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i was watching batman (1989) and batman returns (1992) today, and i couldn't stop layering over birdman (2015) over both films, it was such a comedy, you knew that it wasn't a serious engagement in the role, i just kept picturing the internal monologue - the action scenes were already a gimmick when in the birdman the explosions start with the critique of what people actually like to see - and that critique that the joker is no more a weird'o than batman dressed in black leather / spandex - i just wish heath ledger took a break from acting, and they did the same sort of film about the actor behind the joker, but how would they internalise the essence of the role: the laughter... internalising a husky voice can be easily done when the actor in a different role can talk easily and speedily without that haunting husky role of the original part... but the laughter? it would never work, which is why jack warned heath about playing the role... 'son, beware the laughter.' still, what an enjoyable re-watch, putting over the birdman nostalgia over the seriousness of the acting in the originals, you can actually imagine him going for a coffee break and taking a **** when the original screening took place, the whole: back to reality - it really amplified the films in a quirky way; and i still think the joker is the only doppelgänger that can't be tamed: i'm guessing because of coulrophobia - and i could still see remnants of this mythical doppelgänger on heath in the imaginarium of dr. parnassus... the clowns are onto you, you can't steal one of them from the jammed mini or volkswagen beetle with 20 of them in it, plus the crying clown, everyone's heard of that one, they mime laughter, this vocalised doppelgänger of a clown is cursed - because unlike actual mimes they don't surd bewilderment being stuck in a box, or touching a brick wall obstacle... they surd laughter, and they share it among themselves in a circus, vocalising that surd is a curse, since vocalising an actual mime leaves you without the actual abstractions, and from what i heard, brick walls are silent like graves, unless of course you punch one or smash a car into one.
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Mar 18, 2016
Mar 18, 2016 at 4:41 PM UTC
the doppelgänger of the joker and coulrophobia
i was watching batman (1989) and batman returns (1992) today, and i couldn't stop layering over birdman (2015) over both films, it was such a comedy, you knew that it wasn't a serious engagement in the role, i just kept picturing the internal monologue - the action scenes were already a gimmick when in the birdman the explosions start with the critique of what people actually like to see - and that critique that the joker is no more a weird'o than batman dressed in black leather / spandex - i just wish heath ledger took a break from acting, and they did the same sort of film about the actor behind the joker, but how would they internalise the essence of the role: the laughter... internalising a husky voice can be easily done when the actor in a different role can talk easily and speedily without that haunting husky role of the original part... but the laughter? it would never work, which is why jack warned heath about playing the role... 'son, beware the laughter.' still, what an enjoyable re-watch, putting over the birdman nostalgia over the seriousness of the acting in the originals, you can actually imagine him going for a coffee break and taking a **** when the original screening took place, the whole: back to reality - it really amplified the films in a quirky way; and i still think the joker is the only doppelgänger that can't be tamed: i'm guessing because of coulrophobia - and i could still see remnants of this mythical doppelgänger on heath in the imaginarium of dr. parnassus... the clowns are onto you, you can't steal one of them from the jammed mini or volkswagen beetle with 20 of them in it, plus the crying clown, everyone's heard of that one, they mime laughter, this vocalised doppelgänger of a clown is cursed - because unlike actual mimes they don't surd bewilderment being stuck in a box, or touching a brick wall obstacle... they surd laughter, and they share it among themselves in a circus, vocalising that surd is a curse, since vocalising an actual mime leaves you without the actual abstractions, and from what i heard, brick walls are silent like graves, unless of course you punch one or smash a car into one.
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Once I as young and very impressionable Ii became part of the hip and happening movement Loving revered to as youth What a sham, no-one has the resolve to speak the truth Being youthful and energetic is tough Too much responsibility rest on my meagre shoulders Eyes and mind demand change by my soft un-scaved hands Half the time I don’t know what I am doing how are my soft hands to bring change Feelings of betrayal and anger from unrighteous treatment Grow in my veins toward the elders They followed their own corrupt greedy souls They dare to blame my dramatic future on their ambition No one asked what I wanted they just shipped me off to school As an adult i inherited a land ripe for a new sun To be achieved with ******* young people Who soak their sins in strong alcohol and smoke their ideas away It’s easier to muffle the pain and internalise the screams South Africa is democratic but no freedom is lived Yes no one can disappear without a trace Yes you can no longer just be beaten without recourse But the soul is tied down with inhumane heavy chains No moral fibre left to hold on to No moral light to follow The head of state is leading example for all I end with words of wisdom Evil triumphs when good men do nothing
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May 28, 2013
May 28, 2013 at 10:28 AM UTC
for shahida
I can see weapons in your eyes You wish to cut so many ties I must tell you so many times To stop with all of your white lies That you tend to internalise Take a moment to realise That this isn't change but surprise And yet you still reach for the knives
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Aug 20, 2015
Aug 20, 2015 at 9:35 PM UTC
Weapons In Your Eyes
All pretentious bores, Read and internalise As much as possible With all your dull brain. You may have all the Time in this world to Sit and Google me, Stalk my friends and Assume my life, get a life! You are inappropriate To be associated with, Oh heavens! I’m glad You totally hate me. Poke your nose on Your own ****** *** Wash your wits and Take healthy naps, Drink cold water, it helps!   I’ve tried to be candid As possible, if your ego Cannot digest, get help. Listen, read, talk and eat- Good, you probably will Start to think good. Peace be with your Dignity and respect you Desperately cry for! Amen!
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Mar 18, 2016
Mar 18, 2016 at 12:02 PM UTC
Open Letter
I have a bashed-up coffee donker, From too hard and too much dinking — It sits there, next to my retro, white barista-chine*, On my movable wine bar, Slash coffee trolley cart; My all-in-one entertainment scene. Where, previously, I had a silver aluminium bucket Storing all my coffee sloshes. It seemed like a convenient (cheaper) way To free my frustrations fancifully — I could have gone to a firing range, Or let some golf ***** fly, Usually though, I just internalise the anxiety and rage — But, life is fragile Like a china tea cup cracked — Do we hold on to these crooked pieces, Like we hold our inner wounds, Hoping to mend them one day — something sentimental? Mindful? Frugal?! Precious.
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Sep 15, 2025
Sep 15, 2025 at 5:15 PM UTC
Cracked china tea cup
when she got all the righteous requirements of expressing liberty and i looked at her expression i was like? so i've been duped into being fed the oedipus complex for 100 years while she wrote as if looking for her father in a theme park? right... gear up the revs of that feminism of yours... keep them writing, by god keep them writing, let us learn all the secrets that were so attractive once when she pampered herself with corsets and bangles and rings and earrings and perfumes! come on feminism, drag them out into the bright open blank canvas of the page like dragging witches to the stake! in my library i only have books by women in the range of sylvia plath and anna kavan... believe me, feminism gave women second thoughts about joining the ranks of men writing, she's having second thoughts because she doesn't want to reveal her secrets, she doesn't want to internalise life, she wants it to remain a volumptous (voluptuous, which sounds sexier? the former implies volume, the latter a monkish stress of orthographic orthodoxy) affection to keep fingertips sensitive to skin smooth like soap and coarse like pavement - touchy touchy - feely feely, she's scared that by outlining all the secrets she'll be no longer able to wear a corset and as theory states: bigger the earrings of loops, the eagerer she's to be bedded, it's a shame i don't own more books by women who'd write like men, and i dig the part where books written by women are so tightly bound by social formalities of longing for love in long-winding sagas of the harlequin publishing house - feminism seems like a faulty bomb when it comes to women writing, i mean, a girl starts writing she looses her predatory allure and instinct, she starts writing she becomes vulnerable, exposed, when he does it he gets depth and confidence he can't use in ****** interaction... historically speaking women used to walk without leaving footprints, men used to walk moving mountains, she was the countless secrets and secrecies, feminism kinda duped her, she started making footprints via writing, and sadly all the former allure faded - we became apes and peasants slightly bewildered by an atom bomb explosion like a falling autumnal leaf; where is that crafty ***** with a library of intrigues?
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Mar 8, 2016
Mar 8, 2016 at 12:34 PM UTC
the harlequin publishing house (crafty ***** with a library of intrigues)
when she got all the righteous requirements of expressing liberty and i looked at her expression i was like? so i've been duped into being fed the oedipus complex for 100 years while she wrote as if looking for her father in a theme park? right... gear up the revs of that feminism of yours... keep them writing, by god keep them writing, let us learn all the secrets that were so attractive once when she pampered herself with corsets and bangles and rings and earrings and perfumes! come on feminism, drag them out into the bright open blank canvas of the page like dragging witches to the stake! in my library i only have books by women in the range of sylvia plath and anna kavan... believe me, feminism gave women second thoughts about joining the ranks of men writing, she's having second thoughts because she doesn't want to reveal her secrets, she doesn't want to internalise life, she wants it to remain a volumptous (voluptuous, which sounds sexier? the former implies volume, the latter a monkish stress of orthographic orthodoxy) affection to keep fingertips sensitive to skin smooth like soap and coarse like pavement - touchy touchy - feely feely, she's scared that by outlining all the secrets she'll be no longer able to wear a corset and as theory states: bigger the earrings of loops, the eagerer she's to be bedded, it's a shame i don't own more books by women who'd write like men, and i dig the part where books written by women are so tightly bound by social formalities of longing for love in long-winding sagas of the harlequin publishing house - feminism seems like a faulty bomb when it comes to women writing, i mean, a girl starts writing she looses her predatory allure and instinct, she starts writing she becomes vulnerable, exposed, when he does it he gets depth and confidence he can't use in ****** interaction... historically speaking women used to walk without leaving footprints, men used to walk moving mountains, she was the countless secrets and secrecies, feminism kinda duped her, she started making footprints via writing, and sadly all the former allure faded - we became apes and peasants slightly bewildered by an atom bomb explosion like a falling autumnal leaf; where is that crafty ***** with a library of intrigues?
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when they're together, a girl always seems to try and remember and recount her past loves, a boy always seem to try and forget to recount his past loves; one always tries to love, one always tries to make the other jealous, it's hard to love something that tries to make you jealous of the past you were not part of and asks to be awarded a leash of safekeeping, to not venture outside the zoo of feeling; why do girls always wish to recount their past loves to incite feelings of jealousy and further jealousy into impotence? oh right, so men can slave away, and the household can be abundant in triviality of possessions they cannot internalise; in terms of matriarchal politics, if i'm not one of her own, i'm disposable... not even an extension of being in glorification later as disposable... if i'm not one of her own, i'm nothing... if fathering mankind gave us the history we know so far... i wonder what mothering mankind will give us, as years come to date, and be dated in the reliquary of cannibalising saints for the artefact of the self-serving entitlement of mr. or dr.
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Mar 27, 2016
Mar 27, 2016 at 7:48 PM UTC
when they're together
Nothing beats a heartbreak clenched fists and sweaty palms gasping for air on the bedroom floor we cling to caricatures drawn with shaky hands but who expects an honest portrait laughing and yelling under those conditions, you internalise them no one said you had to be a superhero when as you gaze out that train window just remember it’s the reflection that’s blurry and not you.
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Jul 6, 2014
Jul 6, 2014 at 12:45 PM UTC
Hiding In Your Torso.
I can see weapons in your eyes You wish to cut so many ties I must tell you so many times To stop with all of your white lies That you tend to internalise Take a moment to realise That this isn't change but surprise And yet you still reach for the knives
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Sep 1, 2015
Sep 1, 2015 at 9:42 PM UTC
Weapons In Your Eyes
*The scars left by love and loss take the longest time to heal.*
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May 21, 2016
May 21, 2016 at 11:13 AM UTC
Internalise.
.                      great!    the spelling of an "offensive" word is more distressing to you than a sexualisation of a naked body...    page 3 of the sun comes nowhere the censor of the word f%%%; good boy, good girl,    make sure language is ***** and that actual ***** is considered casual-kojak -     for the paedo-ring-leaders; you try speaking the truth, i'll deny it...         first you apply the decipher in writing language...    and attempt to treat your invented disease that's dyslexia.... housewife quacks wishing for a hard-on; start talking to nuns and baking cakes... or do a downer!    go transgender!   the nag hammadi "library" will surely guide you down the "righetous" path; the pronouns belong to me... if "she" can make me believe "she's" a woman, i will call "him" a she; d'uh, coming from a mouth that once said: i'd **** anything that moves, if a "she" can fool a man... what's the problem? are people forgetting that, to clarify pronouns, you sometimes have to grate some article usage? there's a indefinite "pronoun" that fools hetero.... but there's also the definite "pronoun" the hetero man identifies with, and owns twice-over.... if a hetero man doesn't think about ******* you, sorry... you're like a frankenstein's monster experiment gone wrong... or more like igor's monster... the rich can have it all... the best you can do is internalise the dysphoria, and wish for a lucky lottery ticket, or rich grandparents to perfect the transition, that i might sexually consider you as a woman... otherwise? let's just say, that when western society closed its mental asylums, it created its societies in asylums, where everyone could be considered mentally ill.
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Jul 2, 2017
Jul 2, 2017 at 10:22 PM UTC
**** & f%%%
.                      great!    the spelling of an "offensive" word is more distressing to you than a sexualisation of a naked body...    page 3 of the sun comes nowhere the censor of the word f%%%; good boy, good girl,    make sure language is ***** and that actual ***** is considered casual-kojak -     for the paedo-ring-leaders; you try speaking the truth, i'll deny it...         first you apply the decipher in writing language...    and attempt to treat your invented disease that's dyslexia.... housewife quacks wishing for a hard-on; start talking to nuns and baking cakes... or do a downer!    go transgender!   the nag hammadi "library" will surely guide you down the "righetous" path; the pronouns belong to me... if "she" can make me believe "she's" a woman, i will call "him" a she; d'uh, coming from a mouth that once said: i'd **** anything that moves, if a "she" can fool a man... what's the problem? are people forgetting that, to clarify pronouns, you sometimes have to grate some article usage? there's a indefinite "pronoun" that fools hetero.... but there's also the definite "pronoun" the hetero man identifies with, and owns twice-over.... if a hetero man doesn't think about ******* you, sorry... you're like a frankenstein's monster experiment gone wrong... or more like igor's monster... the rich can have it all... the best you can do is internalise the dysphoria, and wish for a lucky lottery ticket, or rich grandparents to perfect the transition, that i might sexually consider you as a woman... otherwise? let's just say, that when western society closed its mental asylums, it created its societies in asylums, where everyone could be considered mentally ill.
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#*I tend to forgive easily But not forget Internalise, future safe Insecure people Believe it or not Make me shiver in my shell Sounds like written gossip But all true Lost my inhibitions today One day Boldly I will say Quick witted not Dim witted neither Absence and presence A balance A promise to my thoughts Will set them free Words allured me for long My thoughts, it’s here they belong*#
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Jul 19, 2019
Jul 19, 2019 at 7:51 AM UTC
To Balance
You told me not to cry, so I never will again. I internalise my tears until they nearly overflow, until I'm fit to burst, and the strain could **** anyone who comes too close. And pressed deep inside my heart, those tears will turn to ice that creeps like frost through my frozen blood. And you ask me why my hands are cold. Now I wont say I have a frozen heart - because I'm not devoid of feeling. But my lungs are tipped with ice and my veins are the blue of frost, the whites of my eyes are as weepingly white as freshly fallen snow. I don't know if I'm cold because of the weight I've lost or whether I've just lost all of my heat. I'm scared you'll warm my heart, because I know that if you do I wont be able to stop the tears from flowing, and they'll never stop.
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Apr 29, 2018
Apr 29, 2018 at 1:07 PM UTC
Tears of Ice.
My heart is aching It has been for a while Now I try to keep on a smile How Can I keep doing this Everyday It doesn't feel fair That some of us are so sad When others are happy without trying That some people hurt so bad And others are just fine And how come it's me Why do I get this everyday When the boy next to me in maths Never thinks bout depression anyway I never asked for this Or did I ? Mum tells me to internalise And that's probably wise I want to be happy And I do try But when I'm so tired There's comfort in the dark In the gloom The heavy heart The pain Then the numbness Grandma tells me not to give up hope I say yeah but deep down I'm not sure I can cope I tell me to be strong That I'm not the worst off And I usually try to keep my hurt on the inside But now and again it hurts too bad to hide
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Jul 3, 2019
Jul 3, 2019 at 12:55 PM UTC
Hurts too bad