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I was born on November 30th , I hear that makes me a Saggitarius. I dunno what that means. I  know how to swim, and I'm a sucker for a guy with a nice smile And nice words. I'm still learning how to whisper sweet nothings I'm often loud at times when I should be quiet I'm often quiet at times when I should be loud I keep holding back or letting it all out at the wrong time. I like sweet drinks... a lot. I've been told that I give pretty bad hugs People say that it feels like I'm trying to escape Well I don't like letting people close. Especially close enough to hear me breathe. I have this odd fascination with things like time machines and technology, I assume it's because I like to figure out how things work and fix them. Am the same way with people, like to know what's coming before it does. Love usually lasts a few moments, That's also why I tend to fall in love with men Who would never love me back I know it sounds crazy, but it's actually much saner than it seems And to be honest, I think it's safer that way See relationships, they often remind me that I'm not afraid of letting go. But I'm scared of what's gonna happen The moment that my body hits the ground I'm clumsy. I usually trip when am following my feelings. I landed on my pride and it shattered like a mirror i check daily. Now I can't even tell who's trying to give me a compliment or just trying to get into my pants. I've never been into martial arts but I have all these bruises, I got from beating myself up over things I can't fix I know it sounds weird but sometimes, I wonder what the voices in my head say when am asleep. I wonder what the doors would do if they found out About all the things that I've done when they are closed. I've got a trash can that's overflowing with really, really obnoxious mistakes And a dump site in my closet with all the skeletons. You'll trap me in a corner and insist I get help. Hi, my name is Em, I enjoy ice cream and yoghurt, people watching And figuring out how to make them work. I allow myself to cry more than I need to, from letting all the wrong people in. I have solar-powered energy, I have a battery-operated heart, It flickers and dies from overuse. My hobbies include rewriting my life story, hiding behind poems, And trying to convince myself that I do matter to someone. I don't know much, but I do know this I know that if you don't have standards, you won't be treated right and be happy. I know God is still reworking my faults and flaws, I'm a unique work in progress.
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Dec 18, 2013
Dec 18, 2013 at 6:15 AM UTC
My honest poem( inspired by Rudy Francisco)
I was born on November 30th , I hear that makes me a Saggitarius. I dunno what that means. I  know how to swim, and I'm a sucker for a guy with a nice smile And nice words. I'm still learning how to whisper sweet nothings I'm often loud at times when I should be quiet I'm often quiet at times when I should be loud I keep holding back or letting it all out at the wrong time. I like sweet drinks... a lot. I've been told that I give pretty bad hugs People say that it feels like I'm trying to escape Well I don't like letting people close. Especially close enough to hear me breathe. I have this odd fascination with things like time machines and technology, I assume it's because I like to figure out how things work and fix them. Am the same way with people, like to know what's coming before it does. Love usually lasts a few moments, That's also why I tend to fall in love with men Who would never love me back I know it sounds crazy, but it's actually much saner than it seems And to be honest, I think it's safer that way See relationships, they often remind me that I'm not afraid of letting go. But I'm scared of what's gonna happen The moment that my body hits the ground I'm clumsy. I usually trip when am following my feelings. I landed on my pride and it shattered like a mirror i check daily. Now I can't even tell who's trying to give me a compliment or just trying to get into my pants. I've never been into martial arts but I have all these bruises, I got from beating myself up over things I can't fix I know it sounds weird but sometimes, I wonder what the voices in my head say when am asleep. I wonder what the doors would do if they found out About all the things that I've done when they are closed. I've got a trash can that's overflowing with really, really obnoxious mistakes And a dump site in my closet with all the skeletons. You'll trap me in a corner and insist I get help. Hi, my name is Em, I enjoy ice cream and yoghurt, people watching And figuring out how to make them work. I allow myself to cry more than I need to, from letting all the wrong people in. I have solar-powered energy, I have a battery-operated heart, It flickers and dies from overuse. My hobbies include rewriting my life story, hiding behind poems, And trying to convince myself that I do matter to someone. I don't know much, but I do know this I know that if you don't have standards, you won't be treated right and be happy. I know God is still reworking my faults and flaws, I'm a unique work in progress.
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I need you. You have invaded my heart like an army looking for bloodshed in the most important battle of the war. You have left my heart ripped open, dripping the hot blood of the most crimson red the world has ever seen. My veins are reworking themselves to spell out your name. Look closely, you can see them through my translucent skin. I'm reaching out for you but the air is cold. The oxygen that fills my lungs smells of only ice. No one is near, you're so far away. I can't stay with you. You are warm, I am cold. You're wrapped up and I'm abandoned. You sleep well with the ghost of another, I don't sleep. Empty spaces in my bed, empty spaces in my heart. Don't talk to me like that; I can't take it. I fall. Don't talk to me. I can't take it. I fall. Each word that comes out of your mouth. I trip on it, I lose my grip. I fall. My balance lost forever with you. I fall. I'm in love. I fell. And i'm still so cold. And my heart is still bleeding.
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Oct 28, 2013
Oct 28, 2013 at 12:59 PM UTC
Icicles of Sinews.
One by one they fall The ones I thought Were my friends There they go, Distancing themselves From me, Until they are completely gone From sight But not from mind Every night I remember The fallen faces Once friends Now death eaters Devouring my Malleable flesh "You will never lose me" The newest one to the Fallen faces said just the night before She lied, and stole my friend One less from my already Tiny group Of people who "care" for me I never know what I do To deserve this from anyone Maybe its my tone My anger The demons that let themselves loose On the page Or maybe it's the things that count The things they know and see of me The kindness I give to them The love I give for all I care for Or the horrible, despicable, evil Things inside themselves, That I protect them from My malleable flesh That they currode away The flesh that They know is weak And know they can walk all over Because of my overwhelming kindness I don't know Why I keep believing When people say they won't leave When they always do My mother Gives me my kindness My father Gives me the rage I throw On pages and pages But never show My mother The reason why I'm so malleable My father The reason why I have the dreams Of killing, of yelling Both My depression My mind now Reworking all that has just happened In it self It organizes my thoughts Replaying the events Showing what to do next time Re-Awakening itself To now know Not to trust those who Show no effort Who pretend to know Who eventually, will be the others In my dreams, Of killing In my writing, Where all of my demons let loose. I want to love all Even thought I know Not all will love me
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Jun 30, 2015
Jun 30, 2015 at 1:47 AM UTC
Re-Awakening of my Mind
One by one they fall The ones I thought Were my friends There they go, Distancing themselves From me, Until they are completely gone From sight But not from mind Every night I remember The fallen faces Once friends Now death eaters Devouring my Malleable flesh "You will never lose me" The newest one to the Fallen faces said just the night before She lied, and stole my friend One less from my already Tiny group Of people who "care" for me I never know what I do To deserve this from anyone Maybe its my tone My anger The demons that let themselves loose On the page Or maybe it's the things that count The things they know and see of me The kindness I give to them The love I give for all I care for Or the horrible, despicable, evil Things inside themselves, That I protect them from My malleable flesh That they currode away The flesh that They know is weak And know they can walk all over Because of my overwhelming kindness I don't know Why I keep believing When people say they won't leave When they always do My mother Gives me my kindness My father Gives me the rage I throw On pages and pages But never show My mother The reason why I'm so malleable My father The reason why I have the dreams Of killing, of yelling Both My depression My mind now Reworking all that has just happened In it self It organizes my thoughts Replaying the events Showing what to do next time Re-Awakening itself To now know Not to trust those who Show no effort Who pretend to know Who eventually, will be the others In my dreams, Of killing In my writing, Where all of my demons let loose. I want to love all Even thought I know Not all will love me
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Waiting at a café table You walk in and I’m disabled Seeing for the first time The blue-green-grey of those troubled eyes Lost in the limelight Where I found you, saw you, Knew you in this new space, Feeling this strange rhyme, Waiting at an intersection of Strung out weathered hope The silence lengthens, the stare deepens Casting what I knew into distant realms, Reworking the good and Finding those lines redrawn I no longer anticipate, but wait For those answers only you can give, Those I was never able to predict.
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Sep 21, 2010
Sep 21, 2010 at 6:07 PM UTC
Wait
I am constantly rewriting lines I am always retracing my steps I am stuck reworking my code I am lost in reconfiguration A skipping records plays (plays, plays, p-p-plays) and I am caught in-between here and there and where I want to be
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Dec 6, 2015
Dec 6, 2015 at 10:20 AM UTC
Running in Place
I want someone who is More than just a cure for my loneliness Someone who can seal my madness with a kiss More than a pretty face An electric soul a fiery grace More than static Over and out of control Til death do we tear each other apart Reworking our guts into the bigger picture You can't spell heart without "art" To the one who can supernova my senses with a stare      a touch           a telepathic tug Just be here now
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Jul 2, 2013
Jul 2, 2013 at 8:37 PM UTC
he(art)
An hour is as fleeting as the angle of the morning sun, as brief as any moment has a kinship with the current one. The fabric of the world with all its artwork, every sun-dried streak, refits the future with a small reworking of a brush technique.
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Jul 1, 2016
Jul 1, 2016 at 8:05 AM UTC
Brevity
You peal back his past and and pull it through sewing his history and his going to be up in a moment torment and torture, you delight in his pain and his fighting delighting in the life you are tainting, destroying watching him straining,he is trying to forget what remaining and I am stuck painting sketching reworking searching He wants to forget you,He wants to forget your mean, your mad, the things you stole and the things you have. He wants to forget your mean and your mad... and all the things you once had. He wants to forget you. erase your face from the storybook life we have now you refuse to let absence in, showing up in the dark throwing bricks steeling things from his yard he is too nice, he is too hurt I love him more and more and I feel this burn burn your house burn your yard steel your cat and fuel this urge burn your mean burn your fire burn that look that old desire burn that smile that's backed with hate fight that feeling that turns me irate sit back down I refuse to do anything that makes me feel like you Hating what hurts what I love most Burning hot cheers lets toast toast to being more the high road is hard, I am feeling chard I remember what matters most I have him in my heart, he has me and his when he says my name he does not cringe He loves me.
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Aug 20, 2014
Aug 20, 2014 at 2:22 AM UTC
Burning
Such is the mirror of a tomorrow That makes now’s theft no more than a borrow. Myriad borrows without reflection Gybe the sailor’s course beyond correction. Sailing on the waves of a reworking. Reinforcing winter’s wind’s inflection To fill the world with a dire infection. Yesterday left to cruel sorrow. Winter prevails for tomorrow. The fallen guide the vacuous minded. They follow to their destiny of dead. In eternity of eternal sleep Blind to the reward they shall never reap. Perpendicularly prevailing for Fighting back with righteousness they shall keep Until victorious they take the leap To the promise that has been read By those remaining sound minded. Such was the mirror of that yesterday That cleans the slate thereafter, ev’ryday. Their dirges sound hollow when spring is here. They’ll never return lest we forget fear. We learn to reflect the heart of the all. No more need we shed a single sad tear For this, it is written, he will forswear. Embrace love for there’s no other way, As it will prevail forever and a day.
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Sep 25, 2016
Sep 25, 2016 at 11:23 AM UTC
The Notion of a Winter’s Succession
Bid on the buyer That's my bet Bet on my betters And be Lucks letter. Number 1 And 8 Divide, You're lefts with 8's Starting life to late. The potter and his plates His foot on the pedal, Hands on the clay Reworking what he believes To be too late. Early morning start And hurt fills his heart, He holds together Like dried cracked clay. Living life he plays His part, Untill Heavy & ****** The grave heavy & muddy. Disintegrate, reincarnate And intergrate. Live again Love again And be whole, Feel full And reach your goals. Sacred with the power of soul.
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Oct 8, 2017
Oct 8, 2017 at 3:11 AM UTC
Early Morning
Welcome bountiful singing Gulls. Blue sunshine, reworking seasons seas; Seamless changeling.
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Mar 18, 2014
Mar 18, 2014 at 1:29 PM UTC
Changing
Jesus My Saving God, works within me. Creating my path toward his salvation. For he does not want me to be lost here. So through his plan and path in my life. He creates an path that shall finish my salvation. He works within all of his peoples life here. Reworking an path that shall lead unto him. It is part of the beauty of his amazing grace. So never allow your life to end too soon.
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Sep 21, 2019
Sep 21, 2019 at 5:54 AM UTC
Jesus My Saving God
A poetical set of two clauses or something -I've never been good at math- (speech as is before it implies any poetry) (the indeterminate, aleatory in nature fully rid of all things prose) do they intersect? at which point does X differ from Y and does the M slope upwards or down? checks and reworking I've never been good at math
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Dec 14, 2014
Dec 14, 2014 at 2:52 PM UTC
A poetical set
I want to get lost where the world is yours where the skies reflect your innermost thoughts and the clouds are your ideas and the rain they wring is your desires which flood the sahara of your hopes to watch them trickle through the cracks, your doubts,and come to feed, to nurture your needs till trunks of talent grow, and twist, and expand and, like the traits of your hands reach up to the sky to touch your ideas take their nectar, patiently blossom while uncertainty floats about as flotsam to see the universe as your playground the stars as you picture them unearthed and unfeatured, and then explode into the atmosphere with heavy annotation extraordinary reworking of ordinary constellations the noxious gas of your speech choked full of that which I cant understand but for which I yearn to know, as a human, as a man if I could choose where to get lost a place to throw myself in the point where I stand my ground and forget all sense of skin where I am only eyes like plunging, wide-stared underwater, secluded and breath ill-prepared it would be in your eyes- then your mind, then your stare then your soul, then your damages everything there
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Sep 8, 2015
Sep 8, 2015 at 2:55 PM UTC
where I wish to be Lost
Taught your books Reread your words Walked at Walden Life changing monent Touching your desk left me humbled Always crafting words like reworking recipes to improve them Poets can't laugh at themselves but their words lessen life's highs and lows C@rainbowchaser2019
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Jan 13, 2019
Jan 13, 2019 at 1:40 PM UTC
Henry David
The moon rose behind the mountains, like a runway. The stars up ahead looked pretty, from far away. With little vision in my eyes, and face half-under messy water, those lonely shores now rippled with life, moonlight flash on pier. Scratched ghosts of headland through seafoam, bruise-coloured & careful, and I alone, seeing faces in old raindrop night-time moonscape storm had come. All with black language of love and luck, started war with that woman, since we changed. Despite remem’bring tattoos and smiles at dusk, in my dreams you fade. Island ferry siren naked, waves of black and brown, pulling it inward, vibrating great shadows of formless bay, and consuming it. Through the spiral of shiv’ring moonlight magic, cheap birds lost their names in the moonlight, reworking old songs they half-memorised, breathing us goodnight. But have you heard their songs lately? Are they kissing, working on new poetry? What will they remember in three-month’s time? And who will be there when it all falls down? Well does that matter anymore? This poet’s a fool, he thought he changed; It’s just new kind’s of **** new moonlight on pier, hold me, anyway. The rust-red banks of old love soon crashed under cigarettes of rippling tide, as horror covered whole stretch of sky, midnight scene, & I.
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Jun 19, 2018
Jun 19, 2018 at 4:51 AM UTC
Midnight Scene by The Harbour's Mouth
Out of the fire he called me, as I stand the ashes fall off of me. All that is left of me , is what was not burn in the fire of cleansing. For he is at work within each of us, cleansing with a Holy Fire. Transforming us, into his Perfect likeness, remolding each of us. Molding , transforming us reworking us into a Holy Child. For he uses circumstances, situations, and people in our lives. To create an race of Humble, Holy Race of soldiers that belong to him. For he take an group of nobodies and make us into his somebodies. That he shall use to reach a world that is dying from our sins.
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May 16, 2015
May 16, 2015 at 9:58 AM UTC
Out Of The Fire The Ashes Shall Fall
I wish that we hadn't dated last year I'm doing better now But alas You're not here Would timing have changed Our inevitable fate? What if I'd been better In a "more myself" state -- But I cannot choose How the cards fall At the mercy of the moment Despite wanting to control all From this I have learned and grown In innumerable ways Lessons I can carry Into life's next phase
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Nov 27, 2018
Nov 27, 2018 at 6:28 PM UTC
Reworking Time