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"capitalization" poems
Whether a comma, or colon: Punctuation slows my rolling I need no period. When I end no Capitalization when I begin Rulelessly I flow my art   Not a single! Exclamation mark Are you not the one Who'll know? Where a question mark No longer goes Warp the structure Bend the lines Put in repeat Let emotion unwind Make yourself Your poetry's the best Be your own ruler Pass your own test Take your own road Where ever it leads Lover or hater It's all poetry!
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Oct 8, 2019
Oct 8, 2019 at 5:19 AM UTC
MAKE YOURSELF
What's it take These days To write a poem That makes the world go mad That brings the crowds to their feet That spreads like wildfire Through a dry winter forest Is it those excessively long words? The ostentatiously loquacious Platitudinous ramblings Of an insecure mind aspiring To authentic intellect? Is it perhaps...      the "creativity"                of      varied      spacing   or...    could it be..... the lack                               of capitalization                the loathsome little letters                screaming out                          hey, look at us!          ... or maybe it's                the punctuation marks,      littered, haphazardly           through the text                     (whether used correctly)                or, theyre not?!      despite worrds mispeled           and a grammar might is broken    can these gimmicks increase interest         though miswritten or misspoken? Is the trick alliteration Whose bite brightly bids us To center on the snappy sounds? Although all along      unvoiced underneath Ideas idle in the isles    (or perhaps the aisles) Of the mind To meld and craft and bind Our thorough thoughts And worthy words Into lines Which Heard by herds Raise the                   Praise for which we                   Privately, desperately                   Pray Maybe it's a magical mix Of splendid in-your-head rhythm Marvelous meter that perfectly clicks Flowing smoothly without schism Well-spaced stanzas Well-used time Well-crafted phrases Well-thought-out rhymes Well, maybe not...      those gems are often ignored      cast-aside, unread, even abhorred Why? Because the modern world doesn't need your rules your restrictions your regulations your misguided boundaries your oppression your antiquated ideas    of "the right way"    to write    to speak    to act    to live    to (fill in the blank) No, what the modern world needs is Negation! Contradiction! Resistance! Revolt! And poetry whose words Say the same thing Repeat the same meaning Echo the same lyrics Rephrase the same thoughts But in an ever-so-slightly Different Varied Altered Adjusted Changed up way Line After line Of synonyms           over                and                     over                          and                          over                          again ----- What's it take These days To not give in To narcissism's spiral? But more importantly: What's it take To make my poem go viral?
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Aug 12, 2018
Aug 12, 2018 at 12:17 AM UTC
Viral
What's it take These days To write a poem That makes the world go mad That brings the crowds to their feet That spreads like wildfire Through a dry winter forest Is it those excessively long words? The ostentatiously loquacious Platitudinous ramblings Of an insecure mind aspiring To authentic intellect? Is it perhaps...      the "creativity"                of      varied      spacing   or...    could it be..... the lack                               of capitalization                the loathsome little letters                screaming out                          hey, look at us!          ... or maybe it's                the punctuation marks,      littered, haphazardly           through the text                     (whether used correctly)                or, theyre not?!      despite worrds mispeled           and a grammar might is broken    can these gimmicks increase interest         though miswritten or misspoken? Is the trick alliteration Whose bite brightly bids us To center on the snappy sounds? Although all along      unvoiced underneath Ideas idle in the isles    (or perhaps the aisles) Of the mind To meld and craft and bind Our thorough thoughts And worthy words Into lines Which Heard by herds Raise the                   Praise for which we                   Privately, desperately                   Pray Maybe it's a magical mix Of splendid in-your-head rhythm Marvelous meter that perfectly clicks Flowing smoothly without schism Well-spaced stanzas Well-used time Well-crafted phrases Well-thought-out rhymes Well, maybe not...      those gems are often ignored      cast-aside, unread, even abhorred Why? Because the modern world doesn't need your rules your restrictions your regulations your misguided boundaries your oppression your antiquated ideas    of "the right way"    to write    to speak    to act    to live    to (fill in the blank) No, what the modern world needs is Negation! Contradiction! Resistance! Revolt! And poetry whose words Say the same thing Repeat the same meaning Echo the same lyrics Rephrase the same thoughts But in an ever-so-slightly Different Varied Altered Adjusted Changed up way Line After line Of synonyms           over                and                     over                          and                          over                          again ----- What's it take These days To not give in To narcissism's spiral? But more importantly: What's it take To make my poem go viral?
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What is a rhyme scheme? What is a sentence? capitalization? Punctuation What is a story? What is a poem? None of these things define writing. You define it when you write.
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Jul 5, 2014
Jul 5, 2014 at 6:06 PM UTC
Unconventional
capitalization and pronunciation is a thing of the past in this current state- im not perfect ill never be I need something a purpose a reason for living and a reason for leaving this part of the golden coast
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Apr 22, 2011
Apr 22, 2011 at 6:46 PM UTC
propose a toast
If you care: My life is a little box and I dreamt of a little box. The more I watched the less it was. In a solid white something. Lamps. A table. Clothes. Proper punctuation and capitalization. Unthinkable hopes and blasphemous suppositions. Some force that I can’t call God, just my sick dream-logic, blew it to ashes. My world-cube. My mirrors. My books. My awards and certificates and All my precious stanzas. Cinders and pronunciation alone remained. At this, I smiled and shook my soul with the Prophet. My own music burst out before me like mathematics (My very breath guided by an infinitely ascetic sweep) and like oil paint (in a world that glows like neon and breathes out empty space) and I awoke from whiteness. I fold myself into four like the secret of flight. But you don’t care.
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Mar 20, 2010
Mar 20, 2010 at 10:23 AM UTC
Theravada
i once dated a boy who found it "adorable" that i know how to change my headlights      fill my radiator      change the oil      and notice every stopsign as i'm halfway through it he dumped me via text before that there was a boy who loved my lack of first person capitalization      my over-use of metaphores and similies      the way i personify the night      and practice preforming poetry in the shower he took off into the sunset with my journal in his shoulder-sack and somewhere in between i stopped asking myself what it means threw up my hands      and learned to enjoy the ride
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Mar 11, 2014
Mar 11, 2014 at 9:27 PM UTC
there's that buddy holly song with the rollercoaster...
My name is bill, no capitalization, required, the Writer will be ill, soon, once he gets me, or my friends in the mail, my cousin e bill. Won’t be far behind, a marvel of technology! I am famed and legendary, but be wary, we attack in groups and bunches and don’t rely on hunches that you settled with us. We don’t make a fuss or a muss, we will cut off your cable, and internet, see? Hydro and Natural Gas you can ill afford to miss, we do pay dates, instead of play dates. So if you don’t pay up we are through with you, hope you can find your self in the dark, call us and we will talk until your cell phone loses power or they drop your call from their towering collection. So with affection, from us named bill, make a plan and a will, to pay us on time, after all it is your dime, until it is ours, all ours. You can take that to the bank, but we will do it for you too! Save you the trip... signed the bills P.S.(we were going to list a few, but we don’t name names, we just collect Presidents and Prime Ministers, they may be dead or royalty, but they are acceptable to faceless nameless ones,called bill(s), Thanks!) ©DWE042013
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Apr 23, 2013
Apr 23, 2013 at 10:41 PM UTC
What is in a name (unofficial Ode to bill)
The thing is, I always forget what it was I had realized after I realized it.   That sentence is how it feels. Like my mind doesn't really want an answer. Like it gave up on looking for one so long ago, at least consciously. There always remains a passive creep towards... Something. It's just YOU. Well then, who might You be?   I'm YOU. Three letter words with Special Capitalization Patterns remind You of God. Fill Your head with GOD. GOD. For those who believe in God, they say, GOD exists. What then of Me, rendered slowly and inevitably Fat With Disbelief? I am the milk in a bottle in a small town in Texas. I am the taste of nine-volt batteries. Watch ME shadow the Sun.
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Jan 3, 2014
Jan 3, 2014 at 3:03 AM UTC
Shadows of Me
~ *prelude. did you know that English stands alone as a written language requiring the capitalization of the word "I"... yet makes no similar provision for “we” or “us; a sad statement of self inflation.  it was after learning this that i abandoned the rule in my own poetry.* ~ my i’s averted, lowered, diverted, reduced in size, an exercise of large proportions; breaking down the me-isms, finding room for we-isms, to take the larger place; create an i for seeing, the case for simple, smaller being; no need to punctuate, instead eliminate this compulsion to inflate; ’tis my i-drop moment, my i-reducing ointment, these pupils are dilated, deflating i and me, enlarging we and thee; finding that in i-reduction, the eyes are widely opened, thus to better see, what i really need to be.
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Oct 10, 2016
Oct 10, 2016 at 12:49 PM UTC
a case for i drops
the humiliation attempting multiplication is a discrimination filling all emotions with frustration trying to send help of communication to a genius showing no blood relation in a habitation where Ax and Bx showing a result of Cx introducing a collaboration with letters sends a illustration to the mind causing hallucination just a pigment of imagination slight vibration desperately needing a detoxification of education to wrap your thoughts around this generation seeking the need for popularization but the mind is in a mental restriction start a petition to conquer the satan of calculation but so far no documentation of the closed corporation of the mad minded mathematician so you're living in devastation suffering while you work at a gas station from no graduation or thoughtful congratulations all because you forgot the capitalization for a math symbol on a test because of the lack of specification Make a reservation for the realization that math does not always make sense.
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Apr 1, 2014
Apr 1, 2014 at 7:14 PM UTC
uoykcufhtam
My cat’s interest is peaked by anything resembling the slick plastic crinkle of the treat bag. It’s the only time she will approach me. Besides when I actually have the treat bag. Then she is a tiger prowling around the corners of the kitchen. The depths of her eyes are eerie green pearls with shiny granite centers slowly meet mine that blue ball tinkling around her neck as she turns her gaze towards me. She can tell that I’m high. At the computer my mother is checking her mail slowly clicking scrolling click click she is hunting and pecking. Mrs. Palese, my third grade teacher would have been displeased because we always kept all our fingers on the keys asdfjkl; I think I’m one off Now she’d be staring at me sternly. A stern look. Her eyes are just pools that my memory can not fill but I remember her hair and I remember the time her husband died and we each made a casserole everyday as if lasagna would hold her at night and tell her she looked beautiful in the morning before she brushed her hair or washed her face. I remember she gave me my first communion. I would get another stern look for my Lack Of Capitalization. But I would care just as much as I did when that wafer hit my lips. I’ll give you a guess. My mother is still checking her e-mail. It almost seems impossible that she is concocting real words with that slow ebb and flow of fingers. But finally, the sun is almost up, she is done See you tomorrow, sweetie she whispers, like she could wake anyone up because it’s already tomorrow and she’s getting confused. The quick rattle of pill bottles and she’s gone. And maybe I the time stretched a little because there are still five hours until dawn.
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Oct 26, 2012
Oct 26, 2012 at 1:50 AM UTC
crinkle
My cat’s interest is peaked by anything resembling the slick plastic crinkle of the treat bag. It’s the only time she will approach me. Besides when I actually have the treat bag. Then she is a tiger prowling around the corners of the kitchen. The depths of her eyes are eerie green pearls with shiny granite centers slowly meet mine that blue ball tinkling around her neck as she turns her gaze towards me. She can tell that I’m high. At the computer my mother is checking her mail slowly clicking scrolling click click she is hunting and pecking. Mrs. Palese, my third grade teacher would have been displeased because we always kept all our fingers on the keys asdfjkl; I think I’m one off Now she’d be staring at me sternly. A stern look. Her eyes are just pools that my memory can not fill but I remember her hair and I remember the time her husband died and we each made a casserole everyday as if lasagna would hold her at night and tell her she looked beautiful in the morning before she brushed her hair or washed her face. I remember she gave me my first communion. I would get another stern look for my Lack Of Capitalization. But I would care just as much as I did when that wafer hit my lips. I’ll give you a guess. My mother is still checking her e-mail. It almost seems impossible that she is concocting real words with that slow ebb and flow of fingers. But finally, the sun is almost up, she is done See you tomorrow, sweetie she whispers, like she could wake anyone up because it’s already tomorrow and she’s getting confused. The quick rattle of pill bottles and she’s gone. And maybe I the time stretched a little because there are still five hours until dawn.
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life has never been held within the ( parentheses ) of breathing and the periods of sentences. see syntax holds no importance in terms of the soul and beating hearts,  and ( like ee cummings ) i have never held enough worth in the personal to capitalize myself but that was before i met You and realized that i have never felt  life (like being alive in your kiss) before that moment that You turned me into I and now with all of my well-formed syllables and crafted lines can’t seem to draw the image of this fate and the music of our   breath dripping across each others skin; no rhythm of words could ever manifest within the capitalization of We or the Beauty of Us. but tonight, as we crawl beneath covers my blood will approve of this garden between our curves and holding hands. I will grow the sun to cast an eternal summer within your smile (streetlamp halos have never been enough) but this poem will always say less than the tangible moments of glances grazes and the heart I carry with Me (carrying it in my heart) so it can grow like our family trees, reaching (higher than the atmosphere lifting her skirt to hold in the immensity) their branches into tributaries that flow into being Alive while the roots of your spirit sprout spores across my skin, an addiction to slowly sharpen the moment  into our mouths rising to breathe in the others breath our tongues folding into the song of each others taste thighs  and hands that grip at the stepping stones you laid across your stomach, while a phrase more powerful than ( I Love You) is carried within the gesture of your hips and the lifelines of your palm because i’ve  never liked the way my soul lumped beneath the confines of my skin or the way the muscles of my body fell limp stretched over bones until I met You. because You make me see Beauty and emulate the existence of love and when I try to remember a past without you, it’s less real than every played out future held in your eyes and our holding hands
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Jan 20, 2011
Jan 20, 2011 at 7:26 AM UTC
life has never been held...
life has never been held within the ( parentheses ) of breathing and the periods of sentences. see syntax holds no importance in terms of the soul and beating hearts,  and ( like ee cummings ) i have never held enough worth in the personal to capitalize myself but that was before i met You and realized that i have never felt  life (like being alive in your kiss) before that moment that You turned me into I and now with all of my well-formed syllables and crafted lines can’t seem to draw the image of this fate and the music of our   breath dripping across each others skin; no rhythm of words could ever manifest within the capitalization of We or the Beauty of Us. but tonight, as we crawl beneath covers my blood will approve of this garden between our curves and holding hands. I will grow the sun to cast an eternal summer within your smile (streetlamp halos have never been enough) but this poem will always say less than the tangible moments of glances grazes and the heart I carry with Me (carrying it in my heart) so it can grow like our family trees, reaching (higher than the atmosphere lifting her skirt to hold in the immensity) their branches into tributaries that flow into being Alive while the roots of your spirit sprout spores across my skin, an addiction to slowly sharpen the moment  into our mouths rising to breathe in the others breath our tongues folding into the song of each others taste thighs  and hands that grip at the stepping stones you laid across your stomach, while a phrase more powerful than ( I Love You) is carried within the gesture of your hips and the lifelines of your palm because i’ve  never liked the way my soul lumped beneath the confines of my skin or the way the muscles of my body fell limp stretched over bones until I met You. because You make me see Beauty and emulate the existence of love and when I try to remember a past without you, it’s less real than every played out future held in your eyes and our holding hands
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Leaving class during an internal lockdown Shooting elastic bands at the target we mounted on the wall Shooting elastic bands at our teacher's hat Hiding from our teacher with the hat Naming the robot we programed in class: Clive Bananagrams Ditching gym class Talking/lying our way out of trouble a lot lol Making elaborate plans to do very odd things (and playing pink panther music as well as mission impossible music when we did it) Putting mistletoe everywhere in the school at Christmas Texting quotes of the night Writing fictional stories and sending them over text to each other in parts at 2AM Writing poetry Learning the Greek Alphabet so we could play Greek Hangman Creating numerous extremely complicated codes where punctuation, capitalization, "accidental" smudges near words and how you pronounce certain words is significant. Always buying the same drink at Starbucks Eating a ridiculous amount of free samples at the Fro Yo place Skipping down the hall happily in our gothic spiked clothing. Just to confuse people. Watching the looks we got. Writing limericks in math class Playing Go Fish with our bus passes and when the teacher came over all he said was: Oh! Who's winning? Playing full tackle basketball...when we were supposed to be playing badminton Filling a friend's locker with stuffed animals while they were away and texting them to warn them we put a lion and bear in their locker Inside jokes: Whiteout, Whip-cream, We-are-the-crazy-people, **** that's a fiiiine shoulder! Pass the coke! Playing Quarto during Science class Playing boggle during religion I miss that grade. I wish things could go back to the way they were, but they really can't ever. I miss being so young and innocen- hahahahaha okay, not innocent but young and crazy. I miss when there were not scars on my arms and my soul.
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Dec 7, 2014
Dec 7, 2014 at 1:29 PM UTC
Memories from the best year ever so long ago
Leaving class during an internal lockdown Shooting elastic bands at the target we mounted on the wall Shooting elastic bands at our teacher's hat Hiding from our teacher with the hat Naming the robot we programed in class: Clive Bananagrams Ditching gym class Talking/lying our way out of trouble a lot lol Making elaborate plans to do very odd things (and playing pink panther music as well as mission impossible music when we did it) Putting mistletoe everywhere in the school at Christmas Texting quotes of the night Writing fictional stories and sending them over text to each other in parts at 2AM Writing poetry Learning the Greek Alphabet so we could play Greek Hangman Creating numerous extremely complicated codes where punctuation, capitalization, "accidental" smudges near words and how you pronounce certain words is significant. Always buying the same drink at Starbucks Eating a ridiculous amount of free samples at the Fro Yo place Skipping down the hall happily in our gothic spiked clothing. Just to confuse people. Watching the looks we got. Writing limericks in math class Playing Go Fish with our bus passes and when the teacher came over all he said was: Oh! Who's winning? Playing full tackle basketball...when we were supposed to be playing badminton Filling a friend's locker with stuffed animals while they were away and texting them to warn them we put a lion and bear in their locker Inside jokes: Whiteout, Whip-cream, We-are-the-crazy-people, **** that's a fiiiine shoulder! Pass the coke! Playing Quarto during Science class Playing boggle during religion I miss that grade. I wish things could go back to the way they were, but they really can't ever. I miss being so young and innocen- hahahahaha okay, not innocent but young and crazy. I miss when there were not scars on my arms and my soul.
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dreamingswanseyeaperturesboxboatsevergreenstarzenithgazing ~ while dreaming, i became a swan's eye, i was dreaming through both its apertures at once, clicking separately, click, click shuttering both sides from out a box, or from out a feathered, living boat, or two, severed visions superimposed: evergreen under, star over at a zenith gazing twice over paddling under ~
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Jul 15, 2012
Jul 15, 2012 at 5:02 PM UTC
not all languages have capitalization, or spaces beween words, i think (10/11w)
Adorned with light ****** to this bleak existence Aware of self serving secrets My muse, my god, my love Cast away these shadows Omnipotent, omniscient, omnipresent May you watch over me until we can be together again Everlasting love; it never fades Help me to be strong as I wait to join you again Only time and space divide our union Masks off, truths told, hand in hand we walk Eternal love; it lasts forever
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Jun 10, 2015
Jun 10, 2015 at 7:09 AM UTC
capitalization
i will ban syntax grammar i will banish sentences phrases clauses i will evict capitalization i will exile all punctuation i will relegate all of these to the circular file of written expression it is time at long last for words to squirm and falter but ultimately prevail in their singular splendid glory
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Nov 30, 2015
Nov 30, 2015 at 4:48 PM UTC
rebel without a clause
i only write in capital letters for a purpose when my words are silent, i don't speak up capitalization is symbolism for power for cries and outbursts of dreams spread forth and shot down because of the american dream i only write in capital letters WHEN I WANT TO BE HEARD to put forth an emphasis on my actions, to mask true emotions through my powerful speech i want to write your name in capitals just so you know what you mean to me (YOU) (YOU) (YOU) YOU are ENOUGH
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May 11, 2015
May 11, 2015 at 8:14 AM UTC
the story behind my lowercase alphabet
Correctly speaking... We do not call an animal "it". We do not call a baby "it". We do not call he or she "it." We do not call ourselves "it." And what is most strangely odd to me, is that... "correctly" speaking: We do not call [G/g]od "it". -- We call [G/god] "he". He. When we absolutely know what "he" means in the English language; it means that the object being represented by the word is in fact, a male. But even to call [G/god] "she" would not satisfy the feminist in me. For "she" would refer to [G/god] as a female, of course. How are we to identify someone or something to contain a *** and gender, when we have no evidence or implications whatsoever of this speculation? The Bible states He, His, and Him, repeatedly, no doubt, but this lack of reference was the only known outlet to Scribes. The capitalization [G], as to give [G/god] a name -- humanization & personalization, but this is more of a veil to shield our own humane needs, because in observation, it appears that this given Name was given to help our immediate understanding of the subject; an identifier. Of course, everything should have an identity; that is what a noun is, after all. If it has a voice, and words, and advice, it must be a person.. We say. If it can teach and listen and punish, it must be a species, a being. Well, indeed, it is. But not in the way you and I   normally think of this notion. And should [G/god] be a proper noun? Well, of course.. It is almighty! (Notice the "it".) So, God. Just like other proper nouns, it is the name of a name within a name. Ocelot, for example, is a cat within the noun "cat". BUT God stands alone... It is no noun within a noun. Or is IT? "God is a chariot" -- stated many places. "He flows throughout all, within all." (There's that "he" again..) It is true! God is a chariot! God is in me, and in you; it is in everything; it makes everything; it breaks everything; it is. You are, for it flows in you and is a part of you. And if you exude this piece of your soul, it will be obvious that God is no he, nor a she, but it is something inside, waiting to be shown. It is something to be seen physically-- through action and care--through art and stare. Anything imaginable, God is in it, which if I look back at this text and think correctly, you are in it. You are everything, because you are a part of everything, because you ARE God; You are the creator of your world, and the eyes of how you see it; As am I. So start acting like it, because everything is an extension of your inner-self. This is a thing that should not be looked over, and should not be considered above you, although it is a higher power, it is a power within you, that you can achieve. Nothing worth achieving is low; you must rise up. Be godly.
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Jan 15, 2014
Jan 15, 2014 at 12:42 PM UTC
So, God
Correctly speaking... We do not call an animal "it". We do not call a baby "it". We do not call he or she "it." We do not call ourselves "it." And what is most strangely odd to me, is that... "correctly" speaking: We do not call [G/g]od "it". -- We call [G/god] "he". He. When we absolutely know what "he" means in the English language; it means that the object being represented by the word is in fact, a male. But even to call [G/god] "she" would not satisfy the feminist in me. For "she" would refer to [G/god] as a female, of course. How are we to identify someone or something to contain a *** and gender, when we have no evidence or implications whatsoever of this speculation? The Bible states He, His, and Him, repeatedly, no doubt, but this lack of reference was the only known outlet to Scribes. The capitalization [G], as to give [G/god] a name -- humanization & personalization, but this is more of a veil to shield our own humane needs, because in observation, it appears that this given Name was given to help our immediate understanding of the subject; an identifier. Of course, everything should have an identity; that is what a noun is, after all. If it has a voice, and words, and advice, it must be a person.. We say. If it can teach and listen and punish, it must be a species, a being. Well, indeed, it is. But not in the way you and I   normally think of this notion. And should [G/god] be a proper noun? Well, of course.. It is almighty! (Notice the "it".) So, God. Just like other proper nouns, it is the name of a name within a name. Ocelot, for example, is a cat within the noun "cat". BUT God stands alone... It is no noun within a noun. Or is IT? "God is a chariot" -- stated many places. "He flows throughout all, within all." (There's that "he" again..) It is true! God is a chariot! God is in me, and in you; it is in everything; it makes everything; it breaks everything; it is. You are, for it flows in you and is a part of you. And if you exude this piece of your soul, it will be obvious that God is no he, nor a she, but it is something inside, waiting to be shown. It is something to be seen physically-- through action and care--through art and stare. Anything imaginable, God is in it, which if I look back at this text and think correctly, you are in it. You are everything, because you are a part of everything, because you ARE God; You are the creator of your world, and the eyes of how you see it; As am I. So start acting like it, because everything is an extension of your inner-self. This is a thing that should not be looked over, and should not be considered above you, although it is a higher power, it is a power within you, that you can achieve. Nothing worth achieving is low; you must rise up. Be godly.
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The Sage is short and compose of circles. Flattened circles, not ovular. A roundness that is not portly nor lean Just round, simply circular, simply his shape. The Sage speaks with contrasting sharpness, A voice angular, particularly his laugh. Cacklingly Angular. Unexpected laughs seem demonic. But The Sage is wise and sometimes even holy. The Sage talks about fuel to push young artists. Graduate schools, challenges, gasoline to blaze and extinguish. I consider the role of Serious Artist, capitalization so telling And am curious if that is me, if it could ever be. The Sage knows but wants me to search He knows but isn’t telling You’ll have to wait, the Sage says. I’ll show you, soon, when you stop searching so hard.
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Feb 3, 2014
Feb 3, 2014 at 9:56 PM UTC
The Sage
Two Spruce trees stand, one sits. Three Ravens Caw, one sings. Four men contemplate the future, one is.
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Apr 12, 2013
Apr 12, 2013 at 2:27 AM UTC
Capitalization within actions
When I want to write And the words are churlish and Sluggishly slow in coming - And even when they come They linger at the door-frame And rub their soft cheeks Against the painted grain - I read in a special voice. Sometimes it's the voice Of my English teacher from Junior class. We didn't get along, But not a word passed her Lips that wasn't as gilded and Mellifluous as edible gold-leaf On a chocolate-chili sundae. Or the voice belongs to Rives, who plucks meaning Out of words like candy Out of an Easter egg. He savors every syllable Like it's an annual treat And lines them up neatly In his throat like some kind Of spoken-word songbird, But the things I write are Least likely to be read aloud By Rives and my English teacher. (And reading in their voices Seems too proud.) So I pen The last of the stragglers down And clear the alien voices out Of my own (often sore) throat. I enjoy my words, wallow in Phrases, and praise lines of Alliteration about as often as A soldier runs past shelter Helter-skelter and takes his Chances with unfriendly crosshairs. My voice quavers, quivers, shakes, And shivers when I read my work. I find every letter and line And nuance absurd, but I keep myself in check. Editing is A controlled demolition of Punctuation and capitalization; Sometimes the "submit" Button is hard to hit after Splaying one more page of Myself into crisp computer print. But I breathe and repeat The words that are lodged Under my ribcage like a Stray bullet: "You are not Superlative; you are not Fantastic; you will not be Famous; you will not be Any better for a long time And even then you may be Terrible, unbearable, and Infinitesimal, But everyone is." click
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Dec 28, 2010
Dec 28, 2010 at 10:04 PM UTC
Heavy Editing
When I want to write And the words are churlish and Sluggishly slow in coming - And even when they come They linger at the door-frame And rub their soft cheeks Against the painted grain - I read in a special voice. Sometimes it's the voice Of my English teacher from Junior class. We didn't get along, But not a word passed her Lips that wasn't as gilded and Mellifluous as edible gold-leaf On a chocolate-chili sundae. Or the voice belongs to Rives, who plucks meaning Out of words like candy Out of an Easter egg. He savors every syllable Like it's an annual treat And lines them up neatly In his throat like some kind Of spoken-word songbird, But the things I write are Least likely to be read aloud By Rives and my English teacher. (And reading in their voices Seems too proud.) So I pen The last of the stragglers down And clear the alien voices out Of my own (often sore) throat. I enjoy my words, wallow in Phrases, and praise lines of Alliteration about as often as A soldier runs past shelter Helter-skelter and takes his Chances with unfriendly crosshairs. My voice quavers, quivers, shakes, And shivers when I read my work. I find every letter and line And nuance absurd, but I keep myself in check. Editing is A controlled demolition of Punctuation and capitalization; Sometimes the "submit" Button is hard to hit after Splaying one more page of Myself into crisp computer print. But I breathe and repeat The words that are lodged Under my ribcage like a Stray bullet: "You are not Superlative; you are not Fantastic; you will not be Famous; you will not be Any better for a long time And even then you may be Terrible, unbearable, and Infinitesimal, But everyone is." click
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you are the color in between all of the other colors you don't care about the spectrum, you are an entity i don't love you to the moon and back, i love you more than all of the stars in the galaxy i love the way you capture everything i've ever loved you are darkness you are light you have depth you are whole but that doesn't mean you're perfect you are unlike anything i've ever seen you are magical you are the feeling i got when my dad tucked me in at night you are as sweet as the memory of me dancing and singing in the rain up and down the street i grew up on you are beautiful but that word is so cliché it could never define you you are something that i've dreamed of you are like déjà vu you aren't like the nightmares that follow me into the daylight you are what holds out a hand and tells them to stop you are the feeling of having ten blankets on you but still being comfortably cool you are the nicest pillow i've ever laid my head upon you are the reason my tears stop pouring but sometimes you are the reason they pour because you are so complex and i long to understand you and fear i never truly will because you are grey you are everything and nothing empty and full the space in between you're indescribable so this poem with incomplete sentences and no capitalization can't come close to everything that you mean to me you believe you are a spec of nothingness and that people can walk by you and not remember you but you're unforgettable you're captivating you're the emotion in my ellipses you're... my favorite color
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Sep 9, 2018
Sep 9, 2018 at 1:45 AM UTC
grey is now my favorite color
you are the color in between all of the other colors you don't care about the spectrum, you are an entity i don't love you to the moon and back, i love you more than all of the stars in the galaxy i love the way you capture everything i've ever loved you are darkness you are light you have depth you are whole but that doesn't mean you're perfect you are unlike anything i've ever seen you are magical you are the feeling i got when my dad tucked me in at night you are as sweet as the memory of me dancing and singing in the rain up and down the street i grew up on you are beautiful but that word is so cliché it could never define you you are something that i've dreamed of you are like déjà vu you aren't like the nightmares that follow me into the daylight you are what holds out a hand and tells them to stop you are the feeling of having ten blankets on you but still being comfortably cool you are the nicest pillow i've ever laid my head upon you are the reason my tears stop pouring but sometimes you are the reason they pour because you are so complex and i long to understand you and fear i never truly will because you are grey you are everything and nothing empty and full the space in between you're indescribable so this poem with incomplete sentences and no capitalization can't come close to everything that you mean to me you believe you are a spec of nothingness and that people can walk by you and not remember you but you're unforgettable you're captivating you're the emotion in my ellipses you're... my favorite color
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ah gotdang im tired of all these ******** not using proper grammar for goodness sakes this is brutal i desire to capitalize but in my minds eye the goal was irony irony for all the people who intend and all who dont to ***** up the english language as many wont its funny im not mad just be glad that we can type in the first place and read and write and understand and fight for what we believe in whether or not we are wrong or right in the end this is for you dear vandals dear robbers dear crooks robbing the english language of its odd sort of beauty its backasswards ridiculous difficult wonderful beauty whether young or old you make me squirm in the worst sort of way i love you God bless you children because its taking everything in me not to yell at you instead look here ill join your ranks i will mess up eery single grammar right and do write by eery grammar wrong no commas one capitalization no proper i's and only one apostrophe no quotations no brackets, no parenthesis no subtlety only irony and me writhing on the floor bad grammar kills
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Mar 29, 2013
Mar 29, 2013 at 11:56 AM UTC
I wonder if I lack hits because the names of my poems are so odd
theres something so final about a period which is as it should be commas always get in the way coming and going like anxious insects trying to make themselves important as they scatter over a page already overrun with too many words question marks have a slightly swooping profile curve just above a period theyre kind of elegant they remind me of a swan with a regal attitude i saw once on a pretty pond parentheses embrace words like **** curves and brackets are like steel gray bookends fencing words in exclamation points are so abrupt and rude and angry like an outburst in a classroom like fireworks in a funeral parlor dont mess with them they mean business hyphens dashes colons semicolons apostrophes and quotation marks that surround what we say and dont forget the ellipses that take the place of words we omit sometimes i like to write stories and poems with no punctuation no capitalization no grammatical rationale whatsoever dare i ask how did i do
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Oct 27, 2015
Oct 27, 2015 at 3:23 PM UTC
a syntactical theorem
This is lies! All of it! Wait, what? You want me To tell you how I feel? Are you insane? How could I Possibly do such a thing? Oh don't get me wrong If course I want to But don't you see I can't ? Don't you? I'm shouting now, screaming, But how am I supposed to tell you that? With capitalization? A polite exclamation mark? No! It's like a silent movie With an experimental soundtrack. Yet if I write nothing, you will think All is well. So I must go on, it's better to be Misunderstood than ignored (or is it?)
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Jan 12, 2014
Jan 12, 2014 at 9:21 PM UTC
Shout