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"offsets" poems
A follow on poem to 'In the Sunroom (Suicide)"  (1) writ many years later... ~For MWK~ <> A stray thought. a burring burrowing, thorny tawny: A wish, yet to get, but vetted for each of us. *This within, this redoubt, a contemplative oasis, my indoor poet's nookery rookery sanctuary each one, each is, deserves, all, one such, a place holy filled, with lice and dirt of a life, strained and trained for emission and transmission of the best of the worst, and the triumphant emergent commission of our individualized most excellent fresh best where crumbs of apple crisp pie solidify, vanilla bean ice cream melt offsets the oven heated warmth, and from this interactive contrasts combative, a poem pie reborn, newly disguised, familiar words, yet unheard and before this very never, went unspoken and now goes forth svelte and unbroken *rhymes of yore, forgot from a before, but making up the walls of the here and now, a sunroom to spread out the lit lights of egress and entrance, of fire door no exits that now are chiseled closed, lock in, lock up, and somehow, one, stills to learn from the stilling quiet solitude. to penetrate the prostrate kneeling grinning grief, how to expel and spell the words that grant relief visit my sunroom, though no fiction. the sun rays *********** create the friction of that which cannot ever be withered nor contained, and your mouth opens wide and a poem birthed and delivered, pastiche paste composted of truth and dreams of fiction, fine diction, with a shrug, a smile, a satisfaction extracted extraordinary, you garner moments of satisfaction but cloud cover returns, and the process of sunrise exposition recommences, and one revisits the elemental sequencing of all the predecessor pain, but this time, for gain, for gain, <> written this sabbath Saturday 12:38am EST Sat Aug 2 2025 in the sunroom, on Shelter Island
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Aug 2, 2025
Aug 2, 2025 at 12:59 AM UTC
Each of us needs a sunroom
A follow on poem to 'In the Sunroom (Suicide)"  (1) writ many years later... ~For MWK~ <> A stray thought. a burring burrowing, thorny tawny: A wish, yet to get, but vetted for each of us. *This within, this redoubt, a contemplative oasis, my indoor poet's nookery rookery sanctuary each one, each is, deserves, all, one such, a place holy filled, with lice and dirt of a life, strained and trained for emission and transmission of the best of the worst, and the triumphant emergent commission of our individualized most excellent fresh best where crumbs of apple crisp pie solidify, vanilla bean ice cream melt offsets the oven heated warmth, and from this interactive contrasts combative, a poem pie reborn, newly disguised, familiar words, yet unheard and before this very never, went unspoken and now goes forth svelte and unbroken *rhymes of yore, forgot from a before, but making up the walls of the here and now, a sunroom to spread out the lit lights of egress and entrance, of fire door no exits that now are chiseled closed, lock in, lock up, and somehow, one, stills to learn from the stilling quiet solitude. to penetrate the prostrate kneeling grinning grief, how to expel and spell the words that grant relief visit my sunroom, though no fiction. the sun rays *********** create the friction of that which cannot ever be withered nor contained, and your mouth opens wide and a poem birthed and delivered, pastiche paste composted of truth and dreams of fiction, fine diction, with a shrug, a smile, a satisfaction extracted extraordinary, you garner moments of satisfaction but cloud cover returns, and the process of sunrise exposition recommences, and one revisits the elemental sequencing of all the predecessor pain, but this time, for gain, for gain, <> written this sabbath Saturday 12:38am EST Sat Aug 2 2025 in the sunroom, on Shelter Island
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I am the Bird of Hermes, I devoured my own wings, And that is how I keep myself tamed. Like a dark ghost you haunt me, Wherever I go, your memories stalk me, You think you knew me, But the reality is far from the fantasy, You have just seen the worst in me, How would you look at me now? A piller of strength, One, with dangerous potential, in the end, it's all sequential Part of the tragedy is that life is unforgetful, So strong that others fear my potential, So dark and timid, yet so calm it offsets, the storm that goes where I go, To the point where I have to bite my wings, And stop myself from soaring, Cause this is not the story of Icarus, But of the Fallen Bird that outgrew the master, Yes, I am the Bird of Hermes, And I devoured my own wings, So that I remain tamed.
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Feb 12, 2019
Feb 12, 2019 at 4:47 AM UTC
The Bird of Hermes
U will never find a Sunrise, that Sunsets Her Treasured Smile. U will never find a Season, that Offsets Her Romancing Style. Her Mind that races Faster, has Hands that are often Kind. Her Heart is always Forgiving, with Generosity U will never Find. She's your Shade, in sultry Summer and your Blanket, when it's Cold. Her Nights are lit with Passions, with Desires Hot and Bold. There's much more to a Woman, than what's written on Her Face. With Feelings that are Full of Life. She will win any given Race.
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Jun 18, 2022
Jun 18, 2022 at 10:42 AM UTC
She's your Shade and Blanket
some tongues are forever wagging where it all comes from I do not know and how the universe soaks it up word by word and offsets it all balancing with the silence of space vast sump collecting all the chatter storing and dissipating Earths gossip
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Jun 15, 2014
Jun 15, 2014 at 11:48 AM UTC
gossip
My earthly desire is to have... a woman comprised of softness, both in flesh and soul. Her presence offsets the hardness of everyday living that bluntly smacks me. To be with a spirit, overflowing with joy, greeting me daily with unexpected sweetness, soothes all internal bruises from the day's accumulation of subtle brutality. Rubies belie her value to me; her natural radiance permeates my core, allowing me to experience intimacy.
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Mar 30, 2012
Mar 30, 2012 at 11:03 AM UTC
Poem: My Proverbs 31 Wife
You won't remember all the fuss you cause, my precious microcosm This strange bewildering exhausting global economy you dwell in Apparently the lease expired and your time has come Driven by grievance more than strategy It sets the stage for fireworks and confusion In one dizzying morning into afternoon I'm searching for who to blame Histories on the episode may well spend a chapter on your mother's unhinged notions née crazy talk It becomes clear in real time how the risks of an escalating trade war give a centimeter, take a centimeter And the fraying of longstanding ties Could quickly outpace the ability to evict you As your mother, the normal first responder to your distress, I can do Absolutely nothing about it but push In what seems a shoot-first approach to such a delicate moment The escalation, the unpredictability, the erratic nature of developments Is central to what is going on Something is breaking That something is me! Our world is on edge Looking for a sign of what to do next The labor market drops and you're crowned a royal pain Peace is found, it's proportional And by all measures you're quite hale quite beautiful! This offsets the damage of a messy exit The disconnect I incessantly prayed for offers melancholy over relief In our opening act you're already moving away from me While the female body is a powerful tool It cannot provide a settled rule book for such internal battle Still, this adventure, scary and catastrophic as it was, is well-suited to the wonders that I am For that I'm grateful to my Creator The lesson of the last several hours is that forces are unfolding that we can't do much to contain We're merely nesting passengers en route to a foreign destination
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Oct 18, 2019
Oct 18, 2019 at 6:00 PM UTC
Moving Day
You won't remember all the fuss you cause, my precious microcosm This strange bewildering exhausting global economy you dwell in Apparently the lease expired and your time has come Driven by grievance more than strategy It sets the stage for fireworks and confusion In one dizzying morning into afternoon I'm searching for who to blame Histories on the episode may well spend a chapter on your mother's unhinged notions née crazy talk It becomes clear in real time how the risks of an escalating trade war give a centimeter, take a centimeter And the fraying of longstanding ties Could quickly outpace the ability to evict you As your mother, the normal first responder to your distress, I can do Absolutely nothing about it but push In what seems a shoot-first approach to such a delicate moment The escalation, the unpredictability, the erratic nature of developments Is central to what is going on Something is breaking That something is me! Our world is on edge Looking for a sign of what to do next The labor market drops and you're crowned a royal pain Peace is found, it's proportional And by all measures you're quite hale quite beautiful! This offsets the damage of a messy exit The disconnect I incessantly prayed for offers melancholy over relief In our opening act you're already moving away from me While the female body is a powerful tool It cannot provide a settled rule book for such internal battle Still, this adventure, scary and catastrophic as it was, is well-suited to the wonders that I am For that I'm grateful to my Creator The lesson of the last several hours is that forces are unfolding that we can't do much to contain We're merely nesting passengers en route to a foreign destination
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Did she notice, when she walked down into my eyes that my sight stole my voice? To return in stuttered, half compliments of flitting words. too flimsy to hold the heart. Did she notice my staring gaze, my eyes, casting timid glances while I searched myself for eloquent words to tell her my knees were weak, and my heart was beating with good dishonourable intentions. Wrapped in midnight and pink hued sunset horizons. Hiding some and alluding to others, the woman curved beneath the clothes. Her hair up, in golden silk curls to celebrate tonight with full passioned lips smacking of sultry invitations, and drowning deep sea eyes. Sporting a breathless smile and black heels. While I feel so ordinary and tedious, dressed in my fine suit and matching offsets. She takes my hand so everyone can see that she is mine. And now I am alive. How beautifully she shines; beyond the limit of the eyes to the scope of the heart and the extent of the soul, that see in different dimensions than sights' perception can go. To unmask the splendor behind the face. For this is what pulls the strings of my surrendering; A man and clothes may make each other, but a woman will make him feel it.
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Sep 10, 2024
Sep 10, 2024 at 11:57 AM UTC
Lost Words
We pick up where we left off Those deep brown eyes And that side slide smile My heart offsets its rhythm Your arms wrapped around me And it feels like perfection A completed puzzle Of lust and safety Never-ending summer evenings It feels like home And I think you feel it too
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Jun 8, 2018
Jun 8, 2018 at 2:12 PM UTC
Feel it too
Three climb the hill behind the house: my master with the yearling cow and me. The dawn-light glinting sidelong off the heifer's glossy hide is a memory of the morning star reflecting its own shadow. As we walk out past the fence gate posts into the winter pasture (now in bloom), the gray grass swells in the fickle breeze. I hear the sea swells move across the grain and splash against my side unrhythmically. The man, who walks with purpose in his stride, holds limply wood and steel there at his side or shifts the load to point into the sky. The quiet beast, chewing, climbs the hill from sunrise-side toward its falling down. I guess she thinks this Eden, (this meadowland unspoiled) and she the sole inheritor of a paradise of grain. But here where we can see the earth stretch out beyond itself, we pause and tie the yearling cow to some eternal oak. The dawn-light in crescendo echoes off her onyx hide. A crimson sky offsets a gem of silver on the rise. Now wood and steel rise coldly through the chilled mid-morning air. Chewing she stares down at me her sombre bovine stare. He raises up his single arm and heavily exhales. Her stare now without object falls beside the hallowed tree in rippling peals of thunder that vibrate through the dew. She lies where she belongs upon the earth, black hide and life-blood mingle with the dirt. Now two descend the hill into the yard. My master's path is to the barn to finish what's been done while I wrack my mind for how she might have sinned. I don't think I will climb that hill again. I don't think I will climb that hill again...
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May 15, 2017
May 15, 2017 at 7:54 PM UTC
Witness
Three climb the hill behind the house: my master with the yearling cow and me. The dawn-light glinting sidelong off the heifer's glossy hide is a memory of the morning star reflecting its own shadow. As we walk out past the fence gate posts into the winter pasture (now in bloom), the gray grass swells in the fickle breeze. I hear the sea swells move across the grain and splash against my side unrhythmically. The man, who walks with purpose in his stride, holds limply wood and steel there at his side or shifts the load to point into the sky. The quiet beast, chewing, climbs the hill from sunrise-side toward its falling down. I guess she thinks this Eden, (this meadowland unspoiled) and she the sole inheritor of a paradise of grain. But here where we can see the earth stretch out beyond itself, we pause and tie the yearling cow to some eternal oak. The dawn-light in crescendo echoes off her onyx hide. A crimson sky offsets a gem of silver on the rise. Now wood and steel rise coldly through the chilled mid-morning air. Chewing she stares down at me her sombre bovine stare. He raises up his single arm and heavily exhales. Her stare now without object falls beside the hallowed tree in rippling peals of thunder that vibrate through the dew. She lies where she belongs upon the earth, black hide and life-blood mingle with the dirt. Now two descend the hill into the yard. My master's path is to the barn to finish what's been done while I wrack my mind for how she might have sinned. I don't think I will climb that hill again. I don't think I will climb that hill again...
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Shift left to center self Dodge right and slight movement offsets imbalance Center, focus on your breath
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Jul 7, 2016
Jul 7, 2016 at 11:57 AM UTC
Duality