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"externals" poems
City lamps in clusters of concrete On 18th and Sherman street The cars pass by scanning me Each unsound engine roaring Darting pupils I feel it on my externals On my lips and phalanges Intruding glances cascading over my silhouette Deja-vu-like resemblances, strange Sunken cheeks look bizarre and blotchy as the socket drains something toxic to the veins that's permeated the future in an instant, like a comet, encandescent and shimmering like a scale, the awareness fades Like some dreary mirage I remember those little band aids Vintage carnival tickets discarded on the scratchy ground.. Blue-violet bruises The paradox of pleasure A vague creature in it's discomfort sitting in defiance and quivering my sentences It reminded me of those incandescent bugs that smush into Chryslers With a curled lip, bulging eyes and ******* up tongue... Antennaes intertwined like Twizzlers Making peace with all that's stung as the windshield wipers turn on Some black tar-smack-oil- ****** My generation consists of inheriting environmental destruction and mal-parenting Global warming. Animal extinction. Polluting the oceans. Deforestation. Biting shards off night-time to suffice for the daily pangs Shuffling the dregs of karma to grow roots and vines all about the room It's not Winter yet Under this morning dew I envision it in my mind A crystal ball vision contorting into smoke I caught it in my breath Catatonically hanging A turtle with it's legs bending toward the sky Searching for my tribe and a pulse on this Earth in sentient souls
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Aug 12, 2017
Aug 12, 2017 at 8:18 PM UTC
Twizzlers
City lamps in clusters of concrete On 18th and Sherman street The cars pass by scanning me Each unsound engine roaring Darting pupils I feel it on my externals On my lips and phalanges Intruding glances cascading over my silhouette Deja-vu-like resemblances, strange Sunken cheeks look bizarre and blotchy as the socket drains something toxic to the veins that's permeated the future in an instant, like a comet, encandescent and shimmering like a scale, the awareness fades Like some dreary mirage I remember those little band aids Vintage carnival tickets discarded on the scratchy ground.. Blue-violet bruises The paradox of pleasure A vague creature in it's discomfort sitting in defiance and quivering my sentences It reminded me of those incandescent bugs that smush into Chryslers With a curled lip, bulging eyes and ******* up tongue... Antennaes intertwined like Twizzlers Making peace with all that's stung as the windshield wipers turn on Some black tar-smack-oil- ****** My generation consists of inheriting environmental destruction and mal-parenting Global warming. Animal extinction. Polluting the oceans. Deforestation. Biting shards off night-time to suffice for the daily pangs Shuffling the dregs of karma to grow roots and vines all about the room It's not Winter yet Under this morning dew I envision it in my mind A crystal ball vision contorting into smoke I caught it in my breath Catatonically hanging A turtle with it's legs bending toward the sky Searching for my tribe and a pulse on this Earth in sentient souls
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when you love, you’re a country, pierced by daily border exchanged crossings, to your closest neighbor and though, one rerun~returns home by night, to your prior defining borderlines, somehow the externals of the container has had its internality's modified for the lines that prior defined have altered by passing the point of prior, now by thousands of tiny holes breaching the thickened protective lining, by love punches ‘n kisses of pinprick punctures the resistance, pulverized <> you are changed, new language combos spoken, embrace another with a bilingual tonguing, a real treat to entreat each other and that hyphen, that little tiny linear ~ punctuation mark is reflecting your creativity of a Singular Duality it is mark that speaks to a new U~no individuality, blended and connected somehow a duo of someone’s pulverized lines forms a single stronger chord first a puncture then a patching finally an adhesion pleasuring and a new working word: composite the opposite of opposite*
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Nov 14, 2024
Nov 14, 2024 at 7:26 AM UTC
The Pulverized Line (the opposite)
*those parts of speech learned very early taken for granted now might serve to trigger an entry to Happiness to Beauty to Awareness.. subject and object are the benchmarks of the dualistic world and with dissolution we become Aware.. the object's existence is our senses a simple stimulation and nothing more.. with externals dissolved we then find the subject has no object and so makes an exit leaving only That which we are...*
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Jul 29, 2014
Jul 29, 2014 at 10:39 PM UTC
The Grammar Secret
There is a new world out there For people like u and me A world where we won't be measured by fickle standards u see A world where "love" means Embracing the person whole heartedly Where different abilities and minds Melt and mould and become one Where caring takes a new dimension Where hope is forever new Where the sun shines brightly each day And brings promises anew Where fighting the world does not drain you out And you can say what u feel without wondering how u'll be judged Where u can be childlike in your innocence And maintain the purity of your emotions. Where u don't need to twist yourself to fit someone's frame. And where u can worship the Lord again Where u can stand tall and proclaim His love for all to see And you know you'll be backed by HIM Where u can trust ur fellow men blindly Cause the one who sees Knows your heart and feels The truth of your words Where externals fade before his gaze Where liars need to fear his face. Such a world beckons So I say Do not give up your loving Do not give up on your friend Do not try to fit in someone else's mind Be yourself, your purest self For that's what u were deigned to be For If that's not what the Lord intended Then his saving grace you'll see
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Sep 28, 2014
Sep 28, 2014 at 12:49 AM UTC
New World
Somewhere between cradle and grave. Where sway is a true Libran. Weights are shifted back and forth to keep a balance. And I lost mine. and tho my stance tilts as does a tip toe. As a ****** walk way over gushing flow. Where externals mimic an outstretched horizon. I’ll not be propped. This is me. This is me here. This is me there. Curious…
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Jun 17, 2013
Jun 17, 2013 at 7:02 PM UTC
Curious...
*you ask why I linger here long and do not return to the centers of power and human endeavor… it’s all but a life of conditioning and structures…* if you ask me, human enterprise and human life are tiresome…and mediocre… it is a life of basics and self-interests and finger-pointing and it is all partial and focused that grapples with ******* of the parts but misses the whole… and one never sees the hubris within; the errors, it seems, are always elsewhere… but see, there is no change without the change in oneself and so it is that I linger here long to observe and to see within myself to see within, and so understand… for within this chaos of one within one there is always but a pointing to the externals and so the world goes on, and has always been a world of groups built on mutual lies so one can feel special and chosen and blessed and recipient of Highest Revelations within the group and feel O so right and feel O so safe and feel O so true… there is always but a feeling – but not the thing… there is but conditioning and a building and that structure is added to on and on… and so I linger amongst these mountains and streams and trees and the open and I observe these with no preconceptions and linger in that which comes of no future or past and I observe myself, my mind, my thoughts and what it is that is called ‘I’… and so I linger here long…
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Jul 27, 2011
Jul 27, 2011 at 5:55 PM UTC
man in the open
Literally a perfect situation: approach the stupid guy. He's all alone and vulnerable and adorable but what? I just let my sorry excuse for confidence slide away into the back row like the awkward teen I am lurking, admiring from afar obsessing like a **** starved weasel with a pint of bacon fat until my worry muscles are broken and ripped and sore and bleeding and my brains must be bashed out with hammers to get rid of the suffering the stupid, stupid thoughts and self-reproach worth just measured by a stupid stupid boy's approval or lack there of of caring. How cute, my ignorance of importance my value on externals and stupid stupid desires that are never going to happen, and yes I am ranting like a little girl in a diary and yes I am putting it all out for any unfortunate reader and yes I have zero *****
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May 30, 2012
May 30, 2012 at 8:34 PM UTC
No *****
*Wicked wicked wicked my mind That feels so unkind Unkind my thoughts That damage my heart Damaged my heart that burns my tongue Burned my tongue that lashes out More enemies than friends have made I How trapped I feel inside The walls and bonds of your presumption How evil this mind that sways between hate and devotion How terrible this burden I must bear Cast on my shoulder For a fault not mine Delving deep on those wounds Which cruel men with their lust inflicted Broken the tender bow of my spirit Set me off on a course of anger Hatred buried so deep beneath Seething waiting to explode But what explodes is not me It’s the anger and the wrong That should not have been Where were u when I was abused? Where were u when as a doormat I was used? What is it that now can be done? To right a wrong To right a spirit that stands forlorn. Damaged beyond words am I Damaged in my thinking Damaged emotions course through my veins Burning, scalding, bearing pain. See that wound, that moment, that started it all You can see for your eyes behold all. Robbed of innocence Trapped in blackmail Jilted love just for gains No one saw that person beneath No one saw that  crushed soul No one saw that  waif of a girl Longing, hoping for true love’s gold Running in directions for a sweet word Madly following dust for pearls You saw, u were there You are here now To you nothing is hidden All externals are just veils Your eyes can rend them all Your word can heal it all How hardened am I Wickedness seeped in every act. I don’t wanna be like that I don’t wanna be hated I don’t want nothing I want to be free From this madness overtaking me Stretch out your hand and calm my soul Hold my trembling heart in your fold Show me how things can be right Only the one who has made me has that sight…*
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Aug 31, 2014
Aug 31, 2014 at 11:57 PM UTC
Wickedness..trapped inside.
*Wicked wicked wicked my mind That feels so unkind Unkind my thoughts That damage my heart Damaged my heart that burns my tongue Burned my tongue that lashes out More enemies than friends have made I How trapped I feel inside The walls and bonds of your presumption How evil this mind that sways between hate and devotion How terrible this burden I must bear Cast on my shoulder For a fault not mine Delving deep on those wounds Which cruel men with their lust inflicted Broken the tender bow of my spirit Set me off on a course of anger Hatred buried so deep beneath Seething waiting to explode But what explodes is not me It’s the anger and the wrong That should not have been Where were u when I was abused? Where were u when as a doormat I was used? What is it that now can be done? To right a wrong To right a spirit that stands forlorn. Damaged beyond words am I Damaged in my thinking Damaged emotions course through my veins Burning, scalding, bearing pain. See that wound, that moment, that started it all You can see for your eyes behold all. Robbed of innocence Trapped in blackmail Jilted love just for gains No one saw that person beneath No one saw that  crushed soul No one saw that  waif of a girl Longing, hoping for true love’s gold Running in directions for a sweet word Madly following dust for pearls You saw, u were there You are here now To you nothing is hidden All externals are just veils Your eyes can rend them all Your word can heal it all How hardened am I Wickedness seeped in every act. I don’t wanna be like that I don’t wanna be hated I don’t want nothing I want to be free From this madness overtaking me Stretch out your hand and calm my soul Hold my trembling heart in your fold Show me how things can be right Only the one who has made me has that sight…*
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Of what can I control? What depends on me? Patient contemplation, Makes it clear to see. To toil with externals, Is priceless time just spent, Like staring at a clock, but still, In awe of where the time went. So let me deal internal. To what is mine...let me give care. Let my soul be self sufficient. In spite of all which it must bear. Let me be quiet and reflective; A disciplined citadel. Write and read and practice, No passion trite compel. And even aims that promise despair, I'll usher right in...if needed to. For it all leads to my freedom, And my quest for what is true.
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Aug 15, 2010
Aug 15, 2010 at 6:09 PM UTC
The Quest For Truth Lies Within
***Our minds project and name: this realization is rumbling underneath our shadows and struggle.. Is it not amazing that externals are projections awaiting..but not long.. for their names eagerly provided by heady minds.. This realization reverses our notions..those heady beliefs of separation as wisely undeniable.. Although the rumbling often seems fleeting and faint not reportable in shadowy newsdays real Happiness is found seeping in...***
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Sep 22, 2016
Sep 22, 2016 at 1:20 PM UTC
HEADY MINDS
*in the Rye where much is phony.. All the externals those shells postures and lies.. The darkness covered life force.. Dialogue suffers the desire lost to honor difference then to discover common elevation.. Phony inside knows phony outside as with good.. Perspective reigns Shades inside shade outside.. This is pain perhaps birthpain a new adam with new composition...*
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Feb 3, 2014
Feb 3, 2014 at 9:54 PM UTC
Catcher
Mass times acceleration Disbalance and violation If I had any, I would use, but Externals force me to choose. How far may the rays of light Travel in the pit of void? Will their speed exceed indeed The power of the figures' horde? Will immortal seeds become of age Under a brighter star's main stage? Will their specters match in peace Or timeframes collide without ease... I make notes, files, but no coins, Breaking what's been left to break, Coining words instead of points Breathing vacuum, air is fake. Ordering helps me no more, Trade hardly yields me any score, The grid of matter took my dream, Stole my youth and flawed my piece. I thought that any knowledge is power, Now I realize it's like any flower, Philosophers love and grow it, Calculators show and throw it. Beauty, balance, free will They all are prey to evil.
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Jun 14, 2017
Jun 14, 2017 at 6:20 AM UTC
illogic
Reduced to a single point Within and without I know, I am but one single speck. I feel it now in my mind; My thinking soul. Not in conventional terms but, Let my thinking heart guide thee In understanding me. Nothing forms Like air let loose. We drift, as infinitismal nothings, Following from within like a painter's brush into reality- Our own canvas are we. Superceded by phantoms of ghosts Ethereal blurs take their geometry, Exist within A euclidity. We weave ourselves in the hairs of our god's Nebulous strands dreaming outwards from the thinking hearts, The hearts that make us but we form- This integration of it into nothing Of nothing... to something. Spontaneously alive Digital sparks that programmed their own world's Existing within limits self imposed. We perceive from internals to externals But accepting truths built falsely They hold, like all Straw houses crumbling and shrinking, Till they fade inwards, collapsing into reality the painters brush falters. It cannot go on, it cannot paint finer than its hairs, only grander, out, bigger, falser. Our eternity is merely a fraction of our own It extends infinitely we cannot go... With it. Within these truths I find myself With these fundamentals I paint myself into the world With these dreamlike strands of hair I weave myself. Into the fabric of your mind, you are part of this now! You always were, and never will be.
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Jan 23, 2018
Jan 23, 2018 at 11:59 AM UTC
Dreamer's Phaneron
In a condescending tone I hear the way you judge my life At first I want to take offense and give into the strife Then I take a step back and objectively observe I realise your the one who's lost you proved it with your words You asked me shallow questions only focussed on externals Then judged me based on made up scales that give no weight to the internal Its proof to me that this same scale you use on your own life And soon you will not measure up and fall on your own knife Because you never can be good enough,  at least not for forever Your shiny stainless ego will soon rust from stormy weather
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Feb 19, 2016
Feb 19, 2016 at 8:24 PM UTC
Inevitable Collapse
In the internal recovery externals discover me, uncover and hover about me, like angels, but why would that bother me? I hear wings that flutter about me, thought it could be my heart but it can't be. In my mending I am fending off demons. The angels defend me against those that would send me screaming back to the pit. There are bits of me lost, friends tossed aside and my memories sometimes hide far away. I am spread out quite thin, I think thin gets me in and I am poor, so I'm sure that helps me a lot. What did I get from this lifetime as yet, not understood? Some bad some good If I could remember I would. No moral to this tale where morals always failed me and my dreams of dreams derailed me, when the pious tried to bail me I said, 'let me go to jail' and Jail is where I am, the jail that jails a man inside himself.
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Oct 29, 2014
Oct 29, 2014 at 9:01 PM UTC
The thermic lance
Stranded I am by this self Strolling down the shore with my two lone feet, I count every detail that I see pass on the shore As it is a companion I seek among every leaving wave. I scan around me for a sign of friendship In this crowded beach of families I stare away from the embarrassment of sitting all alone and thinking aloud to the waves. I speak to the clouds and Every other dragonfly The sticky hot air at the beach accompanies me And asks me of my life and my dreams! I wanted to be in this state of complete stillness Of an unknown pleasure of having nothing to mend and no body to fend I wanted to know whom I could meet as a prince charming while I was awaiting on a black horse Awaiting the kindness and the warmth of a human touch But wrath and pity knocks along. Pleasing externals and so the internals can survive Where I have no one to call but everything to hide I sit under the blanket of the night longing for a night out To a party or some gathering but deep, deep, deep have I entered in this whirlpool of loneliness where being me outside and being alone is gifted by some natural force Where fear of attention combined with a knot of failure where love cornered by being cheated upon is a fallacy of thought where all the monsters are guardian of my heart and where FAMILY is a feeling which I hear through some sounds in the empty DUST.
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Oct 10, 2016
Oct 10, 2016 at 9:16 AM UTC
Stranded
i figure everything can see me fluids​ moving up inside me it cracks the code inside my atoms chest is hurting heart is pumping connect my flesh to the embryo stitch into my genes ya know i wasn't born just yesterday i was not born just any way my talents knows it when they sieze it make ya go ya cant believe it projected light of consciousness splits comb-strikes and leads it have it here inside my pockets little life and little rockets pull my glow in my transceiver data cosmos diamond lockets redraw my lines in my own dimensions lies a cruel unjust infinity's just a tenth of my reality born of one and two in one in life we die in death we shall remain where the hall's externals walls us back out of a duality to be a nothing once again there is no synthesis to my thesis once was lost but now im easeless take my own life cuz i own it cuts a hole into my recess i am recklessly disurbed at what i am where im at and im just not quite sick of it yet.
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Apr 12, 2017
Apr 12, 2017 at 5:06 PM UTC
Hell Inside My Pockets
This will probably make you uncomfortable for one reason or another. Most likely, you'll be ashamed on my behalf Perhaps angry at me or something I write here Frustrated with me Depressed by my outlook, maybe But I will still share it Because...I don't know why, really. It's not art. It's just me. Anyway, I don't spend much time with people who are really in control of their lives and going in a positive direction I gravitate toward people like me who just get by based on whatever talent and skill they were born with Most of them don't do as well as I do in terms of externals, like holding down a good job, some money in the bank, buying a house Most of them do much better in terms of being okay with themselves I don't know anyone as unhealthy as me That really hits me when I have it in front of me Out of all my friends and people I know, I don't know of anyone with as unhealthy of an internal life as I have I end up scaring, hurting, or creeping out the people I get closest to And when my internal belief is that there's something deeply wrong with me, that only confirms what I know to be true Counseling (every week) is no longer helping, if it ever was I tossed ****** addiction therapy and recovery a long time ago and I'm not going back, but at least I'm not getting worse to my knowledge. Unless I'm in denial. I am significantly better than I was in the months leading up to tossing "recovery." Let's face it. I'm obsessed with a girl who is LONG GONE. I gave up on anything coming from that, but I am obsessed with thoughts about it. Maybe that means I haven't given up. I'm pretty sure I have freaked her out a couple ways even though I am not a stalker and haven't done anything that could be called aggressive toward her. I really don't even write "blunt poetry about love, loss, and loneliness" anymore. I just write **** that passes through me. I tell people I think I'm unhealthy. I'm completely sober and I'm seriously considering sleeping on the kitchen floor. Have you ever been this low? I'm not this way constantly. But the fact that I'm not consistent just makes me feel unstable. One minute I'm on 4 dating sites, the next I'm disabling all my accounts and deleting my apps because either a) a girl upset me or b) I feel too unstable to be looking for anything. Now how about if that girl read this? She'd know she escaped a serious disaster. And notice how it comes back to her for me. ****** up and I know it because I'm intelligent. But that doesn't fix it. And I do forget about her sometimes now. I think that is honestly getting better. There, that's my glimmer of hope, tossed you a bone on that one. Might as well end it on a positive.
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Dec 16, 2014
Dec 16, 2014 at 12:49 AM UTC
Everything inside me
This will probably make you uncomfortable for one reason or another. Most likely, you'll be ashamed on my behalf Perhaps angry at me or something I write here Frustrated with me Depressed by my outlook, maybe But I will still share it Because...I don't know why, really. It's not art. It's just me. Anyway, I don't spend much time with people who are really in control of their lives and going in a positive direction I gravitate toward people like me who just get by based on whatever talent and skill they were born with Most of them don't do as well as I do in terms of externals, like holding down a good job, some money in the bank, buying a house Most of them do much better in terms of being okay with themselves I don't know anyone as unhealthy as me That really hits me when I have it in front of me Out of all my friends and people I know, I don't know of anyone with as unhealthy of an internal life as I have I end up scaring, hurting, or creeping out the people I get closest to And when my internal belief is that there's something deeply wrong with me, that only confirms what I know to be true Counseling (every week) is no longer helping, if it ever was I tossed ****** addiction therapy and recovery a long time ago and I'm not going back, but at least I'm not getting worse to my knowledge. Unless I'm in denial. I am significantly better than I was in the months leading up to tossing "recovery." Let's face it. I'm obsessed with a girl who is LONG GONE. I gave up on anything coming from that, but I am obsessed with thoughts about it. Maybe that means I haven't given up. I'm pretty sure I have freaked her out a couple ways even though I am not a stalker and haven't done anything that could be called aggressive toward her. I really don't even write "blunt poetry about love, loss, and loneliness" anymore. I just write **** that passes through me. I tell people I think I'm unhealthy. I'm completely sober and I'm seriously considering sleeping on the kitchen floor. Have you ever been this low? I'm not this way constantly. But the fact that I'm not consistent just makes me feel unstable. One minute I'm on 4 dating sites, the next I'm disabling all my accounts and deleting my apps because either a) a girl upset me or b) I feel too unstable to be looking for anything. Now how about if that girl read this? She'd know she escaped a serious disaster. And notice how it comes back to her for me. ****** up and I know it because I'm intelligent. But that doesn't fix it. And I do forget about her sometimes now. I think that is honestly getting better. There, that's my glimmer of hope, tossed you a bone on that one. Might as well end it on a positive.
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A Sage ~ like Gods, “watch” The infinity of worlds arise out of atoms In the infinite void, and so nothing disturbs the Peace of his soul. They (Sages) are unconcerned by mundane affairs, They spend their time contemplating the infinity Of space, time and multiple worlds. A Sage places self within the immutability Of eternal nature which is independent of time. A life of virtue consistent with The will that is in agreement with Nature. Death and poverty do not cause a Sage sorrow And praise and good health are unnecessary externals.
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Jul 24, 2019
Jul 24, 2019 at 5:36 PM UTC
A Pagan Named Sage