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"detatched" poems
Your actions speak like knives that carve away at the soul of my being. They stab the tender flesh of my faith. Your words force their way through my heaving chest From the fork of your tongue and rip out my battered heart, Leaving a gaping cavity of tangle arteries that ooze out scattered emotions from deep within the shredded bloodied tissue that remains. Exposed and vulnerable to the elements of your ramped terror, the wound quickly festers from the stench of your infectious hatred that slithers it's way into the detatched arteries and consumes any thought of compassion. And is diseased with progressive revenge and retaliation that becomes the driving force of strength that remedies the  forgiveness that unconditional love's natural immunity  produces and is temporary remedy to the heart retching incurable depression and permanent lifelasting pain. That haunts me it taunts me again and again. ...... And so begins the plague
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Sep 17, 2013
Sep 17, 2013 at 8:15 AM UTC
SINS OF A FATHER The origin of an epidemic
I try to be distant. Detatched. Drink a 50 cent Mountain Dew. Dressed all in black on a blistering day. My back is a waterfall. Pop two more quarters in the machine. The mass gathering makes this funeral home feel more like a sweat lodge. "It's cooler in the chapel" but that's where the body is. I enter the mock church house, close my eyes in passing the casket, and sit in the back, where everyone obstructs my view of... it? him? Eulogy delivered. Songs sung. Get up and take your last look. My pores become geysers. He's too still. Too quiet. Too peaceful. Three observations in a third of a second. I remember his voice, the way his palm felt on mine, shaking hands. Shake the preachers hand. Remember. Pull away. Pop two more quarters into the machine. Wash my hands. Twice. Go out to the car to try my best to calm down.
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Jul 20, 2010
Jul 20, 2010 at 10:11 AM UTC
handshake.
. **In my act of defiance and grotesque penmanship, I'll be the silver-eyed poet to beckon you from wonderland. Darling, I've written you the universe and I'll sew the seams to your switchblade shoulders.** *"What are these?" "Wings."* .
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Jun 1, 2015
Jun 1, 2015 at 2:04 PM UTC
Detatched wings can be sewn
*The black sun coiled around you by morning, Gingerly tending your wounded mind You basked in the tall shadow of two lovers; Waltzing along the line of indecisive love Seven has always been your favorite number, As we embarked to raise the tiger-eyed moon That desolate soul wrapped in your inked bones Couldn't silence the riptide that conquered like our kiss. You were an addiction that took five months to sober, Feathering every "I love you" with a pitiful look to me I guess we just headed off to war in different directions We were spilling blood in agony for each other.* *There are regrets surfacing in your heart I would know, It's in my palm, right?* "I am unwelcome and detatched, it seems."
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Dec 1, 2015
Dec 1, 2015 at 10:12 PM UTC
Unwelcomed
How come it’s sadistically silent, when all I want to hear is the duet of the moon and your howl? I’m no wolf, but my do we both have something in common. We both are star crossed lovers, of the moon. I may not entice myself to the law of time, but it never meant I stopped listening at night. And when you swear upon a deathbed you know one day, you’ll be slumbering in--- Just how many demons will be hungry for your ashes? Sure we have all have our filthy little secrets But since when are we taking them to our graves? And I don’t wanna whisper (help me,) at the stroke of midnight. ‘Cause if you struck that **** clock* 12 times, Lord knows how many shadows would feast-- On an empty girl at 12 a.m. Hearts are savage creatures, that’s why we keep them caged in our ribs. (*Even if our ribcages are secretly made of dove feathers.*) *Keep the hounds in hell dear, for me?* Because if that’s all your duet has to offer, than keep your lyrics. (But if you can sing, make me want to listen.     Wolf girl.)
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Jun 7, 2015
Jun 7, 2015 at 3:19 PM UTC
No. 1. Detatched Moon.
How do you describe the feeling? It's not just an ache, aches leave you feeling empty, make you yearn. It's when your body fills, no not your body, your heart. & for a minute you feel calm, you're a paradox, you're at one with the world, the universe maybe, yet completely detatched from everything. A spectator. It would be as though you were looking down upon yourself, this human, this soul, that you know every secret of, every detail about, but you're unconnected. Seperate. Alone. I feel this way when I look upon a view, watch the world in wonder. Like when you see your reflection, no matter how vague, in glass, looking up at you from water. & you reach your finger out, & you connect. The way the lines blur between what is really you & your double. They blur until they are no more. Like the lines between realities.
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Nov 28, 2011
Nov 28, 2011 at 2:27 PM UTC
Less poem, More prose.
When it fades, its like a candle that ceases to exist and so the flame was never lit.. You cherished a moment that was as threadbare as the good reflections of us. I look into your being and I see through you as my heart now sees nothing within.
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Sep 28, 2016
Sep 28, 2016 at 5:10 PM UTC
Detatched From The Heart
Fighting the sensations; I am speechless and consumed With nothing        As well as everything. The drinks all taste the same. Conversations become dulled down        To empty promises. Skeletons of chandeliers; Ghosts of past lovers.        Memories distorted. The inadequate use of words Dripping off your        slurred tongue. I’ve been burned before, Leaving me fearless                 in front of the fire. Searching for a cure; In the coffin of                       false happiness. Trying to balance between            Reality, and self-inflating lies While I dream of falling,        And crashing to my demise.
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Jun 1, 2010
Jun 1, 2010 at 10:40 PM UTC
Detatched
I once was a Heaver, just like you Lost in a sea of solemn blue My boat capsized at an early age My mind was so detatched I barely remember this stage Slowly I found my way back to shore But I sometimes fear I'll end up like before The night will haunt me still, with things I've overcome The dark reminds me of what I can still become So you see, I've had scars where a light is shone And I've rowed in a sea that was not my own I have found my breath and now I give it to you A blot of yellow in your solemn blue
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Sep 3, 2018
Sep 3, 2018 at 10:34 AM UTC
blot of yellow
Detached, floating beyond the confines of existence. I hear and see and yet do not feel. No pain can touch me here, no hand near enough to reach beyond my cloudy veil. Ecstacy, Joy, Sorrow, Panic. These states bubble across the surface of river, my fishbowl, my cauldron. I lie underneath, The emotions slipping gently from my lips to the surface, a perfect finish to the puppet beyond my reach. High above, my head floats whilst my *** sits cold on the bench near the boats Alone yet everywhere Who knows if I can yet be guided home Again.
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Jul 8, 2013
Jul 8, 2013 at 8:09 PM UTC
Detatched
I want to blow myself to smithereens. There's a tightening in my chest that accompanies the shame I feel. I can be a good girl I can fake a nice girl I can detach from my own skin. Smile. Nod your head. Agree with everything being said. And when it hurts to be a shell of a person Remind yourself that you've hurt him worse.
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Jul 21, 2015
Jul 21, 2015 at 6:29 PM UTC
Detatched and detonated
The tender girl had qualms with none Detatched, there was nothing for the son Forced to backtrack whilist rolling downhill Flashing images remain Of that private, idealistic mill So I called her name In the Nether Realm, she screamed Yes, she is a hard one to please Especially when she sees One going through the motions Rotations into false vocations So tell me What was your question again?
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Jun 10, 2018
Jun 10, 2018 at 2:38 PM UTC
Hell and Back
im comfortable nowhere i always want to go home but i never want to stay inside he never fully understood what the warnings meant he just detatched him and his soul so he could witness his life from above nowhere in my dreams head on a pillow going nowhere
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Oct 3, 2017
Oct 3, 2017 at 4:22 PM UTC
uncomfortable
her words were rainbow birds chirping light and i was dazzled inside, i find feathers detatched and ***** blackened without body like her rattled, twisted words taken from the world wasted on open and unknowing skies and i listen to the lies
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Oct 22, 2018
Oct 22, 2018 at 6:47 PM UTC
lies
Wet pavement and orange street lights The sound of distant tires Cutting a path through the moisture Laying in the cracks of the highway Wet and thick Breathing in the fog A record playing in my head pops and cracks, jazz, singing out Some lonely saxaphone Buzzing Humming The entire world is black but orange Sitting on a curb Smoke another one I fit so perfectly in this performance Yet I've never been so detatched
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Jul 28, 2018
Jul 28, 2018 at 12:35 AM UTC
Some Lonely Saxaphone
what can i even say? he fell in love
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Jul 31, 2019
Jul 31, 2019 at 7:50 PM UTC
detatched