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As a dear friend you care for me
Sure as the air I breathe
To love me anymore than this
Not sure if I believe
Each day anew the Sun will rise
But nighttime hides away
Thus, your love and affection
If here, will never stay

Was given Cinderella's ball
Before midnight's last strike
Must scurry from the pageantry
Else, face a certain fright
Extravagance would disappear
Revealing to the Prince
Her true self in the deepest way
The pains that made her wince

Afraid once she was vulnerable
Find out was all a lie
A ****** that would pierce through her heart
With certainty she'd die
Truth though, if given that moment
Each flaw the Prince could see
Each one a part of Cinderella;
Part of her beauty

Suddenly, she understood
She did not have to hide
What was closed off long time ago
And buried deep inside
Still with some fear, her heart she gave
And with a lightning strike
Fulfilled with happiness and love
And stepped into the light
I was toiling over the structure of this poem. I often like short succinct lines but almost every even and odd line are paired and could easily make four, four-line stanzas each with 7 iambs. Curious what others might think. Any comments are appreciated.  

Written: November 12, 2018

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[Iambic Heptameter format]
Jelena Nov 2018
Dreams is what we see
Lies is what we hear
pain is what we feel
We are the monsters
we don't need a heart
we just need a soul
Something i wrote some years ago :D
loggi Nov 2018
I think I enjoy the pastel colors
That rest upon the wall.
Just floating in soft ease
With colors not too bright.

Sometimes I think
If I was a color,
I would be much too dark
And seldom used
Because of the own
Hue I came acquired to
Through all my experience.

Just painting my whole life thus far
Would seem a waste... I think.
But being so unsaturated seems boring.
I think I enjoy the shades I've mixed
Met, and laughed along with
Even if I doubt it.
choco is late Nov 2018
Your
Pen
is
tantamount
to
a
Wand

When
You
write,
You
can
do
Magic.
I saw Writers as Wizards casting spells through their evoking-emotion-and -thought-provoking-words
Nigel Finn Oct 2018
Take a break, because life is long
But nothing’s as bad as it seems,
When the reality around you’s all gone wrong
And the night just brings bad dreams.

As endless as life seems to be
Know nothing lasts forever
If not for you, there’d be no me
When my tomorrows turn to never

I don’t care who you are to me
If we’re strangers or we’re friends
My love’s for all humanity
And tomorrow never ends…
Found this in an old collection of notes that were almost lost forever. I'm leaving this one here so that I won't forget to work on it in the future. I feel like it has potential.
hazem al jaber Oct 2018
Felon you are ...


as you always ...
live into my eyes ...
no matter ...
day nor night ...
you also live ...
so deep ...
inside my hearts ...
with every new beats ...
it's reminds me ...
about the guest ...
who lives always in me ...
whom stole my every breathe ...
whom i feel within ...
in spite of remoteness ...
i keep always ...
feel and thinking of you ...
wherever you be ...
i could feel you ...
hear you ...
even your sweet aroma ...
i swear that i smell you ...

sweetheart ...
what you did to me ...
how you could do ...
to made me ...
as a crazy lover ...
runs in a dark desert ...
running after you ...
following every star ...
into my sky ...
just to catch you ...
to talk with you ...
about the love ...
which you sowed ...
inside my heart ...
to be as huge tree ...
never ever to die ...

oh sweet angel mine ...
what you'v did to me ...
you got me ...
a crazy poet  ...
writing only ...
about you and me ...
and about the love ...
that i really need ...

felon you are ...
but i love you ...

hazem al ..
Colm Oct 2018
The shadows and consistencies
        The same old songs are killing me

Today I need unfiltered light
        A life away from reflective screens

Today I need another me
        Today I need another me
the state of being strikingly different from something else, typically something in juxtaposition or close association.
a M b 3 R Oct 2018
wishing the one i was hugging
was you
wishing the one i rested my head against on
was you
the one that held my hand
the one that fingers ran across my hair
the one that held up my head
and kissed...
it was you
sorry it wasn’t*
it was all my imagination
but i wished it was
sadly wishes don’t come true
but i loved u
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