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Municipal Gum was written by Oodjeroo Noonecaal. Municipal Gum is about the changes in society and the tendency of people to want to control everything. Oodjeroo uses various techniques to convey this idea. At the beginning of the poem Oodjeroo is addressing the tree. This immediately creates empathy for both the tree and her people. By the last line she has emphasised this with the pronoun “us” to show that they suffer a similar fate. This poem expresses how life in Australia has changes especially for Aboriginal people. In the first half of the poem Oodjeroo is talking about how life was for her and others. It explores the changes in society and the displacement of the Aboriginal people from their land. “Whose head hung…Its hopelessness”, the author uses this as further re-iteration of the immorality of the situation and by the use of analogy comparing the tree to her people to further emphasise the shame and lack control of that the Europeans have inflicted upon her and the environment. Oodjeroo uses extended metaphor technique in the very first line of the poem ‘Hard bitumen around your feet’. This means that the gumtree has been placed in the city scape where it is suppressed and not allowed to spread out and be unique in its own way. This is clear and immanently direct link to the pain and suffering endured by the Aborigines post European settlement. Oodjeroo uses vivid language to present these ideas. For example the use of the word castrated is very effective. The connotation of the word is very demeaning. With castration often comes a sense of a loss of pride and power. The word castration is symbolic of how Oodjeroo feels the European have treated Aboriginal people and the environment. Castration also refers to the fact that what is done is done. Nothing can undo what they did and the damaged they have caused. Other symbolism includes the title “Municipal Gum”, municipal meaning community, implies that the gumtree belongs to the community. One of the vast differences between European and Aboriginal law is that Aboriginal people did not believe in the ownership of land or of animals and plants. Municipal Gum is a reference to the Europeans assumptions that everything is theirs to own and control. The rhetorical question, “O fellow citizen, What have they done to us?” is the conclusion of the implications that have been made throughout the poem. Oodjeroo, is advocating for her people and all things wronged by the controlling behaviour of the Europeans. Rhetorical questions are used to provoke thought and to stimulate a pre-determined response. “What have they done to us?” They have “castrated, broken… strapped and buckled” and ultimately changed things to a point that they cannot be fixed. In conclusion, Municipal Gum is a poem about the constrictions and change that the European invaders forced upon the Aboriginal community and the environment she believes that the Europeans have deemed themselves ever powerful and practice their power in a manner that is immoral.
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Sep 11, 2013
Sep 11, 2013 at 7:47 AM UTC
Municipal Gum
Municipal Gum was written by Oodjeroo Noonecaal. Municipal Gum is about the changes in society and the tendency of people to want to control everything. Oodjeroo uses various techniques to convey this idea. At the beginning of the poem Oodjeroo is addressing the tree. This immediately creates empathy for both the tree and her people. By the last line she has emphasised this with the pronoun “us” to show that they suffer a similar fate. This poem expresses how life in Australia has changes especially for Aboriginal people. In the first half of the poem Oodjeroo is talking about how life was for her and others. It explores the changes in society and the displacement of the Aboriginal people from their land. “Whose head hung…Its hopelessness”, the author uses this as further re-iteration of the immorality of the situation and by the use of analogy comparing the tree to her people to further emphasise the shame and lack control of that the Europeans have inflicted upon her and the environment. Oodjeroo uses extended metaphor technique in the very first line of the poem ‘Hard bitumen around your feet’. This means that the gumtree has been placed in the city scape where it is suppressed and not allowed to spread out and be unique in its own way. This is clear and immanently direct link to the pain and suffering endured by the Aborigines post European settlement. Oodjeroo uses vivid language to present these ideas. For example the use of the word castrated is very effective. The connotation of the word is very demeaning. With castration often comes a sense of a loss of pride and power. The word castration is symbolic of how Oodjeroo feels the European have treated Aboriginal people and the environment. Castration also refers to the fact that what is done is done. Nothing can undo what they did and the damaged they have caused. Other symbolism includes the title “Municipal Gum”, municipal meaning community, implies that the gumtree belongs to the community. One of the vast differences between European and Aboriginal law is that Aboriginal people did not believe in the ownership of land or of animals and plants. Municipal Gum is a reference to the Europeans assumptions that everything is theirs to own and control. The rhetorical question, “O fellow citizen, What have they done to us?” is the conclusion of the implications that have been made throughout the poem. Oodjeroo, is advocating for her people and all things wronged by the controlling behaviour of the Europeans. Rhetorical questions are used to provoke thought and to stimulate a pre-determined response. “What have they done to us?” They have “castrated, broken… strapped and buckled” and ultimately changed things to a point that they cannot be fixed. In conclusion, Municipal Gum is a poem about the constrictions and change that the European invaders forced upon the Aboriginal community and the environment she believes that the Europeans have deemed themselves ever powerful and practice their power in a manner that is immoral.
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From the BBC today, Excerpt Why does Taylor Swift write so many one-note melodies? "It's easy to get distracted by her celebrity, but Taylor Swift is a once-in-a-generation songwriter. From the very beginning, she's displayed a knack for melody and storytelling that most artists never master. Take, for example, her first US number one, OUR SONG Written for a high school talent show, it's a fairly typical tale of teenage romance until the final lines: "I grabbed a pen / And an old napkin / And I wrote down our song." That's smart, self-assured songwriting for someone who wasn't old enough to vote. Notably, the lyrics insert the musician directly into the narrative - something she developed into a tried and tested trope. But Our Song also establishes another of Taylor's trademarks: The one-note melody. Excerpt Repetitive melodies that centre around a single note are part of that appeal. They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech. "They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech." "They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech." "They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech." Rebuttal Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics. They can relate to your song but if they cannot sing it themselves putting themselves in the 'first-person perspective narrative' they cannot feel as-if they have BECOME the artist and are living that moment as they remember it. Taylor Swift sings about teenage love and angst something EVERYONE ON EARTH understands. ALL POETRY BEGAN AS RHYME IN SONG. Cadences are singing statements that confer a discipline and unity. Song acts as a catharsis. The artist shares their pain in a way that is universally understood. If you want to sell a rock, literally a pebble, you will not sell it if it doesn't look like a rock. If it doesn't do what rocks do. If it is not what people remember a rock to be like. Nor will it sell if it is just like every other rock they have ever seen. It cannot convey an emotion unless it elicits emotion. One cannot even begin to feel emotional if one cannot remember easily the past and that includes lyrics one has heard that evoked said emotional state. It is horrifying to see HOW BADLY EVERYONE INSISTS that rhyme be obliterated in exchange for an intellectual or individual perspective NOT SHARED BY THE MAJORITY OF PEOPLE. If you want to sell and make money you better start thinking about the 99% of people who are not geniuses. If your sole goal in life is to attract a genius to give you a great job because of how, "smart," they perceive you to be then fine. You are not an artist. You are an employee. "Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics." "Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics." "Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics." Thrice Times Great. ⁻ᴴᵉʳᵐᵉˢ                                            BECOME                               EVERYONE ON EARTH                ALL POETRY BEGAN AS RHYME IN SONG                       HOW BADLY EVERYONE INSISTS             NOT SHARED BY THE MAJORITY OF PEOPLE                                          HOW BAD                                       artist? or employee?
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Feb 15, 2018
Feb 15, 2018 at 10:29 AM UTC
Article: Taylor Swift and why rhyme sells,
From the BBC today, Excerpt Why does Taylor Swift write so many one-note melodies? "It's easy to get distracted by her celebrity, but Taylor Swift is a once-in-a-generation songwriter. From the very beginning, she's displayed a knack for melody and storytelling that most artists never master. Take, for example, her first US number one, OUR SONG Written for a high school talent show, it's a fairly typical tale of teenage romance until the final lines: "I grabbed a pen / And an old napkin / And I wrote down our song." That's smart, self-assured songwriting for someone who wasn't old enough to vote. Notably, the lyrics insert the musician directly into the narrative - something she developed into a tried and tested trope. But Our Song also establishes another of Taylor's trademarks: The one-note melody. Excerpt Repetitive melodies that centre around a single note are part of that appeal. They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech. "They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech." "They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech." "They emphasise her relatability by mimicking the cadence of speech." Rebuttal Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics. They can relate to your song but if they cannot sing it themselves putting themselves in the 'first-person perspective narrative' they cannot feel as-if they have BECOME the artist and are living that moment as they remember it. Taylor Swift sings about teenage love and angst something EVERYONE ON EARTH understands. ALL POETRY BEGAN AS RHYME IN SONG. Cadences are singing statements that confer a discipline and unity. Song acts as a catharsis. The artist shares their pain in a way that is universally understood. If you want to sell a rock, literally a pebble, you will not sell it if it doesn't look like a rock. If it doesn't do what rocks do. If it is not what people remember a rock to be like. Nor will it sell if it is just like every other rock they have ever seen. It cannot convey an emotion unless it elicits emotion. One cannot even begin to feel emotional if one cannot remember easily the past and that includes lyrics one has heard that evoked said emotional state. It is horrifying to see HOW BADLY EVERYONE INSISTS that rhyme be obliterated in exchange for an intellectual or individual perspective NOT SHARED BY THE MAJORITY OF PEOPLE. If you want to sell and make money you better start thinking about the 99% of people who are not geniuses. If your sole goal in life is to attract a genius to give you a great job because of how, "smart," they perceive you to be then fine. You are not an artist. You are an employee. "Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics." "Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics." "Rhyme sells because the people you are selling too can remember your lyrics." Thrice Times Great. ⁻ᴴᵉʳᵐᵉˢ                                            BECOME                               EVERYONE ON EARTH                ALL POETRY BEGAN AS RHYME IN SONG                       HOW BADLY EVERYONE INSISTS             NOT SHARED BY THE MAJORITY OF PEOPLE                                          HOW BAD                                       artist? or employee?
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"Alternative Facts" the truth belies, Often in "Fake News" the real truth lies, "Exaggeration", "Aggrandizing" In truth are other words for lying. The value of honesty seems lost, Sad truth is, at a terrible cost! To our kids now we must emphasise That Facts; the Truth, must Always Trump Lies, That by lying there's nothing to gain; That Truth cannot be held in disdain. From lies and untruths all must refrain To make Truth, Honesty, Great Again!
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Nov 9, 2017
Nov 9, 2017 at 9:21 AM UTC
Truth Trumps Lies
Don't be A mole. I hate moles. They burrow And Scavenge And Live in the Dark. Thats just What you did To my heart. You burrowed Deep, Down to the center. You set up camp. And I didn't know You were a mole. I thought maybe you were A Straw, To **** Bad things Out. So I kept you warm And waited calmly for the Bad stuff to Dissapear. But I realized That You were a Magnifying glass, To emphasise My flaws And you were A Seam-ripper To Pull the patches From where I had already healed, To make the scabs Bleed Again. And I thought you were A Jigsaw And you were broken So I could fix you And put you Together. Like a Vase, Easily B r o k e n. And Then You left me. Like a Tooth Full of Cav it ies. That Space Next To My heart No longer full. And you Didn't depend on me, No longer a tapeworm. I miss you. Like You Were Mine. But you were Never Mine.
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Oct 3, 2012
Oct 3, 2012 at 9:06 PM UTC
Shapeshifter
Is humanism Utopian? You really have to think about it. Or is it rather more dystopian? No, then I think you’d never doubt it. It seems that disbelief is best. Humanism owes a debt to thinkers of the Enlightenment, although I haven’t paid it yet, I think of it as my entitlement to settle it at some behest. I very early cleared my mind of Kant, experiencing a vast relief, approaching his chef d’oeuvres extant; removing knowledge to allow belief; the opposite of what he had expressed. It occurred to me I ought to dig up (or should I say instead ex-hume?) what constitutes at least an egg-cup- full of wisdom that I might consume with non-platonic zest. But wondering how on earth to do so and thinking he might hold the key, I fixed my sights on Jean Jacques Rousseau and set sail for my destiny, while trying not to feel depressed. Voltaire’s voices loudly rang in deaf ears as did the Persian Letters of Montesquieu and failed to still my latent fears. And thus I felt no need to rescue Adam Smith (morality-obsessed). To put Descartes before the Horse- men of the Apocalypse War, famine, pestilence and worse. Who could guess it would eclipse my thought, wherefore I was oppressed. Or take the case of Denis Diderot a friend of Hume and others seedier. and one you might consider so rash as to produce an encyclopedia to get his knowledge off his chest. That precious quality of truth was Mary Ann’s# description of it. It would not take a Sherlock sleuth to simply thus produce a conviction of it: an elementary request. I cut my questing teeth on Russell. His secular logic had a profound effect and seemed to stir each red corpuscle inhabiting this fervid non-sect- arian but doubting breast. I later turned my eye on Dawkins, and his concern with my divine delusion. A sceptic whose inspiring squawkings validate my disillusion and emphasise an ill-starred quest. And so I felt the pointlessness of it. Progress is the best end for a man to see And belief simply produced less profit for reality’s dispelling of my fantasy. So, in the end, I acquiesced. #Mary Ann Evans, aka George Eliot, in Adam Bede
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Nov 16, 2014
Nov 16, 2014 at 10:21 AM UTC
NUMINOSITY (OR HUMANISM OWES A DEBT TO THE ENLIGHTENMENT)
Is humanism Utopian? You really have to think about it. Or is it rather more dystopian? No, then I think you’d never doubt it. It seems that disbelief is best. Humanism owes a debt to thinkers of the Enlightenment, although I haven’t paid it yet, I think of it as my entitlement to settle it at some behest. I very early cleared my mind of Kant, experiencing a vast relief, approaching his chef d’oeuvres extant; removing knowledge to allow belief; the opposite of what he had expressed. It occurred to me I ought to dig up (or should I say instead ex-hume?) what constitutes at least an egg-cup- full of wisdom that I might consume with non-platonic zest. But wondering how on earth to do so and thinking he might hold the key, I fixed my sights on Jean Jacques Rousseau and set sail for my destiny, while trying not to feel depressed. Voltaire’s voices loudly rang in deaf ears as did the Persian Letters of Montesquieu and failed to still my latent fears. And thus I felt no need to rescue Adam Smith (morality-obsessed). To put Descartes before the Horse- men of the Apocalypse War, famine, pestilence and worse. Who could guess it would eclipse my thought, wherefore I was oppressed. Or take the case of Denis Diderot a friend of Hume and others seedier. and one you might consider so rash as to produce an encyclopedia to get his knowledge off his chest. That precious quality of truth was Mary Ann’s# description of it. It would not take a Sherlock sleuth to simply thus produce a conviction of it: an elementary request. I cut my questing teeth on Russell. His secular logic had a profound effect and seemed to stir each red corpuscle inhabiting this fervid non-sect- arian but doubting breast. I later turned my eye on Dawkins, and his concern with my divine delusion. A sceptic whose inspiring squawkings validate my disillusion and emphasise an ill-starred quest. And so I felt the pointlessness of it. Progress is the best end for a man to see And belief simply produced less profit for reality’s dispelling of my fantasy. So, in the end, I acquiesced. #Mary Ann Evans, aka George Eliot, in Adam Bede
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☆ *"Our sweet children, where have you been? We're waiting for you outward the ingress, Admitting : you nowhere were seen As you are: each — an enraptured princess!"   ☆ Vivacious shades on your ethno coat Emphasise your femininity; Bastet at heart — best childrens lifeboat! Spacey gray cap: fairish and witty — ☆ It suits you — dear darling — shared hugs Of wellcome! Lively, charming's your gaze   As young Notre~Dame; and blue scarabs Are lit on your kind fortunate face. ☆    The theatre lady, the dreamer, The writer, the thinker, you're teacher, Performer, a woman, protector Creator, great mother, old friend!*
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Apr 5, 2015
Apr 5, 2015 at 5:28 PM UTC
Croquis
i feel the synergy when our souls connect a sacred energy that binds our love and our intellect. i cant imagine any earthly force that could break our soul ties our emotional course was mapped and carved by our spiritual knives i feel the synergy when our souls share a few tears an empathetic energy that cures our growing pains and fears. a thousand love letters later, ive come to realise ive written the word synergy too many times but not enough times to emphasise the synergy between your soul and mine. - t.m
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Dec 26, 2016
Dec 26, 2016 at 5:55 AM UTC
déjà vu
Have you ever tasted the finality of abandonment? I fully acknowledge the ambivalence of hateful and loving connectedness. But, there is something wonderful about lunar eclipses amidst dark forests where trees creak and groan with the pains of animism. The dial of the sun will emphasise her eternal wheel of galactic sobriety, whilst interaction transcends her promiscuous limitations of what is deemed to be sophisticated. What do you understand about hormones? Thank you, oh priestess of resentful misogyny. I applaud your sexuality.
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Apr 14, 2014
Apr 14, 2014 at 11:33 PM UTC
The Altar of Chauvinistic Spirituality
i shall remain as a hidden piece of a puzzle, puzzling myself to pieces on why storms swirl daily around the absence of my brain. and on this rainy friday afternoon it should be no different; wondering how i came to be, perched away in the back of the room to watch a flood of unfamiliar smiles. when did i become so lonely and outcast? the dread of not liking most of the people i'm around dawns and my jagged edges of a puzzle piece emphasise. i do not fit with these people. they are too sure on their happiness.
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Sep 2, 2016
Sep 2, 2016 at 8:25 AM UTC
from the back of my mind
*The Universe was  molded for you and I to share We are created with big Hearts so that we care   blessed with flawless eyes so we can see the road and the might it takes to lighten a neighbour's load these feet are built tough for the miles to walk we have developed brains to digest and think and the courage to sail through life like we can never sink we have these warm arms to tightly embrace not folding fists, holding weapons to bring unrest We are born with curiosity,cause life's an adventure and a difference made by you is your presence in absensure the beautiful teeth are designed to **** your smile not to greet in unnecessary coarse envy and bile our experiences are for us to inspire and tell to uplift them whose lives feel like a living hell the mountains and hills were built for us to hike ensure each fresh climb beats your previous height rainbows are hope after rain, pleasure after pain why give up the struggle when you can start again? the gardens of life are floret scented with consolation for broken hearts trapped in the darkness of desolation the scars are a testimony that wounds do heal don't let a moment the rest your life steal the starved hunter surrenders not when he has no **** for the sweet glowing Sun often rises after the bitter chill these ugly poems are penned to emphasise that the beautiful souls are seeded to empathise. leave your footprints in Hearts and not on sand the dust in the heart holds firmer than that on land so use your arms, feet, might, heart and soul use your greatest possession for the good of us all*
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Apr 26, 2016
Apr 26, 2016 at 2:51 AM UTC
Start Again
*The Universe was  molded for you and I to share We are created with big Hearts so that we care   blessed with flawless eyes so we can see the road and the might it takes to lighten a neighbour's load these feet are built tough for the miles to walk we have developed brains to digest and think and the courage to sail through life like we can never sink we have these warm arms to tightly embrace not folding fists, holding weapons to bring unrest We are born with curiosity,cause life's an adventure and a difference made by you is your presence in absensure the beautiful teeth are designed to **** your smile not to greet in unnecessary coarse envy and bile our experiences are for us to inspire and tell to uplift them whose lives feel like a living hell the mountains and hills were built for us to hike ensure each fresh climb beats your previous height rainbows are hope after rain, pleasure after pain why give up the struggle when you can start again? the gardens of life are floret scented with consolation for broken hearts trapped in the darkness of desolation the scars are a testimony that wounds do heal don't let a moment the rest your life steal the starved hunter surrenders not when he has no **** for the sweet glowing Sun often rises after the bitter chill these ugly poems are penned to emphasise that the beautiful souls are seeded to empathise. leave your footprints in Hearts and not on sand the dust in the heart holds firmer than that on land so use your arms, feet, might, heart and soul use your greatest possession for the good of us all*
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u.n.i.t.y. john lennon and peace signs mandela and african lives jordan and twenty three bob marley and marijuana trees el chapo and ivory ******* courtney love and kurt colbain. ive written the word synergy too many times but not enough times to emphasise the synergy between your soul and mine. - t.m
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Dec 21, 2016
Dec 21, 2016 at 9:51 AM UTC
u.n.i.t.y
Will you leave now? You know they always leave But they don't always say why I don't know which one of us I should believe So many reasons for farewells Some leave by will, some by chance And some for someone else Will you leave now? Leave me never to return Some of them never learn When is it too late to try again? So many reasons for farewells Some leave by will, some by chance And some for someone else Will you leave me now? Leave with words that you regret But never come back to correct Forever there leading you astray So many reasons for farewells Some leave by will, some by chance And some for someone else Will you leave me now? To emphasise that our love has lost it's worth Take back your heart but leave your shirt Slam the door on all this hurt So many reasons for farewells Some leave by will, some by chance And some for someone else Will you leave me now? Maybe I should have thought of leaving you I always thought we´d make it through You know they always leave But never why they left Some leave by will, some by chance and some try to forget
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Sep 21, 2015
Sep 21, 2015 at 7:12 PM UTC
Will you leave me now?
\|/ @-@ (  -Q-  ) <=> how I drool over obese girls with huge great cheeks of wobbly dimpled fat >========o======== no skinny birds for me!=======o========< absolutely no way yeeha i love to see wobbly fat girls waddling along with their tyres of white flab quivering in their size 88 jeans like a pack of rabid rabbits fighting in a rubber sack, and what do they need yessir, they are barking for a friendly ***** from moi, edna the chubby-chaser and lover of gorgeous female flesh body mass index forty (at an absolute total minimum i must emphasise) and preferable fifty so they look like a giant dumpling i know you know the sort of image i crave: dimpled, dappled acreages of heaving ********** wowee-yowee i am so excited please god lead me to the land where the extra supersize fatties live and let me exhaust my ***** gaze on their incredible buxom enormities let me get my paws on them let me wallow in their glories dear god oh yes indeedy when you come to think of it there's nothing like a huge billowing fatso to get my blood afire with testosterone and bottom-of-the-barrel-scraping loving lust so why not jump off a pier all you skinny minnies per-lease /\ /   \ /      \ @        @ /            \ /               \ +++                         +++
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Jan 7, 2015
Jan 7, 2015 at 12:48 PM UTC
A Fat Girl for Me!
This is no classic scene on a movie screen. This is real life. And it’s scenes are the most obscene. This pain is felt first hand, And your confusion is severe. We look to the asphalt and to these mechanic machines and Believe we live in our ancestors virtual dreams. You scream: “It’s 2019!” And take that as evidence of progress; Like we are closer to ‘the truth‘ now Than when even our foods weren’t processed? Progress? Yes, We emphasise physicality And make clowns of our spirituality So we can parade falsity. You see, We latch to this planet like a leach. Manipulating your free speech As you learn only what is deemed worthy to teach. And that’s it! That’s all you need to know! Go on, throw a fit And call it “history in the making” While you transfer all knowledge in A glowing rectangle, And still mistake emotions with rationality Yes we’ve reached this calamity! Don’t make me laugh! You hate war? But you get bored of peace And you fetishise your guns. And this is no longer a secret, Now you post red and caption it “aesthetic” And laugh-cry at those who are unfortunate. Glory is in the body count, And ****** is just a sport. Honour is in the gold, And there’s no longer any justice In courts. Truth is You’re building a fort Where ignorance is at its foundation. And while you do not know yourself You cry “you ought!” To a nation?
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Apr 20, 2019
Apr 20, 2019 at 11:13 AM UTC
The Cry of the West
The snowball effect, Connects four snowflakes, A ballerinas tiptoes evades footsteps On the game board, A perfect pirouette. The overtures prologue, Mother tongues twisted in specific syllables, To emphasise the divide in culture, the closeness of nature. The bubble in a spirit level bursts And disrupts the axis of the world as we know it. An Easter egg made of woven hope. Sweet and septic, A dangerous connection. There's electricity in the thunder clouds, A storms reform, No prisoners in the matterhorns scorn. But we must climb to reach the pinnacle of desire, and grab the bull by its horns. Torn between the torqiunet, That restricts our true colours, The blood seeps through like the Matadors tools. Only fools would make light of those we share the earth with, Ma whirlwind changes the landscape, It can never be the same. Underneath the terrain, A lesson remains, Statuesque, In the mystery of history's gifts.
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Jan 29, 2016
Jan 29, 2016 at 7:57 PM UTC
Torqiunet
You think you've got what it takes green man You're short You're weak, your strength is only a year old And you've been pampered by the melanin in your skin and the love around you You think you can understand what adversity means? The few tests of masculinity you ******* paid for left you tense and fearful when the weapons were made of plastic When reality was there to test you, the words you should have fought against you let slide like a ***** You think you deserve a right to fight? You may desire it, but you are too small and too stupid to fight for anything in this world And what you desire to fight for is muddied in hypocrisy Because democracy is built on blood and sin A world of wolves ****** each other with claws and ***** for sheep like you When you sheep wander into our battleground, you bleed better than us With tears and families and a lack of skin that Darwin fought the churches to emphasise The stupid and the sociopathic know our fight the best Because they accept the simple truth we give them, or are willing to profit from the lie But you just men, sheep who give up and wolves who die You can't keep up with this What do I say to all that? To our history that is so muddied in the darkest greys Bloodiest battles fought continously, so I can live under laws that I don't agree with As much as they let me do what I want to do I have to take the coward's way out, and defend my tribes in my ***** *** deluded little way And despite every need to be carved out of stone as a man who is too soft to fight as hard as he wants to That fight doesn't exist And if it did It wouldn't need me
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Mar 4, 2016
Mar 4, 2016 at 3:51 PM UTC
Soft and Naive
You think you've got what it takes green man You're short You're weak, your strength is only a year old And you've been pampered by the melanin in your skin and the love around you You think you can understand what adversity means? The few tests of masculinity you ******* paid for left you tense and fearful when the weapons were made of plastic When reality was there to test you, the words you should have fought against you let slide like a ***** You think you deserve a right to fight? You may desire it, but you are too small and too stupid to fight for anything in this world And what you desire to fight for is muddied in hypocrisy Because democracy is built on blood and sin A world of wolves ****** each other with claws and ***** for sheep like you When you sheep wander into our battleground, you bleed better than us With tears and families and a lack of skin that Darwin fought the churches to emphasise The stupid and the sociopathic know our fight the best Because they accept the simple truth we give them, or are willing to profit from the lie But you just men, sheep who give up and wolves who die You can't keep up with this What do I say to all that? To our history that is so muddied in the darkest greys Bloodiest battles fought continously, so I can live under laws that I don't agree with As much as they let me do what I want to do I have to take the coward's way out, and defend my tribes in my ***** *** deluded little way And despite every need to be carved out of stone as a man who is too soft to fight as hard as he wants to That fight doesn't exist And if it did It wouldn't need me
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I’m a bit of a sensualist. First, let me emphasise emotional resonance, there has to be an emotional base, not just an appreciation of hotness. Then, there’s a sense of longing and mystery— that male unknowableness. Don’t forget the hard strength of those rough male edges, you know, the feeling that he’s kind of sculpted from a marble that you just want to run your hands over. And this jet-black hair, the curves and the spiky bits, casual, careless, not fussy or particular, and his warm, firm, implacable hands. Oh, God. Gimmie some. “Sensuality's connected to desire, ya?” I asked the room (Sunny and Lisa are there, studying). “It sure is,” Sunny said, flippantly, “and you just need that hot boyfriend of yours to spank it out of you.” “No,” I winced, “that’s not true.” “Ooo! I love this song” Lisa said, as ‘try’ by BETWEEN FRIENDS began to play on our Echos. . . *Songs for this: this is what falling in love feels like by JVKE golden hour by JVKE* . . Our cast Sunny, (suitemate) 21, a (pre-med) molecular, cellular, and developmental biology major, is a cowgirl from Nebraska (seriously, she has a quarter horse and barrel races). She’s an outspoken fem-facing ladies-lady. Lisa, (roommate) 21, my bff and a high society princess, who grew up in a 50th floor Central Park South high-rise. A (pre-med) molecular biophysics and biochemistry major. Your author, a simple, multinational, upper-crust, trust-fund baby from Athens, Georgia who's also a molecular biophysics and biochemistry major (pre-med).
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Mar 28, 2025
Mar 28, 2025 at 8:39 AM UTC
the sensualist
I’m a bit of a sensualist. First, let me emphasise emotional resonance, there has to be an emotional base, not just an appreciation of hotness. Then, there’s a sense of longing and mystery— that male unknowableness. Don’t forget the hard strength of those rough male edges, you know, the feeling that he’s kind of sculpted from a marble that you just want to run your hands over. And this jet-black hair, the curves and the spiky bits, casual, careless, not fussy or particular, and his warm, firm, implacable hands. Oh, God. Gimmie some. “Sensuality's connected to desire, ya?” I asked the room (Sunny and Lisa are there, studying). “It sure is,” Sunny said, flippantly, “and you just need that hot boyfriend of yours to spank it out of you.” “No,” I winced, “that’s not true.” “Ooo! I love this song” Lisa said, as ‘try’ by BETWEEN FRIENDS began to play on our Echos. . . *Songs for this: this is what falling in love feels like by JVKE golden hour by JVKE* . . Our cast Sunny, (suitemate) 21, a (pre-med) molecular, cellular, and developmental biology major, is a cowgirl from Nebraska (seriously, she has a quarter horse and barrel races). She’s an outspoken fem-facing ladies-lady. Lisa, (roommate) 21, my bff and a high society princess, who grew up in a 50th floor Central Park South high-rise. A (pre-med) molecular biophysics and biochemistry major. Your author, a simple, multinational, upper-crust, trust-fund baby from Athens, Georgia who's also a molecular biophysics and biochemistry major (pre-med).
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It is a perfectly formed teardrop; or the gold of an autumnal leaf; it is the first apple or peach blossom of spring. It is the sight of a rainbow to a child; or the sight of the child itself observing that rainbow for the first time. A miracle is the sight of a loved one beside me when I awake. It is her hand in mine to still that ache. Yet Hume would have us believe that miracles do violate the laws of nature. O, so not so! For me the laws of nature are the miracle. To know that season follows season is the awe. And those who despise reason to favour faith are merely self-deluded fools. Not for me the accusation of the psalm that would make me a fool for disbelieving god. That I abandon faith and choose instead to reason with my brain thus verifies belief. It is as hard for the believer to abandon a belief as for a man of science to discard old laws. But moral values are self-evident. I do not need an act of faith to emphasise A moral code. It is enough to know that I am one with all humankind and whatever touches another, touches also me. I seek no vague salvation; no sweetmeat in the sky; it is enough to hold most dear what is simply “I”. We’ve wandered far from miracles, from acts of faith and such, but life itself’s miraculous e’en to a worthless wretch.
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Oct 5, 2014
Oct 5, 2014 at 1:01 PM UTC
WHAT IS A MIRACLE?
I think stars have heard more secrets Than any pair of human ears, They’re trusted with our troubles And are the guards of all of fears. Perhaps we share with them our sorrows For they too have known the night, Yet they’ve learnt to let the darkness Simply emphasise their light…!
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Mar 30, 2022
Mar 30, 2022 at 2:15 PM UTC
Secret keepers
The eyes always my first point of contact Can make my heart contract They can make me foolishly act that’s a known fact It’s not a smile that will me beguile but a twinkle in an eye that I espy They say eyes are the reflections of the soul maybe that can explain to me their romantic role A wink, a blink can make my confidence rise or sink I lose all ability to think If you like me stare, flirt, emphasise whatever you want just use your eyes They have the power to hypnotise
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Apr 12, 2013
Apr 12, 2013 at 6:47 AM UTC
It's All In The Eyes
I wish to paint you with words, And write about you with feelings But I fail to depict the depth that exists in your eyes. So, I capture the moment by photographing every move that you make. I scrutinize every small detail Of how you laugh and how you smile How the colour of the sun reflects in your eyes, How the smell of coffee gets you happy and enticed. How the sound of my voice makes you feel alive. I photograph you in black and white; To bring forth the kind soul that lies inside I study every aspect in your life, As if you're the subject of my never ending strife I illustrate your passion in perfect light, Emphasise on how your breath hitches as you sing along your favourite lines.. I trace the image with quivering hands and critical eyes Admiring your toothy grin and your crazy hairstyle. I compile the pictures and bring the masterpiece to life, Leave you with a Thank You note without saying Goodbye. For you weren't just my temporary muse or a beautiful yet fleeting view in sight You were the eternal moment of ethereal bliss forever stored in my mind.
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Feb 15, 2017
Feb 15, 2017 at 4:56 PM UTC
Photograph
Let's take a few days I said Day one those eyes still impose in memory But space is good to know what's what Gives me a chance to write how I feel There's a mess of feelings around you As you clatter my routine out of shape Change the flavour of the tea in my cup And insist on a stretch of the legs You know I want too This relationship is a fresh scent in the air, true A tangling of warm fun and playfulness Along with deeper dissection as we pick apart our pasts But there's something I wonder about sometimes Something that worries me I've kept the house of cards growing through paper triangles Wondering whether it would ever bubble into gold When you wander in the way of everything I'm ready to drop it all for lightest brush of skin Yet the house should grow for you You seem to guide my ambition There was a desire before, a boom and bust emotion But you lull it into consistency, emphasise it's value Something that becomes all the more daunting If it's something I fail As I try to temper the teenager who wants to touch you With the steadfast soldier, whose desire it is to build our castle I start to see the balance, a tranquility to my mirror image One that you've sent exciting and scary ripples through Such change you've made, and we've only just started Where have you been?
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Oct 19, 2017
Oct 19, 2017 at 6:11 PM UTC
Where have you been?
If I may be allowed to be rhetorical In matters spiritual or metaphorical, I have a little parable to tell. And if permitted to wax somewhat lyrical I’d count it no less than a flaming miracle If my words chanced to cast a magic spell. You make the sunshine When clouds fill the sky; You make the flowers bloom Where deserts are dry; You expand my mind With thoughts dear and clear; And fill up my heart Whenever you’re near. And now if I may choose to be empirical And build a dream that’s simply atmospherical, To emphasise the points you’ve overheard. They’re really not the least bit evangelical Or even meant to drive someone hysterical, As long as you’re both shaken up and stirred. You light up my face Whenever you smile; To see it I’d walk Full many a mile. I’d go anywhere For beauty so fair; Honesty so true, Fidelity rare. So, summing up a treatise categorical, And drawing to a close this tale historical I’ll add one chorus to this final word. In case for you it has been too intense, I call Attention to much other verse nonsensical And lyrics that are equally absurd. My verses avoid June rhyming with moon; Search much as you will You’ll not find a “spoon”. And hard as you try You simply won’t swoon Over a songster Whose style is to croon. My task completed has not been incandescent But is rather now revealed as evanescent. And certainly it was not made of chrome. So set aside these verses allegorical; I hope you didn’t seek the Delphic oracle; It’s time to pack up and to just go home.
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Nov 21, 2014
Nov 21, 2014 at 11:49 AM UTC
LIBRETTO LACKING MUSIC
If I may be allowed to be rhetorical In matters spiritual or metaphorical, I have a little parable to tell. And if permitted to wax somewhat lyrical I’d count it no less than a flaming miracle If my words chanced to cast a magic spell. You make the sunshine When clouds fill the sky; You make the flowers bloom Where deserts are dry; You expand my mind With thoughts dear and clear; And fill up my heart Whenever you’re near. And now if I may choose to be empirical And build a dream that’s simply atmospherical, To emphasise the points you’ve overheard. They’re really not the least bit evangelical Or even meant to drive someone hysterical, As long as you’re both shaken up and stirred. You light up my face Whenever you smile; To see it I’d walk Full many a mile. I’d go anywhere For beauty so fair; Honesty so true, Fidelity rare. So, summing up a treatise categorical, And drawing to a close this tale historical I’ll add one chorus to this final word. In case for you it has been too intense, I call Attention to much other verse nonsensical And lyrics that are equally absurd. My verses avoid June rhyming with moon; Search much as you will You’ll not find a “spoon”. And hard as you try You simply won’t swoon Over a songster Whose style is to croon. My task completed has not been incandescent But is rather now revealed as evanescent. And certainly it was not made of chrome. So set aside these verses allegorical; I hope you didn’t seek the Delphic oracle; It’s time to pack up and to just go home.
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I think I was lost, The moment I laid eyes on you. How very embarrassing. I even, For a time, Tried to sing like you, Talk like you, Imitated your slight french accent. For six years, I watched you- Not like a creeper. Ok, Probably like an utter creeper. I didn't just watch, though, We did converse. Many times, Through the years. Those exchanges mainly served to emphasise Your other-ness, to show to me That manic pixie dream-girl quality of yours, Those hyper-widened large blue eyes, Which seemed always a mask, but perhaps, You were just that much the woodland creature. The Luna to my Hermione, Or the Persephone to my Hades...? I carried hope, once. Completely unfounded, mind, But in quiet moments, As I looked at you, like Peter Pan at Mrs Darling, I thought I glimpsed a kiss in the corner of your mouth, And was that my name on it? Perhaps I am foolish still- Picking over past interactions, for a thread- To pull on, that might lead me- To some hidden aspect of you, which may, Or may not exist. But you still go around like there's something missing from your life, And sometimes, I think of those old impressions, and for a moment I fancy- It might be me.
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Mar 29, 2018
Mar 29, 2018 at 7:38 AM UTC
Sky Blue
You would stare if I were beautiful but I offend your eyes sideways glances emphasise how afraid you are to look confront that fear head on people like me even exist you sympathise of course goes without saying, terrible must be awful to live with then you check your fingers and toes, see how perfect they are and move on, no more ugliness today to spoil your mood.
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Oct 3, 2019
Oct 3, 2019 at 7:20 PM UTC
Ugly