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"dispiriting" poems
She was dispiriting at that moment That moment where she was just gone Her eyes didn’t hold that soft, gentle gaze. They were replaced with dark, empty irises. The tension was thick, it couldn’t be cut with a butcher knife. Nothing could cut it, it was too deep. Her heart was in pain. Pain of the loss of her beloved, her friend, her mate, her family. He was gone, she was here. She didn’t know what to do. She cried, she knew she could do that. What else could she do? Her lover watched her, in sympathy. Her lover wished she could show, empathy, but, she didn’t understand. So she held her. Her lover was being torn to pieces, and she was holding them together. She didn’t want to lose her, no one would want that. The girl was sad, she missed her best friend. She hated God. Why had He taken him away? What did he do to be taken away? Why did He need more angels? Why did He need HER angel? She didn’t believe in God. But she believed her best friend, was taken away. But from who? She’ll never know. But she’ll never forget. The girl missed him too much. It was getting worse. She was crying in the corner more. Her lover was holding her more. The girl was so confused, didn’t think she was strong anymore. Thought it was time to join him. Her lover stared at her, long and dear and said, “I’ll never leave you.” The girl looked at her, then hugged her. But her heart was still weak. She still missed him.
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Sep 19, 2017
Sep 19, 2017 at 2:12 AM UTC
Loss
The slip is on. It's slippery, But not like a floor, A bit of paper with X's and O's, Offering promises, Gears and clutches needing oil; Not like memory of your speghetti straps, Or an announcement of a slipped lip Revealing dumbfoundery. They are temporal and physical. This slip goes to the soul, Dispiriting and lying low; Not discernable to public scrutiny. I tripped on a rabbit hole That changes the world, And makes me late For a very important date.
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Jan 19, 2016
Jan 19, 2016 at 10:59 AM UTC
The Slip
Stop sticking your pins in my sides I'm not an avatar for someone else's pain I have enough wounds of my own that need to heal so stop trying to make me your voodoo doll because I'm not built for that kind of pain no not at all I know I've done a lot of wrong I know I can't do any right but stop punishing me because of this it's nowhere near worth the fight. So please I beg you against my pride stop stabbing me violently in the side dispiriting my body and reaping my soul because you know I've nowhere to go I'm trapped imprisoned inside my own head the same thing that helps keep me awake could turn on me And I'd wind up dead. I can't escape my mind And I can't get it right if I got up any measure of nerve maybe I wouldn't be writing this tonight I keep trying to exorcise these ghosts upstairs but they keep coming back to life
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Mar 10, 2015
Mar 10, 2015 at 2:10 AM UTC
The Human Voodoo Doll
Let me write of and sympathize with men strong and typical women strong and lyrical and children an ode to joy forever mostly all boxed in twentyfour/seven/twelve home, school, different grades, more school job(s) on the cusp, second job home at night late and yes, there is a tomorrow mow the square of grass in front of the house over and over again years line up ahead the same dispiriting grind but you have a team! Yes your team ! every season beginning anew playing well, job coffee breaks joys for a minute then fading and fading and fading out of it till next year, for sure it will be better and Yes, Remember to Vote for Change then the same old the same old unchanged and now you’re the empty nester the silence is suddenly very loud and there are fewer options now where did it all go
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Mar 26, 2016
Mar 26, 2016 at 2:29 PM UTC
Requiem for a Statistic
Bubbled inside a raindrop as the pressure descends to a whirl that needs us, plus inertia...pop, here lies the jungle inside the main cause measured by Rand in a World that breeds lumps, must be Cancer. Caught up in thoughts of no authority, what else can one do in this dispiriting zeitgeist? As I plot these dots of hope analogy, maybe there's still a chance in these persisting guidelines. Calls of Monks chanting on bright skulls and we seem eager to hear the voice of God, which leaves a lot to be desired like mastering the bright stars in the deep Ether, just to bear this void of course. New waves come and go disguised in these ageing times Apocalypse, the past shouting names of old sinners coming back to life with disgust, like sex-changing minds...I'm appalled by this. Modern demigods blinding clairvoyance with binding flamboyance, and it's hard to sense a touch of innocence there. If it's not the Flaming Sun, then why is it global tolerance for my people to perspire despair in such abundance here?? Dark Clouds cover the mission of Churches along with the diluted message, while Half-Brothers fail to spread their scriptures for searches to diffuse these sketches...
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Jun 10, 2014
Jun 10, 2014 at 5:28 AM UTC
Sketches
My fingertips grasped the fading surface of the water. Begging for something to hold onto, Perhaps the hand of an angel. When in sight I only could see the hands of Death, Beckoning softly yet mercilessly to let go. But how could I let go when there isn’t even something to hold onto? I watched my pale hand run over the last traces of sunlight The last mirage of warmth and life before I’m enveloped into an empty and cold abyss. I struggle but why do I try. When nothing is left to greet me but the fate that is to come. Perchance I am the weight that lets me sink. For all one knows maybe this is part of my doing. But it is such a slow release. Such a dreary escape. I give in to the surrounding darkness. And I come to realize that the mind becomes more alive here than any other place known. Is this the process of death? An analyzation of your span of life up until now The collection of memories and feelings that rush to you for the last time, before they rot in this dispiriting abyss with you. But we all live to die. Once the world gets enough use out of us, down the drain we go. Now apart of someone’s memory. Our decaying body a souvenir of a soul that once animated it, And that’s all we’ll be someday. A reminder of a memory. I finally reached that moment of tranquility. That surge of pure bliss that rummaged through my worn veins. Contentedly, I parted my mouth and let the vicious currents of water to flood inside. The feeling of completion washed over my body as I accepted this release. And danced vibrantly with Death.
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Jul 31, 2016
Jul 31, 2016 at 10:07 PM UTC
Under
My fingertips grasped the fading surface of the water. Begging for something to hold onto, Perhaps the hand of an angel. When in sight I only could see the hands of Death, Beckoning softly yet mercilessly to let go. But how could I let go when there isn’t even something to hold onto? I watched my pale hand run over the last traces of sunlight The last mirage of warmth and life before I’m enveloped into an empty and cold abyss. I struggle but why do I try. When nothing is left to greet me but the fate that is to come. Perchance I am the weight that lets me sink. For all one knows maybe this is part of my doing. But it is such a slow release. Such a dreary escape. I give in to the surrounding darkness. And I come to realize that the mind becomes more alive here than any other place known. Is this the process of death? An analyzation of your span of life up until now The collection of memories and feelings that rush to you for the last time, before they rot in this dispiriting abyss with you. But we all live to die. Once the world gets enough use out of us, down the drain we go. Now apart of someone’s memory. Our decaying body a souvenir of a soul that once animated it, And that’s all we’ll be someday. A reminder of a memory. I finally reached that moment of tranquility. That surge of pure bliss that rummaged through my worn veins. Contentedly, I parted my mouth and let the vicious currents of water to flood inside. The feeling of completion washed over my body as I accepted this release. And danced vibrantly with Death.
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Oct 14, 2018
Oct 14, 2018 at 6:09 PM UTC
Big words
The dispiriting prison bar is now your frontier, What left your character drowned in blood, The environment draws you with fear, Your living corpse plunge to the befoul scud. The critics, the juries, virtually invisible enemies, You need to hear their loathe in the darkness, Around all these hopeless entities, It's a woeful depiction of inferno. They got knives of deception and treachery, As you turn your back, they stab, you kneel, Wish you die in a blink, yet torture gradually, You have entirely deviated the vocation to heal. Victims learn from mistakes, You never did, They will hurt you again for all sakes, But then you realize you're stuck amid.
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Jan 19, 2019
Jan 19, 2019 at 1:31 AM UTC
THE MELODY OF AN OUBLIETTE
Friday’s Fumble Crumble: writ/wrote /needs/work the WR juggernaut, of write/writ/ wrote and associated WoRdy derivatives, a vast complex, the crossover from notion to lively potion, the ****** of completion; a tricky ******* 1st an  enticement, inevitably a first unsatisfactory shot, the dispiriting recognition that what you got ain’t good… a dissolution of resolution, the look back~try again, picking off the fleshy morsels from the Valley of Bones, that demands a really funereal and t. swift sea burial, thus energized by seawater , or the slapping **** from ***** dirt comes re~energy, a burst of a covert  coverup, then comes a gleam, the light of a beam in the seams of your fingertips, a repeating  secretion of ideas that refuse to give in to a ceremony of deletion, a prescrip for a sad~glad emotive repast, a look back, longing glance, but with a new hope of rejiggering, that sticky secretion ‘pon dying, yet enervating, dancing fingertips, spewing gobs so fast of wordy worthy battered batter, throwing in some Heath bar crumble, soon enuf the oven is cooking! baking and the smoking aroma of over~heated sheets of paper of soon to be crisply delivering cookies extraordinaire, but alas, ‘twas all in the mind and is unjustly a recipe, for ashes of a burnt dreams and the tenses clench/de clench when the writ is wrote, but never, not ever is it ever just rote… *@nd that’s what ya get when you witty-gritty-wrote *@ 2:06am 7/26/2024*
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Jul 26, 2024
Jul 26, 2024 at 7:31 AM UTC
Friday’s Fumble Crumble: writ/wrote /needs work (for new poets)
in the midst of the whirlwind inside that begat every jagged shard of which the fragments—ever so carefully shattered— remain the only reminiscent shadow of what once was of your heart that in spending time with you come deafening bursts of menacing contemplation bleak musings of pure despair seemingly intent on dispiriting every bone in your flesh absent a way to stifle blaring thoughts amid such daunting solitude one look in the mirror paired with words of distaste— for you seem never to pause for mutterings other than that of repugnance— a critic to your own, a belittler to none other than self that an unadorned you bare, stripped down i will know to love— every sheer nook and cranny— for who you are the greatest terror lies in digging deep inside of you and what clandestinity it may reveal for in my chiseling a torment so immense will befall you through which gales you ought to learn the significance of knowing how to hold your own hand and walking you through such tempestuous bits to learn to quiet your mind, still your soul for one does not simply stumble upon the tranquil silence he yearns to be acquainted with and the acceptance he ever so wishfully aches for but in the midst of such turbulence i shall set out to learn to love you in spite of you
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Apr 11, 2020
Apr 11, 2020 at 10:40 PM UTC
in spite of you
Please, save me from home and our status quo zones Where my dear and the misanthrope stay Where sometimes is heard no dispiriting words But the clouds are still cloudy all day Home, home is so strange Where my fear and the forlorn hope lay Where is often is heard many recurring words And I need to go outside and play
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Mar 31, 2020
Mar 31, 2020 at 11:49 PM UTC
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