People rushing to work Just another ordinary day Or so it seemed. until The worst imaginable thing happened. Bang smash right into the twin towers Smoke Panic rushing around like crazy Fear Panic Tears Franctic people pushing and shoveling Screaming shouting. People jumping to escape the flames The smell of death Feeling of hopelessness. Firemen caught trapped in the blaze. Suddenly the whole block collapses Gone in a moment.all theses lives. Never forget the souls of September the 11th
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A group meeting Got stung doing the jitterbug Jazzy lounge Bearhug Music notes of Junk Whole marriage records So group me in ((Single))
Signed rotten Platinum fink Miss the concert line Jibb Jibbering Riveting Jive Five The tribe all feathered Group( Kiss) Dark eyes vibe ACDC the King of rock You shock me all night Elvis ain't nothing hounded hitchhiked ACDC-Money Talks 50 shades of the Greyhound Those twin singers Tinker Bell Groupies Now it's the Hells Bell The four letter word
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What a ***** of the light finger The bands became AARP Old Rocker chair What a **** in her rocker pants
Drum roll Headlights Rock and Roll Tour group of
FRANCE F- Friendship R -Remain A- And N- Never C-Can E-End
ITALY I- T-Trust A-And L-Love Y You
ENGLAND E-Every N-New G-Guy L Leaves A-After N-Ninety D-Days
The world in Eighty tight money Days Group 8 days a week ahh I need your love girl I guess you know its true And when you're Pregnant Hey we are Rockers we don;t have a clue I phone fingers do the Hard rock Art of music strumming Please no old folks snoring
Days so long belly stretched The canvas one-day creation The car broke her water broke Due date 280 days Group Pregnancy pays
The mechanic charging by the hour (Midas-- That Callgirl not interested
Age of the rush Pinterest pictures Poison Ivy itching
Slower age Envy To crush *******
And going back Forever modern age Hey world be clever ACDC
We are all a group linked My jackpot My baby most blissful Inked in Pink
Spiritual, Group rock, and roll all words with comical meaning light me up face needs a recharge money cannot buy love or money can be nothing when you don't have your cards played right with Jackpot baby
A long summer's dusk yawned as if this side of the earth were tired of day and wished to usher in the quiet of night. I found myself sitting on a stone bench overlooking the river, cathedral and town as magnanimous indigo stretched so spritely to ripple across the sky and corral the light so that the stars could guide me home. Something shone so I asked, where have all my people gone?
The reply, they're still here. This lonely fiend's new friends remind him how temporary relief is because I have done this too many times and I have lost interest in living as I wander this town, My sweet city split me into
I actually haven't written raps in quite some time. Just poetry, but I got my start in 2008 on a website called my16bars (it has since gone down sadly) but I retained a lot of what I learned there.
There was a cool group of us young men who were daily users and we always shared our rhymes with each other and gave the best most honest critiques we could. as a group we wanted to elevate ourselves.
Life circumstances has changed me a lot, I have a son and am days away from having my daughter with my wife. Our life is great except for all the hardship,superficial and immediate. That's why I'm back at it now. And I take it a bit more serious. I'm shooting for poetry, wether traditional or slam but still I take a lot from rap lyricists and r n b artists.
I guess my idea is this tho, hello poetry is great but "likes" are kind of dated and hard to get. This will quickly become a popularity contest if we focus on the little heart. Instead I'm thinking of starting a chain, or forwarding group that we can share and critique, as well as repost and share/add to collections. This seems really redundant considering poetry groups are around and prevalent. But nobody, and you can look into this, nobody critiques poetry here. So people who rhyme are never tried and tested to do better.
The reason why a cypher works in rap is because if you **** people call you out right? Well that's not how it happens here in hello poetry, instead everyone likes and doesn't comment, or comments but no like, or likes and reposts but no comment. But I don't see anyone telling people that they could have done better, no one says "that's cool but maybe if you tried it this way" and honestly I myself am afraid to try this as well out of fear that my trying to be helpful will be misconstrued as an insult.
Poets can be the most sensitive people and for good cause. I liken myself to sensitivity but I hope one day we won't have to worry about hurting each others feelings and we can start really motivating each other to elevate our status. To do better. I'm not just searching for people to make me a better poet I'm looking for poets who want to get better with me.
If you're interested in working with me please get in touch as all opportunities have a shelf life.
Hey guys I wanted to appoligize for not writing as much as I used to. I've been going through a lot recently. Now I am overcoming the recent patch of life and stepping into the light. I am going to be starting a page on the social media site Facebook specifically for this page of poems because I really want to hear from you guys. My poems are about problems many people go through and often directed toward LGBT adults and youth. I would love if you all went and like the page. Hopefully the page can be fun and a bit of a support group. In an upcoming post I will give the link to the page all are welcome. Even if u are not following this page. Just if you have problems and would like a place to speak out and feel okay please come and check it out. Thanks guys. Thank you for all the support and I hope you are all okay and just know you can hit me up if you ever need someone to listen.