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"subdivided" poems
The old fable covers a doctrine ever new and sublime; that there is One Man, — present to all particular men only partially, or through one faculty; and that you must take the whole society to find the whole man. Man is not a farmer, or a professor, or an engineer, but he is all. Man is priest, and scholar, and statesman, and producer, and soldier. In the divided or social state, these functions are parcelled out to individuals, each of whom aims to do his stint of the joint work, whilst each other performs his. The fable implies, that the individual, to possess himself, must sometimes return from his own labor to embrace all the other laborers. But unfortunately, this original unit, this fountain of power, has been so distributed to multitudes, has been so minutely subdivided and peddled out, that it is spilled into drops, and cannot be gathered. The state of society is one in which the members have suffered amputation from the trunk, and strut about so many walking monsters, — a good finger, a neck, a stomach, an elbow, but never a man. Man is thus metamorphosed into a thing, into many things. The planter, who is Man sent out into the field to gather food, is seldom cheered by any idea of the true dignity of his ministry. He sees his bushel and his cart, and nothing beyond, and sinks into the farmer, instead of Man on the farm. The tradesman scarcely ever gives an ideal worth to his work, but is ridden by the routine of his craft, and the soul is subject to dollars. The priest becomes a form; the attorney, a statute-book; the mechanic, a machine; the sailor, a rope of a ship.
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Oct 8, 2014
Oct 8, 2014 at 1:16 PM UTC
Excerpt from: "The American Scholar" -Ralph Waldo Emmerson
The old fable covers a doctrine ever new and sublime; that there is One Man, — present to all particular men only partially, or through one faculty; and that you must take the whole society to find the whole man. Man is not a farmer, or a professor, or an engineer, but he is all. Man is priest, and scholar, and statesman, and producer, and soldier. In the divided or social state, these functions are parcelled out to individuals, each of whom aims to do his stint of the joint work, whilst each other performs his. The fable implies, that the individual, to possess himself, must sometimes return from his own labor to embrace all the other laborers. But unfortunately, this original unit, this fountain of power, has been so distributed to multitudes, has been so minutely subdivided and peddled out, that it is spilled into drops, and cannot be gathered. The state of society is one in which the members have suffered amputation from the trunk, and strut about so many walking monsters, — a good finger, a neck, a stomach, an elbow, but never a man. Man is thus metamorphosed into a thing, into many things. The planter, who is Man sent out into the field to gather food, is seldom cheered by any idea of the true dignity of his ministry. He sees his bushel and his cart, and nothing beyond, and sinks into the farmer, instead of Man on the farm. The tradesman scarcely ever gives an ideal worth to his work, but is ridden by the routine of his craft, and the soul is subject to dollars. The priest becomes a form; the attorney, a statute-book; the mechanic, a machine; the sailor, a rope of a ship.
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Wailing walls, howling fences Encaged and blocked by barriers All smashed, sorted in security fence Miles of humanity and flesh torn apart Why is it that we can’t live together? We bleed the same coagulating blood Lined up and humiliated in alleyways Paths of iron bars and imprisonment My veins wringed, intensive torment Mentally distracted, strained by grief Settlement, conflicts and border struggles Governance, religious trickles of disunion The biblical birthright verses human rights The unsighted straining peace settlement Shadows of the peace blueprint screams Ongoing reconciliation, milked in small doses Whose home is whose? Subdivided in areas Controls of disillusionment undisclosed Unmanned checkpoints evokes fears Revolving cameras tossed and turned Bansky slogan “make hummus not war” Smashes freedom to uproot  and merge Constitute and construct peaceful resorts All horns blowing to collapse duality
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Jan 3, 2016
Jan 3, 2016 at 2:08 PM UTC
Bawling West-Bank Barrier
staying the night up high in rainclouds & I feel safe now when I look down the wide world is so small. we are all tiny specimen divinely dissected subdivided into lively sections by wants by fires by greed by needs & secret desires; one nation under god’s feet tired slaves perspire unnecessarily for possession & obsess over what they each acquire. it is you, it is I, and we are frighteningly alike. my attention’s quite untidy all the time my mind gets redirected it walks like hell & talks like heaven. I am not well I never have been. but this hex is a blessing, it’s too **** precious. we are spilling into the ocean over the edges. The Land is dead and has been, days now. I find it kinda pleasant & I wonder if they’ll ever get around to disinfecting the nest of decaying flesh, before it infests the rest, y’know, the ones that got left. rot is a pox spread by proxy & is not bonded by neither lock nor key; that’s like, **** what you got **** what you be **** what you thought what you think what you see.’ **** you, **** me, **** everyone, **** everything. it’s lovely, it’s lovely. I even think it’s kinda funny, I laugh at nothing. Oh, the irony
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Apr 16, 2015
Apr 16, 2015 at 7:05 PM UTC
Weather Control
She draws Crayola green meadows in which she frolics and laughs snuggling up to her imaginary daddy whom she colors in unstraight multi-hued stripes accessorized by a large unselfish heart in brick red proudly erupting from his chest. Her sepia brown-blob puppy is rediculously happy, just like her holding the perfect father she has always dreamed he is. Together they stare at blue construction paper skies and cotton ball clouds discovering sailing ships, famous people heads, and all the animals they will see on the day he comes to take her to the zoo. ~ He labors intently within the lines coloring subdivided spaces in one direction just the way he would teach her if she were here. Pressing into the bold outline on a tiger tail he hears her giggle in his thoughts. He closes the book each page fully given life placing it on the teetering pile of earlier masterpieces filed beside his desk where he and his daughter stored the art they created on regular dates they never had. He rises on the ritual of completion toward his omnipresent closet full of stacked and redundant "if onlys", each one shaped as a 64-count box purchased and purchased again with every book he intended to share on their next wax pencil excursion. On his toes, one more "if only" goes to the top. He still colors. She still dreams. ~ An Orange/Red sun drew itself out of the bleacher tiered palate and hung high betwixt her cottonball clouds 29 years from the start. Daddy holds his daughter in deep embrace while a secret artiste' paints a tiny translucent drop on her quivering cheek. The diligence of construction-paper prayers are answered in the evidence that there is no crayon for clear... it is a tear, and we are really here. (I love you my precious girl, with every color in the box :-))
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Jun 11, 2014
Jun 11, 2014 at 2:32 AM UTC
Color My Wishes (for Meghan)
She draws Crayola green meadows in which she frolics and laughs snuggling up to her imaginary daddy whom she colors in unstraight multi-hued stripes accessorized by a large unselfish heart in brick red proudly erupting from his chest. Her sepia brown-blob puppy is rediculously happy, just like her holding the perfect father she has always dreamed he is. Together they stare at blue construction paper skies and cotton ball clouds discovering sailing ships, famous people heads, and all the animals they will see on the day he comes to take her to the zoo. ~ He labors intently within the lines coloring subdivided spaces in one direction just the way he would teach her if she were here. Pressing into the bold outline on a tiger tail he hears her giggle in his thoughts. He closes the book each page fully given life placing it on the teetering pile of earlier masterpieces filed beside his desk where he and his daughter stored the art they created on regular dates they never had. He rises on the ritual of completion toward his omnipresent closet full of stacked and redundant "if onlys", each one shaped as a 64-count box purchased and purchased again with every book he intended to share on their next wax pencil excursion. On his toes, one more "if only" goes to the top. He still colors. She still dreams. ~ An Orange/Red sun drew itself out of the bleacher tiered palate and hung high betwixt her cottonball clouds 29 years from the start. Daddy holds his daughter in deep embrace while a secret artiste' paints a tiny translucent drop on her quivering cheek. The diligence of construction-paper prayers are answered in the evidence that there is no crayon for clear... it is a tear, and we are really here. (I love you my precious girl, with every color in the box :-))
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They were once meaningless I write and in one, two and three The transgression made its way to you They became lyrics, My hymn towards you. Eradicating you made me at ease Til lines intersect There was no division The strategy became a multiplication Where the factors were lost as digits There’re no emotions at all. We were destined To know the factors To solve the x and y Then, sections were subdivided. I was in y, you were in x As if we’re in supplementary angles Why’re we apart? Can two junctions be aligned? The triangle was secluded With the main angle, The base, the height The hypothenuse uploaded the main formula. Never will I resolve this For formula was never been taught As if I’m doing such trials and errors Til I get tired And be drowned by head and heartaches. The compass would never shape you The ellipse would not offer you mass There were no vectors at all, Now, its just the dot The single one which may point me Towards the possible focus of such lines. (2/23/14 @xirlleelang)
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May 28, 2014
May 28, 2014 at 12:36 AM UTC
Lover Solving
. Can you feel the rhythm rise, but never, ever leaving the ground? The bridges sway with every song that they play, I can barely wait for the sound. A sonic exhilaration crosses dreamstates of predecision. While wild wizards are haranguing the warlocks, the devil makes a quick incision. In the hearts that are subdivided, to those full of James Brown soul- there's an evil wind that's suddenly pinned your face to the totem pole. Echoes from dragons seducing a sigh, there's an ache to leave in their blood. Some- when they run, run far, far away, while others are still stuck in the mud. Can you feel the rhythm rise, but never, ever leaving the ground? The bridges sway with every song that they play, I can barely wait for the sound. .
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Jan 22, 2010
Jan 22, 2010 at 10:58 AM UTC
~Can You Feel the Rhythm Rise? ♥
. These wrought iron dreams won't bend in the wind anymore. Unleashed immortal magick mimics death within the hazy orb of crystal, while the wizard stands motionless in the corner. Darkness subdivided as his metamorphosis neared completion.His dark black wings dried slowly in the diffused moonlight. My hands trembled as blood curdled up the grimacing face of the moon, an ungodly scream sent shock waves through the unmolested silence.I left the room.My unraveled nerves recoiled at the touch of darkness. The wizard pointed at me as I asked-- if I could continue the dream..
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Feb 20, 2010
Feb 20, 2010 at 3:53 PM UTC
~Darkness Subdivided ♥♥
The love of a mother for her child is not the same as the child's love for his mother. The love of a man for a woman changes after they are married from what it was before, and her love does not correspond in all points with his. Love between man and woman is different from the love of boy and girl. Love can be permanent as the tides, regular, unquestioned, with no end and no recognisable beginning. It can come suddenly, violently, as a thunderstorm in summer breaks upon the thirsty earth, short-lived except in the memory. But under any one of these emotions what is there for us to say? Only, I love you. Thoughts can be subdivided, classified, clothed with words. Words fit feelings only approximately, and our deepest feelings must often go unclothed. So when I say I love you I cannot analyse what I mean. I only know that I do love you and hope you understand.
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Jun 25, 2016
Jun 25, 2016 at 11:38 AM UTC
What do I mean when I say "love"?
Greetings from us at Homeland Security. We hope you had a pleasant journey. But keep in mind there's no guarantee That you won't exit on a gurney. You should love our border camps, Which are still progressing in stages. We have “subdivided rooms.” (We don't like to call them cages.) We strive to stifle criticism. Please ignore our critics' lore. Doesn't everybody love To camp out on a cold, hard floor? We provide you with a blanket. What? One is not enough? Crowded rooms should keep you warm. Exposure to germs will make you tough! Lest you feel our detention centers Are too uncomfortable or stark, We leave the lights on for twenty-four hours Daily in case you're afraid of the dark. What? You say you need a doctor? Come on, beggars can't be choosers. Toothbrushes? Toothpaste? Soap? Those are just for wimps or losers. We all want your stay to be Just as pleasant as we can make it. True, some have died, but they’re The weaker ones who cannot take it. If your kids were taken away, We don't mean to disrespect you, But since only God knows where they are, Then we'll let God reconnect you. Locking kids in windowless Warehouses in our recollection Is a way to offer the kids Security and protection. If perhaps you’re seeking asylum, One little thing might give you pause: The president is working on Ways to change asylum laws. We know the whole idea of camps Polarizes, or causes a schism. In figuring out what to call them, We prefer the euphemism. So, enjoy your stay until The powers that be decide your fate. If you’re lucky, you’ll get a shower During your long, protracted wait. -by Bob B (6-24-19)
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Jun 25, 2019
Jun 25, 2019 at 9:00 AM UTC
Welcome to America from the DHS
Greetings from us at Homeland Security. We hope you had a pleasant journey. But keep in mind there's no guarantee That you won't exit on a gurney. You should love our border camps, Which are still progressing in stages. We have “subdivided rooms.” (We don't like to call them cages.) We strive to stifle criticism. Please ignore our critics' lore. Doesn't everybody love To camp out on a cold, hard floor? We provide you with a blanket. What? One is not enough? Crowded rooms should keep you warm. Exposure to germs will make you tough! Lest you feel our detention centers Are too uncomfortable or stark, We leave the lights on for twenty-four hours Daily in case you're afraid of the dark. What? You say you need a doctor? Come on, beggars can't be choosers. Toothbrushes? Toothpaste? Soap? Those are just for wimps or losers. We all want your stay to be Just as pleasant as we can make it. True, some have died, but they’re The weaker ones who cannot take it. If your kids were taken away, We don't mean to disrespect you, But since only God knows where they are, Then we'll let God reconnect you. Locking kids in windowless Warehouses in our recollection Is a way to offer the kids Security and protection. If perhaps you’re seeking asylum, One little thing might give you pause: The president is working on Ways to change asylum laws. We know the whole idea of camps Polarizes, or causes a schism. In figuring out what to call them, We prefer the euphemism. So, enjoy your stay until The powers that be decide your fate. If you’re lucky, you’ll get a shower During your long, protracted wait. -by Bob B (6-24-19)
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Sometimes in fleeting moments, Usually after you’d been drinking, And often during those quiet, dark nights When we’d lye in bed together, Hands tracing only absence On one another’s skin, You’d look at me in this sort of Fantastical way. For me, it was always sort of like Looking out at the ocean And thinking for a second that you’re seeing Infinite blue, Though it’s really just the color of the sky Reflected. Even then, in those transient instants Of eyes meeting for a second too long, I’d sometimes think just that I’d miss you As the subject of my poems. Then the ice storm came. The slickness of the roads kept me from you Days before the storm and days after it, Such that the sharpie and permanence, With which I once marked the potential for our love, Is faded now too. My heart is a million different places, pieces; A million different people, Subdivided like America To its breaking point. But I brought my pen in from the car today And the ink is thawing now Despite the fact that the next love poem it writes Will be for someone else (Which is okay- I think I’m okay.)
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Dec 24, 2013
Dec 24, 2013 at 12:15 AM UTC
Ice
The love of a mother for her child is not the same as the child's love for his mother. The love of a man for a woman changes after they are married from what it was before, and her love does not correspond in all points with his. Love between man and woman is different from the love of boy and girl. Love can be permanent as the tides, regular, unquestioned, with no end and no recognisable beginning. It can come suddenly, violently, as a thunderstorm in summer breaks upon the thirsty earth, short-lived except in the memory. But under any one of these emotions what is there for us to say? Only, I love you. Thoughts can be subdivided, classified, clothed with words. Words fit feelings only approximately, and our deepest feelings must often go unclothed. So when I say I love you I cannot analyse what I mean. I only know that I do love you and hope you understand.
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May 4, 2016
May 4, 2016 at 8:50 AM UTC
Faces of Love *
.When I finally holdthat mountain in my hands,after traveling to all of these wild distant lands--paradise will become mine to unfold.Always running from the cold city's temptation,as subdivided sectors seem to sink in frustration.Yet, tame in comparison to the lands I once knew,black diamonds surfaced in the rock garden I grew.What you get on your canvasis what you hold in your mind.Don't give up your brush,let's see what we will find.
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Feb 26, 2010
Feb 26, 2010 at 2:49 PM UTC
~Rock Garden
We are in the future now. In the past yesterday is tomorrow, but some of us didn't notice. We subdivided dreams into half gram servings so they wouldn't end. We concentrated those into the smallest possible dose so we could savor every morsel, taste every drop of our life's Kool-Aid. We lived sugar-free to enhance the sweet, and then ignored all of it. We wrapped our fists around excitement and squeezed its juice out dry to **** adrenaline cravings. i have read enough Rimbaud to see the symbolism. i have read enough Hudgins to know i, too, used to be sure. i have read enough Petrosky to sympathize... Look, i'm a bear now, too! i was wasted enough on land for Eliot, as fractured as cummings, as subversive as Ginsberg, but in the end i settled for breathing. **DAS SOFA KING, VICTORIOUS AT LAST.**
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Nov 3, 2013
Nov 3, 2013 at 6:42 PM UTC
Wee Todd
I’m tired of feeling California-Time with my head and London-Time with my heart. I don’t want to deal with zone differences anymore but I want you back. Can you feel me, can you hear my subdivided heartbeat? Touch me, pulse my triplet-timed chest, know that it beats for One-two-three, two-two-three, three-two-three you.
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Sep 16, 2012
Sep 16, 2012 at 3:43 AM UTC
Untitled Love Poem #2
*In a patch of sundried earth dark cracks emerge.. forms resembling maps remembered from schooldays and Google.. Appearance of arbitrary lines depicting States newborn.. Our everyday maps also born of the Sun.. the Sun's artistry with rainfall..the points of assembly of water in place and flow..forms of unique identities each subdivided patch.. Raising the question of new possibility of finding an Awareness.. becoming the Sun and seeing the patches and lines and States anew as images projected.. from that projector.. those many miles away...*
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May 3, 2014
May 3, 2014 at 10:28 AM UTC
States
can you believe the sand is so warm so gritty beneath our toes and holds us up? It's like concrete with feeling, so far away from the suburbs type walkways streets paved everything, It gives a little shifts when your weight goes from foot to foot, striding , leaves a trace unseen walking down same home after home suburbs streets the same subdivided parts of living, plots lain out like cemetaries do, only missing the headstones, facing east. I get hot walking but enjoy the beach.
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Jan 6, 2017
Jan 6, 2017 at 2:23 AM UTC
facing east
~~~ The Puzzle of My Tao twenty three years long, the hands suggest, the heart demands, the chest heaves, after a stumbled upon re-read,^ asking and answering, more precisely once asked, now answered? the most satisfying solution proffered, a humble and most humbling, more yes than no. imagine a jig saw puzzle, of infinite views, depending on a perspective, maddening and mysterious, tortuous and terrifying, wondrously wonderful, this no, that yes, as time demands movement, modifications and self-awareness revisionism. you try on women, as they try you too. this, not a trumping misogony apology, for women are still and always the only solution, for me. then one day, marveling miraculous, a second skin, so thin you wear it as art of your own, and the painter, and the poet, find themselves, contented best, with but one subjective perspective, contentedly repetitive, a view for an ever, a view forever changing. the answer is subtle. women woman. one woman. e becomes a, the subdivided man, an e, cut at mid-curvature, finds his perspective, reveling in scene from a winnowed window, never different, always different, and the poet~painter, arts the subtlety of   unceasingly upheavaled satisfaction renewed, and in doing so, transform himself, from a cut up, halved e, merges to its almost but differing reciprocal, an a, so that ea, joined and fused as one, marks his woman~completion, and all is both, singular sharing, and now the every changing view better understood thru the prism of an o. ~~~ Mar. 25, 2016 NYC
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Mar 27, 2016
Mar 27, 2016 at 7:26 AM UTC
The Puzzle of Me 2016: My Taoe
~~~ The Puzzle of My Tao twenty three years long, the hands suggest, the heart demands, the chest heaves, after a stumbled upon re-read,^ asking and answering, more precisely once asked, now answered? the most satisfying solution proffered, a humble and most humbling, more yes than no. imagine a jig saw puzzle, of infinite views, depending on a perspective, maddening and mysterious, tortuous and terrifying, wondrously wonderful, this no, that yes, as time demands movement, modifications and self-awareness revisionism. you try on women, as they try you too. this, not a trumping misogony apology, for women are still and always the only solution, for me. then one day, marveling miraculous, a second skin, so thin you wear it as art of your own, and the painter, and the poet, find themselves, contented best, with but one subjective perspective, contentedly repetitive, a view for an ever, a view forever changing. the answer is subtle. women woman. one woman. e becomes a, the subdivided man, an e, cut at mid-curvature, finds his perspective, reveling in scene from a winnowed window, never different, always different, and the poet~painter, arts the subtlety of   unceasingly upheavaled satisfaction renewed, and in doing so, transform himself, from a cut up, halved e, merges to its almost but differing reciprocal, an a, so that ea, joined and fused as one, marks his woman~completion, and all is both, singular sharing, and now the every changing view better understood thru the prism of an o. ~~~ Mar. 25, 2016 NYC
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Yesterday I forgot who I was Today I don't recognise me I have many different thoughts But just one identity (Just Me R) Whilst lost through time, along with my identity, I lost my mind. (Ryan Adler) One light refracted into many My prismatic soul, subdivided Incandescent borne iridescence I am transmuted stark incognito (Bill Hughes) I know I am 'YOU' I feel you within me Within my bones, blood, neurons, genes I know I have lost 'ME' Now my NEW identity is 'YOU' (Melancholy of Innocence)
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Jun 6, 2016
Jun 6, 2016 at 4:26 PM UTC
IDENTITY (draft) would anyone like to add a verse?
Timelessly Transcendent These states of passion A brief encounter A natural reaction Emotional chemicals No ones to blame Hard hot wiring Shot down in flames When I was still young And unwilling to fall You were but naive Behind subdivided walls Hidden from your passion By overbearing arms Believe me when I tell you I would never do you harm ...........
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Jul 17, 2017
Jul 17, 2017 at 7:49 AM UTC
NURTURERS
The love of a mother for her child is not the same as the child's love for his mother. The love of a man for a woman changes after they are married from what it was before, and her love does not correspond in all points with his. Love between man and woman is different from the love of boy and girl. Love can be permanent as the tides, regular, unquestioned, with no end and no recognisable beginning. It can come suddenly, violently, as a thunderstorm in summer breaks upon the thirsty earth, short-lived except in the memory. But under any one of these emotions, what is there for us to say? Only, I love you. Thoughts can be subdivided, classified, clothed with words. Words fit feelings only approximately, and our deepest feelings must often go unclothed. So when I say I love you I cannot analyse what I mean. I only know that I do love you and hope you understand.
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Nov 20, 2019
Nov 20, 2019 at 11:23 AM UTC
What does love mean?
I lay in my bed In the state Between sleep and awake Suddenly as clear as the blue sky I hear your voice Like whisper that comes From out side As though it really does Reach my physical ear: "Are you coming?" Almost like you whispered Because your soul knew I was still sleeping. Such are connections I can hear your discomfort And as I arrive to work You tell me That everything went wrong this morning. But I knew that Otherwise you would Not have asked for help, Would you? And my energy Would not have subdivided to you, Now would it?
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May 26, 2016
May 26, 2016 at 5:28 PM UTC
Clear-Audience
I don’t know what will heal the world see the colours of hope unfurled maybe we should ban all flags the universal rags of sovereignty those emblems of pride which divide what part belongs to you or to me where even the sea is chopped into bits so it fits very neatly and oh so completely into tiny bites with regards to fishing rights that say where we can sail you can go to jail or face a huge fine for dangling your line into someone elses pond we are way too fond of the walls that were provided by any empire who decided it should all subdivided so it could take the best and fling out the rest like meat to a dog while they hogged the mineral wealth that they took by stealth how proudly they planted their pennant became the sitting tenant and saw it wave over the graves of the people they had enslaved pretend separation of each earthly nation what is it for? to stop us going to war? we can be entirely sure that wouldn’t work because it’s happened before maybe we need a long cold drink and a post-pandemic think about what we could do to improve our sprawling human zoo and bridge a divide that has become way too wide it won’t work, it’s political suicide but consider the millions who have died did the virus follow orders or stop at any borders no, it jumped all the silly dotted lines that we use to define what is yours from what is mine and after all if not under one God, we are under one sky so we could at least give it a try!
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Mar 14, 2021
Mar 14, 2021 at 5:27 AM UTC
I Don’t Know