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"deterrent" poems
If I am kindling, you must be the spark... Much alive in the darkest dark, lifting all shadows with finesse and flair.      If I am flame,      you must be the air and wind...      Unfettered and free...      Cradling my infancy.      Only to nurture and inspire,      to groom flame to fire. If I am faltering... And almost extinguished, you must be the hand... Bearing the confidence and belief... Awaiting the moment most opportune, to align yourself in rhythm and tune. So we could... Continue to burst forth into light. So we could... Resume our journey forth with might.      Let us be our own deterrent      from the darkness      that comes with morrow's set.      Hand in hand, we must...      Because together...           And only together,    we're...                         incandescent.
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Jan 1, 2016
Jan 1, 2016 at 8:57 AM UTC
Incandescent
Metaphorical suicide. My feelings are as deep as the valleys running across my wrist: Non existent. Countless heart breaks from a single girl proved to be a likely deterrent. Old habits die easy with you, causing my fists to turn a dark red hue. Empty bottles and cigarettes litter the floor, a noose hanging above being the only door so that I will finally soar. Or dare I ask, and partake in this task which will surely leave me stripped of my sanity. Watch me load a revolver with a single casing engraved "True Love" .  Look me in the eyes as  I place the barrel of the gun made from the broken memories we shared together unto my chest, and watch as I pull the trigger, causing my metaphorical platter splatter into globs of grey matter. I lay in my bed sleepless, non  existent lateral lines running up and down my wrists, non existent, yet I still feel the throbbing and the slow spill of everything I ever felt ,drip down into my sides, surrounding me in a puddle of... Real tears caused by the fears of letting go, or is what surrounds me are all the mistakes I've made, mutated from being left alone with no where else to go, so they make their way to the surface waiting for me to profess all that I've wronged? No. All that would have been too merciful. Instead you took all of my feelings, my love, my heart, and melted it down into the shape of a metal bat, ironically engraved "tough luck" and proceeded to beat me in. Not to bad, or painful. But to the point where I feel it, then the pain quickly recedes, like i am stuck in the sand of a island you marooned me on, The acid waves wash over me for a split second, causing pain into my heart, then it's gone. Causing me to forever constantly.
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Oct 29, 2014
Oct 29, 2014 at 11:47 AM UTC
Metaphorical Suicide
Metaphorical suicide. My feelings are as deep as the valleys running across my wrist: Non existent. Countless heart breaks from a single girl proved to be a likely deterrent. Old habits die easy with you, causing my fists to turn a dark red hue. Empty bottles and cigarettes litter the floor, a noose hanging above being the only door so that I will finally soar. Or dare I ask, and partake in this task which will surely leave me stripped of my sanity. Watch me load a revolver with a single casing engraved "True Love" .  Look me in the eyes as  I place the barrel of the gun made from the broken memories we shared together unto my chest, and watch as I pull the trigger, causing my metaphorical platter splatter into globs of grey matter. I lay in my bed sleepless, non  existent lateral lines running up and down my wrists, non existent, yet I still feel the throbbing and the slow spill of everything I ever felt ,drip down into my sides, surrounding me in a puddle of... Real tears caused by the fears of letting go, or is what surrounds me are all the mistakes I've made, mutated from being left alone with no where else to go, so they make their way to the surface waiting for me to profess all that I've wronged? No. All that would have been too merciful. Instead you took all of my feelings, my love, my heart, and melted it down into the shape of a metal bat, ironically engraved "tough luck" and proceeded to beat me in. Not to bad, or painful. But to the point where I feel it, then the pain quickly recedes, like i am stuck in the sand of a island you marooned me on, The acid waves wash over me for a split second, causing pain into my heart, then it's gone. Causing me to forever constantly.
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I'm a prisoner of love, in this unguarded cell, The warden whistles my name you'd think it hell, but she knows my case all too well, Her piercing eyes as resolute as the Bastille, Dodging Cupids arrows at will, Across this broom is forever, I'm gone for a life long spell, With Joy as my bars and happiness the rubber shower mats, Blissful ecstasy is its escape deterrent traps, I pass the time a whittling hearts and sharpening this rap. See those chalk lines on the wall of my heart? They record the memories of my days since the start, Her smiles are more prized than jailhouse art. At inspection and roll call in the morning, The smirk under the cap then a whispering, Keep careful watch on our "Prisoner Prince Charming",
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Sep 22, 2014
Sep 22, 2014 at 1:35 PM UTC
The prisoner
There's nothing like a house full when you're a single parent and you'd think the mess you find you're in would be a good deterrent But there's nothing to compare despite the tears and all the struggles to everyday the love you have and the kisses and the cuddles And i'll say this from the start there's no one else i'd rather be and raise my kids alone it's a job made just for me And despite the sleepless nights and the sticky fingerprints and the ***** piles of washing and the room that always stinks There's a bundle of four children who are as happy as can be they really are a rabble but I know that they love me We've all been though some heartache and quite traumatic things but everyday is worth it no matter what it brings And even if the washing is piled to the sky and the dog wants to move out though I can't imagine why And the plugholes always blocked and there's arguing afoot and everyone got taller from the last time that I looked And they play on the same server all laughing with each other all in different bedrooms two sisters and two brothers You'd never know that last night there was almost World War 3 and a hostage negotiation over playing DayZ But rules here must apply there are chores and a curfew a sense of order must be kept even if you're 6 foot 2 I count my blessings as I go and for each other we are glad when you raise your kids alone being both their Mum and Dad.
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May 12, 2016
May 12, 2016 at 9:46 AM UTC
Happy home :o)
Blood-soaked blue sky Smell our vinaigrette of helplessness The honey crying chords of a zillion golden cubs Roots that won’t die Bursting through us Dark crimson walls high Too shame our innards Tear-drenched rain Draining our conscience Pulling us toward the marble migraine Where blinded gerents continue the measured deterrent Of life desperate Keeping hearts from heads And minds from mouths Away from this marble pavement High up top, in cobwebs of restitched tapestry Skeleton beast, less beastly in breathlessness... A surge of sun spurged light in clustered cusps Blows into this lecher To carry our vividness Like pappus in great gusts...
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Aug 20, 2025
Aug 20, 2025 at 7:42 PM UTC
Will raindrops rise in Summer?
Choosing doesn’t matter much as choosing to be a somebody, would matter… If not for the totality that is the whole (“trying bit”). Trying is like the ultimate reaction time! Not because it has anything to do with choosing something whether or not it’s good or bad, whilst (choosing doesn’t matter) could actually benefit your own (trying phase) into a (somehow) newer light. Why you may ask of this very detail that seems to not shed any more “obvious” light to what’s already been the most obvious of ideals chosen to be the main majority of facts by today's standards…? Well it completely doesn’t. As it entirely does, also. You see both choosing to do something whilst (trying to simply do that very thing) aren’t the same by ANY standards. As their both each other’s direct counterparts! Given standards for a given achieving rate. None will cause you to trade ideal for fact towards choosing over trying. Simply because if choosing doesn’t matter one bit… It’s also fair to say that trying is the ultimate reaction time, because choosing doesn’t matter. Trying is closer to a stimulus. Whilst choosing is closer to a response. A stimulus is better described as being incredibly instinctive. Where you have NO motion, except for what your mind feels when constantly being pulled in so many directions it doesn’t know which way to advise itself otherwise. Commonly being used as a “deterrent for disaster” when being controlled by the very thing it’s meant to control. A response however, is nothing without its stimulus to direct the trigger that at which made you react towards firstly. Warping your very bodies need to get wrapped up into itself. (More direct artificial stimulus rises and falls confusing the bodies signals…which politely anyways sends back to the mind safely.) Threatening to shower even more reactions down on itself from the literal inside out! Nevertheless, this was good for the mind. Gave it some closure as the “god of your own body”! Mind could personally get back at the body for pulling it into thinking it was the god! When truthfully, it was simply the deprived mortal acting as the constant, repeating, signalling pack mule! Hast to know its place after all… Am I right…?! The mind said, confident in its very words. All because the body reacted to something it inadvertently forced the mind into thinking it was being pulled around in so many directions, it didn’t know how to otherwise order its entire counterpart to simply halt! Simply by saying…STOP! However, you must know by now in today's age, that when something is amiss, you don’t simply surrender lightly. Especially when it doesn’t feel right. You ALWAYS listen to when something doesn’t FEEL…RIGHT! Am I right…?!
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Jul 17, 2020
Jul 17, 2020 at 3:06 PM UTC
Choosing doesn’t matter!
Choosing doesn’t matter much as choosing to be a somebody, would matter… If not for the totality that is the whole (“trying bit”). Trying is like the ultimate reaction time! Not because it has anything to do with choosing something whether or not it’s good or bad, whilst (choosing doesn’t matter) could actually benefit your own (trying phase) into a (somehow) newer light. Why you may ask of this very detail that seems to not shed any more “obvious” light to what’s already been the most obvious of ideals chosen to be the main majority of facts by today's standards…? Well it completely doesn’t. As it entirely does, also. You see both choosing to do something whilst (trying to simply do that very thing) aren’t the same by ANY standards. As their both each other’s direct counterparts! Given standards for a given achieving rate. None will cause you to trade ideal for fact towards choosing over trying. Simply because if choosing doesn’t matter one bit… It’s also fair to say that trying is the ultimate reaction time, because choosing doesn’t matter. Trying is closer to a stimulus. Whilst choosing is closer to a response. A stimulus is better described as being incredibly instinctive. Where you have NO motion, except for what your mind feels when constantly being pulled in so many directions it doesn’t know which way to advise itself otherwise. Commonly being used as a “deterrent for disaster” when being controlled by the very thing it’s meant to control. A response however, is nothing without its stimulus to direct the trigger that at which made you react towards firstly. Warping your very bodies need to get wrapped up into itself. (More direct artificial stimulus rises and falls confusing the bodies signals…which politely anyways sends back to the mind safely.) Threatening to shower even more reactions down on itself from the literal inside out! Nevertheless, this was good for the mind. Gave it some closure as the “god of your own body”! Mind could personally get back at the body for pulling it into thinking it was the god! When truthfully, it was simply the deprived mortal acting as the constant, repeating, signalling pack mule! Hast to know its place after all… Am I right…?! The mind said, confident in its very words. All because the body reacted to something it inadvertently forced the mind into thinking it was being pulled around in so many directions, it didn’t know how to otherwise order its entire counterpart to simply halt! Simply by saying…STOP! However, you must know by now in today's age, that when something is amiss, you don’t simply surrender lightly. Especially when it doesn’t feel right. You ALWAYS listen to when something doesn’t FEEL…RIGHT! Am I right…?!
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Random mortar shells in the afternoon. Sparkling, steel jacketed rain drops, Glinting rainbows of reflected sunlight. Plastic explosive seat cushions upon which passers-by, Rest their weary bones. C-4 candy bars, nuclear toothpaste, ****** for dessert. Orphanage flambe', hospital hash, blood pudding. Human burgers sizzling on a smart bomb bar-b-que grill. Finger food, toe jam, baby-back ribs. Bureaucratic double talkers, Sugar coated body counts, Colateral stew. Really deplorable, awfully sorry, But it was their own faults trying to put on raincoats. They declined our invitation to the cook-out. Bad luck to open an umbrella in the house. Remotely piloted funeral processions. Radar guided hearses. Televised in real time. Precision, surgical, neutralized, deterrent, disarmed, Deactivated, stand down, eliminate. Living pawns on a battlefield checkerboard. Strategic, defensive, Dominate, annihilate, Acceptable loss, public opinion pole. Listen to the tinkling of sabre blades, Rattling windchimes, In the warm breeze of the shockwave, Accompanied by the drumbeat of detonation and concussion. Rock...         ...and heads will roll. Holy, blessed, Patriotic, brave, Courageous, dedicated, Heroic, dutiful, Self sacrificing...                          ******
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May 16, 2014
May 16, 2014 at 10:28 AM UTC
Iron Rain
Paper ***** flew around the classroom masquerading  as a cricket ball Hit as hard but managing to hardly go anywhere The chaos in the class would soon end, as the diminutive figure will walk in, book in one hand Prying eyes trying to catch the laggards shuffling back to their seat and pretend to be very obedient and behaved lot. The pinch, the hit on the arm with ruler, or the words will bring about absolute silence, masking the transient pain and shame, that will soon followed by snickering comments and giggles from those who escaped this time by their agility or luck. The pencil boxes will soon start to play multiple roles, like the actors in a play on a tight budget, Transporting bits of papers with probable clues to the questions put forth, the wrong answer to which, could lead to repercussions of varying degree.. Like standing outside like a flagpole, but failing to act as a deterrent to us incorrigible lot. Lunch time will be  like an oasis in the day of claustrophobic pedantry   where the darwinian principles will be set to test, hands drawn towards the most delicious tiffin boxes, the rightful owner of which will be lucky to even find a morsel But however mundane and monochromatic sometimes those time may be Looking back its was all worth it when we could pick after 3 decades later where we all left off and engage in hours of debating, leg-pulling, sarcasm, enlightenment not withstanding the boundaries of time, space and temperament.
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Jun 9, 2015
Jun 9, 2015 at 7:40 AM UTC
School Nostalgia
Proclaimed the paper-cutout placard on the table: Clothless gray plastic-surfaced round. In this immense faux-stone (concrete?) Faux-English country house We escape to the top of the stairs: The no admittance sign is no deterrent. The iridescence of your skirt is captivating But all I can remember is living in a castle like this one When I was a little blonde nothing And feeling the way I do now, As if there's been no transformation, no progress. Maybe there has, And this band must be pretty great To keep this many old white people dancing so enthusiastically For such a long time: An ancient one with a Christmas-themed vest Foxtrots with a once-lady in a polyester pants suit Thin hair dyed roofing-tar black, suede kitten heels clacking. The world's a **** strange place. Even if we feel like we aren't quite awake, We'll adjust our stockings and fill our plates With that mystery-shrouded gelatinous citrus dessert And our plastic cups with apple cider, light beer, 7-Up. Endure a few more minutes on this rented dancefloor with me Because they're playing love shack And who doesn't smile at the mere notion of the B-52s?
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Dec 5, 2010
Dec 5, 2010 at 3:10 PM UTC
Crum Creek
Foolishness of Jehovah exceeds the wisdom of Mankind; torture by crucifixion was to serve as a deterrent to stop all forms of crime. Inhumane treatment demonstrates insatiable blood thirst in a vain attempt to bring out the best character of man by placing World's justice system first. However, death of the Innocent Lamb, a perfect sacrifice God did decree to bridge the gap of sin using Man's worst punishment in a twist of spiritual irony.
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Mar 30, 2012
Mar 30, 2012 at 10:58 AM UTC
Poem: Spiritual Irony
If you don't mind Mr Betts, Can I call you Mr Betts? Yes? Great Mr Betts, I'm going to keep this brief i'd like to go through a few Q&A's Off the record as always And no apologies ~~~ Have you ever tried not being a priick? Or attempted to not mess up shhit? Every feeding and helping hand, Innocently presented, Got bit Your past can't always be the culprit The future shouldn't be viewed as unimportant That opens the door for thoughts of forfeit Forced to be reactant Bilt a bridge to get over it The craftsmanship is always immaculate Admired from entrance to exit Then, in the very next moment, There's always a head turn to confirm it A ***** and Gomorrah double take to make sure the thing stayed lit Though you've never turn to stone or **** a brick It's not a one time incident I'm sensing that punishment is no longer a deterrent It isn't, isn't it? The troubling news is...you guessed it Everyone's reclaiming their investment Or eating the cost, willing to take the loss just to be done with it Setting a telling precedent of embarrassment One with an abundance of resentment All the while, this battle internal is constant Brought on ironically by an antidepressant Raging against tendencies of a suicidal mindset It's crazy how ugly things tend to get, Within a quarter of a heart beat minus a minute In other words, it's instant Good luck, you're gonna need it." ©2024
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Apr 15, 2024
Apr 15, 2024 at 1:08 PM UTC
~•§•~ An Embarrassing Precedent ~•§•~
are always a journey, hours can move so slow, or pass by quickly somehow, we think of good times and bad times back to our innocent days........and stubborn ways... late hours could bring out perfect landscapes, or, chilling moonscapes, from a fecund mind every corner, every moment, every gust of wind every act...becomes an incipient inspiration, then come verses on existence and experiences, our awakenings.....impressions on love's essence, newfound feelings...we write about God's presence, we question concepts on life here on earth, and life thereafter.....wondering, if Heaven, or hell occurs right here on earth, in our midst, or deep within ourselves...or, maybe, in another sphere...different... my folks often told us then, maybe as a deterrent, "Heaven and hell, are places....for consequences of our earthly actions...they're afterlife occurences..." Sally Copyright November 18, 2016 Rosalia Rosario A. Bayan
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Nov 18, 2016
Nov 18, 2016 at 10:38 PM UTC
Long nights...
A new found enjoyment, not heaven sent Still drawn to it like a moth to a flame Don't share in my regret, promise to stay distant I couldn't bare to see you in this much pain Find me ambivalent to some extent To take another step if it's in vain Notice I'm hesitant to place a bet L's stack shame on top of shame atop my name Life itself's a debt, lest we forget The plot and grave are one in the same A dark passenger resident denise me residence How did I lose access to my own brain To myself I'm a threat, morality bent Just so I'm not always going against the grain Don't care 'bout bein' relevant, never permanent But pain finds a way to remain No clue what it meant is a poor argument Would rather not waste time trying to explain One day you might get it, wouldn't count on it Strange to be your very own ball and chain Go 'head and attempt it, see no safety net You WILL become one with the terrain Flesh and bone, neck and neck racing to pavement Then witness the insane riddled membrane Always defiant, against my better judgement Probably should have stayed in my own lane No deterrent to embracing my inner deviant A full embrace of the profane Won't seek atonement, least not at the moment I only wish the only option was to remain There's a death certificate, a signed suicide document The growing black mark on my heart is more than a stain So here I sit, trying to make sense of it Unknown, alone and forgotten out in the rain Selfimprisonment, a life sentence recipient The issues with my DNA, infecting every strain ©2023
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May 13, 2023
May 13, 2023 at 9:22 PM UTC
~•§•~ Hesitant ~•§•~
A new found enjoyment, not heaven sent Still drawn to it like a moth to a flame Don't share in my regret, promise to stay distant I couldn't bare to see you in this much pain Find me ambivalent to some extent To take another step if it's in vain Notice I'm hesitant to place a bet L's stack shame on top of shame atop my name Life itself's a debt, lest we forget The plot and grave are one in the same A dark passenger resident denise me residence How did I lose access to my own brain To myself I'm a threat, morality bent Just so I'm not always going against the grain Don't care 'bout bein' relevant, never permanent But pain finds a way to remain No clue what it meant is a poor argument Would rather not waste time trying to explain One day you might get it, wouldn't count on it Strange to be your very own ball and chain Go 'head and attempt it, see no safety net You WILL become one with the terrain Flesh and bone, neck and neck racing to pavement Then witness the insane riddled membrane Always defiant, against my better judgement Probably should have stayed in my own lane No deterrent to embracing my inner deviant A full embrace of the profane Won't seek atonement, least not at the moment I only wish the only option was to remain There's a death certificate, a signed suicide document The growing black mark on my heart is more than a stain So here I sit, trying to make sense of it Unknown, alone and forgotten out in the rain Selfimprisonment, a life sentence recipient The issues with my DNA, infecting every strain ©2023
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I once passed by an old lady's garden, Lined with colored rose bushes, it was like Heaven! I stopped...I stood, admiring. The roses were in full bloom that morning. They were quite tall, like small trees side by side. Then I noticed other walkers also stopped by. Beside me, behind me, they were standing, Sighing, admiring. Any place, anywhere it stands, Attention, it instantly commands Its petals speak of beauty, of fragrance, To some, they symbolize unspoken devotion. Its different colors are known to represent Feelings, specifically, lovers' emotions. Underneath its hard spiked body, it still is soft. Its thorns have sharp perfect points A protective threat, so inherent, A powerful deterrent For those with evil intent. Its sweet-smelling petals become softer When held by hands so tender, To the birds and the bees, they are a teaser, Butterflies, even dragonflies, They cannot resist to perch... We human beings Can never resist a sniff, a touch, Love is the stem of a rose, we still dare hold We disregard the thorns so bold. In life, there are pricking scares known, yet ignored. Like the leaves of a rose, we have hidden spikes, our own stories untold, Our hearts, our feelings are very delicate, When the arrows hit, ...they're easy to captivate. But you see, A rose stands tall Proud as a concrete wall, It bows a bit, it gives way When blooms bear too much weight, When things seem to always be a prelude And, we wait for trying moments to conclude. But when a morning so new Greets a rose with its cold, fresh dew Miraculously, it again stands tall, Proud as a concrete wall. It survives through the seasons, "Sleepy" in winter, not at all dying, Just patiently waiting. It speaks beyond words, beyond reasons, For underneath, It lives. In its silence, It survives. A rose will never be a rose, without its rough surfaced leaves and tho r n ......s...... :::::::: ::::: ::: Sally Copyright 2014 Rosalia Rosario A. Bayan ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Dec 30, 2014
Dec 30, 2014 at 5:33 PM UTC
A ROSE WILL NEVER BE A ROSE...
I once passed by an old lady's garden, Lined with colored rose bushes, it was like Heaven! I stopped...I stood, admiring. The roses were in full bloom that morning. They were quite tall, like small trees side by side. Then I noticed other walkers also stopped by. Beside me, behind me, they were standing, Sighing, admiring. Any place, anywhere it stands, Attention, it instantly commands Its petals speak of beauty, of fragrance, To some, they symbolize unspoken devotion. Its different colors are known to represent Feelings, specifically, lovers' emotions. Underneath its hard spiked body, it still is soft. Its thorns have sharp perfect points A protective threat, so inherent, A powerful deterrent For those with evil intent. Its sweet-smelling petals become softer When held by hands so tender, To the birds and the bees, they are a teaser, Butterflies, even dragonflies, They cannot resist to perch... We human beings Can never resist a sniff, a touch, Love is the stem of a rose, we still dare hold We disregard the thorns so bold. In life, there are pricking scares known, yet ignored. Like the leaves of a rose, we have hidden spikes, our own stories untold, Our hearts, our feelings are very delicate, When the arrows hit, ...they're easy to captivate. But you see, A rose stands tall Proud as a concrete wall, It bows a bit, it gives way When blooms bear too much weight, When things seem to always be a prelude And, we wait for trying moments to conclude. But when a morning so new Greets a rose with its cold, fresh dew Miraculously, it again stands tall, Proud as a concrete wall. It survives through the seasons, "Sleepy" in winter, not at all dying, Just patiently waiting. It speaks beyond words, beyond reasons, For underneath, It lives. In its silence, It survives. A rose will never be a rose, without its rough surfaced leaves and tho r n ......s...... :::::::: ::::: ::: Sally Copyright 2014 Rosalia Rosario A. Bayan ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~
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a roadkill feast, this doe that met truck bumper the black night before now in the Texas sun, talons and beaks make easy work of eyeballs and entrails the asphalt a convenient griddle, slow cooking dead deer, while the ravenous birds dine somewhere in the brush, a childless mother, with no incantation to bring her baby back this creature without words only senses a void--nipples no longer gnawed and ****** what mourning for this loss, now attended to by buzzards fast filling their guts until I come upon them, my own bumper approaching at warp speed my metal beast to avenge this desecration with a twist of my wrist, a turn of tires fast from the red road a flapping of blue-black wings--all but one escapes my wrath he took too long to take flight, unaware my grill could **** with such impunity a simple twist of the wrist, a bump, a thump, and one less vulture feeds on the dead above him, his brethren wait, riding cool currents -- my execution but a brief deterrent to their wake
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Apr 23, 2018
Apr 23, 2018 at 3:22 PM UTC
gone, this wake of buzzards
There is the iron gate. It’s ornate. A work of art. Not really a deterrent to anyone that yearns to be beyond it. It’s just a gate. But it’s the start of the journey that will begin at the long driveway that holds us apart. But it’s just a gate. It’s pretty but it won’t hold me back. It’s just another barrier to your heart. The large mahogany doors that stand closed to me are just that. Closed But not for long. Open for me, I can hear you singing our song Open! Bring me into your outer world. It won’t be long. The marble foyer is cold. The chandelier? Bold! The emptiness is a blessing in disguise. I know you are watching I can feel your eyes, upon me, a gentle caress upon my inviting skin. You don’t fool me, I can feel your sin. Please, you invited me in. The hallway is cold and dark, the cold of the rooms that are left and right of me is stark. There is no fire burning in these outer rooms. No life for me to wonder about and yet, I’m here, wandering aimlessly in these empty halls, and the echo of my lonely moan is projected back to me on an angry shout. Where could you be about? I’m drifting past the library that is filled with your intelligence And past the solar filled with unearthly blooms that drown me in their fragrance But there is no other sign of life I walk the raw edge of madness upon a finally honed knife Madness is gladly pressing upon me and its pungent aroma is rife But I’ll continue to glide toward an essence that is pure Because it calls out to me. Waiting. Wanting. Listening. Asking. Wanting to know that what is coming is sure. Down barren hallways and steps of stone. I’ve traveled them all. I did it alone Across a landscape that was draped in a colored shroud I stepped into a chamber that was devoid of all sound. I’m here You’re there in front of the fire Surrounded by nothing, you stare at the flames that reflects back all your ire. Your mirth, your understanding, your passiveness is greedily eaten by the hungry lick of a relentless flame But as I glide silently to your side and cast a mercurial look at the hearth, I watch the roaring fire become soothing warmth and know that I have gained your inner sanctum and your life will never be the same. Douse the fire in the cold hard hearth I will forever be your flame
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Sep 26, 2013
Sep 26, 2013 at 3:01 AM UTC
Inner Sanctum Burn
There is the iron gate. It’s ornate. A work of art. Not really a deterrent to anyone that yearns to be beyond it. It’s just a gate. But it’s the start of the journey that will begin at the long driveway that holds us apart. But it’s just a gate. It’s pretty but it won’t hold me back. It’s just another barrier to your heart. The large mahogany doors that stand closed to me are just that. Closed But not for long. Open for me, I can hear you singing our song Open! Bring me into your outer world. It won’t be long. The marble foyer is cold. The chandelier? Bold! The emptiness is a blessing in disguise. I know you are watching I can feel your eyes, upon me, a gentle caress upon my inviting skin. You don’t fool me, I can feel your sin. Please, you invited me in. The hallway is cold and dark, the cold of the rooms that are left and right of me is stark. There is no fire burning in these outer rooms. No life for me to wonder about and yet, I’m here, wandering aimlessly in these empty halls, and the echo of my lonely moan is projected back to me on an angry shout. Where could you be about? I’m drifting past the library that is filled with your intelligence And past the solar filled with unearthly blooms that drown me in their fragrance But there is no other sign of life I walk the raw edge of madness upon a finally honed knife Madness is gladly pressing upon me and its pungent aroma is rife But I’ll continue to glide toward an essence that is pure Because it calls out to me. Waiting. Wanting. Listening. Asking. Wanting to know that what is coming is sure. Down barren hallways and steps of stone. I’ve traveled them all. I did it alone Across a landscape that was draped in a colored shroud I stepped into a chamber that was devoid of all sound. I’m here You’re there in front of the fire Surrounded by nothing, you stare at the flames that reflects back all your ire. Your mirth, your understanding, your passiveness is greedily eaten by the hungry lick of a relentless flame But as I glide silently to your side and cast a mercurial look at the hearth, I watch the roaring fire become soothing warmth and know that I have gained your inner sanctum and your life will never be the same. Douse the fire in the cold hard hearth I will forever be your flame
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So numerous were the pits and gashes dotting Walsutaddel's frown that, looking at it, one was tempted to apply to it a thin coating of crushed shale for the purposes of examination (at the natural but, sadly, not at all deterrent horror of Walsutaddel himself). Endearing as this characteristic may have been, however, the deep pits of his eyes caught one slightly off guard, and so it was that many a potential acquaintance was driven away after an initially being so taken fascinating molding of the poor wretch. This is mind, it should be no great mystery that the face that delighted and lured in so many passers-by was contorted in such an expression of sorrow, but it was rare, one having seen the eyes of this beast and thus having the information absolutely necessary for this inference, that one gave the creature a further thought, to the exclusion, of course, of the universal and, one might say, basically human, shudder, if that can be considered a thought at all. In addition to the marred canvas of his face, the only other qualities to which one could apply the term «alluring» were a severely mangled spinal column, at some points reaching the regularity of a helix and at others simply resembling the path of a garden hose draped haphazardly over a stretch of hilly terrain, and a pair of wrists somehow more flaccidly attached than if they'd lacked bone and ligament altogether. The rest of his physiognomy was of such terrible shape and demeanor as to be totally unworthy of description.
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Feb 6, 2012
Feb 6, 2012 at 8:44 PM UTC
Our Beloved Walsutaddel
So numerous were the pits and gashes dotting Walsutaddel's frown that, looking at it, one was tempted to apply to it a thin coating of crushed shale for the purposes of examination (at the natural but, sadly, not at all deterrent horror of Walsutaddel himself). Endearing as this characteristic may have been, however, the deep pits of his eyes caught one slightly off guard, and so it was that many a potential acquaintance was driven away after an initially being so taken fascinating molding of the poor wretch. This is mind, it should be no great mystery that the face that delighted and lured in so many passers-by was contorted in such an expression of sorrow, but it was rare, one having seen the eyes of this beast and thus having the information absolutely necessary for this inference, that one gave the creature a further thought, to the exclusion, of course, of the universal and, one might say, basically human, shudder, if that can be considered a thought at all. In addition to the marred canvas of his face, the only other qualities to which one could apply the term «alluring» were a severely mangled spinal column, at some points reaching the regularity of a helix and at others simply resembling the path of a garden hose draped haphazardly over a stretch of hilly terrain, and a pair of wrists somehow more flaccidly attached than if they'd lacked bone and ligament altogether. The rest of his physiognomy was of such terrible shape and demeanor as to be totally unworthy of description.
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I've often wondered why the sun has to set, but lately i've been cursing its rise for darling I love the way the candle lights your eyes. I suppose, I shun the conception that the sun will expose the intricacies of my insecurities and depths of my woes. i want to gyrate in my groves and triumph over my pain but the weather man in my pupils only predicts rain, so why does the sun have to rise? this darkness is a deterrent for my sweltering eyes and in your perfection, my sweet, i must wear a disguise, so keep the sun at bay, so my imperfection tries. T.S
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Sep 9, 2013
Sep 9, 2013 at 12:03 AM UTC
Please darling.
karl marx wrote in 1844 once i have money i am no longer bound by my individuality i am ugly but i can buy for myself the most beautiful women therefore i am not ugly for effect of ugliness its deterrent power is nullified by money did you hear what he said? i am ugly but i can buy the most beautiful woman written over 150 years ago but it’s still true women are commodities slaves provider has too much money used to getting his way wants control yet intended outcome is reversed recipient grows sick of accommodating provider’s demands eventually no *** nobody wins how many gorgeous women are lonely untouched longing? truth is provider is too insecure to allow possibilities experiment ok you be the man ok let’s both be the man woman whatever we live in primitive time karl again if money is bond binding me to human life binding society to me binding me nature man is not money bond of all bonds? can it not dissolve and bind all ties? is it not therefore universal agent of divorce? women get to point where they just expect cheating betrayal beatings i don’t understand how does a person believe that’s how life is explain inversely if you really want a guy treat him like **** this **** has been drilled into us hard-wired ingrained deep down in our psyches even long after you were gone i was still doing stuff trying to please you
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Feb 22, 2010
Feb 22, 2010 at 8:37 AM UTC
you have no idea what you're involved in
Hidden in plain sight There unseen yet seen by all Unnoticed as though shielded More of a protective camouflage Designed to peer out Yet not see in A most effective deterrent to invasion Keeping what out exactly? A physical presence Or an emotional Still you hid in plain sight Blending, unnoticed In a bubble Can't be seen So won't be bothered.
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Mar 24, 2013
Mar 24, 2013 at 12:22 PM UTC
Masked
Justice is one thing you should always find And it’s something not so common today. If you step out of line There should be hell to pay We need a little more retribution And throw a rope of that tree If we put a few more in the ground All those bad boys would think more carefully Before assaulting that person Before doing somebody wrong And once the gun smoke settles We’ll all meet in the saloon for a victory song Back in those days my papie said A man had to face up to what he’d done We’d either find a great oak tree Hanging them high or put them to the gun There just ain’t any deterrent any more We have to raise our glasses up against evil forces We got too many gangsters, too much corruption Order whiskies all round for the men and water for the horses Today we need to show them who’s boss The law needs to put a few more bodies in the ground We need to fins the tallest oak tree and a length of a rope Let them meet their Maker, that’ll settle them down.
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Jun 1, 2012
Jun 1, 2012 at 1:08 PM UTC
Hang 'Em High
my actions are always fast sometimes void of thought, sometimes void of vision i am my own worst enemy i always have been the greatest deterrent to my own determination a damnation within the hearts beating, a black hole in my minds eye my actions are always fast sometimes void of thought, sometimes void of vision full of feelings, however fleeting, they may be.
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Apr 24, 2013
Apr 24, 2013 at 4:33 PM UTC
mistakes
- A shield is a device used for defense; It blocks incoming attacks, evading blows. - A weapon is a device used for offense; It performs attacks, which may be blocked by a shield. - Shields and weapons are not interchangeable. A shield is not a weapon. A weapon is not a shield. - When a weapon is used preemptively, We call it aggression. - In the face of aggression, A weapon used as a shield, Is called Revenge. - It may be right, It may be justified, But it will never keep you safe. - Nuclear deterrent. - A fine weapon, But a poor excuse for a shield. -
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Jun 7, 2014
Jun 7, 2014 at 6:18 AM UTC
Swords and Shields