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Amaris May 2019
I’m barely an adult but already I’ve felt jaded
Romantics of childhood had all but faded
I thought I loved, didn’t know how it looked
Your presence in my life was what it took
For me to - slowly - realize it’s not that hard
Only a few experiences had left me scarred
Underneath your care, my flaws disappear
Every day gets better with you right here
Somewhere along the way, I’d lost my heart
Yet now I want to sing again, and start
Writing stories that are too good to be true
But I’m still so terrified of losing you
If I could just let go, and trust that when I fall
You’ll catch me, and come running when I call
Then together, the world can call us naive
And I won’t even care, ‘cause now I believe
MAX castro May 2019
I met you
  in a place full of sin.
You held my hand
  and made my world spin.
I feel heaven
  with every words you spill.
You made promises
  but failed to fulfill.
Ashita May 2019
When I was both young and naive,
I believed in anything,
And u told me that the twinkling stars,
Were ******* by a string.
That the moment I had joined this earth,
A brand new one was strung,
And every night out there in space,
My sparkling star still hung.
As it rose I'd ask the wise old moon,
Which star up there was mine,
Guessing that which point of light,
My life had caused to shine.
But nights are not eternal,
Nor is naivety or youth,
And the world was quick to tell me,
What I'd thought was not the truth.
It wasn't the string that stopped the stars,
From falling of the sky,
And u didn't get to untie yours,
When u kiss this world goodbye.


But I think there's always some things,
That pure knowledge can't explain,
And I'll stick to what u told me,
Though the world thinks me insane,

For it's hard to say what isn't true,
And see clearly which things are,
When on the night u slipped from earth,
I SAW A SHOOTING STAR...
This poem is dedicated to some one awesome in my life
I just wanna say that I'll miss u soo much and will love u always and forever.
It is also a simple poem which depicts the innocence of childhood and all the myth and lies that our naive minds believed

How many of u guys had a fantasy related to stars and how many of are still fascinated by them?
Answer in the comments;)
Malcolm Eaves Apr 2019
A final poem.
Of you and me,
Of what we were
And could not be,
My heart is heavy
My soul is free.

I love you,
I miss you,
The End.
I lost another friend... I haven't written in a long time. We all have pain. Theirs was greater than most. It hurt me, and I hurt them by mistake...

But it's best for us both to part ways. When you really love someone, sometimes you have to leave them alone.

I will always wonder, Riley. What I killed in you.

And what you killed in me.
Lost in my Head Apr 2019
I had so much hope

My hopeful, naive soul shall remain living

Like a brick wall, my impenetrable defense
"That's a lot of damage, let's add some more"
- Phil Swift
nightdew Mar 2019
there are voices in her mind,
constant echoes that bubble wildly,
telling her that she's not good enough.

it tricks her into thinking,
that maybe... just maybe,
she's really not good enough.

they tell her she's not suitable,
not for this not for that,
and she just happens to believe them.

as naive as she is,
she's quickly fooled,
for thinking she doesn't have the potential.  

but deep down,
passing the harsh reminders,
she really is good enough.
and if you think you're not enough,
baby, you are, you always were.
RaeAnn Mar 2019
You were an architect
Who built sturdy walls around me,
And hung up perfect pictures...
Ones I mistook for truth.

Had I been less content,
In this dollhouse you created,
I would have seen the one next door...
The one you built for her.
isabella Feb 2019
naive.
a young untouched soul, who never felt the softness of anothers lips.
still in high virtue.
naive.
yearning for the attention of another.
she fell into the trap of falsehood.
naive.
following a figure into the darkness of the small facility.
taken to the back where it was just two broken souls in one.
naive.
older than she, his easy manipulation created and everlasting hold on her.
"just one kiss."
naive.
that one kiss.
something so simple turned into something so scary.
naive.
a young broken soul, only to break more.
seeing such a warm heart in state of melancholy.
naive.
easy to take hold of and easy to abuse.
you hurt her.
naive.
your disgusting ways with the younger, broken girls.
making them feel wanted in every way.
naive.
just to make them feel less wanted.
never wanting to be touched again.
naive.
forever sore to affection.
building barriers so no man will ever touch her again.
never to know what true love is.
i was naive.
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