as always, i have been reading poems new to me,
by poets also new to me.
while my eyes caressed each word as if it were the last orb of breathe of the last flower to freeze in the winter,
the engines in my dingy brain halted, without warning.
without any obvious street sign or road block.
but then the pearl of a thought latched itself to me, became apart of me.
and for days now i have been molding this thought in my hands as a preschooler using a new tube a playdoh would.
my fingers manipulated the string of words,
maybe this will wor- no no maybe if i pinch this here it wi- no no no
no
no
no
NO
so, i decided to come flat out and bring to life the embryo of an idea of a thought that was swelling and letting water into my brain.
who is the "you"?
yes, i said it who the hell is the "you"?
i have seen it is the best and most famous poets' poems,
i have even seen it in my own.
the "you".
who is your "you"?
you know, example: when you write a poem and instead of saying "Sam" (your ex you haven't gotten over) you just put the word "you" instead?
look at these:
Sam kissed my eyelids,
but Sam only kissed them so i wouldn't see his lies.
and you turn it into:
You kissed my eyelids,
but you only kissed them so i wouldn't see your lies.
another example:
the "you" in this poem is, well, you.
this is dumb but i couldn't get this idea out of my head idk man
