly learning a lesson in choosing rash choices. you don’t know what you have until it’s gone. some cliches are that way for a reason. but best believe i’m drenched in the karma of leaving you in the embers. i’m burning too but in other worse ways. you see, consequence caught up to me. it’s coarsened my skin and forces fake smiles. it lodges pits in my guts and steals lustre from thoughts. i’ve suffered. i deserve it. but make it not for nothing. because i miss your aura. i miss your seas. i miss the way we moved with ease. i don’t know a god, but i pray to the sky, that you haven’t forgotten those paramount nights. where we made memoirs out of nothing more than time. the moments we drank each other in. i soaked in your sun, and you in my skin. dear, dear home, please take me back. if you haven’t filled my space with a more steady heart, we can rework our tempos or just restart. it’s a tough sell, i know, but i’m ready to evolve. be my sunstone. be my backbone. be a part of me in any way. i’ll turn my insides to clay to be what you need. whatever it is just please, please, please. love, a misplaced migrant
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Oct 11, 2019
Oct 11, 2019 at 12:44 AM UTC
dear home
dear home, i’m sorry. for everything. wholeheartedly. i’m sorry for leaving you with empty space i felt uneasy filling. for doubting you were my scripted setting. for losing faith that you could fully foster me. for getting too comfortable, falling victim to fickle feelings. for getting caught in the hypnosis of distance. for taking your endless roads for granted when they cradled me along. i’m sorry i didn’t listen when they said light is crucial to grow. and not the artificial kind i’ve come to know. i don’t love what i left you for like i thought i would. now i’m slowly learning a lesson in choosing rash choices. you don’t know what you have until it’s gone. some cliches are that way for a reason. but best believe i’m drenched in the karma of leaving you in the embers. i’m burning too but in other worse ways. you see, consequence caught up to me. it’s coarsened my skin and forces fake smiles. it lodges pits in my guts and steals lustre from thoughts. i’ve suffered. i deserve it. but make it not for nothing. because i miss your aura. i miss your seas. i miss the way we moved with ease. i don’t know a god, but i pray to the sky, that you haven’t forgotten those paramount nights. where we made memoirs out of nothing more than time. the moments we drank each other in. i soaked in your sun, and you in my skin. dear, dear home, please take me back. if you haven’t filled my space with a more steady heart, we can rework our tempos or just restart. it’s a tough sell, i know, but i’m ready to evolve. be my sunstone. be my backbone. be a part of me in any way. i’ll turn my insides to clay to be what you need. whatever it is just please, please, please. love, a misplaced migrant
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a i like to rework old poems lily (i am lazy..) after all what is reality..? just a load of moments this barbed fence a thorny ball a burning lens a *** note what is it lily needs her morning coffee.. b but work is work and love is indefatigable some seagull dissecting blue skies wild flowers outside my windows all the seasons change change to stay the same summer rain living dying sparrows singing happiness circling..
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Jan 12, 2019
Jan 12, 2019 at 7:45 AM UTC
i like to rework old poems
Some people may say that the future is already written. But I think it might surprise you. You never know the secrets of another’s heart So you can't know the future. Put up a good enough fight And destiny will fall to pieces Line up those pieces In a different way And rework the threads of destiny. Our one destiny can be changed And you never know what could happen
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Feb 20, 2016
Feb 20, 2016 at 12:53 AM UTC
Who's to Say I Can't Change the Future?
Not yet plant or earth but soon. Not yet runes or sin immune In this room, and as my tomb, My voice, only speaks as blooms: Maybe then the creatures and eaters Can make a home out of this unbeliever For maybe I perceived or perhaps I was the deceiver But I hope that in death, I could be their redeemer So when the weavers weave their homes All along my bones, My tryst with the reaper Are where the feasts were.
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Feb 13, 2025
Feb 13, 2025 at 10:04 AM UTC
Mulch (experimental rework)