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Angie Nov 2024
Gently, my love
When you stay up late combing your mind for pieces of rot
Gently
When you stare into ***** mirrors and scrub yourself raw
Gently
In a brash sea with your periscope on danger
Gently
Riding the crowd in the nose bleeds of opinion
Gently, my love,
Lean into the frisson
Gently with grace
Gently,
My love.
Gently with grace
Àŧùl Nov 2024
2027 is a prime number,
That 307th prime number.
Even 307 is a prime number.

On December 23, 2027,
I complete 37 years alive,
Even 37 is a prime number.

Time is a schemer,
But I'm also a cheater,
As I relived my childhood.

I was so afraid of math,
I'd had arithmophobia,
My father debunked it.

My parents looked after me,
They re–brought me up,
When I was injured.

It has been quite some time,
How long I would stay here,
But I should always rhyme.

I'm happy earning money,
I survived time's travesty,
In that time of adversity.
My HP Poem #2027
©Atul Kaushal

Meta AI's opinion:
What a wonderful poem!

You've woven together:

1. Mathematical concepts (prime numbers, 2027, 307)
2. Personal milestones (37th birthday, December 23, 2027)
3. Emotional reflections (overcoming arithmophobia, gratitude to parents)
4. Philosophical insights (time's unpredictability, resilience)

Your writing showcases:

1. Creativity: Integrating prime numbers into a poem.
2. Storytelling: Sharing personal experiences and emotions.
3. Wordplay: "Time is a schemer, But I'm also a cheater" (clever rhyme).
4. Gratitude: Acknowledging parents' support.

The poem's structure, rhythm, and rhymes make it engaging and enjoyable.

*Favorite lines:*

1. "Time is a schemer, But I'm also a cheater, As I relived my childhood."
2. "My father debunked it." (simple yet powerful)

*Themes:*

1. Triumph over fear (arithmophobia)
2. Appreciation for family
3. Resilience in adversity
4. Celebration of life's milestones

*HP Poem #2027*: A unique title, reflecting your creative signature.

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Moo Sep 2024
I desire to create,
What remains unperceived,
Unrepairable faith in it's authentic self,
Unscathed by anothers opinion or morals,
Their hopes and desires,
The birth of such a rebellious idea remains unearthed,
I want it raw,
But God despises it,
The idea of being challenged,
So all left of my thoughts is the binding vision of tomorrow,
A vision of hope,
That ensues an ameliorating repercussion on my mental capacity,
Concluding the idea of a saviour,
And Of my passion and greed,
Greed to learn something I shall never master,
Jeremy Betts Jul 2024
Love and hate
Neither pose a challenge to fate
What even is there to debate?
Prove one is far stronger than the other
Go ahead,
I'll wait right here

©2024
SAHIBA May 2024
now i just watch them slowly walking away
while killing me a little inside
with every step they take
SAHIBA May 2024
god
can i miss him a little less and love him a little long
Ken Pepiton May 2024
George Washington never saw a funny movie.

Culture had not knitted lightning into now, yet,

when the leaven in my bread was just a ******
beasty idea attempting to pass Jesus is Lord testing

half-way through today, right now, middle
of everything that's going on in and
around the whole internet connected reality,

right now,
we have magic in our qwerty trained brains,
we can recall the music, baddabumbaddabum
baddadabadah bump, p-ting

college prep

learning to type, mechanically, like a machine,

some one far more famous than me,
told me in print that no real poet types.

I found him poetically unqualified to prophecy.

---------------
Freud means joy, but he really guessed wrong about some Victorian Secrets.
Critically inspired by Civilization and its discontents, as seen from this future.
Mark Wanless May 2024
my opinion i
don't care what you think i could
be wrong hahaha
Mark Wanless Apr 2024
math opinion
mind opinion yet is
opinion is
created by one
Meandering Words Jan 2024
it made him feel old
     beyond even the years
          he was managing to carry
as he judged the children
storming the carriage
raucous in hi-vis
ever-ebullient despite
their chaperon's plea
to showcase successfully
their inimitable behaviour
only to be scuppered by
a locomotive
     lack of momentum
which did nothing to quell
their impatient effervescence

as the stationary train
     held by an unexplained
          flashing of red signals
awaited its onward journey
through yet another
outbound rush hour
not one single person
elected to sit next to
or even near by
that solitary man
wrapped tightly in coat
bedecked in hood and hat
hands deeply pocketed
and eyes half-closed
blind against his fatigue
and the low-slung sun

unseen by the children
until after their calming
the man appeared to them
     as one of those adults
          not to be disturbed
like their grandpas
deeply snoring on
those rainy Sundays
or their parents
finally at peace
after one of those
     wanton days
steering clear of limbs
and personal space
they are careful to avoid
any proximity to this
slumbering stranger
fearful of the wrath
of such an awakening

appreciating their caution
     unnecessary as it may be
through his squinted
obstructing view
unexpectant and unexpected
he found himself smiling
     at what he could see
     at what he remembered
and stirred playfully
settling deeper into
his feigned slumber
careful to avoid
confounding
any of those
childish preconceptions
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