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I don't got a lot of love inside
almost none at all
I don't got a lot of love inside
but baby,
I'm gonna give it all to you.
and I hope it'll be enough
 Nov 2015 Kate MacDonald
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•turn the hourglass, let's start•
•i offer you... all  that's close•
•to my heart •  i'll unveil•
•to you  my  concrete•
•poetry......•so•
•let us•
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•           30 day journey•         •
•witness  the fall... of each grain•
•through the words that i've lain•

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Concrete Poem 1 of 30

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Overdose on love
could be enough to ****
the immortal


mock the strong


do wrong on the good


Overdose on love
could be enough to impower
the weak


brighten up the low-spirited


let the dead live


An overdose
on love
can be a cure
or a poison



Which one will it be?
When my heart hung in the stars
I'm convinced
my better parts got lost
on the dark side of the moon.

the doctors say I'm dreaming
but I could swear to you
that the man on the moon is crying
asteroids and wilted flower petals.

we revolve around the same sun but
our revolutions although
intertwined, are chasing
different horizons longing for unfamiliar faces.

the stars are in my eyes
but it will take years of staring into
broken mirrors before I find the planet
that my smile resides on.
I don't really know about this one. I wanted to try something a little more abstract. Please please please leave feedback, I want to do everything I can to mature as a writer.
It was your lips that delivered the first blow.
But it was my tongue that dug the grave.
thoughts
Anger is a little boy in a ripped jacket
who plays tag with Stability too close to a cliff.

Confusion is a child with tangled hair and a purple shirt
who enjoys running circles around Content turning
her flower crowns into razor blades.

Depression is a pale girl with sad eyes who plays
red light green light with Happiness near that old garden
they called Eden who lately seems to be dying.
Hello lovely people! I hope you enjoy!!!
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