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"redesigning" poems
Our childhood's prime game; Creating a paper plane. Making it fly high, But it never reached the sky. We would continue to raise the bar, But still we wouldn't get very far. We would trust a redesign, But never anything different from our own design. We would work soley for ourselves; To keep the success to ourselves. We would spend all day redesigning a paper plane, But never on redesigning our life's shame. We live for a paper plane And its thrill - day by day. We would accept our life's flaws, But never our paper plane's flaws. We would live for irrelevant people and objects, But never for our own salvation. We would live with a self-opinionated attitude, But why do we now live with our opinion based on that of the world? We live like a paper plane; Flying high, just to be redesigned. The world never helps us stay sane As we're always seen as a failed design.
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Oct 14, 2017
Oct 14, 2017 at 12:07 PM UTC
Paper Planes
Better days When the world was beautiful Dancing was a fever A feeling so high All the lovers raged on and on Upon a mountain of lovers Twisting, sensual A touch, so seldom It brought shivers Taking chances Realizing that one night Was the last of eternal bliss Lasting love and happiness Over Without so much a proper farewell Now begging to return to the dance floor Walking towards the exit Humming slightly To a tune not forgotten Walking amongst unfamiliar faces Forbidden love Prohibited from falling in love again Not a chance to see what was happiness Only a songstress could save me Perhaps if I shouted for her, for him, for you Resisting is foolish For I have been consumed by an angel Who sought me out And ordered me to raise arms up And shout for love A sound in the night Stranger in the night Confined to solitary confinement Forcing me to reconsider The life chosen Closer and closer Redesigning the world in an image Where love is in all of us One step ahead Planning for a revival When all hell broke But an epiphany occurred This was the dream To travel far and near Where the world is seen In multicolored And black and white This was a beautiful sight The beautiful dream A mighty return to this dance floor Risen from ashes A triumphant victor Shining lights upon the followers Notice this is reality Not fiction The sound of music Flowing into each body Embraces and affection A thrill Heartbeats ceasing Trying to capture the intensity of a moment that is unforgettable Created from nothing An illusion that was created To preserve a creature so pure It was thought to have been banned from mortal eyes Now it has crashed Creating confusion amongst the lovers Fearing for her safety It created a masquerade ball Surrounding by what she deemed reality A distant land Only she knew When the perfect world shattered Rumors spread of a goddess with the powers of the forbidden Foreseeing a brighter day for those who chose a higher path The world knew of the secret Complicating information However the brightest in the world Seemed unaffected by the discovery Hiding their connection When the goddess loathed being captured She revealed the master plan But promising to strike twice If the world saw what was lying underneath Gone, the goddess sought shelter far away Nothing the mortals knowledge of her plan Striking from heavens above Lightning struck twice Blinding the universe For only a second Nothing existed Reminding the world Dark disco magic Warped time and love Nothing was ever bright When left alone Or forgotten Or simply existing
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Jul 24, 2010
Jul 24, 2010 at 11:22 PM UTC
Dark Disco
Better days When the world was beautiful Dancing was a fever A feeling so high All the lovers raged on and on Upon a mountain of lovers Twisting, sensual A touch, so seldom It brought shivers Taking chances Realizing that one night Was the last of eternal bliss Lasting love and happiness Over Without so much a proper farewell Now begging to return to the dance floor Walking towards the exit Humming slightly To a tune not forgotten Walking amongst unfamiliar faces Forbidden love Prohibited from falling in love again Not a chance to see what was happiness Only a songstress could save me Perhaps if I shouted for her, for him, for you Resisting is foolish For I have been consumed by an angel Who sought me out And ordered me to raise arms up And shout for love A sound in the night Stranger in the night Confined to solitary confinement Forcing me to reconsider The life chosen Closer and closer Redesigning the world in an image Where love is in all of us One step ahead Planning for a revival When all hell broke But an epiphany occurred This was the dream To travel far and near Where the world is seen In multicolored And black and white This was a beautiful sight The beautiful dream A mighty return to this dance floor Risen from ashes A triumphant victor Shining lights upon the followers Notice this is reality Not fiction The sound of music Flowing into each body Embraces and affection A thrill Heartbeats ceasing Trying to capture the intensity of a moment that is unforgettable Created from nothing An illusion that was created To preserve a creature so pure It was thought to have been banned from mortal eyes Now it has crashed Creating confusion amongst the lovers Fearing for her safety It created a masquerade ball Surrounding by what she deemed reality A distant land Only she knew When the perfect world shattered Rumors spread of a goddess with the powers of the forbidden Foreseeing a brighter day for those who chose a higher path The world knew of the secret Complicating information However the brightest in the world Seemed unaffected by the discovery Hiding their connection When the goddess loathed being captured She revealed the master plan But promising to strike twice If the world saw what was lying underneath Gone, the goddess sought shelter far away Nothing the mortals knowledge of her plan Striking from heavens above Lightning struck twice Blinding the universe For only a second Nothing existed Reminding the world Dark disco magic Warped time and love Nothing was ever bright When left alone Or forgotten Or simply existing
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Sensations that urge the detection of the greatest restraint and circumspection; the abruptness of spontaneous interruptions sprout volcanic internal eruptions full of relevant abundance Flummoxed by the changes in the script; engaging wonder as suppressed thoughts are written on your face; withholding the ache as ebullient vivacity shakes you awake Carrying a mischievous vividness full of cogent stimulus – fruitful affirmations of levelheaded, sanguine acceptance and unalloyed quiescence Redesigning aspects of existence with unabridged persistence – receiving silent guidance from above by the means of scintillating messages lighting the living flame of love.
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Nov 19, 2014
Nov 19, 2014 at 12:20 PM UTC
Silent Guidance
Inhabiting a rubber state Where bullets fly. It ain't too great. Politicians living in perfect glass houses. Surely not green. Never fragile. Not throwing sticks. Nor chucking stones. They're draining the deserts and scoring the Arctic. Drilling for oil. Recoiling in horror. Planet dynamic. Ripped through her heart. Redesigning circles. Pictograms. And block graphs. Financial mutations of dignified nations? Shiny panels for catching the sun. Making ugly buildings. Commonsense won. Sustainable energy. Keeping warm. Heaven be praised. For the warming sun. Next thing we know. They're bringing back hunting. See you next Tuesdays. Fox slaying. And fining the homeless. Them with no money. More or less. Hell of a mess. Its all about war. Its all about money. Parliament run. By brainless numbskulls. (c)Livvi MMXV
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Jun 4, 2015
Jun 4, 2015 at 5:00 PM UTC
GREEN ISSUES
The snappy air has 'pinked my cheeks' ruffled my dark curls swept cobwebs away and so much more from my mind Going through the motions, I walk My dogs, eager for adventure, I, am keen to ponder so I allow them to discover all they can find Meanwhile I roam a little inside my head while taking in how winter is trying to take hold and is redesigning nature Bare and stark, gloomy at times but I embrace the change expectant and excited like a child still at the thought of snow Awaiting a blanket of white innocence a welcome change from disorder Layers of glittering calm that will cause a ripple effect in my mind
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May 7, 2014
May 7, 2014 at 2:36 AM UTC
The Walk
There once was a plain old greedy degenerate Who fancied himself some sort of profit Most of the town's folk even bought it Some say he lost it We must laugh together at the irony we see Someone degenerate as he Redesigning our humanity First conceptual sold as a divine product ******* ecstasy… I won't support the scandal to fund the living Dead council The Swine Thought to unwind and rewind in the way they felt fine Thus genetically designed a millennia of succession of clergy kings And unleash them to father all mankind to be Hear me when I say I do not feel okay When malice men metal with God's work Got a hell of a good pitch though I mean you really make that **** looked **** no? A well-designed slaughterhouse may have its livestock walking into spirals right to the mouth of the grinder Scientifically each breed more perfect than the next As I deflect Do my very best To warn just in case you could respect Liberty and freedom Or obey to choose to sleep comfortably Happy sheep healthy cut of meat Splash, shear and then repeat I love you So much Almost as much as I love myself Hope you can learn how to be alone with just yourself all by yourself and be present with yourself Love
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Jun 15, 2019
Jun 15, 2019 at 10:01 AM UTC
How To Farm Sheep
I returned back to the same home I used to know, Oh boy, it feels familiar but I'm not so sure if it's good thing. My first few steps back inside I heard some creaks on the floor in a silent room filled with dust on some brand new furniture I mean, how is that even possible? I take a few steps forward as the door behind me closes.. "is this the right choice?" Pictures on the frames take so little amount of space in the house but somehow they constantly remind me of the past.. Of what this house used to be. So I tore them off. I tore them all off the walls so that all you can see is the clear empty walls, looking cleaner and more innocent with a hole where the nail used to be. I'm not sure if it even looks better. But I shoved the frames in a box, beneath my bed.. So why is it every time I take a stroll in the house it smells the same, and every time I sleep at night, I feel something hiding under my bed.. I mean, let's be more direct. You were my home. But I don't know who you even are anymore... Cause every time I want to smile, I hear the picture frames knocking on my door, telling me I shouldn't. Every time I think of coming home, I stop by every store just to make sure I have all the different frames so I can hide that nasty hole on the wall that the nail left behind.. But every time I did that, I couldn't tell if I was redesigning my home or lying to myself. Tell me, what makes this one so different? Is it a even a second chance.. or the seventh chance? The ghosts of you don't creep behind me, it's the knives on my back and I can't tell.. Tell me, are they still there? Or am I reminiscing about the past, feeling on the scars that I can't see, hoping one day I'm able to study every curve and every mark of where I went wrong that caused me to carry them for the rest of my life.. I mean tell me, because if I can't trace my steps back to the time I've twisted the door **** and walked right in without studying the room or listening to these same empty walls.. would I still be alive? Or would you have killed me with the same knives that's already deeply rooted into my spine.. you say you love me but it sounds the same. **** That ******* knocking is getting louder, it won't leave me alone.
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Feb 21, 2018
Feb 21, 2018 at 3:26 PM UTC
Second chances
I returned back to the same home I used to know, Oh boy, it feels familiar but I'm not so sure if it's good thing. My first few steps back inside I heard some creaks on the floor in a silent room filled with dust on some brand new furniture I mean, how is that even possible? I take a few steps forward as the door behind me closes.. "is this the right choice?" Pictures on the frames take so little amount of space in the house but somehow they constantly remind me of the past.. Of what this house used to be. So I tore them off. I tore them all off the walls so that all you can see is the clear empty walls, looking cleaner and more innocent with a hole where the nail used to be. I'm not sure if it even looks better. But I shoved the frames in a box, beneath my bed.. So why is it every time I take a stroll in the house it smells the same, and every time I sleep at night, I feel something hiding under my bed.. I mean, let's be more direct. You were my home. But I don't know who you even are anymore... Cause every time I want to smile, I hear the picture frames knocking on my door, telling me I shouldn't. Every time I think of coming home, I stop by every store just to make sure I have all the different frames so I can hide that nasty hole on the wall that the nail left behind.. But every time I did that, I couldn't tell if I was redesigning my home or lying to myself. Tell me, what makes this one so different? Is it a even a second chance.. or the seventh chance? The ghosts of you don't creep behind me, it's the knives on my back and I can't tell.. Tell me, are they still there? Or am I reminiscing about the past, feeling on the scars that I can't see, hoping one day I'm able to study every curve and every mark of where I went wrong that caused me to carry them for the rest of my life.. I mean tell me, because if I can't trace my steps back to the time I've twisted the door **** and walked right in without studying the room or listening to these same empty walls.. would I still be alive? Or would you have killed me with the same knives that's already deeply rooted into my spine.. you say you love me but it sounds the same. **** That ******* knocking is getting louder, it won't leave me alone.
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Why give only one life when I need so many more? There's not much space to fit in all those people I adore..and I adore the lot. What I've got will not suffice..so I shall ask real nice of my creator.."whatya doin' later"? Let's redesign this life of mine and make it play its part.. ..so I can open up my heart and let the world come in. One life is not enough..like a sleeve without a cuff..it's just not right.. ..so give me two or three or four,let me explore the unexplored and live my lifetimes more than more. We can be friends before I fade. Or would you like it known that you have made..a dud. No good ?..but I could be..if only you would free the lock that makes me such a laughing stock and put more life in store for me..then you would see that redesigning was just a matter of some refining of this jewel. I play quite well the fool..with ease..but make me last much longer please..let me adore those many more..on my knees I do implore you. Is this message getting through ? have you so much more to do that you can't do this little thing for me? Set me free.
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Jan 5, 2013
Jan 5, 2013 at 5:00 AM UTC
THE FACTORY SHOP
what i have is a wounded soul but my heart is slowly opening again to new things to old things that feel new i place my stale thoughts in a jar and close the lid i say "no more" it is now time for loving and rediscovering myself and redesigning myself i let the pain hurt but i don't let it define me it's time to start living again
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Jul 8, 2018
Jul 8, 2018 at 5:12 AM UTC
slow movement
Lately I’ve been closing my eyes reimagining the hieroglyphs of springtime at your door and the way the light touched your form but now it’s just me and the moon redesigning the colors in your room sketching rivers and lakes into the tombs of our love. Tell me what you’re thinking though I know that it isn’t of me but she is still in every night vision every daydream half asleep half turned to the universe of her design elements of refracting memories words that have so long since been my curse. Time has made a beggar of me when October has dug her nails into the April on my mind mouth full of planet but chest full of wind— she is closed to me again her form is a mountain when mine is just a grin just a shadowy friend of her own on the ground in the field where our love story would end.
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Oct 3, 2018
Oct 3, 2018 at 9:18 PM UTC
In the Field
You started by being my friend, Then you created a safe haven. It started out with a few things like redesigning. Little did I know that these were just the strings. Soon you assembled a control bar, That made me bend to your will. I was too afraid to speak As you might just release me. But eventually my arms could not work, My legs could not move. My strings were broken and all worn out, So, you found new strings on another puppet you pulled. So, I sat in my in my corner and collected dust. Thinking about how I got fooled. As days went by, another person came. They dusted me off and gave me a name. With no strings and new clothes, They called me their friend And said I wouldn’t be played with again.
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Dec 5, 2024
Dec 5, 2024 at 12:23 AM UTC
Marionette