sleeping in til nine
put contacts in the wrong eye
outside getting rained in
listeing to micheal cera palin
different cold the wet and dark
the body and soul drift apart
coworker said "running late"
no need to worry, there is no hate
o how happy i am again
o so happy my friends
im doing just fine
on my daily grind
feeling out my insides
there's been a lot to realize
just trying to figure this soul out
acting like a **** fool, no doubt
always check the left
never been right i guess
born not normal in the right place
been left to find out, im a disgrace
all because my hands are southpaw
it's become my greatest flaw
not something i can change
not something i want to change
first four, setting, first point of conflict. second four, the body and mind separate. (rest follows the pattern set in second four.) third four, body is talking about delights in my current physical grind, for which i draw a lot of pleasure. fourth four, mind is talking learning about myself, and recalling previous embarrassments (growth). fifth four, body is talking about how i get confused and check for the L made on my left hand, pattern goes LRRL, sometimes i feel like the earth is made to easy for right handed people, and i therefore do not belong. sixth four, mind is talking, (realization and resolution. please reread once or twice and give me some feedback!
