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MARK RIORDAN Mar 2017
I LOVE MY POEMS I
USUALLY COMPOSE AT NIGHT
I LOVE THIS COMMUNITY
HERE ON THIS SITE


FOR WHEN YOU EXPRESS YOUR
HEART AND SOUL IN RHYME
YOU TRY TOO GIVE A GLIMPSE
OF YOUR THOUGHT S AT THAT TIME


MY POEMS EXPRESS A THOUGHT OR IDEA
A MEMORY OR A PERSON
WHO I LOVE SO DEAR


I AM GLAD I HAVE FOLLOWERS
AND A COLLECTION OF LIKES
AS WE SAY HERE IN AUSTRALIA
CONTINUE COMPOSING
AND GET ON YOU BIKE
I AM VERY HONOURED WITH ALL THE LIKES AND COMMENTS SO FAR. PLEASE FIND THIS POEM AS A THANK YOU.
Julie Grenness Feb 2017
Have you got a thank you mantra, eh?
Something to say each day,
Thank you, we woke up anyway,
Thank you for my bed and shower today,
Thank you I can read and write,
Being a poet does feel right,
Thank you for our beautiful world,
Prayers for peace from an ******* girl,
How's that for a mantra, eh?
Something to say each and every day!
Feedback welcome.
Dougie Simps Feb 2017
Yeah,
It's been a while but figured I need to write you some
27 now and hope you're proud of who I've become
I've fallen a lot but felt your grace pick me up
My guardian angel with me pushing any kinda luck
I've been asked a few times who I wanna be as I get older
Said you just in case I never told ya
Grandpa told me what you did when I was a kid in need of guidance
Protecting my eyes from my father's influence and violence
I heard that and couldn't help but I shed a tear
Not a min goes by that I don't wish you were here
My drive is strong but everyday I know you
help me steer
My moment is big with the critics talking but you're the only voice that I hear
You taught me to always **** em off with kindness
When you show who you truly are when no ones watching - that's when you're at ya finest...
Taught me to handle it when I get set backs
Been through the worst times to get the best back
At times I feel I ain't work hard enough to get where I wanna go
And feel i can't move forward cause I ain't let the past go
Still holdin in some anger from things that don't think about me
I'm blinded by my emotions in which truly I can't see
I'm trying to become everything and more that you'd be proud of
I'm trying give back more and show more love
It's hard when naturally this doesn't go through you
People won't understand all this unless they knew you
I promise to get better and be the example
And showcase who I am instead of giving out samples
You're the reason I get up everyday and gain motivation
Because you can't get what you want if you remain complacent
Need your help to guide my broken heart to pure places
Give me the strength to become a lil more patient
So I say a prayer for you, cross my heart and continue to strive
And hope that you remain with me on my journey and never leave my side.
You was right but I had to see for myself
I guess it took time for me to earn for myself
I hope this is somewhat a thank you for all ya help
I hope the angels take care of you until I see you myself.

Rest in peace Opa
Miss you
Just write to you to catch up - sorry it's been so long.
Julie Grenness Feb 2017
I really thank you ***** cats,
You've said your bit, that's that,
You've toughened me up, all right,
Tell me something I don't know, you uptights,
Have you got your rags on again?
Let's send you ***** cats down the drain,
I'd really like to thank you cats,
You've toughened me up, that's that!
Feedback welcome.
Solaces Feb 2017
Like the insect to the light, quite the opposite here.
In this duskless place, in this non shadow realm, they find the new shade beautiful.  
But why?
More and more of them were filling the room.  
Seeking out the darkest of dark.
The shadow of shadows.
The shade of shades.   I then realize that these little beautiful creatures are looking for the source.  They are looking for me.

I run about the room from corner to corner.  The little pattern shaped insect like creatures were getting closer and closer to me.  I did not want to touch such a beautiful being made of infinite light.  I don't know what my shadow touch would do to them. Would it **** them? Would it hurt them?  But then I find myself feeling as though they want to be touched. As if my darkness is their salvation.  The former light room now looked as if a bucket of black paint exploded inside of a white room.  There was shadow steps everywhere as well as shadow marks on the walls. It was not long after that The room was almost completly black with darkness.  The light insect like creatures looked like stars in space. I was the darkness they rolled on.   It soon got to the point where I was cornered.  The room was now filled with these beautiful creatures.  All of which knew I was in the corner of the room.  It was the only corner where light was left. As soon as that part of the room dimmed they all flew into me.  They swirled and spiraled around me.  It was amazing! It reminded me of a galaxy.  I opened my hand and one of them landed on it. There was then a beautiful shine and sound.  Then a voice uttered two words.  " Thank you."   The creature was gone.  Then I felt someone hold my hand!
It shows that true light here does not exist.
Trinity Jones Jan 2017
Laying in bed side by side
facing one another
looking into each others eyes
but looking away when it becomes too much
your thumb grazes my lip
and my eyes come right back to yours

thank you for taking the time
to make me feel desired
I thank you for putting this smile back on my cheeks
Brie Pizzi Jan 2017
Thank you for pushing me over the edge.

Thank you for showing me your true colors.

Thank you for showing me how immature and petty you truly are.

Thank you for showing me you never really changed, regardless of how much you tried convincing me you did.


Never would I have thought I'd one day be thanking you for these things but here I am, saying thank you to the boy who broke me. I'm saying thank you for one reason and one reason only; with this, you have given me the ability to finally get over you.

Before, there was always a part of me that held onto you; that tried so hard to hold onto the good parts of you, with hope that maybe one day we could try again. But after that night, there is no going back. I no longer want to be with you. I no longer see my future with you. I now know that I deserve better than you, much better. And I will no loner fall for your lies and fake promises.

So thank you.
Àŧùl Jan 2017
I* have only been thinking every minute about her.

Lisping its way through her is our daughter,
Often she doubled as my dolly,
Very much I used to care for her,
Enjoy with me she did all the time.

Best of all she helped me move on,
Helped me realise my real worth,
Until time ends I shall love her,
Money-minded she was not,
If at all, she is real-minded,
Kingly she makes me feel,
A**s she herself is the queen.
Moving on constructively.
As she made me realize that there's a lot more to life than just love.
Leaving behind all delimiters.

My HP Poem #1378
©Atul Kaushal
I just hope God sees my smile as a Thank You because this smile it's a Thank You I say to God without even knowing I'm thanking him.
hazem al jaber Dec 2016
sweetheart .... thank you...




sweet lovely morning..
sweet wishes...
sweet love ,sweet feelings...
i get now..
got it this morning from you...
get it as always every day...

sweetheart ... thank you ....
used to get a sweet good mornings every day...
used to get your lovely loving messages every time...
and a best wishes...
but...
today is another day..
not like any day..
today ,i woke up so early and been waiting...
waiting the first mornings' ray...
and a first loving letter from you...
been waiting your wishes...
your wishes to me in this day..
because today ,its my birthday...

yes sweetheart...thank you
i received your warm wishes...
felt your whispers,enjoyed my ears...
heard your charming voice...
wishing me a happy birthday...
sweetheart ...
thank you ...

good morning my darling ...
lady with an amazing  lips ...
lips never taste like before ...
with a sweet lovely tongue ...
that wishing me always ...
and send me her love...
thank you sweetheart ...


good morning ...


hazem al ...
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