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One of my favorite animals is a giraffe. They're so awkward and lanky, yet despite their strange appearance there is a a grace in there gallivant; there is a beauty to their mien. They don't flaunt their attributes or covet the patterns of their wildlife peers because they have been graced with the privilege to indulge in the secrets whispered by the leaves amongst the tree tops.
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Feb 20, 2014
Feb 20, 2014 at 10:04 PM UTC
giraffes are underrated
They haunt me when I'm asleep They don't leave me alone when I'm awake Tonight I will be stronger than the demons They wait for me to fall into their land Where they make me Believe anything they say Sleep is overrated Nightmares are underrated Just a couple of hours until the battle is won I will not let you take over tonight Tonight the demons will have to dance alone I will see the moon until it stops shining And I will hear them Calling my name Asking me to dance the dance of Death Tonight my demons will have to dance alone
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Nov 9, 2014
Nov 9, 2014 at 6:45 PM UTC
Nightmares
Demons are just FALLEN ANGELS. They fell From HEAVEN to HELL, And unlike angels, DEMONS have a STORY to tell.
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Nov 8, 2018
Nov 8, 2018 at 1:40 PM UTC
Underrated
The night sky above... Unreached by doves a majestic sight of incomparable light twinkling dusts of shimmering galactic blast I wonder why That this precious night sky was so sadly underrated even noticed, but rarely appreciated I wished you give a minute to take your eyes a treat and you'll see that same night sky I look at when all I've got is to cry That is my eternal canvas where hopes and dreams and lies was scattered in nowhere of fair distances; couldn't even remember the pieces. my metaphor of life, an infinite projection of blithe so tonight, by chance, again I'll watch my night sky then hoping you did too because my methapor of night sky is you
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Mar 1, 2018
Mar 1, 2018 at 7:43 AM UTC
Nightsky
The chocolate digestive is a marvel of invention Custard creams are sickly, but worthy of a mention Shortbread can be gritty, steer clear of the cheap ones For if you love your biscuits, your pockets must be deep ones For perfect dunkability, the hobnob leads the field But prone to going chewy if their packet isn't sealed Bourbon creams can satisfy when nothing else is offered Avert your eyes from pretzels, no matter how they're proffered The lowly Garibaldi is an underrated treasure A macaroon is excellent for eating at your leisure Enjoy the home made cookies and the chocolate crispy nests And save a pack of party rings for fobbing off on guests But biscuits can be functional, with keen survival craft A packet of pink wafers can be used to make a raft Penguins can be hollowed out and used to smuggle crack And if you throw a ginger nut, you'll always get it back A Jaffa cake is handy as a snowboard for a spider And flapjacks are a sustenance and energy provider Wagon wheels are lethal when they're wielded by a ninja Brandy snaps cure cancer with a tiny hint of ginger Experiment with biscuits, they're a versatile thing Try horizontal dunking or the highland shortbread fling Keep a packet stashed away for when the end is nigh And always have the kettle full, and milk in good supply
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Nov 30, 2015
Nov 30, 2015 at 3:20 PM UTC
Ode to Biscuits
Out of sight out of mind, A saying that seems to be underrated, Thought mostly about objects of disgust or stress, And since I've objected to being anything more than an object, This categories fits my life, Even when acting like a faulty car part; the check engine light remains being of little concern, "I'll just drive till it dies" It's just the cost isn't worth it, with all the time we spend in it, Eventually the light turns off, No rhyme or reason just the decision to love unconditionally... Or the The car dies used
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Aug 29, 2018
Aug 29, 2018 at 9:12 AM UTC
Agengda this weekend
far too sober and far too lucid to formulate anything worthwhile but I'm nothing if not stubborn alas it's an underrated virtue
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Mar 12, 2013
Mar 12, 2013 at 9:00 PM UTC
Stubborn
Uhh..Young Ston,.. The ****** Disciple. ..OFTR..Yeah this is Only For The Real dawg..Yeah only for (my real ones,Yeah2)..Yeah..(Ohh3)..Let's do it...Lets go..roll up..yeah roll mo..(Ohh*3)..Yeah let's go.. Uhh..(I just do what I do Yeah2)..I do what I do man..(I just do what I do nigga2)..keeping it gangster & trill man..(Yeah I do what I do man2)..Yeah..(I do what I do..Yeah2)..I just do what I do..Yeah..I do what I do nigga..I just do what I do..Oooo,..(Yeah2)..keeping it gangster & keeping it trill.. Ohh,..(I just do what I do Yeah2)..I just do what I do man,..Yeah I do what I do nigga,..(Yeah I do what I do man2)..I just do what I do nigga..keeping it gangster & keeping it trill..yeah, yeah..keeping it gangster & trill man..that's what I do Yeah,..(thats what I do man,..Yeah2)..keeping it gangster & trill man, Yeah... I do what I do man, I just do what I do man, I just do what I do..(Yeah, keeping it gangsta & keeping it trill*2)..,thats what I do..Yeah I do what I do..Yeah..I just do what I do Yeah.. Yeah I'm staying gangsta , Yeah I'm staying trill nigga..Please excuse me, Yeah I might slip up & say ignorant **** sometimes homie,.. Lord please forgive me..Uhh, I'm changing up hip hop mane, Noo it will never be the same, Yeah its under my control now lames, Aye these ***** *** rappers under mind control, by Satan, they programed to deceive us, they so full of mischeif,yeah they rapping lies to ya just to be famous, so don't follow what seems cool, because they are the white mans trap.. Yeah it's just an illusion dude to fool you, just be yo self dawg, look up to Jesus.. Uhh..(I just do what I do Yeah2)..I do what I do man..(I just do what I do nigga2)..keeping it gangster & trill man..(Yeah I do what I do man2)..Yeah..(I do what I do..Yeah2)..I just do what I do..Yeah..I do what I do nigga..I just do what I do..Oooo,..(Yeah2)..keeping it gangster & keeping it trill.. Ohh,..(I just do what I do Yeah2)..I just do what I do man,..Yeah I do what I do nigga,..(Yeah I do what I do man2)..I just do what I do nigga..keeping it gangster & keeping it trill..yeah, yeah..keeping it gangster & trill man..that's what I do Yeah,..(thats what I do man,..Yeah2)..keeping it gangster & trill man, Yeah... I do what I do man, I just do what I do man, I just do what I do..(Yeah, keeping it gangsta & keeping it trill*2)..,thats what I do..Yeah..I do what I do..Yeah..I just do what I do Yeah.. My dude, just do you, keep it gangster & keep it trill always dawg..Ooo,..I'm wit my family heading to the top of the food chain homie..Yeah we so hungry eating up anybody that try to interfere wit the gang game plan mane..OFTR..We all real gangsters, we move in silence, but still be making alot of noise, like Jeeper Creepers..Uhh We don't die man, we just get bigger & stronger & multiply ***** we all one, we are own army & government..we fully armored.. Yeah OFTR, we keep it so trill, Yeah we keep it so gangster man..,Yeah we underrated but still is the best Yess.., I just want peace yeah man, but don't ever try to take advantage of me..Aye ***** ****** keep thinking **** sweet wit me then yo *** will get busted like a soft ***** in jail man & I mean what I say no facades about me, **** policts homie..Uhh 1..2..3 more versers that I got in me to spit, but Imma keep this song short,..Yeah..This is more than just about nothing, what up to Wale & The whole DMV my nig.. & Shoutout to Shy Glizzy yo man, we gotta collaborate one day, but if you don't wanna, then its cool homie, Yeah it is what it is,..Imma still keep it g wit ya.. Noo, I won't steal yo chain, Imma just keep moving along & just mind my business mane..Ayoo.. I got 1,2,3 pre rolls stuffed that I ain't even had to touch,yo woman came over & did it for me dawg.. Because Imma Thug,Yeah..& she prepared bowls for me too, because Im gangster..Uhh.. I just do what I do keeping it gangster & keep it trill, like a real ***** should..Lets go..Ohh Yeah.. Uhh..(I just do what I do Yeah2)..I do what I do man..(I just do what I do nigga2)..keeping it gangster & trill man..(Yeah I do what I do man2)..Yeah..(I do what I do..Yeah2)..I just do what I do..Yeah..I do what I do nigga..I just do what I do..Oooo,..(Yeah2)..keeping it gangster & keeping it trill.. Ohh,..(I just do what I do Yeah2)..I just do what I do man,..Yeah I do what I do nigga,..(Yeah I do what I do man2)..I just do what I do nigga..keeping it gangster & keeping it trill..yeah, yeah..keeping it gangster & trill man..that's what I do Yeah,..(thats what I do man,..Yeah2)..keeping it gangster & trill man, Yeah... I do what I do man, I just do what I do man, I just do what I do..(Yeah, keeping it gangsta & keeping it trill*2)..thats what I do..Yeah..I do what I do..Yeah..I just do what I do Yeah.. (I do what I do, Yeah*3).., & nobody else can do what I does, Noo, never they ho's, they weak,they soft, even if I send them a verse they could never be Young Ston,..Noo, they can never be down in my gang, Noo they can't smoke or drink wit me, not even yo broad, because she's had you..yo she's infected wit a ***** ***** syndrome.. So noo I don't want the ** for real dawg, Yeah that's for sure..Uhh.. I'm (keeping it trill nigga2) & I'm (keeping it gangster2).. Yeah like I should,Yeah that's for show,..Yeah I'm (keeping it trill nigga2) & I'm (keeping it gangster2)..like that's all I know..that's real, & that's for sure...Oh.. I just do what I do, Yeah I do what I do..I just do what I do,..(I do what I do*2)..I just do what I do.. OFTR (Yeah nigga*3)..Yeah..Young Ston
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Dec 30, 2015
Dec 30, 2015 at 3:42 AM UTC
Ston Poet - Gangster Tunes
Uhh..Young Ston,.. The ****** Disciple. ..OFTR..Yeah this is Only For The Real dawg..Yeah only for (my real ones,Yeah2)..Yeah..(Ohh3)..Let's do it...Lets go..roll up..yeah roll mo..(Ohh*3)..Yeah let's go.. Uhh..(I just do what I do Yeah2)..I do what I do man..(I just do what I do nigga2)..keeping it gangster & trill man..(Yeah I do what I do man2)..Yeah..(I do what I do..Yeah2)..I just do what I do..Yeah..I do what I do nigga..I just do what I do..Oooo,..(Yeah2)..keeping it gangster & keeping it trill.. Ohh,..(I just do what I do Yeah2)..I just do what I do man,..Yeah I do what I do nigga,..(Yeah I do what I do man2)..I just do what I do nigga..keeping it gangster & keeping it trill..yeah, yeah..keeping it gangster & trill man..that's what I do Yeah,..(thats what I do man,..Yeah2)..keeping it gangster & trill man, Yeah... I do what I do man, I just do what I do man, I just do what I do..(Yeah, keeping it gangsta & keeping it trill*2)..,thats what I do..Yeah I do what I do..Yeah..I just do what I do Yeah.. Yeah I'm staying gangsta , Yeah I'm staying trill nigga..Please excuse me, Yeah I might slip up & say ignorant **** sometimes homie,.. Lord please forgive me..Uhh, I'm changing up hip hop mane, Noo it will never be the same, Yeah its under my control now lames, Aye these ***** *** rappers under mind control, by Satan, they programed to deceive us, they so full of mischeif,yeah they rapping lies to ya just to be famous, so don't follow what seems cool, because they are the white mans trap.. Yeah it's just an illusion dude to fool you, just be yo self dawg, look up to Jesus.. Uhh..(I just do what I do Yeah2)..I do what I do man..(I just do what I do nigga2)..keeping it gangster & trill man..(Yeah I do what I do man2)..Yeah..(I do what I do..Yeah2)..I just do what I do..Yeah..I do what I do nigga..I just do what I do..Oooo,..(Yeah2)..keeping it gangster & keeping it trill.. Ohh,..(I just do what I do Yeah2)..I just do what I do man,..Yeah I do what I do nigga,..(Yeah I do what I do man2)..I just do what I do nigga..keeping it gangster & keeping it trill..yeah, yeah..keeping it gangster & trill man..that's what I do Yeah,..(thats what I do man,..Yeah2)..keeping it gangster & trill man, Yeah... I do what I do man, I just do what I do man, I just do what I do..(Yeah, keeping it gangsta & keeping it trill*2)..,thats what I do..Yeah..I do what I do..Yeah..I just do what I do Yeah.. My dude, just do you, keep it gangster & keep it trill always dawg..Ooo,..I'm wit my family heading to the top of the food chain homie..Yeah we so hungry eating up anybody that try to interfere wit the gang game plan mane..OFTR..We all real gangsters, we move in silence, but still be making alot of noise, like Jeeper Creepers..Uhh We don't die man, we just get bigger & stronger & multiply ***** we all one, we are own army & government..we fully armored.. Yeah OFTR, we keep it so trill, Yeah we keep it so gangster man..,Yeah we underrated but still is the best Yess.., I just want peace yeah man, but don't ever try to take advantage of me..Aye ***** ****** keep thinking **** sweet wit me then yo *** will get busted like a soft ***** in jail man & I mean what I say no facades about me, **** policts homie..Uhh 1..2..3 more versers that I got in me to spit, but Imma keep this song short,..Yeah..This is more than just about nothing, what up to Wale & The whole DMV my nig.. & Shoutout to Shy Glizzy yo man, we gotta collaborate one day, but if you don't wanna, then its cool homie, Yeah it is what it is,..Imma still keep it g wit ya.. Noo, I won't steal yo chain, Imma just keep moving along & just mind my business mane..Ayoo.. I got 1,2,3 pre rolls stuffed that I ain't even had to touch,yo woman came over & did it for me dawg.. Because Imma Thug,Yeah..& she prepared bowls for me too, because Im gangster..Uhh.. I just do what I do keeping it gangster & keep it trill, like a real ***** should..Lets go..Ohh Yeah.. Uhh..(I just do what I do Yeah2)..I do what I do man..(I just do what I do nigga2)..keeping it gangster & trill man..(Yeah I do what I do man2)..Yeah..(I do what I do..Yeah2)..I just do what I do..Yeah..I do what I do nigga..I just do what I do..Oooo,..(Yeah2)..keeping it gangster & keeping it trill.. Ohh,..(I just do what I do Yeah2)..I just do what I do man,..Yeah I do what I do nigga,..(Yeah I do what I do man2)..I just do what I do nigga..keeping it gangster & keeping it trill..yeah, yeah..keeping it gangster & trill man..that's what I do Yeah,..(thats what I do man,..Yeah2)..keeping it gangster & trill man, Yeah... I do what I do man, I just do what I do man, I just do what I do..(Yeah, keeping it gangsta & keeping it trill*2)..thats what I do..Yeah..I do what I do..Yeah..I just do what I do Yeah.. (I do what I do, Yeah*3).., & nobody else can do what I does, Noo, never they ho's, they weak,they soft, even if I send them a verse they could never be Young Ston,..Noo, they can never be down in my gang, Noo they can't smoke or drink wit me, not even yo broad, because she's had you..yo she's infected wit a ***** ***** syndrome.. So noo I don't want the ** for real dawg, Yeah that's for sure..Uhh.. I'm (keeping it trill nigga2) & I'm (keeping it gangster2).. Yeah like I should,Yeah that's for show,..Yeah I'm (keeping it trill nigga2) & I'm (keeping it gangster2)..like that's all I know..that's real, & that's for sure...Oh.. I just do what I do, Yeah I do what I do..I just do what I do,..(I do what I do*2)..I just do what I do.. OFTR (Yeah nigga*3)..Yeah..Young Ston
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brown eyes are underrated I've always thought but never knew till I met you they made me feel what even blue crystal eyes could never do his brown eyes had a familiar feel, like that book you once remembering reading they make me feel like I've found home how beautiful is the language of the eyes I found something special lurking there inside so genuine, so real, a more realistic painting of the surreal so i here encourage the notion brown eyes are an overlooked jewel i say this with certainty as I'm staring straight at you
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Nov 8, 2014
Nov 8, 2014 at 3:08 AM UTC
Brown eyes
You all single ladies Might not know How lucky you are Yea! You heard me LUCKY! You got to learn What being happy really means When your happiness isn't up to How your man treated you yesterday You know what's your worth You got to learn What you deserve From a man Who hopes to spend The rest of his life with you Some people wish to turn back The time to their single days Really.. So I say, the chance of being single is so underrated
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Sep 2, 2016
Sep 2, 2016 at 1:59 PM UTC
Being Single is So Underrated
I am so sick of love. Loyalty, honesty, dedication, compassion, compromise, for better or for worse (when it's always worse)! I am so sick of love, and all the drama that accompanies it. Most of all what makes me absolutely ill, in a brain and heart exploding in anger and disappointment respectively, kind of way, are the Lies! "You're all I want", "I need you", "I need a friend", "I still love you", "I will always love you", "Is there any chance?", "Can we get back together?", all the attention seeking, melodramatic, time-consuming crap! Followed by guilt. That nauseous feeling of, what if? What If? WHAT IF? Was it the right thing? Will I find another? What about the broken heart? The sleepless nights of pondering how to end things, the poems written and unpublished, the practising in front of the mirror, cigarettes to channel the guilt elsewhere... For crying out loud! After years of guiding me, I should have given way more credit to my instincts. And now for the new chapter. Embracing an old art, new to me. Currently so underrated and misjudged by priests, mothers and newly-weds.   The philosophy of zero expectations to infinite pleasure and everything in between. No regrets, no time wasted (and hell was my time wasted on you!#$#$#$). Time to give up my soul to the darkness, (God, I hope you'll understand I still love and believe you, but I prayed and prayed. I can't wait any more!) and my body to the sailor boy! Absolutely No Strings Attached. No bull **** no promises, just *** (and cuddles), a lot of *** (and waking up next to him?) Anyway, NO STRINGS ATTACHED! [Except for the invisible, really strong one. He is irresistible after all and I'm a dreamer who never, ever learns, and follows her instincts way too much!] One thing's for sure. I am so profoundly sick of love!
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Oct 13, 2012
Oct 13, 2012 at 6:04 PM UTC
No Strings Attached~
I am so sick of love. Loyalty, honesty, dedication, compassion, compromise, for better or for worse (when it's always worse)! I am so sick of love, and all the drama that accompanies it. Most of all what makes me absolutely ill, in a brain and heart exploding in anger and disappointment respectively, kind of way, are the Lies! "You're all I want", "I need you", "I need a friend", "I still love you", "I will always love you", "Is there any chance?", "Can we get back together?", all the attention seeking, melodramatic, time-consuming crap! Followed by guilt. That nauseous feeling of, what if? What If? WHAT IF? Was it the right thing? Will I find another? What about the broken heart? The sleepless nights of pondering how to end things, the poems written and unpublished, the practising in front of the mirror, cigarettes to channel the guilt elsewhere... For crying out loud! After years of guiding me, I should have given way more credit to my instincts. And now for the new chapter. Embracing an old art, new to me. Currently so underrated and misjudged by priests, mothers and newly-weds.   The philosophy of zero expectations to infinite pleasure and everything in between. No regrets, no time wasted (and hell was my time wasted on you!#$#$#$). Time to give up my soul to the darkness, (God, I hope you'll understand I still love and believe you, but I prayed and prayed. I can't wait any more!) and my body to the sailor boy! Absolutely No Strings Attached. No bull **** no promises, just *** (and cuddles), a lot of *** (and waking up next to him?) Anyway, NO STRINGS ATTACHED! [Except for the invisible, really strong one. He is irresistible after all and I'm a dreamer who never, ever learns, and follows her instincts way too much!] One thing's for sure. I am so profoundly sick of love!
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Sometimes is seems as though it's easy for us to just walk by Nonexistent are the pictures of them Moving, living, breathing Them, societies refuse Thrown away and discarded by life We are no longer our brother’s keeper Human beings rendered worthless; useless We move amongst them as a breeze blowing by Uncaring for all in its path Rushing to its destination Our selfish needs to hold on to the little we have And keep it from those who have none Not even our "little" Quickly it has become forgotten At any moment any of us can be overtaken by hunger Sweeping over us as garbage in the street Leaving us bare, empty, hungry We too can be eluded by shelter With no one to care No hands reaching out to help We too can become a fracture in humanity I see them peering at me from behind broken spectacles Shoeless feet in the winter Suffering in the bitter cold, nowhere to go Sound the alarm Our fellow humans are dying! Not perishing to wounds in battle Senseless crimes, illness & disease They're dying of hunger Exposure to extreme weather Tantrums of Mother Nature Sometimes we're afraid Afraid of the side effects of being homeless Some become as a Gemini having dual personalities The person they once were And the person being homeless Fighting for every breath of air has made them The side effect, the other twin The homeless twin with nowhere to sleep Our underrated simplicity of going to bed Let us keep our brothers In keeping our brothers, it is ourselves that we keep Safe, fed, protected, secured, sheltered The right of every human being
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Aug 2, 2010
Aug 2, 2010 at 12:41 PM UTC
Helping Hands
Sometimes is seems as though it's easy for us to just walk by Nonexistent are the pictures of them Moving, living, breathing Them, societies refuse Thrown away and discarded by life We are no longer our brother’s keeper Human beings rendered worthless; useless We move amongst them as a breeze blowing by Uncaring for all in its path Rushing to its destination Our selfish needs to hold on to the little we have And keep it from those who have none Not even our "little" Quickly it has become forgotten At any moment any of us can be overtaken by hunger Sweeping over us as garbage in the street Leaving us bare, empty, hungry We too can be eluded by shelter With no one to care No hands reaching out to help We too can become a fracture in humanity I see them peering at me from behind broken spectacles Shoeless feet in the winter Suffering in the bitter cold, nowhere to go Sound the alarm Our fellow humans are dying! Not perishing to wounds in battle Senseless crimes, illness & disease They're dying of hunger Exposure to extreme weather Tantrums of Mother Nature Sometimes we're afraid Afraid of the side effects of being homeless Some become as a Gemini having dual personalities The person they once were And the person being homeless Fighting for every breath of air has made them The side effect, the other twin The homeless twin with nowhere to sleep Our underrated simplicity of going to bed Let us keep our brothers In keeping our brothers, it is ourselves that we keep Safe, fed, protected, secured, sheltered The right of every human being
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The comfiest human bed warmer I ever had, My fundamental tutor of the good and the bad, The original storyteller in my bedtime tantrums, The resident photographer of my birthday albums. The accidental magician who tricked me out of my worries, A sympathetic dictator who scolds but allows my fancies, My biased talent manager who always tells me I'm the best, The loudest cheerleader who puts to shame all the rest. The world's underrated chef cooking heavenly meals, Our unpaid laundry lady worrying over water bills, The overqualified nurse never leaving her patient, Our top-notch budget analyst negotiating every payment. The random gardener, she can grow anything with ease, Our talkative historian, she stops recalling only if we say please, The uncanny philosopher, we've learned a lot from her, The lost and found administrator, tracking things hidden anywhere. The most efficient multitasker I've ever known, My trustworthy adviser who knows me down to my bones, A tough fighter who keeps winning her every battle, My life's co-creator and this world's greatest mother.
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May 13, 2017
May 13, 2017 at 7:44 PM UTC
The Versatile Matriarch
‘Apocalypto’ is a film set in a Maya civilisation and consists of a story that takes place in one tribe and how a passing tribe affects them to a degree of destruction. The story unfolds in a linear way of storytelling which is basic but still effective. From director Mel Gibson, the director of ‘Braveheart’ and ‘Passion of the Christ’. An underrated director of sorts but a great one nonetheless. Overlooked due to his acting career, he has been holding back on us as a director. The characters are set to be living a Mayan life and go about their days behaving as such but are rather generous and civilized for such an old race of people. They live peacefully and secluded until they interact with another tribe which brings about their downfall. And the way in which a Mayan civilization might go about solving problem as common as a natural disaster. Through sacrifices to the God's as a way to solve problems and mass results. Very accurate to the Mayan culture as well as the entire movie taking place without one word of English, all dialogue being said in the Mayan language. Another credit to the film. The directing style for this film is beautiful and flawless to say the least. No shaky cam used or hand held cam either. All fluent movement of the camera to create a great story, one that flows naturally. The use of camera angles is creative and different, using tilted angles to convey a certain mood and straight framed shots to convey another mood. The performances stand out as a huge positive, the actors who I have honestly never heard of give Oscar worthy performances. Mel Gibson uses unknown actors as not to compromise the film by the status of the actors. These actors and actresses give a hard performance based on body language and quiet moments, the enduring task of learning to be emotional through a foreign language. Which is why I would guess Mel Gibson used local actors who are more aware of the Mayan language than American actors. The set design is truly Oscar worthy in this film. The Mayan temples and tribe lands are captured perfectly in the sets for this film. Well build and suited towards the amazon environment. As well as good filming locations, using the wonders of the amazon rainforest as an advantage. In final thoughts, I believe that Mel Gibson is a stunning director with an eye for detail and a beautiful visual director. A director that can produce great work. ‘Apocalypto’ to me in the near future will become a period piece masterpiece. A tale of survival and dedication that will live on through the ages. Rating: Film - 8.4 Personal - 8.9
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Sep 29, 2016
Sep 29, 2016 at 12:02 PM UTC
'Apocalypto' Review
‘Apocalypto’ is a film set in a Maya civilisation and consists of a story that takes place in one tribe and how a passing tribe affects them to a degree of destruction. The story unfolds in a linear way of storytelling which is basic but still effective. From director Mel Gibson, the director of ‘Braveheart’ and ‘Passion of the Christ’. An underrated director of sorts but a great one nonetheless. Overlooked due to his acting career, he has been holding back on us as a director. The characters are set to be living a Mayan life and go about their days behaving as such but are rather generous and civilized for such an old race of people. They live peacefully and secluded until they interact with another tribe which brings about their downfall. And the way in which a Mayan civilization might go about solving problem as common as a natural disaster. Through sacrifices to the God's as a way to solve problems and mass results. Very accurate to the Mayan culture as well as the entire movie taking place without one word of English, all dialogue being said in the Mayan language. Another credit to the film. The directing style for this film is beautiful and flawless to say the least. No shaky cam used or hand held cam either. All fluent movement of the camera to create a great story, one that flows naturally. The use of camera angles is creative and different, using tilted angles to convey a certain mood and straight framed shots to convey another mood. The performances stand out as a huge positive, the actors who I have honestly never heard of give Oscar worthy performances. Mel Gibson uses unknown actors as not to compromise the film by the status of the actors. These actors and actresses give a hard performance based on body language and quiet moments, the enduring task of learning to be emotional through a foreign language. Which is why I would guess Mel Gibson used local actors who are more aware of the Mayan language than American actors. The set design is truly Oscar worthy in this film. The Mayan temples and tribe lands are captured perfectly in the sets for this film. Well build and suited towards the amazon environment. As well as good filming locations, using the wonders of the amazon rainforest as an advantage. In final thoughts, I believe that Mel Gibson is a stunning director with an eye for detail and a beautiful visual director. A director that can produce great work. ‘Apocalypto’ to me in the near future will become a period piece masterpiece. A tale of survival and dedication that will live on through the ages. Rating: Film - 8.4 Personal - 8.9
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A Hug, How underrated Available in the avail of a kiss, Or the escape of one. At birth My mother showed me loves worth Calmed the loudest cries Hushing me Just by holding me Keeping me warm Through the coldest times As I grew older This demonstration became more familiar With family So many I managed to manifest My mannerisms allowed Long embraces That mattered so much! All from a simple touch The first time… The first time, With the one I loved *********** lacked satisfaction If after the contraction We weren’t in each others arms… Relaxin… Chest to chest You hold her Can two hearts get any closer? If my only love Was to take her love away In the most selfish absurd way Spurned my love She still wouldn’t be too stubborn to hug Once the years have spun away The best reconciliation A Hug, A gesture so benign Even if I were to express With my best friend, a canine Or my only companion, a feline People still wouldn’t see I As constructed of ********** Alerting not a soul Hearts become sole Even when shared with animals. Making Love, Is not limited to *** Or a kiss, Instead, The same bliss Can be met With a Hug. What’s Love, But a Hug?
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Oct 1, 2010
Oct 1, 2010 at 12:27 AM UTC
What’s Love, But a Hug?
I got handles that can handle any problem If they the problem I can solve em I bench boys like I do at the gym Sorry boys All I do is win Call it 1988 Cause I'm bringing the heat Like #33 You wont forget me But unlike triple threat Call me self reliant I'm a one man team Call me Kobe Bryant Like 2 Three-peat Just like the Lakers I'm taking over your town 33 winning streak 16 championships The press always giving me Full court press I wouldn't call this chemistry Its magic like Johnson I feel like Jrue Holiday, Underrated But I feel like this our year, Toronto Raptors I got handles that can handle any problem If they the problem I'm they the problem
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Dec 20, 2013
Dec 20, 2013 at 6:12 PM UTC
Underrated
Feel the heat building up inside Steam is rising from my soul Sweaty palms and underarms People telling me, remain calm I'm shaking, to break this spirit free No one can hold me down Don't try to stop me now You'll never shut my mouth Gonna take more than a bullet to take me out You can throw me in the middle of the ocean I refuse to drown As this earth rotates I push against the grain Drenched in blood Found strength in my pain Now you'll see the crown I came to claim I was underestimated I've been underrated This is my statement Printed in my pages I've been underrated Under sedation Locked in nightmares Trying to find acceptance Through somebody else's eyes Instead of seeing perfection through mine Doesn't it make you sick to your stomach The feeling that we get When we don't feel that we are getting our dues and we've paid prices with priceless items Laid it all on the line In this battle of life Hearts on our sleeve And through the ink, I've bled Still didn't end up dead Sleepless nights in bed Pen in hand Experience my life through my writes Through my stories, You take walks in my shoes Fate chose me, So I chose it too And that's how it lead me to you I was underestimated I've been underrated This is my statement Printed in my pages I've been underrated Under sedation Locked in nightmares Trying to find acceptance Through somebody else's eyes Instead of seeing perfection through mine Power through perception life lessons through direction Emotions through connection Love through detection Minds were blown through comprehension I found peace in this eternal mind I now know that I am all that I need to be Now I see I just need to be me Just relax and rest at ease They'll take you as you are Flaws and all Just breathe and let them see I was underestimated I've been underrated This is my statement Printed in my pages I've been underrated Under sedation Locked in nightmares Trying to find acceptance Through somebody else's eyes Instead of seeing perfection through mine ©2018 Written By Benji James
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Mar 30, 2018
Mar 30, 2018 at 6:35 AM UTC
Underrated
Feel the heat building up inside Steam is rising from my soul Sweaty palms and underarms People telling me, remain calm I'm shaking, to break this spirit free No one can hold me down Don't try to stop me now You'll never shut my mouth Gonna take more than a bullet to take me out You can throw me in the middle of the ocean I refuse to drown As this earth rotates I push against the grain Drenched in blood Found strength in my pain Now you'll see the crown I came to claim I was underestimated I've been underrated This is my statement Printed in my pages I've been underrated Under sedation Locked in nightmares Trying to find acceptance Through somebody else's eyes Instead of seeing perfection through mine Doesn't it make you sick to your stomach The feeling that we get When we don't feel that we are getting our dues and we've paid prices with priceless items Laid it all on the line In this battle of life Hearts on our sleeve And through the ink, I've bled Still didn't end up dead Sleepless nights in bed Pen in hand Experience my life through my writes Through my stories, You take walks in my shoes Fate chose me, So I chose it too And that's how it lead me to you I was underestimated I've been underrated This is my statement Printed in my pages I've been underrated Under sedation Locked in nightmares Trying to find acceptance Through somebody else's eyes Instead of seeing perfection through mine Power through perception life lessons through direction Emotions through connection Love through detection Minds were blown through comprehension I found peace in this eternal mind I now know that I am all that I need to be Now I see I just need to be me Just relax and rest at ease They'll take you as you are Flaws and all Just breathe and let them see I was underestimated I've been underrated This is my statement Printed in my pages I've been underrated Under sedation Locked in nightmares Trying to find acceptance Through somebody else's eyes Instead of seeing perfection through mine ©2018 Written By Benji James
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[Given to Frank Bidart] You won't become a gourmet* cook By studying our Fannie's book-- Her thoughts on Food & Keeping House Are scarcely those of Lévi-Strauss. Nevertheless, you'll find, Frank dear, The basic elements** are here. And if a problem should arise: The Soufflé fall before your eyes, Or strange things happen to the Rice --You know I love to give advice. Elizabeth Christmas, 1971 * Forbidden word ** Forbidden phrase P.S. Fannie should not be underrated; She has become sophisticated. She's picked up many gourmet* tricks Since the edition of '96.
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***** with butts. ***** between thighs, dark circles under eyes. Fat ***** in their mouths, ****** and lubes in their house. Under beds and in plastic sealed bags. Don't do drugs and become crusty old hags. I love ***** They are underrated. Never say no. They live for *** they live for **** to blow.
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Jul 13, 2013
Jul 13, 2013 at 12:12 AM UTC
*****
Looks like the law is outdated And life is ****** The wrong traits tainted Why millions don't make it And elite want the nations brain dead Tell the truth get incarcerated Tell a lie and get elected Educate yourself and be objective Inspire and be creative Leave a canvas for the underrated Then the future will be painted Each style is affective Every style is effective Universe is ancestry generater Life is the relative consumer While food is sprouting And humans growing Then humans nurturing Law not needed for existing
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Feb 25, 2015
Feb 25, 2015 at 3:58 PM UTC
Blank Canvas For Law
you are so underrated. It's all my mistake for not making you my inspiration to write. It's all me, who holds back and keep all those little confessions for my thought. you are so underrated. For you were my muse, long before we started all these. & I'm sorry for neglecting all the poetry, that were meant for you.. Holding all the words, Just because I'm just too afraid to write again. you are so underrated. Despite the fact you are everything that what I need. I never make things so easy for you. Yet, you are still here. & making it seems so easy to love me. It needs me almost a year for me to finally say; "I love you" back to you Yet, in the moment when I remain silent, you will still say "I love you" to me. I'm a cynic. Yet, you still hug me & laugh at my saltiness. you take me as I am. It takes you a year before I finally stood up, & kiss you. Yet, you still want me the same, consistently, everyday.
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Feb 3, 2019
Feb 3, 2019 at 10:22 AM UTC
Underrated.
I didn’t know you. We lived in different worlds and lived different lives. We were strangers. You were just a random beautiful face that I thought I would soon forget not because you are not worthy to be remembered, but because I was not worthy to remember you. You were art. I was just passing by. You didn’t know me. The things that keep me up at night, the shadows and the clouds that I have lived with. The corrosion and the gunk in the gears of my mind that contaminated my relatively peaceful heart. My underrated, silent suffering. I don’t know you. I had no plan to, but the universe decided otherwise. Suddenly, you were not random anymore. You were art, and you remembered me. You don’t know me, but you saved me. You don’t even know it either. How your words and the simple things slowly lifted the smoke from my eyes, making me see the world that I’ve been missing. I never realized I needed saving until you did. I wanted to know you. I wanted to think you were an angel sent from above, but angels eventually go back to the heavens after they’re done, don’t they? So I wished you were human. As human as I was, in this forsaken, fractured world together. I still don’t know you. I don’t know what makes you cry at night or what cracks you up in the middle of the day. Your soul is still a mystery to me. I know your favorite color and your favorite food, but these are meaningless things in your bigger and beautiful universe to be explored and understood. You still don’t know me. I still haven’t got the chance to offer myself to you. Time and circumstance made sure of that. You still don’t know about my dreams and desires. You don’t know about the world inside my head, constantly whirring and exploding in activity. I know something about you. You are not an angel, you don’t go back above to report an accomplished mission and take on another one. You are human too, wandering this world with your own shadows and clouds. Maybe you also need saving. I wish I could know you. I want to see the demons lurking under your bed, and the dreams you try so hard to protect. I want to see you weep and know the reason why, to see you smile and laugh and never wonder why.
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Mar 17, 2017
Mar 17, 2017 at 12:58 PM UTC
To The One Who Saved Me
I didn’t know you. We lived in different worlds and lived different lives. We were strangers. You were just a random beautiful face that I thought I would soon forget not because you are not worthy to be remembered, but because I was not worthy to remember you. You were art. I was just passing by. You didn’t know me. The things that keep me up at night, the shadows and the clouds that I have lived with. The corrosion and the gunk in the gears of my mind that contaminated my relatively peaceful heart. My underrated, silent suffering. I don’t know you. I had no plan to, but the universe decided otherwise. Suddenly, you were not random anymore. You were art, and you remembered me. You don’t know me, but you saved me. You don’t even know it either. How your words and the simple things slowly lifted the smoke from my eyes, making me see the world that I’ve been missing. I never realized I needed saving until you did. I wanted to know you. I wanted to think you were an angel sent from above, but angels eventually go back to the heavens after they’re done, don’t they? So I wished you were human. As human as I was, in this forsaken, fractured world together. I still don’t know you. I don’t know what makes you cry at night or what cracks you up in the middle of the day. Your soul is still a mystery to me. I know your favorite color and your favorite food, but these are meaningless things in your bigger and beautiful universe to be explored and understood. You still don’t know me. I still haven’t got the chance to offer myself to you. Time and circumstance made sure of that. You still don’t know about my dreams and desires. You don’t know about the world inside my head, constantly whirring and exploding in activity. I know something about you. You are not an angel, you don’t go back above to report an accomplished mission and take on another one. You are human too, wandering this world with your own shadows and clouds. Maybe you also need saving. I wish I could know you. I want to see the demons lurking under your bed, and the dreams you try so hard to protect. I want to see you weep and know the reason why, to see you smile and laugh and never wonder why.
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The bench Supporting cast Men of few talents The star watchers Few know their names "No skill", they say Trading tokens in the money game Roster holders for the next star Only put in to give others rest Pass the ball, set the pick, take a flop Help the star look good, give him a chance Never to take the ball and make the shot Unknown, Unsung, Underrated Until the big play The highlight reel The game winner ESPN's fifteen minutes of fame Talk of the town The hero Until the next game Then it's the back to normal Sitting on the bench
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Jun 10, 2010
Jun 10, 2010 at 4:24 PM UTC
Bench Warmers
Harm no one, the inevitable thought of a miniscule Agamemnon, The insufferable, the pious, the deceiver, And the devout, the sheep, the lamb, Lead me I follow, Follow me I will train you, Despicable, For here there is only nothingness disguised as a cruel sacrifice, I believe in nothing, in circles, in patterns, in physics, in atoms within atoms, in life that studies itself, I believe in the arts, in music, in poetry, in dreams that are breathed into existence through an artists touch, I believe in family, in pure love, in unconditional acceptance, in forgiveness and the cultivation of hope, I believe in people, who's emotions rage like the sea, who's ideas raise whole cities, who's dreams are to find peace and understanding, who sometimes are misled but are never beyond the good within themselves, I believe in life, in growth, in the earth, the mother of us all and the sun, the father that watches his children basking in his warmth, I believe in trees that give us oxygen and water that gives us life. And so I believe in the underdog, the unseen, the overlooked, the underrated, and the unappreciated, I believe in the here and now, the present moment, the kiss, the dance, the wine, and the open hand. There is nothing of your cold religion, or your angry god that I need. Because life is all around me and beauty is in all things here and now and forever. Space spirals on and the river of time still flows in all directions, it is eternal this holy thing and it is without end, no mans demonic godhead will ever bring it down and this disease called religion will eventually be cured.
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Jan 11, 2013
Jan 11, 2013 at 2:37 PM UTC
A cure
Harm no one, the inevitable thought of a miniscule Agamemnon, The insufferable, the pious, the deceiver, And the devout, the sheep, the lamb, Lead me I follow, Follow me I will train you, Despicable, For here there is only nothingness disguised as a cruel sacrifice, I believe in nothing, in circles, in patterns, in physics, in atoms within atoms, in life that studies itself, I believe in the arts, in music, in poetry, in dreams that are breathed into existence through an artists touch, I believe in family, in pure love, in unconditional acceptance, in forgiveness and the cultivation of hope, I believe in people, who's emotions rage like the sea, who's ideas raise whole cities, who's dreams are to find peace and understanding, who sometimes are misled but are never beyond the good within themselves, I believe in life, in growth, in the earth, the mother of us all and the sun, the father that watches his children basking in his warmth, I believe in trees that give us oxygen and water that gives us life. And so I believe in the underdog, the unseen, the overlooked, the underrated, and the unappreciated, I believe in the here and now, the present moment, the kiss, the dance, the wine, and the open hand. There is nothing of your cold religion, or your angry god that I need. Because life is all around me and beauty is in all things here and now and forever. Space spirals on and the river of time still flows in all directions, it is eternal this holy thing and it is without end, no mans demonic godhead will ever bring it down and this disease called religion will eventually be cured.
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