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"objecting" poems
I am sooooo tired, exhausted.. My mind needs to be shut down, my head hurts. Words want to be said but my prides me wounded, my selfworth is burning low there is a lump in my throat. I'm haunted by to evanescent nature of my past joy. Daunted but how far my seems to be. Yesterday, last week, last month, last year and today have me in the center, wearing the same things, feeling the same, worried I'm at my end, but a while older my life seems to be rejecting me; or maybe I it.. I want to be free to exist but everything seems to come with a cost. There are critics everywhere even my thoughts have thoughts objecting to them before i receive them and make certain i don't need them.. So I'm running around in circles not knowing why i never got around to things my mind first thought whiles ago, my will has become meek my worth shrunk to camouflage with dust specks I'm exhausted from playing this part, misguided by the values of what's recently been made 'right' distracted completely from the life i want to live. And i don't have a clue which switch ***** it back to normal, or which life i will leave for those which have grown accustomed to this timid version of me... After all people aren't always happy when they say. "...you have changed..."
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Sep 10, 2015
Sep 10, 2015 at 7:30 PM UTC
Fragments self-portrait
*This is what it feels like to be furniture. * Doors open and close. I am here, Silent, eyes open, unmoving Only the steady rise and fall Separates me From the inanimate crap cluttering our house. *This is what it feels like to be furniture. * You see the back of my head I try to keep myself steady I hear you turn around And walk away. You have better things to do Than ask why I’m not speaking to you again. *This is what it feels like to be furniture. * You mention absently that We need new couches, You don’t want to continue trying, And that the toilet needs to be fixed. I can’t be bothered to fight with you, After all, the couch isn't objecting to you throwing it away.
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Dec 17, 2014
Dec 17, 2014 at 9:39 PM UTC
This Is What It Feels Like To Be Furniture
the dark ice cream man floats up and down the empty streets his truck weakly cranking out a warped sounding song that leaves a trail of dogs objecting the truck has the word pestilence painted on it instead of ice cream his dark form hunched over the steering wheel his cheshire grin has aspects of his delirium imprinted on its clean toothy shine he only comes out at three am and glides the cool pavement in search of Delilah's phone number she promised him that she would be his one true and he meant to hold her to it he would do anything to have her all to himself Delilah walks barefoot along the train track with one ear nailed acutely to the train whistle approaching the other ear in her pocket where she hums a **** version of the battle hymn of the republic all good girls love horses and shotgun weddings she wants her shotgun wedding on the saddle with the ice cream mans brother who she thinks is just too nifty to be anything but heavenly she always pictured him with angel wings carrying a sword and riding a pale horse named death there are echoes in the concrete parkland the neatly trimmed grass glistens wetly in the darkness a dew touched tree stands on a narrow hill its leaves thrashed slowly by a whisper of wind the sound of running feet laughter its an illusion she is an illusion i make matchstick men watch them march in precision lines i am a matchstick man watch me scribble in precision lines the ice cream man now sleeping away the humid hot afternoon stashed away in the back of his pestilence truck while Delilah learns how to knit and make candles that ice cream mans brother sells at flea markets we all settle for what we think we want and in the end we all get what we deserve Delilah marries the brother and they live happily while ice cream man spends his mid-life crisis as a politician who leads a double life making ice cream sandwichs out of his basement and i am discovered 'neith the truck making matchstick men out of twigs from the tree of life
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Nov 18, 2013
Nov 18, 2013 at 12:09 AM UTC
matchstick men
the dark ice cream man floats up and down the empty streets his truck weakly cranking out a warped sounding song that leaves a trail of dogs objecting the truck has the word pestilence painted on it instead of ice cream his dark form hunched over the steering wheel his cheshire grin has aspects of his delirium imprinted on its clean toothy shine he only comes out at three am and glides the cool pavement in search of Delilah's phone number she promised him that she would be his one true and he meant to hold her to it he would do anything to have her all to himself Delilah walks barefoot along the train track with one ear nailed acutely to the train whistle approaching the other ear in her pocket where she hums a **** version of the battle hymn of the republic all good girls love horses and shotgun weddings she wants her shotgun wedding on the saddle with the ice cream mans brother who she thinks is just too nifty to be anything but heavenly she always pictured him with angel wings carrying a sword and riding a pale horse named death there are echoes in the concrete parkland the neatly trimmed grass glistens wetly in the darkness a dew touched tree stands on a narrow hill its leaves thrashed slowly by a whisper of wind the sound of running feet laughter its an illusion she is an illusion i make matchstick men watch them march in precision lines i am a matchstick man watch me scribble in precision lines the ice cream man now sleeping away the humid hot afternoon stashed away in the back of his pestilence truck while Delilah learns how to knit and make candles that ice cream mans brother sells at flea markets we all settle for what we think we want and in the end we all get what we deserve Delilah marries the brother and they live happily while ice cream man spends his mid-life crisis as a politician who leads a double life making ice cream sandwichs out of his basement and i am discovered 'neith the truck making matchstick men out of twigs from the tree of life
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protection protecting themselves from a dark projection projecting themselves in a different reflection reflecting their own wish for perfection perfecting themselves for some final inspection inspecting the collection and making a disconnection disconnecting themselves with ever correction correcting the world with their own rejection rejecting reality becomes the infection infecting the world with their own objection objecting to every alternative selection selecting the story of the resurrection
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Dec 13, 2013
Dec 13, 2013 at 4:17 PM UTC
Resurrection Selection - Quantum Loop
When my doctor diagnosed me as a schizophrenic, My mother broke into tears, like it was worse thing anyone Could be, I wanted to tell her to stop, it was starting to feel Too unreal, I have been living in this mind for so long, That I have turned against this world, which Looks at me like I’m a burden to carry, I talk to air Sometimes, it’s not insanity, not everything you can’t see is Insanity, I sometimes see my grandmother, and I tell her I miss her that I’m sorry I wasn’t there when she counted Her last breath, you might feel it to be weird, but it’s not worse Than this guilt gnawing at me, my mind is a canvas painted By thousands of painters, and the pictures here don’t make sense, But art doesn’t need to make sense. I feel like a graveyard sometimes, haunted by the souls That will never leave me, I feel like a morgue sometimes, Walking around with my own corpse, that bleeds sometimes, I am not abnormal or special or weird, I see constellation in people, and I see a ray in you When you smile, my hand stutters objecting to human Touch, and I don’t call out for hugs, but this body could use some Warmth, my imagination doesn’t run ahead, it goes round And round, Living in this body, is like inhabiting with a foe, Which slowly takes over you, and you have no shield, These meds help you sleep dreamless at night, but They won’t protect you, nothing will be here to Clutch on when demons that resides in you arrive, So all you do is crawl on your bed, trying to take As less space as possible, not letting the fear Cover every part of you, you think you’re still here, But you’re not, and thats exactly how it feels like Living in a schizophrenic mind.
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Aug 25, 2015
Aug 25, 2015 at 1:29 PM UTC
Living in a schizophrenic mind
When my doctor diagnosed me as a schizophrenic, My mother broke into tears, like it was worse thing anyone Could be, I wanted to tell her to stop, it was starting to feel Too unreal, I have been living in this mind for so long, That I have turned against this world, which Looks at me like I’m a burden to carry, I talk to air Sometimes, it’s not insanity, not everything you can’t see is Insanity, I sometimes see my grandmother, and I tell her I miss her that I’m sorry I wasn’t there when she counted Her last breath, you might feel it to be weird, but it’s not worse Than this guilt gnawing at me, my mind is a canvas painted By thousands of painters, and the pictures here don’t make sense, But art doesn’t need to make sense. I feel like a graveyard sometimes, haunted by the souls That will never leave me, I feel like a morgue sometimes, Walking around with my own corpse, that bleeds sometimes, I am not abnormal or special or weird, I see constellation in people, and I see a ray in you When you smile, my hand stutters objecting to human Touch, and I don’t call out for hugs, but this body could use some Warmth, my imagination doesn’t run ahead, it goes round And round, Living in this body, is like inhabiting with a foe, Which slowly takes over you, and you have no shield, These meds help you sleep dreamless at night, but They won’t protect you, nothing will be here to Clutch on when demons that resides in you arrive, So all you do is crawl on your bed, trying to take As less space as possible, not letting the fear Cover every part of you, you think you’re still here, But you’re not, and thats exactly how it feels like Living in a schizophrenic mind.
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Rebellious minds wander through enlightenment With new found insight into a deeper understanding An illuminated sense of self - disguised in complexity Stroking our ego's with a persuasive fascination Gutless contrarians thriving off schematic exceptions Objecting to proposals is all that seems formidable Double edged intellect embracing it's own prevarication Claiming supremacy as the better half of the equation One more plagiarized thought to dwell on Re-occurrence of Ideals in plain lucidity Come crawling forth from the genetic sea To stain our mind with a rhetorical monotony Monolithic horizons expanding out of view A facade of a paradise - lost in a new weary age These frail structures collapse and rebuild reclaiming everything that we once had known
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Jun 3, 2013
Jun 3, 2013 at 7:11 PM UTC
Undead Poet
This body is to narrow to start the concrete picturesque poetry As a marvelous bright sparkling spring into the pitch black marvel stone My poems are shallow water running out of time climbing backwards Shanti dances, Shakti watches, I ride the glossy magenta mountain byke Elementally through the potentially ***** city, gulping two little               flying                            spoons                      wwhhpp          mhm                                       of Brilliant        IO Ag                    Helth guarantieed on the nulth spelling positive not Obtrusive politely declined           skipped          suggestive Visually objective little pencil box down bellow                                              friend    _ this is blank ! Absolutely! Absoulutely! A ****** stream of no perservatives no *** Objecting flowery flunder opiates                           Words grow from Barriers between insufficient gestures                  from human Jazzy left ear leaving laments of sounds incapability to stay Endlessly entwined and glued together as your soul loves Tender tactile cats touch on your desperate desert sju++                   Ave Gratias Plena Ava Gardner Avon Avion   My throat is not of a managment made suits suiting suitcases I'm Tired Of Fraternities Or True Females  Always  Ends  Well
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Dec 10, 2015
Dec 10, 2015 at 3:37 PM UTC
Magic You And The One World
This body is to narrow to start the concrete picturesque poetry As a marvelous bright sparkling spring into the pitch black marvel stone My poems are shallow water running out of time climbing backwards Shanti dances, Shakti watches, I ride the glossy magenta mountain byke Elementally through the potentially ***** city, gulping two little               flying                            spoons                      wwhhpp          mhm                                       of Brilliant        IO Ag                    Helth guarantieed on the nulth spelling positive not Obtrusive politely declined           skipped          suggestive Visually objective little pencil box down bellow                                              friend    _ this is blank ! Absolutely! Absoulutely! A ****** stream of no perservatives no *** Objecting flowery flunder opiates                           Words grow from Barriers between insufficient gestures                  from human Jazzy left ear leaving laments of sounds incapability to stay Endlessly entwined and glued together as your soul loves Tender tactile cats touch on your desperate desert sju++                   Ave Gratias Plena Ava Gardner Avon Avion   My throat is not of a managment made suits suiting suitcases I'm Tired Of Fraternities Or True Females  Always  Ends  Well
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You say I love not, ‘cause I do not play Still with your curls, and kiss the time away. You blame me, too, because I can’t devise Some sport to please those babies in your eyes;— By love’s religion, I must here confess it, The most I love, when I the least express it. Small griefs find tongues; full casks are never found To give, if any, yet but little sound. Deep waters noiseless are; and this we know, That chiding streams betray small depth below. So when love speechless is, she doth express A depth in love, and that depth bottomless. Now since my love is tongueless, know me such, Who speak but little, ‘cause I love so much.
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To His Mistress Objecting To Him Neither Toying Nor Talking
Your mother would be proud of you That's what you told me When I asked her, her opinion, she turned and said to me One day he will be jailed, or my four will become three When I pointed out your white lies And each great or small misdeed Objecting, you'd cry, "I'll make "Something" from my misery." I cried, and I tried to tell you before it happened What comes from this foolish pride & You cocked your head, laughing back While spitting in my eyes
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Oct 31, 2023
Oct 31, 2023 at 7:46 PM UTC
Vindicated
I stood on the porch tonight and stared into the heavens The mild darkness and cricket melodies Took me captive and I couldn’t move or think The fingers of a midnight breeze tickled my edges The night was like wine and unlike times before I drank without objecting, without fear Of what it would do to me I should have resisted because before I was aware I hunted for the Infinite, tried to perceive God I attempted to span the universe with a thought But even those twinkles of light are each More massive than imagination And I was left to question the sanity of this creation How do you find a thing your mind can’t define What can my spirit do when its perceptions Are limited to five mortal senses There must be more to life than just existence! And just as my oceans were getting beyond restless The midnight breeze and cricket melodies Beckoned me by name and stilled my waters And in their voices God said to me “Child, when you look for me I will always discover you.”
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Apr 24, 2011
Apr 24, 2011 at 2:26 AM UTC
I Stood on the Porch Tonight
For let the wind whistle, or let the grass shift; let you be malicious or omniscient: upon a flicker of thou brow, you would never be obliterated. My heart was sworn to shackles, chained;now thrashing pained;now objecting tortured;yet silent It was a conquering world: soiled and weary; with one ruler it was ruthless; for LOVE brings upon war, It looked down on all ; love did Alibi-Romeo and Juliet
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Jan 31, 2015
Jan 31, 2015 at 3:34 AM UTC
Might of a Ruler
The desire to live as one pleases Is not based around staying in line Nor is it established through Objecting to all rules you are set. Conforming can lead you to happiness As easily as breaking the rules What fails to be noticed are choices That let you decide how to live
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Jan 19, 2015
Jan 19, 2015 at 12:11 PM UTC
the desire to live as one pleases
I’m all for freedom of speech for everyone Without pardoning you for things you’ve done. Here’s something you don’t get to say to me You don’t get to tell me I may not disagree! You who plan constant genocide and invasion Make pacifists like myself rise to the occasion. We refuse to authorize you buying a warship. You act as if that word is very like worship! Too many scary cowards setting precedences. In your overstuffed, gadget-filled residences. You’re issuing orders to send youths to die. Since you’re not going, why bother to ask why? Some bribe-taking elite snobs in costly suits Tell you to send kids overseas in combat boots. If you rebuke them they bring out the dramatics. Their reason is their bookkeeper’s mathematics. In the USA, we waged war after disastrous war And few of us asked why, and what is it for? We invaded people’s lands and destroyed it And there never was a reason to deploy it An international revenue generating machine ****** thousands on both sides, nice and clean. Then demand we buy coffee, seven bucks a cup, If we think of objecting, you want us to shut up. After all, it’s just one more war, wrapped up to go. What’s a two or three million dead people or so? The point it, there’s a bottom line to adhere to So what it affects or kills someone near you? Don’t be unpatriotic and ***** with fate. Genocide is lucrative and an American trait. Just look what we did to the natives here. Read that story. What we’re doing is clear.
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May 7, 2018
May 7, 2018 at 2:20 PM UTC
A FREE SPEECH
I’m all for freedom of speech for everyone Without pardoning you for things you’ve done. Here’s something you don’t get to say to me You don’t get to tell me I may not disagree! You who plan constant genocide and invasion Make pacifists like myself rise to the occasion. We refuse to authorize you buying a warship. You act as if that word is very like worship! Too many scary cowards setting precedences. In your overstuffed, gadget-filled residences. You’re issuing orders to send youths to die. Since you’re not going, why bother to ask why? Some bribe-taking elite snobs in costly suits Tell you to send kids overseas in combat boots. If you rebuke them they bring out the dramatics. Their reason is their bookkeeper’s mathematics. In the USA, we waged war after disastrous war And few of us asked why, and what is it for? We invaded people’s lands and destroyed it And there never was a reason to deploy it An international revenue generating machine ****** thousands on both sides, nice and clean. Then demand we buy coffee, seven bucks a cup, If we think of objecting, you want us to shut up. After all, it’s just one more war, wrapped up to go. What’s a two or three million dead people or so? The point it, there’s a bottom line to adhere to So what it affects or kills someone near you? Don’t be unpatriotic and ***** with fate. Genocide is lucrative and an American trait. Just look what we did to the natives here. Read that story. What we’re doing is clear.
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I am the flipper Rejection of shots And I don't hurt when I dig deep And I go underground I am 'Good with words' yet words seldom ever seem to fall out Of my flippant mouth I am nothing that I wish to be Borderline rambunctious And my thoughts constantly spill over When I spout in a crowd Flipper is flippantly Objecting Objectify me now I am the silent breather that never sends chills down your spine Yet you wonder if my calling Has gone overtime Flipper speak Flipper be gone Flipper take shelter Flipper don't make a sound Flipper give you best smiles Flipper win all their hearts Flipper give them charisma Flipper keep all your darts Flipper tires from trying now Rusting with time Have I let my guard down Or am I at last Feeling fine? Call it anxiety Call if whatever you wish C'mon call it an excuse Isn't it brilliant to use? Flipper: better or worse? Flipper sets off a fuse Flipper takes over mind Flipper takes over news Hush now stories are dry For you let Flipper in Build your walls up so high Just to keep our your sin Yet Humans do lie Courage comes from within Sometimes it pays to hurt when you let your heart win
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Jan 21, 2015
Jan 21, 2015 at 2:51 AM UTC
Flipper
...and then PETA showed up and wanted to know whether there were sufficient air holes for the lamb to breathe and how the separating of the lamb from its mom went and whether or not the box was organic and free of all chemicals known to cause allergic reactions among lambkind. The prince pulled out his legally concealed pistol and shot the PETA representative. The ACLU, not arguing with the prince's right to carry the legally concealed weapon, but objecting to his failure to alert the PETA representative before shooting him, offered to take on the case of PETA v Prince for free, as long as PETA would agree not to protest the Jack In The Box deliveries that would be a thrice daily occurrence while the ACLU readied itself for trial. The prince, misunderstanding ACLU's motivation and fearing the eventual loss of his right to legally concealed weapons, looked a little harder and deeper at the box and, voila, miracle of miracles, began to see apocalyptic scibblings regarding the fast-approaching war of Armageddon and the importance of a "well-armed militia" in the winning of that unavoidable conflict. Recognizing the chance to shore up the faithful -- and put to shame the rest -- the Christian Coalition adopted the prince's message and gave it more teeth. They stoked the flames of hellfire, added more levels to the depths of hades, and notched up the sufferings to those found guilty by their Lord, the Good Shepherd. The ACLU responded, adding the Christian Coalition to the complaint. The battle lines were drawn. The ACLU and PETA stood on one side and the Christian -Coalition and the NRA stood on the other. People argued and screamed and fought and condemned. Then, a little boy of five, wiser than his years and saddened by the preemption of his favorite cartoons in favor of live coverage of the proceedings noticed something nobody else had. Neither side any longer had a picture of the lamb. So he drew his own.
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Oct 27, 2014
Oct 27, 2014 at 6:11 PM UTC
The Lamb In The Box
...and then PETA showed up and wanted to know whether there were sufficient air holes for the lamb to breathe and how the separating of the lamb from its mom went and whether or not the box was organic and free of all chemicals known to cause allergic reactions among lambkind. The prince pulled out his legally concealed pistol and shot the PETA representative. The ACLU, not arguing with the prince's right to carry the legally concealed weapon, but objecting to his failure to alert the PETA representative before shooting him, offered to take on the case of PETA v Prince for free, as long as PETA would agree not to protest the Jack In The Box deliveries that would be a thrice daily occurrence while the ACLU readied itself for trial. The prince, misunderstanding ACLU's motivation and fearing the eventual loss of his right to legally concealed weapons, looked a little harder and deeper at the box and, voila, miracle of miracles, began to see apocalyptic scibblings regarding the fast-approaching war of Armageddon and the importance of a "well-armed militia" in the winning of that unavoidable conflict. Recognizing the chance to shore up the faithful -- and put to shame the rest -- the Christian Coalition adopted the prince's message and gave it more teeth. They stoked the flames of hellfire, added more levels to the depths of hades, and notched up the sufferings to those found guilty by their Lord, the Good Shepherd. The ACLU responded, adding the Christian Coalition to the complaint. The battle lines were drawn. The ACLU and PETA stood on one side and the Christian -Coalition and the NRA stood on the other. People argued and screamed and fought and condemned. Then, a little boy of five, wiser than his years and saddened by the preemption of his favorite cartoons in favor of live coverage of the proceedings noticed something nobody else had. Neither side any longer had a picture of the lamb. So he drew his own.
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you sing on and on (and on) in the foreground as the meter aches and constricts; with its power, beauty, antipathy searing distances between us, hearing the becomings of null somethings we reunite with the blankness of pristine white passages to break free from inertia I cannot describe my infatuation with a split second the embrace, the longing of wordless writers and their unacknowledged cruelties grieving over all this birthing objecting to their own last words the fresh blood of teething & the prodding of our sores
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Mar 19, 2016
Mar 19, 2016 at 4:36 PM UTC
fires for the pantheon
I have turned into everything I've ever avoided. I danced in the moonlit darkness of my father and soaked in the rays of my mothers tragedy. Vitamin D is only injected into my bloodstream by judging eyes and objecting vocals. I never wanted you to tap dance around my ribcage or fornicate with my insecurity. I never wanted you to feel like my eyes washed over you with judgement day protocol.. I wanted you to be free inside of me so I could take away every fear and instance that makes you feel insane and unchain it from every misinterpretation hung around your neck. I wanted to be the one you could save, so that I could be the one to save you too. My problems are not found in you and somehow I found refuge in my dark tainted past but i'm tired of that being my excuse it's my sad reality but I don't want it. You shouldn't have to break, to fix me. You shouldn't have to melt to fit into the cracks you are so busy avoiding. I have turned into my father, unpredictable and manic. I have turn into my mother, paranoid and problematic. I don't know exactly who I am, but i'm sure this isn't it. I will not be a shining example of the apple that doesn't fall far from the tree. I will not be the *** that calls the kettle black... I am my own destruction but I will rebuild me, because you shouldn't have to.
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Apr 28, 2014
Apr 28, 2014 at 12:25 PM UTC
Occupational Therapy.
We can change history miss Clarke, it is easy, just re-write the lies your historians wrote about the early settlers in New Zealand, which if you had any respect for, it would be called Aotearoa, the official Maori name. Tell the world about your nations attempt to eradicate native Maori and what is written at the base of the Obelisk on One Tree Hill by Sir John Logan Campbell. *Laura Clarke is the British high commissioner to New Zealand <> Campbell, like many European New Zealanders of his generation, had expected that Māori would gradually die out and that an impressive memorial would be a most fitting symbol to perpetuate their memory.[19] By the 1930s this had obviously not happened, and some considered the term "memorial" was inappropriate with many Māori objecting to its use. During construction of the obelisk, a suggestion was made that it should be described as a centennial tower to mark the centennial year of the signing of the Treaty of Waitangi and not a memorial.[19] https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2020/jan/02/heres-why-the-uk-wants-to-strengthen-its-relationship-with-new-zealand-maori Dom Felice Vaggioli The Italian priest who's book on New Zealand was banned by Queen Victoria.
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Jan 2, 2020
Jan 2, 2020 at 3:05 AM UTC
*Laura Clarke
you sing on and on (and on) in the foreground as the meter aches and constricts; with its power, beauty, antipathy searing distances between us, hearing the becomings of null somethings we reunite with the blankness of pristine white passages to break free from inertia I cannot describe my infatuation with a split second the embrace, the longing of wordless writers and their unacknowledged cruelties grieving over all this birthing objecting to their own last words the fresh blood of teething & the prodding of our sores
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Jul 13, 2015
Jul 13, 2015 at 12:08 AM UTC
fires for the pantheon
so done. trying not to let it get to me. but how can it not? "wait", i whisper to myself you have your arms. you have your legs. you have a bit of family left and some friends to match. you're not dying. you're sheltered. you're fed. ....why is it so hard to recognize the good? because the bad is much more overwhelming. it's helping, but not enough. i still want to scream. i still want to cry. i have manifested every single that that has happened to me. i've prayed for it, and it's been completely answered...now for me to only slap God a good one in the face by objecting. what is the matter with me? God, where do i begin? i'm lost. i'm terrified. i'm alone. wandering amongst the dead particles of life we call earth. where do i go? what do i do? continue to breathe, i suppose.
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Jun 4, 2013
Jun 4, 2013 at 5:29 PM UTC
done.
The Art of Criticism The art of criticism Should consist Of accurate, rich language-ism; Gentleness and witticism, Care and love implicit In a simple, clear expression. Love of th’art it’s writing ‘bout, Love, respect inside and out For author, auth’ress, sculptor, sculptress, Painter, paint-ress, instrumentalist and –ess. Poet, poetess whose full respect he/she/they merit. When I read clichés inherent Such as, “Awesome” “Great” and “Wonderful”, Thoughtless, glib and under-worked; When I read “Like”, “Thumbs up, “Thumbs down I frown. This plea from Ms. Poetic Me, Sincere, considered, justified Is plain ol’ objectivity, Objecting to a lazy critic. A good critique Is not a trick Played out in adjectives and verbs. A worthy critic is superb, Does not disturb Because he values art and artist. The Art of Criticism 6.30.2016 Definitely Didactic; Arlene Corwin
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Jun 30, 2016
Jun 30, 2016 at 11:38 AM UTC
The Art of Criticism
His list is long— as he pauses on life and Mount Wellington's shadows shift. Those stealing life's song out of young shoots breathe the longest while his beloved dies young. Scars bleed droplets, not gushing like Cataract Gorge when scratched, or touched afresh; not given space— how he was stung is remembered. He tries to be the sunrise over Bruny Island, but redback spiders imbibe shadows lying dormant assessing risk, ready to strike. Wounds murmur in the Tamar River objecting, having heard it all, wearing down joy's clouded lightness. Rasping scrubwrens warn while falsity sharpens its spike. Flattery's forked tongue is honeyed as leatherwood, but synthetic— He resists its bait, casting it past the Derwent; his skin crawling at false charm. He retains his grounded sense of self. Time doesn't wipe it all clean to heal— it calcifies into chilled stone like Cradle Mountain's fissured misted face with sticks of pine trees burnt while eucalypt gums regenerate, partially blind. His garden grows wild now through rambling cracks as grasses from a cemetery head-piece sport defiant blooms of an unaccepted genus. Memory is a compass pointing due north past Port Arthur's harried walls and Antarctic gales as tales of unfinished lives see, and wait—
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Jan 15, 2025
Jan 15, 2025 at 6:01 AM UTC
On hold...