#concrete poems on Hello Poetry

Àŧùl Sep 2016

My ex-girlfriend used to wake up scared,
More than often it had happened.
She used to tell about her nightmares,
She was really explicit about the dreams.
Oh yes, I remember each and every thing.
I remember when she told me about one,
I often sensed her strong interest in it.
More I deduced so after it is over,
My ex-girlfriend was a nymphomaniac.

Japanese Lantern Form
Concrete Poetry
HP Poem #1144
©Atul Kaushal

#poetry #*** #was #she #more #concrete #form #often #japanese #lantern

Àŧùl Sep 2016

Cup of Life

Don't torture me like this, oh my life,
Have mercy on my crumbling stature,
The towering height has now bent,
More than a lot it has dwarfed me,
I have gotten dizzy on the descent,
The load of expectations defeated me,
Don't you remember these hands,
Tinier they had been so cute,
Oh mother, oh father, oh,
Oh, I am so tired now,
Hold me in your arms,
Lest I fall into the oblivion.

Cup of life concrete poetry.
My HP Poem #1143
©Atul Kaushal

#poetry #poet #this #poems #me #have #like #concrete #oblivion #dont

Àŧùl Aug 2016

Kaiku

Just why, baby...
But why, oh baby why?
Ditched me, just         because
      I could not               find any time
                                  Free from my
                        Efforts to get a
         Decent life
For both
Of us to
Spend
Our
Life
Dear
Love?

A Haiku of a different kind.

Concrete Poetry

Kaiku simply means "why?" in the Tapori dialect of urban South India.

My HP Poem #1110
©Atul Kaushal

#poetry #funny #concrete #south #india #dialect #kaiku #mumbaia #tapori #hyderabadi

Dark Delusion Aug 2016

Capricorn

I                                nights.
am                        cold   Snow
  born                  and         flakes
    In                 snow            fall
    the               of                   in
     winter      time                 shape
      month   The                the  of snow  shaping
          January.            pure    white                gloves,
                            white        stars,                     warm
                         colour.          shining                     and
                   I am                    bright                      clothes
                   born                          In                   Thick
                 In                                  the           light.
            Capricorn.                               street

Just wanted to try it, i don't like how i wrote it but i like the shape of it :)

#winter #white #born #snow #cold #concrete #january #shape #capricorn

Alta Justice Aug 2016

Running Song

Feet smack on the concrete floor
don't know what we're running for
sooner or later gon be queen of the world

Running from nothing
Escape to Infinity
Where it ends
I don't know
but even so
I just go

#running #run #nothing #song #concrete #infinity

b e mccomb Jul 2016

the unmovable pedestrian of cleanliness

i'm not showering any
more frequently than
i typically do

but every time i step in
that bathtub i swear
a whole day goes by

the water falling
turns into soft
concrete

and the drain
stops up and
i'm standing

ankle deep in
a brand new
sidewalk

soap suds running down
my legs and pooling
upon an unwalked path

and heaven only knows
how long before it all cracks
and i'm free.

Copyright 2/6/16 by B. E. McComb

#mind #concrete #sidewalk #shower #poetfreak

SøułSurvivør Jul 2016

LOVE BOMB

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ON THE UNEXPECTING
A BOMB IS SET IN
WAIT • IT CAN
SHATTER ANYONE
RICH • POOR • SMALL
OR GREAT • THERE IS
METHOD TO ITS EVIL
THERE IS FALLOUT IN
ITS WAKE • THERE IS
|NO RECIPROCATION|
THERE IS NO GIVE "N
TAKE • THERE IS ONLY
SELF-OBSESSION THE
BOMB OF POISON KIND
IT'LL MESS 'ROUND IN
OUR BODY IT'LL MESS
AROUND WITHIN THE
MIND • HAVE A FUNNY
FEELING CRAZY BUT IT
|BE TRUE • THE LOVE|
BOMB DROPPED IS A
NARCISSIST AND
GROUND 0 IS
YOU**

SoulSurvivor
(C) 7/20/2016

I hope this turns out!

#love #truth #life #concrete #bomb #irony #narcissists #hellopoetry107

Dan Gilbert Jul 2016

Photocopier

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#poetry #art #experimental #concrete #office #ubu