#eclipse poems on Hello Poetry

Jayantee Khare Sep 2017

Eclipse

The Sun~
Eclipsed by the moon,
was underrated for sometime..

The Moon~
Hiding the sun,
was misjudged by many..

The Eclipse~
Darkened the world,
was witnessed by the people..

Both~**
On their celestial trajectory,
The event was just part of their journey..

Eclipse is the short term phenomenon....
Interaction ..
Intermission...
Interjection...
Can it judge the entire eternal journey of two bodies on their defined path??

#eclipse

hadley Aug 2017

eclipse

that day, i stared directly into the eclipse
felt it burn and melt the celluloid of my retina
but what else is a romantic to do?
your ex-lovers could fill a room
and one touch from you is enough to intoxicate my blood and bone
for weeks
i really wish you had kissed me
that night
with my hands smelling like gravel
and your teeth looking painted with promise
a tiny militia
last line of defense
and the night could have swallowed us whole
and i wouldn't have noticed
why didn't you?
my throat was preoccupied by your space
hands waiting like ships in the harbor
i'll be ****** if you didn't hear my wanting
reverberating around my ribcage
i could've eaten you alive in that moment
then
but today
i stare into the eclipse
let it blind me

#eclipse #sun #moon #night #love #romantic #kiss #boy #him #want

Alice Aug 2017

Forbidden Eclipse

'The sun loved
the moon so much
that he died
every night
to let her breathe.'

the beautiful forbidden lovers
never able to meet
to share warm kisses

but I remember the sneaky Moon
she sneaks out of her dark domain
I see her in bright daylight
swathed in the Sun's golden touch
opposite in the sky
they watch each other
with love so pure

although she is forbidden
in his bright domain
she is there
because she believes
that nothing is impossible

and the day comes
when they can meet
for but a few minutes
they embrace in fire
and we stare in wonder
as they meet
but then they must
drift apart
with broken hearts

she blows him kisses
whispers
'goodnight, my love'
as he sinks beneath the horizon
bursting into colors
and the Moon cries
and whispers
⠀⠀
'I love you.'❋

To: the long awaited Eclipse.

#moon #sun #eclipse #love #forbidden

Chris Aug 2017

Eclipse

Remember when
The moon caught the sun's attention
For a little longer than a passing by
That the sky grew dim
And the day was filled with
A starry sky?
Such a shame
To be blinded by the sun
That when the moon caught your eye
In its moment in the spotlight
You had no vision
Left to see
How she looked
So radiantly at you
Hoping you'd finally see her
But your head was turned
Eyes closed
So she simply found another
Who adored her even in the
Night.

#short #eclipse #solar #thoughts #mood

morning glory Aug 2017

California

My sun: setting more beautifully than any sky in sunny California,
though I haven’t seen one in so **** long.
I’m starved for your attention, won’t you shine on me a little brighter, babe?
I know you miss the waves when you’re up north; I know you shiver in September
and that it’s too soon, that you should still be able to show off those tan lines but
if you stay here with me I’ll love you like I’m the moon. Let’s not make our love
something that they can only see occasionally. Let's outlast the summer.

#eclipse #love #relationship #heartbreak #california #lesbian #sun #moon #waves #ocean

Vale Luna Aug 2017

Solar Eclipse

The Sun told me he was dying
And of course
I didn't believe him
…
Until the sky went black

I suppose it was in epiphany
That in that moment
The world had gone cold

Excitement in the eyes of the crazy
Panic in the heart of the insane
And Confusion in the mind of the dumb
Because the Sun had died

Melodramatic as ever
His death only lasted a minute and a half
And when he resurrected
The earth was warm again
Relief washing over him
Knowing that he hadn't abandoned
The ones who needed him most

It was seeing the Sun in that crescent shape
That caused me to realized
It was the Moon herself
That had stolen the spotlight
His spotlight

When it's just the two of us
Alone
(With all the other stars)
I ask her
“Why did you overshadow
The one you call your brother?”

From this
She looks down at me
A reflection of sadness
Buried deep within her craters
She sighs

And she tells me.

At least once
Every one hundred years
She wants people to look at her
In the daytime
And understand
That she might not bring heat and light
But she is part of our solar system too.

So now
I understand her
Because I listen to her
Because I see her
Because despite the thousands of miles
Separating us
Our hearts
Seem to beat
At the same time.

Dedicated to: the US solar eclipse of 2017
AND
Anyone else who feels like the Moon sometimes <3

#sun #moon #solar #eclipse #lonely #heart #sad #overshadow

Anthony James Brandy Aug 2017

Shadow Chasing: There and Back Again in One Day

RSW
CLT
CAE
Roof
Sun
Moon
Corona
Moon
Sun
Roof
CAE
CLT
RSW

This is my first palindromic poem. It's about my trip from Southwest Florida to Columbia, South Carolina to be in the line of totality for the solar eclipse of 2017.

#eclipse #palindrome