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"impressively" poems
the art of poetry     like any art produces better work when writers are not only erudite but also smart the lovers' painful state upon loss or desertion is voiced much more impressively with less dramatic flourish and more of the grate that finishes the sword at the old blacksmith's fire where the hot flame of our desire     thrown into water with a defiant hiss turns into deadly steel ready to **** and ******      friend or foe or lover in our desperate search      for exits from the mire or take the unexpected loss     of victory that seemed so close     on a wild battlefield when suddenly the hero's gallant steed     falls victim to a hostile archers shot and its proud rider is reduced to shout "A kingdom for a horse!" rather than holding a long monologue     about the treachery of fate in  short less is oft' more and lets the readers fill the empty spaces with their own images and graces
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Jan 14, 2016
Jan 14, 2016 at 5:23 PM UTC
art of poetry
Quaking Earth shattering Revolting And I'm in the middle of it My heart is at least I didn't realize or notice that it got so big able to lumber out of my chest I guess that's ok because I can't do anything about it Just like I couldn't do anything about the fire rising up behind "me" You aren't with me I don't get to hear your laugh anymore Sprinkling down through ivy covered walls You aren't with me I've realized that a lot But I also realize that when I get up in the morning Or in most cases never going to sleep to begin with The moon a lovely Complicit pale lover Never questioning me Never worrying me Listening when I need to talk And instead of telling me what to do Or telling me what I'm doing wrong it just listens I knew it wasn't a mistake when I fell for your pale face It was a mistake when I started liking someone Who's face didn't stay impressively passive when looking at me It was a mistake to fall out of orbit For someone who never wanted to be free From the confines of gravity To  come into my sky You know sometimes I can still see your shadow Just out of the corner of my eye The way your hair would fall How your eyes would even enrapture the sun You aren't mine anymore But the sun still deigns to rise And the moon still loves me I can't get back the love and adoration I gave you over the past five years And as I said I still see your shadow sometimes But you aren't mine And that's ok Because even though you never cared About being the meteor that knocked me out of orbit I still cared about you being happy Even when it wasn't with me Even when it isn't with me And each day since I've gotten off of the ground More and more So thanks For the broken insecurities For the things that I never wanted Thanks for submerging me into a vat Made out of stress and emotional pain Thanks For the new sense of orbit And the new outlook And that sometimes Dreams shatter Possibilities shatter But that's ok Because when they shatter The fractures Lead to new doors
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Jul 18, 2018
Jul 18, 2018 at 2:02 AM UTC
Shattered Love
Quaking Earth shattering Revolting And I'm in the middle of it My heart is at least I didn't realize or notice that it got so big able to lumber out of my chest I guess that's ok because I can't do anything about it Just like I couldn't do anything about the fire rising up behind "me" You aren't with me I don't get to hear your laugh anymore Sprinkling down through ivy covered walls You aren't with me I've realized that a lot But I also realize that when I get up in the morning Or in most cases never going to sleep to begin with The moon a lovely Complicit pale lover Never questioning me Never worrying me Listening when I need to talk And instead of telling me what to do Or telling me what I'm doing wrong it just listens I knew it wasn't a mistake when I fell for your pale face It was a mistake when I started liking someone Who's face didn't stay impressively passive when looking at me It was a mistake to fall out of orbit For someone who never wanted to be free From the confines of gravity To  come into my sky You know sometimes I can still see your shadow Just out of the corner of my eye The way your hair would fall How your eyes would even enrapture the sun You aren't mine anymore But the sun still deigns to rise And the moon still loves me I can't get back the love and adoration I gave you over the past five years And as I said I still see your shadow sometimes But you aren't mine And that's ok Because even though you never cared About being the meteor that knocked me out of orbit I still cared about you being happy Even when it wasn't with me Even when it isn't with me And each day since I've gotten off of the ground More and more So thanks For the broken insecurities For the things that I never wanted Thanks for submerging me into a vat Made out of stress and emotional pain Thanks For the new sense of orbit And the new outlook And that sometimes Dreams shatter Possibilities shatter But that's ok Because when they shatter The fractures Lead to new doors
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Growing up, my grandmother always tried to hold me back from the girl I thought was my best friend. Her name was Society. My grandmother made it very clear that I was not to associate with Society and so that is what I did for a while. By the age of 7 I had an impressively large entourage of friends, whose parents also steered clear from Society. We watched movies, made hot chocolate and talked about our hopes and dreams. However just because the light burns bright, doesn't mean it's going to burn forever. By the time I was 11 our coterie had fallen through. The more we grew, the less we would hear our parents. 11 years young, and completely detached. All my friends were now strangers. Society was the only one I had left. I always desired to be equals with her. I tried so hard until there wasn't any ME anymore. I was caught in between fitting in with the world and becoming estranged from myself Society dug up every last seed that all sane adults plant into their children. Mum raised me to believe that every inch, every atom and every molecule inside of me was worthy of love. Society had taught me to pinch and pull at my body, accusing every bump, every scar and every imperfection for being some of the many reasons I was alone. Society led me to rip every mirror off of the walls of my life. "You don't wanna see that" She would whisper. She was wrong until she was right. For every 1 thing I found to love in the reflection, Society would find 3 things to hate. Society had taken the sparkle from my eyes because the other girls couldn't see past the glare. Society silenced the protest in my gut because there weren't enough people on my side but as I moved on to better people I realized she was all a sham
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Apr 9, 2018
Apr 9, 2018 at 5:44 PM UTC
Growing Up With Society
Growing up, my grandmother always tried to hold me back from the girl I thought was my best friend. Her name was Society. My grandmother made it very clear that I was not to associate with Society and so that is what I did for a while. By the age of 7 I had an impressively large entourage of friends, whose parents also steered clear from Society. We watched movies, made hot chocolate and talked about our hopes and dreams. However just because the light burns bright, doesn't mean it's going to burn forever. By the time I was 11 our coterie had fallen through. The more we grew, the less we would hear our parents. 11 years young, and completely detached. All my friends were now strangers. Society was the only one I had left. I always desired to be equals with her. I tried so hard until there wasn't any ME anymore. I was caught in between fitting in with the world and becoming estranged from myself Society dug up every last seed that all sane adults plant into their children. Mum raised me to believe that every inch, every atom and every molecule inside of me was worthy of love. Society had taught me to pinch and pull at my body, accusing every bump, every scar and every imperfection for being some of the many reasons I was alone. Society led me to rip every mirror off of the walls of my life. "You don't wanna see that" She would whisper. She was wrong until she was right. For every 1 thing I found to love in the reflection, Society would find 3 things to hate. Society had taken the sparkle from my eyes because the other girls couldn't see past the glare. Society silenced the protest in my gut because there weren't enough people on my side but as I moved on to better people I realized she was all a sham
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The rhythm of my heart Beats with such musical intensity Can you hear it? So complicated the arrangement Yet impressively expressive To all who listen deeply riveted by the captivating elements of LOVE
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Apr 6, 2015
Apr 6, 2015 at 9:05 AM UTC
The Rhythm Of My Heart
I wish I had was and were in control gained a power over them those wistful verbs with too much to do with my today but if and could are not very likely to cause my words to be more impressively effective at changing anything.
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Mar 26, 2015
Mar 26, 2015 at 2:02 AM UTC
emotive verbs
to the girl whose golden heart was never tarnished despite the afflictions the world allowed her to experience somehow; ♡ — i hope your heart stays the same and will always be aflame for the things you love doing because dear, you are amazing. to the girl whose illustrious mind was never obscured even if she was aching; ♡ — i hope you realize that you are impressively splendid more than any could ever poetize and that your feelings are valid. to the girl whose beautiful soul never stopped blooming like flowers in the spring despite the adversities she has encountered; ♡ — everything you do is always appreciated; and your existence is a tremendous blessing and adds vibrance to this somber world.
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Oct 12, 2018
Oct 12, 2018 at 11:55 AM UTC
to the girl.
Forever and always she made herself stand, holding on to nothing but an ever-fleeting hand Relentlessly holding an already shattered man She blinded herself with his over-sized fans   Impressively outspoken she was nothing like them, she allowed herself to simply comprehend Always will you assume that which you "know," but please understand, this wasn't any puppet show   Never before had she really understood, rhetorically she screamed at the deafening looks Praying for more then a stiff right hook, asking her nicely to move more than a foot   Bending and curling, spinning and twirling, her mother never dreamed one day she'd be swerving silver-tongued, smooth as they come, she found a puppet master with more ammo then guns   One by one he strung them through, he controlled every move she tried to pursue Never did he think his strings could fall loose One day they did and he was left with a noose   Puppet Master, haven't you heard? You cannot put strings on this wild bird She'll shake and **** until she comes untied And when she gets out she'll stay out for life   Tiny dancer, break free of his song, you knew you could do better, all along Remember its true, just believe you are strong And never again can they tell you 'it's wrong.'   Don't stress the small stuff, just move on His strings are hers, and you're better off Believe what you say and say it every day The book can't continue if you don't flip the page
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Sep 17, 2011
Sep 17, 2011 at 6:26 PM UTC
Puppet Master
There it was.. That heightened adventure that looked so bittersweet with all its bliss that I only had the opportunity to witness. So, how would it be to actually feel it? There it was.. Calling my name like a Siren, Telling me to test the waters, Convincing me that it's not too cold. And She was right, It wasn't cold. It hit me, Like the chemical reaction of a lit fire ******* about to pop off and explode into a million tiny pieces. It hit me, Like a dream. I couldn't move but I could see and feel everything around me. Every fiber of my body tingling with electricity, With life. I can do anything. I am Alice in her Wonderland, Exploring another dimension other than my known reality. Dripping, so much drip. I can feel my heart begging for more with each sulfur liquid that slides down my throat. I can feel my mind exploding, taking Her in like somehow She belonged there. My muscles clench, chills circle my legs and make peace on my arms where they claim their seat on this joy ride to insanity. She has made me Her home, And I welcomed Her, a stranger, to do with me as She pleases. An hour, maybe 2? She is drifting, like a ship sailing away to sea. "Don't let me leave" I hear Her whisper. She is fading, fading too far out of reach. "Stay with me" She pleads, but I can barely hear her now. I can't let Her go. Up! Up is where I find Her. I feel Her coming, Running back into my veins. Into my heart she crawls. I can hear Her now, calling my mind to join this facade She has impressively created. Not calling, but screaming. Screaming so loud that I can't help but give in to Her game. I'm rolling. Rolling like a ball thrown down and endless street with no destination, no obligation to stop. "I belong here" She screams, grabbing ahold of my soul and intertwining Her fingers with mine like I am Hers for the taking. (I am Hers..) Lights invade my eyes. Bright colors like the 4th of July. I feel like I am falling. (Am I falling?) Numbness wraps around me, grabbing at my legs and knocking me down. I'm being thrown in and out between realization and this fantasy but in that realization I see that it is Her. She is taking hold of my chest, my mind. I can't think about anything but this euphoria I am stuck in. Standing on my legs so I can not move She hisses "I have you" If I let her I can die. (Should I let her?) An overdose and I am its host. Her hands close around my throat. (Do I dare let Her squeeze harder?) I push, push through this trip I am so willingly taking and in response She screams in pain. "Come with me" I hear Her say and I stand telling myself I am okay. I will not die today. I will not die today. Molly will not have Her way.
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Oct 24, 2014
Oct 24, 2014 at 4:08 AM UTC
Her.
There it was.. That heightened adventure that looked so bittersweet with all its bliss that I only had the opportunity to witness. So, how would it be to actually feel it? There it was.. Calling my name like a Siren, Telling me to test the waters, Convincing me that it's not too cold. And She was right, It wasn't cold. It hit me, Like the chemical reaction of a lit fire ******* about to pop off and explode into a million tiny pieces. It hit me, Like a dream. I couldn't move but I could see and feel everything around me. Every fiber of my body tingling with electricity, With life. I can do anything. I am Alice in her Wonderland, Exploring another dimension other than my known reality. Dripping, so much drip. I can feel my heart begging for more with each sulfur liquid that slides down my throat. I can feel my mind exploding, taking Her in like somehow She belonged there. My muscles clench, chills circle my legs and make peace on my arms where they claim their seat on this joy ride to insanity. She has made me Her home, And I welcomed Her, a stranger, to do with me as She pleases. An hour, maybe 2? She is drifting, like a ship sailing away to sea. "Don't let me leave" I hear Her whisper. She is fading, fading too far out of reach. "Stay with me" She pleads, but I can barely hear her now. I can't let Her go. Up! Up is where I find Her. I feel Her coming, Running back into my veins. Into my heart she crawls. I can hear Her now, calling my mind to join this facade She has impressively created. Not calling, but screaming. Screaming so loud that I can't help but give in to Her game. I'm rolling. Rolling like a ball thrown down and endless street with no destination, no obligation to stop. "I belong here" She screams, grabbing ahold of my soul and intertwining Her fingers with mine like I am Hers for the taking. (I am Hers..) Lights invade my eyes. Bright colors like the 4th of July. I feel like I am falling. (Am I falling?) Numbness wraps around me, grabbing at my legs and knocking me down. I'm being thrown in and out between realization and this fantasy but in that realization I see that it is Her. She is taking hold of my chest, my mind. I can't think about anything but this euphoria I am stuck in. Standing on my legs so I can not move She hisses "I have you" If I let her I can die. (Should I let her?) An overdose and I am its host. Her hands close around my throat. (Do I dare let Her squeeze harder?) I push, push through this trip I am so willingly taking and in response She screams in pain. "Come with me" I hear Her say and I stand telling myself I am okay. I will not die today. I will not die today. Molly will not have Her way.
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My thoughts are merely a tangle of non-conformant chemicals in an ultra-responsive setting; echoes of scarcely delayed feelings, millimetrically placed and ready to be felt; remnants of cromagnon desires, keeping me occupied, unassuming and tame, while life rolls on silently, reflexively and impressively, with all its humiliating nerve. Rumination is for cows, guppies, and humans alike, and saffrons, sapphires and the snow all reason in their own way, no less conscious than our total unconsciousness. Like a rock or plant, man is authoritatively ignorant of his ignorance, and in his metaphysical realism lives and loves and dies, without a clue that he never lived, never loved and was perpetually dead. Thought’s true thought is to block awareness by darkening the place where true awareness lies. We think therefore we think: to god (I mean exact-Nature) no other valid reason exists. We conveniently overrate rationality in self-serving cycles of chronic urgency and folly, leaving us continually stuck to our cyclic fate. Life is Nature’s grunt or roar (whatever and the same) all just a sound, faint or not. We are unsubstantial and chimerical animals by excellence, and in the circle inside the box we live in, our fancy appears really real.   As a feeling awaits its chemical fate, in the millimetric second that lingers, whole worlds are imagined, and our universe and all is perceived: violence, joy, depression, hope, and unbearable pain are unleashed, cities are wanted, planned and assembled, while man, impeccably and in turns, plays god, king and beggar, and true lives, true loves and true deities are born. As man progresses (i.e. transgresses his own nature) and as he overcomes thought, word and feeling, he ceases to be restrictively alive: he is released, he is now free. Thought stands alongside feeling, without communication nor vibration, and gradually and painfully amalgamate into a new corrosive mix, directly eating into spirit, flesh, and understanding, until our wholeness wholly disintegrates.   The world as we know it folds upon itself,  layer by layer, in an inner spectacle of perfect annihilation and renewal. The chasm separating man from himself contracts (eventually to nil) and man plunges from the edge of this last plank (4). As he falls, in mid-flight, the ultimate metamorphosis occurs, and an übermensch is born.
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May 5, 2012
May 5, 2012 at 4:04 PM UTC
Awareness (level 5 of 7)
My thoughts are merely a tangle of non-conformant chemicals in an ultra-responsive setting; echoes of scarcely delayed feelings, millimetrically placed and ready to be felt; remnants of cromagnon desires, keeping me occupied, unassuming and tame, while life rolls on silently, reflexively and impressively, with all its humiliating nerve. Rumination is for cows, guppies, and humans alike, and saffrons, sapphires and the snow all reason in their own way, no less conscious than our total unconsciousness. Like a rock or plant, man is authoritatively ignorant of his ignorance, and in his metaphysical realism lives and loves and dies, without a clue that he never lived, never loved and was perpetually dead. Thought’s true thought is to block awareness by darkening the place where true awareness lies. We think therefore we think: to god (I mean exact-Nature) no other valid reason exists. We conveniently overrate rationality in self-serving cycles of chronic urgency and folly, leaving us continually stuck to our cyclic fate. Life is Nature’s grunt or roar (whatever and the same) all just a sound, faint or not. We are unsubstantial and chimerical animals by excellence, and in the circle inside the box we live in, our fancy appears really real.   As a feeling awaits its chemical fate, in the millimetric second that lingers, whole worlds are imagined, and our universe and all is perceived: violence, joy, depression, hope, and unbearable pain are unleashed, cities are wanted, planned and assembled, while man, impeccably and in turns, plays god, king and beggar, and true lives, true loves and true deities are born. As man progresses (i.e. transgresses his own nature) and as he overcomes thought, word and feeling, he ceases to be restrictively alive: he is released, he is now free. Thought stands alongside feeling, without communication nor vibration, and gradually and painfully amalgamate into a new corrosive mix, directly eating into spirit, flesh, and understanding, until our wholeness wholly disintegrates.   The world as we know it folds upon itself,  layer by layer, in an inner spectacle of perfect annihilation and renewal. The chasm separating man from himself contracts (eventually to nil) and man plunges from the edge of this last plank (4). As he falls, in mid-flight, the ultimate metamorphosis occurs, and an übermensch is born.
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Fighting for Freedom Not my freedom mine is not the ludicrous "Freedom" you all worship Not the steroid enhanced the technologically advanced the impressively entrancing Spiteful, Ignorant all-knowing, all-hating "Freedom" that empowers you all to fear anything different. The "Freedom" that entitles you all to subdue or eliminate everything "not you", Rather, Anyone seen as a threat to the mind-numbing culture created by your "Freedom" What Freedom?
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Jan 7, 2011
Jan 7, 2011 at 12:41 PM UTC
No-spine
You say you've got it all figured out, got the science down at age nine-teen. I roll my eyes, because that's just silly. I'm older than you by a year at least, but regardless, I watch you hitch your skirt up and strap your heels on before leaving the house. You think I'm crazy to stay around only to meander about in my fuzzy socks and stained sweatshirt. I'll have you know that I actually quite enjoy my one-women tea parties with Ms. Austin and the Bronte girls on a Friday night. At least I won't get a head ache from strobe-lights and my utter confusion when it comes to pretty-looking cocktails. I realize I probably won't be seeing you until midmorning anyway when you stumble rather impressively into the kitchens still in your club clothes. You'll make a disgusted noise at my pillow fort, my coloring books, my towering stack of certifiable Disney DVDS and I will pretend not to notice that you smell like stale sweat, alcohol, and aftershave. You will feel compelled to tell me all about him, all about them, all about all of last night--down to the last disturbing detail--and I will burry my face in my cereal so you can't see the faces I'm making. Undoubtedly you are bragging (or so you think), but really, I'd rather not have had so-and-so pawing at me all night, because neither you nor I know where he's been, and I personally find no appeal in waking up in someone else's unfamiliar room because my comforter is super soft and fluffy and I feel like a princess when I go to bed all clean and cute in my PJs. This way I can get up whenever I want and take a shower and be loud and not have to put the seat up when I *** or quietly try and find my way out of someone else's home. Also, I'm lazy most of the time so I definitely wouldn't like the walk home so early in the day. I have to say that I much prefer my crayons to your aspirin, my forts to your mysterious bathrooms, my imaginary sword fights to your hike home. Most importantly, I like waking up regretting nothing the previous the night except that I didn't get to watch all of Mulan and what her reflection really shows.
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Feb 2, 2013
Feb 2, 2013 at 1:51 AM UTC
Personal Preferance
You say you've got it all figured out, got the science down at age nine-teen. I roll my eyes, because that's just silly. I'm older than you by a year at least, but regardless, I watch you hitch your skirt up and strap your heels on before leaving the house. You think I'm crazy to stay around only to meander about in my fuzzy socks and stained sweatshirt. I'll have you know that I actually quite enjoy my one-women tea parties with Ms. Austin and the Bronte girls on a Friday night. At least I won't get a head ache from strobe-lights and my utter confusion when it comes to pretty-looking cocktails. I realize I probably won't be seeing you until midmorning anyway when you stumble rather impressively into the kitchens still in your club clothes. You'll make a disgusted noise at my pillow fort, my coloring books, my towering stack of certifiable Disney DVDS and I will pretend not to notice that you smell like stale sweat, alcohol, and aftershave. You will feel compelled to tell me all about him, all about them, all about all of last night--down to the last disturbing detail--and I will burry my face in my cereal so you can't see the faces I'm making. Undoubtedly you are bragging (or so you think), but really, I'd rather not have had so-and-so pawing at me all night, because neither you nor I know where he's been, and I personally find no appeal in waking up in someone else's unfamiliar room because my comforter is super soft and fluffy and I feel like a princess when I go to bed all clean and cute in my PJs. This way I can get up whenever I want and take a shower and be loud and not have to put the seat up when I *** or quietly try and find my way out of someone else's home. Also, I'm lazy most of the time so I definitely wouldn't like the walk home so early in the day. I have to say that I much prefer my crayons to your aspirin, my forts to your mysterious bathrooms, my imaginary sword fights to your hike home. Most importantly, I like waking up regretting nothing the previous the night except that I didn't get to watch all of Mulan and what her reflection really shows.
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the drunken dancer mingling between selves a cocktail party for her pieces her hips- rhythm her mind- beats. a bit of elixir to smooth out the kinks to rust through the chains to flood through the pristine valleys detached and forever in(dependent) on the music on her self on her longing for growth only stars are supposed to explode like this. not for the others though they stare impressively shocked mindfully drooling overwhelmed by her unknown disconnecting disintegration. she is a movement she is a self she is unwinding her taste for freedom hemorrhaging out covering her covering the night in gold. you have to know this feeling for Dionysus himself watches and laughs.
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Mar 28, 2013
Mar 28, 2013 at 3:49 PM UTC
the ******
Breathless . . . Heaving . . . Sputtering . . . Many more steps to go. Hardened feet. No longer are my steps maligned by stabs of blood. Condemnation . . . Damnation . . . Corruption . . . My seasoned back launches into my perennial burden. And another step I take. Into an inevitable future of drudgery. Hope . . . Exoneration . . . Absolution . . . Have long been forgotten. Their burnt ashes adorn my forehead. My shoulder screams ahead, into the weight it upholds. Rumble . . . Rumble . . . Rumble . . . Each step like the millions before it, thrusts the stone another foot towards the jagged peak that towers impressively up ahead. Dum Da De . . . Dum Da Doo . . . Dum De Da Dum . . . And the day goes on. Dum Da De . . . Dum Da Doo . . . Dum De Da Dum . . . And the night lives long. Breathless . . . Heaving . . . Sputtering . . . My war-torn muscles relax. And the stone sits. Stares at the valley below. Lightning . . . Rain . . . Thunder . . . The wind caresses and cajoles, And the stone rolls down below, echoing Thor’s exclamations And my heart leaps with joy. After all, there will be another day. And my feet have hardened anyway. Ha Ha . . . Ha Ha . . . Ha Ha . . .
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Dec 14, 2016
Dec 14, 2016 at 10:03 AM UTC
***** Sisyphus
I was twisting a water bottle Shredding the label with my fingernails And keeping it away from your enthusiastic dog I’d been here before And I would be here again Holding back tears as an unlikely friend held me together I had too many loose ends And you tied knots with an engineer’s efficiency For all your teasing I’d never realized you were a nice guy Taking me in like the silly wretch that I was And letting me stay until I felt I could hold my head up again I convinced myself I had you figured out Tall and tough but secretly compassionate A closet empath who impressively tossed words around a notebook page I let everything bouncing around in my head Tumble out into your scarred hands And I assumed you had done the same So that I could finally see the truth trapped in that lofty mind It’s funny I’ve come to realize that I never really knew you the way I thought I did You’ve always played a concealed hand Showing me the occasional queen of hearts But only when you wanted me to see It’s disappointing Because you know me too well I dissected my heart muscles so you could read the struggles scrawled across them Sitting in your kitchen All those days I showed you all the insecurities etched across my skin Raw and red and burning with the desperation To be noticed I wish I could have taken some of your scars In exchange for all my scribbles You patiently accepted all the scraps of myself I tossed at you And I wanted to return the favor I wanted to read whatever you had penned across your ventricles I wanted you to flay open your mind so that I might understand I may have wanted too much of you Forgetting that not everyone is a frenetic tangle of feelings Forgetting that I’m just a frazzled, insignificant girl Who wants to save the world on force of will alone Sitting in your kitchen From time to time You told me you believed in me So I believed I could do it I only wish I’d known enough to do the same for you
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Mar 28, 2011
Mar 28, 2011 at 5:02 PM UTC
I've Never Properly Thanked You
I was twisting a water bottle Shredding the label with my fingernails And keeping it away from your enthusiastic dog I’d been here before And I would be here again Holding back tears as an unlikely friend held me together I had too many loose ends And you tied knots with an engineer’s efficiency For all your teasing I’d never realized you were a nice guy Taking me in like the silly wretch that I was And letting me stay until I felt I could hold my head up again I convinced myself I had you figured out Tall and tough but secretly compassionate A closet empath who impressively tossed words around a notebook page I let everything bouncing around in my head Tumble out into your scarred hands And I assumed you had done the same So that I could finally see the truth trapped in that lofty mind It’s funny I’ve come to realize that I never really knew you the way I thought I did You’ve always played a concealed hand Showing me the occasional queen of hearts But only when you wanted me to see It’s disappointing Because you know me too well I dissected my heart muscles so you could read the struggles scrawled across them Sitting in your kitchen All those days I showed you all the insecurities etched across my skin Raw and red and burning with the desperation To be noticed I wish I could have taken some of your scars In exchange for all my scribbles You patiently accepted all the scraps of myself I tossed at you And I wanted to return the favor I wanted to read whatever you had penned across your ventricles I wanted you to flay open your mind so that I might understand I may have wanted too much of you Forgetting that not everyone is a frenetic tangle of feelings Forgetting that I’m just a frazzled, insignificant girl Who wants to save the world on force of will alone Sitting in your kitchen From time to time You told me you believed in me So I believed I could do it I only wish I’d known enough to do the same for you
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All our senses concatenate, building on each other <> this interplay is truly interplanetary, for each of us a unique solar system, our brains, intricacy literally personified, and our five senses, working in concatenation our long range sensors, busy bees compiling inputs by the nanosecond second, distilling, integrating. blending and then reconstructing…into a whole! *a gentle breeze ruffles the hair, the tree swing rises and flows of its own accord, no passported passenger required, and a neighbor’s American Flag, moves majestically & impressively, whipping, dancing, yes, prancing to a tune only it can hear, the syncopated air currents providing a rhythmic awesome inspiring beat…* and the brain takes this all in, a momentary second of a vista that is constantly flexing, yet remains unchanged, a muscular view of a real world, living but yet immutable, and I utter thanks to my motor functions, that bless me with the eyes to perceive, the nostrils to smell sea salt flavored air, the hearing ears that the know the imperceptible orchestrations of silences by their absence and their intrusion, and I touch my fingertips to my tongue, wetted, and hyper sensitized to that gentle breeze that decorates the landscapes external, *and the combinatory addition of the all of it, into a single momentary poem of recall, what I “knew” yesterday, & will greet again this coming day, as an old unfamiliar friend, who grasps me entire, and proclaims: this is living…and the greatest satisfaction that a speck of mortal can achieve, retain and through impoverished words…share* 4:14am Mon Jul 22 2 0 2 4
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Jul 22, 2024
Jul 22, 2024 at 4:25 AM UTC
All our senses concatenate, building on each other...
All our senses concatenate, building on each other <> this interplay is truly interplanetary, for each of us a unique solar system, our brains, intricacy literally personified, and our five senses, working in concatenation our long range sensors, busy bees compiling inputs by the nanosecond second, distilling, integrating. blending and then reconstructing…into a whole! *a gentle breeze ruffles the hair, the tree swing rises and flows of its own accord, no passported passenger required, and a neighbor’s American Flag, moves majestically & impressively, whipping, dancing, yes, prancing to a tune only it can hear, the syncopated air currents providing a rhythmic awesome inspiring beat…* and the brain takes this all in, a momentary second of a vista that is constantly flexing, yet remains unchanged, a muscular view of a real world, living but yet immutable, and I utter thanks to my motor functions, that bless me with the eyes to perceive, the nostrils to smell sea salt flavored air, the hearing ears that the know the imperceptible orchestrations of silences by their absence and their intrusion, and I touch my fingertips to my tongue, wetted, and hyper sensitized to that gentle breeze that decorates the landscapes external, *and the combinatory addition of the all of it, into a single momentary poem of recall, what I “knew” yesterday, & will greet again this coming day, as an old unfamiliar friend, who grasps me entire, and proclaims: this is living…and the greatest satisfaction that a speck of mortal can achieve, retain and through impoverished words…share* 4:14am Mon Jul 22 2 0 2 4
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I was obsequious towards you.... opening up to you, I was an impressively sedulous suitor, Didn't I constantly show my love; like a doting concubine, yet never was I supposed to. Did things I'd never wish to again do, You were always lethargic returning any affections. You're  constantly an exorbitantly  cruel lover, on too many occasions you've left me; feeling, clinging, wishing & praying that your bitter tortures -  would end. Morbidly I'd crave you like a killer craves the death of his victim's. Oh there's no end, no relapse or realse, my tormentor, my seemingly drug of choice--is you! I  sincerely felt a cordial love & dislike for how you've had me susceptible to this elegiac experience. Unmerciful you cast away my heart and dealt my soul a mighty blow. NEVER again  would I be your willing victim,  you're  antipathies & archaic behavior  leaves me wishing for a way out, since you've made me seem more like the enemy. This love's a beautiful beast & so oblivious to my demise... I'm still obligated.... I've vowed to stay, fight comes what may...   yet & still You make it clear I'm disqualified before a race could ever be won..... Why? My questions unanswered as if I've never vocalized a retort! IVE COME TO REALIZE THERE'S NO HOPE FOR ME ☆♡ Always Me Ayeshah ™ ®          K.A.C.L.N ©      All right reserved ® Copyright 1977 - Present
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Sep 8, 2015
Sep 8, 2015 at 8:03 AM UTC
♡☆THERE'S NO HOPE FOR ME☆♡
overwhelming sadness to embarrassment frustration to embarrassment again forgiveness it does not make sense to those around me so I would rather bury bury bury my overwhelming sadness to not have to convince impress prove that I can move past beyond away from the first time I saw her but actually it was the first time Ive ever been seen and my heart with all its will it became as if vulnerable took over the world all of the sudden existence feeling experience love the first and only time she would ever prove impress upon me the invincible human being that we are the same I will miss you no matter how close no matter how far without dissociation I do what matters most I will have to be reborn opportunities to sense new feelings forever but I will still miss you rebirth after rebirth rebirth before rebirth the first time I had a purpose meaning feeling not negating stutus quo or agreeing to be it Im sorry that I allowed you to have this journey I hope you can be strong I know you can I love you more than anything always could express my sensitivity creatively impressively gracefully terrified now when my sensitiveness is pouring out of me for all to see like a heart without a body expressionless cold crying mourning after a lucid nightmare and you are no where the sadness is crippling but I should be healed at the least do what is expected further overwhelmed unstoppable in vulnerable’s world sadness is the ruler
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Mar 10, 2017
Mar 10, 2017 at 5:17 PM UTC
In Vulnerable's World
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Sep 22, 2015
Sep 22, 2015 at 1:17 PM UTC
HELLO POETRY.COM
Wonders what you may think of me Did you feel it? A slight tremor in the puddle of consciousness I! ME! MY! Mother and father. School. Society. Impressively the walls were built Brick by brick lain in ignorance. It is just that subtle. The voice whispering in the mind Who are you? Enlightened to my own selfishness A sense of meaninglessness I shall overcome. I will walk the path of my choosing, and if any other (soul) shall join me I will share my allotted portion of love that this universe has granted me The ego shed IwasworriedaboutajobandagirlfriendandifImattertoanyoneatall The walls crumble and I am free now to taste beauty of each moment.
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Jan 4, 2013
Jan 4, 2013 at 1:59 PM UTC
The Ego
You demand that we stop waving our arms about While talking or whenever I do the 3-legged downward dog That reminds you of being abused in another life I know you recognize the delivery man as the abuser Who you bark at fiercely, relentlessly Just as you always growl jealously at Hazel, our neighbor's dog, Despite her best efforts to be your friend I see the wolf in your eyes when you're stalking lizards Running, unleashed, leaping impressively from a standstill Unsupervised in what substitutes poorly for wilder places In our Florida backyard You stare accusingly whenever I talk on the phone Demanding to be heard, too You hear and smell things I cannot imagine Long before they reach my ordinary ears and nose I see you cannot stop digging that hole Next to the patio in my wild grasses garden You eat the finest organic dog food But prefer something dead on the path During your afternoon jog to the beach With Bill, so dismayed, that you enjoy smelly rolling Though you endure your punishment, a scrubbing in the shower Just to cuddle with Bill on the couch all clean and loved I command you to COME HERE when doing yardwork Ignoring me, you trot off towards Federal Highway Or slip through the hedge when I’m weeding-you're a wily one Hoping for wolf adventures like the ones in your dreams Those that turn scary, maybe you get pounced on When you're making terrifying yelping sounds And trembling uncontrollably Waking us all up, leaping up on the bed Scooching to a safe haven between us Beseeching, "Hold me, squeeze me, say it's OK for me to be here!" Hugging you Bill says, "It's OK, there there, he's a good doggie."
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Mar 13, 2016
Mar 13, 2016 at 10:29 PM UTC
Buddy, Our Rescue Dog
You demand that we stop waving our arms about While talking or whenever I do the 3-legged downward dog That reminds you of being abused in another life I know you recognize the delivery man as the abuser Who you bark at fiercely, relentlessly Just as you always growl jealously at Hazel, our neighbor's dog, Despite her best efforts to be your friend I see the wolf in your eyes when you're stalking lizards Running, unleashed, leaping impressively from a standstill Unsupervised in what substitutes poorly for wilder places In our Florida backyard You stare accusingly whenever I talk on the phone Demanding to be heard, too You hear and smell things I cannot imagine Long before they reach my ordinary ears and nose I see you cannot stop digging that hole Next to the patio in my wild grasses garden You eat the finest organic dog food But prefer something dead on the path During your afternoon jog to the beach With Bill, so dismayed, that you enjoy smelly rolling Though you endure your punishment, a scrubbing in the shower Just to cuddle with Bill on the couch all clean and loved I command you to COME HERE when doing yardwork Ignoring me, you trot off towards Federal Highway Or slip through the hedge when I’m weeding-you're a wily one Hoping for wolf adventures like the ones in your dreams Those that turn scary, maybe you get pounced on When you're making terrifying yelping sounds And trembling uncontrollably Waking us all up, leaping up on the bed Scooching to a safe haven between us Beseeching, "Hold me, squeeze me, say it's OK for me to be here!" Hugging you Bill says, "It's OK, there there, he's a good doggie."
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You're devastatingly spectacular and I'm impressively subpar. We are like the sun and moon, we cannot exist under the same sky in unison but rather a shooting star merely crossing paths under brevity as we soar in our solo sky.
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Jan 8, 2015
Jan 8, 2015 at 9:09 PM UTC
The moon and the sun
every mattress is an opportunity every location every patch of grass or mud puddle i could kiss you anywhere -it's june 16th i guess and my teen angst has a mind of its own in the sense that i'm ridiculous but also trying to use it as validation that i might just need to take care of myself or maybe tell a doctor that i feel like lighting my arm on fire sometimes. I'm convinced it's normal (because it is)
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Jun 16, 2015
Jun 16, 2015 at 1:08 AM UTC
impressively bratty, i hope you picture me with a sucker in my mouth
I love the way you put your stupid hipster glasses on the collar of your band t-shirts to fix your straight yet messy brown hair that you haven't washed in a week with a thick black hair tie that you hate to wear on your wrist when you don't need it because it's so bulky so you put it in your front pocket next to two strips of emergency gum and a can of altiods which you finish in a day and replace at night I love when you air guitar in the middle of Froyo Joe's most likely to a song on The Front Bottoms CD you're playing on your Walkman you got at that one thrift store and everyone stares at you then stares at me staring at you, smiling and laughing so much. And I love how you bow in the most exaggerated way that anyone could ever possibly bow because you air guitared so impressively (you should definitely start yourself a band) that the unexpecting audience applauded you for that marvelous performance which definitely made their evening And I love the way you look at me in the train car when you're dragging me to the next town because you finally have enough money to go to the little store that has the same name as that one author you love and buy the vintage coat that smells like moths and depression because you want to wear it and feel like a 1923 troubled rich woman during an early midlife crisis. I love when you tell me the things you love about me at 3 a.m. in this diner after you read to me that God-awful poem about a woman who hates shampoo and listens to blue grass during all her classes and we're sitting in this diner where all the food tastes horribly like canola oil and salt and I am immensely in love with you
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Dec 26, 2017
Dec 26, 2017 at 7:29 PM UTC
You of Tenderness The
I love the way you put your stupid hipster glasses on the collar of your band t-shirts to fix your straight yet messy brown hair that you haven't washed in a week with a thick black hair tie that you hate to wear on your wrist when you don't need it because it's so bulky so you put it in your front pocket next to two strips of emergency gum and a can of altiods which you finish in a day and replace at night I love when you air guitar in the middle of Froyo Joe's most likely to a song on The Front Bottoms CD you're playing on your Walkman you got at that one thrift store and everyone stares at you then stares at me staring at you, smiling and laughing so much. And I love how you bow in the most exaggerated way that anyone could ever possibly bow because you air guitared so impressively (you should definitely start yourself a band) that the unexpecting audience applauded you for that marvelous performance which definitely made their evening And I love the way you look at me in the train car when you're dragging me to the next town because you finally have enough money to go to the little store that has the same name as that one author you love and buy the vintage coat that smells like moths and depression because you want to wear it and feel like a 1923 troubled rich woman during an early midlife crisis. I love when you tell me the things you love about me at 3 a.m. in this diner after you read to me that God-awful poem about a woman who hates shampoo and listens to blue grass during all her classes and we're sitting in this diner where all the food tastes horribly like canola oil and salt and I am immensely in love with you
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delicate moths wish to kiss your oxygen-eating fingers, as you gently consume sun-dried limbs of monster-trees. your dear children, born of the plant flesh you disintegrate, dance on the whistling breeze. should one of your young dare to tiptoe on brittle blades of winter-deceased grass, she will grow more impressively than you, her mother. she will indulge in tender gluttony, softly swallowing whole the homes of woodland denizens. conceived of woodpecker houses, her own daughters enter the world, spread their mother's warmth, just as your sweet baby did with yours. and forever you burn.
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Nov 22, 2024
Nov 22, 2024 at 12:08 PM UTC
forest fire
Beautiful flowers grew from behind the house Where never a flower once grew. The wonder was my troubled mind tossed in a long wave of troubled waters.... for never a flower grew in my father's backyard as impressively green to a flourish of protruding beaus of freshly upturned earth. Perhaps thee beautiful flower that sprouts From earth in father's backyard is father Painting flowers on his own piece of  earth. Unbeautiful you death.
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Jul 9, 2016
Jul 9, 2016 at 4:48 PM UTC
The memory of flowers