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"invalidating" poems
suicide I've thought about it. we all have in different ways some of us wonder why some of us wonder if we should some of us attempt and some of us do suicide am I really the selfish one? I just want this ******* pain and loneliness to end? maybe you're selfish because you want me to go on so YOU don't have to feel the pain suicide how often do you call your friends and loved ones? do they call you? you can have friends and feel alone if you're the one who's always reaching out. maybe they'd call if they really knew. maybe they'd ignore you cause your sadness makes them uncomfortable. suicide it sure can look tempting when you feel all alone, unwanted undesireable like you don't belong and never will suicide maybe if we reached out more, tried to understand instead of shaming, ignoring or invalidating pain and struggles maybe we could prevent suicide
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Jul 5, 2023
Jul 5, 2023 at 9:00 PM UTC
Suicide
Oh' if I could speak the language of his atraction With a generosity of exchange in bounteous metaphors Yes and let him be the quality of my oppression For there is a torture about my words when put to voice They search for plausible reasons as is such cannot be found And yet I have a trouble governing my generous impulses Oh' the inaudible corruption that is my mind, hoping, wishing Begging for a prosperity of possibilities that will vanquish tears That I with moral perspectives should bind a mutuality between us Invalidating my inadequacies thus find a resolution not in artiface But in a charmed and beautiful way that shall be the essence of love Without a prodigality of thought, but each for each, in solemnity of kiss
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Sep 2, 2012
Sep 2, 2012 at 2:24 PM UTC
My Crush
Lauryn Hill is going to jail for not paying her taxes, a fate that would surely befall us all if caught. She argued to the judge that since her ancestors were slaves, our economic system was imposed on her against her will, invalidating her burden. Pay your ******* taxes, you ignorant bigot. When your ancestors started making money, they started owing taxes.  This is a feature of society called "equality."
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Dec 14, 2013
Dec 14, 2013 at 2:47 PM UTC
The Phantom's Doppelganger
The first power of the Sphinx is Knowledge. *Science, philosophy, and religion are the Holy Trinity;         once a singular discipline,         broken today into Three                 over differences in                 epistemology:* the First is a narrow window into empirical space;         the Following a flexible framework         in conceptual space;                 the Final, all-encompassing                 on the stage of the soul;                         neither invalidating                         nor undermining each other,                         but Checking and Balancing. Facts are interpretations; theories are stories; storytelling, myth; myth, the key to Knowledge. To Know is to conceive. To conceive is to objectify, but far from objective: We understand what we invent.                         *"All things are Known.                         What shall we do                         with what we Know?"* ¬ When curiosity is not slain, but permitted in the vacuum of the eternal Question, Then are the journey and the journeyer initiated.
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Jan 6, 2015
Jan 6, 2015 at 4:49 PM UTC
Epistemology
The moon's glow holds nothing special tonight, As someone so brilliant glimmers before my eyes. It is captivating the way green eyes sparkle in moonlight, The way rosy lips lightly release quiet sighs. I am transported to other places, when there I gaze, And you remain at my side wherever I roam. You peel away the pain that has lingered like a haze, Deciding that you will never leave me alone. And on quiet nights, when there are no sounds in the air, My mind wanders to the holder of my love. Ponders green eyes that mesmerize as they stare, Invalidating the glowing moon above. I close my eyes on those quiet nights, and you appear, Existing beside me to calm my shaking form. Your embrace vanquishing my fear, Calming this tumultuous storm.
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Jul 24, 2016
Jul 24, 2016 at 10:48 PM UTC
Transported to Other Places
i'm sorry that i don't fit your definition of male. i'm sorry i don't have testosterone running rampant in my veins i'm sorry i don't have a bulge like the mound on a hill i'm sorry i don't have a flat chest acceptable enough to expose in the summer i'm sorry you can't begin to understand my heart before judging my body. i'm sorry you were raised to define a man by what's in his pants. i'm sorry you would rather spend your life invalidating me and so many others than open the doors that beg for a chance but i am just as much of a man as the next guy.
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Apr 13, 2018
Apr 13, 2018 at 2:22 PM UTC
their definition
I would sell myself a bill of goods Before I would ever inveigh The babble That some-have the chutz-puh To accept as some obscure Personal quest That they must compel Themselves to fulfill As the Tower Of Babel was To the intrangient zealots As they go about Invoking invidiousness Binging on the intoxicating inversion Of partisan  opinionativeness Quoting as they go "Do unto me not as I do unto you" When... In a chronometric second Any possible bipartisan thoughts That they may truly possess Has passed through their cinderblock brain Like the ray of light On a birefringent trajectory Unable to acknowledge or accept either one As the refracting action Accentuates the intolerance Invalidating them for The total lack Of introspection Resulting from the Total absence Of any biological binder That on any level would ever Allow even the slightest sprig Of libertarian thought To escape deracination Slamming the lid tightly In hopes that noone  would see The dividends that grow from The derivation as a desideratum People who can't see it Personally.... I don't need em.
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Jan 8, 2016
Jan 8, 2016 at 2:57 AM UTC
Personally ...I don't need em.
but sometimes i get sick of it all - fighting trying i'm just done with trying to get people to listen instead of invalidating my opinions even before they actually hear me out
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Feb 21, 2014
Feb 21, 2014 at 11:24 AM UTC
i'm not saying i'm better off dead
When it rains I count the little droplets on the window I avoid the cold black widow As it hangs high at the ceiling It gives me an odd feeling A feeling that makes me wish That even if I'm rich Death would be my escape From a world Hollow and ***** From a vision Of pure and total hate Why do these people hate me Why do they hurt and interrogate me Asking unspoken questions Looking for unknown answers Invalidating my prestige Through intolerably hateful banter Yes I see this And feel the pulsing of my veins Yes I see this Every time it rains
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Jan 23, 2011
Jan 23, 2011 at 2:05 AM UTC
When it Rains
I look back at all I wrote about the boy who played baseball. Who had three dogs, now four. Who was the only boy out of four sisters. Who says "God isn't real" because he lost his dad at age 12. Who was so handsome. We've been apart for a year or so and I couldn't be happier. I hope he's happy too. He's in college now, the college I'm going to in August; funny how things work out. But I don't miss him. I haven't missed him in a long, long time. I remember when I thought that I loved him. That he was the one. That because he told me we were going to get married one day, that actually were. I never loved him the way you love the one. But I did love him, in a way. I don't regret him breaking up with me. I only regret telling him "it's okay" through choked sobs and invalidating my feelings. I regret hating him for so long for breaking my heart then trying to date one of my best friends not even three months later. I shouldn't have been mad, not really. But now, since the summer, I realized what I had been missing for years. That my best friend---funny, strange, sweet, blonde mop top---was the one I'm supposed to be with. Maybe I'm being naive and getting ahead of myself, thinking that he is the one. Maybe I too easily think people are the one. But this love I have never experienced before, and it's so magical. Maybe this one will end up in flames like every other one. Maybe this one will end up with a queen sized mattress and sweet ********** in mid-morning. I can't see the future, but God, I wish I would have stopped ******* around and asked him out years ago. Instead of dancing around each other; snuggling, holding hands, napping together, for years. Knowing that I liked him, but was too afraid to act. I was so dumb. I am still so dumb. But I couldn't be happier with how life is right now.
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Dec 10, 2015
Dec 10, 2015 at 4:55 PM UTC
Goodbye past, Hello future
I look back at all I wrote about the boy who played baseball. Who had three dogs, now four. Who was the only boy out of four sisters. Who says "God isn't real" because he lost his dad at age 12. Who was so handsome. We've been apart for a year or so and I couldn't be happier. I hope he's happy too. He's in college now, the college I'm going to in August; funny how things work out. But I don't miss him. I haven't missed him in a long, long time. I remember when I thought that I loved him. That he was the one. That because he told me we were going to get married one day, that actually were. I never loved him the way you love the one. But I did love him, in a way. I don't regret him breaking up with me. I only regret telling him "it's okay" through choked sobs and invalidating my feelings. I regret hating him for so long for breaking my heart then trying to date one of my best friends not even three months later. I shouldn't have been mad, not really. But now, since the summer, I realized what I had been missing for years. That my best friend---funny, strange, sweet, blonde mop top---was the one I'm supposed to be with. Maybe I'm being naive and getting ahead of myself, thinking that he is the one. Maybe I too easily think people are the one. But this love I have never experienced before, and it's so magical. Maybe this one will end up in flames like every other one. Maybe this one will end up with a queen sized mattress and sweet ********** in mid-morning. I can't see the future, but God, I wish I would have stopped ******* around and asked him out years ago. Instead of dancing around each other; snuggling, holding hands, napping together, for years. Knowing that I liked him, but was too afraid to act. I was so dumb. I am still so dumb. But I couldn't be happier with how life is right now.
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In a world far far away from ours, I like to envision the people there. The beings, there. How they feel things, if at all. And how they express themselves. If they feel what’s right and what’s wrong, or if they know what forgiveness is, or if they even have a need for it. And if they do, how is it painted across their faces? Is it ugly? Or is it understood? If they are able to understand the forgiveness, how do they express it? Through words, actions, being quiet, or taking no action at all? And if so, how stagnant does their love become once the ugliness of their forgiveness becomes quiet as snow? Or maybe it’s the opposite. Maybe they have no desire for forgiveness because their wrongs don’t amount to rights, or their rights to their wrongs. How beautiful must that feel? What we all would give to feel flawless inside of our morals, never taking for granted the misery we fill ourselves up with just by misunderstanding forgiveness. In that world so far, far away, how are apologies painted? Or have they all collectively come to the conclusion that they should not need to apologize for the space between our worlds, and we should not need to forgive them for it, simply because it was created that way. It feels so immeasurably invalidating to confront the fact that we are as simple as children until the day that we die, and every day until then, we dress up in our suits and ties and parade the idea of forgiveness, just hoping that we can become a martyr for it.
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Dec 23, 2018
Dec 23, 2018 at 4:49 AM UTC
The Context of Forgiveness Through the Space In Between Ourselves
In a world far far away from ours, I like to envision the people there. The beings, there. How they feel things, if at all. And how they express themselves. If they feel what’s right and what’s wrong, or if they know what forgiveness is, or if they even have a need for it. And if they do, how is it painted across their faces? Is it ugly? Or is it understood? If they are able to understand the forgiveness, how do they express it? Through words, actions, being quiet, or taking no action at all? And if so, how stagnant does their love become once the ugliness of their forgiveness becomes quiet as snow? Or maybe it’s the opposite. Maybe they have no desire for forgiveness because their wrongs don’t amount to rights, or their rights to their wrongs. How beautiful must that feel? What we all would give to feel flawless inside of our morals, never taking for granted the misery we fill ourselves up with just by misunderstanding forgiveness. In that world so far, far away, how are apologies painted? Or have they all collectively come to the conclusion that they should not need to apologize for the space between our worlds, and we should not need to forgive them for it, simply because it was created that way. It feels so immeasurably invalidating to confront the fact that we are as simple as children until the day that we die, and every day until then, we dress up in our suits and ties and parade the idea of forgiveness, just hoping that we can become a martyr for it.
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I wrote it on my wrists one year and then again in the powder of pain pills. and once more inside bottles of dark whiskey that made me forget. Since then I have not been close to a knife without it feeling too heavy. Since then I have not been able to stomach medicine. Since then the alcohol doesn’t go down the same. Just makes my eyes ache and my chest feel heavy the intoxication isn’t fun anymore. just a warm nostalgia of why I started it in the first place Even upon running away I am reminded of it. Even upon coping I am reminded of it. In the steady up and down of my breathing- I hear yours in my ear. In the weight of cloth upon my skin I feel them there. So what am I to do? When you still ruin me from the inside. What am I to do? When my own father is invalidating at every corner. What am I to ******* do When his Facebook comments are thrown into my face as he uses the word “molestation” as an insult as something I should be ashamed of as something that doesn’t happen but only to deface men. What am I do to do? When around every corner I am reminded of what they’ve done to me? I. Keep. ******* Walking.
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Sep 28, 2018
Sep 28, 2018 at 9:27 AM UTC
notes on surviving
You can’t gloss over it because the hurt spreads too deep. You try so hard to express your truth yet your cries for help are branded as ignorant, everything you say is rebuffed and rejected. Your loneliness doesn’t meet the standard of everybody else, theirs can be expressed but yours is suppressed. Your sadness falls flat because it ain’t that serious for you to be stressing about or lingering over. If your mind doesn’t **** you fast enough opening up will, you can’t look for help where your feelings don’t hold weight. Why seek comfort from people who’d rather watch you drown than dry your tears?   How you cope may not be the solution, yet their passing judgement and distant attitude leaves you out in the cold so rather than smoothly detaching from the distress and seeking to heal the struggle of knowing your emotions are like waste irrelevant, invalidating and an inconvenience.  Whether they meant the hurt or not we all know when you say what you say in anger or serenity it can’t be taken back, & just like that, a broken record is birthed and then constantly played. Coping is to keep pushing aside life’s woes until you break again, not having the strength to face it head on you just bury your head in the sand.
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Sep 15, 2022
Sep 15, 2022 at 8:50 AM UTC
BURY YOUR HEAD IN THE SAND
Deadly to creativity, paralyzing  joy, invalidating beauty, Denial of Essence
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Apr 10, 2013
Apr 10, 2013 at 8:06 AM UTC
Comparison 10W
I see overreaction You see red You see: "you've broken a promise, watched it with another boy" I see: "I was lonely and wanted to watch a movie we'd planned to watch together on my couch" I see: turn over and slowly drift to sleep with my love by my side You see: you're being distant, now I feel alone and hurt You see: I smoked without him Thursday night, that's so disrespectful of me I see: you enjoying time with friends while I need a night in alone I see: you walk out of the galleria after saying cattily: "I'll take those keys now" You see: me hurting you, being inconsiderate, invalidating your feelings You see: the silent treatment I see: you slowly inch away from me with each passerby I see: myself trying to understand why you feel so intensely about this, why you believe me (by some default setting) to be driven by self-interest; general inconsideration You see: me invalidating you You see: me as someone who can't see what I contribute to the struggle I see: you continue to question my awareness and intent I see: clarifying questions, then my own defensiveness because I am being accused of intent I never had You see: your feelings invalidated and me being defensive I see: you assuming the worst You see: what you want to see
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May 20, 2018
May 20, 2018 at 12:48 PM UTC
I see You see
Please don’t beat me up. While you are entitled to feel however you're gonna feel, you don't get to beat me up because you've decided that I came for you with malintent when I didn't. I come from a place of love. I'm intentional about my words, tone and intent. I am aware. Give me grace. Give me the benefit of the doubt. Understand your past, present. Understand mine. If I say something that has upset you, just because you feel I am being judgmental, doesn’t mean that I am being judgmental. Our feelings and reactions do not necessarily (and often are not) accurate depictions of reality. That's how you feel. Figure out whatever it is that has you feeling hurt. It probably has more to do with you than it does with me. When I defend myself from accusations, it’s because I know my own heart. And I want to protect it. When I defend myself from accusations, I am not invalidating your feelings. Feel the **** outta your feelings. Just, please don’t beat me up.
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May 19, 2018
May 19, 2018 at 8:50 PM UTC
Please don't
you say you have all the answers that you had all the right reasons to leave me stranded that you had no choice maybe even that it was all me that it was all my fault but you don't know **** you just want to validate yourself for invalidating me you just want to prove that in this struggle for love you were the victim but you don't know **** victims aren't the ones walking away or the ones behind the bullet or words victims don't play with feelings victims don't break hearts or **** souls your only answer is to prove how you had your reasons but your reasons don't justify a ****** of sorts or playing me and leaving me to die or telling me you love me only to prove it a lie
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Jun 25, 2018
Jun 25, 2018 at 12:21 PM UTC
Answers (Lies)
at this very moment i've accepted love can beautify so many pains invalidating feelings shredding in silence of my being it isn't always the romance on different pages yet the denial i've finally learnt heartbreaks can also come from parents.
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Oct 6, 2020
Oct 6, 2020 at 10:29 AM UTC
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