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"carwash" poems
I see it for just a moment A squishy mound of fur to the far right of the asphalt This latest pile of dislocated mush is presented on a desert highway A raccoon? No. Too small. A coyote? Maybe. Who can tell? That play-dough pile of crushed bones was not created outside the white lines where it now lays Some chosen soul scraped and scooped the mystery meat to its resting place Some jumpsuit wearing civilian is intimately aware with the parentage of the reassembled road victim Do they have a moment of silence after the last shovel scrape? Do they hold an internal roadside memorial? What of the homicidal perpetrator behind his wheels? He must know the identity of his victim He must feel the agony of guilt Or, is his only remorse in the quarters he must spend at the self-service carwash to remove the evidence? Perhaps Road-Kill animals haunt their vehicle killers Maybe their blood can never be truly washed from the ****** weapon’s shinny surface Like spots on Lady Macbeth’s hands Perhaps the killer’s dreams are frequented by unidentifiable ****** mounds with eyes that stare from unnatural places After all Justice must be had in one way or another For the unrecognizable John Doe pile represents all those wild things that must chance to cross the hard, hot, lethal highway
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Apr 11, 2013
Apr 11, 2013 at 10:26 PM UTC
The Highway
suds fall on black like endless snow. tarnished paint to spry— engine's diminutive breath clout of metal coil, ballasts of portent... defacing the fog and giving it a brand new meaning. beside the rice fields in sullen Bulacan, i ache for the frog defecating on this tortured piece of land. birds in migratory V-positions cleave the azure, vanishing behind the tough ornate. to whence they flee    and to where they shall land on their poised talons, i do not know.    underneath the dermis and over     it, a long stillness of waiting,   trapped is this      man of Earth.
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Nov 4, 2015
Nov 4, 2015 at 3:43 AM UTC
Carwash
Peter got a sandwich for you. mama went shopping , Gabriel needs a carwash, Cristen choked on his ***** , Iris sailed the oceans, Blake died of ennui. Martha blew her neighbour, Adrian stole her ******* Beth went out of liquor, Walter cooked a new batch. Marla is a ****** Gambit dealt a new pack. And so and so they pass by All these million names. Who cares to blink twice At a facecless face? And then came eh...! wry dry, Dont **** Me, " ... " I can't even Say his name. It's like this name Blew my heart out with a shotgun right through my rib cage. And these are the names Which pierce your heart And make you breathless Because they hold stories That you always hid in darkness. And You have skeletons In your Closet Like thats not enough To give you the brain flu! But the salt on the wound Is that- so does your wife, Your mistress, And everyone around you. (gunshot)
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Apr 6, 2014
Apr 6, 2014 at 7:00 AM UTC
Eh ! Wry dry Don't **** Me
Beautiful woman snaking downtown Sixth St. You the one with the carwash hem With slit cuts up to the "yikes" territory Revealing a body As if soliciting ideas That everything is waiting for you
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Feb 20, 2015
Feb 20, 2015 at 4:41 AM UTC
Gems of Sensibilities
Midnight, pitch black and raining He washes his car. Swimming upstream against the impossible: Tainted raindrops creating an unfinishable task Blind to its full grasp on his life. He loves that car. Busted old thing - Barely road worthy But he fights to keep it clean Through darkness. Midnight car washes have become more frequent. Filling the void. Filing for divorce. Tainted raindrops smear his life, His wife publicly smeared in a community obsessive over the local news. Local rumour flies. That rusty old thing Why is he out there cleaning again? Cleaning in the dark - How can he see the dirt? Inside she looks on, looks on to the coward. She can see the dirt The former great, the former lover. That ******* car. The muted mesh of metal That held her former lover and his former lover. Out there his avoidance is her disdain. Midnight, pitch black and raining He washes his car.
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Sep 4, 2017
Sep 4, 2017 at 4:43 PM UTC
A Midnight Carwash
Parking lot carwash Sign: FOR USA Eses and esas listenin to oldies playing with Hoses Four güeros pull up eight ***** up their noses Roll down the window give the cholos some props "Hey guys..glad your supporting the country"... everything goes silent you ca n h e a r a p i n dro p ......"whatchoo talking 'bout ese.....this is For Us Eh!" Crank the Johnny Chingas back up, the hoses all squirting as the white boys drive off in their own **** stained dump
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Sep 4, 2018
Sep 4, 2018 at 10:25 PM UTC
The Vato CarWash
I See The Days Roll By They Smell Of Flowers At The Death of Summertime Light Through My Window - A Spinning Fan Seeking Acceptance I Lose The Passion Where Did All The Creation Go? A New Feeling: Heavier Formal Expected Boring How Can I Break Out Of This Shell I've Created For Myself? Each road Eventually Forks. Each path Eventually Ends. Everyone Has Their Way. I see Mine in glimpses: At The carwash. At the grocery. Holding Perhaps a Child With an Ironic Grin on My Face. Maybe Growing Up is Easier Than I'd imagined. I try To envision My life In Another way. Maybe In a Place Where the Walls Aren't so White, The Sun Not so Bright, The night Not so Tight. But, These Crude Imaginings; Are They Real? What Would Really be Different? Excuses For My position Now. Would Things be Better? I don't Know. There's Just This Keyboard In Front of Me and This Beer. What Would Be Different If I Weren't Here? A few Misplaced Feelings, A few Shoes Untied, A few Ignorant Tears. What Would Be Different If I Weren't Here? A Few Things, But Next to That, Nothing.
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Jul 29, 2014
Jul 29, 2014 at 8:32 PM UTC
What Would Really Be Different?
She currently Purred Fee Vixen-facts Dylans made Millions She- blown off The Catwalk Girl-edgy talk ekkh_ Sheik She could Cats Meow any Shrink Her alley Bistro lego-land That maestro Teeth decay Licking milk off the ground Purr- payday He's roaring Twenty years old Cheetah May the  force_____ Be with you forever young Star Wars Hans Solo Blowing in the wind Serengeti ((The Drug Catnip)) So tucked in his Lamborghini Paws carwash Where is Sponge Bob Pixie-bob snag All shagged Austin Power with Mini-me layered bob That Chausie sorry You need to go home My Lassie___*
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May 13, 2018
May 13, 2018 at 10:00 AM UTC
Bobcats Blow Dylan's
Lying in bed, I shift my vehicle into new day. A day that is blessed by rising sun. Feet become wheels, spinning in dance gracefully. Skin is cleansed in carwash-like shower that tickles to birth smile. Moments captured in suns rays vibrate, as gyrating beams flicker and penetrate cells. Air infused intentions rise in thoughts expanding to merge with gas-like breath. Blessings surface, as guidance from navigational system of heart purrs, gracefully. Brum, *** echoes, merging with days landscape, as dance commences. Brum, *** fills air as compassion toward others becomes goal. In instant, hands folded on steering wheel of prayer anchor, as gratitude fills thoughts. As wind pervades senses and birds sing on welcome mat of ears woven by hair. The day has begun in celebration, while cruse controlled movements connect to surroundings. While alignment is made to source as freedom bell rings inside waking hours. I’m blessed, ready to shift gears inside unlimited possibilities on highway of life. Blessed to rondevu with light for peace, while fuel of love energies congeal with purpose. Purpose to make the best of the gift of life given in a vehicle anointed by God.
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Oct 6, 2018
Oct 6, 2018 at 9:31 AM UTC
My Human Vehicle
Back in the 90’s, I remember the fun we used to have in the summer time, cruising down the spiraling streets of sweet escape, the stark sun pouring down its intense sunbeams onto our skin, the overcrowded pedestrians scurrying through the streets into parking lots, shopping malls, flashy restaurants, some standing at the carwash, water-soaking their vehicles to a finishing polished glow, others sitting at the bus stop conversing on some random topic, while Biggie’s, music, One More Chance, escaped from the radio into the air, our hands lost in gravity at the smooth, synchronized beats, our heads bopping and bouncing with steady motion, the bright, sparkling flash in our teeth, as we passed through the cityscape, drifting into dreams of freedom, the sky above us staring at the captivating canvas, and the smile written in our faces, while a group of guys standing on the corner of streets, smoking cigarettes one after another, and young, petite girls sneaked a peek at us, rocking in slow motion to the reverberating sounds rumbling through our vehicle, girl’s hips swinging nonstop, like they were uncontrollable, like they were on a wave of uncharted territories traveling the gaudy scene to a world of glistening paradise.
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Jun 15, 2018
Jun 15, 2018 at 9:31 PM UTC
90’s Vibe
something she had seen mid the concrete, puddles, suds made her think ‘is my car clean look as shiny as it should?’ seeing sponges slapping screens spying soapy splashes slosh and those lads in skin tight jeans working at the street carwash so she pulled up in her Merc where she stole more sneaky looks as they set about their work while she sipped on her Starbucks and that soggy bunch of guys put on something of a show as the heater warmed her thighs but quite needlessly so made her bite the paper cup sent her tongue across her lips as a t-shirt pulled right up and she fumbled for a tip and some time in due course her car looked forecourt new but she panted like a horse and her knickers stuck like glue but she drove back to the street to resume her working day and she earned tomorrow’s treat hitting puddles all the way
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May 9, 2021
May 9, 2021 at 8:14 AM UTC
CAR WASH
latches on to your mind ******* on the uniqueness, iconic-ness, spontaneous actions, of who You are. Having a Storm Trooper as your companion For a six hour drive, Lighting a bowl in a middle of a *** & Go carwash, Being my bright ball of light, when I needed it. The parasite latches onto that happiness, laughter, and soul of yours. Spits all of it onto the floor, letting it evaporate in the air. That little parasite clinging on to your mind haunts You. You’ve taken medications, shook your head, and dreamt. But the parasite’s will is greater than your mind. You can’t see who You truly are any longer but I can. You’re Strong Stronger than anyone I’ve seen. You’re Brave. You could’ve ended It all. But You didn’t. So, You know what? You’ll get rid Of that parasite And live the life You were meant to live. I hope You do. Because You deserve it. Always.
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Dec 16, 2018
Dec 16, 2018 at 7:04 PM UTC
A Parasite