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"sorrounded" poems
Naked eye, silent sorrounded heart. what's that sound? elderly and ancient crown from a spirit beyond recognition. a vast dark room comfortable crouching, no hope, no light, yet he takes a glance into my soul. Naked eye, he sees through me directly to my soul his silence seems to claim; "poor pretentious soldier", "come home", "come home"...
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Feb 28, 2014
Feb 28, 2014 at 1:03 AM UTC
Naked eye.
Always on your feet, floating through seas of people and over the hustling and bustling streets. I was thought at an early age that you don't need to rush love it will come eventually, they never said it would stay I've been conditioned that love is something worth waiting for, its something magical that when it happens it will just take your breathe away and leave you speechless. I would have never imagined that it would hit me like a train leaving me breatheless and vanish like smoke rendering me speechless. A millennials love is something rare, Everything is on the fast lane there's never a pause or a dull moment to think what the next move is. I have never really fallen for a gir I've gone out with before because I never had the time to really get to know them, As fast as I could make the word come out of my mouth they were even faster at getting up and leaving me I've been sorrounded by vultures waiting to feed on the carcases of my dead realationship. Gazing upong my body looking for the scraps of meat I yet to hold. Oh what perfect timing, Just as I was falling down you picked me up. You leveled mountain ranges, tamed raging seas and calm stormy skies. A love you rare, so simple and yet so meaningful, A love of its most simplest and purest form.
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Dec 1, 2017
Dec 1, 2017 at 2:56 AM UTC
A Millennials Love
Its been awhile since I went to the mosque Clerics say The fact that you feel guilty,means your faith is still around So ive been sitting around feeling all guilty But havent done nothing much about it But today a friend or mine changed me With a few spoken words He said **“I have to pray, I feel that good things are coming my way and I should at least thank God   I want to leave these darkness that I've sorrounded my self with”** These got me thinking Whatever is happening is what I want to happen Ive ignored my connection with God and settled on distractions I've invested heavily on regret Its about time I change So am writing this down as a reminder to myself That i've left the old me behind And the new me is Born By  the way ,my friend is a christian And I'm a muslim. So am urging everyone to draw wisdom from wherever you can Instead of judging each other based on Religion Political affiliations or Color
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Jul 27, 2018
Jul 27, 2018 at 2:16 AM UTC
Born III
There is a man who has a large beautiful home And a grand yard behind it His sheets are made of Egyptian cotton And he imposes his fit body onto them every night On his bed he dreamt The sky was quickly changing from pink, to blue, to grey, and so on The ground was made of mirrors so he felt sorrounded by the clouds He wasn't afraid even if it seemed strange So he starting walking the set path in front of him He came upon his house and went inside And in it he saw nothing And the nothingness hit him He swore it off with anger And went out to the large yard with shrubbery sculptures The grass in the yard breathed Ominously so The ground had cracks but wasn't dry And there was a spiral labyrinth There were no trials in this maze Only one task To follow it all the way down The entrance, stone with etched words he couldn't understand Grew as he approached And he felt the weight of the world like a roach The hedges inside the labyrinth stared down on him He felt the hedges stare all the way down They dispised him for reasons unknown And whispered "What would you do in our shoes?" At the center of the maze was a blood filled, oozing, heart Every beat was slower than the last And he understood it as his own The sky turned a strict, brooding grey Frantically, he searched his mind for answers He blamed the people around him "They're poison!" He shouted But that couldn't be true He wept, for he didn't know what to do to make the beating regular And the hedges stared And the sky closed in And the whispers turned to shouts Then it all stopped The heart, beating The hedges, staring The sky, moving While he was glad, he felt alone But then it seemed the world spoke all at once "Give us your all, we shall return the favor, and we will be one." And he awoke in his beautiful home And he wept in repentance
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Mar 1, 2016
Mar 1, 2016 at 2:34 PM UTC
The Man and The Spiral Labyrinth
There is a man who has a large beautiful home And a grand yard behind it His sheets are made of Egyptian cotton And he imposes his fit body onto them every night On his bed he dreamt The sky was quickly changing from pink, to blue, to grey, and so on The ground was made of mirrors so he felt sorrounded by the clouds He wasn't afraid even if it seemed strange So he starting walking the set path in front of him He came upon his house and went inside And in it he saw nothing And the nothingness hit him He swore it off with anger And went out to the large yard with shrubbery sculptures The grass in the yard breathed Ominously so The ground had cracks but wasn't dry And there was a spiral labyrinth There were no trials in this maze Only one task To follow it all the way down The entrance, stone with etched words he couldn't understand Grew as he approached And he felt the weight of the world like a roach The hedges inside the labyrinth stared down on him He felt the hedges stare all the way down They dispised him for reasons unknown And whispered "What would you do in our shoes?" At the center of the maze was a blood filled, oozing, heart Every beat was slower than the last And he understood it as his own The sky turned a strict, brooding grey Frantically, he searched his mind for answers He blamed the people around him "They're poison!" He shouted But that couldn't be true He wept, for he didn't know what to do to make the beating regular And the hedges stared And the sky closed in And the whispers turned to shouts Then it all stopped The heart, beating The hedges, staring The sky, moving While he was glad, he felt alone But then it seemed the world spoke all at once "Give us your all, we shall return the favor, and we will be one." And he awoke in his beautiful home And he wept in repentance
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The other guy stood in front of a bus He knew that wasn't a line to cross But still his coins he tossed Lost in thought, he just stood Idiot they call him But I beg to differ The girl followed her friend She didn't know the trend Their needs she would tend She didn't know when this would end Her ways she'd bend Idiot they called her But I beg to differ Every time he spoke He sounded like he was high on coke But we knew he was broke Coke won't give him stroke His words were like those the bicycle spoke spoke Idiot they called him But I beg to differ Abstinence is good *** could be crude For some it's food Others it's just rude But then we know what is crude about what is good that is food and could be rude Idiot they call us But I beg to differ wise ones exist Idiots persist From the truth they desist The truth they resist Idiots they call them But I beg to differ Yes I am surrounded by idiots But no am not an idiot Cause am wise enough to learn from them Let their foolishness give me a view of my future if I follow them Wise men are known for what they say When wise men stop saying wise things they become idiots... To be continued in the book... "I am surrounded by idiots" - 10 things idiots won't tell! Pre-order your copy of this ebook by Osagie Alex for N2,500, Payable to First Bank 2021249019. Call 08036666845
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Mar 4, 2017
Mar 4, 2017 at 10:09 AM UTC
I am sorrounded by Idiots
They erupt of jealousy cause they love their life in pity they have never seen true beauty never could appreciate it all what I want to be what I want to see will always be of hope with happiness chasing me not the other way around never be caught up following others never search to be found when you have a road of your own why walk down the road of another ? prejudice and people cursed by seeing their way as the right way Its just not for me I dont mind being alone but I mind being sorrounded by ones who seems to think they are the universe prejudice and people it gets old real fast you know
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Jul 21, 2013
Jul 21, 2013 at 1:03 PM UTC
Human Eruption
Eagle rises as the sun. Like your mind from your dream. Water sorrounded by mountains,like your your mouth full of water. Caves realising air,like your nose breathing. Rivers coming from inside the caves,like the throught drinking water. Rivers giving water to trees. The bird shped like your lung because it eats the seed and ***** it out to get fertilized. the water giving you air that makes your lungs brethe. The spine shaped like a serpint that connects your feet to your head. Wonder why the eagle drags the snake to the air. The snake representing the legs. The heart meaning the dog full of happynes. The blood the fire like the volcano. You are what you see. You are never nothing but in the process of becoming something.as when you die you will still live on. The ashes will turn to rocks and air. The mind into the universe. the blood into fire. The tears into water. The pain into mountains. The happyness into the sun. The thoughts into stars. Your mind will recreate this world in the dark once again when you die. You are here to die and plant your bones as your seed and gift to nature. The dog will remain as your friend and guide your bones and protect them as his life. Your inside mother nature still in the process of creation. And when you die you wake up from your dream. Its like a baby waiting to open its eyes. But he is already alive in there.9. Months like the 90 years you live. .
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Sep 2, 2013
Sep 2, 2013 at 5:50 AM UTC
"Creation of Your Mind and Body"
i remember, O yes its clear in my mind, my eyes were darkened by scales. On that day...I could not even see the sun's rays. i tried to take out my sword to cut through, my tears falling moulding my hands as a cup to catch them they fell into my veins...became my blood. I remember yes,i remember very well. Its as a potrait fresh from an artist's hand, vividly flashing in my mind as if to trace a memory trail, i remember the walls, they were four yes... No...they were round, they sorrounded me. they were sharp. they poked me. i felt them cold.penetrating to my skin but I... I did not want to be part of them you see!. I...I SHREECHED and i SCRatched till there was no more of me. and so i just died...my breath with me still. Then she came, beautiful with her robe swiflty sweeping the floor. She radiated in light, i heard my scales falling loudly on the ground as if disturbed by the pleasure of my sight. She stayed with me throughout the night, The were small, shiny, beautiful diamonds in the sky that were looking at me, i saw them because they were also smiling at me. O yes...(smiling) i said "Hi", they never could respond.It was well. I remember, early, frost kissing the grass. Walls opened as gates, i heard horns singing my praise. This was all new you see, i was whole. she took my hand,then my mouth opened as that of the whale that welcomed Jonah to its belly. I opened, i spoke, it was melody. "Excuse me, whats your name?." "Hope" she said, Hope i repeated. "You...you are hope", then  i cried. Yes, i remember it well.
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Apr 20, 2010
Apr 20, 2010 at 1:17 PM UTC
HOPE
i remember, O yes its clear in my mind, my eyes were darkened by scales. On that day...I could not even see the sun's rays. i tried to take out my sword to cut through, my tears falling moulding my hands as a cup to catch them they fell into my veins...became my blood. I remember yes,i remember very well. Its as a potrait fresh from an artist's hand, vividly flashing in my mind as if to trace a memory trail, i remember the walls, they were four yes... No...they were round, they sorrounded me. they were sharp. they poked me. i felt them cold.penetrating to my skin but I... I did not want to be part of them you see!. I...I SHREECHED and i SCRatched till there was no more of me. and so i just died...my breath with me still. Then she came, beautiful with her robe swiflty sweeping the floor. She radiated in light, i heard my scales falling loudly on the ground as if disturbed by the pleasure of my sight. She stayed with me throughout the night, The were small, shiny, beautiful diamonds in the sky that were looking at me, i saw them because they were also smiling at me. O yes...(smiling) i said "Hi", they never could respond.It was well. I remember, early, frost kissing the grass. Walls opened as gates, i heard horns singing my praise. This was all new you see, i was whole. she took my hand,then my mouth opened as that of the whale that welcomed Jonah to its belly. I opened, i spoke, it was melody. "Excuse me, whats your name?." "Hope" she said, Hope i repeated. "You...you are hope", then  i cried. Yes, i remember it well.
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ive been fighting harder than i thought that i could. im a bullet shooting through your fragile skin. how could i forget what i've been fighting for? i've left myself cornered by letting you in. - and oh, i tried to say that i wouldn't become weak. even though ive built this distance with my blood sweat and tears, i still continue this hide and go seek. - sweet dreams, heres your lullaby. youve sunken under in another time. youve fallen asleep, your guards been let down, and thats how you wanted it, you just would never allow yourself, but youve admitted your fault without words, and youre rising to the top, even though it hurts. you're not the weak one, youve always been strong. - i cant cut these ties, a knot in a rope. its hard to let go. my hands wont let go. theres good days and bad, but i always find the sun even when im under the earth, sorrounded by the darkness youve spun around me. i'll always let you lead me. -- goodnight, goodnight. swallow your pride. the games just begun, even though it feels like forever.
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Mar 22, 2012
Mar 22, 2012 at 12:02 AM UTC
lullaby
I used to be that girl, the one you made fun of, the one you mocked. I was that girl, the one you laughed at, said she was ugly. I used to be that girl, the one you avoided like a plague, called her wierd, or was it akward. I was that girl, the one with no esteem, the one that cried day and night, because of what others thought. I am no longer that girl, no one makes fun of me, instead am admired. She is not me anymore, no one laughs at me, instead they laugh with me. Ugly is not my title any more, men break necks when I pass. I am no longer that girl, am now sorrounded by people, people who think am unique, not akward. The old me is dead, my tears come with joy, and esteem seems to be my second name. $angila$
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Sep 1, 2013
Sep 1, 2013 at 3:36 PM UTC
That Girl
I watched her there Standing from afar Overlooking the horizon of a star Darkness and voidness sorrounded her but surrenderee will someday surrender on her. She ain't a knight with a shining armor of superiority. She ain't a treatment that concealed every bruise of brutality. She ain't a fantasy that hides the reality. Cant you see? She's pretending, not being she. Tons scratch, bruise and scars hidden within thee. Strong lady. Impregnable, inviolable and unassailable. Strong outside yet fragile inside. But then a youth stepped into her and bathed into her darkness. Youth says to her, to the depression bearer: "What ails thee strong lady? That thou woe thy eye?" Strong lady sat herself down and weeps, sunken cheeks and salted liquids run down her face, she speaks and says: "I should've sleep in peace young youth for I suffered desecrate and torment, aid not naebody, and father used and abused thee" Yet, young youth says: "Hush down depression bearer henceforth I shall build thy walls and protect thee, thou shalt not say those words for I shall follow thee"
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May 27, 2015
May 27, 2015 at 12:24 AM UTC
Used and Abused
Lying on the cool floor and hoping that the locomotive crossed our view, we realize what the older enjoyed. Gray stones show us how much the landscape changed. And too late the people wake up, and too early the people discuss. It was the fear and disdain which provoked a bitterness able to tear us apart from our friends. It was the insanity of the visitors which limited the peace of those faces. It was a fool humanity which deprived the happiness of those children. At nine o'clock, the lights are gone out. I come back home in a fog, being followed by screams of loneliness and, often, screams of panic. At ten o'clock, I covet the sleep, the tomorrow, the old age, but not the death! Because even being sorrounded by madness, I still hope a solution. At eleven o'clock, my ravings drive me away. Now I run the first escape from this prison, destroying this forsaken wall. At twelve o'clock, I delight to a deep pleasure and I try to remember what I did in that dawn. However, it seems to be an unreachable memory. Inside this abyss: aversions don't disappear, memories don't return and lovers don't survive. We're the young who throw their sorrows in the ocean. What might be the world's ****** now is hidden by the cruelest minds. Bring to my feet the best of the infinity: forgotten promises and inappropriate feelings. From the window I watched the bricks fall like leaves of a pleasant autumn. It shivered the skin and silenced the screams, screams of exaltation now. And the escape is not needed anymore.
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May 8, 2014
May 8, 2014 at 1:58 PM UTC
The Wall of the Visitors
Lying on the cool floor and hoping that the locomotive crossed our view, we realize what the older enjoyed. Gray stones show us how much the landscape changed. And too late the people wake up, and too early the people discuss. It was the fear and disdain which provoked a bitterness able to tear us apart from our friends. It was the insanity of the visitors which limited the peace of those faces. It was a fool humanity which deprived the happiness of those children. At nine o'clock, the lights are gone out. I come back home in a fog, being followed by screams of loneliness and, often, screams of panic. At ten o'clock, I covet the sleep, the tomorrow, the old age, but not the death! Because even being sorrounded by madness, I still hope a solution. At eleven o'clock, my ravings drive me away. Now I run the first escape from this prison, destroying this forsaken wall. At twelve o'clock, I delight to a deep pleasure and I try to remember what I did in that dawn. However, it seems to be an unreachable memory. Inside this abyss: aversions don't disappear, memories don't return and lovers don't survive. We're the young who throw their sorrows in the ocean. What might be the world's ****** now is hidden by the cruelest minds. Bring to my feet the best of the infinity: forgotten promises and inappropriate feelings. From the window I watched the bricks fall like leaves of a pleasant autumn. It shivered the skin and silenced the screams, screams of exaltation now. And the escape is not needed anymore.
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I just want to lay there with you in the pitch black, talking into the early hours, sorrounded by starlight forgetting our troubles, with a kiss goodnight. To lay there thinking, knowing that someone finally loves you for you.
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Jun 3, 2013
Jun 3, 2013 at 5:10 PM UTC
Night
The streets, the lights and all that passes by The smiles, the grimace and everything nice The countenace everytime you say "hi!" And pantomine the words, the least you could try You figured to start the day knowing lots to bear Sorrounded by these, are you satisfied with your care? When the sun's rays warmth you sorely And the breeze of the wind is way-out indifferent The day is halfway to its surcease And the battleground is becoming at peace Amidst all these, is the clearing of the sky and it's becoming fair Wind up all the details through breathing pristine air The rush hour pass as you revert to your haven And there it is your great comfort Lethargic you contemplate and wander Before the window to your soul closes and rest You bethink notions and all the things that matter Endgame is, are you satisfied with your care?
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May 8, 2016
May 8, 2016 at 9:29 PM UTC
Query and Pleasure
I am so tired of people who don't listen When I talk you only look for the words that can be related to the things you already wanted to say you are like a loaded gun, which only fire out the bullets already put in Stop talking to me if you only ask with the intentions to reply and not simply listen I am so done with the friends who call you up about problems, which they think they need help with that they also mostly do but in their heads they already found sense like paths, which they will strictly follow no matter what road signs they meet on their ways Why do you call me to tell me the same thing you told me 10 times already, when you know the advices I gave you by now This is not a game Stop wasting my time, if you want my help please take it it's right there Don't ask if you already made up your mind I do not have time for friends who text you about fun that you are not invited to but somehow they say it's going to the best time of their lives and they are sorry that they can't bring you with them because apparently you're told the people would not like you Please do not tell me where you are going if you don't want to bring me along since I know I will be the one sitting with you afterwards when you are crying because the people at that party suddenly didn't want to talk to you anymore I am not somebody you can ditch and then casually without shame crawl back to when you get bored another place I can get bored of you too Insults and excuses are not something I can use for anything I am fine being by myself sorrounded by only me because I am capable of handling the term "lonely" since it was what I've always been - even around you.
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Oct 6, 2015
Oct 6, 2015 at 12:08 PM UTC
Toxic People
I am so tired of people who don't listen When I talk you only look for the words that can be related to the things you already wanted to say you are like a loaded gun, which only fire out the bullets already put in Stop talking to me if you only ask with the intentions to reply and not simply listen I am so done with the friends who call you up about problems, which they think they need help with that they also mostly do but in their heads they already found sense like paths, which they will strictly follow no matter what road signs they meet on their ways Why do you call me to tell me the same thing you told me 10 times already, when you know the advices I gave you by now This is not a game Stop wasting my time, if you want my help please take it it's right there Don't ask if you already made up your mind I do not have time for friends who text you about fun that you are not invited to but somehow they say it's going to the best time of their lives and they are sorry that they can't bring you with them because apparently you're told the people would not like you Please do not tell me where you are going if you don't want to bring me along since I know I will be the one sitting with you afterwards when you are crying because the people at that party suddenly didn't want to talk to you anymore I am not somebody you can ditch and then casually without shame crawl back to when you get bored another place I can get bored of you too Insults and excuses are not something I can use for anything I am fine being by myself sorrounded by only me because I am capable of handling the term "lonely" since it was what I've always been - even around you.
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I noticed that even if I get drunk it doesn't stop my thoughts So I might think when I'm in the crowd sorrounded by people laughing shouting just plain having fun without being fully aware but as soon as I am alone in the bathroom and I stare into my reflection I realise I can't run away from my mind
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Sep 24, 2015
Sep 24, 2015 at 11:07 PM UTC
Somehow never drunk enough
I stand on top of a rock Sorrounded by seas, Carrying my sorrow at my back And waves, aren't at eas. Time to time I face roaring waves I freeze at dark,burned during light, Years passed,but still my self couldn't behave For being watched by the rising tide. From high and beneath Seaguls and sharks scouts, And There I starv and soon will face death
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Jul 24, 2017
Jul 24, 2017 at 12:24 AM UTC
My life