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"whiney" poems
I’am the Whiney, Amy Winehouse Wannabee. That’s going to blow myself, away before the Whispers of wicked winds can. I can’t smile anymore. If you have to always stab me in the back. My heart lives on the other side of my body. If ya wanted to.... I could get you; a steak knife and you could tear into my heart like it’s a medium rare steak. If it would make you happy. I’ll even bring the A-1. Cause I care that much.
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Apr 24, 2012
Apr 24, 2012 at 8:15 PM UTC
Whiney WineHouse Wannabees.
Every night, before going off to bed, I lie down, and reflect on all the things I've done, heard, and said. Have my words affected peoples lives? Have my actions, changed how I'm viewed peoples eyes? Am I still self conscious about the things people have said? Do I still think I'm fat or think that I'd be better off dead. Am I still just a whiney little girl? Will I actually get somewhere in this world? Will I ever be loved? Or will I continue to be pushed around, bullied and shoved. Yes, I've heard some pretty nasty things in my day. But now, I've learned not to listen to what people do or say. I know exactly who I am inside. I've been depressed it for so long, but now, I refuse to hide. I love myself, in every possible way. So, for now, I drift asleep, and hope that tomorrow will be an even better day.
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May 10, 2015
May 10, 2015 at 1:00 AM UTC
Tomorrow Will be a Better Day
Im here for family my Juggalos don't care bout the rest, All you whiney *** haters to me are just a test. I'm down with the clown and I will be until I die, Whether it be heaven or Hell in which I fry. I'm representin clown love for all my life, And I hope so will my future wife. We got Blaze, ICP, Twiztid, and Boondox, **** what the haters say this music rocks! We all got love for one another we family, Sit back and watch and song you'll see, We paint our faces but it's not just for show, We show our heart which route our minds will go. We don't care what you think or say, Every one of us deals with haters everyday. We will live strong and die strong, And no matter what you say we'll always be strong. When we die we get our own island where we go, And if you ain't down Thats a place you'll never know. We Juggalo homies man we're the best, And no matter what you try we'll pass your foolish tests. - Dustin Kohman 1/17/2011 1:32 pm
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Aug 24, 2011
Aug 24, 2011 at 2:43 PM UTC
Juggalo
I claim to have empathy But I also know I'm lacking. I chuckled when you said You'd marry him You're in high school, sweetie And when it didn't work out I wasn't at all surprised. When you ******* about your life My mind was on mine When you made every small problem Bigger than it needed to be My thoughts immediately said "It could've been worse" But my mouth didn't dare. And then you have the gaul to tell me That I'm being pessimistic and whiney After all the times I bit my tongue In front of you? Sorry honey, But I can falsify empathy for you. If it's sympathy you want Go look elsewhere.
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Jun 5, 2014
Jun 5, 2014 at 6:44 PM UTC
Empathy
Rush, Rush! Gunky plush bagog Nugget sog Peedle glog Plundering down the boulevard I saw what seemed to be a Schmagtap Slukavard. Under his buttons, there grew his Mutton. Mutton branch, penal franch Sogging down the grittle bog And briggenfagig squeezing a bib, Soaked in carrot juice frib Muggafloo Plubderp. Schmubderp.
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Aug 21, 2011
Aug 21, 2011 at 12:45 AM UTC
Whiney Pompous Baby Claire
If I did go wrong more or less at once, I wonder where The chop block decisions of grade school, when you first realize you don’t care ‘I just don’t care’ in whiney and off-pitch voices and messy drawers Was it the first time you realized you couldn’t be perfect and so just stopped Being Was it sneaking on to computers and secretly learning more about life in books than your Parents wished you to ***** things) Or was it when you learned because you shouldn’t And didn’t learn and didn’t learn, and that persistent bubble as you grew up got bigger and bigger Some looming threat about your future dangled over your animal head like a carrot as you trotted through worksheet a, a-2, a-3 And exercises you could finish in two minutes or two hours and get the same grade Or copy and get the same grade And those grades mattered more and more, and vaguer and vaguer And they guided you less as they shoved more in front of you and grabbed your nose to say This is important, this is you And your friends started laughing like lunatics as well as ******** And the first kids ended up crying in stairwells And you slept in class? Was it all that, or was it outside. Was it your parents admitting they weren’t happy. Was it the first time you had to recognize dishonesty or cruelty in others (you had long since seen it in yourself) Was it the first time you wanted to die. Is it now?
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Sep 19, 2013
Sep 19, 2013 at 1:13 AM UTC
Application Anxiety
I wish I was Stronger. Handsome. Attractive. Instead of this whiney Hopeless Piece of ****
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Jan 14, 2015
Jan 14, 2015 at 9:53 AM UTC
Ramblings of the Stressed
The jester free styled about dealing grams under the tainted Charleston moonlight – Drug scene. Whenever we discussed the existence of God, it always ended in a fight – The unseen. The harlot was always type casted as the Rizzo, never the Sandy. Who could forget those black leather pants, oh so tight – Street corner scene. The king flirted with the innocent freshmen girls, unaware of the imminent restraining order. He would joke about using the effervescent glow of his skin as their flashlight – Obscene. The fair lady believed Tolkien was the closet humanity could ever get to godly perfection. She was infamous for always tripping over the set, a common plight – Off scene. The wizard dreamed one day to be the first black James Bond, code name Black Mamba. One day he told me he liked women and men, except the whiney boys of white – Epicene. You, the minstrel, sang the words to “Baby Got Back” in your high-pitched voice backstage. You often told us “rawr” is dinosaur for I love you and everything will be alright – End scene. I, the queen, tried to hide behind the black velvet curtain paralyzed by my stage fright. But now, I just wish you hadn’t crashed your car into the tree that night – Unforeseen.
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Oct 30, 2013
Oct 30, 2013 at 2:12 AM UTC
Remember when we used to hide behind the curtain?
“Feminism shouldn’t exist” the guy next to me in class tells me with conviction in his eyes. “Females have more rights than men, their period just makes them whiney as **** Well, you might not be a guy who walks around grabbing girls’ ***** believing that the clearly uncomfortable smile she send you, after you had starred non-stop at her for 5 minutes straight was consent. Or a guy who comes up to a girl at prom not being able to understand that she doesn’t have a date because “all the guys I know would **** to pieces” But just because you don’t do this (and THANK YOU for that), don’t ******* tell me these men don’t exsist, when each of every example in this poem is a different guy in my life.. You’re not the one who couldn’t walk down the school hals without 10 guys catcalling and starring  at your *** all while you stare the floor. I guess it’s my fault for wearing leggings or running pants, thinking it was a smart idea because I planned on going running later. Or at least that’s what I’m told at the guidance. Unfortunately them not being ‘real pants’ doesn’t make your hands on them less real. You’re not the one therefore starting to wear as baggy close as possible, because apparently that’s the way of escaping male gaze and more importantly hands, just to be met by comments going: “did you get up last minute this morning,” or “why did you give up trying? You used to dress so cute” Trying on WHAT? Yes, I am giving up, because I don’t know how to make you look into my eyes without giving me the elevator glance first. But, I shouldn’t be complaining. Pretty girls don’t have anything to complain about – right? They’re pretty, they’re going to do fine in life as long as the know how to take off their clothes. Being pretty is the reason guys pay you attention, and you should be glad, cuz ugly get none. So I’m taught to sit back and accept harassment, because the only other option is not getting is, and you wouldn’t want that, would you? All while girls compete trying to become as pretty as me and all the other pretty girls. Because it doesn’t matter how funny or smart you are as girl, if you aren’t pretty, it doesn’t really matter. BUT, if you are, being smart is hot – not geeky, and any other slightly not good characteristic will be overlooked. And taking off your clothes is a great tool to get your way. Just accept life is easier you for, man. But you misunderstood something. Girl don’t try to be pretty to have that kind of ‘privilige’ or to get an easier life. They try to be pretty, because it the only way you survive.
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Oct 28, 2016
Oct 28, 2016 at 6:13 AM UTC
Pretty Girls In An Ugly Society
“Feminism shouldn’t exist” the guy next to me in class tells me with conviction in his eyes. “Females have more rights than men, their period just makes them whiney as **** Well, you might not be a guy who walks around grabbing girls’ ***** believing that the clearly uncomfortable smile she send you, after you had starred non-stop at her for 5 minutes straight was consent. Or a guy who comes up to a girl at prom not being able to understand that she doesn’t have a date because “all the guys I know would **** to pieces” But just because you don’t do this (and THANK YOU for that), don’t ******* tell me these men don’t exsist, when each of every example in this poem is a different guy in my life.. You’re not the one who couldn’t walk down the school hals without 10 guys catcalling and starring  at your *** all while you stare the floor. I guess it’s my fault for wearing leggings or running pants, thinking it was a smart idea because I planned on going running later. Or at least that’s what I’m told at the guidance. Unfortunately them not being ‘real pants’ doesn’t make your hands on them less real. You’re not the one therefore starting to wear as baggy close as possible, because apparently that’s the way of escaping male gaze and more importantly hands, just to be met by comments going: “did you get up last minute this morning,” or “why did you give up trying? You used to dress so cute” Trying on WHAT? Yes, I am giving up, because I don’t know how to make you look into my eyes without giving me the elevator glance first. But, I shouldn’t be complaining. Pretty girls don’t have anything to complain about – right? They’re pretty, they’re going to do fine in life as long as the know how to take off their clothes. Being pretty is the reason guys pay you attention, and you should be glad, cuz ugly get none. So I’m taught to sit back and accept harassment, because the only other option is not getting is, and you wouldn’t want that, would you? All while girls compete trying to become as pretty as me and all the other pretty girls. Because it doesn’t matter how funny or smart you are as girl, if you aren’t pretty, it doesn’t really matter. BUT, if you are, being smart is hot – not geeky, and any other slightly not good characteristic will be overlooked. And taking off your clothes is a great tool to get your way. Just accept life is easier you for, man. But you misunderstood something. Girl don’t try to be pretty to have that kind of ‘privilige’ or to get an easier life. They try to be pretty, because it the only way you survive.
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If my physical wellbeing is any kind of indicator I'd say that I'm wibbly-wobbly, piney-whiney.
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Jul 1, 2014
Jul 1, 2014 at 7:33 PM UTC
Wobbly
I wish we had a president That cared about the populace Instead of one who's wants the law To bankrupt almost all of us. The one we have cares about Only the super rich and the white. He’s a ditzy mouthy narcissist And for sure that is not right! It really wasn’t long ago We went through this kind of fear And now we are feeling sick That terror is once again here. This time we’re not afraid Of people from another land. Our country may be dying But, again it’s by it’s own hand. Part of it is stupidity and sloth And part is just evil mindedness, That either makes us look away Or make others hate kindness. Some of our parents trained us To be big bullies and whiney brats. And others ******* progress By dissolving into brainless spats. I wish we had a president Like we have had in times gone by Instead of one who is so happy To pat his own back, cheat and lie. It would give us all a chance To avoid waging another war. I wish we had a president That knew what that job was for.
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Nov 22, 2016
Nov 22, 2016 at 4:17 AM UTC
I WISH WE HAD A PRESIDENT
Benedict met Mrs Cleves in one of those out of town bars and they had a few drinks and she told him about her ex and what a ******* he was and how he used to mess around with those air hostesses (he being a steward on a plane) and he'd even boast how many of them he had had that week and Benedict listened and drank his drink knowing that after this they would go back to her place and drink more put on some Delius on her hifi and have *** on the sofa or maybe make it to her bedroom if time and passion allowed but she talked on about her ex and how she met him after she came out of the convent (Benedict couldn’t picture that scenario) all innocent and pure and thought love had been found Benedict sipped the last of his drink noticing how her hair was like that French queen he’d read about who’d had lost her head on the guillotine and still she yakked on about the ex how he liked fast cars and women and drank too much and disliked her Scottishness or her whiney voice Benedict wondered what she was like back then before the pounds had landed on her before age had begun to settled into features and remembered that time they had *** on the sofa and they’d fallen off ( too much ***** or what he couldn’t now say) and the downstairs neighbour had banged up from the room below and she said shut the **** up you old hag and all said in her Glaswegian tones and they lay there on the floor she **** naked and he semi clothed with Mahler’s 5th bellowing in the background and as he came back from his thoughts she was still talking of the ex and he wished she'd finish up her drink to get back to her place for more ***** and ***
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Jul 18, 2013
Jul 18, 2013 at 1:47 AM UTC
MORE ***** AND ***
Benedict met Mrs Cleves in one of those out of town bars and they had a few drinks and she told him about her ex and what a ******* he was and how he used to mess around with those air hostesses (he being a steward on a plane) and he'd even boast how many of them he had had that week and Benedict listened and drank his drink knowing that after this they would go back to her place and drink more put on some Delius on her hifi and have *** on the sofa or maybe make it to her bedroom if time and passion allowed but she talked on about her ex and how she met him after she came out of the convent (Benedict couldn’t picture that scenario) all innocent and pure and thought love had been found Benedict sipped the last of his drink noticing how her hair was like that French queen he’d read about who’d had lost her head on the guillotine and still she yakked on about the ex how he liked fast cars and women and drank too much and disliked her Scottishness or her whiney voice Benedict wondered what she was like back then before the pounds had landed on her before age had begun to settled into features and remembered that time they had *** on the sofa and they’d fallen off ( too much ***** or what he couldn’t now say) and the downstairs neighbour had banged up from the room below and she said shut the **** up you old hag and all said in her Glaswegian tones and they lay there on the floor she **** naked and he semi clothed with Mahler’s 5th bellowing in the background and as he came back from his thoughts she was still talking of the ex and he wished she'd finish up her drink to get back to her place for more ***** and ***
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Sometimes I don't feel very poetic, and sometimes I just feel pretty pathetic, because some days I feel like I'm doing fine, but a moment later I want to just die, because theres so much inside that I need to say, but try as I might I can't find the right way, because I feel so alone- Who could comprehend, the pain, the pressure, the ache in my head, so I just resort to going to bed, but sleep never finds me, for it too has ditched, and sometimes I just feel like a whiney ***** because regardless of the ******** and all of this mess, I know that ultimately I have been blessed, it might take not weeks or months, rather years, but I know one day will mark the end of my tears, I might be at the bottom, the worst I could be, but I've got my whole life still ahead of me.
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Dec 22, 2012
Dec 22, 2012 at 4:44 AM UTC
Silver Lining Justification
we’re seven years old again it wasn’t such a danger to live in pretend when running with scissors was the greatest crime when nothing but ice cream was on the line when the only thing broken was mom’s favorite vase when we made a mistake, just stop and erase when my brother and I fought about petty things when it was a miracle for a butterfly to sprout wings when we weren’t afraid to be wrong when we listened to the radio and just sang along when the skies were blue and the moon was bright when the stars were what we thought of at night when the biggest fear was the monsters under the bed when we’d never regret a single word we said when boys were weird and girls played with dolls when we wanted to grow up and break from these walls when we wished on stars and thought it would come true when school was for drawing and flash cards and glue when Band-Aids made the pain go away when mom’s embrace made everything okay when we wanted to ride a big kid bike when the closest thing to love was like when teachers were geniuses and parent knew it all when we knew they were there to catch us if ever we may fall when we could dance like no one’s watching when we could talk like we didn’t care when we could smile a thousand watt smile when we could sing like no one’s there snow was the greatest thing in the world we didn’t count calories in birthday cake we wanted a new toy for christmas we ate dinner as a family and mom and dad were the only ones in love Looking back on that now, it seems we got our wish We grew up, but its childhood we miss Because now we’re all heartbroken and bleeding Impatient Whiney Bruised Needy Pigs don’t fly and there’s no money on trees Rainbows aren’t too colorful, sugar isn’t too sweet Mom and Dad rarely talk and our teachers get us in trouble Band-Aids and Mom’s hugs won’t keep us in a bubble We were merely daydreaming, now we’re all about to fall This is what we wanted, but we don’t want this at all
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Mar 5, 2013
Mar 5, 2013 at 9:22 PM UTC
going back.
we’re seven years old again it wasn’t such a danger to live in pretend when running with scissors was the greatest crime when nothing but ice cream was on the line when the only thing broken was mom’s favorite vase when we made a mistake, just stop and erase when my brother and I fought about petty things when it was a miracle for a butterfly to sprout wings when we weren’t afraid to be wrong when we listened to the radio and just sang along when the skies were blue and the moon was bright when the stars were what we thought of at night when the biggest fear was the monsters under the bed when we’d never regret a single word we said when boys were weird and girls played with dolls when we wanted to grow up and break from these walls when we wished on stars and thought it would come true when school was for drawing and flash cards and glue when Band-Aids made the pain go away when mom’s embrace made everything okay when we wanted to ride a big kid bike when the closest thing to love was like when teachers were geniuses and parent knew it all when we knew they were there to catch us if ever we may fall when we could dance like no one’s watching when we could talk like we didn’t care when we could smile a thousand watt smile when we could sing like no one’s there snow was the greatest thing in the world we didn’t count calories in birthday cake we wanted a new toy for christmas we ate dinner as a family and mom and dad were the only ones in love Looking back on that now, it seems we got our wish We grew up, but its childhood we miss Because now we’re all heartbroken and bleeding Impatient Whiney Bruised Needy Pigs don’t fly and there’s no money on trees Rainbows aren’t too colorful, sugar isn’t too sweet Mom and Dad rarely talk and our teachers get us in trouble Band-Aids and Mom’s hugs won’t keep us in a bubble We were merely daydreaming, now we’re all about to fall This is what we wanted, but we don’t want this at all
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I am trapped in the shackle of your thoughts I reign terror over your mind, saturate it with the sound of my whiney  voice On the faces of strangers in the streets you cast your glare It is my face you see Every breath you take triggers thoughts of me Even the sight of shadows have me consuming your entire being My laughter echoes ceaselessly in the halls of your tiny abode Visions of me in a pale pink robe appear in your bedroom Pulsating is your heart at the sight of the vibrant luminosity I exude As we dance to the music in our hearts With the moonlight cheering us on We will reminiscence and ache and ache and ache Nostalgia will overpower us as it always does When the hour arrives I will fade into the light of dawn And you my darling will be left embracing nothingness.
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Dec 10, 2013
Dec 10, 2013 at 5:21 PM UTC
Evanescent
Hello, my name is David Phlegmister. I am much too self-aware. I also have no ******* idea who I am. My intestines twist and turn just like yours. I think I must have a pretentiously metaphorical tapeworm. Everything I do or say is backed by either anger or curiosity, and in spite of this I am somehow not in jail. I try too hard. I don't try hard enough. I care too much but I still don't give a **** I wont tell you I'm hungry even though I havent eaten since yesterday. No, really, it's fine, I'm not hungry.My hands and feet are too big for my body. Seriously, **** off, I'm not ******* hungry I drink black coffee and smoke cigarettes but I swear to god I'm not an egotistical existentialist. My mom tells me that I'm too skinny but dont worry I'm not hungry. Smells **** me up. I can still smell your perfume and I can still smell your ***** Your feelings dont matter because we all die eventually. Boo hoo, get the **** over it. Everything you stand for is a lie. God isn't real, your government hates you, status is meaningless. Jokes on you so **** yourself. I'm sixteen years old in an Aberdeen-esque hellhole. I'm a highschool dropout My old school was a cesspool of AXE body spray and ****** **** My friends all want to **** themselves and I don't blame them. I'm an ******* in my own right, but I don't know about yours. Im still waiting for someone who doesn't have to fix me to love me. I whine and ***** about whiney ******* and wonder why I hate myself. I've come to terms with the fact that I'm going to be a ****** Reality is not, and will not, ever suffice. It will never satisfy. Never bring contentedness. Theres no denying that I will be hooked on whatever unrefined, kidney-raping junk I can get my filthy hands on. Marijuana got boring fast. I hate routine. I hate sameness. I feel too ******* much so I punish myself for it. **I AM NOT A ******* PIECE OF ART** I'm your aborted ******* son. My fingernails are too short. I lie to people who care about me and I don't know if its for my sake or theirs. I'm the elephant in the room of conservative christian right wing baby boomers. I CANNOT and WILL NOT do what is expected of me. I don't fit in. Thank god. Don't wanna be a starry eyed, brain dead statistic. Sometimes I don't sleep on purpose just because I don't deserve to. I don't owe you a ******* thing. I have nothing to prove and nothing to give. IMNOTHUNGRYIMNOTHUNGRYIMNOTHUNGRY
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Feb 2, 2016
Feb 2, 2016 at 6:03 AM UTC
Allow/me/to/INTRO/duce/my/SELF
Hello, my name is David Phlegmister. I am much too self-aware. I also have no ******* idea who I am. My intestines twist and turn just like yours. I think I must have a pretentiously metaphorical tapeworm. Everything I do or say is backed by either anger or curiosity, and in spite of this I am somehow not in jail. I try too hard. I don't try hard enough. I care too much but I still don't give a **** I wont tell you I'm hungry even though I havent eaten since yesterday. No, really, it's fine, I'm not hungry.My hands and feet are too big for my body. Seriously, **** off, I'm not ******* hungry I drink black coffee and smoke cigarettes but I swear to god I'm not an egotistical existentialist. My mom tells me that I'm too skinny but dont worry I'm not hungry. Smells **** me up. I can still smell your perfume and I can still smell your ***** Your feelings dont matter because we all die eventually. Boo hoo, get the **** over it. Everything you stand for is a lie. God isn't real, your government hates you, status is meaningless. Jokes on you so **** yourself. I'm sixteen years old in an Aberdeen-esque hellhole. I'm a highschool dropout My old school was a cesspool of AXE body spray and ****** **** My friends all want to **** themselves and I don't blame them. I'm an ******* in my own right, but I don't know about yours. Im still waiting for someone who doesn't have to fix me to love me. I whine and ***** about whiney ******* and wonder why I hate myself. I've come to terms with the fact that I'm going to be a ****** Reality is not, and will not, ever suffice. It will never satisfy. Never bring contentedness. Theres no denying that I will be hooked on whatever unrefined, kidney-raping junk I can get my filthy hands on. Marijuana got boring fast. I hate routine. I hate sameness. I feel too ******* much so I punish myself for it. **I AM NOT A ******* PIECE OF ART** I'm your aborted ******* son. My fingernails are too short. I lie to people who care about me and I don't know if its for my sake or theirs. I'm the elephant in the room of conservative christian right wing baby boomers. I CANNOT and WILL NOT do what is expected of me. I don't fit in. Thank god. Don't wanna be a starry eyed, brain dead statistic. Sometimes I don't sleep on purpose just because I don't deserve to. I don't owe you a ******* thing. I have nothing to prove and nothing to give. IMNOTHUNGRYIMNOTHUNGRYIMNOTHUNGRY
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no can do the turning of water, the greatest magician’s trick ever, but turning words into wine, that I can do, ready your life, go get a wine glass, sit down, this is heady stuff, be prepared! you’re thinking, shoot, I can do that too, no, you just think you can, for if you could, you would be drunk already, making typos all over your shirt, thinking’ bout your next verse, a great love affair, the one you never should let get away, the wrong choices that fed on each other, living with a hateful woman for the better part of your whole life, the children who don’t even call to wish you happy birthday and you would be drunk already just like me, writing poems like this, a poet sitting on the roof, and you would have written this whiney poem, not me, pretending wine can wash your conscience clean <> “*I thought that I heard you laughing I thought that I heard you sing I think I thought I saw you try But that was just a dream*” Losing My Religion Song by R.E.M.
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Aug 24, 2020
Aug 24, 2020 at 12:31 PM UTC
turning words into wine
Within a month you told me "Baby I love you so". You were the first boy who ever told me that, this you know. And this won't be the first time, and before I waste another line, I've got to tell you no. And you know why, cuz you're insane and clingy and I'm a waste of your time. Time to be disillusioned darling, cuz you're way too needy!-And I'm pleading- let me go. So this is how I'm telling you to move on. I wrote you another ****** song. And I know, that it was really ****** so cold and mean of me, to say it to you this way. But I won't regret a single word I say. So move on. Trust me you'll feel better when I'm gone. You think I'm so sweet, your perfect sugarplum. Well babe how can that be true when all I do is make you glum? You want to hold me tight but you make me want to punch you every single night. Oh thank God, you'll never be mine. So this is how I'm telling you to move on with your life. I wrote you a ****** song so you'd listen up this time. And I know, that it was so **** ****** so cold of me, to put it to you this way. But I won't regret a single thing I've said today. Just move on. Trust me you'll feel better when I'm gone. So take a word of advice, I won't sugarcoat it or say it nice. You really gonna make tell you twice? To move on! You don't love me, don't be absurd. You think you're the only one who was ever hurt? You're so selfish, so ******* demanding. You asked too much of me so I'm telling you I'm done. Forever! I wipe my hands of you as friend or as lover. To tell you the truth, I never wanted either. And now I'm telling you, to move, the **** on. Yeah all I did was write you a really ****** song. And I know, that it was really ****** so cold and mean of me, to tell you in this way. But you're annoying as hell, dumb and whiney as well. You think I'm nice, but just hear my last advice: leave me alone. Bye-bye, you'll be better once you move on. Yeah leave me alone.
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Jun 8, 2014
Jun 8, 2014 at 12:02 AM UTC
Let Me Go and Move On
Within a month you told me "Baby I love you so". You were the first boy who ever told me that, this you know. And this won't be the first time, and before I waste another line, I've got to tell you no. And you know why, cuz you're insane and clingy and I'm a waste of your time. Time to be disillusioned darling, cuz you're way too needy!-And I'm pleading- let me go. So this is how I'm telling you to move on. I wrote you another ****** song. And I know, that it was really ****** so cold and mean of me, to say it to you this way. But I won't regret a single word I say. So move on. Trust me you'll feel better when I'm gone. You think I'm so sweet, your perfect sugarplum. Well babe how can that be true when all I do is make you glum? You want to hold me tight but you make me want to punch you every single night. Oh thank God, you'll never be mine. So this is how I'm telling you to move on with your life. I wrote you a ****** song so you'd listen up this time. And I know, that it was so **** ****** so cold of me, to put it to you this way. But I won't regret a single thing I've said today. Just move on. Trust me you'll feel better when I'm gone. So take a word of advice, I won't sugarcoat it or say it nice. You really gonna make tell you twice? To move on! You don't love me, don't be absurd. You think you're the only one who was ever hurt? You're so selfish, so ******* demanding. You asked too much of me so I'm telling you I'm done. Forever! I wipe my hands of you as friend or as lover. To tell you the truth, I never wanted either. And now I'm telling you, to move, the **** on. Yeah all I did was write you a really ****** song. And I know, that it was really ****** so cold and mean of me, to tell you in this way. But you're annoying as hell, dumb and whiney as well. You think I'm nice, but just hear my last advice: leave me alone. Bye-bye, you'll be better once you move on. Yeah leave me alone.
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After giving up on homework I'm going to write a poem About what I have done And where I am And what is my worth Those are questions on my conscious Right now, I don't have the time This why I want to take A mental photograph I want to take a snapshot Of the single moments Where my mind is off Leaving the feeling Melancholy To sweep up. A time where I sit and wonder What my point is anymore. Of the times when my Mind Comes in from a late day At work And the traffic was bad And there was no promotion Nor bonus nor reward For the extra work He had put in this week. So he plops himself on the sofa And his on the couch Drinking yet another can of beer In the kitchen His wife Conscious cries As she puts away the candles And stows away the meal. A romantic meal is all she wants Mind will not put in the work This was not the man she loved Not this burnt out corpse I wonder why I keep going on Why I keep pushing myself forward There's nothing special about me I'm just a normal mortal When I look into the mirror I see flesh and bone And tired eyes I see acne and scars And razor cuts I do not see a god, A creature that's special. Just a simple human Not worth all the hype Not worth a penny more Than all his peers Actually, probably Worth a penny less You who read this might think Is he depressed Sick A whiney ***** The answer is At times to all I'm merely just a Tired Burnt Angsty Teenager. With the constant nagging thought What have I done? Where am I? Am I worth all the compliments? Am I worth all the insults? Am I worth anything at all? For even teens Filled with angst Can question themselves sometimes So I'm filing this snapshot Along with all my more coherent ones Is this a good idea? I hardly read the work. Oh who ******* cares This is more for me Than for you
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Sep 20, 2010
Sep 20, 2010 at 11:45 AM UTC
Snapshot
After giving up on homework I'm going to write a poem About what I have done And where I am And what is my worth Those are questions on my conscious Right now, I don't have the time This why I want to take A mental photograph I want to take a snapshot Of the single moments Where my mind is off Leaving the feeling Melancholy To sweep up. A time where I sit and wonder What my point is anymore. Of the times when my Mind Comes in from a late day At work And the traffic was bad And there was no promotion Nor bonus nor reward For the extra work He had put in this week. So he plops himself on the sofa And his on the couch Drinking yet another can of beer In the kitchen His wife Conscious cries As she puts away the candles And stows away the meal. A romantic meal is all she wants Mind will not put in the work This was not the man she loved Not this burnt out corpse I wonder why I keep going on Why I keep pushing myself forward There's nothing special about me I'm just a normal mortal When I look into the mirror I see flesh and bone And tired eyes I see acne and scars And razor cuts I do not see a god, A creature that's special. Just a simple human Not worth all the hype Not worth a penny more Than all his peers Actually, probably Worth a penny less You who read this might think Is he depressed Sick A whiney ***** The answer is At times to all I'm merely just a Tired Burnt Angsty Teenager. With the constant nagging thought What have I done? Where am I? Am I worth all the compliments? Am I worth all the insults? Am I worth anything at all? For even teens Filled with angst Can question themselves sometimes So I'm filing this snapshot Along with all my more coherent ones Is this a good idea? I hardly read the work. Oh who ******* cares This is more for me Than for you
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You think I want to be this way? Lonely, afraid and depressed. The muted light cannot shine through the window anymore. You think I blocked it out. So I'm asking for it then? According to you, I'm petty and whiney Like a lost dog or a child. And speaking of children, It was my fault that he touched me then too. Seven years old, but yet, I should have known better. As if by some gift of God, I'd know to resist. These are the elixirs society has force fed me.
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Jan 3, 2014
Jan 3, 2014 at 12:17 AM UTC
Misconceptions and Misdemeanors
1) I walk five miles deep into the woods in the back of the yellow house with my brother so that we can watch the flies circle around the bodies of the dead cows: their hanging limbs, their loose tongues. The air hangs like a boy’s arms around my shoulders. My brother and I both wear shorts. 2) Inventory: one tractor in the yard. One truck in the driveway. One driveway, gravely like the throats of my father and grandfather. They both live in the yellow house. At night I stay up late listening to their screams. They sound like owls’ heads or hurricanes. 3) Father sees a different woman each day. They all have blonde hair like mine. Eyes brown and crumbling and whiney like mine, too. Mother left when I was three years old. Brother and I still aren’t sure if Father means she’s dead or if she just ran away, but we’ve yet to see a tombstone. 4) We go to church every Sunday. The pews press against the back of my sticky legs and white dress. Charlie eyes me from across the aisle and I do my best to focus on the head in front of mine.
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Jun 22, 2014
Jun 22, 2014 at 6:26 PM UTC
Journal #5 – Massachusetts, 10 years old
Is it bad that change myself to conform with society? That I’ve changed so much I’ve forgotten the real me? Sure, society is changing But I want to be the REAL me NOW. Not to sound bratty or whiney, But it’s been long enough of people hiding behind false smiles And fake laughter Of people hiding behind a persona they make for themselves We want to be who we want now. When’s it going to happen? When can I walk into school Without fear of being bullied for what I wear When can I walk the streets Without fear of being ***** When can I walk into a room Without judging stares When will any of this happen? Is it bad I’ve created a false image of myself? That I fear being judged so much That I changed everything about myself, That I can’t remember what the real me looks like I used to be a sweet, somewhat girly kid. Now, I dress like a boy So not to get others attention, I intimidate the **** out of others So not to get bullied for being small, I don’t show feeling, So not to be judged for being weak. I just want to be the real me, Just once in my life without fear Of what others will say.
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Apr 3, 2018
Apr 3, 2018 at 7:23 PM UTC
The Real Me
I had one of those but the wheel fell off I lost the tone of my wobbly piano, I had one of those but the wheel fell off,... I fell in a ditch because of this. A one wheeled bike is a unicycle, and I can't ride one. I had one of those and the wheel fell off. I stumbled from the path, Oh dear, A passing Arabian from a street market nearby, Gave me a carpet so that I could fly. I didn't need my wheels, not one or two or three. I flew over the houses and crossed the blue sea. I saw a number of mighty beasts from the briny, Several fair ships and I'm not being whiney. It seems to me that I don't need wheels as my carpet's flying high. Thank you Mr Market Trader. For now I am a space invader! (C) LIVVI Inspired by my two cute grandsons as I played with them this morning
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Sep 8, 2016
Sep 8, 2016 at 8:37 AM UTC
FROM A SIMPLE SAYING
////  •  || <> /        ( •)  ( • )       \ ) ((             (              ) my girlfriend's back gonna save my reputation hey la di la My girlfriend's back  !! •• BROKEN HEARTS ON BROKEN STREETS •• this is the title of a new T V  comedy sitcom on cable /// Some HP people have been offered parts WR KNOW THAT MOST OF YOU ARE QUALIFIED TO PLAY THE WHINEY BANAL BROKEN HEARTS //// WE HAVE ALSO HEARD THAT BERYL DOV MAY HAVE BEEN OFFERED THE PART TO PLAY  OF THE BROKEN STREET BUT WE HAVE ALSO HEARD THAT HE IS IN THE RUNNING FOR THE NOBEL PEACE PRIZE AND SO MAY BE COMMITTED TO CAMPAIGNING FOR IT //: Well enough of this Time to get to the poem you've all been so Anxiously awaiting OH NO ! I'VE GOT WRITER'S BLOCK !! //// just kidding ! Just kidding //// // Well Here it is /:/ Along the path Leads to the ancient bridge Crosses the magic river Leads to the mystic hills /// Thru the slums and tenements Gathering young children •• Look I know that no -one loves me I don't take it personal I just wonder of the deeper meaning •• I mean If you are still living in this world And aren't wondering why you still are Than we got some serious problem here • All truth is out there to found out easy •• I'm still cool /// //// • || <> /         ( • )   ( • )    \     especially since my girlfriend 's back !! •• Well All I gotta do is go back up there And slap on a title and I'm outta here
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Oct 2, 2014
Oct 2, 2014 at 1:49 AM UTC
Hey la di la
////  •  || <> /        ( •)  ( • )       \ ) ((             (              ) my girlfriend's back gonna save my reputation hey la di la My girlfriend's back  !! •• BROKEN HEARTS ON BROKEN STREETS •• this is the title of a new T V  comedy sitcom on cable /// Some HP people have been offered parts WR KNOW THAT MOST OF YOU ARE QUALIFIED TO PLAY THE WHINEY BANAL BROKEN HEARTS //// WE HAVE ALSO HEARD THAT BERYL DOV MAY HAVE BEEN OFFERED THE PART TO PLAY  OF THE BROKEN STREET BUT WE HAVE ALSO HEARD THAT HE IS IN THE RUNNING FOR THE NOBEL PEACE PRIZE AND SO MAY BE COMMITTED TO CAMPAIGNING FOR IT //: Well enough of this Time to get to the poem you've all been so Anxiously awaiting OH NO ! I'VE GOT WRITER'S BLOCK !! //// just kidding ! Just kidding //// // Well Here it is /:/ Along the path Leads to the ancient bridge Crosses the magic river Leads to the mystic hills /// Thru the slums and tenements Gathering young children •• Look I know that no -one loves me I don't take it personal I just wonder of the deeper meaning •• I mean If you are still living in this world And aren't wondering why you still are Than we got some serious problem here • All truth is out there to found out easy •• I'm still cool /// //// • || <> /         ( • )   ( • )    \     especially since my girlfriend 's back !! •• Well All I gotta do is go back up there And slap on a title and I'm outta here
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