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Lady Narnia May 2018
Stranded for years upon this tormenting land
My heart yearns to leave the forsaken sand
With new wings spread, I will freely fly
To touch the sun, the beautiful sky

Determined to escape, I diligently build
Using every last brainpower I've willed
Day by day, feather by feather
This will be my greatest creation ever

Finally, after so many dreadful years
And all the painstaking tears
My wings are complete, I'm ready to soar
Standing before a cliff, I see the new door

Taking flight, I battle the wind
Reaching the sky, it's more than I imagined
Watching the world below me disappear
I'm suddenly embraced by immense fear

The distance increases ever so morosely
and danger lurking, more and more closely
Doubt enters my mind, I quiver and cower
Will I reach my goal or lose my power?

My wings are melting, the sun is near
Flashes of memories of all I hold dear
This must be the end, I'm holding my breath
But all is blurry, this must be my death

I find myself upon cool, green grass
The sun is gone, what was to pass?
Underneath the moonlight, upon new land
I notice something different about my hand

A black imprint on the tip of my finger
Inspired by the story of Daedalus and Icarus with a mixture of a overcoming my personal, overwhelming challenge.
Rebecca Bacon May 2018
Only a fool would e'r fall for you dear,
You who blaze at ten thousand degrees.
And he was a great fool who flew up much too near,
Just to fall to his death in the deepest of seas.

You must be so proud to have been the one,
To have caused him to plummet so fast.
Did the look on his face make you wish it undone,
Arms out grasping for you and his eyes all aghast.

Daedalus' child, O why did you fly
Where your father bid never to go?
Did you hear the soft call of the bright azure sky,
Though with sweet honeyed words it foretold only woe?

Crete far behind you with wings on your backs,
You grew prideful in freedom's warm gaze.
Trusting only in wings made of feathers and wax,
And your heart deep in love with the sun's deadly rays.


This be the lesson to those who have ears,
Heed your forefather's unceasing call.
The loud call which first came afore Daedalus' tears,
Warns that pride always goeth before the downfall.
Maja W J May 2018
Icarus flew too close to the sun
not because he was
prideful
inattentive
or reckless

it was because he had talked to the sun
and the sun to him
promises of joy, of light for forever
but the sun didn’t need to keep his promise
for the sun is a god
and gods are above the rules
and so Icarus
fell
fell
fell
into the ocean
I was (obviously) inspired by the myth of Icarus and by all the beautiful ones on here :)
M Manese Apr 2018
loving you is
like                 that moment
                        Icarus flew too close
                                             to
the sun
another twitter musing. @michellemmanese
Crystal Peterson Apr 2018
Your father gave you wings to fly on
Your lover pulled you towards her light
Your mother, Nature, reclaimed your height
But your daughters, Inspiration - Hope, live evermore!
Crystal Peterson Apr 2018
To be as you were
To live as you flew
To know the heavens as you do
I'd risk the fall
I'd fare the flight
And meet the ground
Burnt, bathed in light
Crystal Peterson Apr 2018
Icarus
O' paragon of my dreams
My aspirations given wings
Our tales tailor you as a foolish boy
Yet who succeeds, he who does not strive
Regardless of fear
Towards thine highest height?
Rebel Heart Apr 2018
Daedalus once warned
Don't fly too close to the sun
Life's but a childish game
We all play for fun
(Gem from the lyric wall made into a song I have yet to hear ~BM)

(Front Page 2/11/2018)
carminayasmin Apr 2018
nurtured in the arms of another's.
birthed in homes inside their minds,
and told to stay low
told we have wings -
not told to use them.
because they might fail us.

our dreams might fail us.

so our sight blocked, to only the
array of sunset.
we sleep through sunrise
- at least they do.

        but see we,
we await, we wait until the
sun breaks way,
swallow the waves
eat another into oblivion.
whisked together as the sun turns to us
when she tires from her previous scene
she livens at us.

            do not anticipate until she bares full.
do not hesitate until she kisses your iris to black.
fly out to her
and see if wings dissolve like we were told they would.
see if you are dreaming
discover if you are awake.

feel how close to death you are
taste it, but swallow your presence.
when she begins to melt you.
remember that they told you that burns will ****.
who told you the sun will ****** our home, when her end comes.

fear not. fear is your friend.
the sun  knows she can impale you so
deep with radiance.
but do not fear,

because last night was when you dreamt of the sun -
and now is when she killed you.
because you were too near.

to the dream.
to follow them will thrill.
and **** once you love them
but what won't ****.

so visit the sun if you dream of her
let your dreams burn you.
end you
because at least you tasted them.
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