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"villanelles" poems
(I don't really hate pantoums, but once, when I wrote about the rules for repeating forms like pantoums and villanelles, one girl commented "I hate pantoums and villanelles. I guess I get bored easily." But this only provoked me to write a Pantoum using her words, just a little edited.) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hate pantoums and villanelles because I'm very easily bored when a poem goes on and on, and tells the things that have been said before. Because I'm very easily bored, I get impatient for lots of stuff. The things that have been said before don't need repeating. Once is enough. I get impatient, for lots of stuff I get to hear throughout the day don't need repeating. Once is enough to understand what you have to say. I get to hear throughout the day the same old news again and again. To understand what you have to say should not be hard. Intelligent men and women don't need those extra lines when a poem goes on and on, and tells what it's said before, too many times. I hate pantoums – and villanelles!
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May 18, 2016
May 18, 2016 at 3:15 PM UTC
Pantoum -- "I hate pantoums . . ."
The couplet's first in writing villanelles; if you desire your work to be its best, a singleness in purpose always tells. Of course, the open has the hook that sells, your reader is seduced to read the rest. The couplet's first in writing villanelles. Your second line resides in writer's hell, the rhyme-rich ending word must meet the test and singleness in purpose always tells. Pentameter iambic works just swell, but matters not, as many will attest. The couplet's first in writing villanelles. Last stanza rolls around, the poet's well is nearly dry, their muse under duress; a singleness in purpose always tells. The final lines! Relax, and sit a spell, enjoy the glow of formal poem's success. The couplet's first in writing villanelles. a singleness in purpose always tells.
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Apr 15, 2015
Apr 15, 2015 at 9:56 AM UTC
On Writing Villanelles
Dream for me a Savannah, a sestina in reds at Pandora’s threshold, clothed in bludgeons of light and these tears are nothing but the nightingale’s burden, the words laden and livid as storm across the mauve wasteland unfolds, the sky in its deceit, promises rain, delivers nothing, in this room the light will ruin me, the squall of glass slippers overhead, on my knees, now the abstraction of the body, opaque I write in the limber whisper of fingertips, deep villanelles about love, restless love on the skin of your back, histories annotated by gestures of supplication, I drag fingernails across a fairytale and out falls a wide-eyed harem, April-blue veils trail their blood, narrowing the flagrant staccato echo in my sternum, A palm reader warns of conduits and spells, the darkness that puddles like lake water in my mind, moths of Summer a fragrant blue, restless blue notes like scorpions scurry beneath the blankets, strands of hair, stained sheets this vacancy glows through the shears I forget, how early, and still the night falls here, as how early it fails.....
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Jan 10, 2013
Jan 10, 2013 at 5:07 PM UTC
Dreamscape:
I am the first page of a well-loved novel, But often the first one ignored, Dog-eared and transparent at the corners From the touch of one too many hands And witness to the enterprising twist of a smile As my readers are privileged to only pieces of me. You, like the binding that surrounds me, Enclose and encircle all that I am. Write a novel Under my skin. I’ve falsified too many smiles, Sacrificed even the best of myself for ignorant Delusions of caressing hands That take and abuse my corners. The used bookstore on the corner Of Middlebury Marbleworks, Otter Creek and window-origami — My salvation and river-penance. Seek my story with hands That feel to comprehend, with novel Softness and a tenderness that ignores My pleading glances and indecisive smiles As you speak in hush-whispers. Smile With your eyes as you touch my spine — corner Me at the exit. I want you to ignore Faults, make peace with flaws that inhabit me Like poetry misplaced within a novel, Or willow branches falling too low, tired hands. I memorized the shape of your hands The first time we danced to Chaplin’s “Smile,” And wrote on the broadness of your shoulders a novel Of my sins, apologies stretching to your corners In villanelles — repeating refrains. It took all of me To tell you what I could no longer ignore. Because once you start to ignore Conflictions that exist in the nerve-endings of your hands, What you feel becomes a burden. For me, Sand ran out of the hourglass when our smiles Stopped touching — and at the corner Of Maple Street and Printer’s Alley, I said goodbye, our novelty Gone. Still, I find it hard to ignore what used to be when you smile As you look at her, your hands on her back in the corner Of the room. You remain my unfinished novel.
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Mar 8, 2015
Mar 8, 2015 at 12:17 AM UTC
Atelophobia, Last Fall
I am the first page of a well-loved novel, But often the first one ignored, Dog-eared and transparent at the corners From the touch of one too many hands And witness to the enterprising twist of a smile As my readers are privileged to only pieces of me. You, like the binding that surrounds me, Enclose and encircle all that I am. Write a novel Under my skin. I’ve falsified too many smiles, Sacrificed even the best of myself for ignorant Delusions of caressing hands That take and abuse my corners. The used bookstore on the corner Of Middlebury Marbleworks, Otter Creek and window-origami — My salvation and river-penance. Seek my story with hands That feel to comprehend, with novel Softness and a tenderness that ignores My pleading glances and indecisive smiles As you speak in hush-whispers. Smile With your eyes as you touch my spine — corner Me at the exit. I want you to ignore Faults, make peace with flaws that inhabit me Like poetry misplaced within a novel, Or willow branches falling too low, tired hands. I memorized the shape of your hands The first time we danced to Chaplin’s “Smile,” And wrote on the broadness of your shoulders a novel Of my sins, apologies stretching to your corners In villanelles — repeating refrains. It took all of me To tell you what I could no longer ignore. Because once you start to ignore Conflictions that exist in the nerve-endings of your hands, What you feel becomes a burden. For me, Sand ran out of the hourglass when our smiles Stopped touching — and at the corner Of Maple Street and Printer’s Alley, I said goodbye, our novelty Gone. Still, I find it hard to ignore what used to be when you smile As you look at her, your hands on her back in the corner Of the room. You remain my unfinished novel.
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The city's shrouded in smoke today smoke coats my mouth, throat & eyes & I know, I know.        I should be writing in form, in rhyme - villanelles, sonnets, terza rima       some say there's too much free verse, some say, it's like everyone's jumped on the bandwagon        yet the most of the magazines still all want rhyme                  but sometimes this is just the tune                                     your heart sings, a broken smile                                     & the way the images build up                                         waiting to sail like ships in the harbor & besides, should we really be writing in villanelles when we are the Mad & I see now, the best minds of our generation, the gifted, the naked wastrels of the coming apocalypse, talking to lamp posts, screaming of Ginsberg's Moloch & the wrongs they did us, yet not destroyed even as we scream locked behind whitewashed walls in razor-blade glint & halogenic glow of ECT or walk the empty streets at guerilla dawn & dusk, bearing the ample weight of our drugged-up minds like those martyrs of the old Soviet Union & clinging on to memoirs of our stolen, interrupted, spiritual awakening, searching for the redemption of litter in this hobo life,  changing countries like some change bed sheets, others rooted by the invisible chains of familiarity & home, still calling for the road, oh Kerouac, the fallen angels of tomorrow strung out on sweet childhood memories & jazz in starved sunsets, picking themselves up to pick at their scab wounds, spitting at corrupt governments, bitter with alcohol, writing poems of unrequited love to poets far better than us, while Elvis croons in the background & a Baboushka spits sunflower seeds in the Russian town of my ancestors & an open air film plays in black & white & this colorless summer is nearly over & they still haven't lifted their sanctions them with their stone gods of war & psychiatry, always lining up the next undesirables : you could be next, yes you with the rainbow eyes you the believer, you the dreamer of visions Oh pity them, the children of smoke, blind to the vagabond, the poet, the lover lost children always seeking out the same roads the city is shrouded in smoke & I wonder if it's not always been there & if we're living amongst blind men ones that never read poems or else how could all this happen
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Aug 9, 2015
Aug 9, 2015 at 11:22 AM UTC
Smoke
The city's shrouded in smoke today smoke coats my mouth, throat & eyes & I know, I know.        I should be writing in form, in rhyme - villanelles, sonnets, terza rima       some say there's too much free verse, some say, it's like everyone's jumped on the bandwagon        yet the most of the magazines still all want rhyme                  but sometimes this is just the tune                                     your heart sings, a broken smile                                     & the way the images build up                                         waiting to sail like ships in the harbor & besides, should we really be writing in villanelles when we are the Mad & I see now, the best minds of our generation, the gifted, the naked wastrels of the coming apocalypse, talking to lamp posts, screaming of Ginsberg's Moloch & the wrongs they did us, yet not destroyed even as we scream locked behind whitewashed walls in razor-blade glint & halogenic glow of ECT or walk the empty streets at guerilla dawn & dusk, bearing the ample weight of our drugged-up minds like those martyrs of the old Soviet Union & clinging on to memoirs of our stolen, interrupted, spiritual awakening, searching for the redemption of litter in this hobo life,  changing countries like some change bed sheets, others rooted by the invisible chains of familiarity & home, still calling for the road, oh Kerouac, the fallen angels of tomorrow strung out on sweet childhood memories & jazz in starved sunsets, picking themselves up to pick at their scab wounds, spitting at corrupt governments, bitter with alcohol, writing poems of unrequited love to poets far better than us, while Elvis croons in the background & a Baboushka spits sunflower seeds in the Russian town of my ancestors & an open air film plays in black & white & this colorless summer is nearly over & they still haven't lifted their sanctions them with their stone gods of war & psychiatry, always lining up the next undesirables : you could be next, yes you with the rainbow eyes you the believer, you the dreamer of visions Oh pity them, the children of smoke, blind to the vagabond, the poet, the lover lost children always seeking out the same roads the city is shrouded in smoke & I wonder if it's not always been there & if we're living amongst blind men ones that never read poems or else how could all this happen
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Oh dear villanelle You seem to be the death of me Trying to write you, all seems unwell Stubborn mademoiselle You are, only wanting a very specific rhyme scheme Oh dear villanelle Why can’t you be kinder, my voice yells Word play seems a challenge Trying to write you, all seems unwell All lines to end with an –elle? Why not a –eek, or a – yike or an -ouch Oh dear villanelle What a villain –elle You seem to be Trying to write you, all seems unwell I do wish that villanelles Will never be confined to one specific form Oh dear villanelle Trying to write you, all seems unwell
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Aug 8, 2013
Aug 8, 2013 at 11:34 PM UTC
Trying to write a villanelle
He awakens, sighs, bones acreak at every move. Reaches for the boilerplate, straps on his rapier wit (but half of once it was), takes an aching hold of his rusty lance, and mounts the ancient keyboard. In clattering, staccato bursts, they gallop through acres of verse:  thatches of haiku and senryu, prim English gardens of sonnet, manicured villanelles, and mile after mile of untamed blank verse just like this. All along the journey, he tilts at the ogres in his mind, swiping in steady rhythm at possesive pronouns replacing contractions, your/you're...their/they're...its/it's...gah! Set to charge full speed downhill from the Valhallan heights of two courses of college English at unedited mounds of unexamined thoughts, he fetches up sharply; slows to a trot, looking uphill at the hordes of English majors eyeing him and his keyboard with malice aforethought.
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Jan 13, 2011
Jan 13, 2011 at 4:06 AM UTC
Quixote redux
Whose words these are I think I know. He's on another website, though; He will not see me shopping here To snitch his words for me to show. My readership must think it queer; I post ten thousand poems a year. Between the copies, pastes and likes I've barely time to chug a beer. They give their addled heads a shake And ask if there is some mistake. The others call me out, a creep. Who cares? They're just a bunch of flakes. Their poems are lovely, dark, and deep, But I have villanelles to sneak, And lines to own before I sleep, And lines to own before I sleep.
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Apr 7, 2015
Apr 7, 2015 at 2:15 PM UTC
Shopping For Words (parody, NOT instructions)
Sapphic poems call upon mathematic skills, as meter meted out over three lines, groups of two feet followed by three, again two,                               ending with five beats. Even this old formalist, prehistoric in his method, limps along through elevens, just like playing Jethro Tull, Lynyrd Skynyrd;                               seven-four, five-four. Hear the roar of dinosaurs in the tar pits, stuck in sonnets, villanelles, rhymes and rhythms, sinking slowly, praying for preservation;                               creative fossils.
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Apr 11, 2015
Apr 11, 2015 at 7:23 PM UTC
Terror-dactyls
Do you see me? I’ve been devouring poetry, by the line, by the page, by the book. No poem has been overlooked. I’ve been feasting on free verse, blank verse, perverse cascades of stanzas and rhymes, a banquet of words on which to dine. I’ve been swallowing ad nauseam, scarfing down similes, masticating metaphors, gormandizing poems aplenty. Rhyming couplets, I’ve contained them. Sonnets and epics, ingested. Lyrical odes, digested. A thousand lines to make you swoon. I’ve tasted them all— the potent and the picayune. Villanelles, check. Sestinas too. I even hiccupped my own haiku: Icicles melt on glazed gutters. Water drips, prolific, bits of sunlit seeds promising lilacs below the eaves. Do you see me? I hate to ask, but I’m afraid something poetic has happened. my head is a tureen brimming with stars my arms are utensils in a darkened drawer my chest, a room of last resort my feet are stressed, in short Such prosody is blinding. Can you tell me why my eyes are bleak? Or why I no longer blink? I sense the sear of fluent tears composing on my cheek: endless drops, black beads, consumptive stains of ink.
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Oct 17, 2016
Oct 17, 2016 at 10:22 AM UTC
Self-Serving Poetry
Beneath the barricades of lotus fronds and flowers, lurks beauty, brains all watching the goddess of shadows seeking respite from the burning sun and banter of imagery that clings delicately to the fabric of questions seeking anonymity. Once in a while the curtains draw and a face appears. smiling, seeking showing a glimpse of magical moments tempting, teasing, wonderful carved in a flash of inner beauty that straddles the page and withdraws back into the folds of wonder. " I bet the suspense is killing you!" Who am I?" She said sweetly. I searched through all the pages of poetry and people columns, ears to the ground surging through swords and diamantes, villanelles and wonders swords and acrostics, aquatics and wooded forests near tempered lakes picnics and parks and I watched the sunset settle in a twilight sky of burgundy and roses. All. I did not find you heart beating against my chest or my words echoing its hypnotic trance against your ears! Anonymous it will be.
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Feb 22, 2014
Feb 22, 2014 at 5:19 PM UTC
anonymous
I'm in a cool group. To stay on top of my writing, and to promote and market my poetry, I often publish online. If Lord Byron could hear that. In this place that I belong, I have deadlines. I procrastinate until the very last day, and then scribble some ****** lines and get angry with myself for putting the writing off. I have a couple of weeks before I need to write a sonnet or villanelle. I'm getting anxiety. It's not producing the desired effect of hard work or discipline. No Not that. It is getting me thinking. That is sometimes productive, and usually comical. I'm thinking about the 15 months I've been sober. For many years, I was miserable. Drinking and writing. Writing and drinking. Holding the bottle of ***** to my shivering lips to get the last spider of liquid. My clothes smelled of decay and cowardice, and everything tasted like rotten meat. Now, I have a beautiful maple desk that my three cats like to sleep on while I write poems about procrastination and sobriety. Such fuzzy black miracles. They twitch as they dream of fish and catnip, and just maybe they dream about writing a sonnet for me. We are all addicted to something.
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Apr 18, 2024
Apr 18, 2024 at 6:44 PM UTC
Sonnets and Villanelles and Cats on my Desk
The basement compound is full of stacks. Six thousand plus books in alpha order. Welcome, bibliophiles and novice poets. The lighting is courtesy of a three-bulb tree. A balanced diet of tomes, sonnets & Limericks, prose poems in tongues. A cheval glass mirror sees Wendell Berry. The room under the stairs has anthologies. Each volume is part of a collective whole. Vendler on Dickinson & New York Haiku. This one-time coal-bin has a dehumidifier To keep it alive & free of mold. The poets are unaware of the visits of A baby raccoon who almost ate Auden. They are sleeping soundly, immune to Dog-eared magazines in the reject corner. Lorca himself rests just above the sump Pump & Yeats across from the water heater. The furnace keeps Frost warm in winter & The Lady of the Lake dry. Come & check out the underground home Of Thomas’ and Plath’s villanelles. No photo ID card needed here, just a Healthy, insatiable appetite for metaphor. There is one requirement: patrons must Leave cell phones at the top of the stairs. & they must have a love-affair with the real Thing, a desire to touch a book. Yes, all six thousand plus volumes are, or Were, in print – made of paper and glue. © Lewis Bosworth, 4-2017
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Apr 25, 2017
Apr 25, 2017 at 9:30 PM UTC
Underground Poetry
1. I will baptize the sky with new waters, washing the Birger Sandzen pink from the clouds. Cattle reject their reflection in farm ponds. Trees turn their backs to the horizon and bow. Indigo night. Angular lights in the distance: Freight train roars. Empty cars headed northward.        2. I will baptize the Earth with new fire, scorching stubble and sod from the Plains. Cattle nudge clods of dirt for sweet tendrils. Trees shape words, but can no longer spell. Charcoal cairns point the way to deep furrows. Growing pains. Orange flames headed nowhere.        3. I will baptize my heart with new poetry, spilling villanelles into my veins. Cattle low for soft yodels from cowboys. Trees sashay to the solos of birds. Rosy-fingered dawns in my songs? I sail elsewhere. Orange, blue. Twilight hues headed homeward.
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Aug 16, 2018
Aug 16, 2018 at 9:44 AM UTC
Orange, Blue
Midnight   crashes in thunderclap   headache darkness     spreading a virus black   skin   infection      hear the sea cannot see it mumble in   sigh out night of sonnets melting to   haikus couplets     nothing rubies on my lips    jewels   I've never known on my hand      you made me faint    made my (day)dreams Technicolor whispered villanelles      buried them broken bones   in sand      inhaled your language stored stories    for next time twenty-six   things twenty-six   letters play   pause   repeat play   pause   repeat    craved you smoke/drugs/booze in eyes lost backs of   knees fingers on      spines eleven fifty nine      fifty nine reality soaks through a ****** wound    as the message in the bottle    you sway away fictional     fading    closed
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Jul 16, 2014
Jul 16, 2014 at 4:28 PM UTC
End
*Where did the words go Where did all the poetic sentences go The descriptions about how I feel How the river of my Soul went still How the Ocean of my heart can no longer be sailed How my innocent emotions were jailed Where are the sonnets that stole my sadness Where are the songs that saved me from madness Where are the stars that twinkled in the sky of my faith Where's the warm breeze that characterized my breath Where are the couplets that were perfect outlets Where are the quatrains that filled my sensory pamphlets Where are the dawns of the promise that someday I will heal Where is the time I wrote to **** Where is the love in every corner of this sphere Where I'm I and why I'm I here Where is the mountain of my philosophical perspiration Where're the blissful springs of inspiration Where is the pan gram to use all the alphabet in describing situations Where are the rhythmical villanelles of my unanswered questions?*
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Nov 7, 2015
Nov 7, 2015 at 5:26 PM UTC
WHERE ARE THEY?
I’m still writing villanelles for the dead, for the people with useless eyes. If only I could write for you instead. I let them live inside my head and somehow they speak of my demise. I’m still writing villanelles for the dead. As I lay with the weight of lead, on stormy waters I don’t capsize. If only I could write for you instead. I feel this rising sense of dread, I fear I know what this implies. I’m still writing villanelles for the dead. Do you dream of a warm, safe bed? Only you with the countless lies, if only I could write for you instead. I should have listened to what you said when your goodbye came as no surprise. I’m still writing villanelles for the dead; if only I could write for you instead.
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Mar 9, 2018
Mar 9, 2018 at 2:00 PM UTC
Villanelles for the Dead
What beauty the blank page holds Like fresh fallen snow Before the kids shake their slumber Before the earth has begun to yawn And I like to watch it wake As fragments turn to sentences Turn to fragments Turn to villanelles Turn to sonnets As people turn to leashed desk job dogs Or artists Or lovers Or dust As I turn to what this page becomes And ay there's the rub As endless pages in days won't Turn to endless days in pages But the blank page remains Timeless
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Jul 7, 2014
Jul 7, 2014 at 1:53 PM UTC
Untitled
It isn't the hard work of which I hate to pluck meaningful phrases from thin air it's Villanelles are hard to fabricate, I can roll my sleeves, to tackle work, mate and tackle with will but even with care it isn't the hard work of which I hate, or the sad fact that self will self berate or that one can't insert with some kind of flair it's villanelles are hard to fabricate, but I'll battle on, correct or delate you've heard of the phrase lol of ''she who dares'' it isn't the hard work of which I hate, I guess it's not part of the human estate or of a struggling with human affairs it's villanelles are hard to fabricate, but, I shall end now, it is getting late and I'm getting headaches from this page glare it isn't the hard work, of which, I hate but villanelles, are hard, to fabricate!
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Jan 23, 2021
Jan 23, 2021 at 2:20 PM UTC
a Villanelle fabrication.