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"noticable" poems
i had a thought. i ran out of my room, down the hallway, and into the bathroom. i wriggled out of my worn down, tie dye shirt. hopping up and down as i pull off my high-waisted jeans, pulling my pant leg with my foot as i trample the dark denim to the ground. i stand there naked, in front of the harsh, full length mirror. combing my fingers through my natural, wavy hair. i contort my face in disgust, cocking my head slightly to the side. i close my eyes, and take one deep breath in. when i open my eyes, the reflection staring back at me is a thin, natural beauty. Her smooth ivory skin glows in the silvery reflective glass. Her stomach is flat and toned. Her ******* lay on Her chest in perfect proportion to the rest of her petite frame. i run my fingers down the sides of my body. my palms trailing along, dipping and rising with the mounds beneath my skin. i close my eyes and open them again, this time taking my reflection for what it really is. i am fat. my skin is pink and spotted with freckles the colour of blood. my stomach hangs low, covering the part a man should see when i'm naked. my ******* are big. but not in the way you'd like them to be. they lay there, sort of lop-sided. hanging just above my ribs. Another place for fat to take over. the cuts on my thighs are hardly noticable next to all that fat i can see tears in the eyes of the reflection staring back at me, but i am numb. i thought correctly. i am fat. i am ugly. Nobody in their right mind would want to love me.
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Nov 13, 2012
Nov 13, 2012 at 6:18 PM UTC
the thought of being naked.
i had a thought. i ran out of my room, down the hallway, and into the bathroom. i wriggled out of my worn down, tie dye shirt. hopping up and down as i pull off my high-waisted jeans, pulling my pant leg with my foot as i trample the dark denim to the ground. i stand there naked, in front of the harsh, full length mirror. combing my fingers through my natural, wavy hair. i contort my face in disgust, cocking my head slightly to the side. i close my eyes, and take one deep breath in. when i open my eyes, the reflection staring back at me is a thin, natural beauty. Her smooth ivory skin glows in the silvery reflective glass. Her stomach is flat and toned. Her ******* lay on Her chest in perfect proportion to the rest of her petite frame. i run my fingers down the sides of my body. my palms trailing along, dipping and rising with the mounds beneath my skin. i close my eyes and open them again, this time taking my reflection for what it really is. i am fat. my skin is pink and spotted with freckles the colour of blood. my stomach hangs low, covering the part a man should see when i'm naked. my ******* are big. but not in the way you'd like them to be. they lay there, sort of lop-sided. hanging just above my ribs. Another place for fat to take over. the cuts on my thighs are hardly noticable next to all that fat i can see tears in the eyes of the reflection staring back at me, but i am numb. i thought correctly. i am fat. i am ugly. Nobody in their right mind would want to love me.
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The old tainted laamp Waits on the wood Where wall meets wall. Waiting for a lightening bolt to strike in me. Waiting for uniqueness to flow. Giving something as noticable as the glow it once shed. Yet storms are delaying waiting for their moment to wake me up. But as we both wait for the unique We'll just sit and stare at each other.
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Feb 4, 2011
Feb 4, 2011 at 9:57 PM UTC
Uniqueness
The women conspiring She meant no pain Her life is shadowy She grew in beauty Naturally she put on a show Well noticable In depths where her gut meets her heart high voltage force, igniting She was privileged, leaving hell She could've freed the flocks in captivity She closed her eyelids Casual steps in vein A void, cutting her insides A wonderment why her point of view remains Pure apology exchanged Sight darkened when her eyes are opened Unexpected she prays How do I change All expectations she never needed Opinion unraveling, she pleaded "Where is forwards deliverance"
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May 18, 2016
May 18, 2016 at 1:43 AM UTC
Mistakes hold individual spaces
Our eyes are evidence of things noticable to us. We becomr the spotlight to other wild side. They are our camera gathering things, as they comes. Similar to a microscope highlighting object closer to us. We must ask ourselves? Why are we afraid of being followed? To some, it's because of the creeping and the sneaking. Notice, how quick cheaters apologize. When they are caught. The camera catches things we shouldn't do. Similar to a recording tape recording your abuse upon others. There's no denying truth, when it placed before you. Action! Lights! Camera! Will you be caught. Remember, the eyes only see, what you expose? Life's evidence for us all.
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Jan 22, 2013
Jan 22, 2013 at 10:43 AM UTC
The Camera(Life's Evidence)
the wall was high it was thick too but it wasn't her fault every boy every lie every ex friend every disappointment just added another brick layers on top of layers of bricks it wasnt noticable until looked at as a whole the wall was high but not impossible to destroy
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Jun 13, 2013
Jun 13, 2013 at 10:36 AM UTC
The Wall
that girl walks down the hallways owning the show, that girl acts as if thoose voices in the background dont even phase her, that girl walks on with a smile, laughing at thoose voices in the background encouraging them even, that girl raises her hand in class and answers correctly, getting the answer right, with claps in her ears she still acts as if the things in the backgound don't matter, that girl goes to all thoose clubs and participates more than anyone else, that girl acts as if the daggers slung at her are simply something to laugh at, something to enjoy, but when no one's looking that girl cares, that girl becomes exactly who she truly is. when no ones looking the grl can be quiet without people wondering "what the **** happend to her?" when no ones looking that girl becomes mellow and lets things sink in, when that girls by herself she let's thoose daggers slice through her flesh leaving thoose awfully noticable scars, when no ones looking that girl can become obnoxious with thoose who society judges the most, without getting crtisized, when that girl is alone she can't help but wonder "what the **** happend to the world? i thought this was once a place to be proud of? once a place to have pride in?"
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Feb 13, 2013
Feb 13, 2013 at 7:32 PM UTC
putting on a show
How pathetic is it That everytime I hear the roaring Of a diesel engine I turn around to glance Secretly hoping it may be you But you sold your truck, And you no longer come out To this part of town. How pathetic is it that everytime a sad song Creeps up on me On the radio My heart begins to pound And the sound of your voice Swirls around in my brain Like a never ending vortex And I'm reminded Of everything you once said The song may be over, But I still remember it word from word And I always seem to find it Still stuck in my head How pathetic is it That still to this day You're the only soul that's ever gotten To me So deep you pierced my heart Your mark is within me forever And it never will heal The scar will forever be noticable How pathetic is it That when I lay down at night I replay the whole past in my head I remember every word Every detail And the exact way you said my name And If you said my name One last time I then could die a happy girl How pathetic is it That you control my every day Yet I have not seen you in almost a year And you are always there waiting for Me In my dreams I just can't seem to escape from you And once I awake I'm left feeling as if a hole was punched Through my chest I feel so empty Maybe tonight I'll be able to Get you off my mind for a little When my blood is flooded with alcohol Even then, You cross my mind and I feel Myself wallowing in my own sorrow Dreaming of the future we could have had And wondering where it all went wrong Its beyond pathetic knowing I'll never get over you Even though you're over me And long gone Never to return to this part of town I'm pathetic and I'll admit it Only because maybe you'll see I need you And come back and save me
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Feb 4, 2014
Feb 4, 2014 at 10:52 PM UTC
pathetic
How pathetic is it That everytime I hear the roaring Of a diesel engine I turn around to glance Secretly hoping it may be you But you sold your truck, And you no longer come out To this part of town. How pathetic is it that everytime a sad song Creeps up on me On the radio My heart begins to pound And the sound of your voice Swirls around in my brain Like a never ending vortex And I'm reminded Of everything you once said The song may be over, But I still remember it word from word And I always seem to find it Still stuck in my head How pathetic is it That still to this day You're the only soul that's ever gotten To me So deep you pierced my heart Your mark is within me forever And it never will heal The scar will forever be noticable How pathetic is it That when I lay down at night I replay the whole past in my head I remember every word Every detail And the exact way you said my name And If you said my name One last time I then could die a happy girl How pathetic is it That you control my every day Yet I have not seen you in almost a year And you are always there waiting for Me In my dreams I just can't seem to escape from you And once I awake I'm left feeling as if a hole was punched Through my chest I feel so empty Maybe tonight I'll be able to Get you off my mind for a little When my blood is flooded with alcohol Even then, You cross my mind and I feel Myself wallowing in my own sorrow Dreaming of the future we could have had And wondering where it all went wrong Its beyond pathetic knowing I'll never get over you Even though you're over me And long gone Never to return to this part of town I'm pathetic and I'll admit it Only because maybe you'll see I need you And come back and save me
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The tree reached up to the sky, desolate and derelict It's moribund image that of a skeletal hand thrusting from the grave, awash with new found life. It seemed almost painted on to the gloomy backdrop of grey clouds inky darkness smeared across the horizon. I watched, saying nothing. The sight had jarred into my senses, like a replay of magpies stuttering across my path earlier that day, spreading out from the treetops. And still, I watched. Not the tree itself, we had passed it as soon as found it, the bus knows no scenic route procrastination. But in my mind, I saw it. There is light now. After the clouds, there is rain, and after the rain there is life, nourishing and fertilising, after the bleakness of winter, we see life anew. There is light now, growing stronger. Faint, but gathering momentum. Those that listen can hear. Those that feel can see, those that live can breathe, those that love, can know. For the brief harmony of Nirvana, the union and entwining of the self and the divine, a lifetime's work can be realised. Still, light and warmth. More noticable, ever expanding. I breathe the same air as those around me. We drink the same water. We eat from the same ground. Yet a million different thoughts separate a million of us. A million different visions born of the same source. And then I remember. It's all just a trip. Safe journey. Enjoy the ride.
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Jan 24, 2012
Jan 24, 2012 at 11:57 AM UTC
Untitled, 2001/2ish
She walks through the door, Confidently Her personality shines bright She is a light kite that flies through the sky Fearlessly Joy is everywhere she goes She struts around with noticable feeling And that feeling is happiness Never shows doubt; In anyone or anything Always looking for someone to help Without ever needing to tell And her friends agree that they do not see One flaw in this girl This girl, is radiant.
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Jun 8, 2014
Jun 8, 2014 at 9:56 PM UTC
Radiant
They sat Together on the porch with Their hot chocolate now beginning to chill He had so much to tell Her how He felt how He saw Her how much She mattered to Him He was so embarrassed to share His feelings He was even worried as to how HIs breath made clouds in the cold air Hers were not as noticable there were many things keeping Them apart the slight mount of snow building between Them the frigidness of the cold air and the secrets the secrets hanging around Him like the halo of the snow angel She had made earlier that night the love He had for Her as refreshing as the cool air against Her soft cheeks yet He was afraid of it He took Her hand in his stared Her in the eye and gathered His courage then She said "I Love You"
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Nov 28, 2011
Nov 28, 2011 at 2:30 PM UTC
A Peaceful Winter Breeze
The silhouette of your body Is noticable from across the world. Your eyes -candy. Lips -taste of sugar. The rugged scruff scratching my face Only burns after the fact. After. Chests beating A thousands times per minute. Huming birds Fetching nectar to keep the world alive. Look at me though. I want to get lost, And only with you. I want to get lost with you To find you. To find us.
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Jul 14, 2015
Jul 14, 2015 at 12:57 PM UTC
Sugar
I am trying not to blame you For what you cannot change You are more than a paper doll With pieces to pick, pull apart, and exchange Your words are smooth satin Can't help but suspect your nonchalance Know I can be standoffish It's simply an automatic response Patterns I am used to Behavior I am around Have me guarded for great reason Heartache all I have ever found It is not your fault you hurt me Instead it's mine for expecting you to keep Promises when you have shown before You will only break them and make me weep No noticable change in behavior Don't know why I'm surprised Don't know why I thought anything would be different Need to accept a future of secrets and lies I meet new obstacles daily Alibis I have to chop down I think I've finally given up Only a matter of time til I drown Weeks passed since any bliss touched our lives With each day that goes by we deepen the space Driving ourselves insane with obsession Madly in love with you, but you only love the chase A game of tug-o'-war neither can win Love has us struggling to get along and agree It is time to realize I'll never change you Just like you cannot change me
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Mar 4, 2019
Mar 4, 2019 at 8:23 PM UTC
Can't Change
Why does one write? What fickle emotion caused an individual to pour their thoughts into this fickle little beach we call reality? Is it joy? Such a blooming emotion that sends gentle waves that lap upon the shore, Changing the way it looks over time, Until one day it is unrecognizable lest you squint your eyes really hard, and turn your head just-so. Is it love? That soaring thing that can bring new perspective to a shore that you have seemingly memorized through years of meandering along it's lengths, Making everything bright and new again. Is it anger? A maelstrom that drives into the shore with an almost unatural fervor, Furrowing and scarring the shoreline in a single night, But it's effect lingers for many years to come. Is it nostalgia? That message in a bottle that you always seem to stumble into while exploring the shore's short length, Only to realize that the messages have arrived always just a bit too late, Not enough to cause a noticable impact upon the beach to an outsider, But brings new meaning to the person who finds it.
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Dec 30, 2018
Dec 30, 2018 at 10:24 PM UTC
Reality Beach
be still as stereo, so you can peep the wilting filigree of the blooming expanse we rarely ever care to choke on. breathe is a question whispered by oceans and i use it coax this **** out of lotus seeds. why?
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Nov 10, 2018
Nov 10, 2018 at 10:30 PM UTC
noticable?
I like those carnivorous butterflies that eat you from the inside out They look beautiful at first until you realize the red color of their wings isn't just for decoration Their little mouths of sharp teeth are hardly noticable But then you look down and see a hole in your body and you ask yourself how you didn't notice it You were too busy looking at the butterflies that  you didn't see them eat your heart out
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Feb 24, 2017
Feb 24, 2017 at 10:29 PM UTC
Blood Butterflies