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"disassembling" poems
I am not a writer. I am not good with words, I cannot speak up for myself, It is my pen that bleed words. No amount of convincing can give me conviction. No amount of clarification can make that distinction. Please refrain from using titles. I am not a writer. I am just a dreamer, Dreaming dreams of inverted galaxies Where complexities are reduced to simplicity, And maybe love wouldn't be so complicated. I dream of a world where I'll be unchained and liberated, Because currently freedom is hard to go by. I am not a writer. I am just another over thinker, I stay up all night disassembling the world, So I can put it back together. Adding new features that I think will make it better I get lost in thoughts, and day-mares, fantasies and others, I obsess and I always suffer. I am not a writer. Though sometimes I am photographer, Snapping, Close ups and selfies of my terrible mind. Giving glints of places you won't usually find, All because I write sometimes.
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Jun 21, 2014
Jun 21, 2014 at 2:15 AM UTC
I am not a writer
the ghosts around your moist lips clipping the sweet drench of our limp wish.... the spectral harlots of our far lit lamps and the damp parlors of our damaged camps pitched. the pit of our peaches, fussing the cuff of our sap. the honey bonds - of our wayward damp runes...   that we caste  to undo any telling of our demise, to save our precious myth. to keep our ruse amused... my darling... goodnight... though nothing is good and we have only the night.... goodnight. i will trouble you no more but labor to keep your sweet grief mine. to contend with your unending medallions of perfect regret, to pass your palm with silver drek, the likes of which your liking, may learn to kiss with two lips at dead stop. if this is the end tremble and be trembling. our disassembling locks our open door and nothing more than vanishing remains, where our appearance mocks the same. goodnight... though nothing is good, and the light is a darkness, a trump of knives and a far thing, up too close to save a prayer for the plight of fools and just too far to pry our hands from live grenades... to live for. but to die yes.
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May 23, 2014
May 23, 2014 at 10:03 PM UTC
goodnight... though nothing is good... and we have only the night. goodnight
I sorta sleep in my underwear. Another lie. I sleep in the **** when I have the energy to remove the day's toil off of my skin, which is not so easy. No special creme, cleanser. too tired to tirade, living life, fall in to bed worn, shoes et. al., the ones that need soles. you already knew that. wake up in the dark. start to disrobe, and soon enough, ******* another poem done. the poem of course is me **** so you get to see what is under what I wear. So I sorta sleep in my under-what-I-wear, is not exactly a lie, just me dissembling^ and/or disassembling another day in this life.
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Nov 9, 2013
Nov 9, 2013 at 9:14 AM UTC
I sorta sleep in my underwear
When Van Gogh cut off his ear It was for reassurance that the rest of him could disappear That illusion of ownership that nerves create Should have faded with each baby tooth I lost It didn't though, contrariwise I worried I would extend Into roads or trees and then feel the tire's friction or the elm's blight Empathy is a ***** of its own I pray I never wake up with a Siamese twin I'd have to care, lest we lapse into mutual sadomasochism That hilarious territory of bored lovers The Thalidomide kids might get a kick out of feeling new arms attached to other people but that's the exception that proves the rule After the Vietnam war, some men believed Agent Orange Had followed them home, alive in newly discovered nerves Now what odd god must be behind that **** Mengele often awoke from dreams sweating and sure That his patients would learn a trick to generate biological anesthetics He needed the feedback of sound to really understand the human body “Prayer or pleading” he used to say with a wink to his bartender after work Sometimes I worry that my nervous system Might have a Mengelian agenda of its own That I am woven into a potential torture chamber seems clear but then I remember that I can always pull the tooth or cut off the ear
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Aug 10, 2012
Aug 10, 2012 at 3:48 AM UTC
Disassembling Required
what is this love for I have beheld it cast in metamorphosis a love that makes transformations on the mind permissible transformations improvisations of the self in ****** intensity which emphasises the drama of sometimes, dark, violent and repressive potentials vicious energies of hate and ambition that propel the enactment of intense and exhausting experience of vigorous vertiginous chaos indomitable in its desires what is this love is it a registered predicament made memorable by vivid language that would butcher in ritual gratuitous memories and testify to an urgency of unwisely relinquished emotion what is this love does it flourish in flawed and unreasonable understandings accumulated upon the mind in vicarious thrill of sympathy where traits are highly exaggerated and eagerly anticipates the oppressive weight of the past that functions upon a common collapse of distinctions or does it manufacture artificial precepts pretending in attractive collaboration to associate fiction rather than fact what is this love is it that by treaty or inheritance with loving ferocity would embalm all tears and hide all those collaborations in flared conflagrations of the heart and yes create a turmoil in the mind hotter than a thousand summers and vividly stamp upon a twisted body a moral viciousness of fathomless malice that wouldst close its ears to the admonitions of conscious and thus through an improbable incantatory verbal rite touch the hidden order of all things in disassembling nature what is this love if only it was known
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Aug 17, 2013
Aug 17, 2013 at 5:26 PM UTC
What is this love?
what is this love for I have beheld it cast in metamorphosis a love that makes transformations on the mind permissible transformations improvisations of the self in ****** intensity which emphasises the drama of sometimes, dark, violent and repressive potentials vicious energies of hate and ambition that propel the enactment of intense and exhausting experience of vigorous vertiginous chaos indomitable in its desires what is this love is it a registered predicament made memorable by vivid language that would butcher in ritual gratuitous memories and testify to an urgency of unwisely relinquished emotion what is this love does it flourish in flawed and unreasonable understandings accumulated upon the mind in vicarious thrill of sympathy where traits are highly exaggerated and eagerly anticipates the oppressive weight of the past that functions upon a common collapse of distinctions or does it manufacture artificial precepts pretending in attractive collaboration to associate fiction rather than fact what is this love is it that by treaty or inheritance with loving ferocity would embalm all tears and hide all those collaborations in flared conflagrations of the heart and yes create a turmoil in the mind hotter than a thousand summers and vividly stamp upon a twisted body a moral viciousness of fathomless malice that wouldst close its ears to the admonitions of conscious and thus through an improbable incantatory verbal rite touch the hidden order of all things in disassembling nature what is this love if only it was known
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Yes I am a beautiful disaster In my wake leave a bittersweet taste A special kind of love in soul Most of it goes to waste I long to stop disassembling Pieces one by one My demons have spoken They warn I've just begun Hiding in the silence I am too afraid to share Do not like the way opening up feels Like winter branches laid bare Pages of heart are torn Many stained with tears Can judge this book by it's cover As dark as it appears As whispers flow throughout mind Uttered from lips of memories Wishing my residual sorrow Would be carried with the breeze Suffering rising into air Dispersing until completely gone Hard as I try to blow them away Miseries keep clutching on My words lie at bottom of my lungs Too tired to crawl out They weigh down my shaky breath Until every one turns to doubt I retreat into the shadows Cloaked in grey and black Waiting for happiness to return My colors may never come back
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Jul 21, 2021
Jul 21, 2021 at 12:24 PM UTC
Beautiful Disaster
Dennis was a citizen A denizen, a resident Of somewhere near a motorway A hideaway most opulent Ensnared amid the railway And trail ways for motorcars A haven from the modern day The takeaways and trendy bars But shattered in the summer morn His rest was torn by hammering Invading what was once inert So to his curtains clamouring He banished each to either side He threw them wide with knuckles white And saw in front of his abode Across the road, a building site A certainty within his mind Did slowly wind his purpose tight And with a grim determined jaw Across the floor he took to flight Descending stairs without a care His morning hair resembling A dandelion set to seed In need of disassembling He strode across his dining room And snatched a broom which lay by chance Against the table by the door And held before him like a lance He mounted his beloved bike A cycle like no other made And on a builder set his sight With all his might and unafraid He charged his foe at quite a rush And with his brush, the builder smote And leaping from his trusty steed He did proceed to stop and gloat Before resuming in his spate The builders mate did turn and run To raise the dragon, JCB It roared with glee and wheels spun So Dennis, though his ears resound With just the pound of noble heart Did firmly stand and face the beast His brow was creased and feet apart He struck the creature savagely And stubbornly with just his head And that, according to the news Was what the paramedics said The End
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Apr 5, 2013
Apr 5, 2013 at 6:30 AM UTC
Modern Fairytale
Dennis was a citizen A denizen, a resident Of somewhere near a motorway A hideaway most opulent Ensnared amid the railway And trail ways for motorcars A haven from the modern day The takeaways and trendy bars But shattered in the summer morn His rest was torn by hammering Invading what was once inert So to his curtains clamouring He banished each to either side He threw them wide with knuckles white And saw in front of his abode Across the road, a building site A certainty within his mind Did slowly wind his purpose tight And with a grim determined jaw Across the floor he took to flight Descending stairs without a care His morning hair resembling A dandelion set to seed In need of disassembling He strode across his dining room And snatched a broom which lay by chance Against the table by the door And held before him like a lance He mounted his beloved bike A cycle like no other made And on a builder set his sight With all his might and unafraid He charged his foe at quite a rush And with his brush, the builder smote And leaping from his trusty steed He did proceed to stop and gloat Before resuming in his spate The builders mate did turn and run To raise the dragon, JCB It roared with glee and wheels spun So Dennis, though his ears resound With just the pound of noble heart Did firmly stand and face the beast His brow was creased and feet apart He struck the creature savagely And stubbornly with just his head And that, according to the news Was what the paramedics said The End
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ANGUISH, a wicked, deafening drum synced with the brutal, monotonously thudding rhythm of my own jaded, bitter heart's sickly beat each throb of my pulse rips savagely at my seams the wretched sobbing of a crumbling soul trickles and weeps out from me and darkly cloaked within the furthest reaches of my disassembling being secrets spun into silky spider web strands ensnare any shreds of light holding truth and hopes captive until they can be drained to lifeless husks ****** to infinite suffocation struggling with an unconquerable  battle a war, the likes of which no human has ever, even just once, managed to have won there's no cure, no remedy to mend what's broken, breaking, shattering all around I'M CRYING and begging at an unseen God to come come to my rescue pleading for an intangible, omniescent being to destroy the tower built by my own sinful nature my own deceit praying to a Creator whose very existence I still can't help but to question and sink in doubts but for that miniscule chance He's real and might maybe help me... because the very reality of such mercy and grace could bring this otherwise undefeatable curse crashing down, down, down, down... THE DRUMMING, banging out its mad rhythm of anguish changing, changing now changing its infuriating tune... with the final dying grains of my imagination, I'll shove aside my terror; my unholy fear of the relentless force of disappointment I'll indubitably feel when I reach my finishing line clutching onto a hideous fail such an asinine act, this allowing of a bitsy fragment of hope to creep and crawl inside the walls of my mind but I've nothing more left beyond this bleak black floor sagging beneath my feet and a hope, regardless how quiet, no matter how pitifully dim, could quite easily be the absolute  final spark of light that my eyes shall ever see...
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Jul 26, 2013
Jul 26, 2013 at 3:53 PM UTC
Darkly Cloaked
ANGUISH, a wicked, deafening drum synced with the brutal, monotonously thudding rhythm of my own jaded, bitter heart's sickly beat each throb of my pulse rips savagely at my seams the wretched sobbing of a crumbling soul trickles and weeps out from me and darkly cloaked within the furthest reaches of my disassembling being secrets spun into silky spider web strands ensnare any shreds of light holding truth and hopes captive until they can be drained to lifeless husks ****** to infinite suffocation struggling with an unconquerable  battle a war, the likes of which no human has ever, even just once, managed to have won there's no cure, no remedy to mend what's broken, breaking, shattering all around I'M CRYING and begging at an unseen God to come come to my rescue pleading for an intangible, omniescent being to destroy the tower built by my own sinful nature my own deceit praying to a Creator whose very existence I still can't help but to question and sink in doubts but for that miniscule chance He's real and might maybe help me... because the very reality of such mercy and grace could bring this otherwise undefeatable curse crashing down, down, down, down... THE DRUMMING, banging out its mad rhythm of anguish changing, changing now changing its infuriating tune... with the final dying grains of my imagination, I'll shove aside my terror; my unholy fear of the relentless force of disappointment I'll indubitably feel when I reach my finishing line clutching onto a hideous fail such an asinine act, this allowing of a bitsy fragment of hope to creep and crawl inside the walls of my mind but I've nothing more left beyond this bleak black floor sagging beneath my feet and a hope, regardless how quiet, no matter how pitifully dim, could quite easily be the absolute  final spark of light that my eyes shall ever see...
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i imagine her beautiful and weary damaged in the ways that allow her to sink down into my soft places and fill the puzzle-piece gap someone else left her with. i imagine her lovely and flawed striking a match in my chest and starting a flame in my belly a forest fire of disaster and absolute perfection. i imagine her soft and destructive disassembling me at her worst caressing me at her best i imagine her lonely and strong a being built from i-don’t-give-a-damns and let-me-help-yous i imagine her there quiet and beaming imagining what i might be like. i imagine her thinking i’m the beautiful mess that i think her to be i imagine us both being wrong. i imagine that being the best part about it.
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Oct 23, 2017
Oct 23, 2017 at 1:36 AM UTC
my loneliness can hear yours calling, here is its response
i have given hearing to deaf ferocious monsters with well meaning incompetence i have disturbed the reality and illusion of human identity where i am enmeshed in insoluble confusions of difficulties where i find strange images touching on the grotesque and ask what is myself what are the guarantees of my identity by what right is a name possessed by what means is my individuality secured these questions in my mind have a curiously derivative quality that pretend to govern themselves where they collaborate in their own oppression and make assumptions upon ethical behaviour and social institutions which represent fictions rather than fact function in a world of collapsing distinctions of artificial precepts where these now hearing monsters with vicious energies of hate and ambition that propel the enactment of intense exhausting experience of a mind spiraling vertiginously toward an inner chaos that proclaims I am myself alone without moral constraints yet register vast predicaments with the memorability of vivid language but with an individual rapaciousness that creates an amalgam of narratives with the oppressive weight of the past designed to induce this evaluative vertigo with such ferocity to produce a turmoil of demons monsters of evil, whose viciousness is vividly stamped upon their bodies that declares their fathomless malice sending my mind into a cruelly disassembling nature where i have given hearing to deaf ferocious monsters
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Jul 13, 2014
Jul 13, 2014 at 9:43 AM UTC
deaf ferocious monsters
I'm disassembling my skeleton and rearranging the bones. Building myself into something that will be immune to sticks and stones. replacing my eyes with glass, so that there will be a mirror-effect. so no one gets the chance to see the soul that I protect.
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Dec 18, 2013
Dec 18, 2013 at 11:09 PM UTC
The world is lonely enough, but sure, make it lonelier
Hot water, immerse me. rid me of any and all impurities, replace them with tranquility. Give me the strength to pick up a razor, without the temptation of, disassembling it, and sinking a blade into my skin. Help me, give me the strength, that is needed for me, to help myself. Hot water, I beg of you, please, save me tonight.
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Feb 12, 2013
Feb 12, 2013 at 8:25 PM UTC
Hot Water
Please, Pass me the straws of hay I have dropped along the way. I cannot create the bale I once envisioned. There is no structure to build or shape the person in my blueprints. I’m fumbling with the straws I now have left. It is not enough. I can only create a feeble braid, One that will not hold the shape it makes. I need help to find the parts that have blown away, Grasped by the wind out of my hands, The pieces that fell onto the path, Ones I walked past and never acknowledged. The breeze continues to blow, Ripping at my hair, Tearing my screams of loss from my mouth, Disassembling the last of my straw, Leaving nothing but empty palms. Holding emptiness. Knowing only emptiness.
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Jan 4, 2022
Jan 4, 2022 at 6:50 AM UTC
Last Straws
finding small reminders of lips seeking ears to whisper into of hands wishing you were here of lost scents on the floor of migrating sounds disassembling in mid-air of words being spoken without touch
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Jun 19, 2013
Jun 19, 2013 at 11:15 AM UTC
Finding Small Reminders Of
I was her boredom As the monster cut up the city We ordered food. and sat to wait out our imminent destruction Disassembling  art installations that had grown out of my hair Going to and from. There will be no Magical  girl transformation sequence . There will be no battle. And triumph I was the summer. Burning other people. while we stayed inside For most of it
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Nov 20, 2018
Nov 20, 2018 at 8:01 PM UTC
H.
at first a few drops becomes a raging torrent bursting from my eyes
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Oct 10, 2015
Oct 10, 2015 at 9:33 AM UTC
Disassembling
Henny-yussly mischeevyuss He orfed growshurries irregardless Of the rawshussness and disgustment Of the masonairy surrounding him. We consistiountly tried to keep aholt Of his mumbeulizing narrativation, But he was dissensibly non-coherent With a naturalistic talent to devaricate. He was consistively disassembling, Misindicating his intellectuality And his irreality noissomely aloud. Of his malapropicisms he was proud. His crassy disaparagements reeked And his ununderstandments peaked They pointed out his misconstumblement About his privates and the government. His blabbermouthedness notoriastic Rerendered him atombombastical. His practicication of the irradical Was mostly piraticalish; nastical. His pernowncements so disapplaudable Too bad his words were so megaudible Unpossible, hyperdisgustisizing, To the point of indisguising.
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Jul 14, 2018
Jul 14, 2018 at 4:58 AM UTC
JIBBERJABBERY
Rekindling magic and wonder Seeing the world in a different light With a different kind of sight A perspective turned upside down. Creating, disassembling, learning New ideas breaking through my shell Sparking a revolution of improbable dreams. Growing with self-love Planting seeds of kindness Loving myself unconditionally becomes my truth Cultivating compassion for all is a continuous practice. Rain cleaning the air and my lungs Glittering sun breaking through storm clouds Clearing my mind for new beginnings Stepping forward with less weight Moving slow with intention Brimming with big ideas Big ideas are coming. 11/2017, Leah Oviedo @ImpowerYou.org
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Nov 20, 2017
Nov 20, 2017 at 7:04 PM UTC
Wonderful Spark
Dizzy and melting in the moonlight That shone right through me. A world picking up pace; Spinning faster than ever before And off its axis gravity let go;   But your heart beat stopped For the first time in a while It slowed and the thoughts Ran out after moving faster than A thousand miles a minute For too long. For too long You've been bashing the cages in my mind Disassembling structures I never thought would break and instead of bleeding... I breathe. Each time we touch another part of your insanity Is carved into my skin... I'm shaking but its exciting Let me defuse you With the venom in my tongue.
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Nov 26, 2015
Nov 26, 2015 at 8:11 PM UTC
Merry-Go-Round
All of us treated them like lovers, meticulously disassembling them as if hypnotized, caressing each part with special lubricant & laying out the pieces like a rock collector. We'd take our own sweet time reassembling them, part by part, snapping & sliding, building our killing machines to completion. Then to test our work, we'd **** and release and squeeze, to hear the distinctive click of a dry fire.
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Jun 11, 2014
Jun 11, 2014 at 11:11 PM UTC
Cleaning Our Lovers
The ax is blunt but sharp enough to help with the job on hot and sticky mornings like this when my dad has me working around the house few things so satisfying as sinking blades into drywall disassembling the mistakes the previous owners laid down Still, the ax is blunt and makes me swing harder so the muscles beneath my soft arms jiggle and pull taught I always wanted to fix the goof ups of the past but work? I didn't know I would have to work I'm sweating, sticking, coughing more than what I bargained for This ax is too blunt and I retreat inside to the comfort of the air conditioning that the last generation installed I want to make a change, I do but come on! the tools are too weak or maybe I am
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Jun 24, 2013
Jun 24, 2013 at 10:51 AM UTC
The Ax and my Generation
Friday night. I feel my bones forgotten Disassembling character. Ghostly lungs still breathing, Shallow. Heartstring, Hanging from the gallow. Gone Before the morning sun.
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May 15, 2015
May 15, 2015 at 5:34 PM UTC
Collapse
So I was talking a walk the other day The ground seemed peculiar Reality seemed to go away Or maybe it was more secular Regardless, I came across my innocence Cold blood dripped from my mouth Haven't felt the same since Disassembling the ardence of my youth I met a lady as I walked She seemed lonely too For a while we talked Until she said, "it's only you" That night we wed Underneath manipulated stars Mutual innocence dead ******** pleasure of scars
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Jan 10, 2021
Jan 10, 2021 at 12:34 PM UTC
BLOOD.
There’s no true newness In renewing traditions. If we as a people are called to accept change, Then such gatherings and conventions as church Should ponder anew The possibilities of conforming To accepting that a deity like the Holy Spirit Cannot be contained to a breviary Or even within walls for that matter. I’m not necessarily promoting any sort of evangelism, But elevating ecumenism And a grand renewal of what it means For those confined to the guilt and shame That can come from church catechism, church magisterium, Church this-and-that To have their own way of approaching spirituality. Let’s all be Richard Rohrs and St. Francises, Not rebuilding a church, But disassembling a building That separates believers of faith. If we are all friends, Why do we hide behind walls? Can we not bear What other brethren might believe? Let’s combust the world, Scorching sameness, Fueling newness.
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May 27, 2018
May 27, 2018 at 9:02 PM UTC
Vatican III
today i drew up a crime scene out of my thoughts which sounds perplexing unless you're someone like me who can't think one thing without thinking about another so i drew lines on paper connected people to events places to regrets circled notations and perhaps little is relevant *if i wear my heart and emotions on my sleeve which i do can you possibly imagine what kind of things i don't admit to thinking? and for awhile i thought i didn't have any hidden feelings but then again the deeper i dig the more i find that i do once i get past the fact i don't want to admit they're there* my gut response is to wait until the wound itches grab the band aid and rip it off but this is a much slower process of hot steam and stinging soap and water peeling bit by painful bit trying not to let the crime scene thoughts take over my life but slowly snipping color coded threads until things begin falling learning to live my life with less explosions less catastrophic breakdowns to push past and more tears that wash off in the morning and less that drip into open cuts letting light in disassembling my crime scene thoughts
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Jan 29, 2018
Jan 29, 2018 at 11:16 PM UTC
crime scene thoughts