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"clarification" poems
“Moby ****  Herman Melville <•> ~for the lost at sea~ after a year of saltwater absence and abstinence, return to the island caught between two land forks surrounded by river-heading flows bound for the ocean great joining the Atlantic welcomes the fresh water fools, bringing with them hopefully, but hopeless gifts of obeisances, peace-offerings endeavoring to keep their infinite souls sea accepts them then drowns the warm newcomers in the unaccustomed deep cold salinity, which sometimes erodes sometimes preserving their former freshwater cold originality I’m called to depart my beach shoreline  unarmed, no kayak, sunfish or glass bottomed boat needed, walk on water and my toes, ten eyes to see the bottom, no depth perception limitation, reading the floor’s topography, millions of minion’s stories infinite, many Munch screaming god’s foot, heavy upon my shoulders, a daytime travel guide, hired for me, not a friendly travel companion,  nope, God a pusher showing off a drug called deep water salvation, designated for the masses, can handle large parties my in-camera brain  eyes, record everything for playback - the lost and unburied, bone crossword puzzles walk shore to ship, on soles to souls, is this my new-summer nature welcome back greeting? puzzled at the awesomeness of vastness, conclude this clarification for me of the occluded-deep, is a stern reminder of my insignificant existence, my requirement to walk humbly, spare my sin of vanity, and forgive my trespasses upon the lives of others perhaps then the infinite of my soul perchance restored, older visions clarified and future poems will write themselves and sea to it my predecessors be better remembered Memorial Day 2018
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May 28, 2018
May 28, 2018 at 11:53 AM UTC
“the sea... jeeringly...drowned the infinite of his soul...to wondrous depths...he saw God’s foot upon the treadle of the loom and spake it”
“Moby ****  Herman Melville <•> ~for the lost at sea~ after a year of saltwater absence and abstinence, return to the island caught between two land forks surrounded by river-heading flows bound for the ocean great joining the Atlantic welcomes the fresh water fools, bringing with them hopefully, but hopeless gifts of obeisances, peace-offerings endeavoring to keep their infinite souls sea accepts them then drowns the warm newcomers in the unaccustomed deep cold salinity, which sometimes erodes sometimes preserving their former freshwater cold originality I’m called to depart my beach shoreline  unarmed, no kayak, sunfish or glass bottomed boat needed, walk on water and my toes, ten eyes to see the bottom, no depth perception limitation, reading the floor’s topography, millions of minion’s stories infinite, many Munch screaming god’s foot, heavy upon my shoulders, a daytime travel guide, hired for me, not a friendly travel companion,  nope, God a pusher showing off a drug called deep water salvation, designated for the masses, can handle large parties my in-camera brain  eyes, record everything for playback - the lost and unburied, bone crossword puzzles walk shore to ship, on soles to souls, is this my new-summer nature welcome back greeting? puzzled at the awesomeness of vastness, conclude this clarification for me of the occluded-deep, is a stern reminder of my insignificant existence, my requirement to walk humbly, spare my sin of vanity, and forgive my trespasses upon the lives of others perhaps then the infinite of my soul perchance restored, older visions clarified and future poems will write themselves and sea to it my predecessors be better remembered Memorial Day 2018
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is Corrie ten Boom´s Favorite Quote. The Master Weaver’s Plan My life is but a weaving Between the Lord and me; I may not choose the colors– He knows what they should be. For He can view the pattern Upon the upper side While I can see it only On this, the underside. Sometimes He weaves in sorrow, Which seems so strange to me; But I will trust His judgment And work on faithfully. ‘Tis He who fills the shuttle, And He knows what is best; So I shall weave in earnest, And leave to Him the rest. Not ’til the loom is silent And the shuttles cease to fly Shall God unroll the canvas And explain the reason why. The dark threads are as needed In the Weaver’s skillful hand As the threads of gold and silver In the pattern, He has planned. by AUTHOR UNKNOWN Based upon research, have discovered that more than one person has been credited with authorship of this poem. For now, have decided to list it as “author unknown” until there is further clarification. Corrie ten Boom. These words said Corrie ten Boom, the author of many many books. I feel honored and humbled that I may show you this poem she constantly presented in her life as a token of love to God and let you know about her. As Corrie ten Boom said the true author of this poem is still unknown. I am only the one who gives through. with love, Sylvia Frances Chan Wednesday, 20 December 2017
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Dec 20, 2017
Dec 20, 2017 at 10:16 PM UTC
The Master Weaver’s Plan
your deep brown eyes stare back into mine you can read my mind you know exactly what i think there is no need for clarification or confirmation i know that this is love it is a strange thing it is an invisible string pulling me ever closer to you
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May 26, 2014
May 26, 2014 at 10:40 AM UTC
attraction
people **** people with nothing but fingers and hair and their very heavy breath. their breath like a crow beak before crucifixes of straw. like a tightening banishment of a lung. remember when we would blow it onto our car window and create that consistent mirth of fog to begin in? the bodies riddled with bullets that flank the highway are no such thing. the schoolchildren lying face down in the corner of the closet are no such thing. they are just winter coats with schoolchildren to fill them for the time being. no amputation of what’s mine will aid them into the grave. no mass communication grief. so why would you call it a mass grave when in truth it was just a pit i dug to fill with crowds of people who died under the pretense that they had previously done so, that nothing was new under the sun. and when people **** people like people do with their instruments as ways of extending themselves into the world and into the marrow of our body obliterating organs of people with their stretching of the muscular rib, shoulder. one eye closes firmly. it’s nothing but a hand gun as if to say a hand eats the gun and makes it whole. as if to say the reinforced metal door exit plan for people who are being killed by other people clicked shut and locked 15,000 years ago and i can’t quit slamming what’s left of me into it. your kid is very dead. but then again so is mine. suppose they killed each other. suppose they both made the mistake of dragging their small, stupid bodies through the trajectory of another body in the first place. in the chip aisle of a gas station maybe. in theaters this christmas. in the midst of a good song that began playing on the lobby radio just a minute before, oh yeah before, things really got going. i saw people killing people on television the other day with their whole bodies, devouring themselves like surgical gloves slick with oiled consumption and bleeding out and i could do nothing. some kids died just because and they told me so and i was told nothing could ever help them because they were just people and they were dying. “breaking news” ended up just being people again. in those moments, i was eating breakfast. our houses were very quiet and needed me in all of them, grandfather clock over CNN, clarifying what has already been committed and committed again. the cipher was others lost blood.
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Dec 9, 2019
Dec 9, 2019 at 12:24 AM UTC
clarification
people **** people with nothing but fingers and hair and their very heavy breath. their breath like a crow beak before crucifixes of straw. like a tightening banishment of a lung. remember when we would blow it onto our car window and create that consistent mirth of fog to begin in? the bodies riddled with bullets that flank the highway are no such thing. the schoolchildren lying face down in the corner of the closet are no such thing. they are just winter coats with schoolchildren to fill them for the time being. no amputation of what’s mine will aid them into the grave. no mass communication grief. so why would you call it a mass grave when in truth it was just a pit i dug to fill with crowds of people who died under the pretense that they had previously done so, that nothing was new under the sun. and when people **** people like people do with their instruments as ways of extending themselves into the world and into the marrow of our body obliterating organs of people with their stretching of the muscular rib, shoulder. one eye closes firmly. it’s nothing but a hand gun as if to say a hand eats the gun and makes it whole. as if to say the reinforced metal door exit plan for people who are being killed by other people clicked shut and locked 15,000 years ago and i can’t quit slamming what’s left of me into it. your kid is very dead. but then again so is mine. suppose they killed each other. suppose they both made the mistake of dragging their small, stupid bodies through the trajectory of another body in the first place. in the chip aisle of a gas station maybe. in theaters this christmas. in the midst of a good song that began playing on the lobby radio just a minute before, oh yeah before, things really got going. i saw people killing people on television the other day with their whole bodies, devouring themselves like surgical gloves slick with oiled consumption and bleeding out and i could do nothing. some kids died just because and they told me so and i was told nothing could ever help them because they were just people and they were dying. “breaking news” ended up just being people again. in those moments, i was eating breakfast. our houses were very quiet and needed me in all of them, grandfather clock over CNN, clarifying what has already been committed and committed again. the cipher was others lost blood.
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Perfection Is constant. It’s everywhere And in everything. But our perception of it is not. For us, Perfection is fleeting. It comes in small doses Like a shot of tequila. It shocks on impact Then warms from within. Perfection lingers For as long as the good feeling stays. The problem? We know that shortly The liquor will wear off And the world will again be ***** Smelly Ugly Imperfect. But you… You stay. You stay past the buzz Past the next-morning feeling Past the hangover Past the fog. You’re still here. You’re still perfect. Because what people don’t get is that since nothing is perfect, Everything Is perfect. Perfection isn’t a shot of tequila But a long Tall Drink Of water. Perfection is a breath of fresh air, Or maybe even stagnant, Because perfection Is everywhere. Perfection is that tree over here That lake over there The crazy blue streak In that girl’s light brown hair. Perfection Is constant. It’s the waves crashing The river flowing The clock ticking away every moment we spend together, Glowing. Perfection Is your mother telling you it’s time to come home. My father telling me to hang up the phone. Your best friend taking a year long vacation My history suddenly obtaining clarification. Perfection is learning From stupid mistakes. Perfection is holding hands Through all the heartaches. Perfection is black rivers flowing down your gorgeous perfect face And perfection is knowing there’s nothing we can’t shake. Because perfection is there In every code-name fight And perfection is there Through every sleepless night. Perfection is present On the drives along winding lanes And perfection is present When we hide from cars in vain. Perfection is you And perfection is me Because through all our flaws We’re as perfect as perfect can be. Yet the world still doesn’t understand that Nothing is perfection So perfection Is everything.
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May 4, 2016
May 4, 2016 at 10:22 PM UTC
Perception
Perfection Is constant. It’s everywhere And in everything. But our perception of it is not. For us, Perfection is fleeting. It comes in small doses Like a shot of tequila. It shocks on impact Then warms from within. Perfection lingers For as long as the good feeling stays. The problem? We know that shortly The liquor will wear off And the world will again be ***** Smelly Ugly Imperfect. But you… You stay. You stay past the buzz Past the next-morning feeling Past the hangover Past the fog. You’re still here. You’re still perfect. Because what people don’t get is that since nothing is perfect, Everything Is perfect. Perfection isn’t a shot of tequila But a long Tall Drink Of water. Perfection is a breath of fresh air, Or maybe even stagnant, Because perfection Is everywhere. Perfection is that tree over here That lake over there The crazy blue streak In that girl’s light brown hair. Perfection Is constant. It’s the waves crashing The river flowing The clock ticking away every moment we spend together, Glowing. Perfection Is your mother telling you it’s time to come home. My father telling me to hang up the phone. Your best friend taking a year long vacation My history suddenly obtaining clarification. Perfection is learning From stupid mistakes. Perfection is holding hands Through all the heartaches. Perfection is black rivers flowing down your gorgeous perfect face And perfection is knowing there’s nothing we can’t shake. Because perfection is there In every code-name fight And perfection is there Through every sleepless night. Perfection is present On the drives along winding lanes And perfection is present When we hide from cars in vain. Perfection is you And perfection is me Because through all our flaws We’re as perfect as perfect can be. Yet the world still doesn’t understand that Nothing is perfection So perfection Is everything.
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Sequacious demonstrative mongrel fantastication Overt fantasias and monstrance clarification Rhetorical rote of empirical justification Whimsical enervations elicit ramification Incite legendary fables of rectification Tempestuous mendacious erudite personifications Endemic epistemological semantics of edification Evocative illuminism engenders mortification Judicious spontaneous phantasms of gratification Numinous salutatory statutes of ratification Heuristic existentializing empiricisms alleviate confusion Adamant machismo machinations eliminate delusion Eulogizing enigma entity’s illustrious illusion Torridly allusive revelries of reverie effusion Educing morose maniacal moribundity’s inclusion Epitomizing empathetic revulsions to corroborate elusion Probitous erudite solicitations evade contusion Raunchy riotous accoutrements appreciate exclusion Optimizing subjunctively torpid recalcitrant collusion Scenario syntactics of mythically epic allusion
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Jan 13, 2013
Jan 13, 2013 at 9:23 PM UTC
Dream Divination
Please forgive my hesitation at instigation of flirtation. Did I ensure my elimination? My romantic assassination? I'll gladly partake in any placation, for any chance of indoctrination to the centralization of your concentration. An operation of admiration. A correlation of inflammation. Your gravitation brings animation, exclamation and elongation. My specialization is duration. Not to hint at a connotation, but I feel a certain ********** by an obligation to a certain destination where your presentation gives me restoration. Petrification? Total mind evacuation? Would clarification bring fascination? Stimulation! Salivation! Gratification! Insinuation of fornication? A simple salutation to syncopation. Would a single bright carnation be enough of a motivation, for a two way relocation? Would poetic recitation be sufficient lubrication for collaboration? A consolidation? Or an exacerbation of isolation? Please hold no reservation, I've only got one aspiration. To achieve a higher elevation; by means of inhalation, or a certain recreation involving a bit of perspiration along with physical communication. Does this seem such a bad situation? Or are you ready for pure elation?
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Feb 18, 2010
Feb 18, 2010 at 12:56 PM UTC
**** Sophia
I am not a writer. I am not good with words, I cannot speak up for myself, It is my pen that bleed words. No amount of convincing can give me conviction. No amount of clarification can make that distinction. Please refrain from using titles. I am not a writer. I am just a dreamer, Dreaming dreams of inverted galaxies Where complexities are reduced to simplicity, And maybe love wouldn't be so complicated. I dream of a world where I'll be unchained and liberated, Because currently freedom is hard to go by. I am not a writer. I am just another over thinker, I stay up all night disassembling the world, So I can put it back together. Adding new features that I think will make it better I get lost in thoughts, and day-mares, fantasies and others, I obsess and I always suffer. I am not a writer. Though sometimes I am photographer, Snapping, Close ups and selfies of my terrible mind. Giving glints of places you won't usually find, All because I write sometimes.
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Jun 21, 2014
Jun 21, 2014 at 2:15 AM UTC
I am not a writer
I have new pronouns! But first this poem doesnt rhyme. I'm not sure if this is even a poem. More of my...coming out. A clarification of sorts. At birth, the doctor said, "It's a girl!" Well, whoever stared into my mother's ****** looked at mine, and determined my sex/gender for me... **** Wrong. Errrrrnn. (Those were buzzer sounds.) My name is not Madison. And though I am the proud owner of a ****** I am not a female. My pronouns are not she/her. My name is Ty. Short for Tyrus. I am the proud owner of a ****** And I have not one, not 3 but 2 pronouns. He/him. And/or They/them. Either one of those is fine. To be honest really don't mind. I just ask that you stay away from she/her. :) Thank you for following this "thing" to this point. And thank you for using correct pronouns! Please read the bottom thing:
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Aug 11, 2018
Aug 11, 2018 at 11:50 PM UTC
the power of pronouns and how stubborn he/she/they can be
I’ve summed up the equation for my isolation It's People who look up, look down, left and right Desperate for information We never looked inside for much needed inspiration Instead, We lead a life of impulsive behavior mixed with preoccupation for our own reputation I've lost toleration for the weak minded population Individual thoughts slowly decay and eventually cut off circulation Sending thoughts on permanent vacation, worthy of respiration, ideas now suffer suffocation If this is my "generation" I’d rather live in hibernation You can take this as retaliation I just don’t understand why we seek gratification for having no imagination? I swear, It’s like the world around me is nothing more Than telecommunication Different voices yet the same conversation Broad interpretation leaves room for destructive ********** Shedding uniqueness for trendy consolidation **Who the **** do you think you are? a star?** You're no constellation You expel no illumination Your personality is a narrow cultivation of Seedy corporation, Media publication, And lack of moral stabilization Let me give you clarification Meditation is my detonation Put words in your mouth before you die of starvation We all have a fixation on giving into temptation Putting ourselves in situations were Passion is stimulation, Trust is manipulation and Love is *********** Pour out your heartache in perspiration After *********** we expect a standing ovation *** is nothing more than sensation* ....are we lost beyond the point of navigation?
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Nov 28, 2011
Nov 28, 2011 at 12:35 AM UTC
Meditation is My Detonation
I’ve summed up the equation for my isolation It's People who look up, look down, left and right Desperate for information We never looked inside for much needed inspiration Instead, We lead a life of impulsive behavior mixed with preoccupation for our own reputation I've lost toleration for the weak minded population Individual thoughts slowly decay and eventually cut off circulation Sending thoughts on permanent vacation, worthy of respiration, ideas now suffer suffocation If this is my "generation" I’d rather live in hibernation You can take this as retaliation I just don’t understand why we seek gratification for having no imagination? I swear, It’s like the world around me is nothing more Than telecommunication Different voices yet the same conversation Broad interpretation leaves room for destructive ********** Shedding uniqueness for trendy consolidation **Who the **** do you think you are? a star?** You're no constellation You expel no illumination Your personality is a narrow cultivation of Seedy corporation, Media publication, And lack of moral stabilization Let me give you clarification Meditation is my detonation Put words in your mouth before you die of starvation We all have a fixation on giving into temptation Putting ourselves in situations were Passion is stimulation, Trust is manipulation and Love is *********** Pour out your heartache in perspiration After *********** we expect a standing ovation *** is nothing more than sensation* ....are we lost beyond the point of navigation?
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Everything has a connection, for it continues with a punctuation, as you wish for some clarification, end up with water, that underwent dehydration, that thinks of the beautification, you lose time that has division, you want to go on a integration, but end up with encapsulation.
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Nov 25, 2015
Nov 25, 2015 at 7:50 AM UTC
Indian Engineer
I am circumcised, therefore, I enunciate... circumcised: to purify spiritually On the eighth day, from my nativity, circumcised, as is the custom of my wandering tribe. marked thusly, perma-identity carded, thusly begins the path, a pink-bricked road this one, not to the Mighty Oz, no phony curtain pulled aside, where anyone goes to get spiritual purification for a price Ah, you suspected something else, something explicit, not me~style, give you honey, road provisions, come along for the observing his clickety clackty clock Ready? For where we venture there is only one exit, And you are so not ready - I am who I am and I am not ready too... every line an enunciation, every stanza an annunciation, Angel Gabriel, a solo duo, unlike Beyoncé and Jesus we be on our way to any kind of purity, poetry can buy who knows what awaits us, could be catholic, universal, even the uncircumcised get a chance to enunciate. let me offer a clarification. proclamations and sensations, conditions and exploitations, brown eyed girls, and surfer boys, functions and malfunctions too, abbreviations or adjudications, conjugations in the congregation, exhumation, the final excommunication, I shun none, I enunciate this: false starts and junction boxes, too many so so tired, when can I lay down my shovel and cease the decreasing deceasing of the body this day nears complete, and soon to eat the last meal, and still I ask when can I lay down my shovel, when will purity be mine, my spirit's circumstances repeat the commercial, I am circumcised, therefore, I enunciate... forgive my abstrusion, my metaphors always offer perfect laxity, choose the interpretation that pleases most and my drift is toward the end of days, when will my brow be a motif of anointment and crowning head birth? This is my Enunciation. I cannot yet lay down the shovel, and this writ is as of yet, still uncircumcised - completely incomplete, it will be finished when the spirit says you are the purity, the trinity of two hands holding two others holding two others holding two others and the chain is perfect because it is broken perfectly, a forever repetitive respective handle with care process Forgive my visionary words that give little clarity, so summary due you, This is my Pronoun citation I am I am circumcised, therefore, I enunciate on my way to the purity of spirit.
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Jan 30, 2014
Jan 30, 2014 at 9:19 PM UTC
I am circumcised, therefore, I enunciate...
I am circumcised, therefore, I enunciate... circumcised: to purify spiritually On the eighth day, from my nativity, circumcised, as is the custom of my wandering tribe. marked thusly, perma-identity carded, thusly begins the path, a pink-bricked road this one, not to the Mighty Oz, no phony curtain pulled aside, where anyone goes to get spiritual purification for a price Ah, you suspected something else, something explicit, not me~style, give you honey, road provisions, come along for the observing his clickety clackty clock Ready? For where we venture there is only one exit, And you are so not ready - I am who I am and I am not ready too... every line an enunciation, every stanza an annunciation, Angel Gabriel, a solo duo, unlike Beyoncé and Jesus we be on our way to any kind of purity, poetry can buy who knows what awaits us, could be catholic, universal, even the uncircumcised get a chance to enunciate. let me offer a clarification. proclamations and sensations, conditions and exploitations, brown eyed girls, and surfer boys, functions and malfunctions too, abbreviations or adjudications, conjugations in the congregation, exhumation, the final excommunication, I shun none, I enunciate this: false starts and junction boxes, too many so so tired, when can I lay down my shovel and cease the decreasing deceasing of the body this day nears complete, and soon to eat the last meal, and still I ask when can I lay down my shovel, when will purity be mine, my spirit's circumstances repeat the commercial, I am circumcised, therefore, I enunciate... forgive my abstrusion, my metaphors always offer perfect laxity, choose the interpretation that pleases most and my drift is toward the end of days, when will my brow be a motif of anointment and crowning head birth? This is my Enunciation. I cannot yet lay down the shovel, and this writ is as of yet, still uncircumcised - completely incomplete, it will be finished when the spirit says you are the purity, the trinity of two hands holding two others holding two others holding two others and the chain is perfect because it is broken perfectly, a forever repetitive respective handle with care process Forgive my visionary words that give little clarity, so summary due you, This is my Pronoun citation I am I am circumcised, therefore, I enunciate on my way to the purity of spirit.
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obviously to think and enjoy it you have to turn your mind into a mollusc in an oyster shell, slow... slow... (yawn)... slower... then you suddenly get electrocuted! boom! now you're thinking, you're not as tense as a running cheetah, hard rock heart muscle, not too eager on karaoke of karate, you're the tortoise outrunning achilles; because the brain enables such functioning, it's not exactly an eager heart in the university of the body - and why is it that domestic life has completely succumbed to the gratifications of chemistry with toothpaste and bleach and other cleaning materials; i wouldn't be against doping athletes, i'd tell them to embrace it... let's synthesise another world record sprint in the olympics, because an analysis would mean talking about 9.58 / 9.51... and that would be as interesting as looking at the rosetta stone for clarification of ancient egyptian: owl, big fish, little fish carbohydrates boxed; and still a flea could outrun you, a flea, yeah, never mind the cheetah.
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Mar 25, 2016
Mar 25, 2016 at 5:46 AM UTC
big fish, little fish, cardboard box (kevin & perry)
Fading chorus to a sing-along rapture a laugh of clarification a hasty placement of hands and knees, dovetailed yes, those eyes ~ still lit and power-surged but give her a moment (...) for all the sudden it tickles
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May 30, 2022
May 30, 2022 at 7:58 PM UTC
Lost in Parenthesis
What is the point in Poignancy? *Fragment, you tell me. Another one in paragraph three.* What do words matter? I have spelled love with Lilacs instead of an “L” I have drawn the curve of my “O” with the chill of a Sweeping breeze. A “V” can only appear as the violet of a sparkling sky, or I will be unable to read it, and every “E” will amount to nothing more than emptiness if the voice it has been given does not epitomize song. *Comma-splice, Replace it with a semicolon.* I am trying live freely. I want to breathe in color, to inhale an orange Savannah sky And exhale green which shows through the translucent dew of grass. *Unnecessary use of description. Limit it, Lidiah. Limit it.* My fingers itch with the ferocity of A vengeful army. They are waiting to trample pages with The lead of my pencil, the bayonet of a Revolutionary-War-era rifle. The word limit sounds like tragedy. A single word that can somehow act as a precursor, To the death of passion. Your words have put you in a box. People always say “Actions speak louder than words.” In a way that is true. But I also know it to be a tremendous piece of fiction. *Lidiah, Please watch your run-ons.* Why can our words and our actions not be the same thing? Isn’t the act of speaking, the act of raising your voice, the act of being heard, isn’t that an action? *Lidiah, how many times do I have to remind you? Clarification throughout.* Why have we decided that our words Mean nothing more than stepping stones on the road to action? When did we decide that our voices which rise like clarion calls, forever instilling our promises, are to be left on silent? Precious jewels set into rings. Poison in a water tank. *Lidiah, what you say is irrelevant if your MLA bibliography isn’t in alphabetical order.* Our words are our actions. They mean the same. Words are the distinctions of our beliefs Illustrations of our personas They are not mosquitos to be slapped away and forgotten. *Lidiah, paragraph five is too long. Stop rambling. Be concise.* Please tell me, what is the point of being concise? *Lidiah, stop rambling.* Why do we let justification equate to useless rambling? *Lidiah, you have to detach yourself from the narrative.* Feelings mean more than a couple of sentences. More than a good or a bad. A mad or a sad. Comma-splice What about ferocity? Never end with a preposition. What about passion? Replace this with a conjunctive adverb. What about the discernable strife that follows even indifference? What about that? *Lidiah, what is the point of Poignancy?* What are we without it? What does the human soul matter if we have forsaken the parts of ourselves that remind us of what a soul is for? *Lidiah, you will never be heard if you do not learn to follow the rules*.
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Mar 4, 2018
Mar 4, 2018 at 1:04 AM UTC
The Point of Poignancy
What is the point in Poignancy? *Fragment, you tell me. Another one in paragraph three.* What do words matter? I have spelled love with Lilacs instead of an “L” I have drawn the curve of my “O” with the chill of a Sweeping breeze. A “V” can only appear as the violet of a sparkling sky, or I will be unable to read it, and every “E” will amount to nothing more than emptiness if the voice it has been given does not epitomize song. *Comma-splice, Replace it with a semicolon.* I am trying live freely. I want to breathe in color, to inhale an orange Savannah sky And exhale green which shows through the translucent dew of grass. *Unnecessary use of description. Limit it, Lidiah. Limit it.* My fingers itch with the ferocity of A vengeful army. They are waiting to trample pages with The lead of my pencil, the bayonet of a Revolutionary-War-era rifle. The word limit sounds like tragedy. A single word that can somehow act as a precursor, To the death of passion. Your words have put you in a box. People always say “Actions speak louder than words.” In a way that is true. But I also know it to be a tremendous piece of fiction. *Lidiah, Please watch your run-ons.* Why can our words and our actions not be the same thing? Isn’t the act of speaking, the act of raising your voice, the act of being heard, isn’t that an action? *Lidiah, how many times do I have to remind you? Clarification throughout.* Why have we decided that our words Mean nothing more than stepping stones on the road to action? When did we decide that our voices which rise like clarion calls, forever instilling our promises, are to be left on silent? Precious jewels set into rings. Poison in a water tank. *Lidiah, what you say is irrelevant if your MLA bibliography isn’t in alphabetical order.* Our words are our actions. They mean the same. Words are the distinctions of our beliefs Illustrations of our personas They are not mosquitos to be slapped away and forgotten. *Lidiah, paragraph five is too long. Stop rambling. Be concise.* Please tell me, what is the point of being concise? *Lidiah, stop rambling.* Why do we let justification equate to useless rambling? *Lidiah, you have to detach yourself from the narrative.* Feelings mean more than a couple of sentences. More than a good or a bad. A mad or a sad. Comma-splice What about ferocity? Never end with a preposition. What about passion? Replace this with a conjunctive adverb. What about the discernable strife that follows even indifference? What about that? *Lidiah, what is the point of Poignancy?* What are we without it? What does the human soul matter if we have forsaken the parts of ourselves that remind us of what a soul is for? *Lidiah, you will never be heard if you do not learn to follow the rules*.
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We sit in silence, backs crooked, the couches' cushions caving in. The weight of passing hours and minuettes alleviating thinking in a miscellaneous metronome ticking to bring time to a heaving chest. Stay calm, the pain of realignment will pass. Burdensome they may be, burgeoning wings will free you of... Pressure collapsing this cage, walls torn from studs, leaving only this skeleton surrounding us as we find delirium the backbone of convulsing lungs watched, earthquake mute laughter marring the faces with jagged faults. The cost of cracking, we must accept the scarring permanent. Breaks unplanned infirmities, alone, our time line disrupted itself and the heavens came, tumbling down. In silence, we lay, arms barring our escaping words. Eyes overstep boundaries, slipping through the gaps, a second moment of clarification fractures restraints whilst beguiling brainstorms sparked our interest. Our tongues meet, shyly. rubies placed upon your breath slipping against molded clay. In sapphires you and I hold nighttime reflections of passion contained in coal, waiting. Ivory runs my length, bending to ecstasy, breathing shallow, asynchronous, failing to find it's end in persistence. In night the danger dropped us, longing that dusty light beaming down on the show, Act 2 is the comedy. Off. Parallel parabola line diamond reflections, allow for recall with brushed fingertips, horse hair undertones realigning smiles, abstract the paintings of today, of yesterday, stealing away tomorrow in a previous reiteration of our variant indifference. The wings of the demon opened in symbolic solace, fell far across this burning emotional harbor, aflame in angels' suicides. We've fallen, taken knees to grace, whispering eulogies the waves applaud. Sands wash away to cupped stone palms, caressing the troubled banks lost in time. The blood washes away, momentary marks, brown, stained, it passes. Demons foreshadow. In their shade we are seen falling into broken arms, sinew stitched through hearts, still healing strength gives way. Our tongues meet shyly, this reunion a mistake, now locked, staying stilled while attempting apologetic phrasing. We sit in silence, backs crooked, blank walls and barren recounts crashing in.
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Aug 19, 2012
Aug 19, 2012 at 2:32 AM UTC
Silence Crashing In
We sit in silence, backs crooked, the couches' cushions caving in. The weight of passing hours and minuettes alleviating thinking in a miscellaneous metronome ticking to bring time to a heaving chest. Stay calm, the pain of realignment will pass. Burdensome they may be, burgeoning wings will free you of... Pressure collapsing this cage, walls torn from studs, leaving only this skeleton surrounding us as we find delirium the backbone of convulsing lungs watched, earthquake mute laughter marring the faces with jagged faults. The cost of cracking, we must accept the scarring permanent. Breaks unplanned infirmities, alone, our time line disrupted itself and the heavens came, tumbling down. In silence, we lay, arms barring our escaping words. Eyes overstep boundaries, slipping through the gaps, a second moment of clarification fractures restraints whilst beguiling brainstorms sparked our interest. Our tongues meet, shyly. rubies placed upon your breath slipping against molded clay. In sapphires you and I hold nighttime reflections of passion contained in coal, waiting. Ivory runs my length, bending to ecstasy, breathing shallow, asynchronous, failing to find it's end in persistence. In night the danger dropped us, longing that dusty light beaming down on the show, Act 2 is the comedy. Off. Parallel parabola line diamond reflections, allow for recall with brushed fingertips, horse hair undertones realigning smiles, abstract the paintings of today, of yesterday, stealing away tomorrow in a previous reiteration of our variant indifference. The wings of the demon opened in symbolic solace, fell far across this burning emotional harbor, aflame in angels' suicides. We've fallen, taken knees to grace, whispering eulogies the waves applaud. Sands wash away to cupped stone palms, caressing the troubled banks lost in time. The blood washes away, momentary marks, brown, stained, it passes. Demons foreshadow. In their shade we are seen falling into broken arms, sinew stitched through hearts, still healing strength gives way. Our tongues meet shyly, this reunion a mistake, now locked, staying stilled while attempting apologetic phrasing. We sit in silence, backs crooked, blank walls and barren recounts crashing in.
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*for R.A. our northern friend* ~ one foot in two countries, she is enjambment symbolic, running a single stanza without a syntactical break, by standing simultaneous in two neighboring cultures causing her dear readers from near and far, some, like me, from across the borderline, considerable multifarious symptoms of well considered verbal confusion this, a gifted special talent from she who straddles   all kinds of borders that divide her and unite her, that can be understood/revealed tho, when observing the northernmost night skies eh? expert in modulating extreme snowed under bay winterized temperatures, counterpointed by drivingopen highways on summer plains where the dotted line is all there is to see for miles, thousandths wide she-poet oft goes quiet, expelling her breath between word roarings, gentlest of periodic verbal sweets genteel my word version for her gentle so, in a way that makes gentility deserve the nobility inherent that is the work word that always comes first when we need to place her, another star in the night flying frying firmament enjambment - her word means I am all in, with both hands, resting on both jambs of an arched window that she architects, peering in, Making Sure, I have come to the right place where she-poet builds skylights of northern lights, igniting adore her sweet confusion, but better yet, her poems of clarification that explain all in, why when, we all look up, thru her window exquisite that she meant for us we always first turn our glacé glance northwards strangely, seeking, illogically, but not really, warmth in the she-poets northern way
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Apr 12, 2015
Apr 12, 2015 at 8:00 AM UTC
She-Poet: The Northern Way (enjambment)
*for R.A. our northern friend* ~ one foot in two countries, she is enjambment symbolic, running a single stanza without a syntactical break, by standing simultaneous in two neighboring cultures causing her dear readers from near and far, some, like me, from across the borderline, considerable multifarious symptoms of well considered verbal confusion this, a gifted special talent from she who straddles   all kinds of borders that divide her and unite her, that can be understood/revealed tho, when observing the northernmost night skies eh? expert in modulating extreme snowed under bay winterized temperatures, counterpointed by drivingopen highways on summer plains where the dotted line is all there is to see for miles, thousandths wide she-poet oft goes quiet, expelling her breath between word roarings, gentlest of periodic verbal sweets genteel my word version for her gentle so, in a way that makes gentility deserve the nobility inherent that is the work word that always comes first when we need to place her, another star in the night flying frying firmament enjambment - her word means I am all in, with both hands, resting on both jambs of an arched window that she architects, peering in, Making Sure, I have come to the right place where she-poet builds skylights of northern lights, igniting adore her sweet confusion, but better yet, her poems of clarification that explain all in, why when, we all look up, thru her window exquisite that she meant for us we always first turn our glacé glance northwards strangely, seeking, illogically, but not really, warmth in the she-poets northern way
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Validation I am so grateful for she has contacted me, almost as if it was fated to be, she has told me everything that I needed to know, She sure has a light in her as bright as the snow, it's nice to know she's honest, that side has shown, Now I know how he really feels, and I just know, that it must be real, I no longer feel sad, for I am so glad... Clarification came upon the exaggerations, and now I have reached complete validation. By Larna Kira Kourtis Aged 14 ~Peace~ By Larna Kira Kourtis AKA LkSkyFlyRose © 2014 LkSkyFlyRose (All rights reserved)
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Nov 23, 2014
Nov 23, 2014 at 5:54 PM UTC
Validation
Ah yes, fresh starts, like fresh white sheets meeting fresh black newspapers, doomed to the inevitability, groomed for the probability, that their intersection will be newsprint contamination, a black and white condemnation,   So, a clarification: this poem, just like this moment, a black and white surrogation, a seventh day progeny a sabbath moment, must and will and by definition, be explained as an interlocutory.^ fated to be jubilee ended, a pre and post sabbatical of but a minute, by law and custom, destined to go up in a smoking trinity of white flame, red wine, and a cloud of myrrh and salt incense.   Sigh with me. Join in and inhabit my eyes, enjoy the unsullied white blanket of fresh snow that humanizes my insights, and for this moment, share my peace, my unedged relief that the levees have broken and I am awash in waves of drifted snowflakes composed of salt sanctified water I may be thin and clarified,                   but my visions are still less than limitless, my sabbath poems are but momentary evaporated residuals of melted snowflakes, heretofore, salty tears, that become rivers that become oceans, upon which no Poet-Envisionary can truly walk, see his tomorrows, or even, especially even, his past days, with perfect clarity
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Nov 16, 2013
Nov 16, 2013 at 10:01 AM UTC
Fresh Starts, A Clarification
I need to write a slam what about about people about places about money about faces I am a human being not to be judged about my creativity judged on my productivity Not an object I will not be contained by letters on a page A page written by people who don’t know me Claim they can show me a picture is worth a thousand words they say Then what is a face worth Starting at birth we trap ourselves limit ourselves to these words crammed together letters these small portrayals to who I am I stare stare in a mirror reflection getting clearer clarification getting nearer you’re pretty they say then they turn around and you hear ‘she’s already classified’ classified as average nothing special You’re telling me I am pretty I am witty A 5 letter portrayal of a person will not define me will not make me show me who I am I am not an object not to be used as a pawn in the circus we’ve happened to be spawned into The way i see it there are few few people to realized I am not contained by a page nor a word And I will stand up and be heard I stand to say Someday fairness will come my way When you will not be able to confine a person in one word nor a hundred Someday you will ask yourself Will I be okay You will be okay at somethings great at other things But you will be outstanding at everything Stop limiting yourself to a definition only in words define your self in actions pick yourself apart in fractions Change your life in transactions and stop worrying about what your new definition is I hear small voices begging to be defined Tell me I’m pretty they say pretty what Pretty desperate Pretty pathetic Pretty separate separate from those who choose to be content being undefined becoming redefined staying behind Hiding our plastered on definitions Plastered to these facades That become flawed splitting apart at the seams limiting your dreams but brief descriptions plated to our foreheads So Pretty Really Witty What a Pity Pity it is to let others define you Your own self becoming blurred These small molds called words Taking you and forming you into a conveyor belt barbie The same as her no different than she But I will be me I will be heard I Will Never Be Defined By Just Words
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Mar 28, 2013
Mar 28, 2013 at 7:52 AM UTC
Never To Be Defined by Just Words
I need to write a slam what about about people about places about money about faces I am a human being not to be judged about my creativity judged on my productivity Not an object I will not be contained by letters on a page A page written by people who don’t know me Claim they can show me a picture is worth a thousand words they say Then what is a face worth Starting at birth we trap ourselves limit ourselves to these words crammed together letters these small portrayals to who I am I stare stare in a mirror reflection getting clearer clarification getting nearer you’re pretty they say then they turn around and you hear ‘she’s already classified’ classified as average nothing special You’re telling me I am pretty I am witty A 5 letter portrayal of a person will not define me will not make me show me who I am I am not an object not to be used as a pawn in the circus we’ve happened to be spawned into The way i see it there are few few people to realized I am not contained by a page nor a word And I will stand up and be heard I stand to say Someday fairness will come my way When you will not be able to confine a person in one word nor a hundred Someday you will ask yourself Will I be okay You will be okay at somethings great at other things But you will be outstanding at everything Stop limiting yourself to a definition only in words define your self in actions pick yourself apart in fractions Change your life in transactions and stop worrying about what your new definition is I hear small voices begging to be defined Tell me I’m pretty they say pretty what Pretty desperate Pretty pathetic Pretty separate separate from those who choose to be content being undefined becoming redefined staying behind Hiding our plastered on definitions Plastered to these facades That become flawed splitting apart at the seams limiting your dreams but brief descriptions plated to our foreheads So Pretty Really Witty What a Pity Pity it is to let others define you Your own self becoming blurred These small molds called words Taking you and forming you into a conveyor belt barbie The same as her no different than she But I will be me I will be heard I Will Never Be Defined By Just Words
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I saw Sting in the lobby this morning, we were going out and he was coming in. Lisa nudged me, “Sting” was all she whispered. He was with a woman and a man. The woman was talking to the doorman. Sting was dressed all in black except for a long stark-white cashmere scarf, he was chatting and working a dark-gray French-flat-cap around in his hands. His hair is very short and white. We wanted to walk in the snow, if only for a minute. A gust of wind caught us as we reached the sidewalk. The two American flags, on either side of the entrance, went rigid, at 9-o’clock as if saluting us. “Jeeez!” I said, like the Georgia girl I am - or was. “Don’t be a baby,” Lisa answered, like a true, pittyless New Yorker but her cheeks had turned a child-like pink. She flipped up her collar. I patted my pocket, relieved to feel my phone and know that if we froze to death the authorities could use “find my friends” to locate our bodies. Leeza joins us a moment later and I can’t help but notice that she’s dressed like it’s a cool fall day. Back in the day, when my brother would dress like summer even though temperatures in Georgia had dipped cruelly into the fifties. Seeing him, my mom would say, “Where there’s no sense, there’s no feeling,” but I don’t. “Did you see Sting?” I asked Leeza (12). She gives me a blank look. “Sting”, I said, “the lead singer for The Police?” I add, as clarification. “I don’t know who that is,” she says flatly. “He was famous,” I say in surrender, “a long time ago, in the 90s.” Maybe the next generation won’t be as celebrity driven. Thank God Lisa suggested I pin my artist-beret down or it would have blown away, like my resolve to walk in the snow. Still, I followed Lisa into the park like a cat on a leash - unwilling to be seen as any less Canadian. The show crunched like we were trampling over snow-cones. Trees began turning away the wind as we entered Central Park, “I think we may survive.” I said cheerfully. Just because you're freezing to death doesn’t mean you can’t be ​​affable. Why don’t pigeons freeze to death - I thought birds flew south for the winter?
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Jan 10, 2022
Jan 10, 2022 at 9:17 AM UTC
Stinging January morning
I saw Sting in the lobby this morning, we were going out and he was coming in. Lisa nudged me, “Sting” was all she whispered. He was with a woman and a man. The woman was talking to the doorman. Sting was dressed all in black except for a long stark-white cashmere scarf, he was chatting and working a dark-gray French-flat-cap around in his hands. His hair is very short and white. We wanted to walk in the snow, if only for a minute. A gust of wind caught us as we reached the sidewalk. The two American flags, on either side of the entrance, went rigid, at 9-o’clock as if saluting us. “Jeeez!” I said, like the Georgia girl I am - or was. “Don’t be a baby,” Lisa answered, like a true, pittyless New Yorker but her cheeks had turned a child-like pink. She flipped up her collar. I patted my pocket, relieved to feel my phone and know that if we froze to death the authorities could use “find my friends” to locate our bodies. Leeza joins us a moment later and I can’t help but notice that she’s dressed like it’s a cool fall day. Back in the day, when my brother would dress like summer even though temperatures in Georgia had dipped cruelly into the fifties. Seeing him, my mom would say, “Where there’s no sense, there’s no feeling,” but I don’t. “Did you see Sting?” I asked Leeza (12). She gives me a blank look. “Sting”, I said, “the lead singer for The Police?” I add, as clarification. “I don’t know who that is,” she says flatly. “He was famous,” I say in surrender, “a long time ago, in the 90s.” Maybe the next generation won’t be as celebrity driven. Thank God Lisa suggested I pin my artist-beret down or it would have blown away, like my resolve to walk in the snow. Still, I followed Lisa into the park like a cat on a leash - unwilling to be seen as any less Canadian. The show crunched like we were trampling over snow-cones. Trees began turning away the wind as we entered Central Park, “I think we may survive.” I said cheerfully. Just because you're freezing to death doesn’t mean you can’t be ​​affable. Why don’t pigeons freeze to death - I thought birds flew south for the winter?
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Seven New Poems For Seven Days #6 & 7: Live like you're dying Perhaps you know the lyric, the song? Live like your dying. Dying caught my ear, my eye, can't imagine why. Con-Textual emendation, Natalino style. Live like your writing. Yes, that makes sense... Embrace with passion each new session Charge every second stanza with ruminating rhythms, Cut the wires to the air traffic control sensory tower, go solo, Pulse each word, beat all into a plowshare, even the anger, Even the hate, dressed to **** in words, forgivable... Grant the mundane, the insane, even the pain of tragedy, You refuse so hardily to glorify, grant it and Record it all - a moment, A royal audience with all Your writing parts. No fancy footing, keep it simple. No jesters in rain puddles, Let images of clouds of sand Born and perish  in other's eyes and sighs, let verbal games bedevil other Wooden puppet princes drinking fairy ales. Huh? Write clean and clear, Let the sheerest wonderment of a new combination, Be the titillation of the tongue's alliteration, No head scratching at oblique verbal gestation, Let words clear speak, each letter a speck, That gives and grants clarification, sensational. You, afternoon quenching Coronas, white T shirts, Sun glazes and later, a summer eve's Sancerre, Wave gazing on the reality of rusted beach chairs, Babies sandy naked, washed in waves of Chardonnay, The traffic-filled word-way highways and bay ways, Exiting at the Poet's Nook, for exegesis & retrieval. Write of: Body shakes and juices, skin-staining tongues, Taking her, afternoon, unexpectedly, her noises your derring-do! Broken tear ducts, the Off switch, so busted, write about Real stuff. Write not in fear of dying Angels delivering bad news in vacuum tubes, Write joyous, psalms of loving life, Live like your writing, Write like your living, So you may die well.
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Aug 1, 2013
Aug 1, 2013 at 6:06 PM UTC
Seven New Poems For Seven Days #6 & 7: Live like you're dying
Seven New Poems For Seven Days #6 & 7: Live like you're dying Perhaps you know the lyric, the song? Live like your dying. Dying caught my ear, my eye, can't imagine why. Con-Textual emendation, Natalino style. Live like your writing. Yes, that makes sense... Embrace with passion each new session Charge every second stanza with ruminating rhythms, Cut the wires to the air traffic control sensory tower, go solo, Pulse each word, beat all into a plowshare, even the anger, Even the hate, dressed to **** in words, forgivable... Grant the mundane, the insane, even the pain of tragedy, You refuse so hardily to glorify, grant it and Record it all - a moment, A royal audience with all Your writing parts. No fancy footing, keep it simple. No jesters in rain puddles, Let images of clouds of sand Born and perish  in other's eyes and sighs, let verbal games bedevil other Wooden puppet princes drinking fairy ales. Huh? Write clean and clear, Let the sheerest wonderment of a new combination, Be the titillation of the tongue's alliteration, No head scratching at oblique verbal gestation, Let words clear speak, each letter a speck, That gives and grants clarification, sensational. You, afternoon quenching Coronas, white T shirts, Sun glazes and later, a summer eve's Sancerre, Wave gazing on the reality of rusted beach chairs, Babies sandy naked, washed in waves of Chardonnay, The traffic-filled word-way highways and bay ways, Exiting at the Poet's Nook, for exegesis & retrieval. Write of: Body shakes and juices, skin-staining tongues, Taking her, afternoon, unexpectedly, her noises your derring-do! Broken tear ducts, the Off switch, so busted, write about Real stuff. Write not in fear of dying Angels delivering bad news in vacuum tubes, Write joyous, psalms of loving life, Live like your writing, Write like your living, So you may die well.
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Changed is always for the better. Altho' the past holds some good. But when you hear athletes cry about being called soft. And it's calling out his manhood. You begins to wonder, if he knows what a man is? Because words shouldn't control your action. But they do. In a world, where people have been called many things? The word soft shouldn't make a real man enraged. My , how time has changed? If you secure. Then you're sure of your manhood. You don't need clarification. Or anyone to support your view. You alone should know you. But this generation is a learned group. That hadn't faced the toughest of others generation. They been catered. They been spoiled. And they been fools. To let a simple comment create havoc. My, how times has changed? With this new technology. And new constant creation. We see things that amazes past generation. Where respect was a guided skill? We wonder about these we see today. That feels respect should just be given to them. Then many have never worked hard to earn. My, how times has changed. It's true. The more things changes. The more. It stays the same. Still, I like those good old days. Well, I'm not so sure.
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Oct 25, 2012
Oct 25, 2012 at 8:51 AM UTC
My How Times Has Changed