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"ahhs" poems
I pressed my left heel down to get it into the strap of my sparkled sandal--bought from the cheap version of the rich girl store; I got them more than half off. I'm a fraud. Sliding my foot into the shoe, the way I've done so many times before, I lose my balance. And there goes the first one. I knew the nails were coming off; I'm not all that wealthy. I have to wait until the last minute to cough up fifteen bucks to get these things re-done. I thought it just popped the nail straight off, but it throbs and is begging for me to pay it some attention. I peer down at where the once perfectly manicured nail (baby blue tips and all) had sat upon my index finger. It has left a ****** mess--jagged and imperfect. I can see my real nail drawn up next to my cuticle like a smile. Placed on top is a half moon of hardened acrylic until it breaks off near the soft doughy point of my freshly exposed fingertip. Edgy. Almost. The blood lines the rim and trickles it's way down curving its way around the smile; highlighting the crescent of my own fingernail. It throbs. **** I say wanting someone to hear me. **** a little louder. I just want to complain lately. I want a little attention for the suffering I put my own self through. As I wait it throbs more. I wipe the blood away just to watch it refill. I walk down the stairs, and they take care of me. They give me my oohs and ahhs and owes, put some ointment on a paper towel because we don't have bandaids, wrap it with tape, and I'm off to sew my dress back together for dinner. My sister's dress; my sister's dress that she got from a nearby neighbor who stuffed it in a trash bag and left it there for us to take. Maybe I will get a discount.
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Sep 24, 2012
Sep 24, 2012 at 12:49 PM UTC
Something Small
I pressed my left heel down to get it into the strap of my sparkled sandal--bought from the cheap version of the rich girl store; I got them more than half off. I'm a fraud. Sliding my foot into the shoe, the way I've done so many times before, I lose my balance. And there goes the first one. I knew the nails were coming off; I'm not all that wealthy. I have to wait until the last minute to cough up fifteen bucks to get these things re-done. I thought it just popped the nail straight off, but it throbs and is begging for me to pay it some attention. I peer down at where the once perfectly manicured nail (baby blue tips and all) had sat upon my index finger. It has left a ****** mess--jagged and imperfect. I can see my real nail drawn up next to my cuticle like a smile. Placed on top is a half moon of hardened acrylic until it breaks off near the soft doughy point of my freshly exposed fingertip. Edgy. Almost. The blood lines the rim and trickles it's way down curving its way around the smile; highlighting the crescent of my own fingernail. It throbs. **** I say wanting someone to hear me. **** a little louder. I just want to complain lately. I want a little attention for the suffering I put my own self through. As I wait it throbs more. I wipe the blood away just to watch it refill. I walk down the stairs, and they take care of me. They give me my oohs and ahhs and owes, put some ointment on a paper towel because we don't have bandaids, wrap it with tape, and I'm off to sew my dress back together for dinner. My sister's dress; my sister's dress that she got from a nearby neighbor who stuffed it in a trash bag and left it there for us to take. Maybe I will get a discount.
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happened upon an extravaganza of spring’s hallmark, the cherry blossoms outing their munificence of color, I happened to position myself direct below a tree, the thicket of blossoms so, well, thick, that sky was obliterated ‘cept for pointillistic spots of blue sun, yellow sky that poked through the few de minimus interstitial spaces permitted, and was struck silent, by-for-before shimmering eyes that uttered the requisite oohs and ahhs, and words came to me weeks later, when the memory, now fully decanted, reappears courtesy of a giant tech company’s code tinkering, merging and splurging the combined images in the photographic memory of my devices, as if to say: your life is points of light and color and scent as you write now amidst the hubbub of jackhammers, raucous horns a blaring, the homeless screaming on the street at god, the fatalistic headlines of hate and the pallor of a low level haze of perp~gray between you and your true elfin self, and you are not surprised, but sadly, but not entirely, bemused that the photo’s true utility was to remind weeks later that all that my eyes utter is not just woe, double trouble and toil, toil, *but to Hey Jude and George, step out and see the park on a Sunday in its entirety and to glory in your being by being a point in that tapestry spectacular of ingestion, digestion and final comprehension and a happy* exhalation
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May 10, 2024
May 10, 2024 at 8:06 AM UTC
The Cherry Blossom Thicket (intersecting points of light and color and scent)
Ahh, shady lady says she’s shy And insecure As it were, I say sure, Sure, she’s a bit demure, But that’s only part Of her Allure, I too am shy and raconteur. Ahh, I always worry Cuz faces are blurry I never remember the names; I hide behind a graffiti covered wall Standing tall Feeling small I guess I’m just part of the games People play All day, they Deep freeze you, Mess with you, then Bless You when You sneeze, Ahh, get down on your knees Please, and Beg for mercy Beg for pain, Scarecrow needs a brain, I’m begging cuz I got nothing to gain Ahh, let me explain, Nothing to gain, nothing to lose Wouldn’t refuse, A new pair of shoes Mine are old, Have a hole in the toe The laces are broke And tied in a knot, What you got, In your store, You can give to the poor? Or for a switch, You can give to the rich, Ahh, relax, They pay the tax, But, I ain’t no Robin Hood, or William Tell, whose Overture to the pits of Hell, Didn’t sell, Until he licensed it to the Lone Ranger, Hi ** Silver, ask a stranger If it takes a silver bullet, To **** the wicked witch, ***** Lies underneath the house, Curling toes and ruby slippers, Dreaming of all the zippers She unzipped, then walked away, Ahh, it’s a brand new day. So if the IRS calls Tell ‘em I’m dead Or went to bed I’ll sleep it off till noon, Now you got the name of this tune I’m howlin’ at the moon! I’m crazy as a loon, See you soon. See you soon, See ya, Soon, I’m leavin’ in a hot air balloon, Ahh, there’s no place like home. Or Rome, If you get the chance To dance, With the Pope, Or if you want to see the lions In the Coliseum, You can see’em, Having lunch, Captain Crunch, The Tin Man needs a heart, Tear me up, Tear me apart, Ahh, you were all there, You, and You, and You, For certain, You were all behind the curtain, Ahh, MGM, And the lion roars, The End Phil Lindsey 1/13/17
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Jan 13, 2017
Jan 13, 2017 at 8:52 PM UTC
Wizard of Ahhs
Ahh, shady lady says she’s shy And insecure As it were, I say sure, Sure, she’s a bit demure, But that’s only part Of her Allure, I too am shy and raconteur. Ahh, I always worry Cuz faces are blurry I never remember the names; I hide behind a graffiti covered wall Standing tall Feeling small I guess I’m just part of the games People play All day, they Deep freeze you, Mess with you, then Bless You when You sneeze, Ahh, get down on your knees Please, and Beg for mercy Beg for pain, Scarecrow needs a brain, I’m begging cuz I got nothing to gain Ahh, let me explain, Nothing to gain, nothing to lose Wouldn’t refuse, A new pair of shoes Mine are old, Have a hole in the toe The laces are broke And tied in a knot, What you got, In your store, You can give to the poor? Or for a switch, You can give to the rich, Ahh, relax, They pay the tax, But, I ain’t no Robin Hood, or William Tell, whose Overture to the pits of Hell, Didn’t sell, Until he licensed it to the Lone Ranger, Hi ** Silver, ask a stranger If it takes a silver bullet, To **** the wicked witch, ***** Lies underneath the house, Curling toes and ruby slippers, Dreaming of all the zippers She unzipped, then walked away, Ahh, it’s a brand new day. So if the IRS calls Tell ‘em I’m dead Or went to bed I’ll sleep it off till noon, Now you got the name of this tune I’m howlin’ at the moon! I’m crazy as a loon, See you soon. See you soon, See ya, Soon, I’m leavin’ in a hot air balloon, Ahh, there’s no place like home. Or Rome, If you get the chance To dance, With the Pope, Or if you want to see the lions In the Coliseum, You can see’em, Having lunch, Captain Crunch, The Tin Man needs a heart, Tear me up, Tear me apart, Ahh, you were all there, You, and You, and You, For certain, You were all behind the curtain, Ahh, MGM, And the lion roars, The End Phil Lindsey 1/13/17
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Doctor told me I got a Vitamin D deficiency Thought *"I coulda told you that! It's been 7 months!"* #TrueStory But in all seriousness Twas a relief To have an explanation For all the fatigue And flu and aches And moods I know I'm sick but was Tired of always feelin ill Child with Ricketts level Gave me some souped up pills Could feel it in my bone ahhs! This is the ****** *** Alive again! Spring in my step! And though this is all said in fun There's lessons to be taken From the blood tests I just had done Put those vampire tendencies Behind you Catch them rays Enjoy the ride And erase the gloomy days Of sitting inside Go get out in the sun! AND IF NOT GO GET YOURSELF SOME! ;)
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Apr 6, 2015
Apr 6, 2015 at 9:43 PM UTC
She wants the D!
If I loved lustily like a man, I'd strip it all down. I'd take away her oohs and ahhs until only her yeses were left. If I loved her like a man, I'd remove her woman's mystery. I'd tell her she was doing it wrong and show her someone who did me right instead. I'm glad I don't love quite like a man Some days, it's easier being a woman.
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Oct 14, 2012
Oct 14, 2012 at 1:22 PM UTC
To Do It Like a Man Does
Back into the circus, Back into the ring. Just another spectacle, Another freak they can make sing. I'll do my flips and tricks, I'll sing, dance, juggle flaming sticks. The audience laughs and cheers. If one jeers, boos- no one can hear. The thunderous applause, Whistles of approval, All of the oohs and ahhs Please me and tickle my ears. Welcome to my carnival. Here in this tent I put on a show. It is a mirage to please all who go. It is the most convincing act- A performance no one can look past. They can't see the real me Past the freak they want me to be. Here in my circus, Here in the ring. Ring around the rosy, Throw the ashes around like sickness. Welcome to my carnival Where I'm just another freak who can sing. Ring around the rosy circus tent Until in ashes it all falls down.
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Jul 31, 2016
Jul 31, 2016 at 12:55 AM UTC
Freak Show
A soft touch Slides across the skin Chill bumps rise As belly quivers within Expert hands used perfectly Heighten desire Every touch more exciting than the last Body heats up like a fire Lips press to the silken flesh Velvet tongue delves out Washing the skin almost A moan escapes loudly Teeth nip at skin Nails scrape the surface Buds tighten to a sensitive nub Lips find and kiss ******* deeply Knocking the wind from the lungs Back arching Hands cling to the head Gasping as body grows hotter Cries grow louder Hands move faster Lips meet lips Moves grow demanding Flesh to bare flesh Growls mix with moans Bodies entwine Tension Grows tighter Movements get faster Heat engulfs them Volcanic force surrounds Electricty surrounds Crackling and hissing Shrill voice piercing the ears Gutteral moans vibrate ear hairs Finally shaft enters well Nectar surrounds it delicately Muscles squeeze and release Steel hits harder and deeper Friction increases Sweat beads on surface Honey flows against the tight rosebud Fingers twist and release the plesaure spot Perfect rhythm Increases to a frantic dance Changing position Depth  unhead of obtained Whimpers, Whines then Cries Moans, ahhs, and Groans Squishing slaps heard repeately Mouth mash and bite Timing almost right It is on its way Winding tighter Growing hotter Suddenly it comes Body hammers quick and hard Then pauses and and slams again Milky white meets clear and thick Panting cries reach high pitch Waves of passion overcome all Collapsing together Entwined forever Lovers thats what they are Now and forever Never very far from the other Love You See Passion Bliss Love the best of them All
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Jul 24, 2010
Jul 24, 2010 at 12:34 AM UTC
Lovers ?
A soft touch Slides across the skin Chill bumps rise As belly quivers within Expert hands used perfectly Heighten desire Every touch more exciting than the last Body heats up like a fire Lips press to the silken flesh Velvet tongue delves out Washing the skin almost A moan escapes loudly Teeth nip at skin Nails scrape the surface Buds tighten to a sensitive nub Lips find and kiss ******* deeply Knocking the wind from the lungs Back arching Hands cling to the head Gasping as body grows hotter Cries grow louder Hands move faster Lips meet lips Moves grow demanding Flesh to bare flesh Growls mix with moans Bodies entwine Tension Grows tighter Movements get faster Heat engulfs them Volcanic force surrounds Electricty surrounds Crackling and hissing Shrill voice piercing the ears Gutteral moans vibrate ear hairs Finally shaft enters well Nectar surrounds it delicately Muscles squeeze and release Steel hits harder and deeper Friction increases Sweat beads on surface Honey flows against the tight rosebud Fingers twist and release the plesaure spot Perfect rhythm Increases to a frantic dance Changing position Depth  unhead of obtained Whimpers, Whines then Cries Moans, ahhs, and Groans Squishing slaps heard repeately Mouth mash and bite Timing almost right It is on its way Winding tighter Growing hotter Suddenly it comes Body hammers quick and hard Then pauses and and slams again Milky white meets clear and thick Panting cries reach high pitch Waves of passion overcome all Collapsing together Entwined forever Lovers thats what they are Now and forever Never very far from the other Love You See Passion Bliss Love the best of them All
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The ineffable ignites the sky, As words unspoken Crackle and combust Into the raining fire That lights our eyes. Oohs and ahhs gasp As the ashes disappear into the night, The very fabric of heaven We dream of each slumber, That one day when we too will see the light. Two lovers kiss beneath God's gates, Believing that they will ascend into the stars as saints. When the twilight has passed and dark is upon us, We too may take that firecracker to the heart, Life's deepest and cruelest form of art.
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Feb 28, 2013
Feb 28, 2013 at 5:17 PM UTC
Explosions in the Sky
How am I supposed to celebrate Americas freedom While I'm not free myself? My mind strangled by metaphors And thoughts of him The fireworks making the sky Shine and glow As he used to do By placing a smile upon my face... The oohs and ahhs of excitement; Barely equivalent to the burst and sizzle Of each shared kiss... Happy people in love Suffocating me, His scent is pushed past me, Carried by the wind. My heart sinks a little more With each vibrant spiral in the air. Fire is raining in the sky As I'm slowly sinking through the ground And into the fire below.
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Jul 4, 2014
Jul 4, 2014 at 10:46 PM UTC
The fourth of the seventh
Fade in: Ext. Theater - Day Cue clouds: gray shrouds blanket the sky and the sun's last remaining rays Cut to: Ext. Theater - Noon Cue crowd: no sound, no song comprise the mise en scene of this somber scene Fade in: Int. Theater - Night Cue sound: few gasps, some oohs and ahhs, some cries comprise the mise en scene of this joyous scene Cut to: extreme close up Their eyes reflect the faces on the screen: Newman, Hoffman, Brando, Ledger Pacino, De Niro Penn, Caine, Dean Fade out
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Sep 17, 2013
Sep 17, 2013 at 8:02 PM UTC
Let's All Go to the Movies
You put forth and claim you loved me; And with a murmur         who purrs like my cat     Kindly as sundown to nightfall myself         in such manner— O' dazzling days o ' ember Ye, sayeth now you love but then thine gloaming lips You say you are at blitheness Although mired than silhouetted          by pouting kisses But you say, You love me While midst sublime to yours Beguiling passions, abets Breathtaking verses, sweats out of me I'd love for you to open up A Fire-burning ardent desires My God,  can you hear me whispering My amazing Lord! Please give me my soul mate to cuddle and ****** Ahhs of snuggles Don't let me go this thine nuzzles ! I wanna be entwined unto the shadows Of blamelessness.. I will fly to you, so please put a halt for me But only one thing I doubted about, Herein hearty Eros of God's love wherein this immortality is made of, And die in it, Yet cherishes was in my Brain trust, thinking, sweetly, Oh come to me in my dreams Whist starring beams with schisms Thy butterfly kiss Thou renew though begotten vow soonest We can't win 'em all as best behaviors chronic, in stills Thou when dost wakes up As much-needed hopes our love into the deepest enchantments of all essence   Oh me, inquesting questions, Sowith love never-ending failures Ne'erland of promised lands Shying away lessons - learned amass let alone revisiting sadness, at hand         Oh dear Thee, behold, love me truly! Once more, wish you could be here    so no more storms to adhere More so thy moment of September     deemed Saint Cupid's calls for Quasi-sweeter Lest my mindset a trendsetter Let alone sustainable care You utter and care For a favor In return I can't take it back But go ahead, come on rays of light Tough 'love' and found 'lust' we gonna kiss the disturbed dust In silence when we must Unselfishness thoroughfares and I can't help it but be just.. Oh com'on love me with all thine heart!
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Sep 22, 2015
Sep 22, 2015 at 9:34 PM UTC
Love Me-isms, But I loved You
You put forth and claim you loved me; And with a murmur         who purrs like my cat     Kindly as sundown to nightfall myself         in such manner— O' dazzling days o ' ember Ye, sayeth now you love but then thine gloaming lips You say you are at blitheness Although mired than silhouetted          by pouting kisses But you say, You love me While midst sublime to yours Beguiling passions, abets Breathtaking verses, sweats out of me I'd love for you to open up A Fire-burning ardent desires My God,  can you hear me whispering My amazing Lord! Please give me my soul mate to cuddle and ****** Ahhs of snuggles Don't let me go this thine nuzzles ! I wanna be entwined unto the shadows Of blamelessness.. I will fly to you, so please put a halt for me But only one thing I doubted about, Herein hearty Eros of God's love wherein this immortality is made of, And die in it, Yet cherishes was in my Brain trust, thinking, sweetly, Oh come to me in my dreams Whist starring beams with schisms Thy butterfly kiss Thou renew though begotten vow soonest We can't win 'em all as best behaviors chronic, in stills Thou when dost wakes up As much-needed hopes our love into the deepest enchantments of all essence   Oh me, inquesting questions, Sowith love never-ending failures Ne'erland of promised lands Shying away lessons - learned amass let alone revisiting sadness, at hand         Oh dear Thee, behold, love me truly! Once more, wish you could be here    so no more storms to adhere More so thy moment of September     deemed Saint Cupid's calls for Quasi-sweeter Lest my mindset a trendsetter Let alone sustainable care You utter and care For a favor In return I can't take it back But go ahead, come on rays of light Tough 'love' and found 'lust' we gonna kiss the disturbed dust In silence when we must Unselfishness thoroughfares and I can't help it but be just.. Oh com'on love me with all thine heart!
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Fireworks go off. Boom. Bang.  Fizzle. I'm inside reading a book. Some drunk writer rambling about work. I hear the oohs and the ahhs of civility outside these four walls and I look at the bottle of scotch nearest me and grab it. It goes down and warms my stomach. I stand up, walk to the window, move the curtains out of the way, and watch outside. I see people and their families standing on front porches, chaired up in their driveways, some ***** standing in the streets. All have their gazes pointed to the sky. I look. I wait. **Boom. Bang.** Fizzle. Blasts of color and noise then the dark grey smoke staining the night sky. I take another drink from the bottle. I sit down. Close my eyes. I see fireworks exploding in the sky.
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Jul 4, 2014
Jul 4, 2014 at 9:39 AM UTC
Boom. Bang. Fizzle.
The ooos and ahhs have hunched my mind, Crippling my conception of a world undefined, Wandering alone will tear the fabric of this frail design, And crucify me upon a truth to which I am aligned. There's a nuisance and a laughter waiting there, just in front, When fear approaches it is made humble by humour's brazen affront, Oh such honesty can only be existing to amuse or to make my edges blunt, Turn the tables of their titles, I am neither teacher nor student. Hallowed ground? not at all, it did regenerate its soil, A ground that knew those ancient footsteps knows no more the walker's toil, From creation's genius clowning I am so ready to recoil, But I say face the laughing liturgy, recall the joke that roused your turmoil. A joke that has remained there, at the core of every tear, It is quiet, almost inaudible, if you will not hush your brain to hear, Once discovered, like the sun, it strips the night of all its fear, And in its wake there is a smile and a wreckage to revere.
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Sep 14, 2019
Sep 14, 2019 at 9:40 AM UTC
The Joke
A Living Shoreline! red violet trumpet blossoms and spiraling vines curl happily alone the craggy, rocky banks of the Indian River oyster reefs, black and white mangroves, truly a wonderful coastal restoration effort at Ernest Kouwen-Hoven Riverside Park A little piece of paradise with a spectacular view of Melbourne skyline fills us with smiles, oohs and ahhs David and I hold hands while ambling out on the long wooden fisherman wharf jutting out into the Indian River A few folk at the end of the pier dangle their baits into indigo ribbon waves Perfect day with a lithe breeze, umbrella clouds, and damask silk blue heavens A youthful couple in a green and gray hammock sway playfully to the not too loud rap music This gorgeous day ends too soon we pack up our picnic baskets saunter towards our car two regal pelicans gracefully bid us adieu
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Sep 3, 2020
Sep 3, 2020 at 9:30 PM UTC
River Shangri-La
Consumed That’s what I am That’s what we all are Engulfed by the flaming desire to be that special something The special something that shimmers and sparkles in the light Creating ‘oohs’ and ‘ahhs’ at every turn of the page It lives in the back of our minds. That desire. Crouching Waiting for yet another chance to look for the golden pedestal So, I am consumed by search The search for that special something In people and places I’ve looked in books and movies and a few mirrors here and there But no image seems to measure up I just can’t figure it out My life is laced with reminders of the golden pedestal So, I’ll let the flames continue licking my skin until I’m nothing more than burnt ashes consumed by the words on a page
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Jan 22, 2015
Jan 22, 2015 at 7:38 AM UTC
I'm all burnt out
The sounds I missed full of bliss Little moans Whimpers and groans Heated breath Sighs with depth Sugary AHHs and HEATED O's Vocal gestures that reach my toes Back again with baited breath Vocally charged little deaths Hello I giggle Alive again Panting sounds Hiss & Snarls Grunts & Growls sounds I've been making for hours sigh
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Mar 14, 2014
Mar 14, 2014 at 6:43 PM UTC
The sounds I missed
i'm thirsting for jacquards and fine stemmed glassware arias and plain flat violet skies that seem to curve to the clouds firmness that releases soft edged conversations relinquished doubts and stubborn stroked outlines of earlier times... peaches in kraft bags ripened to the sweetness that "ahhs" the tongue and smiles that linger and trickle down to bebop rhythms and Sarah's songs tricky stuff said and done with twisting turning resolute convictions and strained certainties that spoke to truth and utter passions that seemed to spiral like so many dervishes in tophat wonderment... look at the fallen trees and lost warriors that happened past histories... ultimate choices when futile jestures seemed like the oligarch's pronouncements... merriment comes to tamper with memories and sadness falls into chutes flowing to wide streams where friends wade knee high over soft slipping stones all placed and counted matched like Orion's special quarter of the universe... stay quietly among the ferns and frogs and pace yourself to the changing monotony or feast upon the first light tickling your eyes tomorrow morning.
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Sep 2, 2016
Sep 2, 2016 at 3:30 PM UTC
speaking... for tomorrow
First snow is set to fall., Not ready for it at all. First it's all oozs and ahhs Then we turn and we shiver With thought of more on its way. Pull the covers and wish it away....
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Nov 21, 2015
Nov 21, 2015 at 1:37 PM UTC
Snow
I didn't get my coffee this morn I forgot to set it last night I didn't get my coffee this morn I'm not awake, and things just aren't right I didn't get my coffee this morn I've made mistakes, and major faux pas I should have had my coffee this morn as now, I'm getting some looks, and some "ahhs" I should have had my coffee this morn I put on my shirt and my socks I really needed my coffee this morn no underwear and no pants exposed are my Johnson and rocks
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Oct 17, 2017
Oct 17, 2017 at 9:27 AM UTC
I hope I'm dreaming