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"enjambment" poems
(explicit) **** my soul         with poetry            scream out my gracious name              slay me with words                that peel my layers                 and simultaneously                                    drive me                                            insane finger me slowly, hotly with just the right rhythm and rhyme     push me past my                  tender limits                        into tongues of syntax,                                                       sublime alliterate my senses    (in swift stac                     c-at                            o) until my mind is but blank verse     mess up my stressed               and unstressed syllables in unsung language, versed I will speak to you in vowels (the only sound        I will be able to make) as you stroke    my iambic pentameter              in the heat of frothed-up                                                      ache we are this heroic couplet, you see         even if the meaning seems veiled            no need for simile or metaphor                as I feel your chest rise                               in deep inhale we are a natural paradox        so many ironies abound          discordant harmony is our synaesthesia      in visible darkness found and I love this delicious enjambment as your aura invisibly slips                                into mine our lines have no beginning,                                  no end     as we undo           the boundaries                       of time
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Oct 3, 2017
Oct 3, 2017 at 5:18 PM UTC
poetry slammed
(explicit) **** my soul         with poetry            scream out my gracious name              slay me with words                that peel my layers                 and simultaneously                                    drive me                                            insane finger me slowly, hotly with just the right rhythm and rhyme     push me past my                  tender limits                        into tongues of syntax,                                                       sublime alliterate my senses    (in swift stac                     c-at                            o) until my mind is but blank verse     mess up my stressed               and unstressed syllables in unsung language, versed I will speak to you in vowels (the only sound        I will be able to make) as you stroke    my iambic pentameter              in the heat of frothed-up                                                      ache we are this heroic couplet, you see         even if the meaning seems veiled            no need for simile or metaphor                as I feel your chest rise                               in deep inhale we are a natural paradox        so many ironies abound          discordant harmony is our synaesthesia      in visible darkness found and I love this delicious enjambment as your aura invisibly slips                                into mine our lines have no beginning,                                  no end     as we undo           the boundaries                       of time
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Do I have any talent in poetry? Can I write a good series of monometers? Let’s See They’re **** Are those even monometers? How the hell should I know? Maybe I can write a decent enjambment Let it flow with no punctuation Let it soar with no interruption whatsoever Let it flow let it flow let it flow Ah **** it! Flowing is for sissies! Let’s punctuate this bastard! Let’s add lots of **** to this! Maybe, perhaps, supposedly! All these worthless pathetic lines! These are the things That people may love These are the things That people may define as talent This **** I made They may say I made from my talent But to me It is a massive piece of crap Let’s add more **** to this! Let’s add themes! Love, darkness, hatred, abuse! I’m sorry I left you baby, please come back! It feels so black in this cruel horrid world! **** you! Cocksucker! Bitch! **** I hate you! Hit me again! Hit me again you ****** These are the things That people may love These are the things That people may define as talent This **** I made They may say I made from my talent But to me It is a massive piece of crap If that isn’t talent then what is You may ask I answer this with a laugh Poetry takes no talent You silly fool It is a simple sharing of heart and soul Why lower it to a talent It’s demeaning It’s sickening It makes me want to ***** Close your eyes Let it take you in Love it Hate it Praise it **** it Cleanse it Vulgarize it Whatever you like If you ever want to be A talented poet Then don’t take my advice Use structure Use themes Make your voice easily heard But at the same time silent These words That people may love These are the things That people may define as talent This **** I made They may say I made from my talent But to me It is a massive piece of crap And really doesn't need talent.
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Jul 18, 2013
Jul 18, 2013 at 12:33 AM UTC
Talent
Do I have any talent in poetry? Can I write a good series of monometers? Let’s See They’re **** Are those even monometers? How the hell should I know? Maybe I can write a decent enjambment Let it flow with no punctuation Let it soar with no interruption whatsoever Let it flow let it flow let it flow Ah **** it! Flowing is for sissies! Let’s punctuate this bastard! Let’s add lots of **** to this! Maybe, perhaps, supposedly! All these worthless pathetic lines! These are the things That people may love These are the things That people may define as talent This **** I made They may say I made from my talent But to me It is a massive piece of crap Let’s add more **** to this! Let’s add themes! Love, darkness, hatred, abuse! I’m sorry I left you baby, please come back! It feels so black in this cruel horrid world! **** you! Cocksucker! Bitch! **** I hate you! Hit me again! Hit me again you ****** These are the things That people may love These are the things That people may define as talent This **** I made They may say I made from my talent But to me It is a massive piece of crap If that isn’t talent then what is You may ask I answer this with a laugh Poetry takes no talent You silly fool It is a simple sharing of heart and soul Why lower it to a talent It’s demeaning It’s sickening It makes me want to ***** Close your eyes Let it take you in Love it Hate it Praise it **** it Cleanse it Vulgarize it Whatever you like If you ever want to be A talented poet Then don’t take my advice Use structure Use themes Make your voice easily heard But at the same time silent These words That people may love These are the things That people may define as talent This **** I made They may say I made from my talent But to me It is a massive piece of crap And really doesn't need talent.
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You should know              That I don’t normally do this.                          Words come easy                              and shape does not.                          I know the purpose, though,              And have felt the effects, a flowing melody              a short prelude                          A bowstring across a violin.              I’m sorry.          Sorry that the river rushes              at the wrong times and, sorry that I haven’t warned you              of the waterfall.                  Sorry that I write              in pulses and not lyrics,          sorry that the sun sets too early              over somebody else's mountain. Sorry that I can’t start again -              the suspense of pause                          has already leaped from my lips                                      and the fluttering that is suspense                  has melted into the river              and all that remains is the value of silence.
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Jul 5, 2018
Jul 5, 2018 at 10:50 PM UTC
Enjambment
She died a year ago, But so pathetic I wasn’t around during, Her funeral, Air would have protested against my loud dirge, There would have been series of enjambment In the stanzas of my her elegy. General Abas said she died in a ****** coup, But she was too wise to be wiped out in a coup, She was like untamed lion. Mr George gave another account, He said she died during an internal war, The war against the truth, She has been from truth, Too blind to see reality, Fast asleep to be woken up. The family doctor said she was poisoned, Poisoned with the truth, The truth that kills rather to set free. Inspector James said she was sniped From a fair perimeter. The mortuary attendant said they Heared movement, Guess she was just try to raise up. Today I arrive with nothing to feed my eye, A little bit nostalgic, I had the feeling that I belong here but not to death, So I left for the yard, at the backyard, I couldn’t belive what I saw on her gravestone, “Nigeria a country, not a nation”
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Jul 3, 2016
Jul 3, 2016 at 10:09 AM UTC
Epitaph for Nigeria
*for R.A. our northern friend* ~ one foot in two countries, she is enjambment symbolic, running a single stanza without a syntactical break, by standing simultaneous in two neighboring cultures causing her dear readers from near and far, some, like me, from across the borderline, considerable multifarious symptoms of well considered verbal confusion this, a gifted special talent from she who straddles   all kinds of borders that divide her and unite her, that can be understood/revealed tho, when observing the northernmost night skies eh? expert in modulating extreme snowed under bay winterized temperatures, counterpointed by drivingopen highways on summer plains where the dotted line is all there is to see for miles, thousandths wide she-poet oft goes quiet, expelling her breath between word roarings, gentlest of periodic verbal sweets genteel my word version for her gentle so, in a way that makes gentility deserve the nobility inherent that is the work word that always comes first when we need to place her, another star in the night flying frying firmament enjambment - her word means I am all in, with both hands, resting on both jambs of an arched window that she architects, peering in, Making Sure, I have come to the right place where she-poet builds skylights of northern lights, igniting adore her sweet confusion, but better yet, her poems of clarification that explain all in, why when, we all look up, thru her window exquisite that she meant for us we always first turn our glacé glance northwards strangely, seeking, illogically, but not really, warmth in the she-poets northern way
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Apr 12, 2015
Apr 12, 2015 at 8:00 AM UTC
She-Poet: The Northern Way (enjambment)
*for R.A. our northern friend* ~ one foot in two countries, she is enjambment symbolic, running a single stanza without a syntactical break, by standing simultaneous in two neighboring cultures causing her dear readers from near and far, some, like me, from across the borderline, considerable multifarious symptoms of well considered verbal confusion this, a gifted special talent from she who straddles   all kinds of borders that divide her and unite her, that can be understood/revealed tho, when observing the northernmost night skies eh? expert in modulating extreme snowed under bay winterized temperatures, counterpointed by drivingopen highways on summer plains where the dotted line is all there is to see for miles, thousandths wide she-poet oft goes quiet, expelling her breath between word roarings, gentlest of periodic verbal sweets genteel my word version for her gentle so, in a way that makes gentility deserve the nobility inherent that is the work word that always comes first when we need to place her, another star in the night flying frying firmament enjambment - her word means I am all in, with both hands, resting on both jambs of an arched window that she architects, peering in, Making Sure, I have come to the right place where she-poet builds skylights of northern lights, igniting adore her sweet confusion, but better yet, her poems of clarification that explain all in, why when, we all look up, thru her window exquisite that she meant for us we always first turn our glacé glance northwards strangely, seeking, illogically, but not really, warmth in the she-poets northern way
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words hurt. have you ever been stabbed by an adjective or ripped up inside by a verb? how about those adverbs that modify the emptiness we all feel inside? words are a living creature. lurking over the enjambment of the letters, terrorizing those who hear them. and yet; we still use them. pushing us over the edge as they're muttered by those who are not worthy of their power. of their grace. but nouns hurt the worst. razor blades and lemon juice are like an ant to a human compared to nouns. and the only way we can combat these fierce enemies is to not listen. but how can i cover my ears from something i adore? and how can i cover my ears to protect myself from words when i need them? i need them more than Tina needed Ike more than Lindsay Lohan needs coke more than Beyonce needs Jay more than Lucifer needs God to stay alive. And how can I shield myself from words when all I want to do is hear the phrase "everything is going to be okay."
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Nov 27, 2013
Nov 27, 2013 at 1:53 AM UTC
a word.
you straddled my mind with the way you drew a narrow line between what i knew about you and what i have come to find but you raddled my body with addle-brained designs, never once drawing one of a benign kind. © Matthew Harlovic
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Sep 20, 2016
Sep 20, 2016 at 11:27 PM UTC
enjambment
Enjambment. leave it to those French to put a break where you don’t want it to be. As though syllables could be more important than complete sentences. Like something should ever pause without periods or commas or some mark. Don’t those kids know that good grammar is essential to English language?
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Jan 22, 2012
Jan 22, 2012 at 1:47 PM UTC
Enjambment
I let myself break like the lines of a poem, because every break is a continuation of this wild & beautiful journey. Every break comes with another grand adventure. Another chance to try again when the sun rises (there will always be tomorrow). Every break comes with the promise of more poetry.
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Jan 14, 2024
Jan 14, 2024 at 5:17 PM UTC
Enjambment
Surrounded with laughter Surrounded with friends Surrounded with smiles Still I lament. Poems that you'll never read with emotions forced in lines why do I bother writing them? Filled with enjambment and rhymes should I just stop writing then? Am I merely wasting time? A creative outlet for my emotions they build up throughout my day filling me up with tears and pain and words just waiting waiting to be set free from the confines of my decimated soul. Another four verse symphony created in my head yet the trophy that is awarded feels like broken glass dripping from my hands a warm familiar fluid the colours fade and my fluid visions change to red The final line of the final verse ends with a bullet in my head.
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Sep 7, 2010
Sep 7, 2010 at 2:51 PM UTC
Four verse symphony of feelings.
what i find so fascinating about you is that you never seem to start or end where you are supposed to. no, you have your own pauses and stops, and the more i try to follow you, the more confused i get. is there any pattern or sequence to you that i can decipher? is there a glitch in your equation which i could probably unscramble? believe me. i find that you are more beautiful in your insistence not to be understood. i liked that about you, as that tells me i don’t have to struggle so hard. but, baby, i still want to try. let me still get my paper and pencil out to attempt to solve you, like that algebraic equation i can’t seem to ever get right. honey, i am not giving up on you, the same way i got headaches over those questions that tested the logic out of me, eventually leading me to ask whether i was really intelligent enough to figure something out. but even then, even when i am out of my zone and completely uncertain, i will still follow this fascination through. who knows, perhaps, eventually i will find the right spot, the precise timing, the exact variable needed to complete the solution to us. for j.e. 111814
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Nov 18, 2014
Nov 18, 2014 at 9:46 AM UTC
enjambment
Disconnected by the root, wasting our time between sheets instead of between conversations You kept yourself in backwards hats and vague excuses to the questions I was asking. I lit myself on fire, extinguished the flame in the shower after we finished, cursing at the droplets sliding down the curtain. ***** this!* and ***** that after you ******* me into the enjambment that was your free space— your convenience. I fit only if you push, I matter only if it’s after midnight and the world outside your door and bed frame doesn’t have to know. In the daylight, I’m a ghost that you always see. I’m the ruby spotted from the corner of your eyes, the shine that hurts to look at, but no one can know. Of course. No one can know the way your mouth rests between sighs or how your eyes lock into mine when your bruising the inside of my thighs. I’m the extra beer in your back pocket. I’m the ***** in the towel who’s promising her better self that she won’t go again, that she won’t allow herself to try to patch the promise from too long ago. The relationship, shattered early, that mended itself crooked, that became a book thrown at the wall and a sweet, dissipated call. I’m the secret solemnly kept at night when you’re drunk and ugly and begging for some beauty to curl up next to. I’m the last line in the best country song, the whisper you scream for when I’m gone.
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Nov 24, 2014
Nov 24, 2014 at 9:59 PM UTC
Why
(3 hours. 3 years. A lifetime.) 1. 'and the Doctor said, "are you saying you feel guilty unless you are hungry?" Discuss, with reference to the roles of female c haracters in the American moderns, particularly  to Plath's representation of Esther in The Bell Jar , the relevance of this quote to your adolescent development. (10 marks) 2. Should a poet's work invariably utilise enjambment or read in sequence, allowing the poet freedom to let the poetry find it's own form? (Candidates are encouraged to explore the source to which the question above alludes, and to formulate an original argument with an effective use of rhetorical devices to communicate it,) (8 marks) 3. Elucidate your role as a daughter, then compare and contrast it with your role as a student. Use quotes directly taken from personal experiences and your own examples to clairfy your explanation. (5 marks) 4. They are all looking at you and laughing at you. You are a joke. You are hallucinating and haven't slept in days. How does this make you/the reader feel and do you think this was a part of your plotline intended to elicit a particular response? (5 marks) 5. Love is not unconditional. Discuss. (10 marks.) 6. "To live is to suffer, to survive is to find some meaning in the suffering." This famous quote by Nietzsche presents him as a nihilistic and misanthropic individual. Do you see him in this light or can you find hope in his hopeless stance? Use examples of your own suffering to corroborate your viewpoint. (8 marks) 7. Is morality a prerequisite for appreciation of art? Are you? Are you appreciating/appreciated? Discuss. (10 marks) 8. Calculate the 369th digit of pi as the fractal proxy to represent the infinite worlds contained witin each human being, and in doing so determine the contribution that you and the offspring you will most probably never have cannot contribute to the world shared between the infinite number of individuals posessing their own words, continuing on to deduct your own value from that of the mean value of the population considered in this infinite data set and draw up a graph to visually demonstrate the extent to which the world doesn't need you. (15 marks) 9. Using the individual calculations formulated in question 8, derive the meaning of Y. (5 marks) 10. Draw the shape of your sadness (20 marks) 11. Don't you think you should have learnt by now? (25 marks) 12. Explain what you are hoping for, and substantiate your hopes with empirical support. (5 marks)
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Dec 28, 2014
Dec 28, 2014 at 11:25 PM UTC
The Final Exam That Drove Me to Madness
(3 hours. 3 years. A lifetime.) 1. 'and the Doctor said, "are you saying you feel guilty unless you are hungry?" Discuss, with reference to the roles of female c haracters in the American moderns, particularly  to Plath's representation of Esther in The Bell Jar , the relevance of this quote to your adolescent development. (10 marks) 2. Should a poet's work invariably utilise enjambment or read in sequence, allowing the poet freedom to let the poetry find it's own form? (Candidates are encouraged to explore the source to which the question above alludes, and to formulate an original argument with an effective use of rhetorical devices to communicate it,) (8 marks) 3. Elucidate your role as a daughter, then compare and contrast it with your role as a student. Use quotes directly taken from personal experiences and your own examples to clairfy your explanation. (5 marks) 4. They are all looking at you and laughing at you. You are a joke. You are hallucinating and haven't slept in days. How does this make you/the reader feel and do you think this was a part of your plotline intended to elicit a particular response? (5 marks) 5. Love is not unconditional. Discuss. (10 marks.) 6. "To live is to suffer, to survive is to find some meaning in the suffering." This famous quote by Nietzsche presents him as a nihilistic and misanthropic individual. Do you see him in this light or can you find hope in his hopeless stance? Use examples of your own suffering to corroborate your viewpoint. (8 marks) 7. Is morality a prerequisite for appreciation of art? Are you? Are you appreciating/appreciated? Discuss. (10 marks) 8. Calculate the 369th digit of pi as the fractal proxy to represent the infinite worlds contained witin each human being, and in doing so determine the contribution that you and the offspring you will most probably never have cannot contribute to the world shared between the infinite number of individuals posessing their own words, continuing on to deduct your own value from that of the mean value of the population considered in this infinite data set and draw up a graph to visually demonstrate the extent to which the world doesn't need you. (15 marks) 9. Using the individual calculations formulated in question 8, derive the meaning of Y. (5 marks) 10. Draw the shape of your sadness (20 marks) 11. Don't you think you should have learnt by now? (25 marks) 12. Explain what you are hoping for, and substantiate your hopes with empirical support. (5 marks)
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I put my pen to paper, Trying, over and over, to express events and their effects. And I try to believe that these words trickling down my wrist have some sort of value or purpose. Maybe it's just vanity to think that my thoughts are worth something, that they mean anything to the world outside my mind. But I try, over and over, to make this hollow space in my chest, and this growing pain in my head, coherent. Relate experience through stanzas and enjambment, or a poorly thought-out metaphor. I write it and leave it. My soul onto a page in purple pen in a library surrounded by people who have no idea of my name. This pieceofshit I call a poem that I write and leave and never want anyone to read. Because what is the point? These are just words about a person who you don't know. What's the point? I don't pretend to know. And yet the pen meets paper. Again and again.
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Feb 12, 2012
Feb 12, 2012 at 6:35 PM UTC
pointless waste of purple ink.
I don’t want to talk about books anymore. You favour a misty fantasy to the drudge of reality -              I know. But I’m tired of fiction. My bed is littered with it; epic tales of other lovers, bowing with the weight of a thousand a hundred thousand lies. Our talks on metre and rhyme have grown stale. When will my melody, my enjambment satisfy you? Without the need for irksome words. I want your lips to decipher mine –                 No, I don’t want a pen. I don't want whispered sonnets or soliloquies any more. Shakespeare shouldn't shape your mouth. I want your breath, not the remnants of his. A kiss mustn't go in brackets, render words redundant.                     Shh, no more. Oh I can not find the strength to edit us. Over and over. I want original. I want harsh truth. And I want you to love it. I don’t want another paper romance.
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Apr 24, 2012
Apr 24, 2012 at 3:55 PM UTC
Fiction
The opposite of end-stopped Poetry; the trick with enjambment Is to never complete a sentence, phrase, or thought Within a single line of verse; but instead allow The syntactic unit to run on Unexpectedly, like a distracted self-drive tourist Attempting to navigate a multi-lane freeway Without indicating
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Dec 26, 2018
Dec 26, 2018 at 6:36 PM UTC
Enjambment
Enjambment: meaning and meter bumping bellies in holy union.
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Feb 3, 2011
Feb 3, 2011 at 7:38 AM UTC
Unabashed Dictionary XXI
Desperate to grab the grail of words we decide to share our joint thoughts to introspect our vision together of what it takes to write two at this hour Pen and paper, one writes witness into the mind of the other and meets the timid point of punctuation, followed by the exasperation of words it only follows rules do not apply nor does a simulacra of similes the enjambment is our language that we create we can misplace is it our native tongue so much so that poetry never needs to be learned? The friendship of thought to process Relays poet to poem to poet And poem again It's with you now I walk Our eyes along the same path to troth It's truth is spoken Between lines, it's in the heart Our paths, alone, come together Its friendship Is art Dialogical process fill in the blanks at 1:01 4:01 p.m, hey aim For the sweet link we proudly discovered and shared in eyes and ink Both black. It's lack of light Where the sun of the one seeks the night of the other It's days and nights; mark hours... asunder under calendar And daydream of once and again seeing the same sun face the marvel of the other We are time traveling, air traveling through words book a seat at the airline company of poetry What the other sees in the sun sky above her the other thinks of under his night sky the thought of one never cancels that of the other We trod on the same path Me with Ginsberg, you with Plath. Written jointly by Appoline Romanens first, third, seventh and ninth paragraph at 1:00-1:27 pm, Lyon, France and by Jesse Altamirano, second, fourth, fifth, sixth and eighth 4:00- 4:30 am, Riverside, California May 23, 2017
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May 23, 2017
May 23, 2017 at 7:40 AM UTC
Class of English 102W(riting) reunion
Desperate to grab the grail of words we decide to share our joint thoughts to introspect our vision together of what it takes to write two at this hour Pen and paper, one writes witness into the mind of the other and meets the timid point of punctuation, followed by the exasperation of words it only follows rules do not apply nor does a simulacra of similes the enjambment is our language that we create we can misplace is it our native tongue so much so that poetry never needs to be learned? The friendship of thought to process Relays poet to poem to poet And poem again It's with you now I walk Our eyes along the same path to troth It's truth is spoken Between lines, it's in the heart Our paths, alone, come together Its friendship Is art Dialogical process fill in the blanks at 1:01 4:01 p.m, hey aim For the sweet link we proudly discovered and shared in eyes and ink Both black. It's lack of light Where the sun of the one seeks the night of the other It's days and nights; mark hours... asunder under calendar And daydream of once and again seeing the same sun face the marvel of the other We are time traveling, air traveling through words book a seat at the airline company of poetry What the other sees in the sun sky above her the other thinks of under his night sky the thought of one never cancels that of the other We trod on the same path Me with Ginsberg, you with Plath. Written jointly by Appoline Romanens first, third, seventh and ninth paragraph at 1:00-1:27 pm, Lyon, France and by Jesse Altamirano, second, fourth, fifth, sixth and eighth 4:00- 4:30 am, Riverside, California May 23, 2017
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Saturation, no space left in my mind. So many questions and so much emotion that I can't think. All the things that I used to see as simple tasks or thoughts won't link. No coherence in my brain. Juxtaposition, of ideas leads my actions to dissonance. Enjambment in every movement that I make.
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Sep 9, 2015
Sep 9, 2015 at 2:17 PM UTC
Run-Time Error.
I wonder, sometimes, why it is a fact, A gifted, handsome man should be alone. My iambic pentameter’s intact, And yet I tend to lyric on my own. Alliteration alienates romance. The ladies scorn my struggle with cliché They scoff, then aggravated, wring their hands. Yet still I need to couplet every day. I’m thinking as I sit beside my date, “I’ll syllable you soon if I am able.” At times my meter renders me irate. It’s difficult to rhythm at the table. “Another cup?” I search her face for clues. She looks a little bored. It can’t be me. I pass the menu for her to peruse. “Why don’t you try a blended Chinese tea?” I’m formulating ditties as she speaks. “I think I’d like to go. I’m rather hot.” “Do stay. I’ve ordered brussels sprouts and leeks.” Her grimace indicates she’d rather not. I wonder if I’ve aimed a little low. Her diction leaves a lot to be desired. I’d like to teach her how to ebb and flow, But ‘clueless’ leaves me, frankly, uninspired. She fidgets nervously and looks away. I wonder if the woman is a freak. “I hope you’re not illiterate,” I say. I may have been a little indescrete. My fears were justified, she’s never heard Enjambment quite like mine in all her days. She slaps my face and tells me I’m absurd, Then dumps me in a non-poetic daze. I could have blessed her with a monologue; Enthralled her with the kernel of my quill; enchanted her with dazzling dialogue, If only she’d have stayed to pay the bill. Now woe is me. I’m lost and incomplete. Lamenting my position; full of doubts. Deliberating how a man can eat A double share of leeks and brussels sprouts.
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Jan 29, 2016
Jan 29, 2016 at 4:05 PM UTC
Man Musing
I wonder, sometimes, why it is a fact, A gifted, handsome man should be alone. My iambic pentameter’s intact, And yet I tend to lyric on my own. Alliteration alienates romance. The ladies scorn my struggle with cliché They scoff, then aggravated, wring their hands. Yet still I need to couplet every day. I’m thinking as I sit beside my date, “I’ll syllable you soon if I am able.” At times my meter renders me irate. It’s difficult to rhythm at the table. “Another cup?” I search her face for clues. She looks a little bored. It can’t be me. I pass the menu for her to peruse. “Why don’t you try a blended Chinese tea?” I’m formulating ditties as she speaks. “I think I’d like to go. I’m rather hot.” “Do stay. I’ve ordered brussels sprouts and leeks.” Her grimace indicates she’d rather not. I wonder if I’ve aimed a little low. Her diction leaves a lot to be desired. I’d like to teach her how to ebb and flow, But ‘clueless’ leaves me, frankly, uninspired. She fidgets nervously and looks away. I wonder if the woman is a freak. “I hope you’re not illiterate,” I say. I may have been a little indescrete. My fears were justified, she’s never heard Enjambment quite like mine in all her days. She slaps my face and tells me I’m absurd, Then dumps me in a non-poetic daze. I could have blessed her with a monologue; Enthralled her with the kernel of my quill; enchanted her with dazzling dialogue, If only she’d have stayed to pay the bill. Now woe is me. I’m lost and incomplete. Lamenting my position; full of doubts. Deliberating how a man can eat A double share of leeks and brussels sprouts.
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My secrets are metaphors. The words are artfully arranged in alliteration Or cautiously halted in Enjambment so that they don't reveal themselves. My secrets are anaphoric. They are metonymic, swearing secrecy to the pen. Sometimes they are synecdoches, Begging, afraid, in rhyme for your attention again. My secrets are anecdotes. They write about themselves through personification. This poem juxtaposes itself; I've told you all of my secrets of secrecy-how ironic.
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Mar 27, 2019
Mar 27, 2019 at 5:13 PM UTC
Secrecy
Do you often wonder how you are perceived by those you meet? What does a stranger think, what is his/her first impression? Most of us wish to leave a good (?) impression or at least an impression. So just how do we accomplish this? Some wish to be remembered as Beautiful Some wish to be thought of as Smart Others like to be considered Funny Or maybe Clever, Caring,... Trustworthy, Loyal, Helpful, Friendly, Courteous, Kind, Obedient, Cheerful, Thrifty, Brave,  Clean or Reverent if you are a Boy Scout. Maybe if you are a Christian you want to be remembered as following   the Ten Commandments or Being a Good Neighbor, Doing Unto Others as you would have them do unto you. If an environmentalist, caring about the Earth, loving nature, the seasons and all living things. If a teacher, then concern for your students' futures If an investment counselor or banker-wealth. If a politician, then winning the next election. Most of us do have some kind of agenda when we meet a stranger So what is your agenda? Does your agenda make the world a better place, help other people, No matter what their religion, race or creed? Or does your agenda simply build you up in their eyes? Or do you just assume that you look good to them? Do you really think so? In writing this little ditty, I determined to use a thesaurus in order  to improve my writing so that I would be perceived (identified, observed, regarded, sensed) as an intelligent poet of great merit and in doing so I learned a lot of new things which I will pass on to you, my readers. One thing that I realized is that my writing is not without enjambment and maybe yours is too.  In addition my parti pris could be incorrect.  Possibly the driving force behind this piece of writing could be an ulterior motive or an incentive to find out more about myself. It is also probable that I am participating in a bit of log rolling, pork barreling or establishing myself through the cronyism of you fellow poets.   Help me, I myself am really not sure.
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Nov 9, 2017
Nov 9, 2017 at 10:29 AM UTC
Others Perceptions (Observations) of Us
Do you often wonder how you are perceived by those you meet? What does a stranger think, what is his/her first impression? Most of us wish to leave a good (?) impression or at least an impression. So just how do we accomplish this? Some wish to be remembered as Beautiful Some wish to be thought of as Smart Others like to be considered Funny Or maybe Clever, Caring,... Trustworthy, Loyal, Helpful, Friendly, Courteous, Kind, Obedient, Cheerful, Thrifty, Brave,  Clean or Reverent if you are a Boy Scout. Maybe if you are a Christian you want to be remembered as following   the Ten Commandments or Being a Good Neighbor, Doing Unto Others as you would have them do unto you. If an environmentalist, caring about the Earth, loving nature, the seasons and all living things. If a teacher, then concern for your students' futures If an investment counselor or banker-wealth. If a politician, then winning the next election. Most of us do have some kind of agenda when we meet a stranger So what is your agenda? Does your agenda make the world a better place, help other people, No matter what their religion, race or creed? Or does your agenda simply build you up in their eyes? Or do you just assume that you look good to them? Do you really think so? In writing this little ditty, I determined to use a thesaurus in order  to improve my writing so that I would be perceived (identified, observed, regarded, sensed) as an intelligent poet of great merit and in doing so I learned a lot of new things which I will pass on to you, my readers. One thing that I realized is that my writing is not without enjambment and maybe yours is too.  In addition my parti pris could be incorrect.  Possibly the driving force behind this piece of writing could be an ulterior motive or an incentive to find out more about myself. It is also probable that I am participating in a bit of log rolling, pork barreling or establishing myself through the cronyism of you fellow poets.   Help me, I myself am really not sure.
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(With apologies to Dr. Seuss aka Theodor Seuss Geisel) Green eggs and ham is what I pick I like my poems un-iambic. To much pomp and circumstance Has me gazing quite askance. I ask your patience Sam I am For poetic posing I must slam. My poetry I like to rhyme In simple form and simple time. And have it held with just the same Respect and even mild acclaim. A birthday card I shall not **** For that to me would be a sham. Nor baptism or bar mitzvah I just do not have the chutzpah. No wedding notice or get well Poetic arrogance we must quell. Each greeting billet I shall defend As one of our true brethren. Yes poetry indeed I’ll slam it No synecdoche* or enjambment.* I’ll have no Haibun* or Kyrielle* No Triversen* or Villanelle*. Is simple rhyme anymore silly Than didactic forms we praise so shrilly? I do not like to follow forms. I do not like these contrived norms. It is the freedom of poetry that first attracted me to thee. And why can’t all poetics be Of an equal equality. Perhaps it’s not the forms I hate But the pompousness they doth dictate. I will not stand for Seussian abuse I relish odes to eggs chartreuse. And so I say to thee dear Sam My poems are happy as they am. © Copyright 2018 Robert C. Leung
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Jun 7, 2018
Jun 7, 2018 at 5:40 PM UTC
Seduced By Seuss
pure eyes mapping out secret roads swift onset of kisses colossal than still-seeking monuments. supple enjambment of flesh fuller than moon. only her one side showing in influx light - eyes yearning to discover what is behind mystery, as if to say what lies in front is subduable with openness. these thoughts naked, as we are both nailed to the same tapestry, clothed in honeysuckle.
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Sep 14, 2015
Sep 14, 2015 at 10:31 PM UTC
Light