it was plucked from his eyes, his heart,
and the sheer wonder that left them,
stunned.
some cacophonous reverie,
a discordant daydream, pure wants and hopes,
and loves and laughs-- all faded.
what eclectic energy there was in them,
some flicker of familiarity and warmth--
led to a slow, burning descent into some place
he might call home soon.
finally wrote another one, not sure how I feel about it.