Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
"restating" poems
It took a hastily-made hangman puzzle to **** you, a present-day friend of mine to simply whisper that three-letter word as if she were restating the gospel. Ironic, then, that as you were dying, I felt an era-long noose loosening. I remember finding skin pores mistakenly labelled as sinkholes, every confession warranting a "believe me, we knew" after the other. If you had spent any more time, an indefinite amount of days deciding to stay lurking in the corners of the closet, out there in the rafters where no one could hear you whispering poison into my gut reactions, I might have sprouted a kamikaze bloodline, a raucous rhythm in the ranks cackling louder with each year of silence, each span of secrecy. Although your plastic inflection vanished with a collective unlocking of the joints, your cryptic sentiment still loiters while my common sense is sleeping, and I remember to repeat, three times like Dorothy, that moment I could only be my true self on paper.
0
Sep 12, 2011
Sep 12, 2011 at 4:40 AM UTC
Elegy to a Former Self
Words, words hurt even if they are just restating facts. Facts somehow now twisted by how they were originally delivered. Passing on information to people I think should know. Know for my heart, know for my peace of mind. But jealousy it seems should always be forgotten. Talking about it magnifies it beyond what it is, just slight and simple. I made a man into a monster in her eyes. Something he doesn't deserve. I sit in the midst of a love triangle in which the woman doesn't want either of us. She just wanted to be friends with both of us. Now her urge to be more intimate with me as a friend is blocked by a barrage of concentration on a subject that should be so light and whimsical. And a friend who had his heart crushed by seeing that intimacy. I feel like a wolf, these words bite and wrangle, and won't dissipate for 100 years, says Muhammad, pbuh. I always think work will become easier, but tests multiply, and it stays hard - hard in heart.
0
Feb 18, 2021
Feb 18, 2021 at 11:36 PM UTC
Jealousy
...being a beacon for darkness ...being a deacon of evil ...seeing no evil regardless ...seeing honesty as a hurtle ...restating unholy responses ...restating there'll be no upheaval ...ruling with no conscience ...ruling different for different people ...playing your god against us ...playing yourself in the process ...knowing none of it is real ...knowing if it is your going to hell ©2024
0
Apr 14, 2024
Apr 14, 2024 at 9:10 PM UTC
~•§•~ You Better Pray to God That God's Not Real ~•§•~
“but you are too old for apprehension.” her voice had sounded so, and of this one’s voice, ‘you are never too old for wariness of an unknown.’ responded astute, drunk on logic. returned was breathless thought to the void, filling emptiness with irony. (oxymoron) and weened the way thru, concision turned derision with repetitious definitions that found no actual meaning. all thought without justification and no thought with classification. words, actions, wailing: empty, empty, empty then existed less and less from want of purpose. less and less from interest of the known; this once forged fear of life. and with impressive derangement, grabbing at the only sober keychain. they, with twitching vesper eyes, their hands jit’ for a false-meeting fix. to nix the nihilism. and: ‘People can go **** themselves.’ words of this one’s voice. of her’s, “thank god you’re alive.” from those days, when rains ranted down, and the trains tripped us out. those days of our wood’s reclaimed trailer. and each syllable was never thought to be anything until aged eyes ached for review those epochs of breath. but: ‘People can go **** themselves.’ voiced in response to a romanticized thought. and all epochs lingered upon are no more than a journal of the winds that blew while we were present. some diary of listless lust left undated. of the woods, of a reiterate span in once anonymized transience. and falling back, thumbing pages for proof of experiences passed into skewered memory. left are three lines, ill-verbed, to represent an entirety of past lives. of time once present in yellow-lit motel room, of apocalyphic musings, and veering prophets of doom. they, turned sincere apocalyphites. their prayers writ boldfaced, platitudinous, in concern of endless words restating – in constant rephrasing: ‘People can go **** themselves.’ but they just kept goin’ on without concern for the dawn.
0
Feb 1, 2014
Feb 1, 2014 at 5:26 AM UTC
3 word, 3 thought
“but you are too old for apprehension.” her voice had sounded so, and of this one’s voice, ‘you are never too old for wariness of an unknown.’ responded astute, drunk on logic. returned was breathless thought to the void, filling emptiness with irony. (oxymoron) and weened the way thru, concision turned derision with repetitious definitions that found no actual meaning. all thought without justification and no thought with classification. words, actions, wailing: empty, empty, empty then existed less and less from want of purpose. less and less from interest of the known; this once forged fear of life. and with impressive derangement, grabbing at the only sober keychain. they, with twitching vesper eyes, their hands jit’ for a false-meeting fix. to nix the nihilism. and: ‘People can go **** themselves.’ words of this one’s voice. of her’s, “thank god you’re alive.” from those days, when rains ranted down, and the trains tripped us out. those days of our wood’s reclaimed trailer. and each syllable was never thought to be anything until aged eyes ached for review those epochs of breath. but: ‘People can go **** themselves.’ voiced in response to a romanticized thought. and all epochs lingered upon are no more than a journal of the winds that blew while we were present. some diary of listless lust left undated. of the woods, of a reiterate span in once anonymized transience. and falling back, thumbing pages for proof of experiences passed into skewered memory. left are three lines, ill-verbed, to represent an entirety of past lives. of time once present in yellow-lit motel room, of apocalyphic musings, and veering prophets of doom. they, turned sincere apocalyphites. their prayers writ boldfaced, platitudinous, in concern of endless words restating – in constant rephrasing: ‘People can go **** themselves.’ but they just kept goin’ on without concern for the dawn.
Continue reading...
43
I'm waiting for inspiration And I'm left wanting Wanting my writing to be well thought out And pleasant to read and hear Even if the subject itself is not But I hate to wait It takes too long I want to create poetry But my creativity can't keep up with the demand of my twitching fingers The want, the need To create something But not knowing what that something is It's infuriating to say the least So I rush I put out unfinished, not well thought out pieces In order to satiate that itch I swear I'm not a boring person I just tend to feel the same things Over, and over So all my poems start to sound the same Monotonous, restating old ideas Because I don't think about it Or I think too much I try too hard To sound different Unique But that's not who I am I'm just a boy Who happens to fall in love too easily And has a voice But no clear message
0
Nov 13, 2015
Nov 13, 2015 at 4:54 PM UTC
To Wait, or Not to Wait
Throughout the day they chime Telephone off the hook ring one eight hundred calls are frequent Unknown names appear periodically Despite my number being unlisted The owner decides to tell it straight And it goes on nevertheless To make him do the ultimate Would pull the plug for fear of draining the brain from restating All that have been stated far too often And that's the best choice to remain calm This pulling plug thing works great As the answering machine would not pick up The intruder's voice thus stopped Before it had a chance to irk Throughout the day they chime Telephone off the hook ring one eight hundred calls are frequent Unknown names appear periodically
0
Dec 3, 2015
Dec 3, 2015 at 2:45 PM UTC
Sales Call Muted
Seventeen.. it all feels so different yet the same... I remember all the friends and fires that came And the ones that left, mistakes I made I recant them here under stratospheric shade Under dark of night and heavy rain Restating thoughts of bliss and pain I remember blood rains and dragon tails Wolves, foxes, a tiger or two, my imagination never fails Together with my brother I've carried it all Through brainstorms and stories tall.
0
Nov 20, 2013
Nov 20, 2013 at 7:44 PM UTC
17 (June 14, 2013)
you could travel to india. you could hop on a plane and end up something like 10,000 miles away from here in the middle of the rain forest overlooking a beautiful waterfall, the mist kissing your cheeks just the perfect amount to remind you that you're loved by Mother Earth. you could do that. sure, you could do that. or you could dig a really big hole, i'm talking about a massive hole that you could start to climb down in and work towards reaching the center of the earth, running into all sorts of mythical creatures: demons and demigods, demogorgons and dugtrio. you could get way way deep down there and find that in the center of it all is Indra's net, and all of a sudden everything in the universe makes sense. and it would make sense. and you'd be right. or you could realize it all right here and right now. you could understand that going anywhere out there really doesn't take you anywhere. you could see that by going anywhere you prove that you don't quite understand the point of what you are doing. you're putting lipstick on a pig. you're restating the directions instead of just following them. "Bake the cake at 450 for 10 minutes" becomes "Cook the pastry one degree above 449 for 600 seconds." the truth is that you've got every right to do that. it's just that one way or another you don't eat unless the cake gets baked, and it doesn't matter how many ways you read the instructions, you've still gotta put it in the oven and wait.
0
Jul 16, 2018
Jul 16, 2018 at 9:46 PM UTC
baba stephane noir
If this was the solution to everything Why did it take so long for it to sting? I poured the alcohol long ago And rubbed it on my wounds I tried to tell you I needed help Upon many, many moons Did restating my question make more sense? What is it that finally clicked? Is my pain finally too much for you? Has your soul, too, been knicked?
0
May 15, 2013
May 15, 2013 at 6:19 PM UTC
Sting
One of her last remaining Snakeshead died from his wounds, Restating his oath to serve Andulan before slipping beneath the black, No song awaited him on the other side, only pools of venom, On an island of silence. That killed down to the last, knew his survival was heavy, So he tore off a symbol of his responsibilty, from a brotherly neck. Andulan was found passed out and alone, with a starry sky above to glimpse upon, It didn't exist for him, all that mattered was that his beloved was still alive, Battered and bruised, but living nonetheless. He carried her off into the forest, taking her to a clearing beside a frog filled pond. It croaked with slimy life, pouches of green littered the vernal pool, filled with capsules. It was a melodious, low pitched song that eased him to sleep beside her, He'd wake up with her lying over him.
0
Apr 22, 2014
Apr 22, 2014 at 6:19 PM UTC
Silence of song part 138
If you love me let me know Because I'm not yet ready to completely let go, I say yet with cause, Because I'm tired of being wrapped so tightly in the gauze of your life. Because without yet, You have to get to the conclusion alone that we cannot escape the inevitable. We cannot recreate what we had, saying had because we're bad enough that we lost what we found sparked our curiosity of love. That what pushed us forward with such animosity is gone. You have chosen to lose hope in us You have chosen to give up on us Thus restating the completely frustrating inevitable life sentence you have created that is in itself, over. What are we that in a sea full of lies I can look into your eyes and still have hope for the future. But we have an effect, An effect not know yet, That could solely heat a city of a thousand men. Don't say we're over unless you're ready to bulldozer our empire. You can't retire a burning fire without first using a water hose. Don't close your eyes if you're gonna realize that everything you're about to lose is worth more than the muse of a memory. Don't give up hope and let a threat threaded rope of words hang from your neck after you've already slain the dragon and won the battle. Happiness is worth fighting for. That's why I'll spend my lifetime fighting.
0
Nov 14, 2015
Nov 14, 2015 at 1:12 AM UTC
Hope