#concretepoetry poems on Hello Poetry

Sito Fossy Biosa Jul 2019

•SEMPURNA SAMA DENGAN MALAPETAKA#
SEDANG MENGGILAI ****, SEDANG MENYENANGI ****, SEDANG SANGAT ****, MENCINTAI DICINTAI SEORANG PEREMPUAN YANG RUMIT, tuhan#
"TADI MALAM AKU DIKELUARKAN DI DALAM KAMAR#

AKSI REAKSI#⊙UH

• PERFECT SAME WITH DESTRUCTION # ARE ASSESSING ***, FUN FOR ***, IS VERY ****, LOVED LOVED A HOUSEHOLD WOMEN, god # "THEN NIGHT I WAS EXITED IN ROOM # ACTION REACT # ⊙UH

oklasasadu is a diction that was deliberately created by Sito Fossy Biosa to express his frustration with God, disappointment, against God, and the concept of Godhead. ⊙a concrete poetry project⊙

#concretepoem #concretepoetry #sitofossybiosa #27tahunsitofossybiosa #arte #visualpoetry #visualpoem #puisivisual

Sito Fossy Biosa Jul 2019

OKLASASADU

HIDUP DALAM MATI
HIDUP ADALAH MATI
HIDUP ADALAH MATI
X X X ** ** X XXXX X X **
HIDUP ADALAH MATI
HIDUP ADALAH MATI
**
HIDUP ADALAH MATI
HIDUP
MATI
X
HIDUP ADALAH MATI

LIVE IN OFF LIFE IS DEAD LIFE IS DEAD X X X ** ** X XXXX X X ** LIFE IS DEAD LIFE IS DEAD ** LIFE IS DEAD LIFE DIE X LIFE IS DEAD

oklasasadu is a diction that was deliberately created by Sito Fossy Biosa to express his frustration with God, disappointment, against God, and the concept of Godhead. ⊙a concrete poetry project⊙

#concretepoem #concretepoetry #visualpoem #visualpoetry #27tahunsitofossybiosa #artpoetry

Sito Fossy Biosa Jul 2019

OKLASASADU

A
     MI
    ARO
  RAKAR
BITVIAZA
  RAKAR
    ARO
     MI
      V

oklasasadu is a diction that was deliberately created by Sito Fossy Biosa to express his frustration with God, disappointment, against God, and the concept of Godhead. ⊙a concrete poetry project⊙

#concretepoem #concretepoetry #puisikonkret #sitofossybiosa #27tahunsitofossybiosa #art #sastra

Sito Fossy Biosa Jun 2019

OKLASASADU

I WAIT // // CREATE God * _____ *
⊙⊙⊙⊙⊙⊙⊙⊙⊙•••••••□□□□□□□□□□□□
¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤
~~~~~~~~~~~~

I WAIT // // be matched by God ₩₩₩₩₩₩₩₩₩₩₩₩₩₩₩₩
₩₩₩₩₩****

AKU MENUNGGU /// MENGUTUK tuhan

*_____*

AKU MENUNGGU ////MENYAINGI tuhan

oklasasadu is a diction that was deliberately created by Sito Fossy Biosa to express his frustration with God, disappointment, against God, and the concept of Godhead. ⊙a concrete poetry project⊙

#concretepoetry #puisikonkret #antigod #ego #egocentric #27yearsoldsitofossybiosa #27tahunsitofossybiosa #sitofossybiosa

ryn Mar 2019

Van Winkle

•high in the
mountains, he grew we-
ary                 and ragged•
•                     his sight turned
                           cloudy, chin un-
                             shaven and face hag-
                                    gard•removed his boots
                                    for his feet did stink•
                                  sleep he wanted but not
                                without a drink•one big
                              swig and he downed it all•
                        then he was asleep before the
                      sun could fall•many days visited,
             many shadows cast•over this slum-
     bering man, many moons had passed
•one fateful day, his eyes did twitch
and then did open•he sprung aw-
ake to the life he had forsaken•his
musket dusty, his clothes in di-
sarray•his chin - a long beard
that has seen countless days•he
ran to his home before noontime
chime•he found only disbelief, for he had slept

a lifetime•

#hellopoetry107 #concretepoetry #hat #vanwinkle

nish Aug 2018

.incinerate

i
just
  wish you
  would burn.
    feel the torment
    pain and agony
   that i endured
     all because
  of you.
oh
  i want you to
suffer, for an
eternity, just
like me. whom
you left, alone
and forgotten.
but my darling
never leave a
lighted candle
alone without
a second glance.
because now, i
am a forest fire.
uncontrollably
ablaze and oh
so powerful.

Wow guys, I think I'm addicted to shape poetry. I just can't stop making shapes its so entertaining.
Again not a difficult shape, but loads of fun.
Hope you enjoyed and please feel free to dm or comment your own shape poetry :)

#candle #burn #pain #love #forget #suffer #agony #concretepoetry #shapepoetry

nish Aug 2018

.consonance

             you see they sang two different tunes
             but together, the masterpiece formed
            her                                                        his
            treble                                                  bass
            rang                                                     low
           out                                                        soft
           into                                                        and
           the                                                          full
           night                                                    with
           joins                                                      love
          his in                                                   for her
    harmony                                               soothing
perfectly in                                          perfectly in
sync.                                                    sync.

The first two lines are an introduction and then there are individual poems down each note, together they form one bigger picture. I know the notes are wonky but I think it gives the poem an unconfined feeling, flowing like music.
Hope you enjoyed :)
Much easier than the other shape poetry I’ve posted before and a lot less stressful.
Once again feel free to comment or dm me links to shape poetry that you’ve tried out.
Hope you enjoyed :)

#shapepoetry #concretepoetry #love #lust #night #music #perfect #sync

nish Aug 2018

.equilibrium

please
darling, look at us.
me and you, isn't it clear i
am a simple moon, orbiting a
large planet and you are my centre,
providing the force i require to keep
stable and moving. and like any other
moon. i too, have an effect on you.
because of me you rise and fall.
i bring you light and dark. if
we break, so will the
universe.

some mediocre shape poetry just to get back into writing.

#moon #love #lust #universe #break #pain #you #me #shapepoetry #concretepoetry

nish Aug 2018

.era

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\ why is it that time slips /
   \she slides and slithers /
     \right through these  /
        \ infinite crevices /
          \found all over /
             \my greedy /
               \ hands,  /
                   \ like /
                   /    •   \
                 /       s      \
              /            a       \
           /             n            \
       /                 d              \
      /                                      \
    / in the dainty hourglass \
  /sitting aloft my skew shelf.\
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I wanted to try shape poetry again, and I have to say this was MUCH harder than .leafing
https://hellopoetry.com/poem/2633672/leafing/

It took forever to align the slashes to give this poem shape, without them it didn't look like an hourglass.
I hope you liked this poem and I'd love it if you commented some links to any shape poetry you've tried out.
Hope you enjoyed :)

#concretepoetry #shapepoetry #time #greedy #love #infinite #poetry