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"immobilised" poems
rivers of metal unable to flow trapped by sheer volume in gorges of girded concrete fingers drumming frustrated heartbeats on immobilised steering wheels imprisoned impotent feeling the passage of time that doesn’t wait
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Sep 3, 2010
Sep 3, 2010 at 1:30 AM UTC
rivers
Peter sought his merriment While standing in the sediment And fishing in his element For something good to eat He wasn't unintelligent But suffered an impediment Conversing wasn't eloquent A stutter had him beat One day, on the r-riverside With hunger to be satisfied And p-p-planning homicide He cast his l-l-line But bang he was immobilised Attacked from the w-waterside A giant p-p-pike astride The struggling s-swine The scene w-wasn't glamorous The p-p-pike was amorous The gossip would be scandalous Someone might s-s-see The struggle was c-clamorous P-Pete was v-victorious P-popped up like L-Lazarus To f-f-f-f-flee He promptly pattered homewardly And cursing pikes internally His hunger sat infernally His hook remained unlured The pesky pike had planned to be Inside of Peter, rectally To poke and **** him naughtily But hang on..... he was cured!
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Nov 5, 2013
Nov 5, 2013 at 11:36 AM UTC
Fishing with Pete
Moments like this Are when I wish I had my Polaroid An infinite moment to make me think "This would make a beautiful photograph" (The photographer's curse, darling), I'm content to just let this moment be, though Though at the same time, my mind's eye strains to see What this would be: We're glossed with sweat and crowned with messy hair My teeshirt's too big; my legs are bare My ******* poke taut in the cool, still air Copper tumbles onto your shoulder as I sit beside Tilt my head, and lay to rest The sunlight glances and polishes your halo Your dark gaze watches out of the window Dust motes illuminate, suspended around your face; I fancy that it's fairy-magic Although you're not the hero of some story - but, maybe mine? With the roll in your caress that's passed to my palm I stare into the little gilded world with you Stealing a little glance at your bare chest, The elastic of your boxers clinging over tight hips - Just need to remind myself that it's real Picture perfect, but this perfection is real Take the roach to my lips Take a minute to appreciate this Inhale, exhale This moment is infinite The smoke twists away slowly My mind's eye sees how beautiful it would be In gentle-focus monochrome... Then, I let the notion go I act so naturally, but in my head I know This next motion is picture-perfect My white fingers are slim Hand not quite steady; I tremble from our workout Not moving from your shoulder, I reach around the cocked neck of your guitar: Just relax, and let time slow Hear the peaceful tune flow from your skilled hand I press the roll to your mouth The crackle of burning embers dances with the string notes Smoke streams out as I lift it away And there - In that split second as I begin to move, There the Polaroid would have clicked and immobilised; This moment so high in too hot a day Picture perfect in my mind's blue eyes
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May 23, 2012
May 23, 2012 at 5:40 PM UTC
Picture Perfect
Moments like this Are when I wish I had my Polaroid An infinite moment to make me think "This would make a beautiful photograph" (The photographer's curse, darling), I'm content to just let this moment be, though Though at the same time, my mind's eye strains to see What this would be: We're glossed with sweat and crowned with messy hair My teeshirt's too big; my legs are bare My ******* poke taut in the cool, still air Copper tumbles onto your shoulder as I sit beside Tilt my head, and lay to rest The sunlight glances and polishes your halo Your dark gaze watches out of the window Dust motes illuminate, suspended around your face; I fancy that it's fairy-magic Although you're not the hero of some story - but, maybe mine? With the roll in your caress that's passed to my palm I stare into the little gilded world with you Stealing a little glance at your bare chest, The elastic of your boxers clinging over tight hips - Just need to remind myself that it's real Picture perfect, but this perfection is real Take the roach to my lips Take a minute to appreciate this Inhale, exhale This moment is infinite The smoke twists away slowly My mind's eye sees how beautiful it would be In gentle-focus monochrome... Then, I let the notion go I act so naturally, but in my head I know This next motion is picture-perfect My white fingers are slim Hand not quite steady; I tremble from our workout Not moving from your shoulder, I reach around the cocked neck of your guitar: Just relax, and let time slow Hear the peaceful tune flow from your skilled hand I press the roll to your mouth The crackle of burning embers dances with the string notes Smoke streams out as I lift it away And there - In that split second as I begin to move, There the Polaroid would have clicked and immobilised; This moment so high in too hot a day Picture perfect in my mind's blue eyes
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What is it to be compelled? What is it to have a feeling ****** upon? Like a needle It ****** Scratches and sticks Stays in mind Repeats, rewinds and repeats Time and time and time... Until, another comes about Pricking, sticking and repeating Like the one prior Only different in its nature Stemmed and born to cater The prototype that preceded Predicated on deceiving One's perception of the first. And another third to sift off the second And a forth to sift off the third... Leaving one deaf, blind and dumb Becoming nothing but an outcast; A sad and lonely *** Immobilised and cocooned in bed; The warm glimmering shine of sun- Touch not registered   Given the compelled numb.
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Nov 6, 2015
Nov 6, 2015 at 2:02 PM UTC
The Compelled Numb
I often wonder as the night closes in and so do the walls around my mind I wonder when it happened in human evolution that we would become inescapably immobilised by the hands of a clock
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Aug 7, 2014
Aug 7, 2014 at 11:13 PM UTC
Immobilised
Why do my eyes waver in salt water? It's just a concept I don't really understand when The ocean in my mind is dry but My eyes? So wet. And yet, fire roars through an ***** named Passion - and the sand beneath my feet burns their soles and tries to Penetrate my soul But I have buckets, Tucked under two lids, That can spill with or without my will. They can put out a flame, both good and bad. A blessing and a curse. I'm told that fish can't climb trees but I have neither arms nor gills you see I have been immobilised, And it's down to a monochrome smear on a canvas with so much potential; A plethora of 'dos' and 'don'ts'; The slaughter of a lamb. I would like to stand in solidarity with each martyr of idiosyncrasy. I wonder if anything we ever do will be enough.
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May 31, 2018
May 31, 2018 at 3:11 PM UTC
Sixth form
With a single chord, I am prisoner, My capture immediate and absolute. An injection of electric sound-silk Tangles my veins And I am immobilised By its essential truth. With a single chord, I am devoured. I savour each note – touch it, taste it; I would eat it if I could. But it is delicate, bird-like, And it must be treated gently In order to soar. With a single chord, I am changed, Lighter yet full to the brim. The walls of the world are thin enough To catch sight of a vast heaven, And I breathe in its iridescence At the point where music and person overlap. With a single chord I am awakened. Memories long pushed aside Seep again into my soul. Sensual, soft and clinging, They tug at my being, dress me in silver, And the cloud lifts. Vicki Watson © 2014
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Feb 13, 2014
Feb 13, 2014 at 5:50 PM UTC
With a single chord
The sky rising up from the sea something in me? Each man sets his own horizon which lies on the broadsword of the uncut umbilical. As much as I see I see virtual reality and a veil drawing over the day. Voices of reason chattering away scattering the clouds that lay over the bay and spoiling the view, but you are the muse where the words from a heart and the thoughts in a head come together and fuse. The cat (if there was one) has gone the bell tinkles on. The fine line, the first line of defence was, (when I was a boy) the old garden fence where words were batted like ping pong ***** Old fences fall and innovation calls, the mobile phone the mobile office the mobile home and we're all immobilised looking surprised. The sea remains stains on the bedsheets ***** plates in the sink washing in the basket I think I must make a move.
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Apr 27, 2016
Apr 27, 2016 at 1:10 AM UTC
April
Frozen in place I stood, A deer caught in a hunter’s crosshair. I never thought you would, But you did; you killed me, right there. I am angry at myself, most of all; For staying when I should have left, For not dodging the bullet and taking the fall. Twice now, I found myself broken; Carelessly adrift in life, Like a raft on the ocean. Too much pain this chest, These monsters in my head Feel like an obstacle I cannot best. I don’t just want to be loved; I want us all to love and understand one another. ‘It’s not possible, we’re too different,’ Those who wish to rebuttal will answer. No, that is the distant path you chose, I choose to keep my humanity close. And yet, I cannot stop the terrifying flashbacks. You made me feel like a train veering off its tracks. Like a bridge that leads to a precipice, Nothing but a cold, dark abyss. Meet the millennials - The most criticised generation, Suffering from emotional stagnation, Raised on a steady diet of instant gratification. ‘What do you want, then?’ I want us to feel the soil with our bare feet. To associate freely with others we meet, Not bow down to the pretension of the elite. To embrace our soul, Not shun it and drive it into a locked room; To retrace our role, Not simply run our life’s course to its doom. We are being led astray, Our hopes and dreams hidden away. We have no room for thought, little to say, For few want to go out of their way. No criticism, no originality - No witticism, no vitality. We are criticised for criticising, And we are ostracised when we act defying. We are the paralysed; Our fears leave us immobilised, Anxiety and depression, Killing variety of expression. We languish in prisons That we build for ourselves in our own head; We have nightmarish visions, Like a guild of the living dead.
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Sep 12, 2018
Sep 12, 2018 at 6:57 AM UTC
Paralysed
Frozen in place I stood, A deer caught in a hunter’s crosshair. I never thought you would, But you did; you killed me, right there. I am angry at myself, most of all; For staying when I should have left, For not dodging the bullet and taking the fall. Twice now, I found myself broken; Carelessly adrift in life, Like a raft on the ocean. Too much pain this chest, These monsters in my head Feel like an obstacle I cannot best. I don’t just want to be loved; I want us all to love and understand one another. ‘It’s not possible, we’re too different,’ Those who wish to rebuttal will answer. No, that is the distant path you chose, I choose to keep my humanity close. And yet, I cannot stop the terrifying flashbacks. You made me feel like a train veering off its tracks. Like a bridge that leads to a precipice, Nothing but a cold, dark abyss. Meet the millennials - The most criticised generation, Suffering from emotional stagnation, Raised on a steady diet of instant gratification. ‘What do you want, then?’ I want us to feel the soil with our bare feet. To associate freely with others we meet, Not bow down to the pretension of the elite. To embrace our soul, Not shun it and drive it into a locked room; To retrace our role, Not simply run our life’s course to its doom. We are being led astray, Our hopes and dreams hidden away. We have no room for thought, little to say, For few want to go out of their way. No criticism, no originality - No witticism, no vitality. We are criticised for criticising, And we are ostracised when we act defying. We are the paralysed; Our fears leave us immobilised, Anxiety and depression, Killing variety of expression. We languish in prisons That we build for ourselves in our own head; We have nightmarish visions, Like a guild of the living dead.
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Past the vines of grins and hopeful beams lies the audacity of discouragements, assuring you the existence of doubts. Timeless records will stop playing at the back of her mind as memories immobilised with tears, and fears, and doubts. She will despise you as long as she loved you; and will continue to lie at your image.
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Apr 25, 2017
Apr 25, 2017 at 4:46 AM UTC
How She Trust