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When Villains Win Movies and books They're all predictable So unoriginal I dream of a story Where the plot is somewhat gory And the villain Isn't just chillin' The hero and their nemesis Are at a stale mate And their actions aren't repetitive Finally the hero's imperfections take over, and he hits too late The enemy takes control And the moment, he stole He doesn't hesitate A second, he doesn't wait Time isn't slowed down He doesn't take his sweet time So quickly, he cuts the line The end of the hero A new beginning for evil
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Sep 8, 2014
Sep 8, 2014 at 11:16 PM UTC
When Villains Win
The evolution of art never halts Once we began dancing around fire Our feet couldn't stop A place in our lives Where our subpar seeds Could be seen as glowing trees That's the way I feel about my poetry It reminds me a lot of me I reread it and rewrite it so often By the end it seems unoriginal and plain And all I can hope Is the themes and ideas that were the inspirational genesis Remain intact Art walks a tightrope over the most unpredictable factor The audience They are the other half of art Their power cannot be overstated And as time progresses Their power grows And the importance of art always extends an equal distance But the stronger art becomes The more it asks of it's audience In many cases The audience is not ready to take the call This is one of those times Here at the current pinnacle of art Surfing the web A wonderful chance as Art is a reflection of people and society The Internet is people and society But just as we listen to songs To decide what concert to go to Or watch trailers To decide what movie to see We like what we like And put blinders on to find it Like moths to fire We could do amazing things If we could harness the potential Of our collective conscious But the threat of losing our individuality Is too great for us Unable to accept Our individuality is always in the context of our cosmic existence We are part of something greater And we can't escape that Even in death We feed what lies beneath The memory of our lives Shrinks to obscurity The maggots that cover our corpses Flourish to maturity Everything this world creates is art And we are it's most complex creation Not necessarily the best We just have the most parts And the maggots that use our dead bodies for sustenance Were once the monsters that roamed this Earth They had no nationality Or political affiliations Or religion And they're still here Waiting to reclaim their throne Once "smarter" species seek suicide
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Jul 26, 2017
Jul 26, 2017 at 10:19 PM UTC
Individuality
The evolution of art never halts Once we began dancing around fire Our feet couldn't stop A place in our lives Where our subpar seeds Could be seen as glowing trees That's the way I feel about my poetry It reminds me a lot of me I reread it and rewrite it so often By the end it seems unoriginal and plain And all I can hope Is the themes and ideas that were the inspirational genesis Remain intact Art walks a tightrope over the most unpredictable factor The audience They are the other half of art Their power cannot be overstated And as time progresses Their power grows And the importance of art always extends an equal distance But the stronger art becomes The more it asks of it's audience In many cases The audience is not ready to take the call This is one of those times Here at the current pinnacle of art Surfing the web A wonderful chance as Art is a reflection of people and society The Internet is people and society But just as we listen to songs To decide what concert to go to Or watch trailers To decide what movie to see We like what we like And put blinders on to find it Like moths to fire We could do amazing things If we could harness the potential Of our collective conscious But the threat of losing our individuality Is too great for us Unable to accept Our individuality is always in the context of our cosmic existence We are part of something greater And we can't escape that Even in death We feed what lies beneath The memory of our lives Shrinks to obscurity The maggots that cover our corpses Flourish to maturity Everything this world creates is art And we are it's most complex creation Not necessarily the best We just have the most parts And the maggots that use our dead bodies for sustenance Were once the monsters that roamed this Earth They had no nationality Or political affiliations Or religion And they're still here Waiting to reclaim their throne Once "smarter" species seek suicide
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Adapt & absorb other beings, needs,wants, habits, ideas, beliefs. Influences, unoriginal. Metamorphosis, eternally avoiding the raw,wicked truth of your inner soul, drop the ******* facade, it is futile and ludicrous. Analyze,compare, identify, mimic, imitate, copy,shift, evolve. Perpetual cycle. Veiled false identities and lies, layers upon layers, shirk the pale shadows of who we used to be. Shall we continue? Contradiction. Fools, to believe that one can ever change.
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Aug 20, 2014
Aug 20, 2014 at 6:00 AM UTC
Metamorphosis
I am the black sheep among the high-achievers and the sociable. We don't even baaa.. the same tune. Nothing ***** more than being compared to them. It is the height of cliche, lack of imagination, unoriginal. Parents love cliche, right?
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Jun 18, 2014
Jun 18, 2014 at 8:06 AM UTC
Black Sheep
It's an anxiety attack waiting to happen when I can't think of a witty way to say something unoriginal; something that everyone has heard before, but that just now occurred to me to say. I can feel my thoughts racing, my heartbeat speeding up to pump blood to my overreacting brain that's now thinking, "How the **** am I gonna get these feelings out, now?" I can't think of a cunning way to use a metaphor--one that I need to be able to put this pen to the page and call all these thoughts in my head poetry. What is the meaning of poetry? I feel like I should have some kind of figurative language in here, but my brain is fried. I'm too numb to process a **** thing. I'm so numb that it physically hurts and that pain is all that I can feel. That and the burning of my eyes from lack of sleep. This isn't poetry. I don't know what this is--random words strung together by a writer who's falling asleep at the page, who doesn't even know what sense is at this point. It's a rant...it's a ramble. Sleepless ramble
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Jun 8, 2014
Jun 8, 2014 at 10:22 PM UTC
Sleepless Ramble
I wanna taste ya, I wanna take you away girl..(away from all the **** shit*2)...all the **** shit..that you gotta (deal wit2)...me girl Yeah..(I wanna taste2)..I wanna (take you away girl*2).(away from all the **** shit*2)..all the **** shit..that you gotta (deal wit 2)...me girl Yeah..Just (deal wit me girl Yeah2)..(just deal wit me2)..(deal wit me2)..(just deal wit me*2)..Shawty.. Yeah.. Deal with me girl so what's the deal girl, what is real girl..what is real love girl,..What is true...What's happening..What's up..wit you..baby me & you..that's what's good.. Uhh, Young Ston Babygirl you need a soulja baby I'll be the whole troop for you if you want me to..girl, I'm willing to do whatever I need to do for you, Yeah baby so..(you believe Dat*2)..Imma be there whenever you need me, best believe Dat Imma treat ya, how you supposed to be treated..(Yeah You best believe girl2)..best believe Yeah..you best believe me. Yeah believe Dat..Uhh Aye..best believe girl..you best believe girl, you best believe Yeah..you best believe me....(best believe Dat, Yeah you best believe girl2)..believe dat.. I won't tell you no lies baby..I will never cheat on ya..(you best believe Dat*2)...believe me..Aye..Baby Yeah.. (I wanna taste you, I wanna take you away girl*2)..away..(from all the **** shit,yeah*2)...that you gotta deal wit..Uhh..,just (deal wit girl 2)...Yeah,.. You (best believe girl2)..I wanna taste you,..I wanna take you away girl..(away from all the **** shit2)..,that you gotta (deal wit2) me girl..(just deal wit me Yeah*2)..Deal wit me girl... I'll protect you like you my Louis Lane boo, baby Yeah believe dat, believe in me, Dat your heart won't be in pieces no more baby & if it is already baby I'll be a mechanic & fix it..forget them other worthless man, that you have been wit, I'll put them in their place, if you need me to, Babygirl Aye..Imma keep it real, Imma keep it gangsta wit you..You gone need me, best believe Dat, yeah best believe girl, baby Imma put it down on you daily,..every chance I get..Imma give you love baby..Yeah true love girl..Imma have you screaming, Imma have you moaning, like "Young Ston you the man, like **** Daddy you the best ..I ever had".. Uhh..Yeah I know dat already baby..girl just take this **** yeah, take it all in like some good kush babygirl, don't exhale it, just let the good smoke marinate in yo mind & yo lungs for 30 seconds, then cough it all out.. Aye Shawty being wit me..is like being in another dimension baby being wit me is a new reality, Aye..Its another universal feeling being wit me girl , you (best believe Dat..*2)..I ain't like another man, they so regular that's so unoriginal, & I ain't even tryna spitt no player **** to you baby..boo, I'm rhyming from my heart girl, Yeah this song was written deep down from my soul girl..I really love you girl..This song is only dedicated to (you2), know who you are , You my (boo,2)..You so sweet, you my favorite candy, girl..Oo..Oo.., (best believe Dat*2)..you my only woman too..Oo..Oo. It's just (you2)..the only one dat I think about girl...boo, its just (you2)..the one when I fall asleep, I dream about (you2..)..Aye & when I wake up Im still thinking about (you2)..(just you*2).. I lust after you..& only (you2)..is all I really care for girl.. (Yeah you2)..(just you,Yeah*2).. I adore..(you2)..girl Yeah..Yeah..just (you2)..baby..Yeah..Yeah.. Best believe it's just..(you2)..(just you2)..be on my mind so much Shawty..,I'm so crazy in love wit you..shit, I gotta put a ring on you soon, when I find ya best believe dat..(you best believe girl2)...you best believe.. (Yeah2)..Best believe me, best believe (Dat*2).. I wanna taste you..Yeah..I wanna take you (away girl2)..(away from all the fucc shit2)..Yeah..from...(all the **** shit2)..that you gotta (deal wit2)..me girl..deal wit me girl..deal wit me Yeah...just (deal wit me,girl2)..(deal wit me2)..,you best believe girl..,(deal wit me girl2)..(deal wit me2)..,you best believe girl..,(deal wit me3)..girl, Yeah you best believe girl, you best believe, (deal wit me..3)
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Dec 28, 2015
Dec 28, 2015 at 1:17 PM UTC
Ston Poet - Deal With Me
I wanna taste ya, I wanna take you away girl..(away from all the **** shit*2)...all the **** shit..that you gotta (deal wit2)...me girl Yeah..(I wanna taste2)..I wanna (take you away girl*2).(away from all the **** shit*2)..all the **** shit..that you gotta (deal wit 2)...me girl Yeah..Just (deal wit me girl Yeah2)..(just deal wit me2)..(deal wit me2)..(just deal wit me*2)..Shawty.. Yeah.. Deal with me girl so what's the deal girl, what is real girl..what is real love girl,..What is true...What's happening..What's up..wit you..baby me & you..that's what's good.. Uhh, Young Ston Babygirl you need a soulja baby I'll be the whole troop for you if you want me to..girl, I'm willing to do whatever I need to do for you, Yeah baby so..(you believe Dat*2)..Imma be there whenever you need me, best believe Dat Imma treat ya, how you supposed to be treated..(Yeah You best believe girl2)..best believe Yeah..you best believe me. Yeah believe Dat..Uhh Aye..best believe girl..you best believe girl, you best believe Yeah..you best believe me....(best believe Dat, Yeah you best believe girl2)..believe dat.. I won't tell you no lies baby..I will never cheat on ya..(you best believe Dat*2)...believe me..Aye..Baby Yeah.. (I wanna taste you, I wanna take you away girl*2)..away..(from all the **** shit,yeah*2)...that you gotta deal wit..Uhh..,just (deal wit girl 2)...Yeah,.. You (best believe girl2)..I wanna taste you,..I wanna take you away girl..(away from all the **** shit2)..,that you gotta (deal wit2) me girl..(just deal wit me Yeah*2)..Deal wit me girl... I'll protect you like you my Louis Lane boo, baby Yeah believe dat, believe in me, Dat your heart won't be in pieces no more baby & if it is already baby I'll be a mechanic & fix it..forget them other worthless man, that you have been wit, I'll put them in their place, if you need me to, Babygirl Aye..Imma keep it real, Imma keep it gangsta wit you..You gone need me, best believe Dat, yeah best believe girl, baby Imma put it down on you daily,..every chance I get..Imma give you love baby..Yeah true love girl..Imma have you screaming, Imma have you moaning, like "Young Ston you the man, like **** Daddy you the best ..I ever had".. Uhh..Yeah I know dat already baby..girl just take this **** yeah, take it all in like some good kush babygirl, don't exhale it, just let the good smoke marinate in yo mind & yo lungs for 30 seconds, then cough it all out.. Aye Shawty being wit me..is like being in another dimension baby being wit me is a new reality, Aye..Its another universal feeling being wit me girl , you (best believe Dat..*2)..I ain't like another man, they so regular that's so unoriginal, & I ain't even tryna spitt no player **** to you baby..boo, I'm rhyming from my heart girl, Yeah this song was written deep down from my soul girl..I really love you girl..This song is only dedicated to (you2), know who you are , You my (boo,2)..You so sweet, you my favorite candy, girl..Oo..Oo.., (best believe Dat*2)..you my only woman too..Oo..Oo. It's just (you2)..the only one dat I think about girl...boo, its just (you2)..the one when I fall asleep, I dream about (you2..)..Aye & when I wake up Im still thinking about (you2)..(just you*2).. I lust after you..& only (you2)..is all I really care for girl.. (Yeah you2)..(just you,Yeah*2).. I adore..(you2)..girl Yeah..Yeah..just (you2)..baby..Yeah..Yeah.. Best believe it's just..(you2)..(just you2)..be on my mind so much Shawty..,I'm so crazy in love wit you..shit, I gotta put a ring on you soon, when I find ya best believe dat..(you best believe girl2)...you best believe.. (Yeah2)..Best believe me, best believe (Dat*2).. I wanna taste you..Yeah..I wanna take you (away girl2)..(away from all the fucc shit2)..Yeah..from...(all the **** shit2)..that you gotta (deal wit2)..me girl..deal wit me girl..deal wit me Yeah...just (deal wit me,girl2)..(deal wit me2)..,you best believe girl..,(deal wit me girl2)..(deal wit me2)..,you best believe girl..,(deal wit me3)..girl, Yeah you best believe girl, you best believe, (deal wit me..3)
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"I knew this girl once, she had long hair, so long it whispered tiny kisses along her hips and waist she had the oddest bluest eyes i'd ever seen, the color of the sky right before it gets completely dark her thick, long eyelashes framed those eyes, and freckles formed constellations across her cheeks i could almost draw the big dipper and Orion's belt on her milky white face. She didn't know i existed but i admired her from afar. I could tell she was educated- She always had some form of poetry in her hand. But of all the things i could have noticed about her i noticed her bookmarks. She would lose them all the time, i would see her chasing after the scraps of paper as they flew through the wind down the street. She'd stick anything in between those pages, wrappers of all sorts, leaves, pennies, shoelaces, once i even saw a page ripped from a different book. It became my favorite game to guess what the next bookmark would be. After awhile she stopped chasing the various bookmarks across the city and she cut all that long hair off, then awhile after that she started using unoriginal, uninspired plain old bookmarks.Then even awhile that she stopped bringing books altogether, until one day she didn't show up. Nobody knew that beautiful, mysterious, bookmark making girl was locked up inside her own mind. Nobody knew she hated her long hair and her freckles and even those baby blues. Nobody knew that she couldn't stand to live in her skin anymore so much that she swallowed a couple pills one night to ease away the pain. Even worse was she didn't know i watched her for so long and thought she was the most interesting human being i'd ever encountered. That girl committed suicide because she hated herself learn from her mistake, my mistake, everyone who ever noticed her bookmarks mistake, and don't do this, don't off yourself with a .45 before you've even had a chance to live" he's desperate now "please please you don't have to do this" he sputters I answer simply " I never was much of a bookmark girl, i always dog-eared my pages" bang
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Nov 6, 2013
Nov 6, 2013 at 6:35 PM UTC
whats your bookmark
"I knew this girl once, she had long hair, so long it whispered tiny kisses along her hips and waist she had the oddest bluest eyes i'd ever seen, the color of the sky right before it gets completely dark her thick, long eyelashes framed those eyes, and freckles formed constellations across her cheeks i could almost draw the big dipper and Orion's belt on her milky white face. She didn't know i existed but i admired her from afar. I could tell she was educated- She always had some form of poetry in her hand. But of all the things i could have noticed about her i noticed her bookmarks. She would lose them all the time, i would see her chasing after the scraps of paper as they flew through the wind down the street. She'd stick anything in between those pages, wrappers of all sorts, leaves, pennies, shoelaces, once i even saw a page ripped from a different book. It became my favorite game to guess what the next bookmark would be. After awhile she stopped chasing the various bookmarks across the city and she cut all that long hair off, then awhile after that she started using unoriginal, uninspired plain old bookmarks.Then even awhile that she stopped bringing books altogether, until one day she didn't show up. Nobody knew that beautiful, mysterious, bookmark making girl was locked up inside her own mind. Nobody knew she hated her long hair and her freckles and even those baby blues. Nobody knew that she couldn't stand to live in her skin anymore so much that she swallowed a couple pills one night to ease away the pain. Even worse was she didn't know i watched her for so long and thought she was the most interesting human being i'd ever encountered. That girl committed suicide because she hated herself learn from her mistake, my mistake, everyone who ever noticed her bookmarks mistake, and don't do this, don't off yourself with a .45 before you've even had a chance to live" he's desperate now "please please you don't have to do this" he sputters I answer simply " I never was much of a bookmark girl, i always dog-eared my pages" bang
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when i was young, i only lived between the pages of a book between the words of a sentence between Privet Drive and Baker Street between bookstores and libraries where I did not have to speak to make friends; where I made friends who would not leave, where I could leave and return to see that nothing had changed; nothing, except me, but only a little. now that i’m older i’ve been twice to the other side and back; i think i’d also like to live between time zones and skylines between silken sheets on starry nights between your fingers and your eyes, where conversations are passports to other worlds in in other hearts beating in other bodies; if only for just a little.
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Apr 20, 2016
Apr 20, 2016 at 11:21 AM UTC
unoriginal titles for poems about change
Here comes The Change That has the range Of emotions And demotions And devotions Of a perilous populous That likes to raise a fuss When they eventually learn who I am And treat me like I'm the Son of Sam To be specific They discover I'm gay And begin to filet My mentality In totality For fatality Merely by acting differently If my sexuality isn't the first thing people know about me I get to witness The Change Like a dog with mange I am shedding my hair While screaming no fair Because of the shift I see Because of the **** I need To make my heart bleed There is a steady bellowing burdensome baggage From those that want to ****** some ******* So I search for weight lifters But only find shapeshifters That become great grifters When The Change occurs And The Change burns So The Change turned Me into an interdimensional changeling And an unintentional rage king After they use words like flaming Because the results are so draining It becomes hard not to hate people Who are inspired by hate steeples They say I'm going to Hell While I notice the smell Of being buried in their banal **** While they play their greatest hits That are as unoriginal As they are cynical They say I'm a degenerate An embarrassment A parent's lament I want to change into a carefree bird Instead I stay in Hell with the herd Wanting to escape like Lupin the Third Rather than be oppressed like the Kurds But there is no relief Only re-grief When changes aren't permanent But The Change is There's an illustration of my life That will change your perspective The picture is in my words When the painting is what I choose to say And the canvas is your mind Whose textures I could never imagine So I jump off a cliff blindfolded Expecting to be changed once I land
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Nov 20, 2017
Nov 20, 2017 at 6:13 AM UTC
Change
Here comes The Change That has the range Of emotions And demotions And devotions Of a perilous populous That likes to raise a fuss When they eventually learn who I am And treat me like I'm the Son of Sam To be specific They discover I'm gay And begin to filet My mentality In totality For fatality Merely by acting differently If my sexuality isn't the first thing people know about me I get to witness The Change Like a dog with mange I am shedding my hair While screaming no fair Because of the shift I see Because of the **** I need To make my heart bleed There is a steady bellowing burdensome baggage From those that want to ****** some ******* So I search for weight lifters But only find shapeshifters That become great grifters When The Change occurs And The Change burns So The Change turned Me into an interdimensional changeling And an unintentional rage king After they use words like flaming Because the results are so draining It becomes hard not to hate people Who are inspired by hate steeples They say I'm going to Hell While I notice the smell Of being buried in their banal **** While they play their greatest hits That are as unoriginal As they are cynical They say I'm a degenerate An embarrassment A parent's lament I want to change into a carefree bird Instead I stay in Hell with the herd Wanting to escape like Lupin the Third Rather than be oppressed like the Kurds But there is no relief Only re-grief When changes aren't permanent But The Change is There's an illustration of my life That will change your perspective The picture is in my words When the painting is what I choose to say And the canvas is your mind Whose textures I could never imagine So I jump off a cliff blindfolded Expecting to be changed once I land
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You're not a necessity, You’re an accessory. Stop trying to own me, talk at, and stand next to me.   Stop playing the role of the leader- you’re less than me. I am the boss here you have nothing to offer- see? I am stronger, smarter, brighter, bolder- and all you have to say is what? “If I can’t have her I’ll hurt her.” You think because you’re man and I’m women I’m yours, but when it comes to offers I haven’t see anything worse. You call at me, Stare at me, Swear at me, Slimy and gross like a leach. You taunt me and smirk at me as if I’m in your reach. So I’ve talked to you once, We’ve made eye contact- your point? You’re a cog in a machine line, a small piece, an ordinary joint. You’re unoriginal with your words, even less with your actions. I’m beautiful and talented, So when it comes to you there’s no attraction. You have nothing to offer me, let me be-stop accosting me. You’re taking up my time and it’s costing me. Because unlike you I’m not worthless, I’ve got ambition and drive. I’ve got brains-not just an *** You’re not the reason I’m alive. You’re nothing, You’re worthless. And if I wanted you, you’d know. I’ve been trying to tell you repeatedly just where you can go. Your offers? Not catchy, not tempting, I don’t want anything less. So sad to know when it comes to relationships- this is as close as you ever get. You’re **** You’re trash. You confuse me when you talk. Since when does a women sleep with someone when they gawk, or when they stalk? You’re a coward, You’re a loser, Your creation was a glitch. And though yes, I am rejecting you, No, boy-you are the little *****
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Jan 29, 2016
Jan 29, 2016 at 3:42 PM UTC
**** Off
You're not a necessity, You’re an accessory. Stop trying to own me, talk at, and stand next to me.   Stop playing the role of the leader- you’re less than me. I am the boss here you have nothing to offer- see? I am stronger, smarter, brighter, bolder- and all you have to say is what? “If I can’t have her I’ll hurt her.” You think because you’re man and I’m women I’m yours, but when it comes to offers I haven’t see anything worse. You call at me, Stare at me, Swear at me, Slimy and gross like a leach. You taunt me and smirk at me as if I’m in your reach. So I’ve talked to you once, We’ve made eye contact- your point? You’re a cog in a machine line, a small piece, an ordinary joint. You’re unoriginal with your words, even less with your actions. I’m beautiful and talented, So when it comes to you there’s no attraction. You have nothing to offer me, let me be-stop accosting me. You’re taking up my time and it’s costing me. Because unlike you I’m not worthless, I’ve got ambition and drive. I’ve got brains-not just an *** You’re not the reason I’m alive. You’re nothing, You’re worthless. And if I wanted you, you’d know. I’ve been trying to tell you repeatedly just where you can go. Your offers? Not catchy, not tempting, I don’t want anything less. So sad to know when it comes to relationships- this is as close as you ever get. You’re **** You’re trash. You confuse me when you talk. Since when does a women sleep with someone when they gawk, or when they stalk? You’re a coward, You’re a loser, Your creation was a glitch. And though yes, I am rejecting you, No, boy-you are the little *****
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It caught me off guard, this sudden feeling of loss, this sense that something beautiful was gone forever. I didn't know what to do with it, this overwhelming idea that now, out of neglect or shame or starvation, a work of art had withered away into nothing. I suppose that I'm beginning to understand that the world isn't a narrative, it's not a story by an author with a plot and a hero. This is the essential fallacy taught to children with a streak of the hopeless romantic in them: the desperate belief that somewhere out there is a place for people who live their lives waiting for King Arthur instead of Jesus. And even now, with every word comes the terrifying truth that my babbling is going to change absolutely nothing, not a single atom is going to **** an electron on the completion. I won't feel better, the situation won't change, you the reader aren't going to say EUREKA!!!! at the end of it, so what's the point? Expression, that is the point of it, and to be be completely blunt about it all, I hope some one I love and admire will read this and say the typical things that are said when people are honest on public forums. Do I have a point? No, not really. So what do I do with this loss, this empty fireplace in my soul? I drink and smoke and **** it away, stay so busy that I don't have time to consider it, this knowledge that the fire has gone out. How typical of me, how unoriginal and bourgeoise to write another ode to the trials of the individual. Who am I to feel loss and pain when my stomach is full and my needs are met? Aren't I another servant of economic output? Should I not donate time and money to a cause more worthy of respect than a withering example of excessive individualism such as myself? No, and what's more, **** you society, **** you for taking away the only haven I ever had: my head. **** you for marketing my imagination, for inventing a bunch of ******** about responsibility for the greater good, for poisoning the little freedom I do have with feelings of uselessness. And most especially **** you for your greatest crime of all; implanting this feeling of guilt whenever I do anything with my own well-being in mind. You have created a system that perpetuates itself on shame and output, you have killed the desire to create for it's own sake. **** you, and I'm going to unplug from you if it's the last ****** thing I ever do.
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Jul 16, 2013
Jul 16, 2013 at 10:06 PM UTC
Angry Prose
It caught me off guard, this sudden feeling of loss, this sense that something beautiful was gone forever. I didn't know what to do with it, this overwhelming idea that now, out of neglect or shame or starvation, a work of art had withered away into nothing. I suppose that I'm beginning to understand that the world isn't a narrative, it's not a story by an author with a plot and a hero. This is the essential fallacy taught to children with a streak of the hopeless romantic in them: the desperate belief that somewhere out there is a place for people who live their lives waiting for King Arthur instead of Jesus. And even now, with every word comes the terrifying truth that my babbling is going to change absolutely nothing, not a single atom is going to **** an electron on the completion. I won't feel better, the situation won't change, you the reader aren't going to say EUREKA!!!! at the end of it, so what's the point? Expression, that is the point of it, and to be be completely blunt about it all, I hope some one I love and admire will read this and say the typical things that are said when people are honest on public forums. Do I have a point? No, not really. So what do I do with this loss, this empty fireplace in my soul? I drink and smoke and **** it away, stay so busy that I don't have time to consider it, this knowledge that the fire has gone out. How typical of me, how unoriginal and bourgeoise to write another ode to the trials of the individual. Who am I to feel loss and pain when my stomach is full and my needs are met? Aren't I another servant of economic output? Should I not donate time and money to a cause more worthy of respect than a withering example of excessive individualism such as myself? No, and what's more, **** you society, **** you for taking away the only haven I ever had: my head. **** you for marketing my imagination, for inventing a bunch of ******** about responsibility for the greater good, for poisoning the little freedom I do have with feelings of uselessness. And most especially **** you for your greatest crime of all; implanting this feeling of guilt whenever I do anything with my own well-being in mind. You have created a system that perpetuates itself on shame and output, you have killed the desire to create for it's own sake. **** you, and I'm going to unplug from you if it's the last ****** thing I ever do.
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Creativity is not measured by how many love songs there are on the radio Writing one more does not make love songs unoriginal Nor does it make it bad to like love songs All it does is put a new love song into the world Creativity is not making something that has never been made before Creativity is making something. And if you hate love songs then go ahead tell me they're not original tell me they're too mainstream tell me there's no other subject these days tell me how that annoys you. But don't tell me that making something isn't worth celebrating Don't tell me creativity is only what you think it is
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Sep 19, 2014
Sep 19, 2014 at 11:40 PM UTC
Creativity
I am Strong I am Vulnerable I am Sure I am Foolish I am Smart I make Poor Decisions I am Filled with Energy I am a Lazy Slob I am Sure of Myself I am Confused I am a Leader I am a Follower I am Creative I am Unoriginal I am Optimistic I Fear the Worst I am Brave, I am so Scared I am Dark I am the Light I am Free, I have been Captured I am Short But I am so Tall
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Nov 19, 2013
Nov 19, 2013 at 9:19 AM UTC
Contradiction Of Self
Monday Bleak unoriginal Mondays Where there is no Whipped cream or cherries, Hot chocolate sauce or Peanut sprinkles Only ***** wrecked trams Absent faces & Dreams of freedom From hell That is This is These are The Monday Blues
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Mar 12, 2012
Mar 12, 2012 at 5:19 AM UTC
Monday Blues
I'm not exactly sure what love is. I don't know what it is supposed to feel like. But I know this. Every time I see you, My palms start sweating uncontrollably And I wonder how in hell I am ever supposed to hold your hand If being yards away from you Does that to me. When I see you, I swear "Dream Weaver" starts playing In my head. Whenever I see you, I feel like I have to puke, And it's the best feeling ever. Every time I am done Spending time with you, I have to *** right away from nervousness. But there's not a single person I am more comfortable around. When I am around you, I spend more time Covering up the teeth I'm so insecure of Than I do talking to you. I don't do that around anyone else, But then again, No one makes me laugh as much as you do. When I see you, I start thinking of different cheesy quotes From different cheesy Rom-Coms, And pray to God That you haven't seen those movies, So on the one in a billion chance That I am actually brave enough to say something, You won't realize how unoriginal I am. Whenever I am with you, And you ask me if I agree with what you said, I'm lying. I have no idea what you've just said. I was too busy counting the wrinkles Around your eyes (Because wrinkles are my favorite, you know). When you hug me, I feel like crying. WHY DO I FEEL LIKE CRYING?! I have no idea what love is. But let me tell you, This feels pretty **** close.
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Oct 18, 2016
Oct 18, 2016 at 7:27 PM UTC
The most honest love letter I have ever written
I can't tell you how much I'm hurting To acknowledge my pain is weakness To share my weakness is pathetic But I hurt, oh, I hurt I can't tell you how much I want you to love me Because to say it would be to jinx it And to jinx it would be to lose you But, by god, I wish you loved me I can't explain how much I depend on you Because to explain would be to trust you And to trust you would be to make me vulnerable But I depend on you. I really do. I can't tell you all the little things I want you to say Because to tell you would be to make them unoriginal And to make them unoriginal would be to make them unsatisfactory But I wish you would coddle me and tell me those things I can't tell you how much I want to be yours Because to tell you would be to give you power over me And to give you the power would be to give you my leash But I wish I could, and you would own me. I can't tell you how twisted I am Because to tell you would be to make you notice And to make you notice would be to disgust you But I wish you'd accept me I can't tell you I'm sorry for that You've given me your trust But I can't give it back I can't explain So I'll apologize I simply don't want to be Pathetic in your eyes I can't confide And I'll always feel remorse But if I were to lose you I'd feel much worse I can't be who you wish me to be So I'll keep who I really am Under lock and key I'll chain up my personality So, ideally you'll see The person you can't help but love That person that leaves you starstruck I'll hold back all I am Because I am not your ideal And your ideals are above me So I can't let myself be real I've shunned who I am Because of who you are I am bitter and angry But you'll never see my scars I want to let you closer I want to try my luck But deep down I know I'm not who leaves you starstruck
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Apr 14, 2013
Apr 14, 2013 at 10:18 AM UTC
Starstruck
I can't tell you how much I'm hurting To acknowledge my pain is weakness To share my weakness is pathetic But I hurt, oh, I hurt I can't tell you how much I want you to love me Because to say it would be to jinx it And to jinx it would be to lose you But, by god, I wish you loved me I can't explain how much I depend on you Because to explain would be to trust you And to trust you would be to make me vulnerable But I depend on you. I really do. I can't tell you all the little things I want you to say Because to tell you would be to make them unoriginal And to make them unoriginal would be to make them unsatisfactory But I wish you would coddle me and tell me those things I can't tell you how much I want to be yours Because to tell you would be to give you power over me And to give you the power would be to give you my leash But I wish I could, and you would own me. I can't tell you how twisted I am Because to tell you would be to make you notice And to make you notice would be to disgust you But I wish you'd accept me I can't tell you I'm sorry for that You've given me your trust But I can't give it back I can't explain So I'll apologize I simply don't want to be Pathetic in your eyes I can't confide And I'll always feel remorse But if I were to lose you I'd feel much worse I can't be who you wish me to be So I'll keep who I really am Under lock and key I'll chain up my personality So, ideally you'll see The person you can't help but love That person that leaves you starstruck I'll hold back all I am Because I am not your ideal And your ideals are above me So I can't let myself be real I've shunned who I am Because of who you are I am bitter and angry But you'll never see my scars I want to let you closer I want to try my luck But deep down I know I'm not who leaves you starstruck
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omnipresent sick to my ******* stomach dressed in mosquitoes that are woolen like the lining of my english ******* and coated in a complex mixture of secreted proteins i follow the screen of the teleprompter as it storms, blue and brilliant behind a mess of optical wiring. lip and teeth theres bile at the base of my throat threatening to bust with each greased second as my brain becomes nauseated by the snow-drift of sentences burning the back of my eyelids. i've never believed the things i read so now i'm mute but spitting, spiteful and unoriginal visualizing their greyhound decapitations in high colour. nearly implying transit to our friendship or something that would only churn the stomach like rich food after famine so yes, i am the cruelest female of august shipwrecked on the front porch with the lamplight raining in my mind and i'm asking the moon as it rises like a solemn word why i'm sick all the time, sweating from everywhere but my tear ducts and waiting for several breeds of cold to attack my corpse
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Feb 22, 2010
Feb 22, 2010 at 11:39 AM UTC
jurassic puke
Midsummer midnight skies, Midsummer midnight influences and airs, The shining, sensitive silver of the sea Touched with the strange-hued blazonings of dawn; And all so solemnly still I seem to hear The breathing of Life and Death, The secular Accomplices, Renewing the visible miracle of the world. The wistful stars Shine like good memories. The young morning wind Blows full of unforgotten hours As over a region of roses. Life and Death Sound on--sound on . . . And the night magical, Troubled yet comforting, thrills As if the Enchanted Castle at the heart Of the wood's dark wonderment Swung wide his valves, and filled the dim sea-banks With exquisite visitants: Words fiery-hearted yet, dreams and desires With living looks intolerable, regrets Whose voice comes as the voice of an only child Heard from the grave: shapes of a Might-Have-Been-- Beautiful, miserable, distraught-- The Law no man may baffle denied and slew. The spell-bound ships stand as at gaze To let the marvel by. The grey road glooms . . . Glimmers . . . goes out . . . and there, O, there where it fades, What grace, what glamour, what wild will, Transfigure the shadows? Whose, Heart of my heart, Soul of my soul, but yours? Ghosts--ghosts--the sapphirine air Teems with them even to the gleaming ends Of the wild day-spring! Ghosts, Everywhere--everywhere--till I and you At last--dear love, at last!-- Are in the dreaming, even as Life and Death, Twin-ministers of the unoriginal Will.
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Midsummer Midnight Skies
My mind is colored with red and blue stereotypes. All that spills from my mouth is mundane. Unrequited love, depression and disappointment all so self centered. Yet, if I were to ask "What do you love to read the most?" your eyes would light up at the idea of fairy tales and love. But what is love? Some say it is the best and worst but love is a feeling and I'm not one for feeling anything at all. So to that I say I wish I could rip out my heart and bury it away from the world and it's monsters but that would be expected of me. And oh so unoriginal and plain.
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Dec 29, 2013
Dec 29, 2013 at 3:36 PM UTC
Unoriginal
Really..?  R or Top hat or Woody or James who ever you really are. ......... r commented on my poem ''Poetry'' and said.... ''I don't usually respond to children or little nuts that fall from an oak tree, but since you addressed me specifically, I will. You are apparently clueless about the true character of your daddy woof. If you want to be a little fly buzzing around his piles of Chihuahua crap that he calls poetry, feel free. Leave me out of your juvenile postings.  You don't know me fallen acorn, so I choose not to respond.'' .................... You blocked me, cause I called you out and you knew that I was going to respond to your comment. You called me a child, I'm 16 and I'm way more matture than you... hint hint: fallen acorn..... Really...? Come on r you could have done better than that. Thats was corny and so unoriginal. :) I really wasn't trying to get involved with this. But I was going to defend my friend and let you know what was good. ........I'm leave it right here. But come at me again and we (just me and you) are going to have some really big problems. <--thats not a threat either...its a promise that I intend on keeping.
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Jan 6, 2016
Jan 6, 2016 at 1:38 PM UTC
Really..? #Mood
Like old mean beetles, like old men in battle, like egos: solid anvils, like families: lethal weapons, like these: them, begotten sons who begat daughters of a land, of a bordered plot on the globe, the dirt, the house, the property which begot them both, these two bitter enemies from two separate places, furiously blaze, as the time for darkness, is far from arrived. And the sun quakes, in its heat rippling sights and knocking particles, which deter the next knocked, and which enforce the continued sensation of warmth continued, of aversion continued, rising, screened, for its impeccable quality, against nobody in general or specific to announce, or to gain against consequences, which are soothsaid in time, nullified. Partners afflicted will be less opportunistic and more egalitarian, but are sworn, like the sun, against the monotony, of repetition, of indistinct days; like these: them, the enemies, they are engaged, aged, unteachable and spoiled. They are always immersed in vexed states, always in competition. Hope is the souls united never again as much as the static, single dimension, alone, impeccable, impossible, for its possibility is drawn by He who spews forth lumens next to card sharks and Amazons, knowing these will have to suffice, having no escape from the projected source of energy. The metal heads of garden rakes, weapons thrown at devils in the sweltering heat of hell, the Inferno that holds a first-person point of view, a dream, alongside superheroes, allied, but who are, nevertheless, without their unique and exceptional powers, pros and willing deviants from the celibacy, the weight, the unoriginal paint that collides in each stroke, making what appears null, and the array but one, and supposed, so that then are the weary and soulful mergers which corrupt and meander throughout, polluting, as it were, the tranquility, the wrenched service, of the destined machine, of a million trajectories, homespun threads, woven into a million miserable microfibers, unanswered queries that were held back in fear, and were never asked, and remain even now sorry.
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Jan 17, 2010
Jan 17, 2010 at 7:49 AM UTC
V.A.
Like old mean beetles, like old men in battle, like egos: solid anvils, like families: lethal weapons, like these: them, begotten sons who begat daughters of a land, of a bordered plot on the globe, the dirt, the house, the property which begot them both, these two bitter enemies from two separate places, furiously blaze, as the time for darkness, is far from arrived. And the sun quakes, in its heat rippling sights and knocking particles, which deter the next knocked, and which enforce the continued sensation of warmth continued, of aversion continued, rising, screened, for its impeccable quality, against nobody in general or specific to announce, or to gain against consequences, which are soothsaid in time, nullified. Partners afflicted will be less opportunistic and more egalitarian, but are sworn, like the sun, against the monotony, of repetition, of indistinct days; like these: them, the enemies, they are engaged, aged, unteachable and spoiled. They are always immersed in vexed states, always in competition. Hope is the souls united never again as much as the static, single dimension, alone, impeccable, impossible, for its possibility is drawn by He who spews forth lumens next to card sharks and Amazons, knowing these will have to suffice, having no escape from the projected source of energy. The metal heads of garden rakes, weapons thrown at devils in the sweltering heat of hell, the Inferno that holds a first-person point of view, a dream, alongside superheroes, allied, but who are, nevertheless, without their unique and exceptional powers, pros and willing deviants from the celibacy, the weight, the unoriginal paint that collides in each stroke, making what appears null, and the array but one, and supposed, so that then are the weary and soulful mergers which corrupt and meander throughout, polluting, as it were, the tranquility, the wrenched service, of the destined machine, of a million trajectories, homespun threads, woven into a million miserable microfibers, unanswered queries that were held back in fear, and were never asked, and remain even now sorry.
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Have I ever had an original thought? I've been told that, 'Everything we ever write is just an accumulation of all we've ever read,' or something like that. I don't remember by who, but I've cited him Chicago Style in my heart. It started young, with my name. Permanent ink on the soul, a cliche. I hated hearing it, over used and haphazardly picked out of a book. If I have children, they won't suffer from recycled personality disorder. I'll start them off right, give them names that don't exist yet. One in a sea of Lindseys. My post-modernism lost-cause syndrome in itself is unoriginal. How can I write in stream of consciousness with two decades of songs stuck in my head? This isn't new, I've always plagiarized while I dreamt of you, hallucinated my creativity, now I can't even picture you without sappy lyrics sticking to your clothes. I am merely stealing like an artist, another concept I stole, brilliant, but don't thank me.
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Nov 18, 2012
Nov 18, 2012 at 10:55 PM UTC
I Stole All These Words.
There are so many of these girls bright, lovely pretty young things who’ve suddenly— (like it was a choice) taken to all this madness of reading books, drinking fancy tea and pretending that they didn’t care about boys or clothes. well i’m your messenger from the future your ghost of Christmas past Let me tell you now that i’ve always been the girl who Was lonely in high school Who preferred her books to nights out spent partying and drank hot cocoa by the liter and never once considered herself lovely or pretty that was until i traded in my precious uniqueness for the generic, unoriginal cutout that i superficially am now i skipped meals for weighed almonds put on heels pretending to be tall and cool but i still stumbled and hoped no one saw me boys came and talked to me but all i could manage was awkward sputter that was a sad excuse for words or else talk to them about books, politics, social issues and science until they walked away afraid their eyes telling me She’s crazy. let me tell you now, honey being a geek isn’t cool whatever trend or substance you’re on forget it geeks are awkward ****** weirdos with their own language who blurt out random fandom quotes and references they’ve known by heart since they were ten. If you think it’s fun to be the only one laughing at a joke you were sure everyone knew of to get stared at like a madman for speaking klingon, elvish, harry potter, star wars, Dr. Who. it’s not silly child, my lovely for in all their uncoolness geeks actually think they’re cool well i’m your messenger from the future your ghost of Christmas past Let me tell you now that no amount of make-up can hide the fact that you still preferred Kafka and Bukowski over cigarettes and alcohol and clublights and you (not really sure about this one, i like alcohol and cigarettes too)
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Jan 23, 2014
Jan 23, 2014 at 9:20 AM UTC
I'm not cool
There are so many of these girls bright, lovely pretty young things who’ve suddenly— (like it was a choice) taken to all this madness of reading books, drinking fancy tea and pretending that they didn’t care about boys or clothes. well i’m your messenger from the future your ghost of Christmas past Let me tell you now that i’ve always been the girl who Was lonely in high school Who preferred her books to nights out spent partying and drank hot cocoa by the liter and never once considered herself lovely or pretty that was until i traded in my precious uniqueness for the generic, unoriginal cutout that i superficially am now i skipped meals for weighed almonds put on heels pretending to be tall and cool but i still stumbled and hoped no one saw me boys came and talked to me but all i could manage was awkward sputter that was a sad excuse for words or else talk to them about books, politics, social issues and science until they walked away afraid their eyes telling me She’s crazy. let me tell you now, honey being a geek isn’t cool whatever trend or substance you’re on forget it geeks are awkward ****** weirdos with their own language who blurt out random fandom quotes and references they’ve known by heart since they were ten. If you think it’s fun to be the only one laughing at a joke you were sure everyone knew of to get stared at like a madman for speaking klingon, elvish, harry potter, star wars, Dr. Who. it’s not silly child, my lovely for in all their uncoolness geeks actually think they’re cool well i’m your messenger from the future your ghost of Christmas past Let me tell you now that no amount of make-up can hide the fact that you still preferred Kafka and Bukowski over cigarettes and alcohol and clublights and you (not really sure about this one, i like alcohol and cigarettes too)
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