Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
"spotlit" poems
The play is written to be staged in a pub or a large cave like yurt in Cardiff.  Its action and dialogue provides characterisation, with sound and lighting being used to establish context.  The setting a darkened pub corner that is  modelled on The Bunch of Grapes in Pontypridd.   There are only 6 characters, five speak in haiku-ed verse with the exception of the Drunk who acts as my 'Greek Chorus'. - Hand-in-hand she enters to **** her thumb in a corner - Chocolate ice cream soda demanded from Daddy - Joking banter ceased slowly as the regulars all begin to quaff their brown pints “Balll uut eass swept - Chimrrrrr, Chiirriica, war is never won” - Church quiet, the village pub listened lips clamped tears swelling “ ***** cut swapped with eyes - Chimerica, Chimerica, war is never won” - The cornered hero of two Afghanistan tours is seen regressing into childhood** The set darkens slowly then after 30 seconds a spotlit conversation in lines and stanzas begins. Haiku and tanka that inspired the coming play include: *********** - thoughts sought, taught and wrought, testosterones Fighting aggressive games, Afghanistan camouflage Globalism and War - cloned greedy conspiracy, that third tower Titled selfish-self-grandiose, deliver warring terror Springs cut Irises - dripping vital red not purple, far from my window* .
0
Apr 28, 2010
Apr 28, 2010 at 11:11 AM UTC
Pub 1st Act - a haibun outline
crimson Poison Apples drop off Burning Bridges into Murky Waters red with rust swirling swirling she cries as her father's fists curling beat Seeds of Suspicion into her Reckless heart bleeding bruises art art runs and hides but stands alone pleading begging moan moan her shoes are jimmy choo she whispers secrets to herself "I Just Wanted to be Me" but the King of Hearts is Out for Blood scarlet laughter piercing darkness growling stomach fight fight tears flow and flood the night and she is Shrinking away Coming Out to the show blinding bright in the glow glow spotlit on a blackened stage forced to perform Circus Acts remembering when she was-was what?-nothing Prom Queen twirling twirling "Look" -hearts in a sea of ****** silk- but the only one looking is The Collector hoarding up stories of rosy misery Mean Colors dancing in cruel red eyes sneer and cry and lie lie their Psychic Powers forcing isolation into her veins like a Blood Borne killer she is just fading away until the Song in Her Heart is just a hum of amazing grace life thought gone forever lives on as the tears of friends remake her memories she is buried in a glass casket under grey skies The Red Dress she wears without a care care flashy crimson sunset ruby apple scarlet blood pain love life soul RED vibrant in dead fields life thought gone forever lives on
0
Apr 25, 2014
Apr 25, 2014 at 8:14 AM UTC
Red Dress Diaries
startle cracks and curtain calls my eyelids back diaphanous dropped and veils up dewy bloom spotlit monkeysuit chauffeur denigrated daily scratch behind his ears you're doing OK just mistook vehicle for passenger relax in seat back let clear and present ever steer biospheric lit allow etheric hum up the bony ladder to outlook attic bindi blinds lift pretty bitchin' 46-bit binoculars these holy puppet hands have got
0
Feb 17, 2017
Feb 17, 2017 at 6:22 PM UTC
46-bit binoculars
I wanted to write about The first Time I saw a spotlight And knew what it meant It was in a theater And Smoke machines blew The light into existence a light I had never seen before the spotlights They circled cut paths I couldn’t Follow Define Shining through the smoke Light made color made smoke made real It wasn’t the light I saw it was the smoke spotlit but it was Only the light I knew Saw Could see Until I thought of driving Home Late one night in the front seat and falling asleep As our headlights cut through the fog And knowing if I could just Crawl through the window and Sit on the hood of the Car and reach out my foot and stand on the fog-beam I would Be carried somewhere more comfortable than the One crick-necked nook I had found that would Let me fall asleep dreaming of Crawling through windows. I wanted To write about that first time, When I watched the spotlights draw symbols A cuneiform language only the smoke could read and how the Smoke danced and I realized The only way to shine is to be So Small That you cannot cast a shadow, That everything casts a shadow that To shine you must block something else from shining Because we are not suns We are not We are small and Lonely moons. But what if we were so small we didn’t have to be? We could be dust and smoke and The light could dance through us Together And we would dance through it And bring it to life Write in a language only We can read as we swim through ourselves Ourselves the light we’re swimming through Light is only light until it hits the dust The dust makes the beam Be small with me and build beams of light in a small theater Hall where the dust has Collected where We have collected Ourselves. That is what I wanted to write About but as I watched the Beams moving And learned the smoke of a Dusty theater-room And how it dances Even after the light leaves it, It must, even though I Cannot see It, because it is Always ready always Dancing when the light arrives The dust is a beam of light Waiting To be built, a boat Waiting To breathe an ocean into Existence and float Through it and Be rocked By it and Be It, is What I wanted to write about but As I watched the beams Moving one Met my eye And The smoke vanished And The beam vanished And There was nothing But the light Staring at me Ripping my shadow Out of me and Hurling it behind me only For a second An angry and Vengeful second who are you to Tell me that I need the dust? You are not a sun You are barely a moon you are So small So small And still you cast a shadow you Take from me Use me Know yourself Build your world By me with me through me And you sit In this dusty theater hall So small And want to write That it is dust that makes the beam? No smoke machine could Blow the light into Existence what would you call Smoke if there was no light to Pass through it to Light it breathe it into Existence now Sit Lonely and selfish moon And watch the show.
0
Sep 25, 2012
Sep 25, 2012 at 1:37 PM UTC
Untitled
I wanted to write about The first Time I saw a spotlight And knew what it meant It was in a theater And Smoke machines blew The light into existence a light I had never seen before the spotlights They circled cut paths I couldn’t Follow Define Shining through the smoke Light made color made smoke made real It wasn’t the light I saw it was the smoke spotlit but it was Only the light I knew Saw Could see Until I thought of driving Home Late one night in the front seat and falling asleep As our headlights cut through the fog And knowing if I could just Crawl through the window and Sit on the hood of the Car and reach out my foot and stand on the fog-beam I would Be carried somewhere more comfortable than the One crick-necked nook I had found that would Let me fall asleep dreaming of Crawling through windows. I wanted To write about that first time, When I watched the spotlights draw symbols A cuneiform language only the smoke could read and how the Smoke danced and I realized The only way to shine is to be So Small That you cannot cast a shadow, That everything casts a shadow that To shine you must block something else from shining Because we are not suns We are not We are small and Lonely moons. But what if we were so small we didn’t have to be? We could be dust and smoke and The light could dance through us Together And we would dance through it And bring it to life Write in a language only We can read as we swim through ourselves Ourselves the light we’re swimming through Light is only light until it hits the dust The dust makes the beam Be small with me and build beams of light in a small theater Hall where the dust has Collected where We have collected Ourselves. That is what I wanted to write About but as I watched the Beams moving And learned the smoke of a Dusty theater-room And how it dances Even after the light leaves it, It must, even though I Cannot see It, because it is Always ready always Dancing when the light arrives The dust is a beam of light Waiting To be built, a boat Waiting To breathe an ocean into Existence and float Through it and Be rocked By it and Be It, is What I wanted to write about but As I watched the beams Moving one Met my eye And The smoke vanished And The beam vanished And There was nothing But the light Staring at me Ripping my shadow Out of me and Hurling it behind me only For a second An angry and Vengeful second who are you to Tell me that I need the dust? You are not a sun You are barely a moon you are So small So small And still you cast a shadow you Take from me Use me Know yourself Build your world By me with me through me And you sit In this dusty theater hall So small And want to write That it is dust that makes the beam? No smoke machine could Blow the light into Existence what would you call Smoke if there was no light to Pass through it to Light it breathe it into Existence now Sit Lonely and selfish moon And watch the show.
Continue reading...
133
crimson Poison Apples drop off Burning Bridges into Murky Waters red with rust swirling swirling she cries as her father's fists curling beat Seeds of Suspicion into her Reckless heart bleeding bruises art art runs and hides but stands alone pleading begging moan moan her shoes are jimmy choo she whispers secrets to herself "I Just Wanted to be Me" but the King of Hearts is Out for Blood scarlet laughter piercing darkness growling stomach fight fight tears flow and flood the night and she is Shrinking away Coming Out to the show blinding bright in the glow glow spotlit on a blackened stage forced to perform Circus Acts remembering when she was-was what?-nothing Prom Queen twirling twirling "Look" -hearts in a sea of ****** silk- but the only one looking is The Collector hoarding up stories of rosy misery Mean Colors dancing in cruel red eyes sneer and cry and lie lie their Psychic Powers forcing isolation into her veins like a Blood Borne killer she is just fading away until the Song in Her Heart is just a hum of amazing grace life thought gone forever lives on as the tears of friends remake her memories she is buried in a glass casket under grey skies The Red Dress she wears without a care care flashy crimson sunset ruby apple scarlet blood pain love life soul RED vibrant in dead fields life thought gone forever lives on
0
Apr 17, 2014
Apr 17, 2014 at 1:10 PM UTC
Red Dress Diaries
It feels better than space-cakes You're spotlit in my sight When we are 'we' we're so fine It's not special you're not special we were never special It just felt that way for a time Now I close one eye find you diminished, dry Then the other- you're special, mine The inside of my head is winking And I still can't see you in 3D Misaligned
0
Jul 10, 2012
Jul 10, 2012 at 2:44 AM UTC
It's like looking through 3D glasses
Row upon row, I saw them, instantly, ‘I did’, shuffled bodies bulged past me, they ‘did not’. Fingers, lived to touch, light dim in part, not here, spotlit, it said “Do not touch”, how can I know? Disobedient held up in my palm, angling my hand this way, that way. It happened then, our grey blue pupils, like full stops, clung, I did not know it would be a memory pocket. A sentence in time snatched my happy face, fear bought me. Under my skin, groping pins pricking the base of my neck pushed into my skull. Spun, bumping bodies smelling of beached waves, hard gulps, sweat caught in between my fingers. It was time to tie up loose thoughts, forget I pushed away with speed, in a strange place, street, shop, where was I? Where are you?! By your side in safe sofas, I hand swung down the banister, released the bolt, safety catch hanging...and gone....
0
Apr 11, 2013
Apr 11, 2013 at 8:21 AM UTC
Shells
You possess a crystal heart, One I have admired Many times, It sits just out of reach Inviting my gaze. Like a boy at a store window With iced frosting, Blowing steamy breath And rubbing it free of the grime I have deposited on it, I gaze at the prize, A treasure to be had, Like key fobs or Combs; You are the magi Who carries the gift. The window is dark Except for the spotlit Center, The object of my desire And hope, The pearl of great price I will give all to possess.
0
Oct 17, 2023
Oct 17, 2023 at 5:22 PM UTC
Store Window
...At this evening nigh-tide, reptilian brain bites back instinctively. I am forgiven in all Houses...all postulations bloat these blue veins. Daguerreotype pictures cake their ashen backdrop, that assures the comely smile of cosmic forbearance. As if these lips would dematerialize in search of utterance. Not for the entrained speakeasy of spotlit here and now...but the energetic pulse tugged at both ends of tongue. The final straw struck back, to ingratiate the greatest of pilgrimages.
0
Feb 19, 2016
Feb 19, 2016 at 11:11 AM UTC
Evening Nigh-tide
Drying grasses climb the hillsides, dotted with fall’s hues: saffron, lavender, rust. Below lies an orchard--trees holding York Imperials, ripe for the picking. Branches meander, intertwine, and cross. Some bow low to extend their offerings; others strain to hide a Golden Delicious overhead, out of reach. The trees’ leaves darken, harden, and curl. Feet fall upon those that have drifted to the ground; the crunch mimics the apple’s crisp bite. The Rome Beauties are dimpled and pock-marked, their surfaces spotlit by the sun. Fist-sized with sloping sides and bobbing heads--dangling, waiting. Aside from the worm-claimed and the decayed, the pick is yours.
0
Jul 2, 2014
Jul 2, 2014 at 3:32 PM UTC
The Orchard at Altapass
i entered into a sensuality, like a spotlit seagull pushed thru a sky-sake's blue. flapping over a landscape of abandoned bodies.
0
Feb 1, 2019
Feb 1, 2019 at 2:53 AM UTC
Abandoned Bodies
...Brightly broken... lumine-go round, ~Always~ wound one wend away... the Spotlit Circle.
0
Feb 22, 2015
Feb 22, 2015 at 11:45 PM UTC
Spotlit Circle
Taut Tight wired and light, tonight I'm going to take the car tonight I may or not get far but I have to go, have to blow these cobwebs from my head, quick or dead but under par tonight I'm going to take the car but first, burst the bubble that I'm in, begin to slake my thirst for all things that will end and in the end, begin to start begin to break apart the chain that tightens up around my brain, start the car, taut and tight,not wired right but tonight's the night. In the finding of unwinding I am wound up tighter than before, the night becomes a bolted door and I the rabbit in the spotlight where lurchers hound me, spooling free I'm in the car not very far from where I start and find my heart just isn't in it spotlit as I am, still the rabbit not the man.
0
Sep 3, 2014
Sep 3, 2014 at 7:45 PM UTC
Stabilisers
Non erasable, maligned "sin"...light ****** by the darkened contours of a face. Providence spotlit on sight...sun...daily bread rising.
0
Nov 3, 2013
Nov 3, 2013 at 11:05 PM UTC
Daily Bread Rising
Brokenhearted and distraught your eyes like rifles loaded and cocked enraged and disgusted with their whites blood shot You aim your gaze when the lever engaged and depart from the room like the white waters rush All your rage hung around the house it lingers like soot clung to a burnt out fire pit Soon I'll be begging for your return if not by midnight when the candle burns out You're back-and-forth always pacing scattered like the wind blown rain, but your image is quickly beginning to fade with storm shadows racing across moonlit drapes sliding as darkness frayed from the shade Nightmares adjust to the crest of day plunging over the steepening cusp of a burnt orange skyline slipping from the horizon into tomorrow's dusk Air inhaled as oxygen has failed your breath now poisonous The iron in your blood corrodes metallic flaking fragments settled in rust Smoke lingers on the wall clinging like a frameless picture cockeyed and covered in dust, with loosened staples brushed to the floor, blackened as pieces briskly burn into a crust Sunlight reaches through a slit in the curtain reflecting off of floating debris spotlit against this grey smokescreen Fire bellows between load bearing walls, bathing in kerosene cider and bourbon Stay engaged despite an eyeful of rage staring down the barrel of a rifle's gaze, assuredly fueling this fire to the brightest and bluest of flames
0
May 8, 2020
May 8, 2020 at 6:02 AM UTC
The Blue Flame