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Noobiee 1d
My brightest star. When I met you, a new galaxy was born. One that was made from our love for each other. And that galaxy, it's interstellar! It's vast and never ending, like my love for you, like yours for me. It has many stars, ones that I'm sure you created, because just like you they're by far the most beautiful things I've laid eyes on. There's a sun too! Luminary and cosmic in size! I'm certain we made it together! That sun, it's bright, so bright, fueled by love and care, how else would it be able to burn for so long and be so radiant? But that's not all, of course, there's more! Distant nebulae: a sign of more beautiful stars being created, the endless flashing of comets whizzing by: a show of constant burning love and desire, the dancing patterns of breathtaking aurora: symbols of our enchanting love. And countless other things! Our galaxy is never just a black void, it always has constant attractions, a statement to how loving you is never boring. You're like a black hole, you have an irresistible pull, inescapable attraction! The only thing I'll ever remain beside. We'll make countless memories, you and me, and store them in those magnificent stars you make, our very own constellations. What will you name them? ... And you might be wondering , "where are we in this galaxy?" We're floating, me and you, witnessing this beautiful new place that we're creating, together.
I hope to christ I can post this here. Wasn't feeling very "rhymie" when I made this, just emotional. But hey, "expression over form", right?
alex Sep 25
Star-speckled cheeks,
eyes deep as space,
smile bright like the moon,
waves like the sun,
shimmer ethereally in the light—
but I’ll always be eclipsed.

You’re Saturn,
and I’m stuck in your orbit,
just another stupid moon.
I’ll stretch to infinity to reach you,
but we’ll never touch,
’cause we’re on
completely different wavelengths—
always been fated
never to align
and always will be.

You’ll never tell me,
“Love you to the moon and back,”
yet every night I fall asleep
thinking of a star-speckled sky.
everyone is going to their place of dream
their pen and papers screams pride and dignity
and in the fate's script it only talks about my failure
my efforts led me to nowhere but my defeat
i'm envious of everyone who got to follow their dreams

i learnt about the stars, galaxies and cosmos
so one day i could steal a portion of their shine
to add in my name
learnt a language to study in a foreign land
but my dreams collapsed, i cried, i state
Written on- May 20, 2024
This is the original version of my poem "Cosmic Longing: Un Amore Irragguiungible" that i re-wrote on July 24, 2025 because i thought my message was not clear in this piece. But now that i think about it, that certainly was the most confusing version of this poem i had wrote. Even though the message is same, i treat this one poem as different. It speaks of the heartbreak the earlier one failed to speak.
AUSTIN Aug 16
luck & love is
something that
has never known duality
to me
it’s one or the other boy

i used to think it was
the cosmos,
in a past life i had karmic debt,
i believe now
love & luck is not timing
its alignment
pseudocalm Jul 25
What is JWST?   An innocent Q.
But deserving of prose.  I knew just what to do.

It's  ̶j̶u̶s̶t̶  jwst our first space flower,
Unfurling its hexagons.
Golden petals that thirst for the most ancient photons.

Jwst the thing that can see so much further than we
would have ever dared dream in the last century.

So you'd think it'd be hard to see our backyard,
After red galaxies melding with CMB.
But it's shadowy seat is what gives us the treat,
Of our hard to reach planets in infrared heat.

James Webb Space Telescope
Keeps surpassing all hopes.
30 years to develop.  At least twice we went broke!

A 10 year orbital cosmology store.
Survived through max Q,  and keeps giving us more.
30 years in the womb.  Twas a legacy born.
There is so much light that can only be collected in the dark.
xia Jul 23
And the death of the star that was my love for you became the endless black hole that engulfed all my happiness.
a monostich.
© xia 2025
Degrit Jul 4
I see you and feel happy
I hear you and my spirit soars
I watch you and am lustful
I touch you and it’s all that exists
I do not love you
I worship you somewhere inside me

As I stand close, I am holding a star
The brightness, heat, gravity
The violent, inexplicable beauty
My skin burnt and scorched down to the soul

And you probably think I’m after a fling
And ain’t that ******* typical.
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