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Flap Flap goes the Flappy Bird Was this the right choice? Seeing warnings on twitter Thinking they're all quitters Thinking you're better But in reality, you're just as equal as them. But as the day passes... Flap Flap goes the Flappy Bird Seeing your friends play, you start multiplying Not even touching a pipe and dying You're on the floor, you're crying Pressing start over and over again and trying Knowing your high score is low and start lying because you know you **** But as the day passes... Flap Flap goes the Flappy Bird Questions going through your mind "Why did I die?" "Did I really touch a pipe?" "Why do iPhone users only have day while Android have both day and night?" "Why is it slower on other phones?" "How do you get past 20?" "Why do I keep dying?" "Why do Android users have other colors?" But the question you should be asking is... "Am I going mad?" But as the day passes... Flap Flap goes the Flappy Bird Now, the resolution. Stop the addiction. Press that "x" You know its for the greater good. I know YOU feel the ANGER whenever you die. You don't wanna risk throwing your phone for that. Take my advice. DO IT. Before it ruins your life. But as the day passes... You can't. You can't. You can't. Its too late. Flappy Bird is now part of life. Even though the anger The anger that feels like your chest being stabbed by a knife Hurts you so much Deep inside you get a little happy... Knowing somewhere in the world someone trying the same game Got less than you. Less than 3, 2, or 1. And because of this you want to beat more people who **** more than you. And this should be an achievement You, state your name, got YOUR own high score. YOU did it YOU made it to one pipe or even more. And if you didn't Well ***** for you But as the day passes... Flap Flap goes the Flappy Bird
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Jan 29, 2014
Jan 29, 2014 at 8:30 AM UTC
Flappy Bird
Flap Flap goes the Flappy Bird Was this the right choice? Seeing warnings on twitter Thinking they're all quitters Thinking you're better But in reality, you're just as equal as them. But as the day passes... Flap Flap goes the Flappy Bird Seeing your friends play, you start multiplying Not even touching a pipe and dying You're on the floor, you're crying Pressing start over and over again and trying Knowing your high score is low and start lying because you know you **** But as the day passes... Flap Flap goes the Flappy Bird Questions going through your mind "Why did I die?" "Did I really touch a pipe?" "Why do iPhone users only have day while Android have both day and night?" "Why is it slower on other phones?" "How do you get past 20?" "Why do I keep dying?" "Why do Android users have other colors?" But the question you should be asking is... "Am I going mad?" But as the day passes... Flap Flap goes the Flappy Bird Now, the resolution. Stop the addiction. Press that "x" You know its for the greater good. I know YOU feel the ANGER whenever you die. You don't wanna risk throwing your phone for that. Take my advice. DO IT. Before it ruins your life. But as the day passes... You can't. You can't. You can't. Its too late. Flappy Bird is now part of life. Even though the anger The anger that feels like your chest being stabbed by a knife Hurts you so much Deep inside you get a little happy... Knowing somewhere in the world someone trying the same game Got less than you. Less than 3, 2, or 1. And because of this you want to beat more people who **** more than you. And this should be an achievement You, state your name, got YOUR own high score. YOU did it YOU made it to one pipe or even more. And if you didn't Well ***** for you But as the day passes... Flap Flap goes the Flappy Bird
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Say that quitters never win..... You gotta quit, LOSING to start winning.
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Sep 9, 2014
Sep 9, 2014 at 10:09 PM UTC
Winners
Suicidal Homicidal Alike but different Each is permanent **** someone in rage Or **** yourself and leave behind a page Your level of madness is measured,gauged But why do I banter Im as mad as a hatter Nothing even matters My life in tatters A knife to me throat Toss me in the moat A bullet in the brain Nothing to gain Sometimes relief other times pain The blood will be taint Burn and Burn Ashes in the urn The worlds will turn The stomachs will churn For all you see is fake And they will continue to take An illusion To launch you into confusion A ruse To light your fuse Our lifespan Throughout man Short and bitter So many of us quitters The rest of us let out titters While they gnaw on us, the critters Bite and Bite Fight for the light To die in the moonlit night To cause each other so much fright Our 'Gods' tell us to **** each other Our own brothers Let the blackbird fly High into the sky To cause the gloom To signal our doom Our demise Of the human enterprise
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Oct 9, 2018
Oct 9, 2018 at 11:17 AM UTC
Confused
Ever heard the saying "Quitters never win And winners never quit"? But what if Quitting isn't a sign of weakness But a sing of strength That you are strong enough To be humble and admit You can't do it
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Nov 16, 2013
Nov 16, 2013 at 10:37 AM UTC
Quitting
There are orca whales in my ears but only when it rains ill swallow the gnats to feed the bellies and the growing fears I never know how to greet it I took the nail filer and carved two perfect holes directly above my big toes you can never be too careful I wanted to make sure my feet knew that sometimes things happen I promised my umbrella that if it could wait another couple weeks I wouldn't rip it to shreds myself why is there patience for quitters and people who hate thunderstorms? There are orca whales in my ears but only when it rains Gave into the cooped clouds, let them smear cleaner through my roots swaying instead to dodge the drip and heaving sighs
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Sep 23, 2012
Sep 23, 2012 at 10:51 AM UTC
Spit on my head one more time....
in graves of boorish lands a livingness so fake riddling away this void amidst the autumn race with blink of bleeding heart memory seeped in pain she hangs upon his sleep stale as love remain but though may demon heart pull voices in a head and shrink below her weight triumph as quitters dead to find itself holed in a crypt of blinding dark dystopian consciousness rejected cut spark if faith shall fade and choke in throes of emptiness risk streams of million thoughts set freeze in mindlessness he'll find himself alive near oasis of hate her cascading blue eyes crashing inferno's gate for in his dreams as if twisted lie angry shores an accident of life she drifts as nervous smoke
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Oct 22, 2013
Oct 22, 2013 at 8:03 AM UTC
smoke
Look at that ***** swallowing pills like ***** because the people endowed to her this poem and she only bothered to read the title. .
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Jan 16, 2013
Jan 16, 2013 at 1:00 AM UTC
Spitters are Quitters
we live in a time, where tradition trumps mind. where habit defeats virtue, where old conquers new. Mankind is looking dire So it seems I now admire the quitters most of all.
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Jan 29, 2015
Jan 29, 2015 at 2:52 PM UTC
Quitting
Running here running there doing this doing that. calling him calling her. fixing this fixing that. Im just tidying  up the window dressing . Fixing the facade. Going here going there smiling nicely putting on spin trying to win the face contest. Just tidying up the window dressing. The store is out of stock. The Tax man is a vamp. Printing money like stamps. Busting up my camp. Time is spinning faster. Playing out the string. The treadmill tilts a  steeper angle. Winners never quit and quitters never win. Reaching for the next rung. Just like the one before. Just tidying up the window dressing. I got stamina to burn. Tax man. Gas man.  Card man Med. man. Food man. Clothes man Mortgage man.Rent man. Car man. Light man. Water man Boss man. Tidying up the window dressing Stressing hard about my stressing. Too jammed up to count my blessing. Tell the truth without confessing. Politicians full of **** Slippery as quicksilver. Who the hell they playing with. Left or right I'm done with it. AGAIN. Media. what media. Tell it to Goebbels. Just pulling down the window dressing Tired of playing Bo Peep. Big boy time. Wakie Wakie. The old shell game. Never give a sucker an even break Or. Smarten up a chump said W.C Fields. He was serious. I'm serious. Who's serious about 1929. Tearing down the window dressing Dont believe the hype. Nero fiddled while Rome burned. He was not mad He had a plan? Tearing up the window dressing. Life is much too short for mucking about with pit vipers bugged on ecstasy. I'm serious.
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Dec 8, 2012
Dec 8, 2012 at 1:36 AM UTC
Window Dressing
Running here running there doing this doing that. calling him calling her. fixing this fixing that. Im just tidying  up the window dressing . Fixing the facade. Going here going there smiling nicely putting on spin trying to win the face contest. Just tidying up the window dressing. The store is out of stock. The Tax man is a vamp. Printing money like stamps. Busting up my camp. Time is spinning faster. Playing out the string. The treadmill tilts a  steeper angle. Winners never quit and quitters never win. Reaching for the next rung. Just like the one before. Just tidying up the window dressing. I got stamina to burn. Tax man. Gas man.  Card man Med. man. Food man. Clothes man Mortgage man.Rent man. Car man. Light man. Water man Boss man. Tidying up the window dressing Stressing hard about my stressing. Too jammed up to count my blessing. Tell the truth without confessing. Politicians full of **** Slippery as quicksilver. Who the hell they playing with. Left or right I'm done with it. AGAIN. Media. what media. Tell it to Goebbels. Just pulling down the window dressing Tired of playing Bo Peep. Big boy time. Wakie Wakie. The old shell game. Never give a sucker an even break Or. Smarten up a chump said W.C Fields. He was serious. I'm serious. Who's serious about 1929. Tearing down the window dressing Dont believe the hype. Nero fiddled while Rome burned. He was not mad He had a plan? Tearing up the window dressing. Life is much too short for mucking about with pit vipers bugged on ecstasy. I'm serious.
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When life becomes meaningless no matter what you do seems useless and all opportunities you grab wasted broken dreams lurking with self busted everything you hold on now starts to fall drags your feeling pushed against the wall realization of your life is at the cutting edge. When life becomes the darkest no hope of light made you weakest things you touched soon are dead failure always cling to you instead you try to survive from uncertainties yet your ego succumbs to all the vanities Doubt overcomes self falling to the cutting edge. Though life becomes vague Do not give up to fight the plague For quitters do not win any endeavor Hang-on lit the ember to light you with fervor For as long as you have the courage to go forward Then no amount of deterrents can make you a coward And in the end you will be able to override the cutting edge.
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Aug 22, 2018
Aug 22, 2018 at 12:27 AM UTC
Cutting Edge
Killers don't quit, cause quitters get killed I'll be cutting fools down, till every grave is filled Look into my eyes you'll find a nightmare call the ******* cops, see if I care. By the time they get here I'll rip out your ******* hair. You're afraid to look at me in my eyes you see despair. You're afraid of what you'll see in my thousand yard stare. Once you pick up bloodshed you can never put it down, until your ****** ******* body is cold and dead in the ground. I'll be swinging taking shots at all you ******* clowns, until every body wishes that I never came around. If you ain't a killer get back in your shack, killers rule the day, always on the attack. I've got a pocket full of bullets and a grave that I need filled. Killers don't quit because quitters get killed.
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Jun 21, 2012
Jun 21, 2012 at 12:32 PM UTC
Killers Don't Quit
soap and water           dishes           laundry           or shower brick from mortar boys against girls urban velvet smog city vapors clog this train -- there is a line         beginners         quitters this parking lot -- there is a line         shoppers         influencers open bar pharmacy, bottled water                   no pity                   no guarantees dragon chasers chin music                    lapsed short term memory loss opening mail for grandmother                 the obituaries                 that ****** fly a discussion among men about a woman's voice            come sit and listen one last cigarette couple walking home through the park                driving alone in the dark                              on the heels of                              a reflection                              of Christ                              or an hourglass                              in remission them or not them        just arrived        just married too many stairs not enough elevators worry about it later them, definitely them sharing beds       under the leotard       under the candlelight a helping hand finely manicured fingers one stationary         then two in missionary word upon words need aspirin             orchestrate             headache                             pillow is the threshold                             tomorrow...soap and water
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Mar 17, 2024
Mar 17, 2024 at 10:13 PM UTC
Poem For An Ordinary Day
soap and water           dishes           laundry           or shower brick from mortar boys against girls urban velvet smog city vapors clog this train -- there is a line         beginners         quitters this parking lot -- there is a line         shoppers         influencers open bar pharmacy, bottled water                   no pity                   no guarantees dragon chasers chin music                    lapsed short term memory loss opening mail for grandmother                 the obituaries                 that ****** fly a discussion among men about a woman's voice            come sit and listen one last cigarette couple walking home through the park                driving alone in the dark                              on the heels of                              a reflection                              of Christ                              or an hourglass                              in remission them or not them        just arrived        just married too many stairs not enough elevators worry about it later them, definitely them sharing beds       under the leotard       under the candlelight a helping hand finely manicured fingers one stationary         then two in missionary word upon words need aspirin             orchestrate             headache                             pillow is the threshold                             tomorrow...soap and water
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Sharp words shouldn't be spoken Nobody's perfect When everything comes out broken Choking on every syllable Soaking up every last "I'm sorry" like a sponge that's full already Steady, aim, fire another round across his bow Give her another volley of misunderstanding champ, because your fowling out over fences topped with razor wire Sometimes a simple smile seems better Than a string of wrong words that leave your mouth bitter Sometimes still tongues touch more hearts and wagging ones turn burnt ears into quitters Sometimes stepping out's better Why stick around and frown? Why let it all bring you down? Needle and thread your squack box Turn keys on locks And give it up, will ya?! Try it again tomorrow There'd be a whole lot less sorrow....
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Jan 3, 2017
Jan 3, 2017 at 6:26 PM UTC
Tongues Tied
Lost in the fumes of a cloudy exhale I search for a glimpse of myself in grimy water. My remains are scattered somewhere between boyhood and gutter trash. The present is hardly of concern when the blankets of mud offer such astounding silence. This swamp was flooded with the prosperity of quitters. - The face of the street I grew up on has been radically warped and distorted. Leave a good thing to the elements long enough and you’ll see it begin to degrade. Dust gathers and mold begins to creep in from the moisture lingering in the air. It happens to our childhood toys just as easily as it happens to the people we know. - Everything still holds the same shape; the same structure that casts a shadow in memory, it’s just that now the cosmetics have worn off and you can see the tired lines start to show. You can hear the creak of arthritic wooden steps to front porches where old kin with liver spots sit and drink a shared Ice House 40 oz. while spitting into the wind. Cavities from a candy coated childhood. - There are strangers in my old home, that place where my uncle lives surrounded by VHS tapes, pictures of Brett Favre, and reminders of dead cockatiels. The biggest struggle is trying to recall if he was always this way, or did it take a forty year dope binge for the hoarder to finally stir? - I wrote my name in the sidewalk at the foot of steps. I search for a glimpse of myself in grimy water and check under the bushes for garter snakes . My stomping grounds have been wiped of footprints and grandma’s violets don’t come in very well anymore. They cut down the walnut tree, and got rid of the porch swing. No time for whimsy, no time for strays. The cicadas will sleep for ten more years, ‘til summer.
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Jan 19, 2015
Jan 19, 2015 at 3:57 AM UTC
Decatur, A Kingdom in Six Parts, Part V: Green and University
Lost in the fumes of a cloudy exhale I search for a glimpse of myself in grimy water. My remains are scattered somewhere between boyhood and gutter trash. The present is hardly of concern when the blankets of mud offer such astounding silence. This swamp was flooded with the prosperity of quitters. - The face of the street I grew up on has been radically warped and distorted. Leave a good thing to the elements long enough and you’ll see it begin to degrade. Dust gathers and mold begins to creep in from the moisture lingering in the air. It happens to our childhood toys just as easily as it happens to the people we know. - Everything still holds the same shape; the same structure that casts a shadow in memory, it’s just that now the cosmetics have worn off and you can see the tired lines start to show. You can hear the creak of arthritic wooden steps to front porches where old kin with liver spots sit and drink a shared Ice House 40 oz. while spitting into the wind. Cavities from a candy coated childhood. - There are strangers in my old home, that place where my uncle lives surrounded by VHS tapes, pictures of Brett Favre, and reminders of dead cockatiels. The biggest struggle is trying to recall if he was always this way, or did it take a forty year dope binge for the hoarder to finally stir? - I wrote my name in the sidewalk at the foot of steps. I search for a glimpse of myself in grimy water and check under the bushes for garter snakes . My stomping grounds have been wiped of footprints and grandma’s violets don’t come in very well anymore. They cut down the walnut tree, and got rid of the porch swing. No time for whimsy, no time for strays. The cicadas will sleep for ten more years, ‘til summer.
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Quitting is a fear, To the people whose near, Giving up in here, Working without a cheer. Quitter's never win, Every single breath they take, Every moment each take, It doesn't make you win when other's you hurt. Quitting is chance, Giving you a glance, That makes you feel uncomfortable in this land, That's why quitters never win and have no chance  in a Game.
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Sep 19, 2015
Sep 19, 2015 at 9:52 AM UTC
QUITTER'S NEVER WIN
Do you even know how hard it was for me? To put away the liquor and pipes For the love of Christ I can't even begin to tell you how awful it was before you. I can't even begin to tell you how many nights I stumbled home. How many mornings I woke up asking what happened the night before. How many nights my roommate asked how ****** up I was as I laughed and told her how badly I wanted cookies. Now I'm not saying **** ****** me up that bad But I may have taken the things that numb me a little too far: Drinking till I can't remember, Smoking until my frowns are smiles, Puffing on cigarettes until I cough up a lung. What doesn't **** me makes me stronger, right? I couldn't continue my preaching higher than cloud nine or drunker than a man with nothing left to lose. But for some unknown reason you gave me the courage to quit the liquor. And Im glad you stopped me, otherwise the next year was gonna be brutal because AA is for quitters and momma never raised a quitter. I may not have alcohol. I may not have Mary Jane But I do have you. So you wanna go smoke a joe?
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Aug 13, 2015
Aug 13, 2015 at 10:18 AM UTC
Untitled 21
A year into our marriage he said he wanted out. I said no I'm not giving up. Society tells us "Do what makes you happy." We are a nation of quitters. It's ok to quite at the slightest inconvenience, "It's just not for you, that's ok." No it's not ok. A small part of me wanted out too but I'm not a quitter and I serve Christ before man. Selfishness was the main problem. I had it all figured out on what my husband needed to do to change and make things better. God showed me trying to fix him was only going to make it worse. I needed to change, I needed to have the unconditional love for my husband that Christ has for us. Forgiveness and mercy needed to become part of my daily vocabulary. So many nights I cried myself to sleep alone. I could have chosen to hate him and lash back at him. What good would it have done me? God had me humble myself. God alone is the judge of man. Who am I to judge anyone? As long as I am right with God I am protected and loved. God's love is greater than any man. Then something major happened to my husband that could have torn us apart if I had been focused on doing what was right in my eyes. Instead I took the opportunity to reach out to him, to love him at his lowest. If I had been playing by the worlds rules I should have kicked him while he was down. Even after all he had put me through I had a deep love for him that reached a spiritual level. God brought us together and rekindled a love that had been trampled on and forgotten. Let God's love lead you. 'The opposite of biblical love isn't hate, its apathy. To stop moving toward our spouse is to stop loving him or her. It's holding back from the very purpose of marriage.' 1 Corinthians 13:17- Love bears all things, believes all things, hopes all things, endures all things. 1 Corinthians 3:19a- For the wisdom of this world is foolishness in God’s sight. Romans 2:7-8- To those who by persistence in doing good seek glory, honor and immortality, He will give eternal life. But for those who are self-seeking and who reject the truth and follow evil,there will be wrath and anger. James 4:12- God alone, who gave the law, is the Judge. He alone has the power to save or to destroy. So what right do you have to judge your neighbor?
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Apr 30, 2014
Apr 30, 2014 at 11:33 PM UTC
Nation of Quitters
A year into our marriage he said he wanted out. I said no I'm not giving up. Society tells us "Do what makes you happy." We are a nation of quitters. It's ok to quite at the slightest inconvenience, "It's just not for you, that's ok." No it's not ok. A small part of me wanted out too but I'm not a quitter and I serve Christ before man. Selfishness was the main problem. I had it all figured out on what my husband needed to do to change and make things better. God showed me trying to fix him was only going to make it worse. I needed to change, I needed to have the unconditional love for my husband that Christ has for us. Forgiveness and mercy needed to become part of my daily vocabulary. So many nights I cried myself to sleep alone. I could have chosen to hate him and lash back at him. What good would it have done me? God had me humble myself. God alone is the judge of man. Who am I to judge anyone? As long as I am right with God I am protected and loved. God's love is greater than any man. Then something major happened to my husband that could have torn us apart if I had been focused on doing what was right in my eyes. Instead I took the opportunity to reach out to him, to love him at his lowest. If I had been playing by the worlds rules I should have kicked him while he was down. Even after all he had put me through I had a deep love for him that reached a spiritual level. God brought us together and rekindled a love that had been trampled on and forgotten. Let God's love lead you. 'The opposite of biblical love isn't hate, its apathy. To stop moving toward our spouse is to stop loving him or her. It's holding back from the very purpose of marriage.' 1 Corinthians 13:17- Love bears all things, believes all things, hopes all things, endures all things. 1 Corinthians 3:19a- For the wisdom of this world is foolishness in God’s sight. Romans 2:7-8- To those who by persistence in doing good seek glory, honor and immortality, He will give eternal life. But for those who are self-seeking and who reject the truth and follow evil,there will be wrath and anger. James 4:12- God alone, who gave the law, is the Judge. He alone has the power to save or to destroy. So what right do you have to judge your neighbor?
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The darkness fades the embers re-lit keep on truckin or will you quit? horizon is right above those hills so don't reach for the alcohol or the pills life's not for one hitter quitters life's about love, the jump that kills the feelin that shoots down your spine Chills
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Aug 26, 2012
Aug 26, 2012 at 3:47 AM UTC
hope
looking at myself across the way in the mirror think I'm coming down with a case of the quitters never win and winners never quit-when they see they weren't winning from the beginning they quit-looking at me, hopefully magically going to be becoming something soon that's worth money- torn- all I ever got with money was a blank stare in the mirror; a car parked, alone in the dark words that feel like knives in my heart what is the alternative? I need this killer for my art
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Nov 6, 2011
Nov 6, 2011 at 10:32 PM UTC
Killer Art
Noisless laughter, Bickering surrounding me, Anger will build, My only release is escape, I'm locked in this cage, A class full of people whom I hate, They mock me, And I mock their idiocy, *** heads, Drinkers, And quitters, Surrounded by the unfavored, Suffocating in the abyss, Darkness devouring my insides, Hatred grown, Loath in process, They must be ended, They too must change, I am not alone, I will survive, I will find my way out.
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Apr 5, 2012
Apr 5, 2012 at 7:58 AM UTC
Escape
Ask a smoker to join you for a cigarette One last one before a good nights rest and the answer will inevitably be yes Some people smoke, some drink, and some are all about the illicit My chosen affliction is your love. All good, well-versed, professional addict knows rehab is for quitters I want nothing more than to overdose on the most powerful high: your kisses and hugs. To melt in to a puddle with you, there is nothing better and nothing worse than withdrawal. They say the first few days are terrible I've been hooked on you, and all I can tell you is please enable me. I can feel the cold days approaching, my nose runs and my stomach churns. This is not going to be an easy turn I can only hope, I can only pray, That a dose will be ready when I return on the 25th, my most awaited day
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Sep 2, 2015
Sep 2, 2015 at 10:34 PM UTC
Detox
It took a lot for me to learn To not speak in absolutes Statements that climb ladders But quickly fall in chutes Sentences that build you up Tall enough to fall flat on your face Beggars become choosers Quitters become losers Nobody likes a quitter Not with that attitude I will never I will never say never I will never say never again
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Jul 17, 2013
Jul 17, 2013 at 3:41 PM UTC
I Will Never Say Never Again-