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~a question of a thousand dreams~^ “Where are you going now my love? Where will you be tomorrow? Will you bring me happiness?  Will you bring me sorrow? All the questions of a thousand dreams, what you do and what you see” this one composes itself for all dreams go unremembered the first, the thousandth, the  every in between, erased by the push button of opening eyes but dreams come, marching in, saints mining the raw materiel the quartermaster has stored, awaiting requisition by an unarmed unnamed corp, witnessed but never seen these dreams wisped soft willow budded, tempting taunting, leaving nothing but unanswered questions that colored come in black and white elementary clues, a pillow indentation, single hair that stretches across the sea between two pillows that is blonde or red   but certainly unmine,   dregs of soured sentiment linger like the aftertaste of too many coffees and stainless steel beers heated summers breezes give no succor or relief, and the rain following gives no pleasure, for now you are hot and soaked, but somewhere in there a dream is part replayed, and eyes widening in major league surprise, the question acknowledged, the dreams quest hinted   she has gone, neither happiness or sorrow will she provide on the morrow, no toweling of your wet hair fair, and you awake sweat besotted, it is not rain, just pain, and it is only one dream a thousand times repeated and what you do and what you see is the abraded night ahead, and you bitter laugh, for there is no more other than to think, the question answered, and you beg relief by uttering “perchance to dream” 3:49 pm see the notes!! someone accuses me of Plagiarism because  I did not acknowledge that the quote in marks and Italics was from a famous song written 39 years ago so here is my response to “just saying” congratulations on ******* me off and yes I agree, you do not know the rules “#1: Quotation Marks Are for Quoting People—Verbatim Perhaps it should go without saying, but quotation marks are for quoting people. Quoting doesn’t mean summarizing or paraphrasing; it means repeating exactly what someone said. If you put double quotes around a phrase, your reader will often assume  that someone, somewhere, said that exact phrase or sentence.“ http://thevisualcommunicationguy.com/2013/09/11/10-things-you-really-need-to-know-about-quotation-marks/
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Aug 3, 2018
Aug 3, 2018 at 3:59 PM UTC
a question of a thousand dreams
~a question of a thousand dreams~^ “Where are you going now my love? Where will you be tomorrow? Will you bring me happiness?  Will you bring me sorrow? All the questions of a thousand dreams, what you do and what you see” this one composes itself for all dreams go unremembered the first, the thousandth, the  every in between, erased by the push button of opening eyes but dreams come, marching in, saints mining the raw materiel the quartermaster has stored, awaiting requisition by an unarmed unnamed corp, witnessed but never seen these dreams wisped soft willow budded, tempting taunting, leaving nothing but unanswered questions that colored come in black and white elementary clues, a pillow indentation, single hair that stretches across the sea between two pillows that is blonde or red   but certainly unmine,   dregs of soured sentiment linger like the aftertaste of too many coffees and stainless steel beers heated summers breezes give no succor or relief, and the rain following gives no pleasure, for now you are hot and soaked, but somewhere in there a dream is part replayed, and eyes widening in major league surprise, the question acknowledged, the dreams quest hinted   she has gone, neither happiness or sorrow will she provide on the morrow, no toweling of your wet hair fair, and you awake sweat besotted, it is not rain, just pain, and it is only one dream a thousand times repeated and what you do and what you see is the abraded night ahead, and you bitter laugh, for there is no more other than to think, the question answered, and you beg relief by uttering “perchance to dream” 3:49 pm see the notes!! someone accuses me of Plagiarism because  I did not acknowledge that the quote in marks and Italics was from a famous song written 39 years ago so here is my response to “just saying” congratulations on ******* me off and yes I agree, you do not know the rules “#1: Quotation Marks Are for Quoting People—Verbatim Perhaps it should go without saying, but quotation marks are for quoting people. Quoting doesn’t mean summarizing or paraphrasing; it means repeating exactly what someone said. If you put double quotes around a phrase, your reader will often assume  that someone, somewhere, said that exact phrase or sentence.“ http://thevisualcommunicationguy.com/2013/09/11/10-things-you-really-need-to-know-about-quotation-marks/
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"Poetry is confession, obsession, reflection. Empathic minds, valentines, hope divined. It's a kiss, whispered sweetly" (2) who needs challenges, commissions. kicks~in~le butte~ when heaven heaves rains, one downs tall orders in short shot glass verses, which glossed over at its first communion(cation, come back months later to subtract - another poem from where it lay dormant on the doormat of my sub~sub~terranes of my diluted subconscious au natured dry & rugged terrain a favored poet, a secretive admirer, whoa~whose~her truthful name, I've yet to uncover, but whose one true soul inspires me repeatedly, ana~lyrically licks me into dredging from me un begrudgingly and yet, another love poem, she herself wrote when elixiring (commentating (3)) 'pon one of mine, a long long time ago Alas!  Alack! unnaturally immodest, one concedes, when obviously a Super~Woman!-cedes, seeds in three verses, what I  could never unknot nor uncover so I requite & requote with unlabored pleasure miz patty m's primary terse verse, neither secondary & never tertiary, her absolut perfect mixed drink defining, summarizing, the essences of love *"(Love) Poetry is confession, obsession, reflection. Empathic minds, valentines, hope divined. It's a kiss, whispered sweetly"* I concede, in deed, and in writing, I know nothing, of writing of only love poetry and all the great predecessors, elsewhere lyricized, named and tabulated, by yet another women, (1) I will take my weary words elsewhere, and if perhaps, disguised as a woman, (Natalie, Natasha, Natali see note below) perhaps my verbal herbal insides, my turgid insights, will be shorter, sweeter, but never more completer than those of, who can syncopate it in rhyme and the naming of my predilection, by mid~initial, will give a measuring of solace, and a kiss and hug from my mirrored selfie, having been unsuccessful at my one chosen endeavor, only love poetry, adieu, I, due, utter Nevermore                     M>
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Sep 2, 2025
Sep 2, 2025 at 3:38 PM UTC
"A love poem is a kiss, whispered sweetly"
"Poetry is confession, obsession, reflection. Empathic minds, valentines, hope divined. It's a kiss, whispered sweetly" (2) who needs challenges, commissions. kicks~in~le butte~ when heaven heaves rains, one downs tall orders in short shot glass verses, which glossed over at its first communion(cation, come back months later to subtract - another poem from where it lay dormant on the doormat of my sub~sub~terranes of my diluted subconscious au natured dry & rugged terrain a favored poet, a secretive admirer, whoa~whose~her truthful name, I've yet to uncover, but whose one true soul inspires me repeatedly, ana~lyrically licks me into dredging from me un begrudgingly and yet, another love poem, she herself wrote when elixiring (commentating (3)) 'pon one of mine, a long long time ago Alas!  Alack! unnaturally immodest, one concedes, when obviously a Super~Woman!-cedes, seeds in three verses, what I  could never unknot nor uncover so I requite & requote with unlabored pleasure miz patty m's primary terse verse, neither secondary & never tertiary, her absolut perfect mixed drink defining, summarizing, the essences of love *"(Love) Poetry is confession, obsession, reflection. Empathic minds, valentines, hope divined. It's a kiss, whispered sweetly"* I concede, in deed, and in writing, I know nothing, of writing of only love poetry and all the great predecessors, elsewhere lyricized, named and tabulated, by yet another women, (1) I will take my weary words elsewhere, and if perhaps, disguised as a woman, (Natalie, Natasha, Natali see note below) perhaps my verbal herbal insides, my turgid insights, will be shorter, sweeter, but never more completer than those of, who can syncopate it in rhyme and the naming of my predilection, by mid~initial, will give a measuring of solace, and a kiss and hug from my mirrored selfie, having been unsuccessful at my one chosen endeavor, only love poetry, adieu, I, due, utter Nevermore                     M>
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~~~ for our children and their children ~~~ the reason we say so oft, in whispers emboldened, I love you to our children is not the utility of its summarizing brevity no, no. it is because the eloquence of simplicity supersedes any other poem we could ever write... ~~~ July 26 2015
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Jul 26, 2015
Jul 26, 2015 at 9:14 AM UTC
The Eloquence of Simplicity
<> for the early morning teach <> she's young, beautiful and thinks her life is cursed, in the past, subject of some of my poems, her health to nurse, yet, as is normative, you fall into & out of a well of touch, until you accidentally once again path cross, she provides a precision mathematical status update "i'm fairly certain things are like at least 38% worse." it is 1:38AM for you, the not unnoticed ironic minute and hour when the night ether has prematurely worn off, rising time close but not nearly close enough, a dark dose of a sleeping nurse's aide seems inappropriate, and TV reruns seem like an insult to your brain instead you turn on some belle string musique, a Grande Messe des Morts, a chorus, singing a high mass for the dead, while opening all your various email luggage and baggage, smiling as you read a poetess's message of laughter behind tears "i'm fairly certain things are like at least 38% worse." and Mississippi ****** your uncontrollable mixed drink of her emotional Grenada grenade cocktail, flavored with musique, paintings, and words and a nearby beloved's gentling sleep sounds, has you writing your own protest poem, your very own, oy vey, grande messe, about lives that were supposed to be pictures of perfect artistry and for but a word or two, instead, a painting of a life that got hung upside down, and indeed, leaving a grand mess and no one to help clean up alternatively weeping, laughing as you are thinking, smiling recall Laurel and Hardy's summary definition of living a life's of ill begotten, misventured adventures: "Well, here's another nice mess you've gotten me into !" but 38% worse? not an even-steven rounded up 40%, should I write you only 38% of a poem, teach? or more accurately, more mathematically, 138% of what was writ before? and you recall your older, prior words about the love hate affair between you poet, and the beauty of written brevity (her style) and you give her this then, this rambling, scrambled, attention paid notification, word attentiveness, a summary of your readings of her cheddar sharp and honey mustard sweet retorts of pained poetry, it is insufficiently but perfectly sufficient, a summarizing phrase that opens and yet briefly encapsulates all that you are feeling for her "thinking of you" or the 38% larger version thereof - ***"Well, here's another 38% more nice poetic mess you've gotten me into!"***
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Jul 20, 2016
Jul 20, 2016 at 5:01 PM UTC
"i'm fairly certain things are like at least 38% worse"
<> for the early morning teach <> she's young, beautiful and thinks her life is cursed, in the past, subject of some of my poems, her health to nurse, yet, as is normative, you fall into & out of a well of touch, until you accidentally once again path cross, she provides a precision mathematical status update "i'm fairly certain things are like at least 38% worse." it is 1:38AM for you, the not unnoticed ironic minute and hour when the night ether has prematurely worn off, rising time close but not nearly close enough, a dark dose of a sleeping nurse's aide seems inappropriate, and TV reruns seem like an insult to your brain instead you turn on some belle string musique, a Grande Messe des Morts, a chorus, singing a high mass for the dead, while opening all your various email luggage and baggage, smiling as you read a poetess's message of laughter behind tears "i'm fairly certain things are like at least 38% worse." and Mississippi ****** your uncontrollable mixed drink of her emotional Grenada grenade cocktail, flavored with musique, paintings, and words and a nearby beloved's gentling sleep sounds, has you writing your own protest poem, your very own, oy vey, grande messe, about lives that were supposed to be pictures of perfect artistry and for but a word or two, instead, a painting of a life that got hung upside down, and indeed, leaving a grand mess and no one to help clean up alternatively weeping, laughing as you are thinking, smiling recall Laurel and Hardy's summary definition of living a life's of ill begotten, misventured adventures: "Well, here's another nice mess you've gotten me into !" but 38% worse? not an even-steven rounded up 40%, should I write you only 38% of a poem, teach? or more accurately, more mathematically, 138% of what was writ before? and you recall your older, prior words about the love hate affair between you poet, and the beauty of written brevity (her style) and you give her this then, this rambling, scrambled, attention paid notification, word attentiveness, a summary of your readings of her cheddar sharp and honey mustard sweet retorts of pained poetry, it is insufficiently but perfectly sufficient, a summarizing phrase that opens and yet briefly encapsulates all that you are feeling for her "thinking of you" or the 38% larger version thereof - ***"Well, here's another 38% more nice poetic mess you've gotten me into!"***
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Extra lessons after school Explaining how you are not yourself Such small words used so simply Cut like knives through your chest 'She' Paraphrasing arguments Summarizing discipline Faceless family with too much on their own plate to understand Why you don't like what's on yours 'She' Tightness in your chest not because your binding is too small But because it isn't The name of a state has never hurt so much 'She' You look in the mirror and grimace Shower so fast you don't have to see yourself Roll their words in your mind until you're leaning over the toilet 'She' Humming summer days fade into early autumn nights Long days enforce what they have already told you Dress code laws repeated by tongue And hasty dressing in changing rooms Hoping they won't notice you 'She' But you are an active volcano There are wolves in your chest and lions in your brain And they can't change you You get home and look in the mirror and sign into skype A simple word that only drops one letter Has never had so much power He.
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Sep 9, 2014
Sep 9, 2014 at 10:16 AM UTC
She
Poem Analysis 1st read, I thought gibberish, 2nd I thought Hmmm, 3rd I thought interesting, 4th I felt genius. billy your poem comment-dissects my poem my process, a marathon interview for a new poem pole position, limb by limb, word by word, chewed and re-chewed, like a tiring piece of bubble gum, the flavor remaining ebbs, but is not extinguished, and can live in your mouth, forever and the praise and this poem, not a rodomontade, for your comment dear Billy, is the process description of a poet’s labor, from word first to a baby’s birth, gibberish into genius emergent from first pain, then pushing, then tilled, at long last, the dirtiest immaculate conception beautiful billy reads my rambling, silly abstruse^ & wrote me: *1st read I thought gibberish, 2nd I thought Hmmm, 3rd I thought interesting, 4th I felt genius* this is a much loved critique for I well recall each step of creation, a summarizing parallel that your words+genes replicated so well, forgiving you a minor typo, Billy, it was genus, not genius that you meant (but then again, why quibble over a miscellaneous, harmless, delighting, tiny little extra i...not me, said he, my muse ego ) Billy has gone gray dotted, but his dot, his comment, with gratitude, in me, he, lives for ever I feel gibberish coming on...
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Mar 21, 2019
Mar 21, 2019 at 2:50 AM UTC
Gibberish into Genuis: 1st read, I thought it gibberish (2019)
The breath in my chest Scraped against my esophagus As the preacher read his Introductory scripture and a Mourning loved one doubled over In grief and despair as she Struggled to bid adieu; The hairs on the back of my neck Stood horizontally and Perpendicular to my concrete floor As I heard the sweetest soul I know Choke on her sobs on the Other end of the receiver, As she struggled to understand The onset of pain and finality She was forced to swallow; My stomach hollowed and Acidic anger bubbled and carved out my insides When I read my best friend's texts, A series of words That seemed too cruel to be true, A riffraff of interrogatories and Unsettled punctuation, Summarizing the momentary suspension Of her resiliency As she processed the Breaking of her heart; And now I lay motionless On my mattress, Hot tears masquerading behind my Tightened eyelids as I writhe in Empathy, Alone in my incapability To end the pains and the woes of Those around me, As my body thus must then grieve For me.
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Aug 24, 2015
Aug 24, 2015 at 12:13 AM UTC
Reactionary
~~ First & Foremost ~~~ a friendly competition, not of erudition, more a contest of speedy eruption *who will be first, for quenching their thirst, on not any but only every, day of their togetherness, to declare, swear, affirm, that their love for the other is the greater* a race where both win, by crossing the ever-moving forward, the unfinished line a never static series, much more than merely being a claimant of a trite first place, more akin to momentarily being at the head of an unending mathematical progression, (1 + 1 > 2) solvable if and when leap frogging over each other, extending their combined reach *when one is first to pronounce this daily blessing at the beginning of the new awakening twenty four, of their joint custodied imprimatur, silently implied, I love you with a simple syrup summary* first and foremost one, if by pillowed whisper two, if by text *a succint messag to the other, their love is coming fresh direct, with an invading intensio, deserving recognition that a new edition will be published on this very day, with the same exact freshly steaming coffee'd, bannered headline, that my love for you, my darling sweetheart is* first and foremost condensing with a yellowing smiley face, in these illiterate days of emoticons, unacceptable, yellow carded, though summarizing acceptable as **F & F or 1st/most** formats that have been adjudged to be an A-Ok entry, in the contest without a foreseeable ending and *that no one, but only both, can possess the winning record* ~~~
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Jan 9, 2016
Jan 9, 2016 at 3:41 PM UTC
F & F (1st/most)
~~ First & Foremost ~~~ a friendly competition, not of erudition, more a contest of speedy eruption *who will be first, for quenching their thirst, on not any but only every, day of their togetherness, to declare, swear, affirm, that their love for the other is the greater* a race where both win, by crossing the ever-moving forward, the unfinished line a never static series, much more than merely being a claimant of a trite first place, more akin to momentarily being at the head of an unending mathematical progression, (1 + 1 > 2) solvable if and when leap frogging over each other, extending their combined reach *when one is first to pronounce this daily blessing at the beginning of the new awakening twenty four, of their joint custodied imprimatur, silently implied, I love you with a simple syrup summary* first and foremost one, if by pillowed whisper two, if by text *a succint messag to the other, their love is coming fresh direct, with an invading intensio, deserving recognition that a new edition will be published on this very day, with the same exact freshly steaming coffee'd, bannered headline, that my love for you, my darling sweetheart is* first and foremost condensing with a yellowing smiley face, in these illiterate days of emoticons, unacceptable, yellow carded, though summarizing acceptable as **F & F or 1st/most** formats that have been adjudged to be an A-Ok entry, in the contest without a foreseeable ending and *that no one, but only both, can possess the winning record* ~~~
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she's running toward me. full on. not stopping. this is it. the kiss to end all kisses. ***** "the titanic". ***** "the notebook". we're the real deal. should I run to meet her? should I stay and let her come to me? wow, I have a lot of responsibility in this. she's getting closer. god, I missed her. I hate space. we didn't need space. I just need to get to her. hold her. that would make this moment perfect. that and rain. rain would help. make this seem more cinematic. I digress. BAM. she's here. in my arms. en mi brazos. warm to touch. sweet to smell. her face is buried in my chest. she's breathing heavy, trying to inhale me. we stand still, filing these moments in our minds. she lifts her head and looks in me. her eyelids are red and puffy, remnants of tears linger. but her eyes are deep. clear, blue, and deep. I know what she's thinking. she's thinking what I’m thinking. fireworks. explosions. BOOM! impact. she's is summarizing her entire speech into this one action. her "I’m sorry”‘s. her "I missed you”‘s. especially her "I love you”‘s. all summarized in one pleasant forceful kiss. this kiss feels amazing yet it feels new. this kiss isn't a "we should have sex/peer pressure" kiss where both our minds are elsewhere. nor is it "hello/goodbye" peck. this kiss is real. it has passion and fire. It is deep and selfless. It’s an expression not a formality. don't get me wrong; it's not a gross sloppy "get a room" kiss. there is no groping or petting, heavy or otherwise. it is indescribable. it feels like it lasts second and years at the same time. it is so good yet bad because I know I will never feel that without having to feel great pain first. losing her, even if it was only for a small period of time, was unbearable. when she eventually did pull away I tried to think of something appropriate and clever. I thought and though and then, "I love you" came out. that’s it? that’s all I could come up with? I could do better. but then I realized. I couldn't. there was nothing better. I loved her more than I could put into any other words. yeah I ripped off a Natasha Beddingfeild song but it was true. I couldn't think of anything catchy or witty. just I love you. simple and easy and most of all, true.
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Oct 31, 2010
Oct 31, 2010 at 3:14 PM UTC
The Easiest Truth
she's running toward me. full on. not stopping. this is it. the kiss to end all kisses. ***** "the titanic". ***** "the notebook". we're the real deal. should I run to meet her? should I stay and let her come to me? wow, I have a lot of responsibility in this. she's getting closer. god, I missed her. I hate space. we didn't need space. I just need to get to her. hold her. that would make this moment perfect. that and rain. rain would help. make this seem more cinematic. I digress. BAM. she's here. in my arms. en mi brazos. warm to touch. sweet to smell. her face is buried in my chest. she's breathing heavy, trying to inhale me. we stand still, filing these moments in our minds. she lifts her head and looks in me. her eyelids are red and puffy, remnants of tears linger. but her eyes are deep. clear, blue, and deep. I know what she's thinking. she's thinking what I’m thinking. fireworks. explosions. BOOM! impact. she's is summarizing her entire speech into this one action. her "I’m sorry”‘s. her "I missed you”‘s. especially her "I love you”‘s. all summarized in one pleasant forceful kiss. this kiss feels amazing yet it feels new. this kiss isn't a "we should have sex/peer pressure" kiss where both our minds are elsewhere. nor is it "hello/goodbye" peck. this kiss is real. it has passion and fire. It is deep and selfless. It’s an expression not a formality. don't get me wrong; it's not a gross sloppy "get a room" kiss. there is no groping or petting, heavy or otherwise. it is indescribable. it feels like it lasts second and years at the same time. it is so good yet bad because I know I will never feel that without having to feel great pain first. losing her, even if it was only for a small period of time, was unbearable. when she eventually did pull away I tried to think of something appropriate and clever. I thought and though and then, "I love you" came out. that’s it? that’s all I could come up with? I could do better. but then I realized. I couldn't. there was nothing better. I loved her more than I could put into any other words. yeah I ripped off a Natasha Beddingfeild song but it was true. I couldn't think of anything catchy or witty. just I love you. simple and easy and most of all, true.
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beautiful words written across paper so many thoughts and dreams put to rhythm many scattered reminiscences all put into one small paragraph summarizing that person’s life feelings put into words words put into thoughts thoughts put into dreams dreams put to rhythm poetry.
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Nov 9, 2011
Nov 9, 2011 at 5:23 PM UTC
Poetry - a poem
one of those fancy 10 word poems I see so often I tried to write the truth
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Jul 8, 2013
Jul 8, 2013 at 7:34 PM UTC
If you spend your time summarizing, you will never live
I have fear of seeing you, necessity of seeing you, hope of seeing you, uneasiness of seeing you. I have eagerness of finding you, worry of finding you, certainty of finding you, poor doubts of finding you. I have urgency of hearing you, happiness of hearing you, good luck of hearing you and fearfulness of hearing you. So to speak summarizing, I'm ****** and radiant, perhaps more the former than the last and also vice versa.
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Apr 10, 2015
Apr 10, 2015 at 1:22 PM UTC
Untitled
alliteration intervening invasion, a bed-throned life journey summarily unasked for, reviewing follow behind the collected beaming seams, to the discolored end-of-a-whiting rainbow of writings sack in hand, sack'd yet surfeiting, gleaning the falling bits, inventoried stories, the poor and the glorious light droppings, stir'd and stor'd in hopsack bag, woven intervals of clashing fabrics trilogy of me, myself and I, following falling, trailing, failing flalings cross currenting, swirling, disheartened chest heaving cursing if only, a mite more sipping of courage everlasting here a memory, there a visionary, happy haunting, glaceing eye dreams keepsakes of a life modesty and poorly lived error prone, choices weak, father confessor to the supremity of oneself played safety first, thirst quenching with the unsatisfying yellowed bursts of "it could be worse" but these stuffing, gleanings of a life, uprighted night, declining days, admixture of son and moon, women's flashing eyes inviting happy danger and ending disaster inevitability this sifted treasure chest of self-selected retained cursings and blessings, the measuring cup of a tragedy well acted, quantifiable pathos superb aplenty a play veined with comedic relief, a Falstaff for every Hal, compare and contrast your essays on the container storage of dusted cells morning-mourning summarizing gleams gleaned from a life well....dissatisfaction satisfied...truth in poetry
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Apr 3, 2016
Apr 3, 2016 at 9:32 AM UTC
gleam gleanings (April 3rd, 2016, 8:43am)
Proust kept a log of his untidy mind inviting readers in to sink, or swim some find their thoughts are much of the same kind some feel it's all particular to him great literature ought to resonate but still meets a diversity of taste those hawthorn blossoms of his endless prate some readers find a shapeless verbose waste a shorter form fits my attention span of seventy iambs in rhyming verse within a reader's mind I dare hope can evoke a self-consistent universe a monument to years spent pent in bed Marcel's rich life was mostly in his head
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Dec 29, 2016
Dec 29, 2016 at 5:12 PM UTC
summarizing Proust
Endless darkness envelops the young girls classroom She sobs silently awaiting her nightly lesson His shadow looms with her in his toxic embrace Her heart stops So does time and space Suspended and vulnerable- she is schooled He forces down her cries of wrong answers with manipulative lips And whispers his answers in her young ears As if she can understand him He doesn't care as his hands begin to creep She tenses Knowing whats to come A routine pop quiz Her instincts scream at her to simply skip It wasn't mandatory, she could walk away She doesn't She knows what must be done His hands still creep A whimper breaks from its cage So does a glimpse of his rage A pain in her side Reminds her not to say a peep Or pass the notes summarizing his lessons His destination reached As if bleached Her color slowly fades Her essence Once a plethora of iridescent lights Now chained to his chalk stained hands Are as black as an eclipsed sun Knowing nothing else but his lessons She obediently lays She tries to clear her mind Focus on her answers Tries to leave whats left of herself behind Distractions weren't acceptable Wanting simply nothing more Then for her life to be like it was before Before pop quizes And true or false test Before projects displaying your talents The talents teacher spent weekends making sure she knew like the back of her small hands But teacher needs her focused Though her cries are no longer caged They go unnoticed Why would teacher care to notice? He was teaching! She trembles with the pain All the hatred and disdain Emotions cloud her head The questions began to run together Adding to her dread of another lessons end She prays that soon it will be over But not everthing has been covered And teacher is always sure to be thorough The young girl is panicked Once again she can't keep up She is lost As a result, her work suffers While teacher grades her work His rage is unleashed All her answers are still wrong! Class was over But detention was waiting
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Sep 29, 2014
Sep 29, 2014 at 1:57 AM UTC
A Lesson Learned
Endless darkness envelops the young girls classroom She sobs silently awaiting her nightly lesson His shadow looms with her in his toxic embrace Her heart stops So does time and space Suspended and vulnerable- she is schooled He forces down her cries of wrong answers with manipulative lips And whispers his answers in her young ears As if she can understand him He doesn't care as his hands begin to creep She tenses Knowing whats to come A routine pop quiz Her instincts scream at her to simply skip It wasn't mandatory, she could walk away She doesn't She knows what must be done His hands still creep A whimper breaks from its cage So does a glimpse of his rage A pain in her side Reminds her not to say a peep Or pass the notes summarizing his lessons His destination reached As if bleached Her color slowly fades Her essence Once a plethora of iridescent lights Now chained to his chalk stained hands Are as black as an eclipsed sun Knowing nothing else but his lessons She obediently lays She tries to clear her mind Focus on her answers Tries to leave whats left of herself behind Distractions weren't acceptable Wanting simply nothing more Then for her life to be like it was before Before pop quizes And true or false test Before projects displaying your talents The talents teacher spent weekends making sure she knew like the back of her small hands But teacher needs her focused Though her cries are no longer caged They go unnoticed Why would teacher care to notice? He was teaching! She trembles with the pain All the hatred and disdain Emotions cloud her head The questions began to run together Adding to her dread of another lessons end She prays that soon it will be over But not everthing has been covered And teacher is always sure to be thorough The young girl is panicked Once again she can't keep up She is lost As a result, her work suffers While teacher grades her work His rage is unleashed All her answers are still wrong! Class was over But detention was waiting
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Intrigued about cremation, I sought GOOGLE to assuage curiosity significant questions answered clicking the following website https://www.funeralwise.com/plan/ cremation/cremation-process/ though summarizing article some oven death defying act, yet summarization satisfactorily completed, thus herewith briefly describes kickstarting, mystifying, pulverizing... tantalizing, yielding, enterprising, lasting, yelping, holding, surviving dearly departed 1. deceased identified 2. official cremation authorized affiliated with deceased 3. lifeless body prepared 4. medical devices removed 5. jewelry recovered 6. corpse secured into burnable cremation receptacle 7. encased entity transferred to retort i.e. cremation chamber 8. temperature range adjusted between 1400 degrees - 1800 degrees Fahrenheit 9. 1.5 - 2 hours elapsed 10. magnet applied residual metal removed 11. remains ground into ashes 12. once process completed remains secured within urn 13. family representative entrusted with ashes. Burnt offerings distributed ideally according to stated wishes of beloved, whose remembrance sustained as tears expended necessary to mourn eventually sorrow lessened, photographs visited after crushing grief decreased.
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Jun 2, 2019
Jun 2, 2019 at 2:35 PM UTC
Chamber Maid For Cremation
***when you accept the ‘I love you’ invite, coolly quietly understanding this is but a summarizing way of saying, let’s enter the gated fence to friendship, locking in & out, the delving reveals to follow are truths more costly than any fiction, you see only the too real, how much pain can exist, survive, be survived, quietly thrive, just beneath the skin’s preternatural strong thinness, holding us in, together while yet a sieve, separating the granules of our composition, the coarser fail to penetrate the finer cells, the molecular level is where the sensory Alice in Wonderland world coexists with the blunt exhaustion of so much agony, too much, and in the early morn these words appear of their owned and freed volition,*** do what you must do to repair yourself ***...and you confess to understanding that to heal oneself, you must heal others, and that separate and unequal sorrows can somehow heal each other, praying for ex, exfoliation, exhumation, excalibur, expelling all the ex’s so new skin self repairs, a great miracle that, and that human reparations are a thing you alone initiate, inhale, fostering a belief that !we! is the solution, the only... 5:46am 11/28/20
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Nov 29, 2020
Nov 29, 2020 at 6:14 AM UTC
do what you must do to repair yourself...
For many years, I didn't own a television. I didn't want one. The news gave me anxiety, and most of the movies were horrible. Bad actors, terrible acting and predictable plots. I wasn't buying any of it. My Dad loved watching movies. He often used the word, contrived when summarizing them. I remember watching The Grapes of Wrath with him. After the movie, Dad talked about leaving in his will, a list of his ten favorite movies for his seven kids to watch sometime. He wanted us to know him better. He forgot about it and died a few years later. I always thought Dad had too much faith in mankind. But, after watching The Grapes of Wrath again, maybe he didn't. I hope we all live until we die.
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May 19, 2025
May 19, 2025 at 9:31 AM UTC
Dad and his Movies
Indeed this important and yet impotent word, sometimes hurled with mighty scorn, or quiet whispered ruefully reflectively, empowering, yet so weakly confessional, that it is a word equally reveling in overarching wonder, or a summarizing a simplicity of inability, to surrender by weak agreement… indeed,  that selfsame word, indeed, I’ve employed usage unthinkingly casually, mis-appreciating its power of causality, used so often in poems, slipping it in to the hilt, succinct dagger of irony, killing easily, and yet only 17 thousand poems of the mega-thousands here, have been designated with the honorific #indeed
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Jan 20, 2024
Jan 20, 2024 at 2:30 PM UTC
#Indeed
This is, A quick attempt at sketching the overall picture, A collection of existing material, Summarizing the essential characteristics, And offering a novel interpretation of The “self-actualizing personality.” And the gifts, That set them apart, And that are underutilized, They are, Misunderstood, And underestimated, By peers, By society, And by themselves. The gifted rarely fulfill, Their full creative potential. This is particularly true, For gifted women, They don’t fit stereotypes, Society has, Either of women, Or the gifted: Typically seen as men. The highly gifted are rare, In the population. Those with IQ’s, Of 150 and above, Occur five to seven times, Per ten thousand. They are never quite sure, If it is good, Or bad, To be very bright. It is difficult, For average persons, To identify, With their gifted counterparts’ Superior cognitive abilities. If feedback is internalized, A self-conception, May be constructed, Based on underrating the self. They are experiencing in a higher key.
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Jun 16, 2016
Jun 16, 2016 at 11:19 PM UTC
The Self-Actualizing Personality
Valentines Day of 93, a star was birthed to the world extremely gifted from the womb with big things to unfurl A broke product growing up on the streets of Lynchburg Red Top to be exact with a message to the world waiting to be heard At the age of 9, he found his passion by scanning thru old notebooks that his mom kept private with her thoughts of cold world that’s been shook The process began by summarizing what he read thru the English text slowly got good with it but the question remained, what’s next? Senior year of high school, the unthinkable would take place one individual would turn heads from his diary of hidden hate felt from those around him & from those who did him wrong expressing how he was breaking down inside & didn’t know how to be strong A nervous wreck before getting on stage to confess his inner feelings but finished it like a concert to hear the applause raising up to the ceiling But that was years ago & sometimes I question if I’m really star worthy like I should keep my poems to myself cause this world doesn’t deserve me but it makes me think of the things that I’d like to achieve or the other people who need my guidance to believe How could I be the star in my mind if the spotlight which is mine that I’m scared to possess then to hear those who admire me tell me that I’m the best Yea a star was born on that cold Sunday evening but seeing that star shine scares me yet the feeling of overcoming the odds still manages to compel me ☆ Poetic Venom ☆
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Sep 23, 2018
Sep 23, 2018 at 8:57 PM UTC
A Star is Born
Valentines Day of 93, a star was birthed to the world extremely gifted from the womb with big things to unfurl A broke product growing up on the streets of Lynchburg Red Top to be exact with a message to the world waiting to be heard At the age of 9, he found his passion by scanning thru old notebooks that his mom kept private with her thoughts of cold world that’s been shook The process began by summarizing what he read thru the English text slowly got good with it but the question remained, what’s next? Senior year of high school, the unthinkable would take place one individual would turn heads from his diary of hidden hate felt from those around him & from those who did him wrong expressing how he was breaking down inside & didn’t know how to be strong A nervous wreck before getting on stage to confess his inner feelings but finished it like a concert to hear the applause raising up to the ceiling But that was years ago & sometimes I question if I’m really star worthy like I should keep my poems to myself cause this world doesn’t deserve me but it makes me think of the things that I’d like to achieve or the other people who need my guidance to believe How could I be the star in my mind if the spotlight which is mine that I’m scared to possess then to hear those who admire me tell me that I’m the best Yea a star was born on that cold Sunday evening but seeing that star shine scares me yet the feeling of overcoming the odds still manages to compel me ☆ Poetic Venom ☆
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Oh, my god This poem! Whenever I try to make her stand on the reality line She flutters like Marilyn Monroe’s dress in the imaginations of men I tell her to keep herself on one meaning But she defies me While wearing the interpretation mask And when she tries to describe the battlefield She is looking for the effects of kisses On the collars of the soldiers who are tied down in their trenches With fear and hopelessness But if they were to be blown up And their bodies were every where Her words would be meaningless For she hiding behind symbolism She can’t sense the children’s horror from the bombs And their attempts to huddle against the remnants of destroyed walls Her cheeks do not hurt Like mothers’ cheeks dried of their hot tears poured while waiting for deferred letters from their absent sons She does not take the risk of thinking So, she can’t believe any truth She does not pay attention to my damaged life Which has been crushed by the harsh machine of days She is trying to make her words beautiful So, she sprinkles rose water on an erupting volcano She is too comfortable with death and even praises him She is summarizing all this loss, darkness, combustion, destruction, chemical weapons. black banners, coffins, skinning , deprivation, orphanages, curfews, warning, sirens, barbed wire, tanks, thrumming of planes, explosions. ****** blood shed on the side walk, death, ashes, displacement, emptiness, charred bodies, mass graves, coffins, body traps, yelling, sadness, anger, hunger, thirst, vigilance, slapping …. etc. She summarizes all of this in one ward War While I am, the poet stand in the middle Watching my body jump from death to death For nothing Just to let the poem come But after all this trouble She only comes imperfectly
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Sep 17, 2019
Sep 17, 2019 at 11:01 AM UTC
unreachable
Oh, my god This poem! Whenever I try to make her stand on the reality line She flutters like Marilyn Monroe’s dress in the imaginations of men I tell her to keep herself on one meaning But she defies me While wearing the interpretation mask And when she tries to describe the battlefield She is looking for the effects of kisses On the collars of the soldiers who are tied down in their trenches With fear and hopelessness But if they were to be blown up And their bodies were every where Her words would be meaningless For she hiding behind symbolism She can’t sense the children’s horror from the bombs And their attempts to huddle against the remnants of destroyed walls Her cheeks do not hurt Like mothers’ cheeks dried of their hot tears poured while waiting for deferred letters from their absent sons She does not take the risk of thinking So, she can’t believe any truth She does not pay attention to my damaged life Which has been crushed by the harsh machine of days She is trying to make her words beautiful So, she sprinkles rose water on an erupting volcano She is too comfortable with death and even praises him She is summarizing all this loss, darkness, combustion, destruction, chemical weapons. black banners, coffins, skinning , deprivation, orphanages, curfews, warning, sirens, barbed wire, tanks, thrumming of planes, explosions. ****** blood shed on the side walk, death, ashes, displacement, emptiness, charred bodies, mass graves, coffins, body traps, yelling, sadness, anger, hunger, thirst, vigilance, slapping …. etc. She summarizes all of this in one ward War While I am, the poet stand in the middle Watching my body jump from death to death For nothing Just to let the poem come But after all this trouble She only comes imperfectly
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I died as i sip, the last inch drop of memories... Tasteless, unfragrant, fragmented vacancies... Recollecting, regulating the blurry negligible visions... Recalling, rewriting, summarizing the Summaries It felt like Treachery, disregarding this treasury... life is a Memory, and then it is nullity... Or at least that's what the wise man said... We drown ourselves in each shot and swim out with a sigh Sometimes with a gloom and sometimes with a smile But in the end, both fades away, And oh how quickly they fade away... As if waves washing away our names written on the shore... it fades out to presence, to sense another sore sores, like old chest boxes, we dive deep in each, swimming into it's memories, bone narrow they breached like Leeches, we **** on our melancholy as we silently screech watching pains as days turning to wrinkles, as closer we reach We build our future, though we live for the past... We all get obsessed and we all get attached... We move forward to looking back trying to find a meaning... But after all, Life is a memory, and then it is nothing... Or at least that's what the wise man said
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Sep 25, 2020
Sep 25, 2020 at 5:37 PM UTC
Life is a memory
Lost in the forest of memories, The map of depression is the only guide i see. ****** razors, burning glass, Death and darkness is all i ask. Summarizing this story this paper will shred, Asking for this to be over, asking for death. Close my eyes and there you will be, Open my eyes and all i see is me. Where did you go when i needed you most, the love you claimed to felt was just a hoax. I know i will find my love, this is for sure, Lost without a map, in search for her.
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Nov 17, 2015
Nov 17, 2015 at 12:59 PM UTC
In Search For Her