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Limbs littered the earth, her negligee no longer lay in his soldier’s world; he would do anything to smell her perfume once more. What day was it? Ahhh…Monday, the perfect first date, a moon- lit walk on a beach. He felt like a train about to crash and nobody was dancing. She felt alien alone in their home. Dancing was impossible and she stared at the photo, a soldier’s face, not his own. Limbo was a train journey that never ended. Billboards advertising perfume and the never ending sun, the never ending moon. The name of the days changed but Monday was no different from Tuesday or last Monday. She wondered if disabled people thought dancing ridiculous. He could return disabled…the moon was full tonight, she wondered if he in his soldier’s uniform would be admiring it remembering her perfume and not side stepping dead bodies feeling like a train wreck. How many poor driver’s of trains were haunted by suicides, faces looming out, the Monday blues? And some women will never afford perfume and would never be taken out dancing, it did not console her. She was one of thousands of soldier’s wives all gazing wistfully at the unhelpful moon. She dreams of werewolves howling at the moon, of him passing through a dark forest on a train coming back to her, having thrown his soldier’s gun, stamped in the mud, rejected. But she was the gun, Monday and no letter had come and her nerves were dancing, she knocked over her most expensive bottle of perfume. He was dead, she would never replace the perfume. She would smash bottles sticking her tongue out at the moon throwing herself around in life, dancing like a boat in a storm, occasionally consider suicide by train but she would never do it. Saturday, Sunday, Monday all days trooped past like the heavy march of a soldier. The word soldier stank of cheap perfume and everything was mundane especially the moon. People hurry her by like late trains, only a few whirl past dancing.
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Jun 12, 2010
Jun 12, 2010 at 4:10 PM UTC
Perfume
Limbs littered the earth, her negligee no longer lay in his soldier’s world; he would do anything to smell her perfume once more. What day was it? Ahhh…Monday, the perfect first date, a moon- lit walk on a beach. He felt like a train about to crash and nobody was dancing. She felt alien alone in their home. Dancing was impossible and she stared at the photo, a soldier’s face, not his own. Limbo was a train journey that never ended. Billboards advertising perfume and the never ending sun, the never ending moon. The name of the days changed but Monday was no different from Tuesday or last Monday. She wondered if disabled people thought dancing ridiculous. He could return disabled…the moon was full tonight, she wondered if he in his soldier’s uniform would be admiring it remembering her perfume and not side stepping dead bodies feeling like a train wreck. How many poor driver’s of trains were haunted by suicides, faces looming out, the Monday blues? And some women will never afford perfume and would never be taken out dancing, it did not console her. She was one of thousands of soldier’s wives all gazing wistfully at the unhelpful moon. She dreams of werewolves howling at the moon, of him passing through a dark forest on a train coming back to her, having thrown his soldier’s gun, stamped in the mud, rejected. But she was the gun, Monday and no letter had come and her nerves were dancing, she knocked over her most expensive bottle of perfume. He was dead, she would never replace the perfume. She would smash bottles sticking her tongue out at the moon throwing herself around in life, dancing like a boat in a storm, occasionally consider suicide by train but she would never do it. Saturday, Sunday, Monday all days trooped past like the heavy march of a soldier. The word soldier stank of cheap perfume and everything was mundane especially the moon. People hurry her by like late trains, only a few whirl past dancing.
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As I flit from A to B - Candleford to Larkrise Laurieston to Gatehouse of Fleet I flit, spit from A to B Calling all Bluebells assist me in my move -11th May, '11 Let Fairy Fawn be fair and true and pure with humility For his Fairy Lu - La Fee Lu could get so blue if he is not on time All praises Bluebells He is here T'was but a year since I'd wished upon a Castramond Bluebell in April 2010 And now we sit in utter Bliss Ensonced in historical Dunblane Fairy Fawn paints on and on And I just sit, dismiss All negativity, anything dark I know that light will disperse the unhelpful hearse darkness, death and dour ways Disolve in the sun this late spring morn Let Bees Browse among the Heather Blooms Like love now maturing from twenty-eight days to a year and day 4th of the 4th 2012
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May 5, 2012
May 5, 2012 at 6:17 AM UTC
Castramond Bluebells Calling
It's a shame how you must have aspired me to become the child you always wanted in the months and days before  I was born, before reality had its chance to construct the person I would become. when the happy news was first heard of a new child in a new world, who would be brave and cheerful and kind and above all sporty, the kind that would make an impression,a born leader and dutiful follower a proud patron of the family name. We would have much in common and I would remind you of yourselves at such an impressionable age and I would achieve all you had hoped for. But perhaps this is the great tragedy that parents stumble upon in this constant letdown of a life. You were lucky that I was an easy child,never keeping you up at night and never causing trouble, but the fact that I was lazy,introspective,morbid, cowardly,unat­tentive,unhelpful,bookish,obsessive, uni­nvolving and unsatisfied made me realise how much I must have let you down. I sigh too much,I read too much,I'm so full full of sarcasm that I cannot take anything seriously, I never want to be the focus of attention,I never eat enough,I dont care about trends, I dont care if people comprehend me. I must be impossible to love. Thats why I have decided to never have children. They could never be what I would expect of them. I could never love someone who I was ultimately responsible for, someone who I could indoctrinate into my own idea of happiness.
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Jun 28, 2012
Jun 28, 2012 at 2:53 PM UTC
Aspirations
In a long happy marriage Sometimes bedtime grows stale Once toe curling *** fades As libidos doth fail. We both have tough jobs And two kids of our own. Sad, we both want to sleep When we’re finally alone The man at the store Said “I have just the thing. You really should try it- makes your *** life take wing!” It wasn’t a **** flick Or a blue pill to swallow, Just a tiny transmitter to hide in her pillow. At night, as she slept, The salesman explained My subliminal message would be fed to her brain. With her passions inflamed She would turn to her mate Like the once nubile bride- Leave the rest up to fate. So I made a recording With a saucy suggestion Then looked forward to bedtime hoping for the res-errection. My bride’s a deep sleeper, (A good thing since I snore) The tape’s played two weeks now And I still haven’t scored. I completely was baffled That salesman assured That no “wood” would go wasted No ***** ignored. Instead every night About two thirty nine I’d slip off to the bath Where the “beat” would go on I resolved to return The unhelpful device Before the guarantee ended And I’d be out the price Imagine my shock, imagine my dread When I found the transmitter in my pillow instead! Seems my wife had decided To play with my head: “Honey, go f8ck yourself, If you wake me, you’re dead.”
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Sep 7, 2013
Sep 7, 2013 at 10:05 AM UTC
Subliminal
Today is one of those days My mind has sooooo much clutter I don't know where to even begin My table I sit, staring blankly at my notebook Waiting for some sort of words to come out But blank the paper still stays Sloppy words, quite unhelpful, I mutter It's so loud in my head, I wish you could listen My eyes glaze over when into the clouds I look Thoughts going floating all about & truly I reassured you that my words are quite real & tell you how high my anxiety level rose My attention spans is worse than a hyper active, strung out crack addict Who is in Walmart's clearance section Up & down up & down sliding clothes back & forth over five times Sometimes things feel so surreal Almost like a mirage I suppose **** every two minutes there I wander off distracted If it doesn't catch my interest quick, then it's see ya later attention .....ooooh glitter, shiny sparkles oh so pretty wind chimes Well that helped unblock my daze My mind just needed to choose where to start It was something in the clouds that ignited a brain spark & all of sudden my mind was like "where are my pens?" No more distant stares, sitting in front of blank paper .....ooooooweeeee.... Goodness I really gotta remember to blink during my gaze Yes, that would've been smart Then maybe every blink wouldn't open up so heavily dark & I could clearly walk without blindly step by step suspense I am just a day dreamer kinda creator
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Jul 6, 2014
Jul 6, 2014 at 8:26 AM UTC
Stuck In A Vacant Stare....
Come Glastonbury, demand your suitors Eliminate the negatives of their days Show the signs of cheer and promise Crystal clear and sun bright The walkways between the tiny shops Where escaping through to back doors and out Inside spirits claim your soul Wrestle your pathetic reliance on consumerism Your slavish concern for fashion And your unhelpful TV dinners There in Glastonbury only truth is spoken Revealing the weaknesses of our human frame Our minds that suffer from prejudices and bigotry Cleanse your soul, become yourself Give up the senseless living that has dominated And driven our daily chores and lifestyle Discard them all and believe that man Is just a tiny part of this cosmos A spirit and energy of the completeness Not the embodiment Not the utmost but a small part Perhaps a much lesser being than any other... Despite everything we are special You are special in your individual capabilities Each soul a grain of stardust Waiting to be reunited in the cosmos With the rest of the wonderful plethora Be calm in the knowledge that you Your heart and soul Are one and only Unique Even today in Glastonbury
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Apr 23, 2012
Apr 23, 2012 at 8:48 AM UTC
Come Glastonbury
The parrot has 3 billion neurons in its brain We have 86 billion And most of mine are busy forming unhelpful pathways Misleading my good intentions. Still, 3 billion neurons seems like enough room for a few unruly pathways The parrot can repeat phrases Which we thought to be pretty cool So we trapped him and put him in a cage And in our living rooms Alone The parrot knows how to survive happily Within his world Within his world, with 30 others of his kind And a partner for life. In his world he would fly with his flock To trees to pick fresh fruit Now he perches on his own And picks dry fruit out of a bowl. In his world he would prune his partners feathers He would look after her And she him Now he perches on his own And prunes his feathers until there are none left. Its an unhelpful neuro pathway, you see? Some form of OCD? Maybe its a way to cope? Maybe its the brain spiralling Trying to figure out what to do Because it can't be a parrot anymore It has to learn to be a toy A talking point And the parrot doesn't know how to be that He only knows how to be a parrot
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Nov 5, 2020
Nov 5, 2020 at 12:42 PM UTC
The Parrot
Panic, panic, panic, An ecstasy of fear- What’s wrong with you, don’t you realise your family are near? My mind is manic- And all you can say is oh dear? Can u ever just be here? Help me with this fear? Help, that’s all I need to end this paralysing fear, Not your unhelpful, fault-finding sneer.
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Oct 2, 2020
Oct 2, 2020 at 12:20 PM UTC
Panic
if you are missing him, remember this. remember how cruel he was to you, how every time he drove away the moonlight made your skin look bruised, it made you feel soft. remember that you are not. you might break but you will always heal. think of the nights where he turned away and refused to let you touch him, nights where he moaned your best friends' names into your mouth while you tried to prove how much you loved him, nights where he'd refuse to stop yelling until you put your hands on him. do not think of his hands, or his mouth, or any of the bones in his body. they're not for you. they're not for anybody but himself and you should pity the fact he doesn't know how to love them. you gave your best to him and he crumpled it up until it looked like your worst. don't feel sorry for being emotional, he was a gaping wound in your chest and things like that deserve a good cry. if you're missing him, remember how distant he was, how when you'd sink down on him he wouldn't be looking at your face. how his shoes were always graffitied with the numbers of other girls. how in the middle of a date he asked another girl her name. I know it hurts, it's going to be okay, I promise. remember how unhelpful he was? how little he cared, moving so fast he could never type the 'I?' he blamed you for loving him too much, for being too sad: both things were his fault. I know it doesn't seem like it but I promise there is somebody much, much more lovely, somebody who will treat you like a cloud, and won't throw a fit when you start to rain. you just have to wait.
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Jun 24, 2015
Jun 24, 2015 at 4:23 PM UTC
(for when things get bad again)
if you are missing him, remember this. remember how cruel he was to you, how every time he drove away the moonlight made your skin look bruised, it made you feel soft. remember that you are not. you might break but you will always heal. think of the nights where he turned away and refused to let you touch him, nights where he moaned your best friends' names into your mouth while you tried to prove how much you loved him, nights where he'd refuse to stop yelling until you put your hands on him. do not think of his hands, or his mouth, or any of the bones in his body. they're not for you. they're not for anybody but himself and you should pity the fact he doesn't know how to love them. you gave your best to him and he crumpled it up until it looked like your worst. don't feel sorry for being emotional, he was a gaping wound in your chest and things like that deserve a good cry. if you're missing him, remember how distant he was, how when you'd sink down on him he wouldn't be looking at your face. how his shoes were always graffitied with the numbers of other girls. how in the middle of a date he asked another girl her name. I know it hurts, it's going to be okay, I promise. remember how unhelpful he was? how little he cared, moving so fast he could never type the 'I?' he blamed you for loving him too much, for being too sad: both things were his fault. I know it doesn't seem like it but I promise there is somebody much, much more lovely, somebody who will treat you like a cloud, and won't throw a fit when you start to rain. you just have to wait.
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Offence has no real validity, Yet it is used to justify the taking of lives Is there one, that the world does not offend If so that person has not lived or felt, Warlords, rapists, racists, murderers and those who are cancers on society walk among us daily Those who profess to know the will of god and act on his behalf, Perceiving  and executing unhelpful dogma that infects our reality   The words respect and correctness have become harbingers for cowards, As our muteness silently strips us of our freedom, Apologies are offered gift wrapped in fear Sticks and stones still break our bones but pictures and words now **** us**
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Jan 7, 2015
Jan 7, 2015 at 8:26 PM UTC
Off the fence
You can really hurt yourself If you hold your breath too long, Headaches and dulled vision, Part way to passing out with enough Determination, Add water and depth and a swift rise, The bends as bubbles of gas Form in unhelpful places, Or swam too deep too far And barely making the surface That suddenly seems so far From my feebly flapping limbs, I guess we have all held Our breath across the years, Waiting on some thing or someone To finally come good, Or arrive or even just to be, Somehow or somewhere or somewhen, Breath suspended, Life on hold just waiting with Inextinguishable hope Of something good, And precious, Worth waiting for, Well I know I have, And I know I have been the one, The thing and or the circumstance That has caused breath to be held, And to my shame not always Was I worth it, But now - actually it is me with bursting lungs, And the pain is near unbearable, Perhaps time to let out that air with A loud and pain filled gush, To turn and start the swim To shore Some dreams are never meant To be
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Jan 25, 2024
Jan 25, 2024 at 6:08 PM UTC
Breath
Let me write a sad limerick Pouring out emotions from a skin so thick Inking the pale page of no memories Let me blow on it some gusty breeze Let me write a sad limerick. Let me write a sad limerick Of my well being which sounds so sick Hours of speculation make me famished But I can't eat, my hunger has vanished Let me write a sad limerick. Let me write a sad limerick I have a wall around built from dark brick The trapped painful lonesome feelings Tear me more, less healing Let me write a sad limerick. Let me write a sad limerick You make me sadder you unhelpful ***** Leave my life, don't you see There is no one that you can change me? Let me write a sad limerick. Let me write a sad limerick Sick and tired of my mind's tricks I want revenge then I'll be free If I make him bleed I won't disagree Let me now stop this limerick.
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Apr 30, 2015
Apr 30, 2015 at 1:27 PM UTC
My Sad Limerick
The sun is down It's been down for a while and while she hasn't said outright, we think it might be a power play for a perceived lack of praise The sun is down We have been discussing ways to raise her spirits without out and out worship (which would set an unhelpful precedent) And so we start with a song A homage, thanking her A call, asking her to rise and smile And it only takes a child sacrifice once, twice and thrice to coax her back - a small price, and before long she's her old delight and we tell ourselves it's not worship it's just the just payment due based on the new tarrifs for light and heat and the cost of living in this solar energy over dependancy greener economy
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May 15, 2022
May 15, 2022 at 2:53 PM UTC
Solar
And Just Me. No clichés… No humor… No pretending… Just Nita without the famous mask talking to you And you know who you are, if you’re still here, and if you read this (however, if you read this and you even think it’s you, but it isn’t then it probably applies to you – so yeah, then I’m talking to you too) Last night I cried for you… I cried for you and I cried for me… I cried for all of us. I cried for all of the hardship & pain you have had to endure in this life, I cried at the unfairness of it all. I cried for all the kids and adults who were damaged beyond repair By the people who were supposed to love them the most. I cried because you trusted me enough to reach out to me I cried because I wasn’t sure what to do to help. It broke my heart to hear you say that no one loves you And to know that you really believe you are bad and unlovable. I know you’re scared I know you hurt I know that you think there is only one way out of the all-consuming pain. I believe you when you say you can’t do it anymore. I know you feel that way. I know because I feel that way too. I know about all of those things. What I don’t know is how to help you get through it. How to make it okay for you. For any of us. I care about you. I love you. But I know that my voice is not nearly as loud as the critic inside of you. The one who has convinced you that you don’t matter That you are bad and unlovable the world would be better off without you. I don’t know how to fight that voice either. If I were with you right now I would sit with you I would bandage your cuts for you. I would tell you in person that I care. I think of you I cry for you I wonder how you are doing. In fact, I’m wondering how you are doing right now. I don’t know if you are dead or alive. I don’t know if you made it through the night. I hope you did but I don’t know. That’s selfish of me to say – because I understand not wanting to, And the mere pain of actually “waking up” day after day. I’m sorry if my suggestions last night seemed to you like putting a Barbie band-aid on a point blank shotgun wound to the chest. I’m sure it must have felt like that. Sometimes I wish I had a tourniquet instead. But I don’t. But at least I didn’t offer you any kool-aid, or tell you to hold an ice cube, or peel an orange , right? (cuz we know that **** don’t work for sure!) I don’t know the way out of this, my friend. If I did, I would scream it from the rooftops. But I hope you know that even though I am absolutely 200% insane & totally unhelpful, I do care about you. And I thank you for inviting me into your life…and for leaving your footprint on mine.
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Jul 21, 2013
Jul 21, 2013 at 10:16 AM UTC
Hi, it's me, Nita
And Just Me. No clichés… No humor… No pretending… Just Nita without the famous mask talking to you And you know who you are, if you’re still here, and if you read this (however, if you read this and you even think it’s you, but it isn’t then it probably applies to you – so yeah, then I’m talking to you too) Last night I cried for you… I cried for you and I cried for me… I cried for all of us. I cried for all of the hardship & pain you have had to endure in this life, I cried at the unfairness of it all. I cried for all the kids and adults who were damaged beyond repair By the people who were supposed to love them the most. I cried because you trusted me enough to reach out to me I cried because I wasn’t sure what to do to help. It broke my heart to hear you say that no one loves you And to know that you really believe you are bad and unlovable. I know you’re scared I know you hurt I know that you think there is only one way out of the all-consuming pain. I believe you when you say you can’t do it anymore. I know you feel that way. I know because I feel that way too. I know about all of those things. What I don’t know is how to help you get through it. How to make it okay for you. For any of us. I care about you. I love you. But I know that my voice is not nearly as loud as the critic inside of you. The one who has convinced you that you don’t matter That you are bad and unlovable the world would be better off without you. I don’t know how to fight that voice either. If I were with you right now I would sit with you I would bandage your cuts for you. I would tell you in person that I care. I think of you I cry for you I wonder how you are doing. In fact, I’m wondering how you are doing right now. I don’t know if you are dead or alive. I don’t know if you made it through the night. I hope you did but I don’t know. That’s selfish of me to say – because I understand not wanting to, And the mere pain of actually “waking up” day after day. I’m sorry if my suggestions last night seemed to you like putting a Barbie band-aid on a point blank shotgun wound to the chest. I’m sure it must have felt like that. Sometimes I wish I had a tourniquet instead. But I don’t. But at least I didn’t offer you any kool-aid, or tell you to hold an ice cube, or peel an orange , right? (cuz we know that **** don’t work for sure!) I don’t know the way out of this, my friend. If I did, I would scream it from the rooftops. But I hope you know that even though I am absolutely 200% insane & totally unhelpful, I do care about you. And I thank you for inviting me into your life…and for leaving your footprint on mine.
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My film class, Is my favorite class and the class I hate the most, I love film, I have a passion for this art, this medium, this class is my soul and bodies passion, and like a job, like my job, it fits me, but like all jobs, there's things that just ******* **** and it's not over the normal things, like time and money, its the people you work with, or in my case, my class, and they are all ***** when someone makes it their point, to upset you and hurt you everyday, because finally you are good at something, when you **** at science, and allowed your math skills to fall behind, your life is filled with lies and you find, a reason to live, worth all your effort and time but the same people calling you stupid and dumb and a **** up, in math and science, are in this film class, forced to take a smile, and sarcastically say, "good job," when your film gets played in class, and even when you ask, no one give you advice like you give when asked, and every frame seen on the projected screen, gives me anxiety, and the rude, unhelpful reminders from my bullies, don't ******* help me, when I want to run out of my favorite class daily, and scream in all their faces, **** OFF" "for once..." but I don't I sit, I bit skin off skinless lips, hold back tears, the urge to leave, take all my insults that are directed at me, with a head tilted down fake half smile, when they should be directed to my film, but everyday, I do get to say; **** you, because this year, I make it to all my classes, even the next one, history. period 11/12 with my dignity
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May 14, 2015
May 14, 2015 at 3:48 PM UTC
Glimpse into the real world
My film class, Is my favorite class and the class I hate the most, I love film, I have a passion for this art, this medium, this class is my soul and bodies passion, and like a job, like my job, it fits me, but like all jobs, there's things that just ******* **** and it's not over the normal things, like time and money, its the people you work with, or in my case, my class, and they are all ***** when someone makes it their point, to upset you and hurt you everyday, because finally you are good at something, when you **** at science, and allowed your math skills to fall behind, your life is filled with lies and you find, a reason to live, worth all your effort and time but the same people calling you stupid and dumb and a **** up, in math and science, are in this film class, forced to take a smile, and sarcastically say, "good job," when your film gets played in class, and even when you ask, no one give you advice like you give when asked, and every frame seen on the projected screen, gives me anxiety, and the rude, unhelpful reminders from my bullies, don't ******* help me, when I want to run out of my favorite class daily, and scream in all their faces, **** OFF" "for once..." but I don't I sit, I bit skin off skinless lips, hold back tears, the urge to leave, take all my insults that are directed at me, with a head tilted down fake half smile, when they should be directed to my film, but everyday, I do get to say; **** you, because this year, I make it to all my classes, even the next one, history. period 11/12 with my dignity
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We're all doomed and theirs nothing to do says the cynical sloth all is gloom and doom so you may as well hop in a hammock and sip drinks from coconuts This is wrong or so they claim because letting things rot since nothing is perfect is incredibly unhelpful also nothing ventured means nothing gained but doesn't mean nothing lost.
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Sep 5, 2015
Sep 5, 2015 at 1:33 AM UTC
Cynical sloth
(more lyrics than poetry, but whatever) It scares me so much, the words that she writes, The pills that she takes, to go to sleep every night, The things that she says, how she argues and fights, I just want everything to end up alright, I’m not gonna say I can’t deal, I try and I will, I’d fight and i’d **** and if the beans are being spilled, I love her so much, and my love’s the brashest, the boldest, I hope how much I care is never going unnoticed, Let it be noted, my feelings are the truest I could ever express, And I’m thankful everyday she choose me over the rest, But I just feel useless, unhelpful and stupid, I know how her pain feels, I swear i’ve been through it, If I could erase it, I promise I’d do it, If I could take it, I’d move it, i’d break it, So next time she smiles, she wont have to fake it
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Nov 25, 2012
Nov 25, 2012 at 7:56 PM UTC
Untitled #1
lately i've been scared worried the darkness will last but i hope i'm wrong i feel powerless so backed into a corner but i hope i'm wrong i feel judging eyes like i'm not just projecting but i hope i'm wrong i think i see it they wince when my mouth opens but i hope i'm wrong i feel unwanted it's unlucky to know me but i hope i'm wrong unhelpful and shamed no one is glad i'm here, right? i just hope i'm wrong only by working— my body, my only strength my hands hold children but my mind is too broken prove to me i'm wrong Inefficient love Subpar communication Almost good enough Almost worth listening to If you say nothing You confirm it with silence But if you argue Please bring some more evidence I'm trying to hope That this self-talk's distorted I'm sorry my pain Is underreported If nobody cared Then surely I'd be alone And not surrounded By those who want to love me— But I don't know how To feel the love that they show. I shrink back, I hide, Because it hurts me sometimes. These are all my thoughts They feel so true in my mind. But I really hope I'm wrong.
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Jul 14, 2024
Jul 14, 2024 at 5:49 PM UTC
I Hope I'm Wrong
What are you thinking? She said. Have you ever tried standing outside Late at night and have everything Sound so silent that you can Hear your ears ringing? No. She said. What are you thinking? Nothing. She said. And then you realise, Staring into wide effervescent eyes, That your intense willingness to be Open and honest with this Daisy-chain enwreathed Creature of sensation, Does not compliment Her nervous wish to maintain an extraordinarily exquisite air of mystery. A mystery in itself, no less... ...and rather unhelpful, if you ask me.
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Mar 5, 2013
Mar 5, 2013 at 2:25 PM UTC
What Are You Thinking?
A site I used to post to had a somewhat unhelpful, not to say discouraging,  line when you had posted a poem and nobody had commented it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “There is no comment submitted by members.” Nobody bothers; nobody cares; nobody gives a hoot how my work fares – or they mean to say something, but no-one remembers. The fire of my passion is reduced to grey embers; the most piercing of glances just meet with dull stares. There is no comment submitted by members. Nobody bothers; nobody cares. Like summers of hope fading into Septembers, or flowers I’ve grown being smothered with tares, I search and I search but, despite all my prayers, I read once again, with a chill like December’s, “There is no comment submitted by members.”
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May 9, 2016
May 9, 2016 at 10:33 AM UTC
No comment
" The world does not need any more white saviours. As I've said before, this just perpetuates tired and unhelpful stereotypes. Let's instead promote voices from across the continent of Africa and have serious debate. " Ah David, oh David my son don't you know by now that white supremacy is the old black they don't want  the educated black like you they don't harbour the progressive talented intellectual black only place acceptable is the sports field, the drug den and their beds but please remember....... your only worth to them is your enormous member and passion your hot chilli drive, your fabled great stamina and that shiny gleaming mahogany hue, the stuff of dreams, no brains required NOW YOU BETTER KNOW....... if you dare turn down a bed invite in East London by cockney wenches on heat Say good-bye to any life you had and welcome hell's miseries How dare you, who the hell do you think you are You think you're better than us, you think you're superior We will take you down a ****** strip, we will make sure you'll never have another woman in your life We rule the world, you better know it, you black ******* How dare you We will wipe you out, erase you, swat you dead like a fly We will make you wish you were never born Bro, you're not supposed to talk back Know your place even though you're an MP You are still a TOKEN, still a minority, still a ****** blackman Just thank your lucky stars and shut up! WE are the Supreme beings and we rule your ***
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Feb 28, 2019
Feb 28, 2019 at 3:49 PM UTC
Oh David....David.David...David.....
I see the pain Has marked my face I am nothing If not a disgrace The lines that I Have long drawn Make me tired And so I yawn I look at all this mess There is no outcome And so I guess This is just how it is Nothing else to this But I hate that thought That these relationships Are simply for nought I don't want to believe That this is true But that's how it seems Judging by the view But maybe the view is wrong Maybe I need to look For a little bit longer And maybe the outlook will change I long to be close To a human soul And have each other Truly know The inner workings And the outer show But instead in my heart The distance will grow I am unsure If its worth the risk I am not pure Perhaps that is why Everyone will fly Away from me When they see Who I really am And my life is a sham I am not me Or who I want to be But i long to grow And to show The world all my work To let them all look What the demon took And see how I went on And continued living But yet no one know And so I am alone.
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Aug 16, 2017
Aug 16, 2017 at 10:29 AM UTC
A maddening of the unhelpful thoughts
Faded Magnificence. Faded brush strokes and overgrown pots, Hint to magnificence lost to yesteryear. Garments preened and tailored to perfection, fashioned upon the season to which they adhere. Scruffy untamed edges gone awry, A once was glory now hidden beneath the brambles, scruffy untamed edges gone awry. Suffocating elegance under weeds and ivy, despair now heavy on the eye. The sunny yet sharp disposition of the dandelion, entangled yet proudly rearing its spiky crown. Assuming nobility amongst the weeds, refusing to have its regalia pulled down. The cobbled path barely visible from the weathered door, A secret path known only to the past. The dainty old lady aged and weathered herself, has given up the ghost, to the weeds which grow too fast. Her hands tremble as in vain, she tries to snip and trim. Desperate measures to regain the beauty from her mind, with unhelpful uncoordinated limbs. Each day committed she treads the garden path, into the gardens midst. Wrinkled eyes adoring the last upstanding rose, who continues to persist. A full can sprinkled each day by trembled wrist, intent on feeding it with love. Scarlet periapt resplendence, which once the garden in its entirety was reminiscent of. Brambles snag her petticoat, Tugging at her frail frame in a tug of war. Yet refusing a helping hand she proudly remembers, how beautiful her garden sang and the melody of both their core. The old lady existing for these moments, to which they are juxtapose. Existing upon each others love, the old lady and the garden rose. ©Helen Mackenzie
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Mar 1, 2014
Mar 1, 2014 at 7:44 AM UTC
Faded Magnificence.
Faded Magnificence. Faded brush strokes and overgrown pots, Hint to magnificence lost to yesteryear. Garments preened and tailored to perfection, fashioned upon the season to which they adhere. Scruffy untamed edges gone awry, A once was glory now hidden beneath the brambles, scruffy untamed edges gone awry. Suffocating elegance under weeds and ivy, despair now heavy on the eye. The sunny yet sharp disposition of the dandelion, entangled yet proudly rearing its spiky crown. Assuming nobility amongst the weeds, refusing to have its regalia pulled down. The cobbled path barely visible from the weathered door, A secret path known only to the past. The dainty old lady aged and weathered herself, has given up the ghost, to the weeds which grow too fast. Her hands tremble as in vain, she tries to snip and trim. Desperate measures to regain the beauty from her mind, with unhelpful uncoordinated limbs. Each day committed she treads the garden path, into the gardens midst. Wrinkled eyes adoring the last upstanding rose, who continues to persist. A full can sprinkled each day by trembled wrist, intent on feeding it with love. Scarlet periapt resplendence, which once the garden in its entirety was reminiscent of. Brambles snag her petticoat, Tugging at her frail frame in a tug of war. Yet refusing a helping hand she proudly remembers, how beautiful her garden sang and the melody of both their core. The old lady existing for these moments, to which they are juxtapose. Existing upon each others love, the old lady and the garden rose. ©Helen Mackenzie
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I'm so sorry for it One thing after another Piled like our Italian dinner plates Him, it, her, everything And you deserve none of it. You're one of the closest to perfect beings I've ever had the pleasure of meeting I wish I could be there for you But I just end up being annoying and unhelpful, And, I might also mention, Nervous around beautiful people.
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Apr 1, 2014
Apr 1, 2014 at 4:53 PM UTC
It's Too Unfair